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Title: The Faerie Queene Volume 1

Author: Edmund Spenser

Editor: Jonathan Barnes

Release Date: January 21, 2005 [EBook #6930]

Language: English

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A NOTE ON THIS EDITION

This is an electronic edition of Volume One of Edmund Spenser's Faerie Queene. You are encouraged to use and copy it.

The edition includes the following elements:

- an entirely new composite text, based on the edition of 1596 (the "Original Text")

- details of departures, or proposed departures, from the copy text (the "Textual Appendix")

- a modernized version of the Original Text (the "Shadow Text")

- definitions of difficult words and phrases in the Shadow Text (the "Glossary").

The Original Text was not scanned, but typed, and proofed against the
Scolar Press facsimile (see Bibliography). Editing took place between
November 1989 and July 1992, using EMACS.

Edition 10 (faeri10.txt) was prepared especially for Project Gutenberg in February 2003.

Thus edition (August 2004) corrects a few errors in the convention for italic type. A few definitions appearing in the wrong place have also been fixed, as have anomalous top-bit set characters in the Hales Biography, which has been reformatted to make it easier to read.

The edition is best viewed with a monospaced font. Plain ASCII text is used throughout. Accented, etc., characters are indicated by symbols contained in curly brackets, e.g.:

{e/} = lower-case e + acute accent (pointing up to right) {e\} = lower-case e + grave accent (pointing up to left) {o^} = lower-case o + circumflex accent {o"} = lower-case o + diaeresis mark {e~} = lower-case e + tilde {ae} = lower-case ae diphthong {Ae} = ae diphthong with initial capital {AE} = fully capitalized ae diphthong etc.

In this way all the characters of the 1596 edition have been shown except the long "s", which has been throughout converted to its modern equivalent. In Roman type, the long "s" most closely resembles a lower-case "f" lacking part of the crossbar. It is used in the copy-text in nearly all places where this edition has an ordinary lower-case "s", except at the ends of words and when preceding the letter "k". Using the oblique character in place of the long "s", then, the first lines of the poem read:

Lo I the man, who/e Mu/e whilome did maske,
 As time her taught in lowly Shepheards weeds,
 Am now enfor/t a far vnfitter taske,
 For trumpets /terne to chaunge mine Oaten reeds …

These rules are on occasion broken, apparently by mistake. The long "s" does nothing to aid comprehension, and indeed causes problems, noted in the Textual Appendix: e.g. confusion between "besit" and "befit".

Special characters contained in the list of printers' contractions are noted in the preamble to that list.

Regions of text printed, or intended to be shown, in italic type are defined by underscores, thus: the second word is in italics.

Spenser's original text of The Faerie Queene is here described as "Spenser's Text" and is in the public domain. The biography by John W. Hales has passed out of copyright and was published by Messrs Macmillan. Copyright in all other parts of this edition, including editorial treatment of Spenser's Text, is reserved. You may not sell the whole or any part of this edition in any form whatsoever, nor may you supply it as an inducement to any party to purchase any product. Except for private study, you may not alter the text in any way.

WARRANTY

This edition is supplied as is. No warranty of any description is given in relation to the edition. Time and care have gone into its preparation, but no guarantee of accuracy is implied or made.

In such a large work, despite the stringent and repeated manual and electronic checking that has been carried out, some errors are bound to have slipped through. Please tell me about any that you find. All readers' emendations will be gratefully acknowledged in future releases.

— Jonathan Barnes

jonathan.barnes[at]conexil.co.uk 20 August 2004

Main components:

Editor's Introduction
Abbreviations Used
List of Proper Nouns
Table of Contents of Volume I
Introductory Matter
Books I-III
Printer's Contractions
Bibliography
Biographical Material

The start of each of these is marked with the string "=>"

=> THE FAERIE QUEENE

Editor's Introduction

                     Acknowledgements
                  Purpose of the edition
                   The text of the poem
                   The form of the poem
                   The numbering system
                  How the Glossary works
                   The Textual Appendix
               Suggestions for new readers

ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS

No endeavour of this kind would be possible without the work of previous editors and critics, and I offer thanks to all who have advanced our understanding of Spenser and his work. In particular the scholarship of Professor A. C. Hamilton has provided much enlightenment: his commentary (see Bibliography) is required reading for those who would explore the secret meanings of The Faerie Queene. To the compilers and publishers of the monumental Oxford English Dictionary I am deeply indebted. I wish also to acknowledge the assistance of the staff of the British Library, who kindly allowed me to consult copies of the original editions.

PURPOSE OF THE EDITION

When reading a book such as The Faerie Queene, it is tempting to minimize the looking up of difficult words, which are often glossed, if at all, in the end pages. Although Spenser's use of certain words appears quaint and lumpish, the language is superficially modern enough to enable the reader to "get by". Yet such an approach can lead only to a faulty appreciation of the poem, and deprives one of much enchantment. Queen Elizabeth would have found nothing lumpish about the language: her only impatience might have been with Spenser's weakness for archaisms. To her, the FQ will have revealed Spenser's exact and liberal style in all its glory: his words almost always make perfect sense.

The purpose of this edition is to make the language of the poem readily accessible. Interruptions to consult separate dictionaries and so on are eliminated, preserving as far as possible the flow of reading and accelerating one's apprehension of the poem.

The sustained power and scope of Spenser's master-work, of his "sacred fury", comprise a feat unsurpassed in English literature. But, by its very nature, language changes with time, and access to Spenser's magic kingdom is becoming ever more difficult. I hope this edition provides a key.

THE TEXT OF THE POEM

No manuscript of The Faerie Queene is known; we depend for our text upon printed copies of the work.

The first of these appeared in 1590. It is a quarto edition, published by William Ponsonby, and contains Books I-III. The Registers of the Stationers' Company for 1589 include the following entry:

Primo Die Decembris.—Master Ponsonbye. Entered for his Copye a book intituled the fayre Queene, dyposed into xii. bookes &c. Aucthorysed vnder thandes of the Archb. of Canterbury & bothe the Wardens, vjd.

The date of Spenser's letter to Raleigh is 23 January 1589 (1590 New Style); the book itself appeared some time after 25 March. The text was indifferently proof-read, and a list of corrigenda (Faults Escaped in the Print) accompanies it. Moreover, there is variation between individual copies of the edition. Early copies contain only ten dedicatory sonnets, while later ones contain the full set of seventeen: for Spenser had made the signal blunder of omitting Lord Burleigh from the illustrious company of dedicatees. To confuse matters further, a few copies contain a mixture of pages from the original and revised versions.

The quarto edition of 1596 was also published by Ponsonby, and contains Books I-VI, variously bound into one or two volumes. Books I-III were completely reset, apparently not from the MS. but from a copy of 1590 heavily annotated by the author. Some, but not all, of the corrections listed in the Faults Escaped were incorporated in 1596. The end of Book III was changed, continuing rather than ending the story of Scudamour and Amoret. Spenser also added a new stanza at the beginning of Book I, Canto xi, rewrote some single lines, and made sundry adjustments to others. This process continued even as pages passed through the press, so that there is variation from copy to copy, made more complex by the mixing of sheets from different printings during binding. No single copy of 1596 can therefore be said to be definitive. 1596 does, however, have the advantage of Spenser's personal supervision, and for this reason it is chosen as the core of modern composite texts.

The third edition of The Faerie Queene was published by Mathew Lownes in 1609, ten years after Spenser's death. It is a folio edition, and contains not only Books I-VI but also two cantos "which, both for Forme and Matter, appeare to be parcell of some following Booke of the Faerie Queene, vnder the Legend of Constancie". This fragment comprises what are now called the "Mutability Cantos".

The edition of 1609 is fundamentally a reprint of 1596. There is reason to suspect that its editor was guided, at least in part, by some authorial source which has now been lost: an annotated copy of 1596, perhaps; or material found among the assorted papers of the Mutability Cantos.

1609 is a conscientious edition which often achieves a higher degree of consistency and intelligibility than 1596 itself, although it is plain that a more modern hand than Spenser's is responsible for many of its emendations: the punctuation, for example, though often more logical, is blander than that of the editions produced in Spenser's lifetime. Furthermore, the editor of 1609 virtually ignores 1590, even though knowledge of that text is often essential for filling in the gaps left by errors in 1596.

The editions of 1611 onwards throw little light on problems raised by the three former editions.

A modern editor, then, must go to three different sources in order to assemble a text which tries to do justice to Spenser's original intention.

The copy-text for this edition is the facsimile published in 1976 by Scolar Press (see Bibliography).

THE FORM OF THE POEM

The basic unit of the poem is a verse or stanza made up of nine lines. This "Spenserian stanza", much imitated (for example, by Byron), is Spenser's own invention. Typically, it consists of eight pentameters and a final alexandrine. Lines are sometimes short or long, on occasion perhaps through typographical error (see for example II iii 26.9), but at other times for deliberate effect (e.g. III iv 39.7, IV i 3).

The rhyming scheme is generally ababbcbcc, though this too is subject to change, whether by authorial oversight or authorial intention (e.g. II ii 7, VII vii 28).

The stanzas are not numbered in the original editions.

Between 30 and 87 stanzas comprise a canto (Italian, "song"), a term borrowed from Lodovico Ariosto, the Italian poet, whose work influenced Spenser.

A canto is preceded by a four-line verse called an argument. This summarizes what follows, often with particular emphasis on its allegorical meaning. The metre of the argument is that of the Book of Common Prayer.

Each complete book is introduced by a proem, a group of between four and eleven stanzas preceding the argument of Canto i.

Twelve cantos comprise a book. Book VII is incomplete.

Spenser's stated plan was to write twelve books, one on each of the twelve moral or private virtues; it is not known whether he composed any more of The Faerie Queene than has survived. The Faerie Queene was to have been followed by another epic poem of twelve more books, one on each of the political or public virtues. No trace of this work has ever been found.

THE SHADOW TEXT

The Shadow Text is intended as no more than a lowly companion to the original. It makes no attempt to preserve metre or rhyme, but renders a prosaic version, unifying the spelling in order to make the meaning easier to understand.

I have altered the punctuation for the shadow version, though not without trepidation. My aim has been to make crystal clear the mechanical sense expressed by each stanza, but quite often this is impossible. For one thing, the original pointing, rather than being used strictly logically, may also influence the rhythm or emphasis of the words when spoken (and The Faerie Queene is a poem which should be read aloud—although perhaps not in its entirety!—to be fully appreciated). For another, the functions of the punctuation marks themselves have undergone change since Spenser's day. The semicolon, for example, is found in FQ introducing direct speech, where today a comma or a colon would be used. Again, the comma is often required to carry long parentheses, themselves sprinkled with commas; these passages can become very confusing, especially where Spenser has also adopted a contorted and latinistic word-order.

Then there are problems introduced by deliberately ambiguous pointing. Spenser's immense command of the language, and his quicksilver gift for wordplay and puns, allow him, when he chooses, to pack great complexities of meaning into a line or even a single word, and in this his punctuation is frequently his accomplice.

A famous example comes right at the beginning of Book I:

But on his brest a bloudie Crosse he bore,
  The deare remembrance of his dying Lord,
  For whose sweete sake that glorious badge he wore,
  And dead as liuing euer him ador'd:

Is the meaning of line 4: "dead, as living, ever him adored", or: "dead, as living ever, him adored"? In fact, both meanings are probably intended.

Thus it cannot be overemphasized that, where ambiguity is occasioned by the punctuation of the original, the Shadow Text can do no more than propose what seems to me the more or most likely interpretation. Sometimes (as in the case cited above) I suggest alternatives, but the pointing of the original poem should always be given precedence in case of doubt.

The Glossary does not seek to interpret the poem. From time to time it hints at what lies behind the bare words in order to aid understanding, but its sole purpose is to make the language more accessible to the modern reader. Interpretation is left to the teacher, and to the large and growing body of criticism devoted to The Faerie Queene.

THE NUMBERING SYSTEM

In the Glossary and Textual Appendix, references to parts of the poem are given in the condensed form BCN.SN, where B = book number (from 1 to 7), CN = canto number (from 01 to 12; canto 00 is the proem), and SN = stanza number (from 1 to a maximum of 87; stanza 0 is the argument).

If a line within a stanza needs to be specified, it is preceded by a colon. Ranges of cantos, stanzas, or lines are indicated by a dash.

For example:

401.31 Book IV, Canto i, stanza 31 611.11:3 Book VI, Canto xi, stanza 11, line 3 503.2-9 Book V, Canto iii, stanzas 2 to 9 503-4 Book V, Cantos iii-iv 207.0 Book II, Canto vii, Argument 100.3 Book I, Proem, stanza 3 500.1:2-4 Book V, Proem, stanza 1, lines 2-4

In addition, a line of the Introductory Matter is specified by its number, preceded by a colon and a capital "I". For example, "I:123" refers to line 123 in the Introductory Matter.

HOW THE GLOSSARY WORKS

Entries relating to each line of Shadow Text are shown below that line. In cases where a glossed word appears more than once in a line, plus signs are used if necessary to highlight the particular word being glossed. For example, in the line:

Till some end they find, +or+ in or out,

it is the first "or" which is glossed.

Editorial policy in the Glossary is as follows. Words which appear in modern concise dictionaries and whose meanings are unchanged are rarely glossed. The reader is expected to understand words such as "quoth", "hither", and "aught" in their modern senses. Where an apparently modern form has a different contextual meaning, it is glossed; and where the modern sense is also to be understood, this is included in the definition. Similar senses are grouped with commas; changes in sense are indicated by semicolons. For example:

sad > heavy, heavily laden; sad

The commoner obsolete forms have been silently converted: "thee" to "you", "dost" to "does", "mought" to "might", "whenas" to "when", and so on. Others (generally speaking, those less common words sufficiently distinct from their modern counterparts to merit a separate entry in the Shorter Oxford English Dictionary) have been unified to the spelling preferred by that and its parent dictionary. This should allow the reader, during very close scrutiny of any passage, quickly to find any of Spenser's words in the OED.

All the Glossary entries are context-sensitive: Spenser often uses the same word in several different ways. Thus no single Glossary entry should be taken as generally definitive.

Types of entry

(a) Translations

An entry not enclosed in brackets should be read as a straight translation of the quoted text which can be directly substituted for it.

For example, in stanza 1 of the proem to Book I, line 1:

whilom > formerly

Line 1 can thus be understood to mean:

Lo I, the man whose Muse formerly did mask

Very often, additional meanings are given in such definitions:

weeds > clothes, garb

These additional meanings may complement one another, indicating the hybrid sense which seems to be required, or they may constitute a set of alternative meanings, any or all of which may have been intended by Spenser. Each entry in any unbracketed list may always be substituted for the original without disturbing the syntax.

Similar senses are grouped with commas; changes in sense are indicated with semicolons. For example:

gentle > noble; courteous, generous

In this case, an apparently modern form has a different contextual meaning, and so it is glossed; and when the modern sense is also to be understood, this is included in the definition:

dull > dull, lacklustre; blunt

Where the contrast between alternatives is particularly great, words are separated by or, also, etc.

Sometimes the meaning is forced or metaphorical. In these cases the straight "dictionary" meaning of the word is given first, and hence, thus, or so are used to indicate contextual departure from this. For example:

style > literary composition; hence: poem, song (cf. SC,
   "Januarie", 10)

In this example, parenthesized editorial comment has also been included.

Editorial comment in entries of this class is either enclosed in round brackets, as above, or set in "italic" type, as in this entry:

bale > torment; infliction of death; also, mainly in northern usage: great consuming fire, funeral pyre; hence, perhaps: hell-fire

A question-mark, as may be expected, indicates doubt, usually about words which are not found in the OED but whose meaning might be inferred from the context. For example:

mill > ?mill-wheel; ?cogs of the mill (or because the sallow grows by water)

(b) Definitions

An entry in curly brackets should be read as a dictionary definition of the quoted text which cannot be directly fitted into the syntax of the original line. For example:

scrine > {Casket or cabinet for archival papers}

(c) Notes

Entries in round brackets should be read as if they were footnotes, typically giving background information or editorial speculation. For example:

Muse > (The nine Muses are usually represented as the daughters of Jupiter and Mnemosyne (Memory); each goddess presides over an area of the arts and sciences and gives inspiration to its practitioners)

and:

chief > chief, first; best (here Spenser is addressing either Clio, the Muse of history, or Calliope, the Muse of epic poetry; probably Clio. Clio is the first of the nine Muses in Hesiod's Theogony, and is usually represented with an open roll of paper or a chest of books. Spenser calls her "thou eldest Sister of the crew" at TM 53. See 111.5:6- 8, 303.4:6, 706.37:9, 707.1:1)

It should be added that on occasion the distinction between a "note", requiring round brackets, and a "definition", requiring curly brackets, is somewhat moot.

(d) Hints and expansions

Entries in square brackets are hints or expansions to make the quoted text more intelligible, and can be thought of as being preceded by the qualifications "that is", "in other words", or "what Spenser appears to mean is". For example:

in his help > [to help him; in his armoury]

Such entries can be mentally substituted for the quoted word or phrase in order to aid comprehension.

Sometimes square brackets are employed in other sorts of definitions to indicate words which should be understood. For example:

mask > {Disguise [herself]; take part in a masque or masquerade}

and:

time > [her] term of apprenticeship

(e) Explanations of character-names

Most of the names of major characters in the poem have special meanings. These are briefly explained as follows:

Archimago > "Arch Mage", "Arch Magician"

Sometimes there is a qualifying parenthesis giving information on the etymology or adding comment:

Una > "One" (Latin; she is the sole Truth)

Character-names from the poem and from classical mythology are typically explained once only, on their first occurrence. If you encounter a name which is not defined, then it has appeared somewhere before. The list of proper nouns will quickly help you to find it.

THE TEXTUAL APPENDIX

A textual appendix, detailing actual or proposed departures from the copy-text, is incorporated. The Textual Appendix records:

(a) obvious misprints;

(b) lections from 1590 or 1609 which seem preferable;

(c) lections from 1590 or 1609 which throw light on the spelling,
 punctuation or sense of 1596;

(d) illuminating conjectures or suggestions made by Spenserian
 scholars and editors.

The four main sources for the text are quoted as follows:

1590: the 1590 quarto edition (Books I-III) 1596: the 1596 quarto edition (Books I-VI) 1609: the 1609 folio edition (Books I-VII) FE: the corrigenda (Faults Escaped in the Print) which accompany 1590 (Books I-III)

In the Textual Appendix, all original text is shown in "roman" type, except where it occurs in italic type in the sources. All editorial comment in the Textual Appendix is shown in "italic" type.

Examples

(a) Departures from the text of 1596

Elfe > Elfe, 1596

The lection from 1590 and 1609 is to be preferred, since 1596 (with an extraneous comma) appears to be in error.

sawe > saw 1596, 1609

The lection from 1590 is to be preferred.

there > their 1590, 1596

The lection from 1609 is to be preferred.

that > omitted from 1596

The word has been supplied from the lection of 1590 and 1609.

who > omitted from 1596 and 1609

The word has been supplied from 1590.

has > omitted from 1590 and 1596

The word has been supplied from 1609.

wite > wote 1590 etc.; this correction is generally agreed.

All three editions contain a blatant error, which has been corrected by editorial conjecture.

those > these 1590 etc.: FE

All three editions are in error and the word has been supplied from FE.

Harrow > Horrow 1590, 1596: FE

The error occurs in 1590 and 1596, and was corrected in 1609 from
FE.

(b) Variants on the text of 1596

in her sight > to her might 1590

The variant occurs in 1590, but not in 1596 or 1609.

traile > trayle 1609

The variant occurs in 1609, but not in 1590 or 1596.

fair > fayre, 1590; Faire 1609

These two variants occur in 1590 and 1609, so that the word in question is different in all three editions.

hand > hond sugg. Morris

Morris (see Bibliography) suggested this alternative to the given text.

So that any reader will be able to start anywhere and understand any stanza immediately, I have glossed even the common archaisms throughout (e.g. "gan", "eftsoons", "wont"). Occasionally, however, as with "squire", or "palmer", or "foster", when repetitious glossing would be locally irritating, I have glossed the word once or twice only at the beginning of each canto. Thus it is possible that you will alight somewhere and find an unknown word unglossed.

If this should happen, you will almost certainly be able to find the word glossed in at least one other place earlier in the canto. Or, if it is does not seem to be glossed at all, you will find it in any competent concise English dictionary.

SUGGESTIONS FOR NEW READERS

Readers who are new to The Faerie Queene and who are working without the help of a teacher may be daunted by its sheer size. Such readers are invited to sample some of the poem before deciding to embark on a detailed reading.

If you are at present unfamiliar with Elizabethan spelling and usage, I recommend that, in the beginning, you read each stanza first in the Shadow Text, just to get the mechanical meaning. Then go to the original and read that, for its structure, for its rhythm and its music, and to absorb the idiom of the language. After a short while you will be able to read the Original Text immediately, referring to the Shadow Text only when difficulty is encountered.

The following passages provide a brief survey of the variety of
Spenser's style.

101. The sequence in Error's den (101.11-27) is perhaps the most crudely allegorical in the FQ, and shows signs of having been drafted before Spenser hit upon his "dark conceit". None the less, the whole of this canto should be read as an introduction to the poem. Stanzas 39-41 are especially beautiful.

102.15-19. The first of many titanic battles between armed knights.

103.0-9. Una finds her champion in the gentle lion.

104.17-36. Spenser's rendition of the Seven Deadly Sins is grotesquely medieval in tone.

105.19-28. The goddess Night prepares to descend into hell. The quality of Spenser's imagination defeats what may have been his original intention to produce a pastiche here. For example, the choice of the word "tarre" at 105.28:8 evinces artistry of the highest order.

107.1-7. The Redcross Knight brought low. You are challenged not to want to continue reading this canto!

107.38-41. Prince Arthur's "goodly reason, and well guided speach".

108.45-50. The spoiling of Duessa.

109.35-54. The counsel of Despair. The central stanzas are often quoted out of context; 109.40 was raided by Joseph Conrad for his epitaph.

111.8-55. The Redcross Knight slays the dragon.

112.9-11. Spenser's sense of humour, at its most savage in Book III, here shows a gentler face.

204.16-32. The confession of Phedon. Spenser's handling of this old story is both vivid and economical.

205.28-34. Cymochles in the Bower of Bliss. The sensuousness of the poet's imagination is still, unbelievably, developing, and has yet further to go.

207. Mammon's cave. One of Milton's favourite cantos. The word-picture of Mammon himself (207.3-4) is quite superb.

210.7-11. The long chronicle of Britain, often dismissed as tedious, nevertheless contains many striking images. See the potted King Lear at 210.27-32.

212.30-33. Guyon tempted by the mermaids. The whole of this canto is recommended to the new reader; see especially 212.42-45, 212.58-82.

301.20-30. Britomart rescues the Redcross Knight.

302.17-27. Britomart falls for Arthegall.

304.17 is one of the most graphic stanzas in the FQ. Cymodoce's grief, 304.29-39, is wonderfully portrayed.

305.41-48. Timias's love for Belphoebe.

308.0-19. The Snowy Florimell. This is just a specimen: cantos 308-310 are mercilessly funny.

311.47-49. The image of Cupid, quite different in conception from Venus's "little sonne" of 306.11 ff.

312.1-27. The Masque of Cupid.

If your interest has been now been aroused, I suggest you read the Letter to Raleigh before venturing on your journey through the landscape of The Faerie Queene.

You will find there a spacious playground for the mind. Its knights and ladies, dragons and satyrs, forests and castles, seem at first to be those of fantasy. Yet the FQ is by no means an exercise in escapism. Even incomplete, it triumphantly succeeds in Spenser's declared intention of fashioning a "noble person in vertuous and gentle discipline".

=> ABBREVIATIONS USED IN THE GLOSSARY AND TEXTUAL APPENDIX

adj. adjective, adjectival, adjectivally adv. adverb, adverbial, adverbially Aen. Aeneid (Virgil) app. apparently BC before Christ c. circa, about catachr. catachresis, catachrestic, catachrestically CC Colin Clouts Come Home Againe (Spenser) cf. compare Col. Colossians conj. conjectured by corr. corrected by Dan. Daniel DGDG De Genealogia Deorum Gentilium (Boccaccio) Deut. Deuteronomy dub. dubitative, dubitatively Eccl. Ecclesiastes Ephes. Ephesians erron. erroneous, erroneously esp. especial, especially et seq. and the following words, passages euphem. euphemism, euphemistic, euphemistically Exod. Exodus Ezek. Ezekiel ff. following, et. seq. fig. figurative, figuratively fl. floruit (indicating the period during which a person "flourished" FQ The Faerie Queene Gal. Galatians Gen. Genesis GL Gerusalemme Liberata (Tasso) Heb. Hebrews Hos. Hosea HRB Historia Regum Britanniae (Geoffrey of Monmouth) Hubberd Mother Hubberds Tale (Spenser) intr. intransitive, intransitively Isa. Isaiah Josh. Joshua Judg. Judges lit. literal, literally LR Spenser's letter to Raleigh (see Introductory Matter) Matt. Matthew Met. Metamorphoses (Ovid) Myth. Mythologiae (Comes) Odes Odes (Ovid) OE Old English OED Oxford English Dictionary, 1989 edition OF Orlando Furioso (Ariosto) OFr Old French PL Paradise Lost (Milton) ppl. past participle prep. preposition, prepositional, prepositionally Ps. Psalms refl. reflexive, reflexively Rev. Revelation Rinaldo Rinaldo (Tasso) Rom. Romans RR Ruines of Rome (Spenser) sb. substantive, substantival, substantivally SC The Shepheardes Calender (Spenser) Song Sol. Song of Solomon sp., spp. species SU sense unique (i.e. this sense is found only here) SUFQ sense unique to FQ sugg. suggested by SUS sense unique to Spenser TM Teares of the Muses (Spenser) trans. transitive, transitively usu. usually Var. the variorum edition of Spenser's works (see Bibliography) vb. verb WU word unique (i.e. this word is found only here) WUFQ word unique to FQ WUS word unique to Spenser

=> PROPER NOUNS

The proper nouns in Books I-III (excluding the Introductory Matter) are catalogued here. The spellings given are those used in the Shadow Text. If the proper noun is glossed, reference to the stanza or stanzas containing the glossary entry or entries is given; otherwise, the stanza where the proper noun first occurs is noted.

The list has been extended to include characters who are not actually named. Entries for such characters begin with a lower- case letter. For example, Una's dwarf is listed as: dwarf [Una's].

The categories are as follows:

masculine character in history (i.e. a real person) feminine character in history neuter or animal character in history

masculine character in mythology feminine character in mythology neuter or animal character in mythology

masculine character in Bible feminine character in Bible

masculine character unique to FQ feminine character unique to FQ neuter or animal character unique to FQ

personification in FQ (e.g. Wrath, Despair) personification in general use (e.g. Nature, Time)

real place locus in mythology locus in Bible locus in FQ

tribes, nations, peoples, or individuals of these (e.g. Briton)

not classified

any historical character or real place M> any character or locus in mythology B> any character or locus in the Bible Q> any locus, character, or personification unique to FQ

Abessa 103.18 Abus 210.16 Acheron 105.33 Achilles I:330, 302.25 Acontius 207.55 Acrasia (Pleasure) 201.51, 301.2 Acrates 204.41 Adam 210.50 Admetus 311.39 Adonis 301.34, 306.0 Adrian Gulf [Adriatic Sea] 207.14 Aegean 307.26 Aegeria 210.42 Aegina 311.35 Aeneas I:83 Aeolus (1) 107.9 Aeolus (2) 311.42 Aesculapius 105.36 African Ismael 303.6 Aganippus 210.29 Agdistes (Genius) 212.48 Aidan [Adin] 303.37 Alba [Alba Longa] Albanact 210.14 Albania 210.29 Albion (1) 210.6 Albion (2) 210.11 Alcides (Hercules) 107.17 Alcluith 210.63 Alcmene 311.33 Aldebaran 103.16 Alexander 209.45 Allectus 210.57 Allen [the Bog of Allen, in Ireland] 209.16 Alma (Temperance) 209.0 Amarant 306.45 Amavia 201.0 Amazon 200.2 Ambition 207.46 Ambrosius 210.67 Amendment 110.26 America 210.72 Amintas 306.45 Ammon 105.48 Amoret 306.0 Amphisa 306.4 Anamnestes 209.58 Anchises 309.41 Androgeus 210.46 angel [watching over Guyon] 208.3 Angela 303.56 Anger 312.25 Angles 303.56 Annoyance 304.55 Antiochus 105.47 Antiope 311.35 Antiquity of Faery Land 209.60 Antonius 105.49 Apollo 105.43, 304.41 Appetite 209.28 Arabia 105.4 Arachne 207.28 Archimago (Hypocrisy) 101.43, 304.45 Argante 307.47 Argo 212.44 Argus 104.17, 309.7 armed knight [Sir Ferraugh] 308.15 Armorica 303.41 Arne 311.42 Arras 301.34 Artegall 209.6, 302.0 Arthgallo 210.44 Arthur 107.0 Arviragus 210.51 Asclepiodotus 210.50 Asia 309.39 Assaracus 209.56 Asteria 311.34 Atalanta 207.54 Ate 207.55 Athens 210.25 Atin 204.42 Atlas 207.54 Augustine 303.35 Aurelius 210.67 Aurora 104.16, 310.1 Avarice 104.27 Ave 103.13 Ave Maria 101.35 Avernus 105.31 Aveugle 105.23 Babel 209.21 Babylon 105.47 Bacchante 301.45 Bacchus (Lyaeus) 106.15 Bangor 303.35 Barry 303.8 Basciante 301.45 Bath (Caer-badus) 111.30 beadmen 110.36 Belinus 210.40 Belphoebe 203.0 Biblis 302.41 Bisaltis 311.41 Bladud 303.60 Boadicea 210.54 Boreas 102.33 Bower of Bliss 201.51 Braggadocchio 203.0 Brennus 210.40 Britain 110.65 Britomart 301.0 Briton 111.7 Briton Moniments 209.59 Britoness 301.58 Brocmail [Brockwell] 303.35 Brunchild 210.24 Brutus 210.9 Busirane 311.0 Cadmus 209.45 Cador 303.27 Caduceus 212.41 Cadwallader 303.40 Cadwalla [Cadwallin] 303.36 Cadwan 303.35 Caecily 210.34 Caelia 110.4 Caer-badus (Bath) 210.26 Caer-lion 210.25 Caer-merdin (Maridunum) 303.7 Caer-verulam [St Albans] 303.52 Caesar [Gaius Julius Caesar] 105.49 Calidore 308.28 Camber 210.14 Cambria 210.29 Camilla 304.2 Cantium (Canutium, Kent) 210.12 Canute 210.11 Canutium (Cantium, Kent) Carados 303.55 Carausius 210.57 Care 101.40; ?another? at 312.25 Careticus 303.33 Carlisle 210.25 Caspian 207.14 Cassibellaun 210.47 Cassiopeia 103.16 Castle Joyeous 301.20 Celeno 207.23 Celtic mainland 210.5 Celtica 210.29 Centaur 210.29 Cephissus 302.44 Cephisus 111.30 Cerberus 105.34 Ceres 301.51 Change 312.25 Chanticleer 102.1 Chaos 306.36 Charissa 110.4 Christ (Saviour, Redeemer) 210.53 Christianity 210.53 Christians 108.36 Chrysogone 306.4 Church 303.34 Claribella 204.26 Claudius 210.51 Cleopatra 105.50 Cleopolis 107.46 Clio 304.4 Clymene 311.38 Cnidus 306.29 Cocytus 101.37 Coel 210.58 Coillus 210.53 Colchester 210.58 Columbell 307.51 Concoction 209.31 Constantine (1) 210.60 Constantine (2) 303.29 Constantius 210.59 Contemplation 110.46 Coradin 204.36 Corceca (Devotion) 103.18 Cordelia 210.28 Corineus 210.10 Cornewaile (Cornwall) 210.12 Coronis 311.37 Coulin 210.11 Covetise 105.46 Creusa 212.45 Critias 207.52 Croesus 105.47 Cruelty 312.19 Cunedagius 210.33 Cupid (Love) 110.30 Cybele 106.15 Cymbeline 210.50 Cymbrian plain 108.11 Cymochles 204.41 Cymodoce 304.19 Cynthia (Diana, Lucina, Phoebe) 101.39, 107.34, 300.4 Cynthus 203.31 Cyparissus 106.17 Cytherea (Venus, Dame Pleasure) 306.20 Cytheron 306.29 Dame Pleasure (Venus, Cytherea) 101.47 Danae 311.31 Danger 312.11 Danius 210.43 Daphne 212.52, 311.36 Day (Phoebus, Light) 302.48 Death 206.44 Debon 210.11 Deborah 304.2 Deceit 105.26 Dee 303.35 Dehenbarth (South Wales) 302.18 Dell 210.24 Delos 212.13 Demogorgon 105.22 Denmark 210.41 Desire 312.9 Despair 109.0 Despite 204.41 Deucalion 311.42 Devonshire 210.12 Devotion (Corceca) 103.0 Diana (Cynthia, Lucina, Phoebe) 105.39 Diet 209.27 Digestion 209.31 Diocletian 210.8 Disdain 207.41 Disloyalty 312.25 Displeasure 312.18 Dissemblance 312.14 Doubt 312.10 dragon (Satan, Prince of Darkness) 101.3 Dread 312.25 Dread-of-Heavenly-Vengeance 312.25 Dryope 106.15 Duessa (Fidessa, Falsehood) 102.34, 301.0 Dumarin 304.19 Dunwallo 210.40 dwarf [Florimell's; named at 502.3:1] 305.3 dwarf [Una's] 101.6 Dynevor 303.8 Earth 107.9 Ease 312.4 Easterland [Norway] 210.41 Easterlings 210.63 Ebraucus 210.21 Eden 112.26 Edwin 303.36

6 As one that inly mourned: so was she sad,

inly > inwardly

7 And heavy sat upon her palfrey slow;

heavy > sadly palfrey > {Saddle-horse for ladies}

8 Seemed in heart some hidden care she had,

Seemed > [It seemed] in heart > in her heart; inwardly

9 And by her, in a line, a milk-white lamb she led.

in a line > on a lead

101.5

   So pure +an innocent+, as that same lambe,
2 She was in life and euery vertuous lore,
     And by descent from Royall lynage came
4 Of ancient Kings and Queenes, that had of yore
     Their scepters stretcht from East to Westerne shore,
6 And all the world in their subiection held;
     Till that infernall feend with foule vprore
8 Forwasted all their land, and them expeld:
   Whom to auenge, she had this Knight from far compeld.

1 an innocent > and innocent 1590; an Innocent 1609

1 So pure an innocent as that same lamb 2 She was in life and every virtuous lore;

lore > teaching, doctrine

3 And by descent from royal lineage came 4 Of ancient kings and queens, that had of yore

of yore > of old, in former times

5 Their sceptres stretched from east to western shore, 6 And all the world in their subjection held; 7 Till that infernal fiend with foul uproar

infernal fiend > hellish fiend (the dragon, Satan) uproar > insurrection; tumult

8 Forwasted all their land, and them expelled:

Forwasted > Ravaged, laid to waste

9 Whom to avenge, she had this knight from far compelled.

compelled > commanded; forced to come

101.6

   Behind her farre away a Dwarfe did lag,
2 That lasie seemd in being euer last,
     Or wearied with bearing of her bag
4 Of needments at his backe. Thus as they past,
     The day with cloudes was suddeine ouercast,
6 And angry Ioue an hideous storme of raine
     Did poure into his Lemans lap so fast,
8 That euery wight to shrowd it did constrain,
   And this faire couple eke to shroud themselues were fain.

1 Behind her far away a dwarf did lag,
2 That lazy seemed, in being ever last,
3 Or wearied with bearing of her bag
4 Of needments at his back. Thus as they passed,

needments > necessaries passed > passed; and perhaps: paced

5 The day with clouds was suddenly overcast, 6 And angry Jove a hideous storm of rain

Jove > [the heavens personified] hideous > terrific; hence: violent, torrential

7 Did pour into his leman's lap so fast

leman > mistress; wife (the Earth portrayed as the lover of Heaven)

8 That every wight to shroud it did constrain;

wight > person, creature, being shroud > take shelter; shelter (sb.)

9 And this fair couple eke to shroud themselves were fain.

eke > likewise fain > obliged; eager

101.7

   Enforst to seeke some couert nigh at hand,
2 A shadie groue not far away they spide,
     That promist ayde the +tempest+ to withstand:
4 Whose loftie trees yclad with sommers pride,
     Did spred so broad, that heauens light did hide,
6 Not perceable with power of any starre:
     And all within were pathes and alleies wide,
8 With footing worne, and leading inward farre:
   Faire harbour that them seemes; so in they entred arre.

3 tempest > tempests 1609

1 Enforced to seek some covert nigh at hand,
2 A shady grove not far away they spied,
3 That promised aid, the tempest to withstand:
4 Whose lofty trees, clad with summer's pride,

pride > splendour; splendid adornment (with connotations of "pride" (1) in its modern sense, and (2) in the sense "sexual heat", "sexual desire". In combination, these are the undoing of the knight. Cf. "iolly" at 101.1:8)

5 Did spread so broad that heaven's light did hide,

did > [they did]

6 Not pierceable with power of any star:

pierceable > able to be pierced

7 And all within were paths and alleys wide, 8 With footing worn, and leading inward far:

footing > {The passage of feet}

9 Fair harbour that them seems; so in they entered are.

harbour > refuge; also: arbour that them > [that to them]

101.8

   And foorth they passe, with pleasure forward led,
2 Ioying to heare the birdes sweete harmony,
     Which therein shrouded from the tempest dred,
4 Seemd in their song to scorne the cruell sky.
     Much can they prayse the trees so straight and hy,
6 The sayling Pine, the Cedar proud and tall,
     The vine-prop Elme, the Poplar neuer dry,
8 The builder Oake, sole king of forrests all,
   The Aspine good for staues, the Cypresse funerall.

1 And forth they pass, with pleasure forward led, 2 Joying to hear the birds' sweet harmony, 3 Which, therein shrouded from the tempest dread,

shrouded > sheltered

4 Seemed in their song to scorn the cruel sky. 5 Much can they praise the trees so straight and high,

can > did; can

6 The sailing pine; the cedar proud and tall;

sailing > (Figuratively; also because pine was used to make masts for sailing-ships)

7 The vine-prop elm; the poplar never dry;

never dry > (Because the poplar grows beside water)

8 The builder oak, sole king of forests all; 9 The aspen good for staves; the cypress funeral;

funeral > funereal (because of its association with death and grief)

101.9

   The Laurell, meed of mightie Conquerours
2 And Poets sage, the Firre that weepeth still,
     The Willow worne of forlorne Paramours,
4 The Eugh obedient to the benders will,
     The Birch for shaftes, the Sallow for the mill,
6 The Mirrhe +sweete+ bleeding in the bitter wound,
     The warlike Beech, the Ash for nothing ill,
8 The fruitfull Oliue, and the Platane round,
   The caruer Holme, the Maple +seeldom+ inward sound.

6 sweete > sweet, 1609 9 seeldom > sildom 1609 passim

1 The laurel, meed of mighty conquerors

meed > reward (the laurel, sacred to Apollo, was used to make a crown for conquerors or poets)

2 And poets sage; the fir that weeps still;

weeps still > continuously exudes resin

3 The willow, worn of forlorn paramours;

of > by; habitually by

4 The yew, obedient to the bender's will;

bender > [archer: the yew was traditionally used for longbows]

5 The birch for shafts; the sallow for the mill;

mill > ?mill-wheel; ?cogs of the mill (or because the sallow grows by water)

6 The myrrh sweet bleeding in the bitter wound;

myrrh > (The aromatic resin of the gum myrrh tree (Commiphora myrrha) is used herbally as an antiseptic and disinfectant. But the reference also evokes (noted by Bayley (1966) 264-5) the story of Myrrha (Met. 10), whose incestuous desire for her own father led to her transformation into a myrrh tree: in that form she gave agonizing birth to Adonis. In Song Sol. 1.13, myrrh is mentioned in a celebration of sexual congress. The word "myrrh" itself is derived from an Arabic word meaning "bitter". Here in one line is a perfect example of the richness of Spenser's art)

7 The warlike beech; the ash for nothing ill;

warlike > (Because war-chariots in antiquity were reputedly made of beech)

8 The fruitful olive; and the platan round;

platan > plane-tree

9 The carver holm; the maple seldom inward sound.

holm > (Holm oak, Quercus ilex, whose wood is suitable for carving)

101.10

   Led with delight, they thus beguile the way,
2 Vntill the blustring storme is ouerblowne;
     When weening to returne, whence they did stray,
4 +They+ cannot finde that path, which first was showne,
     But wander too and fro in wayes vnknowne,
6 Furthest from end then, when they neerest weene,
     That makes them doubt, their wits be not their owne:
8 So many pathes, so many turnings seene,
   That which of them to take, in diuerse doubt they been.

4 They > The 1596

1 Led with delight, they thus beguile the way

beguile the way > evade the labour of travel; dawdle

2 Until the blustering storm is overblown; 3 When, weening to return whence they did stray,

weening > expecting

4 They cannot find that path, which first was shown, 5 But wander to and fro in ways unknown, 6 Furthest from end then, when they nearest ween,

ween > suppose, imagine [themselves to be nearest the end of their uncertainty]

7 That makes them doubt their wits be not their own:

doubt > fear

8 So many paths, so many turnings seen, 9 That which of them to take, in diverse doubt they been.

diverse > diverse; also: distracting (SUS) been > [were]

101.11

   At last resoluing forward still to fare,
2 Till that some end they finde or in or out,
     That path they take, that beaten seemd most bare,
4 And like to lead the labyrinth about;
     Which when by tract they hunted had throughout,
6 At length it brought them to a hollow caue,
     Amid the thickest woods. The Champion stout
8 Eftsoones dismounted from his courser braue,
   And to the Dwarfe a while his needlesse spere he gaue.

1 At last, resolving forward still to fare,

still > continuously, without change; hence: in one direction

2 Till some end they find, +or+ in or out,

or > either

3 That path they take that beaten seemed most bare, 4 And likely to lead the labyrinth about;

the labyrinth about > [out of the labyrinth]

5 Which when by tract they hunted had throughout,

tract > track, trail; tracing

6 At length it brought them to a hollow cave

hollow > insincere, false; also: hungry (these readings might be indicated by the tautology; cf. 109.33:2, 308.37:5, but also 303.8:3)

7 Amid the thickest woods. The champion stout

stout > bold, brave

8 Eftsoons dismounted from his courser brave,

Eftsoons > Thereupon brave > splendid, fine; courageous

9 And to the dwarf awhile his needless spear he gave.

needless > (Because it is wielded only by a mounted knight, the sword being used when he is on foot)

101.12

   Be well aware, quoth then that Ladie milde,
2 Least suddaine mischiefe ye too rash prouoke:
     The danger hid, the place vnknowne and wilde,
4 Breedes dreadfull doubts: Oft fire is without smoke,
     And perill without show: therefore +your stroke+
6 Sir knight with-hold, till further triall made.
     Ah Ladie (said he) shame were to reuoke
8 The forward footing for an hidden shade:
   Vertue giues her selfe light, through darkenesse for to wade.

5 your stroke > your hardy stroke 1590 etc.: FE

1 "Be well aware," quoth then that lady mild,

aware > watchful, on your guard mild > kind, gracious

2 "Lest sudden mischief you too rash provoke:

mischief > disaster you too rash provoke > [you, too rash, provoke; or: you too rashly provoke]

3 The danger hidden, the place unknown and wild, 4 Breeds dreadful doubts. Oft fire is without smoke, 5 And peril without show: therefore your stroke, 6 Sir knight, withhold, till further trial made."

made > [be made]

7 "Ah lady," said he, "shame were to revoke

shame were > [it would be shameful; it would be a shame] revoke > check; withdraw, draw back

8 The forward footing for a hidden shade:

footing > step, tread for > [for fear of]

9 Virtue gives herself light, through darkness for to wade."

for > in order wade > {Go, proceed; proceed through some medium which offers resistance}

101.13

   Yea but (quoth she) the perill of this place
2 I better wot then you, though now too late,
     To wish you backe returne with foule disgrace,
4 Yet wisedome warnes, whilest foot is in the gate,
     To stay the steppe, ere forced to retrate.
6 This is the wandring wood, this Errours den,
     A monster vile, whom God and man does hate:
8 Therefore I read beware. Fly fly (quoth then
   The fearfull Dwarfe:) this is no place for liuing men.

1 "Yes but" quoth she, "the peril of this place 2 I better wot than you: though now too late

wot > know

3 To wish you back return with foul disgrace, 4 Yet wisdom warns, whilst foot is in the gate,

gate > gate; way, path; journey (for this marks the beginning of the knight's spiritual quest)

5 To stay the step, ere forced to retrait.

retrait > retreat, retire

6 This is the Wandering Wood, this Error's den,

Wandering > (The Latin verb errare means not only to "wander", but also "stray", "deviate", "be mistaken")

7 A monster vile, whom God and man does hate: 8 Therefore I read beware." "Fly, fly!" quoth then

read > counsel [you to …] Fly > Flee

9 The fearful dwarf, "this is no place for living men."

101.14

   But full of fire and greedy hardiment,
2 The youthfull knight could not for ought be staide,
     But forth vnto the darksome hole he went,
4 And looked in: his glistring armor made
     A litle glooming light, much like a shade,
6 By which he saw the vgly monster plaine,
     Halfe like a serpent horribly displaide,
8 But th'other halfe did womans shape retaine,
   Most lothsom, filthie, foule, and full of vile disdaine.

1 But, full of fire and greedy hardiment,

greedy > eager, reckless hardiment > boldness

2 The youthful knight could not for aught be stayed, 3 But forth to the darksome hole he went, 4 And looked in: his glistering armour made 5 A little glooming light, much like a shade,

glooming > gloaming (cognate with "glow")

6 By which he saw the ugly monster plain, 7 Half like a serpent horribly displayed;

displayed > displayed; uncoiled, spread out (but cf. 101.15:3)

8 But the other half did woman's shape retain: 9 Most loathsome, filthy, foul, and full of vile disdain.

disdain > repulsiveness

101.15

   And as she lay vpon the durtie ground,
2 Her huge long taile her den all ouerspred,
     Yet was in knots and many boughtes vpwound,
4 Pointed with mortall sting. Of her there bred
     A thousand yong ones, which she dayly fed,
6 Sucking vpon her +poisonous+ dugs, eachone
     Of sundry +shapes,+ yet all ill fauored:
8 Soone as that vncouth light vpon them shone,
   Into her mouth they crept, and suddain all were gone.

6 poisonous > poisnous 1590 7 shapes, > shape 1596 (some copies); shape, 1609

1 And as she lay upon the dirty ground, 2 Her huge long tail her den all overspread, 3 Yet was in knots and many boughts upwound,

boughts > coils

4 Pointed with mortal sting. Of her there bred

mortal > lethal

5 A thousand young ones, which she daily fed, 6 Sucking upon her poisonous dugs; each one 7 Of sundry shapes, yet all ill-favoured.

Of sundry shapes > [Each one was different]

8 Soon as that uncouth light upon them shone,

Soon > [As soon] uncouth > unaccustomed

9 Into her mouth they crept, and sudden all were gone.

101.16

   Their dam vpstart, out of her den effraide,
2 And rushed forth, hurling her hideous taile
     About her cursed head, whose folds displaid
4 Were stretcht now forth at length without entraile.
     She lookt about, and seeing one in mayle
6 Armed to point, sought backe to turne againe;
     For light she hated as the deadly bale,
8 Ay wont in desert darknesse to remaine,
   Where plaine none might her see, nor she see any plaine.

1 Their dam upstart out of her den affrayed,

upstart > started up affrayed > alarmed, startled; frightened, terrified

2 And rushed forth, hurling her hideous tail

hurling > whirling; brandishing hideous > terrific; immense; odious

3 About her cursed head, whose folds displayed

displayed > uncoiled

4 Were stretched now forth at length without entrail.

entrail > [a] coil (SUS)

5 She looked about and, seeing one in mail,

mail > chain armour

6 Armed to point, sought back to turn again;

to point > to the smallest detail, completely

7 For light she hated as the deadly bale,

bale > torment; infliction of death; also, mainly in northern usage: great consuming fire, funeral pyre; hence, perhaps: hell-fire

8 Ay wont in desert darkness to remain,

Ay > Ever, always wont > used, accustomed desert > lonely

9 Where plain none might her see, nor she see any plain.

101.17

   Which when the valiant Elfe +perceiu'd+, he lept
2 As Lyon fierce vpon the flying pray,
     And with his trenchand blade her boldly kept
4 From turning backe, and forced her to stay:
     Therewith enrag'd she loudly gan to bray,
6 And turning fierce, her speckled taile aduaunst,
     Threatning her angry sting, him to dismay:
8 Who nought aghast, his mightie hand enhaunst:
   The stroke down from her head vnto her shoulder glaunst.

1 perceiu'd > perceiu'ed 1596

1 Which when the valiant Elf perceived, he leapt

Elf > {Native of Faery Land (but see 110.64-5)}

2 As lion fierce upon the flying prey, 3 And with his trenchant blade her boldly kept

trenchant > sharp, deeply cutting

4 From turning back, and forced her to stay. 5 Therewith enraged, she loudly began to bray,

Therewith > With that

6 And turning fierce, her speckled tail advanced,

fierce > fierce; fiercely

7 Threatening her angry sting, him to dismay:

dismay > defeat

8 Who, naught aghast, his mighty hand enhanced:

enhanced > raised

9 The stroke down from her head to her shoulder glanced.

101.18

   Much daunted with that dint, her sence was dazd,
2 Yet kindling rage, her selfe she gathered round,
     And all attonce her beastly body raizd
4 With doubled forces high aboue the ground:
     Tho wrapping vp her wrethed sterne arownd,
6 Lept fierce vpon his shield, and her huge traine
     All suddenly about his body wound,
8 That hand or foot to stirre he stroue in vaine:
   God helpe the man so wrapt in Errours endlesse traine.

1 Much daunted with that dint, her sense was dazed;

dint > stroke

2 Yet, kindling rage, herself she gathered round, 3 And all at once her beastly body raised 4 With doubled forces high above the ground: 5 Tho, wrapping up her wreathed stern around,

Tho > Then

6 Leapt fierce upon his shield, and her huge train

train > tail

7 All suddenly about his body wound, 8 That hand or foot to stir he strove in vain:

That > [So that]

9 God help the man so wrapped in Error's endless train!

train > tail; trickery, deceit; assembly, entourage

101.19

   His Lady sad to see his sore constraint,
2 Cride out, Now now Sir knight, shew what +ye+ bee,
     Add faith vnto your force, and be not faint:
4 Strangle her, else she sure will strangle thee.
     That when he heard, in great perplexitie,
6 His gall did grate for griefe and high disdaine,
     And knitting all his force got one hand free,
8 Wherewith he grypt her gorge with so great paine,
   That soone to loose her wicked bands did her constraine.

2 ye > you 1609

1 His lady, sad to see his sore constraint,

sore > grievous constraint > restriction of liberty; affliction

2 Cried out, "Now, now, sir knight, show what you be; 3 Add faith to your force, and be not faint: 4 Strangle her, else she sure will strangle you!" 5 That when he heard, in great perplexity, 6 His gall did grate for grief and high disdain;

gall > sense of rancour (said to have its seat in the gall) grate > grind grief > rage

7 And, knitting all his force, got one hand free, 8 Wherewith he gripped her gorge with so great pain,

Wherewith > With which gorge > throat so > such pain > pains, effort, labour; hence: strength

9 That soon to loose her wicked bonds did her constrain.

did > [it did; he did]

101.20

   Therewith she spewd out of her filthy maw
2 A floud of poyson horrible and blacke,
     Full of great lumpes of flesh and gobbets raw,
4 Which stunck so vildly, that it forst him slacke
     His grasping hold, and from her turne him backe:
6 Her vomit full of bookes and papers was,
     With loathly frogs and toades, which eyes did lacke,
8 And creeping sought way in the weedy gras:
   Her filthy parbreake all the place defiled has.

1 Therewith she spewed out of her filthy maw

Therewith > With that; thereupon maw > stomach

2 A flood of poison horrible and black, 3 Full of great lumps of flesh and gobbets raw,

gobbets > {Lumps of raw or semi-digested flesh or food}

4 Which stunk so vilely, that it forced him slack 5 His grasping hold, and from her turn him back: 6 Her vomit full of books and papers was, 7 With loathly frogs and toads, which eyes did lack,

loathly > loathsome, repulsive, hateful

8 And creeping sought way in the weedy grass: 9 Her filthy parbreak all the place defiled has.

parbreak > vomit

101.21

   As when old father Nilus gins to swell
2 With timely pride aboue the Aegyptian vale,
     His fattie waues do fertile slime outwell,
4 And ouerflow each plaine and lowly dale:
     But when his later +spring+ gins to auale,
6 Huge heapes of mudd he leaues, wherein there breed
     Ten thousand kindes of creatures, partly male
8 And partly female of his fruitfull seed;
   Such vgly monstrous shapes elswhere may no man reed.

5 spring > ebbe 1590 etc.: FE

1 As when old Father Nile begins to swell 2 With timely pride above the Egyptian vale;

timely > seasonal pride > {The state of being in flood; stateliness, splendour; tumescence, sexual excitement}

3 His fatty waves do fertile slime outwell,

fatty > oleaginous, greasy; hence: mud-laden, rich outwell > pour forth

4 And overflow each plain and lowly dale: 5 But when his latter spring begins to avale,

latter > last, final spring > tide avale > sink down, flow down

6 Huge heaps of mud he leaves, wherein there breed 7 Ten thousand kinds of creatures, partly male

partly > some

8 And partly female, of his fruitful seed;

seed > semen (cf. 304.41:6); progeny

9 Such ugly monstrous shapes elsewhere may no man read.

read > see, observe (SUS)

101.22

   The same so sore annoyed has the knight,
2 That welnigh choked with the deadly stinke,
     His forces faile, ne can no longer fight.
4 Whose corage when the feend perceiu'd to shrinke,
     She poured forth out of her hellish sinke
6 Her fruitfull cursed spawne of serpents small,
     Deformed monsters, fowle, and black as inke,
8 Which swarming all about his legs did crall,
   And him encombred sore, but could not hurt at all.

1 The same so sore annoyed has the knight,

annoyed > afflicted, discommoded

2 That, well-nigh choked with the deadly stink, 3 His forces fail, nor can no longer fight: 4 Whose courage when the fiend perceived to shrink, 5 She poured forth out of her hellish sink

sink > {Intestines, organs of excretion; rectum}

6 Her fruitful cursed spawn of serpents small: 7 Deformed monsters, foul, and black as ink, 8 Which swarming all about his legs did crawl, 9 And him encumbered sore, but could not hurt at all.

101.23

   As gentle Shepheard in sweete euen-tide,
2 When ruddy Ph{oe}bus gins to welke in west,
     High on an hill, his flocke to vewen wide,
4 Markes which do byte their hasty supper best;
     A cloud of +combrous+ gnattes do him molest,
6 All striuing to infixe their feeble stings,
     That from their noyance he no where can rest,
8 But with his clownish hands their tender wings
   He brusheth +oft+, and oft doth mar their murmurings.

5 combrous > cumbrous 1590 9 oft > off conj. Collier

1 As gentle shepherd in sweet eventide 2 (When ruddy Phoebus begins to welk in west),

welk > fade, wane

3 High on a hill, his flock to view wide, 4 Marks which do bite their hasty supper best, 5 A cloud of cumbrous gnats do him molest,

A > [And a] cumbrous > harassing

6 All striving to infix their feeble stings, 7 That from their annoyance he nowhere can rest,

That > [So that]

8 But with his clownish hands their tender wings

clownish > rude, rustic

9 He brushes oft, and oft does mar their murmurings.

101.24

   Thus ill bestedd, and fearefull more of shame,
2 Then of the certaine perill he stood in,
     Halfe furious vnto his foe he came,
4 Resolv'd in minde all suddenly to win,
     Or soone to lose, before he once would lin;
6 And +strooke+ at her with more then manly force,
     That from her body full of filthie sin
8 He +raft+ her hatefull head without remorse;
   A streame of cole black bloud forth gushed from her corse.

6 strooke > stroke 1590 8 raft > reft 1609

1 Thus ill-bested, and fearful more of shame

ill-bested > hard-pressed, threatened (bested = placed); or: ill- bestad: badly beset, badly hemmed in (SUS)

2 Than of the certain peril he stood in, 3 Half furious to his foe he came, 4 Resolved in mind all suddenly to win, 5 Or soon to lose, before he once would lin;

lin > desist, cease

6 And struck at her with more than manly force,

manly > human

7 That from her body, full of filthy sin,

That > [So that]

8 He reft her hateful head without remorse:

reft > severed (catachr.); took away remorse > compunction; pity

9 A stream of coal-black blood forth gushed from her corse.

corse > body

101.25

   Her scattred brood, soone as their Parent deare
2 They saw so rudely falling to the ground,
     Groning full deadly, all with troublous feare,
4 Gathred themselues about her body round,
     Weening their wonted entrance to haue found
6 At her wide mouth: but being there withstood
     They flocked all about her bleeding +wound,+
8 And sucked vp their dying mothers blood,
   Making her death their life, and eke her hurt their good.

wound, > wound. 1596

1 Her scattered brood, soon as their parent dear

soon > [as soon]

2 They saw so rudely falling to the ground,

rudely > violently; clumsily

3 Groaning full deadly, all with troublous fear,

full > very, exceedingly

4 Gathered themselves about her body round, 5 Weening their wonted entrance to have found

Weening > Supposing wonted > customary, usual

6 At her wide mouth; but being there withstood, 7 They flocked all about her bleeding wound, 8 And sucked up their dying mother's blood, 9 Making her death their life, and eke her hurt their good.

eke > also, moreover

101.26

   That detestable sight him much amazde,
2 To see th'vnkindly Impes of heauen accurst,
     Deuoure their dam; on whom while so he gazd,
4 Hauing all satisfide their bloudy thurst,
     Their bellies swolne he saw with fulnesse burst,
6 And bowels gushing forth: well worthy end
     Of such as drunke her life, the which them nurst;
8 Now needeth him no +lenger+ labour spend,
   His foes haue slaine themselues, with whom he should contend.

8 lenger > longer 1609

1 That detestable sight him much amazed,

amazed > astounded, stunned

2 To see the unkindly imps, of heaven accursed,

unkindly > unnatural imps > offspring, progeny

3 Devour their dam; on whom while so he gazed, 4 Having all satisfied their bloody thirst, 5 Their bellies swollen he saw with fullness burst, 6 And bowels gushing forth: well worthy end 7 Of such as drunk her life, who them nursed; 8 Now needs him no longer labour spend, 9 His foes have slain themselves, with whom he should contend.

should contend > [would have contended]

101.27

   His Ladie seeing all, that chaunst, from farre
2 Approcht in hast to greet his victorie,
     And said, Faire knight, borne vnder happy starre,
4 Who see your vanquisht foes before you lye:
     Well worthy be you of that Armorie,
6 Wherein ye haue great glory wonne this day,
     And proou'd your strength on a strong enimie,
8 Your first aduenture: many such I pray,
   And henceforth euer wish, that like succeed it may.

1 His lady, seeing all that chanced from far, 2 Approached in haste to greet his victory;

greet > congratulate him on (SUFQ)

3 And said, "Fair knight, born under happy star,

born > born; borne, sustained, moved onward happy > fortunate, auspicious

4 Who see your vanquished foes before you lie, 5 Well worthy be you of that armoury

armoury > armour; armory: armorial bearings [the Red Cross]

6 Wherein you have great glory won this day, 7 And proved your strength on a strong enemy, 8 Your first adventure: many such I pray, 9 And henceforth ever wish, that like succeed it may."

like > the like; hence: similar success

101.28

   Then mounted he vpon his Steede againe,
2 And with the Lady backward sought to wend;
     That path he kept, which beaten was most plaine,
4 Ne euer would to any by-way bend,
     But still did follow one vnto the end,
6 The which at last out of the wood them brought.
     So forward on his way (with God to frend)
8 He +passed+ forth, and new aduenture sought;
   Long way he trauelled, before he heard of ought.

8 passed > passeth 1596, 1609

1 Then mounted he upon his steed again, 2 And with the lady backward sought to wend. 3 That path he kept which beaten was most plain, 4 Nor ever would to any byway bend,

bend > incline; turn, hence: divert their course

5 But still did follow one to the end,

still > continuously, without change; hence: in one direction

6 Which at last out of the wood them brought. 7 So forward on his way (with God to friend)

to > as a

8 He passed forth, and new adventure sought; 9 Long way he travelled, before he heard of aught.

101.29

   At length they chaunst to meet vpon the way
2 An aged Sire, in long blacke weedes yclad,
     His feete all bare, his beard all hoarie gray,
4 And by his belt his booke he hanging had;
     Sober he seemde, and very sagely sad,
6 And to the ground his eyes were lowly bent,
     Simple in shew, and voyde of malice bad,
8 And all the way he prayed, as he went,
   And often knockt his brest, as one that did repent.

1 At length they chanced to meet upon the way 2 An aged sire, in long black weeds clad,

sire > elderly man, father weeds > garments

3 His feet all bare, his beard all hoary grey, 4 And by his belt his book he hanging had; 5 Sober he seemed, and very sagely sad,

sad > grave

6 And to the ground his eyes were lowly bent, 7 Simple in show, and void of malice bad,

show > appearance

8 And all the way he prayed as he went, 9 And often knocked his breast, as one that did repent.

101.30

   He faire the knight saluted, louting low,
2 Who faire him quited, as that courteous was:
     And after asked him, if he did know
4 Of straunge aduentures, which abroad did pas.
     Ah my deare Sonne (quoth he) how should, alas,
6 Silly old man, that liues in hidden cell,
     Bidding his beades all day for his trespas,
8 Tydings of warre and worldly trouble tell?
   With holy father +sits+ not with such things to mell.

9 sits > fits 1609; cf. 108.33:5, 202.11:9

1 He fair the knight saluted, louting low,

fair > courteously louting > bowing, making obeisance ("Lowted, did honour and reuerence": SC, gloss to "Julye")

2 Who fair him requited, as courteous was:

fair > equitably; courteously

3 And after asked him if he did know 4 Of strange adventures, which abroad did pass. 5 "Ah, my dear son," quoth he, "how should, alas, 6 Silly old man, that lives in hidden cell,

Silly > Simple, innocent cell > {Dwelling consisting of a single chamber, occupied by a hermit}

7 Bidding his beads all day for his trespass,

Bidding his beads > Saying his rosary, saying his prayers trespass > sin, sins

8 Tidings of war and worldly trouble tell? 9 With holy father sits not with such things to mell.

sits not > it is not fitting, it does not behove mell > meddle (see SC, gloss to "Julye")

101.31

   But if of daunger which hereby doth dwell,
2 And +homebred euill ye+ desire to heare,
     Of a straunge man I can you tidings tell,
4 That wasteth all this countrey farre and neare.
     Of such (said he) I chiefly do inquere,
6 And shall +you+ well reward to shew the place,
     In which that wicked wight his dayes doth weare:
8 For to all knighthood it is foule disgrace,
   That such a cursed creature liues so long a space.

2 homebred euill ye > homebred euill euill ye 1596 6 you > thee 1590; "you" is the more courteous form; cf. 102.22:5, but also 107.48:9

1 "But if of danger, which hereby does dwell, 2 And homebred evil you desire to hear, 3 Of a strange man I can you tidings tell, 4 That wastes all this country, far and near." 5 "Of such," said he, "I chiefly do inquire, 6 And shall you well reward to show the place 7 In which that wicked wight his days does wear:

wight > being, person wear > spend

8 For to all knighthood it is foul disgrace 9 That such a cursed creature lives so long a space."

101.32

   Far hence (quoth he) in wastfull wildernesse
2 His dwelling is, by which no liuing wight
     May euer passe, but thorough great distresse.
4 Now (sayd the Lady) draweth toward night,
     And well I wote, that of your later fight
6 Ye all +for wearied+ be: for what so strong,
     But wanting rest will also want of might?
8 The Sunne that measures heauen all day long,
   At night doth baite his steedes the Ocean waues emong.

6 for wearied > forwearied 1590, 1609

1 "Far hence" quoth he, "in wasteful wilderness

wasteful > desolate

2 His dwelling is, by which no living wight

wight > person

3 May ever pass, but through great distress." 4 "Now" said the lady, "draws toward night, 5 And well I wot, that of your later fight

wot > know later > late, recent

6 You all forwearied be: for what so strong,

all forwearied be > [are worn out]

7 But, wanting rest, will also want of might?

wanting > lacking

8 The sun, that measures heaven all day long, 9 At night does bait his steeds the ocean waves among.

bait > {Rest, allow to rest; allow to feed on a journey} steeds > (Drawing Phoebus's "fiery carre": see 102.1:7)

101.33

   Then with the Sunne take Sir, your timely rest,
2 And with new day new worke at once begin:
     Vntroubled night they say giues counsell best.
4 Right well Sir knight ye haue aduised bin,
     (Quoth then that aged man;) the way to win
6 Is wisely to aduise: now day is spent;
     Therefore with me ye may take vp your In
8 For this same night. The knight was well content:
   So with that godly father to his home they went.

1 "Then with the sun take, sir, your timely rest, 2 And with new day new work at once begin: 3 Untroubled night, they say, gives counsel best." 4 "Right well, sir knight, you have advised been," 5 Quoth then that aged man; "the way to win 6 Is wisely to advise; now day is spent:

advise > consider, take stock; advise

7 Therefore with me you may take up your inn

inn > lodging

8 For this same night." The knight was well content: 9 So with that godly father to his home they went.

101.34

   A little lowly Hermitage it was,
2 Downe in a dale, hard by a forests side,
     Far from resort of people, that did pas
4 In trauell to and froe: a little wyde
     There was an holy Chappell edifyde,
6 Wherein the Hermite dewly wont to say
     His holy things each morne and euentyde:
8 Thereby a Christall streame did +gently+ play,
   Which from a sacred fountaine welled forth alway.

8 gently > genlty 1596

1 A little lowly hermitage it was, 2 Down in a dale, hard by a forest's side, 3 Far from resort of people that did pass 4 In travel to and fro: a little wide

wide > apart

5 There was a holy chapel edified,

edified > built

6 Wherein the hermit duly wont to say

wont > was accustomed

7 His holy things each morn and eventide: 8 Thereby a crystal stream did gently play, 9 Which from a sacred fountain welled forth alway.

alway > always

101.35

   Arriued there, the little house they fill,
2 Ne looke for entertainement, where none was:
     Rest is their feast, and all things at their will;
4 The noblest mind the best contentment has.
     With faire discourse the euening so they pas:
6 For that old man of pleasing wordes had store,
     And well could file his tongue as smooth as glas;
8 He told of Saintes and Popes, and +euermore+
   He strowd an Aue-Mary after and before.

8 euermore > euemore 1596

1 Arrived there, the little house they fill, 2 Nor look for entertainment, where none was:

entertainment > lavish hospitality

3 Rest is their feast, and all things at their will;

at their will > (Because they desire nothing)

4 The noblest mind the best contentment has. 5 With fair discourse the evening so they pass: 6 For that old man of pleasing words had store, 7 And well could file his tongue as smooth as glass;

file > shape, polish

8 He told of saints and popes, and evermore 9 He strewed an Ave Maria after and before.

Ave Maria > Hail Mary

101.36

   The drouping Night thus creepeth on them fast,
2 And the sad humour loading their eye liddes,
     As messenger of Morpheus on them cast
4 Sweet slombring deaw, the which to sleepe them biddes.
     Vnto their lodgings then his guestes he riddes:
6 Where when all drownd in deadly sleepe he findes,
     He to his study goes, and there amiddes
8 His Magick bookes and artes of sundry kindes,
   He seekes out mighty charmes, to trouble sleepy mindes.

1 The drooping night thus creeps on them fast, 2 And the sad humour loading their eyelids,

sad humour > heavy moisture (see line 4)

3 As messenger of Morpheus, on them cast

As > [Like a] Morpheus > (The god of dreams: one of the sons of Somnus, the god of sleep. His name signifies "Fashioner", "Moulder", because he shapes the sleeper's dreams)

4 Sweet slumbering dew, which to sleep them bids.

dew > (The dew of sleep. Cf. PL 4.614, Richard III IV i 84, Julius Caesar II i 230)

5 To their lodgings then his guests he rids:

rids > dispatches

6 Where, when all drowned in deadly sleep he finds,

deadly > death-like

7 He to his study goes, and there amidst 8 His magic books, and arts of sundry kinds, 9 He seeks out mighty charms to trouble sleepy minds.

sleepy > sleeping

101.37

   Then choosing out few wordes most horrible,
2 (Let none them read) thereof did verses frame,
     With which and other spelles like terrible,
4 He bad awake blacke Plutoes griesly Dame,
     And cursed heauen, and spake reprochfull shame
6 Of highest God, the Lord of life and light;
     A bold bad man, that dar'd to call by name
8 Great Gorgon, Prince of darknesse and dead night,
   At which Cocytus quakes, and Styx is put to flight.

1 Then, choosing out few words most horrible

few > [a few]

2 (Let none them read), thereof did verses frame, 3 With which, and other spells like terrible,

like > similarly

4 He bade awake black Pluto's grisly dame,

Pluto > (God of the underworld, brother of Jupiter and Neptune, husband of Proserpine) grisly > horrible, fearsome dame > (Pluto's consort, Proserpine, the daughter of Ceres and Jupiter; she was abducted by Pluto and taken to the lower world)

5 And cursed heaven, and spoke reproachful shame 6 Of highest God, the Lord of life and light; 7 A bold, bad man, that dared to call by name

call > invoke, summon

8 Great Gorgon, prince of darkness and dead night,

Gorgon > (Demogorgon, a primordial enchanter commanding the underworld (DGDG 1.1): see also 105.22:5, 402.47:7)

9 At which Cocytus quakes, and Styx is put to flight.

Cocytus > ("The stream of wailing": one of the five rivers of hell: the others are Acheron, Phlegethon, Lethe, and Styx) Styx > (The river of hate, which dead souls must cross)

101.38

   And forth he cald out of deepe darknesse dred
2 Legions of Sprights, the which like little flyes
     Fluttring about his euer damned hed,
4 A-waite whereto their seruice he applyes,
     To aide his friends, or fray his enimies:
6 Of those he chose out two, the falsest twoo,
     And fittest for to forge true-seeming lyes;
8 The one of them he gaue a message too,
   The other by him selfe staide other worke to doo.

1 And forth he called out of deep darkness dread 2 Legions of sprites, which, like little flies 3 Fluttering about his ever-damned head,

ever > eternally

4 Await whereto their service he applies:

applies > directs, brings to bear, puts to use

5 To aid his friends, or fray his enemies.

fray > frighten; attack

6 Of those he chose out two, the falsest two, 7 And fittest to forge true-seeming lies; 8 One of them he gave a message to, 9 The other by himself stayed, other work to do.

stayed > kept, retained

101.39

   He making speedy way through spersed ayre,
2 And through the world of waters wide and deepe,
     To Morpheus house doth hastily repaire.
4 Amid the bowels of the earth full steepe,
     And low, where dawning day doth neuer peepe,
6 His dwelling is; there Tethys his wet bed
     Doth euer wash, and Cynthia still doth steepe
8 In siluer deaw his euer-drouping hed,
   Whiles sad Night ouer him her mantle black doth spred.

1 He, making speedy way through spersed air,

spersed > scattered (aphetic form of "dispersed")

2 And through the world of waters wide and deep, 3 To Morpheus' house does hastily repair.

repair > go, betake himself

4 Amid the bowels of the earth full steep,

full > very, exceedingly

5 And low, where dawning day does never peep, 6 His dwelling is; there Tethys his wet bed

Tethys > (A marine goddess, wife of Oceanus; the sea)

7 Does ever wash, and Cynthia still does steep

Cynthia > (Diana in her aspect as goddess of the moon; the moon itself. See 203.31:2) still > continuously

8 In silver dew his ever-drooping head, 9 While sad Night over him her mantle black does spread.

sad > heavy; dark, deep; dismal Night > (The pre-Olympian goddess, Nox; she features in person at 105.20 ff.)

101.40

   Whose double gates he findeth locked fast,
2 The one faire fram'd of burnisht Yuory,
     The other all with siluer ouercast;
4 And wakefull dogges before them farre do lye,
     Watching to banish Care their enimy,
6 Who oft is wont to trouble gentle +Sleepe+.
     By them the Sprite doth passe in quietly,
8 And vnto Morpheus comes, whom drowned deepe
   In drowsie fit he findes: of nothing he takes keepe.

6 Sleepe > sleepe 1596; sleep 1609

1 Whose double gates he finds locked fast,

double gates > (The two Gates of Sleep (Odyssey 19.562-7; Aen. 6.893-6). True dreams pass through the gate of horn, while false dreams pass through the gate of ivory) fast > firmly

2 One fair framed of burnished ivory,

framed > made, fashioned

3 The other all with silver overcast;

overcast > covered, overlaid

4 And wakeful dogs before them far do lie, 5 Watching to banish Care, their enemy, 6 Who oft is wont to trouble gentle Sleep.

wont > accustomed gentle > gentle; high-born, noble

7 By them the sprite does pass in quietly, 8 And to Morpheus comes, whom drowned deep 9 In drowsy fit he finds: of nothing he takes keep.

keep > heed

101.41

   And more, to lulle him in his slumber soft,
2 A trickling streame from high rocke tumbling downe
     And euer-drizling raine vpon the loft,
4 Mixt with a murmuring winde, much like the sowne
     Of swarming Bees, did cast him in a swowne:
6 No other noyse, nor peoples troublous cryes,
     As still are wont t'annoy the walled towne,
8 Might there be heard: but carelesse Quiet lyes,
   Wrapt in eternall silence farre from enemyes.

1 And more, to lull him in his slumber soft, 2 A trickling stream from high rock tumbling down, 3 And ever-drizzling rain upon the loft,

loft > air, upper region; roof

4 Mixed with a murmuring wind, much like the sound 5 Of swarming bees, did cast him in a swoon: 6 No other noise, nor people's troublous cries, 7 As still are wont to annoy the walled town,

still > continually wont > accustomed

8 Might there be heard: but careless Quiet lies

careless > unconscious, free from cares

9 Wrapped in eternal silence, far from enemies.

101.42

   The messenger approching to him spake,
2 But his +wast+ wordes returnd to him in vaine:
     So sound he slept, that nought mought him awake.
4 Then rudely he him +thrust+, and pusht with paine,
     Whereat he gan to stretch: but he againe
6 Shooke him so hard, that forced him to speake.
     As one then in a dreame, whose dryer braine
8 Is tost with troubled sights and fancies weake,
   He mumbled soft, but would not all his silence breake.

2 wast > waste 1590, 1609 4 thrust > trust 1596

1 The messenger approaching to him spoke, 2 But his waste words returned to him in vain:

waste > futile

3 So sound he slept, that naught might him awake. 4 Then rudely he him thrust, and pushed with pain,

rudely > roughly

5 Whereat he began to stretch: but he again 6 Shook him so hard, that forced him to speak.

pain > pains, effort

7 As one then in a dream, whose drier brain

drier > {Too-dry: subject to uneasy dreams} that > [that it]

8 Is tossed with troubled sights and fancies weak, 9 He mumbled soft, but would not all his silence break.

all > altogether, entirely

101.43

   The Sprite then gan more boldly him to wake,
2 And threatned vnto him the dreaded name
     Of Hecate: whereat he gan to quake,
4 And lifting vp his lumpish head, with blame
     Halfe angry asked him, for what he came.
6 Hither (quoth he) me Archimago sent,
     He that the stubborne Sprites can wisely tame,
8 He bids thee to him send for his intent
   A fit false dreame, that can delude the sleepers sent.

1 The sprite then began more boldly him to wake, 2 And threatened to him the dreaded name 3 Of Hecate: whereat he began to quake,

Hecate > (Three-headed goddess of the underworld, companion of and attendant upon Proserpine, associated with witchcraft and dreams; sometimes identified with Proserpine herself. See Myth. 3.15, Macbeth II i 52, III v, IV i 39-43, King Lear I i 109) whereat > at which

4 And, lifting up his lumpish head, with blame

lumpish > heavy; sluggish blame > reproach

5 Half angry asked him for what he came. 6 "Hither" quoth he, "me Archimago sent,

Archimago > "Arch Mage", "Arch Magician"

7 He that the stubborn sprites can wisely tame,

can > can; did wisely > by magic arts

8 He bids you to him send for his intent

intent > purpose, intention

9 A fit false dream, that can delude the sleeper's assent."

assent > opinion, concurrence of the will; hence: will

101.44

   The God obayde, and calling forth straight way
2 A diuerse dreame out of his prison darke,
     Deliuered it to him, and downe did lay
4 His heauie head, deuoide of carefull carke,
     Whose sences all were straight benumbd and starke.
6 He backe returning by the Yuorie dore,
     Remounted vp as light as chearefull Larke,
8 And on his litle winges the dreame he bore
   In hast vnto his Lord, where he him left afore.

1 The god obeyed, and calling forth straightway 2 A diverse dream out of his prison dark,

diverse > diverting; also: distracting (SUS)

3 Delivered it to him, and down did lay 4 His heavy head, devoid of careful cark,

careful > {Full of cares} cark > anxiety, responsibility

5 Whose senses all were straight benumbed and stark.

stark > rigid, unfeeling

6 He, back returning by the ivory door,

ivory door > (The one through which false dreams pass)

7 Remounted up as light as cheerful lark, 8 And on his little wings the dream he bore 9 In haste to his lord, where he him left before.

101.45

   Who all this while with charmes and hidden artes,
2 Had made a Lady of that other Spright,
     And fram'd of liquid ayre her tender partes
4 So liuely, and so like in all mens sight,
     That weaker sence it could haue rauisht quight:
6 The maker selfe for all his wondrous witt,
     Was nigh beguiled with so goodly sight:
8 Her all in white he clad, and ouer it
   Cast a black stole, most like to seeme for Vna fit.

1 Who all this while, with charms and hidden arts,

charms > spells

2 Had made a lady of that other sprite, 3 And framed of liquid air her tender parts,

framed > designed; fashioned liquid > transparent; ethereal; bright

4 So lively, and so like in all men's sight,

lively > life-like like > convincing

5 That weaker sense it could have ravished quite:

weaker > [a weaker or: too-weak]

6 The maker himself, for all his wondrous wit, 7 Was nigh beguiled with so goodly sight:

goodly > beautiful [a]

8 Her all in white he clad, and over it 9 Cast a black stole, most like to seem for Una fit.

stole > robe Una > "One" (Latin; she is the sole Truth)

101.46

   Now when that ydle dreame was to him brought,
2 Vnto that Elfin knight he bad him fly,
     Where he slept soundly void of euill thought,
4 And with false shewes abuse his fantasy,
     In sort as he him schooled priuily:
6 And that new creature borne without her dew,
     Full of the makers guile, with +vsage+ sly
8 He taught to imitate that Lady trew,
   Whose semblance she did carrie vnder feigned hew.

7 vsage > visage 1609

1 Now when that idle dream was to him brought,

idle > empty, baseless

2 To that Elfin knight he bade him fly,

Elfin > {Of a race native to Faery Land (see 210.71 ff.)}

3 Where he slept soundly, void of evil thought, 4 And with false shows abuse his fantasy,

shows > appearances abuse his fantasy > deceive his imagination

5 In sort as he him schooled privily:

In sort as > [As, in the manner in which] privily > secretly

6 And that new creature, born without her due, 7 Full of the maker's guile, with usage sly

usage > practice, craft [of Archimago]; behaviour, demeanour [of the sprite]

8 He taught to imitate that lady true, 9 Whose semblance she did carry under feigned hue.

hue > appearance; colours

101.47

   Thus well instructed, to their worke they hast,
2 And comming where the knight in slomber lay,
     The one vpon his hardy head him plast,
4 And made him dreame of loues and lustfull play,
     That nigh his manly hart did melt away,
6 Bathed in wanton blis and wicked ioy:
     Then seemed him his Lady by him lay,
8 And to him playnd, how that false winged +boy,+
   Her chast hart had subdewd, to learne Dame +Pleasures+ toy.

boy, > boy 1609 Pleasures > pleasures 1596

1 Thus well instructed, to their work they hasten, 2 And, coming where the knight in slumber lay, 3 The one upon his hardy head himself placed,

The one > [The sprite who had visited Morpheus] hardy head > courageous head; or: hardihead: hardihood, boldness, courage

4 And made him dream of loves and lustful play, 5 That nigh his manly heart did melt away, 6 Bathed in wanton bliss and wicked joy: 7 Then seemed him his lady by him lay,

Then seemed him > [Then it seemed to him that]

8 And to him complained how that false winged boy

that false winged boy > [Cupid]

9 Her chaste heart had subdued, to learn Dame Pleasure's toy.

subdued > led aside, stolen away (Latin subduco, cognate with seduco and hence "seduce") learn > learn; teach [her] Dame Pleasure's toy > love-making, lust (Dame Pleasure = Venus; toy = amorous game)

101.48

   And she her selfe of beautie soueraigne Queene,
2 Faire Venus seemde vnto his bed to bring
     Her, whom he waking euermore did +weene,+
4 To be the chastest flowre, that ay did spring
     On earthly braunch, the daughter of a king,
6 Now a loose Leman to vile seruice bound:
     And eke the Graces seemed all to sing,
8 Hymen i{o~} Hymen, dauncing all around,
   Whilst freshest Flora her +with+ Yuie girlond crownd.

3 weene, > weene 1609 9 with > omitted from 1596 and 1609

1 And she herself, of beauty sovereign queen,

she > (Perhaps Una rather than Venus; Spenser's pointing is ambiguous)

2 Fair Venus, seemed to his bed to bring 3 Her, whom he, waking, evermore did ween

waking > [when awake] ween > suppose

4 To be the chastest flower that ay did spring

ay > ever

5 On earthly branch, the daughter of a king, 6 Now a loose leman to vile service bound:

leman > slut, loose woman service > love-making; professed love

7 And eke the Graces seemed all to sing,

eke > moreover
Graces > (Three daughters of Jupiter, often described as the
handmaids of Venus. They are especially associated with poetry.
See 203.25, 610.9, 610.21-4)

8 "Hymen i{o"} Hymen", dancing all around,

Hymen i{o"} Hymen > (From the Roman hymeneal or bridal song. Hymen = the god of marriage, or the song itself; i{o"} = an interjection, as "hurrah!")

9 Whilst freshest Flora her with ivy garland crowned.

Flora > ("The Goddesse of flowres, but indede (as saith Tacitus) a famous harlot, which, with the abuse of her body hauing gotten great riches, made the people of Rome her heyre": SC, gloss to "March") her > [the semblance of Una] ivy > (An emblem of licentiousness; see, for example, 104.22:3, 212.61)

101.49

   In this great passion of vnwonted lust,
2 Or wonted feare of doing ought amis,
     He +started+ vp, as seeming to +mistrust,+
4 Some secret ill, or hidden foe of his:
     Lo there before his face his Lady is,
6 Vnder +blacke+ stole hyding her bayted hooke,
     And as halfe blushing offred him to kis,
8 With gentle blandishment and louely looke,
   Most like that virgin true, which for her knight him took.

3 started > starteth 1590 3 mistrust, > mistrust 1609 6 blacke > blake 1596

1 In this great passion of unwonted lust,

unwonted > unaccustomed

2 Or wonted fear of doing aught amiss, 3 He started up, as seeming to mistrust

mistrust > suspect

4 Some secret ill, or hidden foe of his:

ill > malady; evil

5 Lo there before his face his lady is, 6 Under black stole hiding her baited hook,

stole > robe

7 And, as half blushing, offered him to kiss, 8 With gentle blandishment and lovely look,

blandishment > cajolery; flattery lovely > loving

9 Most like that virgin true which for her knight him took.

which for her knight him took > [who chose him as her knight]

101.50

   All cleane dismayd to see so vncouth sight,
2 And half enraged at her shamelesse guise,
     He thought +haue+ slaine her in his fierce despight:
4 But hasty heat tempring with sufferance wise,
     He stayde his hand, and gan himselfe aduise
6 To proue his sense, and tempt her faigned truth.
     Wringing her hands in +wemens+ pitteous wise,
8 Tho +can+ she weepe, to stirre vp gentle ruth,
   Both for her noble bloud, and for her tender youth.

3 haue > t'haue 1609 7 wemens > womens 1609 8 can > gan 1679

1 All clean dismayed to see so uncouth sight,

clean > entirely uncouth > unaccustomed, unseemly [a]

2 And half enraged at her shameless guise,

guise > behaviour; appearance

3 He thought have slain her in his fierce despite:

have > [to have] despite > indignation, rage

4 But hasty heat tempering with sufferance wise,

sufferance > tolerance

5 He stayed his hand, and gan himself advise

gan > did

6 To prove his sense, and tempt her feigned truth.

tempt > test

7 Wringing her hands in women's piteous wise,

wise > manner

8 Tho can she weep, to stir up gentle ruth,

Tho > Then can > did ruth > pity

9 Both for her noble blood, and for her tender youth.

101.51

   And said, Ah Sir, my liege Lord and my loue,
2 Shall I accuse the hidden cruell fate,
     And mightie causes wrought in heauen aboue,
4 Or the blind God, that doth me thus amate,
     For hoped loue to winne me certaine hate?
6 Yet thus perforce he bids me do, or die.
     Die is my dew: yet rew my wretched state
8 You, whom my hard auenging destinie
   Hath made iudge of my life or death indifferently.

1 And said, "Ah sir, my liege lord and my love,

liege lord > {If adj.: faithful lord; if sb.: liege-lord, lord to whom one owes feudal allegiance and service}

2 Shall I accuse the hidden cruel fate, 3 And mighty causes wrought in heaven above, 4 Or the blind god that does me thus amate,

the blind god > [Cupid, who shoots his arrows without caring whom they hit; he is often depicted wearing a blindfold. See e.g. 311.48:1] amate > cast down; act as a mate to (see 101.47:8-9)

5 For hoped love to win me certain hate?

For > [In place of]

6 Yet thus perforce he bids me do, or die.

do > copulate (euphem.)

7 Die is my due: yet rue my wretched state,

Die > [To die] rue > feel sorry for

8 You, whom my hard avenging destiny 9 Has made judge of my life or death indifferently.

101.52

   Your owne deare sake forst me at first to leaue
2 My Fathers kingdome, There she stopt with teares;
     Her swollen hart her speach seemd to bereaue,
4 And then againe begun, My weaker yeares
     Captiu'd to fortune and frayle worldly feares,
6 Fly to your faith for succour and sure ayde:
     Let me not dye in languor and long teares.
8 Why Dame (quoth he) what hath ye thus dismayd?
   What frayes ye, that were wont to comfort me affrayd?

1 "Your own dear sake forced me at first to leave 2 My father's kingdom …" there she stopped with tears; 3 Her swollen heart her speech seemed to bereave,

bereave > take away

4 And then again began: "My weaker years,

weaker > weaker; too-weak years > age; hence: youth

5 Captived to fortune and frail worldly fears,

Captived > Made captive

6 Fly to your faith for succour and sure aid: 7 Let me not die in languor and long tears."

languor > sorrow

8 "Why, dame," quoth he, "what has you thus dismayed? 9 What frays you, that were wont to comfort me afraid?"

frays > frightens; assails wont > accustomed (e.g. at 101.19:1-4) afraid > [when afraid; when I was afraid]

101.53

   Loue of your selfe, she said, and deare constraint
2 Lets me not sleepe, but wast the wearie night
     In secret anguish and vnpittied plaint,
4 Whiles you in carelesse sleepe are drowned quight.
     Her doubtfull words made that redoubted knight
6 Suspect her truth: yet +since no'vntruth+ he knew,
     Her fawning loue with foule disdainefull spight
8 He would not shend, but said, Deare dame I rew,
   That for my sake vnknowne such griefe vnto you grew.

6 since no'vntruth > sith n'vntruth 1609

1 "Love of yourself," she said, "and dear constraint

dear > sore, grievous; dear, affectionate constraint > affliction, distress

2 Let me not sleep, but waste the weary night 3 In secret anguish and unpitied plaint,

plaint > complaint, lamentation

4 While you in careless sleep are drowned quite."

careless > unconscious, free from cares

5 Her doubtful words made that redoubted knight

doubtful > questionable, ambiguous; fearful

6 Suspect her truth: yet since no untruth he knew,

truth > [fidelity; or: the truth of her explanation]

7 Her fawning love with foul disdainful spite 8 He would not shend; but said, "Dear dame, I rue,

shend > reproach, revile; destroy

9 That for my sake unknown such grief to you grew.

unknown > (Because the quality of his character is as yet unknown to her, has not been fully proven)

101.54

   Assure your selfe, it fell not all to ground;
2 For all so deare as life is to my hart,
     I deeme your loue, and hold me to you bound;
4 Ne let vaine feares procure your needlesse smart,
     Where cause is none, but to your rest depart.
6 Not all content, yet seemd she to appease
     Her mournefull plaintes, beguiled of her art,
8 And fed with words, that could not chuse but please,
   So slyding softly forth, she turnd as to her ease.

1 "Assure yourself, it fell not all to ground;
2 For all so dear as life is to my heart,
3 I deem your love, and hold me to you bound;
4 Nor let vain fears procure your needless smart,

procure > cause, bring about smart > pain, acute pain

5 Where cause is none, but to your rest depart." 6 Not all content, yet seemed she to appease

appease > desist from, check

7 Her mournful plaints, beguiled of her art,

plaints > complaints, lamentations beguiled of her art > [deprived of, disappointed in, her artful intention]

8 And fed with words that could not choose but please; 9 So, sliding softly forth, turned as to her ease.

turned as to her ease > [departed as though to her night's rest]

101.55

   Long after lay he musing at her mood,
2 Much grieu'd to thinke that gentle Dame so light,
     For whose defence he was to shed his blood.
4 At last dull wearinesse of former fight
     Hauing yrockt a sleepe his irkesome spright,
6 That troublous dreame gan freshly tosse his braine,
     With bowres, and beds, and Ladies deare delight:
8 But when he saw his labour all was vaine,
   With that misformed spright he backe returnd againe.

1 Long after lay he musing at her mood, 2 Much grieved to think that gentle dame so light,

gentle > high-born light > wanton, frivolous

3 For whose defence he was to shed his blood. 4 At last, dull weariness of former fight 5 Having rocked asleep his irksome spirit,

irksome > weary; disgusted; also: irksome

6 That troublous dream gan freshly toss his brain

gan > did; began to

7 With bowers, and beds, and ladies' dear delight:

bowers > bedrooms

8 But when he saw his labour all was vain,

he > [the sprite bearing the dream]

9 With that misformed sprite he back returned again.

misformed > {Mis-made; evilly or falsely made. The prefix "mis-" (from Greek misos, hatred, grudge), generally denotes "evilly", "with bad intention", etc.} back > [to Archimago]

CANTO II

2 The guilefull great Enchaunter parts
     The Redcrosse Knight from Truth:
4 Into whose stead faire falshood steps,
     And workes him wofull ruth.

1 The guileful great enchanter parts 2 The Redcross Knight from Truth:

Truth > [Una]

3 Into whose stead fair Falsehood steps,

stead > place Falsehood > (Duessa, introduced at 102.13, named at 102.34:8)

4 And works him woeful ruth.

ruth > trouble, harm

102.1

   BY this the Northerne wagoner had set
2 His seuenfold teme behind the stedfast starre,
     That was in Ocean waues yet neuer wet,
4 But firme is fixt, and sendeth light from farre
     To all, that in the wide deepe wandring arre:
6 And chearefull Chaunticlere with his note shrill
     Had warned once, that Ph{oe}bus fiery carre
8 In hast was climbing vp the Easterne hill,
   Full enuious that night so long his roome did fill.

1 By this the northern wagoner had set

this > [this time] northern wagoner > (The constellation of Bo{o"}tes (from the Greek word for "ploughman"), also called the Bear Driver, or Herdsman; it lies to the south and east of Ursa Major)

2 His sevenfold team behind the steadfast star

sevenfold team > (The seven stars of Ursa Major (the Great Bear, Plow, Wain, or, in Britain, the Wagon); they point to Polaris) steadfast star > (Polaris, the Pole Star)

3 That was in ocean waves yet never wet,

never wet > (Because, north of 41{degree-sign}N, Ursa Major never sets)

4 But firm is fixed, and sends light from far 5 To all that in the wide deep wandering are: 6 And cheerful Chanticleer, with his note shrill,

Chanticleer > ("Shrill-singer". The name of the cock in Reynard the Fox (see Martin, 1882-7) and Chaucer's The Nun's Priest's Tale; see also As You Like It II vii 30)

7 Had warned once that Phoebus' fiery car

once > once and for all, finally Phoebus > (Who each day drives his chariot across the sky) car > wheeled vehicle; hence: chariot

8 In haste was climbing up the eastern hill, 9 Full envious that Night so long his room did fill.

Full > Very, exceedingly room > place, space

102.2

   When those accursed messengers of hell,
2 That feigning dreame, and that faire-forged Spright
     Came to their wicked maister, and gan tell
4 Their bootelesse paines, and ill succeeding night:
     Who all in rage to see his skilfull might
6 Deluded so, gan threaten hellish paine
     And sad Proserpines wrath, them to affright.
8 But when he saw his threatning was but vaine,
   He cast about, and searcht his balefull bookes againe.

1 When those accursed messengers of hell

When > Then; at that time

2 (That feigning dream, and that fair-forged sprite) 3 Came to their wicked master, and gan tell

gan > did tell > tell of, describe

4 Their bootless pains, and ill-succeeding night:

bootless > futile

5 Who, all in rage to see his skilful might 6 Deluded so, gan threaten hellish pain

Deluded > Frustrated gan > did

7 And sad Proserpine's wrath, them to affright.

sad > dismal, dark; sad Proserpine > (Daughter of Ceres and Jupiter. Carried off by Pluto to be his consort in the underworld; the queen of hell) affright > frighten

8 But when he saw his threatening was but vain, 9 He cast about, and searched his baleful books again.

102.3

   Eftsoones he tooke that miscreated faire,
2 And that false other Spright, on whom he spred
     A seeming body of the subtile aire,
4 Like a young Squire, in loues and +lusty-hed+
     His wanton dayes that euer loosely led,
6 Without regard of armes and dreaded fight:
     Those two he tooke, and in a secret bed,
8 Couered with darknesse and misdeeming night,
   Them both together laid, to ioy in vaine delight.

4 lusty-hed > lusty-hed. 1596

1 Eftsoons he took that miscreated fair,

Eftsoons > Soon afterwards that miscreated fair > [the sprite resembling Una; miscreated = evilly or falsely created]

2 And that false other sprite, on whom he spread 3 A seeming body of the subtile air,

subtile > rarefied, thin; subtle

4 Like a young squire, in loves and lustihead

lustihead > libidinousness, pleasure; lustfulness

5 His wanton days that ever loosely led,

that > (Relative to "Squire" in line 4, i.e. "Like a young squire, that in loves and lustihood His wanton days ever loosely led)

6 Without regard of arms and dreaded fight:

arms > deeds of arms

7 Those two he took, and in a secret bed, 8 Covered with darkness and misdeeming night,

misdeeming > {Misleading; to "misdeem" is also to misjudge unfavourably, to deem evil}

9 Them both together laid, to joy in vain delight.

vain > weak, foolish; or, since their bodies are made of air: unavailing, insubstantial

102.4

   Forthwith he runnes with feigned faithfull hast
2 Vnto his guest, who after troublous sights
     And dreames, gan now to take more sound repast,
4 Whom suddenly he wakes with fearefull frights,
     As one aghast with feends or damned sprights,
6 And to him cals, Rise rise vnhappy Swaine,
     That here wex old in sleepe, whiles wicked wights
8 Haue knit themselues in Venus shamefull chaine;
   Come see, where your false Lady doth her honour staine.

1 Forthwith he runs with feigned faithful haste 2 To his guest, who, after troublous sights 3 And dreams, began now to take more sound repast;

repast > refreshment; repose

4 Whom suddenly he wakes with fearful frights, 5 As one aghast with fiends or damned sprites,

aghast > terrified (especially with superstitious fear)

6 And to him calls, "Rise, rise, unhappy swain,

swain > young man

7 That here wax old in sleep, while wicked wights

wax > grow wights > people

8 Have knit themselves in Venus' shameful chain; 9 Come, see where your false lady does her honour stain!"

102.5

   All in amaze he suddenly vp start
2 With sword in hand, and with the old man went;
     Who soone him brought into a secret part,
4 Where that false couple were full closely ment
     In wanton lust and lewd embracement:
6 Which when he saw, he burnt with gealous fire,
     The eye of reason was with rage yblent,
8 And would haue slaine them in his furious ire,
   But hardly was restreined of that aged sire.

1 All in amaze he suddenly upstart

amaze > confusion; amazement upstart > started up

2 With sword in hand, and with the old man went; 3 Who soon him brought into a secret part, 4 Where that false couple were full closely ment

full > very, exceedingly ment > joined; united sexually (pa. ppl. of "meng")

5 In wanton lust and lewd embracement:

embracement > embrace, embraces; willing acceptance, hence: eagerness

6 Which when he saw, he burnt with jealous fire 7 (The eye of reason was with rage blended),

blended > dazzled, temporarily blinded, blinded; also: stirred up, hence: rendered turbid, defiled

8 And would have slain them in his furious ire, 9 But hardly was restrained of that aged sire.

hardly > forcibly; with difficulty; barely of > by sire > father, elderly man

102.6

   Returning to his bed in torment great,
2 And bitter anguish of his guiltie sight,
     He could not rest, but did his stout heart eat,
4 And wast his inward gall with deepe despight,
     Yrkesome of life, and too long lingring night.
6 At last faire Hesperus in highest skie
     Had spent his lampe, and brought forth dawning light,
8 Then vp he rose, and clad him hastily;
   The Dwarfe him brought his steed: so both away do fly.

1 Returning to his bed in torment great, 2 And bitter anguish of his guilty sight,

sight > vision

3 He could not rest, but did his stout heart eat,

stout > brave

4 And waste his inward gall with deep despite,

gall > rancour (said to have its seat in the gall) despite > anger, malice

5 Irksome of life and too-long lingering night.

Irksome of > Weary of, disgusted with

6 At last fair Hesperus in highest sky

Hesperus > (Name for the planet Venus when it appears as the evening star; Venus is also the morning star)

7 Had spent his lamp, and brought forth dawning light, 8 Then up he rose, and clad himself hastily; 9 The dwarf him brought his steed: so both away do fly.

102.7

   Now when the rosy-fingred Morning faire,
2 Weary of aged Tithones saffron bed,
     Had spred her purple robe through deawy aire,
4 And the high hils Titan discouered,
     The royall virgin shooke off drowsy-hed,
6 And rising forth out of her baser bowre,
     Lookt for her knight, who far away was fled,
8 And for her Dwarfe, that wont to wait each houre;
   Then gan she waile and weepe, to see that woefull stowre.

1 Now when the rosy-fingered Morning fair,

Morning > (Aurora, goddess of the dawn)

2 Weary of aged Tithonus' saffron bed,

Tithonus > (Son of the king of Troy and husband of Aurora. Through Aurora's prayers the gods bestowed immortality on Tithonus, but she forgot to pray for his perpetual youth, so that he was doomed to eternal old age. Eventually she shut him up in his chamber and turned him into a cicada)

3 Had spread her purple robe through dewy air, 4 And the high hills Titan discovered,

Titan > (The sun) discovered > [had] revealed

5 The royal virgin shook off drowsihood;

drowsihood > drowsiness

6 And, rising forth out of her baser bower,

baser > too-base, lowly; or: lowlier [than Aurora's] bower > room, chamber

7 Looked for her knight, who far away was fled, 8 And for her dwarf, that wont to wait each hour;

wont > was accustomed wait > keep watch; attend; attend [upon her]

9 Then gan she wail and weep, to see that woeful stour.

gan > did stour > distress, unhappy condition

102.8

   And after him she rode with so much speede
2 As her slow beast could make; but all in vaine:
     For him so far had borne his light-foot steede,
4 Pricked with wrath and fiery fierce disdaine,
     That him to follow was but fruitlesse paine;
6 Yet she her weary limbes would neuer rest,
     But euery hill and dale, each wood and plaine
8 Did search, sore grieued in her gentle brest,
   He so vngently left her, whom she +loued+ best.

9 loued > louest 1596

1 And after him she rode, with so much speed

so > as

2 As her slow beast could make; but all in vain: 3 For him so far had borne his lightfoot steed,

lightfoot > light-footed

4 Pricked with wrath and fiery fierce disdain,

Pricked > Spurred (the knight and the horse; in FQ the steed frequently symbolizes its rider's mood or nature: see, for example, 102.13:7) disdain > anger; malice, resentment

5 That him to follow was but fruitless pain;

pain > labour, effort

6 Yet she her weary limbs would never rest, 7 But every hill and dale, each wood and plain, 8 Did search, sore grieved in her gentle breast,

gentle > noble; gentle

9 He so ungently left her, whom she loved best.

He > [That he had] ungently > ignobly; rudely

102.9

   But subtill Archimago, when his guests
2 He saw diuided into double parts,
     And Vna wandring in woods and forrests,
4 Th'end of his drift, he praisd his diuelish arts,
     That had such might ouer true meaning harts;
6 Yet rests not so, but other meanes doth make,
     How he may worke vnto her further smarts:
8 For her he hated as the hissing snake,
   And in her many troubles did most pleasure take.

1 But subtle Archimago, when his guests

subtle > sly, crafty

2 He saw divided into double parts, 3 And Una wandering in woods and forests 4 (The end of his drift), he praised his devilish arts,

end > purpose; also: result drift > plot, scheme

5 That had such might over true-meaning hearts; 6 Yet rests not so, but other means does make, 7 How he may work to her further smarts:

smarts > pains

8 For her he hated as the hissing snake, 9 And in her many troubles did most pleasure take.

102.10

   He then deuisde himselfe how to disguise;
2 For by his mightie science he could take
     As many formes and shapes in seeming wise,
4 As euer Proteus to himselfe could make:
     Sometime a fowle, sometime a fish in lake,
6 Now like a foxe, now like a dragon fell,
     That of himselfe he oft for feare would quake,
8 And oft would flie away. O who can tell
   The hidden power of herbes, and might of Magicke spell?

1 He then devised himself how to disguise; 2 For by his mighty science he could take

science > knowledge, lore

3 As many forms and shapes in seeming wise

seeming wise > [manner of outward appearance]

4 As ever Proteus to himself could make:

Proteus > (The Old Man of the Sea, a god who could assume any shape or form when trying to evade questioners)

5 Sometime a fowl, sometime a fish in lake,

Sometime > Sometimes

6 Now like a fox, now like a dragon fell,

fell > fierce, terrible

7 That of himself he oft for fear would quake,

That > [So that]

8 And oft would fly away. O who can tell 9 The hidden power of herbs, and might of magic spell?

102.11

   But now seemde best, the person to put on
2 Of that good knight, his late beguiled guest:
     In mighty armes he was yclad +anon,+
4 And siluer +shield:+ vpon his coward brest
     A bloudy crosse, and on his crauen crest
6 A bounch of haires discolourd diuersly:
     Full iolly knight he seemde, and well addrest,
8 And when he sate vpon his courser free,
   Saint George himselfe ye would haue deemed him to be.

3 anon, > anon: 1590, 1596 4 shield: > shield, 1590, 1596

1 But now seemed best the person to put on

seemed > [it seemed] person to put on > [appearance to assume]

2 Of that good knight, his late beguiled guest:

late > recently

3 In mighty arms he was clad anon,

anon > straightway

4 And silver shield: upon his coward breast 5 A bloody cross, and on his craven crest

bloody > blood-red

6 A bunch of hairs discoloured diversely:

hairs > plumes; perhaps horsehair plumes discoloured > varicoloured

7 Full jolly knight he seemed, and well addressed;

Full > Very jolly > gallant; handsome; fine addressed > armed, arrayed

8 And, when he sat upon his courser free,

free > willing

9 Saint George himself you would have deemed him to be.

102.12

   But he the knight, whose semblaunt he did beare,
2 The true Saint George was wandred far away,
     Still flying from his thoughts and gealous feare;
4 Will was his guide, and griefe led him astray.
     At last him chaunst to meete vpon the way
6 A faithlesse Sarazin all arm'd to point,
     In whose great shield was writ with letters gay
8 Sans foy: full large of limbe and euery ioint
   He was, and cared not for God or man a point.

1 But he, the knight, whose semblant he did bear,

semblant > outward aspect

2 The true Saint George, was wandered far away, 3 Still flying from his thoughts and jealous fear; 4 Will was his guide, and grief led him astray.

grief > rage, pain; grief

5 At last him chanced to meet upon the way 6 A faithless Saracen, all armed to point,

Saracen > {Arab or Moslem of the time of the Crusades; pagan} to point > to the smallest detail, completely

7 In whose great shield was writ with letters gay

In > [On] writ > painted

8 Sansfoy: full large of limb and every joint

Sansfoy > "Without Faith" (French, sans foi) full > very, exceedingly

9 He was, and cared not for God or man a point.

point > jot, whit

102.13

   He had a faire companion of his way,
2 A goodly Lady clad in scarlot red,
     Purfled with gold and pearle of rich assay,
4 And like a Persian mitre on her hed
     She wore, with crownes and owches garnished,
6 The which her lauish louers to her gaue;
     Her wanton palfrey all was ouerspred
8 With tinsell trappings, wouen like a waue,
   Whose bridle rung with golden bels and bosses braue.

1 He had a fair companion of his way,

companion of his way > travelling companion

2 A goodly lady clad in scarlet red

goodly > beautiful scarlet > {A rich kind of cloth, usually red or orange in colour; see Rev. 17.4; and Isa. 1.18}

3 Purfled with gold and pearl of rich assay,

Purfled > {Embroidered along the edge; trimmed with metallic lace, pearls, etc.} assay > quality; proven worth

4 And like a Persian mitre on her head

mitre > head-dress; sacerdotal head-dress (often associated with episcopal office or dignity)

5 She wore, with crowns and ouches garnished,

ouches > {Jewels; golden sockets to hold these}

6 Which her lavish lovers to her gave;

lavish > lavish; licentious

7 Her wanton palfrey all was overspread

wanton > playful, unruly; wanton palfrey > {Saddle-horse for ladies}

8 With tinsel trappings, woven like a wave,

tinsel > {Glittering, sparkling with interwoven golden or silver thread}

9 Whose bridle rang with golden bells and bosses brave.

bosses > studs brave > splendid, fine; showy

102.14

   With faire disport and courting dalliaunce
2 She intertainde her louer all the way:
     But when she saw the knight his speare aduaunce,
4 She soone left off her mirth and wanton play,
     And bad her knight addresse him to the fray:
6 His foe was nigh at hand. He prickt with pride
     And hope to winne his Ladies heart that day,
8 Forth spurred fast: adowne his coursers side
   The red bloud trickling staind the way, as he did ride.

1 With fair disport and courting dalliance

disport > merriment, entertainment, wanton entertainment; diversion (including the sense of "diverting from the true path") courting > amorous dalliance > {Idle and amusing talk}

2 She entertained her lover all the way: 3 But when she saw the knight his spear advance,

advance > raise; advance

4 She soon left off her mirth and wanton play,
5 And bade her knight address himself to the fray:
6 His foe was nigh at hand. He, pricked with pride
7 And hope to win his lady's heart that day,
8 Forth spurred fast: down his courser's side
9 The red blood trickling stained the way as he did ride.

102.15

   The knight of the Redcrosse when him he spide,
2 Spurring so hote with rage +dispiteous+,
     Gan fairely couch his speare, and towards ride:
4 Soone meete they both, both fell and furious,
     That daunted with their forces hideous,
6 Their steeds do stagger, and amazed stand,
     And eke themselues too rudely rigorous,
8 Astonied with the stroke of their owne hand,
   Do backe rebut, and each to other yeeldeth land.

2 dispiteous > dispighteous 1609

1 The Knight of the Redcross, when him he spied, 2 Spurring so hot with rage dispiteous,

dispiteous > pitiless

3 Gan fairly couch his spear, and towards ride:

Gan > Did fairly > well, expertly couch > {Place it in its rest and hold it ready for attack} towards > in his [Sansfoy's] direction

4 Soon meet they both, both fell and furious,

fell > fierce, terrible

5 That, daunted with their forces hideous,

That > [So that] hideous > terrific; immense

6 Their steeds do stagger, and amazed stand, 7 And eke themselves, too rudely rigorous,

eke > moreover rudely > roughly rigorous > violent

8 Astonied with the stroke of their own hand,

Astonied > Stunned; amazed; dismayed

9 Do back rebut, and each to other yields land.

rebut > recoil

102.16

   As when two rams stird with ambitious pride,
2 Fight for the rule of the rich fleeced flocke,
     Their horned fronts so fierce on either side
4 Do meete, that with the terrour of the shocke
     Astonied both, stand sencelesse as a blocke,
6 Forgetfull of the hanging victory:
     So stood these twaine, vnmoued as a rocke,
8 Both staring fierce, and holding +idlely+
   The broken reliques of their former cruelty.

8 idlely > idely, 1590, 1596

1 As when two rams, stirred with ambitious pride, 2 Fight for the rule of the rich fleeced flock, 3 Their horned fronts so fierce on either side

fronts > foreheads

4 Do meet, that, with the terror of the shock, 5 Astonied, both stand senseless as a block,

Astonied > Stunned

6 Forgetful of the hanging victory:

hanging > pending, undecided

7 So stood these twain, unmoved as a rock, 8 Both staring fierce, and holding idly 9 The broken relics of their former cruelty.

relics > [their spears]

102.17

   The Sarazin sore daunted with the buffe
2 Snatcheth his sword, and fiercely to him flies;
     Who well it wards, and quyteth cuff with cuff:
4 Each others equall puissaunce enuies,
     And through their iron sides with +cruell spies+
6 Does seeke to perce: repining courage yields
     No foote to foe. The flashing fier flies
8 As from a forge out of their burning shields,
   And streames of purple bloud new +dies+ the verdant fields.

5 cruell spies > cruelties 1590 etc.: FE 9 dies > die 1609

1 The Saracen, sore daunted with the buff,

buff > buffet, blow

2 Snatches his sword, and fiercely to him flies; 3 Who well it wards, and requites cuff with cuff: 4 Each other's equal puissance envies,

other's > [the other's] puissance > power, strength envies > vies with, seeks to rival; begrudges

5 And through their iron sides with cruel spies

cruel > fierce spies > looks, glances

6 Does seek to pierce: repining courage yields

repining > fretting; discontented

7 No foot to foe. The flashing fire flies, 8 As from a forge, out of their burning shields, 9 And streams of purple blood new dye the verdant fields.

purple > red

102.18

   Curse on that Crosse (quoth then the Sarazin)
2 That keepes thy body from the bitter fit;
     Dead long ygoe I wote thou haddest bin,
4 Had not that charme from thee forwarned it:
     But yet I warne thee now assured sitt,
6 And hide thy head. Therewith vpon his crest
     With rigour so outrageous he smitt,
8 That a large share it hewd out of the rest,
   And glauncing downe his shield, from blame him fairely blest.

1 "Curse on that cross," quoth then the Saracen, 2 "That keeps your body from the bitter fit;

the bitter fit > [death]

3 Dead long ago, I wot, you had been,

wot > know

4 Had not that charm from you forwarned it:

charm > talisman (an insult, since the use of magic is forbidden by the code of chivalry) forwarned > prohibited; hence: spared

5 But yet I warn you, now assured sit

assured > (Derisively) in safety [in the protection of your cross]

6 And hide your head." Therewith upon his crest

Therewith > With that

7 With rigour so outrageous he smote,

rigour > violence outrageous > excessively fierce

8 That a large share it hewed out of the rest,

share > portion; piece sheared away

9 And, glancing down his shield, from blame him fairly blessed.

blame > injury fairly > actually, really [from blame it really did him bless]; completely blessed > spared, preserved

102.19

   Who thereat wondrous wroth, the sleeping spark
2 Of natiue vertue gan eftsoones reuiue,
     And at his haughtie helmet making mark,
4 So hugely +stroke+, that it the steele did riue,
     And cleft his head. He tumbling downe aliue,
6 With bloudy mouth his mother earth did kis,
     Greeting his graue: his grudging ghost did striue
8 With the fraile flesh; at last it flitted is,
   Whither the soules do fly of men, that liue amis.

4 stroke > strooke 1609

1 Who, thereat wondrous wroth, the sleeping spark 2 Of native virtue gan eftsoons revive,

native > innate virtue > strength, worth; valour gan > did eftsoons > thereupon

3 And at his haughty helmet making mark,

haughty > proud; lofty

4 So hugely struck that it the steel did rive, 5 And cleft his head. He, tumbling down alive,

cleft > split

6 With bloody mouth his mother earth did kiss, 7 Greeting his grave: his grudging ghost did strive

grudging > complaining ghost > spirit

8 With the frail flesh; at last it flitted is, 9 Whither the souls do fly of men that live amiss.

102.20

   The Lady when she saw her champion fall,
2 Like the old ruines of a broken towre,
     Staid not to waile his woefull funerall,
4 But from him fled away with all her powre;
     Who after her as hastily gan scowre,
6 Bidding the Dwarfe with him to bring away
     The Sarazins shield, signe of the conqueroure.
8 Her soone he ouertooke, and bad to stay,
   For present cause was none of dread her to dismay.

1 The lady, when she saw her champion fall 2 Like the old ruins of a broken tower, 3 Stayed not to wail his woeful funeral,

wail > mourn funeral > death

4 But from him fled away with all her power,

him > [the Redcross Knight]

5 Who after her as hastily gan scour,

gan > did scour > run

6 Bidding the dwarf with him to bring away 7 The Saracen's shield, sign of the conqueror.

sign > emblem

8 Her soon he overtook, and bade to stay, 9 For present cause was none of dread to her dismay.

none of dread > [nothing dreadful] to her dismay > [to dismay her; to "dismay" also = to "defeat", "ruin"]

102.21

   She turning backe with ruefull countenaunce,
2 Cride, Mercy mercy Sir vouchsafe to show
     On silly Dame, subiect to hard mischaunce,
4 And to your mighty will. Her humblesse low
     In so ritch weedes and seeming glorious show,
6 Did much emmoue his stout hero{i"}cke heart,
     And said, Deare dame, your suddein ouerthrow
8 Much rueth me; but now put feare apart,
   And tell, both who ye be, and who that tooke your part.

1 She, turning back with rueful countenance, 2 Cried, "Mercy, mercy, sir, vouchsafe to show 3 On silly dame, subject to hard mischance,

silly > innocent, defenceless

4 And to your mighty will." Her humblesse low,

humblesse > humbleness, humility

5 In so rich weeds and seeming glorious show,

so > such weeds > attire show > appearance

6 Did much move his stout heroic heart, 7 And said, "Dear dame, your sudden overthrow

said > [he said]

8 Much rues me; but now put fear apart,

rues > affects [with pity or compassion] apart > aside

9 And tell both who you be, and who that took your part."

102.22

   Melting in teares, then gan she thus lament;
2 The wretched woman, whom vnhappy howre
     Hath now made thrall to your commandement,
4 Before that angry heauens list to lowre,
     And fortune false betraide me to +your+ powre,
6 Was, (O what now auaileth that I +was!+)
     Borne the sole daughter of an Emperour,
8 He that the wide West vnder his rule has,
   And high hath set his throne, where Tiberis doth pas.

5 your > thy 1590; cf. 101.31:6 6 was! > was? 1590

1 Melting in tears, then gan she thus lament:

gan > did

2 "The wretched woman, whom unhappy hour 3 Has now made thrall to your commandment,

thrall > slave commandment > authority, control

4 Before angry heavens list to lour,

list > chose, pleased

5 And fortune false betrayed me to your power, 6 Was (O what now avails that I was?)

that > [that which, what]

7 Born the sole daughter of an emperor, 8 He that the wide west under his rule has, 9 And high has set his throne where the Tiber does pass.

the Tiber > (The River Tiber: an overt reference to Rome)

102.23

   He in the first flowre of my freshest age,
2 Betrothed me vnto the onley haire
     Of a most mighty king, most rich and sage;
4 Was neuer Prince so faithfull and so faire,
     Was neuer Prince so meeke and debonaire;
6 But ere my hoped day of spousall shone,
     My dearest Lord fell from high honours staire,
8 Into the hands of his accursed fone,
   And cruelly was slaine, that shall I euer mone.

1 "He, in the first flower of my freshest age,
2 Betrothed me to the only heir
3 Of a most mighty king, most rich and sage;
4 Was never prince so faithful and so fair,
5 Was never prince so meek and debonair;

meek > gentle; courteous, kind; merciful, indulgent debonair > affable, gracious

6 But ere my hoped day of spousal shone,

day of spousal > wedding day

7 My dearest lord fell from high honour's stair

My dearest lord > [Christ] stair > {A step or degree in the scale of rank; cf. 207.46:9}

8 Into the hands of his accursed foes, 9 And cruelly was slain; that shall I ever moan.

moan > bewail

102.24

   His blessed body spoild of liuely breath,
2 Was afterward, I know not how, conuaid
     And fro me hid: of whose most innocent death
4 When tidings came to me vnhappy maid,
     O how great sorrow my sad soule assaid.
6 Then forth I went his woefull corse to find,
     And many yeares throughout the world I straid,
8 A virgin widow, whose deepe wounded mind
   With loue, long time did languish as the striken hind.

1 "His blessed body, spoiled of lively breath,

spoiled of lively > robbed of living

2 Was afterward, I know not how, conveyed

conveyed > removed, removed in an underhand manner

3 And from me hidden: of whose most innocent death

innocent > undeserved; guiltless

4 When tidings came to me, unhappy maid,

unhappy > unfortunate; unhappy

5 Oh! how great sorrow my sad soul assayed.

how great > how greatly; or: such a great assayed > tested, made trial of; assailed

6 Then forth I went, his woeful corse to find,

corse > body

7 And many years throughout the world I strayed, 8 A virgin widow, whose deep wounded mind

deep > deeply; deep

9 With love long time did languish, as the stricken hind.

the stricken hind > (A simile applied (Aen. 4.68-9) to Dido, who literally burned for the love of Aeneas)

102.25

   At last it chaunced this proud +Sarazin,+
2 To meete me wandring, who perforce me led
     With him away, but yet could neuer win
4 The Fort, that Ladies hold in soueraigne dread.
     There lies he now with foule dishonour dead,
6 Who whiles he liu'de, was called proud Sans foy,
     The eldest of three brethren, all three bred
8 Of one bad sire, whose youngest is Sans ioy,
   And twixt them both was borne the bloudy bold Sans loy.

1 Sarazin, > Sarazin 1609

1 "At last it chanced this proud Saracen 2 To meet me wandering, who perforce me led

perforce > forcibly

3 With him away, but yet could never win 4 The fort that ladies hold in sovereign dread. 5 There lies he now with foul dishonour dead, 6 Who, while he lived, was called proud Sansfoy, 7 The eldest of three brethren, all three bred 8 Of one bad sire, whose youngest is Sansjoy,

sire > father Sansjoy > "Without Joy"

9 And 'twixt them both was born the bloody bold Sansloy.

Sansloy > "Without Law"

102.26

   In this sad plight, friendlesse, vnfortunate,
2 Now miserable I Fidessa dwell,
     Crauing of you in pitty of my state,
4 To do none ill, if please ye not do well.
     He in great passion all this while did dwell,
6 More busying his quicke eyes, her face to view,
     Then his dull eares, to heare what she did tell;
8 And said, +faire+ Lady hart of flint would rew
   The vndeserued woes and sorrowes, which ye shew.

8 faire > Faire 1609

1 "In this sad plight, friendless, unfortunate, 2 Now miserable I, Fidessa, dwell,

Fidessa > "Faithful" (Latin, fidelis esse, to be faithful)

3 Craving of you, in pity of my state, 4 To do no ill, if please you not do well."

ill > evil if please > [if it pleases] do > [to do]

5 He in great passion all this while did dwell,

dwell > remain

6 More busying his quick eyes her face to view, 7 Than his dull ears to hear what she did tell; 8 And said, "Fair lady, heart of flint would rue 9 The undeserved woes and sorrows which you show.

show > give an account of

102.27

   Henceforth in safe assuraunce may ye rest,
2 Hauing both found a new friend you to aid,
     And lost an old foe, that did you molest:
4 Better new friend then an old foe is said.
     With chaunge of cheare the seeming simple maid
6 Let fall her eyen, as shamefast to the earth,
     And yeelding soft, in that she nought gain-said,
8 So forth they rode, he feining seemely merth,
   And she coy lookes: +so dainty+ they say maketh derth.

9 so dainty > so, Dainty 1609

1 "Henceforth in safe assurance may you rest,

assurance > security; also: engagement to be married

2 Having both found a new friend you to aid,

friend > friend; lover

3 And lost an old foe that did you molest: 4 Better new friend than an old foe, is said."

is > [it is]

5 With change of cheer the seeming simple maid

cheer > expression; mood

6 Let fall her eyes, as shamefast, to the earth,

as shamefast > [as if bashful]

7 And yielding soft, in that she naught gainsaid. 8 So forth they rode, he feigning seemly mirth, 9 And she coy looks: so, dainty, they say, makes dearth.

dainty, they say, makes dearth > (Dearth makes something dainty. Applied to food, dearth = scarceness; dainty = choice, delicious. And, generally: dearth = dearness, rarity; dainty = delightful. In either event this is a restatement of the Latin proverb, quae rara, cara: what is scarce is esteemed or becomes estimable. In other words, her very coyness serves to increase his desire)

102.28

   Long time they thus together traueiled,
2 Till weary of their way, they came at last,
     Where grew two goodly trees, that faire did spred
4 Their armes abroad, with gray mosse ouercast,
     And their greene leaues trembling with euery blast,
6 Made a calme shadow far in compasse round:
     The fearefull Shepheard often there aghast
8 Vnder them neuer sat, ne wont there sound
   His mery oaten pipe, but shund th'vnlucky ground.

1 Long time they thus together travelled, 2 Till, weary of their way, they came at last 3 Where grew two goodly trees, that fair did spread

goodly > beautiful

4 Their arms abroad, with grey moss overcast,

abroad > widely, over a broad area overcast > covered, overlaid

5 And their green leaves, trembling with every blast,

blast > gust

6 Made a calm shadow far in compass round: 7 The fearful shepherd, often there aghast,

aghast > frightened (especially with superstitious fear)

8 Under them never sat, nor wont there sound

wont > was accustomed to; would

9 His merry oaten pipe, but shunned the unlucky ground.

merry > delightful, charming oaten > (Shepherds' pipes were supposedly made of oat stalks)

102.29

   But this good knight soone as he them can spie,
2 For the coole +shade him thither+ hastly got:
     For golden Ph{oe}bus now +ymounted+ hie,
4 From fiery wheeles of his faire chariot
     Hurled his beame so scorching cruell hot,
6 That liuing creature mote it not abide;
     And his new Lady it endured not.
8 There they alight, in hope themselues to hide
   From the fierce heat, and rest their weary limbs a tide.

2 shade him thither > shade thither 1596; shadow thither 1609 3 ymounted > that mounted 1590 etc.: FE

1 But this good knight, soon as he them can spy,

soon > [as soon] can > did

2 For the cool shade him thither hastily got: 3 For golden Phoebus, now mounted high, 4 From fiery wheels of his fair chariot

From > [From the]

5 Hurled his beam so scorching cruel hot,
6 That living creature might it not abide;
7 And his new lady it endured not.
8 There they alight, in hope themselves to hide
9 From the fierce heat, and rest their weary limbs a tide.

tide > while

102.30

   Faire seemly pleasaunce each to other makes,
2 With goodly purposes there as they sit:
     And in his falsed fancy he her takes
4 To be the fairest wight, that liued yit;
     Which to expresse, he bends his gentle wit,
6 And thinking of those braunches greene to frame
     A girlond for her dainty forehead fit,
8 He pluckt a bough; out of whose rift there came
   Small drops of gory bloud, that trickled downe the same.

1 Fair seemly pleasance each to other makes,

pleasance > courtesy, pleasing behaviour

2 With goodly purposes, there as they sit:

goodly > (Ironic) fine, elevated; courteous purposes > intentions

3 And in his falsed fancy he her takes

falsed > corrupted; failing

4 To be the fairest wight that lived yet;

wight > person, woman

5 Which to express, he bends his gentle wit,

bends > turns, applies; perverts from its usual trend; also, from Old English: puts in bonds; hence: constrains, confines

6 And, thinking of those branches green to frame 7 A garland for her dainty forehead fit,

dainty > {Delightful; of delicate beauty}

8 He plucked a bough; out of whose rift there came

rift > fissure

9 Small drops of gory blood, that trickled down the same.

102.31

   Therewith a piteous yelling voyce was heard,
2 Crying, O spare with guilty hands to teare
     My tender sides in this rough rynd embard,
4 But fly, ah fly far hence away, for feare
     Least to you hap, that happened to me heare,
6 And to this wretched Lady, my deare loue,
     O too deare loue, loue bought with death too deare.
8 Astond he stood, and vp his haire did houe,
   And with that suddein horror could no member moue.

1 Therewith a piteous yelling voice was heard,

Therewith > With that; thereupon

2 Crying, "O spare with guilty hands to tear

guilty > criminal; conscious, cognizant

3 My tender sides, in this rough rind embarred:

embarred > imprisoned

4 But fly, ah! fly far hence away, for fear

fly > flee

5 Lest to you hap that happened to me here,

that > [that which]

6 And to this wretched lady, my dear love; 7 O too dear love, love bought with death too dear!"

dear > grievous, hard

8 Astound he stood, and up his hair did hove,

Astound > Stunned, confounded hove > rise

9 And with that sudden horror could no member move.

102.32

   At last whenas the dreadfull passion
2 Was ouerpast, and manhood well awake,
     Yet musing at the straunge occasion,
4 And doubting much his sence, he thus bespake;
     What voyce of damned Ghost from Limbo lake,
6 Or guilefull spright wandring in empty aire,
     Both which fraile men do oftentimes mistake,
8 Sends to my doubtfull eares these speaches rare,
   And ruefull plaints, me bidding +guiltlesse+ bloud to spare?

9 guiltlesse > guitlesse 1596

1 At last when the dreadful passion

dreadful > [full of dread, full of fear]

2 Was overpassed, and manhood well awake,

overpassed > past

3 Yet musing at the strange occasion,

musing > wondering, marvelling occasion > {Event, turn of events; also: opportunity (Latin occasio), because this is a chance for him to learn the true nature of his companion}

4 And doubting much his sense, he thus bespoke:

bespoke > spoke

5 "What voice of damned ghost from Limbo-lake,

Limbo-lake > (The pit of hell; Limbo is the region at the edge of hell where the unbaptized are confined; "lake" comes to us via Latin from the Greek lakkos, = pit, hollow, hole (filled with water or not))

6 Or guileful sprite wandering in empty air 7 (Both which frail men do oftentimes mistake),

which > [of which] oftentimes > frequently, often mistake > imagine erroneously; or: mislead (so glossed by some editors, though this sense is not mentioned in OED)

8 Sends to my doubtful ears these speeches rare,

doubtful > fearful, apprehensive; doubting rare > unusual, strange

9 And rueful plaints, me bidding guiltless blood to spare?"

plaints > lamentations

102.33

   Then groning deepe, Nor damned Ghost, (quoth he,)
2 Nor guilefull sprite to thee these wordes doth speake,
     But once a man Fradubio, now a tree,
4 Wretched man, wretched tree; whose nature weake,
     A cruell witch her cursed will to wreake,
6 Hath thus transformd, and plast in open plaines,
     Where Boreas doth blow full bitter bleake,
8 And scorching Sunne does dry my secret vaines:
   For though a tree I seeme, yet cold and heat me paines.

1 Then, groaning deep: "Nor damned ghost," quoth he,

Nor > Neither

2 "Nor guileful sprite to you these words does speak, 3 But once a man, Fradubio, now a tree;

Fradubio > "Brother Doubt" (Italian)

4 Wretched man, wretched tree, whose nature weak 5 A cruel witch, her cursed will to wreak, 6 Has thus transformed, and placed in open plains, 7 Where Boreas does blow full bitter bleak,

Boreas > (The north wind) full > very, exceedingly

8 And scorching sun does dry my secret veins: 9 For though a tree I seem, yet cold and heat me pains."

102.34

   Say on Fradubio then, or man, or tree,
2 Quoth then the knight, by whose mischieuous arts
     Art thou misshaped thus, as now I see?
4 He oft finds med'cine, who his griefe imparts;
     But double griefs afflict concealing harts,
6 As raging flames who striueth to suppresse.
     The author then (said he) of all my smarts,
8 Is one Duessa a false sorceresse,
   That many errant knights hath brought to wretchednesse.

1 "Say on, Fradubio, then, +or+ man or tree,"

or > either, whether

2 Quoth then the knight. "By whose mischievous arts

mischievous > harmful; ill-intentioned

3 Are you misshapen thus, as now I see? 4 He oft finds medicine who his grief imparts;

imparts > relates, makes known

5 But double griefs afflict concealing hearts, 6 As raging flames, who strives to suppress."

who > [he who] suppress > [suppress his grief]

7 "The author then," said he, "of all my smarts

smarts > pains

8 Is one Duessa, a false sorceress,

Duessa > "Duplicity" (Latin, duo esse, to be two)

9 That many errant knights has brought to wretchedness.

errant > itinerant (a knight errant roamed in quest of adventure; the word-order here also implies the sense of erring, deviating, etc.)

102.35

   In prime of youthly yeares, when corage hot
2 The fire of loue and ioy of cheualree
     First kindled in my brest, it was my lot
4 To loue this gentle Lady, whom ye see,
     Now not a Lady, but a seeming tree;
6 With whom as once I rode accompanyde,
     Me chaunced of a knight encountred bee,
8 That had a like faire Lady by his syde,
   Like a faire Lady, but did fowle Duessa hyde.

1 "In prime of youthly years, when courage hot

youthly > youthful courage > heart; spirit; lustiness

2 The fire of love and joy of chivalry 3 First kindled in my breast, it was my lot 4 To love this gentle lady, whom you see

gentle > noble; gentle

5 Now not a lady, but a seeming tree; 6 With whom, as once I rode accompanied, 7 Me chanced of a knight encountered be,

be > [to be]

8 That had a like fair lady by his side,

like > similarly; similar

9 Like a fair lady, but did foul Duessa hide.

102.36

   Whose forged beauty he did take in hand,
2 All other Dames to haue exceeded farre;
     I in defence of mine did likewise stand,
4 Mine, that did then shine as the Morning starre:
     So both to battell fierce arraunged arre,
6 In which his harder fortune was to fall
     Vnder my speare: such is the dye of warre:
8 His Lady left as a prise martiall,
   Did yield her comely person, to be at my call.

1 "Whose forged beauty he did take in hand

take in hand > maintain, assert (by force of arms if necessary)

2 All other dames to have exceeded far;

All > [That of all]

3 I in defence of mine did likewise stand, 4 Mine, that did then shine as the morning star: 5 So both to battle fierce arranged are, 6 In which his harder fortune was to fall 7 Under my spear: such is the die of war.

die > hazard, chance

8 His lady, left as a prize martial,

prize martial > spoil of war

9 Did yield her comely person to be at my call.

102.37

   So doubly lou'd of Ladies vnlike faire,
2 Th'one seeming such, the other such indeede,
     One day in doubt I cast for to compare,
4 Whether in beauties glorie did exceede;
     A Rosy girlond was the victors meede:
6 Both seemde to win, and both seemde won to bee,
     So hard the discord was to be agreede.
8 Fr{ae}lissa was as faire, as faire mote bee,
   And euer false Duessa seemde as faire as shee.

1 "So doubly loved of ladies, unlike fair,

unlike > differently [each is fair in her own way]

2 The one seeming such, the other such indeed, 3 One day in doubt I cast to compare

cast > decided, resolved

4 Whether in beauty's glory did exceed;

Whether > Which of the two

5 A rosy garland was the victor's meed:

meed > reward

6 Both seemed to win, and both seemed won to be,

won > defeated

7 So hard the discord was to be agreed. 8 Fraelissa was as fair as fair might be,

Fraelissa > "Frailty" (Italian)

9 And ever false Duessa seemed as fair as she.

ever false > (The pointing might be "ever, false" or "ever-false"; both meanings are probably intended. Cf. 304.54:9)

102.38

   The wicked witch now seeing all this while
2 The doubtfull ballaunce equally to sway,
     What not by right, she cast to win by guile,
4 And by her hellish science raisd streight way
     A foggy mist, that ouercast the day,
6 And a dull blast, that breathing on her face,
     Dimmed her former beauties shining ray,
8 And with foule vgly forme did her disgrace:
   Then was she faire alone, when none was faire in place.

1 "The wicked witch, now seeing all this while 2 The doubtful balance equally to sway,

doubtful > uncertain; also: fearful; to be feared

3 What not by right, she cast to win by guile,

cast > resolved

4 And by her hellish science raised straightway

science > knowledge, lore

5 A foggy mist that overcast the day, 6 And a dull blast that, breathing on her face,

dull > obscuring, gloomy blast > {Wind, blighting wind, breath of a malignant power} her > [Fraelissa's]

7 Dimmed her former beauty's shining ray, 8 And with foul ugly form did her disgrace:

disgrace > disfigure, disgrace

9 Then was she fair alone, when none was fair in place.

she > [Duessa] in place > in her place; or: there (thus casting doubt on the reality of her beauty)

102.39

   Then cride she out, +fye+, fye, deformed wight,
2 Whose borrowed beautie now appeareth plaine
     To haue before bewitched all mens sight;
4 O leaue her soone, or let her soone be slaine.
     Her loathly visage viewing with disdaine,
6 Eftsoones I thought her such, as she me told,
     And would haue kild her; but with faigned paine,
8 The false witch did my wrathfull hand with-hold;
   So left her, where she now is turnd to treen mould.

1 fye > Fye 1609

1 "Then cried she out, `Fie, fie, deformed wight,

Fie > (Addressing Fraelissa) wight > creature

2 Whose borrowed beauty now appears plain 3 To have before bewitched all men's sight; 4 O leave her soon, or let her soon be slain.'

O > (Addressing Fradubio) soon > immediately

5 Her loathly visage viewing with disdain,

loathly > loathsome, disgusting

6 Eftsoons I thought her such as she me told,

Eftsoons > Forthwith such > [to be such] she me told > [Duessa had informed me]

7 And would have killed her; but with feigned pain

pain > pains; effort

8 The false witch did my wrathful hand withhold; 9 So left her, where she now is turned to treen mould.

treen > (Here pronounced as two syllables: made of "tree", tree- like) mould > shape, form

102.40

   +Thens+ forth I tooke Duessa for my Dame,
2 And in the witch vnweeting ioyd long time,
     Ne euer wist, but that she was the same,
4 Till on a day (that day is euery Prime,
     When Witches wont do penance for their crime)
6 I chaunst to see her in her proper hew,
     Bathing her selfe in origane and thyme:
8 A filthy foule old woman I did vew,
   That euer to haue toucht her, I did deadly rew.

1 Thens > Then 1590, 1596: FE

1 "Thenceforth I took Duessa for my dame, 2 And in the witch unweeting joyed long time,

unweeting > unwittingly

3 Nor ever wist that she was the same,

wist > knew, guessed the same > [a witch]

4 Till on a day (that day is every prime,

prime > {First day of the new moon; or, perhaps: springtime}

5 When witches wont do penance for their crime)

wont > are accustomed to crime > wrongdoing, sins

6 I chanced to see her in her proper hue,

hue > appearance

7 Bathing herself in origan and thyme:

origan > (Origanum sp., esp. O. vulgare, wild marjoram) thyme > (This and origan were used to treat scabs: see 108.47:3; thyme was also used to treat syphilis)

8 A filthy foul old woman I did view, 9 That ever to have touched her I did deadly rue.

That > [So that] touched > had sexual contact with

102.41

   Her neather partes misshapen, monstruous,
2 Were hidd in water, that I could not see,
     But they did seeme more foule and hideous,
4 Then womans shape man would beleeue to bee.
     +Thens+ forth from her most beastly companie
6 I gan refraine, in minde to slip away,
     Soon as appeard safe +opportunitie+:
8 For danger great, if not assur'd decay
   I saw before mine eyes, if I were knowne to stray.

5 Thens > Then 1590, 1596: FE 7 opportunitie > oportunitie 1596

1 "Her nether parts, misshapen, monstrous, 2 Were hidden in water, that I could not see,

that > [so that]

3 But they did seem more foul and hideous 4 Than woman's shape man would believe to be. 5 Thenceforth from her most beastly company

company > society; sexual company

6 I gan refrain, in mind to slip away

gan > did; began to

7 Soon as appeared safe opportunity:

Soon > [As soon] safe > [a safe]

8 For danger great, if not assured decay,

decay > destruction, death

9 I saw before my eyes, if I were known to stray.

102.42

   The diuelish hag by chaunges of my cheare
2 Perceiu'd my thought, and drownd in sleepie night,
     With wicked herbes and ointments did besmeare
4 My bodie all, through charmes and magicke might,
     That all my senses were bereaued quight:
6 Then brought she me into this desert waste,
     And by my wretched louers side me pight,
8 Where now enclosd in wooden wals full faste,
   Banisht from liuing wights, our wearie dayes we waste.

1 "The devilish hag, by changes of my cheer,

cheer > expression, mood

2 Perceived my thought; and, drowned in sleepy night, 3 With wicked herbs and ointments did besmear 4 My body all, through charms and magic might, 5 That all my senses were bereaved quite:

That > [So that] bereaved > taken away

6 Then brought she me into this desert waste,

desert > lonely

7 And by my wretched lover's side me pight,

pight > pitched, placed; planted

8 Where now, enclosed in wooden walls full fast,

full fast > entirely secure

9 Banished from living wights, our weary days we waste."

wights > people

102.43

   But how long time, said then the Elfin knight,
2 Are you in this misformed house to dwell?
     We may not chaunge (quoth he) this euil plight,
4 Till we be bathed in a liuing well;
     That is the terme prescribed by the spell.
6 O how, said he, mote I that well out find,
     That may restore you to your wonted well?
8 Time and suffised fates to former kynd
   Shall vs restore, none else from hence may vs vnbynd.

1 "But how long time," said then the Elfin knight,

time > [a time]

2 "Are you in this misformed house to dwell?"

misformed > evilly made

3 "We may not change," quoth he, "this evil plight,

may not > cannot

4 Till we be bathed in a living well;

living well > (The well of everlasting life (John 4.14, Rev. 21.6); the grace of God)

5 That is the term prescribed by the spell." 6 "O how," said he, "might I that well out find,

out find > discover

7 That may restore you to your wonted well?"

wonted > accustomed well > well-being

8 "Time and sufficed fates to former kind

sufficed > satisfied former kind > [our former state; kind = nature, race, station in life]

9 Shall us restore; none else from hence may us unbind."

none > no one; nothing

102.44

   The false Duessa, now Fidessa hight,
2 Heard how in vaine Fradubio did lament,
     And knew well all was true. But the good knight
4 Full of sad feare and ghastly dreriment,
     When all this speech the liuing tree had spent,
6 The bleeding bough did thrust into the ground,
     That from the bloud he might be innocent,
8 And with fresh clay did close the wooden wound:
   Then turning to his Lady, dead with feare her found.

1 The false Duessa, now Fidessa hight,

hight > called, named

2 Heard how in vain Fradubio did lament, 3 And knew well all was true. But the good knight, 4 Full of sad fear and ghastly dreariment,

ghastly > frightful (from the same root as "ghost") dreariment > horror

5 When all this speech the living tree had spent, 6 The bleeding bough did thrust into the ground, 7 That from the blood he might be innocent,

That > [So that]

8 And with fresh clay did close the wooden wound: 9 Then, turning to his lady, dead with fear her found.

102.45

   Her seeming dead he found with feigned feare,
2 As all vnweeting of that well she knew,
     And paynd himselfe with busie care to reare
4 Her out of carelesse swowne. Her eylids blew
     And dimmed sight with pale and deadly hew
6 At last she vp gan lift: with trembling cheare
     Her vp he tooke, too simple and too trew,
8 And oft her kist. At length all passed feare,
   He set her on her steede, and forward forth did beare.

1 Her seeming dead he found with feigned fear, 2 As all unweeting of that well she knew;

unweeting > ignorant that > [that which]

3 And pained himself with busy care to rear

busy > solicitous

4 Her out of careless swoon. Her eyelids blue

careless > abandoned, not caring; artless; unconscious, free from care blue > {Livid; low-spirited, affected with fear}

5 And dimmed sight, with pale and deadly hue,

deadly hue > deathly appearance

6 At last she up gan lift: with trembling cheer

gan > did cheer > expression, countenance

7 Her up he took, too simple and too true,

simple > (The knight and Duessa both; simple also has the meaning "free from duplicity"; she is then too simple and too true)

8 And oft her kissed. At length, all passed fear,

passed fear > [fear passed]

9 He set her on her steed, and forward forth did bear.

bear > travel, maintain his course; also: take [her as a companion]

CANTO III

   Forsaken Truth long seekes her loue,
2 And makes the Lyon mylde,
   Marres blind Deuotions mart, and fals
4 In hand of leachour vylde.

1 Forsaken Truth long seeks her love,

Truth > [Una]

2 And makes the lion mild, 3 Mars blind Devotion's mart, and falls

Mars > Spoils Devotion > Corceca (introduced at 103.12, named at 103.18:4) mart > trade

4 In hand of lecher vile.

In hand > Into the hands lecher > [a lecher]

103.1

   NOught is there vnder heau'ns wide hollownesse,
2 That moues more deare compassion of mind,
     Then beautie brought t'vnworthy wretchednesse
4 Through enuies snares or fortunes freakes vnkind:
     I, whether lately through her brightnesse blind,
6 Or through alleageance and fast fealtie,
     Which I do owe vnto all woman kind,
8 Feele my heart perst with so great agonie,
   When such I see, that all for pittie I could die.

1 Naught is there under heaven's wide hollowness 2 That moves more dear compassion of mind 3 Than beauty brought to unworthy wretchedness

unworthy > undeserved

4 Through envy's snares or fortune's freaks unkind:

freaks > whims, caprices

5 I, whether lately through its brightness blind,

its > [beauty's] blind > blinded

6 Or through allegiance, and fast fealty,

fast > firm fealty > obligation of fidelity; loyalty (of a vassal to his lord)

7 Which I do owe to all womankind, 8 Feel my heart pierced with so great agony

so great agony > [such great agony; or: so great an agony]

9 When such I see, that all for pity I could die.

103.2

   And now it is empassioned so deepe,
2 For fairest Vnaes sake, of whom I sing,
     That my fraile eyes these lines with teares do steepe,
4 To thinke how she through guilefull handeling,
     Though true as touch, though daughter of a king,
6 Though faire as euer liuing wight was faire,
     Though nor in word nor deede ill meriting,
8 Is from her knight diuorced in despaire
   And her due loues deriu'd to that vile witches share.

1 And now it is empassioned so deep,

empassioned > {Moved or touched with deep feeling}

2 For fairest Una's sake (of whom I sing), 3 That my frail eyes these lines with tears do steep, 4 To think how she, through guileful handling,

handling > treatment

5 Though true as touch, though daughter of a king,

touch > [a] touchstone (fine-grained stone used for testing the quality of gold)

6 Though fair as ever living wight was fair,

wight > person, woman

7 Though +nor+ in word nor deed ill meriting,

nor > neither

8 Is from her knight divorced in despair, 9 And her due loves derived to that vile witch's share.

her due loves > [the love due to her] derived > transferred, diverted

103.3

   Yet she most faithfull Ladie all this while
2 Forsaken, wofull, solitarie mayd
     Farre from all peoples prease, as in exile,
4 In wildernesse and wastfull deserts strayd,
     To seeke her knight; who subtilly betrayd
6 Through that late vision, which th'Enchaunter wrought,
     Had her abandond. She of nought affrayd,
8 Through woods and wastnesse wide him daily sought;
   Yet wished tydings none of him vnto her brought.

1 Yet she, most faithful lady, all this while

while > (Or: while, (if "Forsaken … mayd" is taken to be parenthesized))

2 Forsaken, woeful, solitary maid, 3 Far from all people's press, as in exile,

press > company, throng

4 In wilderness and wasteful deserts strayed

wasteful > desolate

5 To seek her knight; who, subtly betrayed

subtly > ingeniously, cunningly

6 Through that late vision which the enchanter wrought,

Through > By means of late > recent

7 Had her abandoned. She, of naught afraid, 8 Through woods and wasteness wide him daily sought;

wasteness > wilderness

9 Yet wished tidings none of him to her brought.

wished tidings none of him to her brought > [no one brought her longed-for tidings of him: wished = longed-for; none = no one]

103.4

   One day nigh wearie of the yrkesome way,
2 From her vnhastie beast she did alight,
     And on the grasse her daintie limbes did lay
4 In secret shadow, farre from all mens sight:
     From her faire head her fillet she vndight,
6 And laid her stole aside. Her angels face
     As the great eye of heauen shyned bright,
8 And made a sunshine in the shadie place;
   Did neuer mortall eye behold such heauenly grace.

1 One day, nigh weary of the irksome way,
2 From her unhasty beast she did alight,
3 And on the grass her dainty limbs did lay
4 In secret shadow, far from all men's sight:

secret > secluded, remote

5 From her fair head her fillet she undight,

fillet > {Headband; ribbon used for keeping the head-dress in place: cf. 101.4:4} undight > unfastened

6 And laid her stole aside. Her angel's face,

stole > robe

7 As the great eye of heaven, shone bright, 8 And made a sunshine in the shady place; 9 Did never mortal eye behold such heavenly grace.

Did never > [Never did]

103.5

   It fortuned out of the thickest wood
2 A ramping Lyon rushed suddainly,
     Hunting full greedie after saluage blood;
4 Soone as the royall virgin he did spy,
     With gaping mouth at her ran greedily,
6 To haue attonce deuour'd her tender corse:
     But to the pray when as he drew more ny,
8 His bloudie rage asswaged with remorse,
   And with the sight amazd, forgat his furious forse.

1 It fortuned, out of the thickest wood 2 A ramping lion rushed suddenly,

ramping > rampant, rearing up

3 Hunting full greedy after savage blood;

full > very, exceedingly greedy > greedily, recklessly savage > [wild animals']

4 Soon as the royal virgin he did spy,

Soon > [As soon]

5 With gaping mouth at her ran greedily,

ran > [he ran]

6 To have at once devoured her tender corse:

corse > body

7 But to the prey when he drew more nigh,

But to the prey when he drew more nigh > [But when he drew more nigh to the prey]

8 His bloody rage assuaged with remorse

assuaged > (Intr.) became less violent, abated; (tr.) [he] assuaged remorse > remorse; compassion, pity

9 And, with the sight amazed, forgot his furious force.

103.6

   In stead thereof he kist her wearie feet,
2 And lickt her lilly hands with fawning tong,
     As he her wronged innocence did weet.
4 O how can beautie maister the most strong,
     And simple truth subdue auenging wrong?
6 Whose yeelded pride and proud submission,
     Still dreading death, when she had marked long,
8 Her hart gan melt in great compassion,
   And drizling teares did shed for pure affection.

1 Instead thereof he kissed her weary feet, 2 And licked her lily hands with fawning tongue, 3 As he her wronged innocence did weet.

As > [As if] weet > understand, perceive

4 O how can beauty master the most strong,

can beauty > can beauty; did beauty; does beauty know how to

5 And simple truth subdue avenging wrong? 6 Whose yielded pride and proud submission, 7 Still dreading death, when she had marked long,

marked > [marked his yielded pride and proud submission]

8 Her heart gan melt in great compassion,

gan > did

9 And drizzling tears did shed for pure affection.

drizzling > {Falling in fine drops}

103.7

   The Lyon Lord of euerie beast in +field+
2 Quoth she, his princely puissance doth abate,
     And mightie proud to humble weake does yield,
4 Forgetfull of the hungry rage, which late
     Him prickt, in pittie of my sad estate:
6 But he my Lyon, and my noble +Lord+
     How does he find in cruell hart to hate
8 Her that him lou'd, and euer most adord,
   As the God of my life? why hath he me abhord?

1 field > field, 1609 6 Lord > Lord, 1609

1 "The lion, lord of every beast in field," 2 Quoth she, "his princely puissance does abate,

puissance > power, strength

3 And mighty proud to humble weak does yield, 4 Forgetful of the hungry rage, which late

late > formerly

5 Him pricked, in pity of my sad estate:

estate > state, condition

6 But he, my lion, and my noble lord, 7 How does he find in cruel heart to hate 8 Her that him loved, and ever most adored, 9 As the god of my life; why has he me abhorred?"

103.8

   Redounding teares did choke th'end of her plaint,
2 Which softly ecchoed from the neighbour wood;
     And sad to see her sorrowfull constraint
4 The kingly beast vpon her gazing stood;
     With pittie calmd, downe fell his angry mood.
6 At last in close hart shutting vp her paine,
     Arose the virgin borne of heauenly brood,
8 And to her snowy Palfrey got againe,
   To seeke her strayed Champion, if she might attaine.

1 Redounding tears did choke the end of her plaint,

Redounding > Flowing, overflowing plaint > lament

2 Which softly echoed from the neighbouring wood; 3 And, sad to see her sorrowful constraint,

constraint > distress

4 The kingly beast upon her gazing stood; 5 With pity calmed, down fell his angry mood. 6 At last, in close heart shutting up her pain, 7 Arose the virgin, born of heavenly brood,

brood > parentage, lineage (this use is characteristic of Spenser)

8 And to her snowy palfrey got again,

palfrey > {Saddle-horse for ladies}

9 To seek her strayed champion, if she might attain.

attain > succeed in reaching [him]

103.9

   The Lyon would not leaue her desolate,
2 But with her went along, as a strong gard
     Of her chast person, and a faithfull mate
4 Of her sad troubles and misfortunes hard:
     Still when she slept, he kept both watch and ward,
6 And when she wakt, he waited diligent,
     With humble seruice to her will prepard:
8 From her faire eyes he tooke commaundement,
   And euer by her lookes conceiued her intent.

1 The lion would not leave her desolate, 2 But with her went along, as a strong guard 3 Of her chaste person, and a faithful mate 4 Of her sad troubles and misfortunes hard: 5 Still when she slept, he kept both watch and ward,

Still > Continually

6 And when she waked, he waited diligent, 7 With humble service to her will prepared: 8 From her fair eyes he took commandment,

commandment > command, orders; also: divine injunction

9 And ever by her looks conceived her intent.

103.10

   Long she thus traueiled through deserts wyde,
2 By which she thought her wandring knight shold pas,
     Yet neuer shew of liuing wight espyde;
4 Till that at length she found the troden gras,
     In which the tract of peoples footing was,
6 Vnder the steepe foot of a mountaine hore;
     The same she followes, till at last she has
8 A damzell spyde slow footing her before,
   That on her shoulders sad a pot of water bore.

1 Long she thus travelled through deserts wide, 2 By which she thought her wandering knight should pass,

By > Through

3 Yet never show of living wight espied;

show > trace wight > person

4 Till at length she found the trodden grass 5 In which the tract of people's footing was,

tract > track

6 Under the steep foot of a mountain hoar;

hoar > hoary, grey; ancient

7 The same she follows, till at last she has 8 A damsel spied, slow footing her before, 9 That on her shoulders sad a pot of water bore.

sad > heavy, firm; heavily laden; sad

103.11

   +To whom+ approching she to her gan call,
2 To weet, if dwelling place were nigh at hand;
     But the rude wench her answer'd nought at all,
4 She could not heare, nor speake, nor vnderstand;
     Till seeing by her side the Lyon stand,
6 With suddaine feare her pitcher downe she threw,
     And fled away: for neuer in that land
8 Face of faire Ladie she before did vew,
   And that dread Lyons looke her cast in deadly hew.

1 To whom > Whom 1596

1 To whom approaching, she to her gan call,

gan > did

2 To weet if dwelling place were nigh at hand;

weet > find out

3 But the rude wench her answered naught at all,

rude > simple; uneducated

4 She could not hear, nor speak, nor understand;
5 Till, seeing by her side the lion stand,
6 With sudden fear her pitcher down she threw,
7 And fled away: for never in that land
8 Face of fair lady she before did view,
9 And that dread lion's look her cast in deadly hue.

cast in deadly hue > [made "as white as a sheet"; deadly = deathly]

103.12

   Full fast she fled, ne euer lookt behynd,
2 As if her life vpon the wager lay,
     And home she came, whereas her mother blynd
4 Sate in eternall night: nought could she say,
     But suddaine catching hold, did her dismay
6 With quaking hands, and other signes of feare:
     Who full of ghastly fright and cold affray,
8 Gan shut the dore. By this arriued there
   Dame Vna, wearie Dame, and entrance did requere.

1 Full fast she fled, nor ever looked behind,

Full > Very, exceedingly

2 As if her life upon the wager lay,

upon the wager lay > [were at stake]

3 And home she came, where her mother blind 4 Sat in eternal night: naught could she say,

she > [the damsel]

5 But, suddenly catching hold, did her dismay 6 With quaking hands, and other signs of fear: 7 Who, full of ghastly fright and cold affray,

ghastly > frightful, terrible affray > terror

8 Gan shut the door. By this arrived there

Gan > Did
By this > At this; by this time

9 Dame Una, weary Dame, and entrance did require.

require > request

103.13

   Which when none yeelded, her vnruly Page
2 With his rude clawes the wicket open rent,
     And let her in; where of his cruell rage
4 Nigh dead with feare, and faint astonishment,
     She found them both in darkesome corner pent;
6 Where that old woman day and night did pray
     Vpon her beades deuoutly penitent;
8 Nine hundred Pater nosters euery day,
   And thrise nine hundred Aues she was wont to say.

1 Which when none yielded, her unruly page

none > no one; none was

2 With his rude claws the wicket open rent,

rude > rough, violent wicket > door, small door

3 And let her in; where, of his cruel rage 4 Nigh dead with fear and faint astonishment, 5 She found them both in darksome corner pent; 6 Where that old woman day and night did pray 7 Upon her beads, devoutly penitent;

beads > rosary beads

8 Nine hundred paternosters every day,

paternosters > (The Lord's Prayer, especially in Latin; pater noster = our father)

9 And thrice nine hundred Aves she was wont to say.

Ave > (Ave Maria, Hail Mary) wont > accustomed

103.14

   And to augment her painefull pennance more,
2 Thrise euery weeke in ashes she did sit,
     And next her wrinkled skin rough sackcloth wore,
4 And thrise three times did fast from any bit:
     But now for feare her beads she did forget.
6 Whose needlesse dread for to remoue away,
     Faire Vna framed words and count'nance fit:
8 Which hardly doen, at length she gan them pray,
   That in their cotage small, that night she rest her may.

1 And to augment her painful penance more,
2 Thrice every week in ashes she did sit,
3 And next her wrinkled skin rough sackcloth wore,
4 And thrice three times did fast from any bit:

bit > morsel [of food]

5 But now for fear her beads she did forget.

beads > prayers; rosary

6 Whose needless dread to remove away, 7 Fair Una framed words and countenance fit: 8 Which, hardly done, at length she gan them pray

hardly > with difficulty; painfully gan > did pray > ask earnestly

9 That in their cottage small, that night she rest her may.

rest her may > [might rest herself]

103.15

   The day is spent, and commeth drowsie night,
2 When euery creature shrowded is in sleepe;
     Sad Vna downe her laies in wearie plight,
4 And at her feet the Lyon watch doth keepe:
     In stead of rest, she does lament, and weepe
6 For the late losse of her deare loued knight,
     And sighes, and grones, and euermore does steepe
8 Her tender brest in bitter teares all night,
   All night she thinks too long, and often lookes for light.

1 The day is spent, and comes drowsy night,
2 When every creature shrouded is in sleep;
3 Sad Una down herself lays in weary plight,
4 And at her feet the lion watch does keep:
5 Instead of rest, she does lament, and weep

rest > resting

6 For the late loss of her dear loved knight, 7 And sighs, and groans, and evermore does steep 8 Her tender breast in bitter tears all night; 9 All night she thinks too long, and often looks for light.

103.16

   Now when Aldeboran was mounted hie
2 Aboue the shynie Cassiopeias chaire,
     And all in deadly sleepe did drowned lie,
4 One knocked at the dore, and in would fare;
     He knocked fast, and often curst, and sware,
6 That readie entrance was not at his call:
     For on his backe a heauy load he bare
8 Of nightly stelths and pillage seuerall,
   Which he had got abroad by purchase criminall.

1 Now when Aldebaran was mounted high

Aldebaran > (A red star forming the eye of the bull in the constellation of Taurus; in the northern hemisphere, in this relationship to Cassiopeia the season would be winter, the time of greatest darkness and cold)

2 Above the shiny Cassiopeia's chair,

Cassiopeia > (A W-shaped constellation, hence resembling a chair or throne. Cassiopeia was a proud queen who consented to the sacrifice of her virgin daughter, Andromeda, to a sea-monster. Andromeda, however, was rescued by Perseus, who subsequently married her and was declared the saviour of the royal house; Cassiopeia and her throne were placed among the stars (see Met. 4.663-803, Myth. 8.6). The legend has certain parallels with the story of Una and the Redcross Knight)

3 And all in deadly sleep did drowned lie,

deadly > death-like

4 One knocked at the door, and in would fare; 5 He knocked fast, and often cursed, and swore, 6 That ready entrance was not at his call: 7 For on his back a heavy load he bore 8 Of nightly stealths and pillage several,

stealths > stealing, thefts several > [of various kinds and from various places]

9 Which he had got abroad by purchase criminal.

purchase criminal > theft (purchase = acquisition)

103.17

   He was to weete a stout and sturdie thiefe,
2 Wont to robbe Churches of their ornaments,
     And poore mens boxes of their due reliefe,
4 Which giuen was to them for good intents;
     The holy Saints of their rich vestiments
6 He did disrobe, when all men carelesse slept,
     And spoild the Priests of their habiliments,
8 Whiles none the holy things in safety kept;
   Then he by cunning sleights in at the window crept.

1 He was, to wit, a stout and sturdy thief,

stout > bold sturdy > courageous, ruthless

2 Wont to rob churches of their ornaments

Wont > Accustomed

3 And poor men's boxes of their due relief,

boxes > [poor-boxes in church, for alms] relief > {Alms, funds administered from parish doles}

4 Which given was to them for good intents;

intents > purposes

5 The holy saints of their rich vestments 6 He did disrobe, when all men careless slept,

careless > unconscious, free from cares; negligently

7 And spoiled the priests of their habiliments,

spoiled > stripped, robbed habiliments > vestments, attire

8 While none the holy things in safety kept; 9 Then he by cunning sleights in at the window crept.

103.18

   And all that he by right or wrong could find,
2 Vnto this house he brought, and did bestow
     Vpon the daughter of this woman blind,
4 Abessa daughter of Corceca slow,
     With whom he whoredome vsd, that few did know,
6 And fed her fat with feast of offerings,
     And plentie, which in all the land did grow;
8 Ne spared he to giue her gold and rings:
   And now he to her brought part of his stolen things.

1 And all that he by right or wrong could find
2 To this house he brought, and did bestow
3 Upon the daughter of this woman blind,
4 Abessa (daughter of Corceca slow),

Abessa > "Apart" (Latin, ab esse; i.e. detached from the true
church)
Corceca > "Blind of Heart" (Latin, cor, heart, caecus, blind)

5 With whom he whoredom used, that few did know,

whoredom > (Also figuratively, meaning idolatry or any form of unfaithfulness to the true God) used > practised, engaged in

6 And fed her fat with feast of offerings,

offerings > oblations

7 And plenty, which in all the land did grow; 8 Nor spared he to give her gold and rings: 9 And now he to her brought part of his stolen things.

103.19

   Thus long the dore with rage and threats he bet,
2 Yet of those fearefull women none durst rize,
     The Lyon frayed them, him in to let:
4 He would no longer stay him to aduize,
     But open breakes the dore in furious wize,
6 And entring is; when that disdainfull beast
     Encountring fierce, him suddaine doth surprize,
8 And seizing cruell clawes on trembling brest,
   Vnder his Lordly foot him proudly hath supprest.

1 Thus, long the door with rage and threats he beat, 2 Yet of those fearful women none dared rise

rise > (Or: "… rize, The Lyon frayed them him in to let")

3 (The lion frayed them) him in to let:

frayed > frightened

4 He would no longer stay him to advise,

stay him > [stay himself, wait] advise > consider, take stock

5 But open breaks the door in furious wise,

wise > manner

6 And entering is; when that disdainful beast,

disdainful > angry, indignant

7 Encountering fierce, him suddenly does surprise,

Encountering > Confronting [him]

8 And, seizing cruel claws on trembling breast, 9 Under his lordly foot him proudly has suppressed.

103.20

   Him booteth not resist, nor succour call,
2 His bleeding hart is in the vengers hand,
     Who streight him rent in thousand peeces small,
4 And quite dismembred hath: the thirstie land
     Drunke vp his life; his corse left on the strand.
6 His fearefull friends weare out the wofull night,
     Ne dare to weepe, nor seeme to vnderstand
8 The heauie hap, which on them is alight,
   Affraid, least to themselues the like mishappen might.

1 Him boots not resist, nor succour call,

boots > it avails resist > [to resist] succour > [for succour]

2 His bleeding heart is in the avenger's hand, 3 Who straight him rent in thousand pieces small,

straight > straightway rent > tore

4 And quite dismembered has: the thirsty land 5 Drank up his life, his corpse left on the strand.

strand > {?Sandy or earthen ?floor; this meaning not in OED}

6 His fearful friends wear out the woeful night, 7 Nor dare to weep, nor seem to understand 8 The heavy hap which on them is alight,

hap > fortune is alight > [has fallen]

9 Afraid lest to themselves the like mishappen might.

mishappen > happen amiss

103.21

   Now when broad day the world discouered has,
2 Vp Vna rose, vp rose the Lyon eke,
     And on their former iourney forward pas,
4 In wayes vnknowne, her wandring knight to seeke,
     With paines farre passing that long wandring Greeke,
6 That for his loue refused deitie;
     Such were the labours of this Lady meeke,
8 Still seeking him, that from her still did flie,
   Then furthest from her hope, when most she weened nie.

1 Now when broad day the world discovered has,

discovered > uncovered, revealed

2 Up Una rose, up rose the lion eke,

eke > also

3 And on their former journey forward pass, 4 In ways unknown, her wandering knight to seek, 5 With pains far passing that long wandering Greek,

passing > surpassing [those of] that long wandering Greek > (Odysseus who, for the sake of Penelope, rejected the immortality offered him by Calypso (Odyssey 5))

6 That for his love refused deity; 7 Such were the labours of this lady meek, 8 Still seeking him, that from her still did fly;

fly > flee

9 Then furthest from her hope, when most she weened nigh.

weened > supposed [him]

103.22

   Soone as she parted thence, the fearefull twaine,
2 That blind old woman and her daughter deare
     Came forth, and finding Kirkrapine there slaine,
4 For anguish great they gan to rend their heare,
     And beat their brests, and naked flesh to teare.
6 And when they both had wept and wayld their fill,
     Then forth they ranne like two amazed deare,
8 Halfe mad through malice, and reuenging will,
   To follow her, that was the causer of their ill.

1 Soon as she parted thence, the fearful twain

Soon > [As soon]

2 (That blind old woman and her daughter dear) 3 Came forth and, finding Kirkrapine there slain,

Kirkrapine > "Church-robber"

4 For anguish great they began to rend their hair

they > (Redundant)

5 And beat their breasts, and naked flesh to tear. 6 And when they both had wept and wailed their fill, 7 Then forth they ran, like two amazed deer,

amazed > panic-stricken

8 Half-mad through malice, and revenging will,

revenging will > [desire for vengeance]

9 To follow her that was the causer of their ill.

ill > misfortune; calamity

103.23

   Whom ouertaking, they gan loudly bray,
2 With hollow howling, and lamenting cry,
     Shamefully at her rayling all the way,
4 And her accusing of dishonesty,
     That was the flowre of faith and chastity;
6 And still amidst her rayling, she did pray,
     That plagues, and mischiefs, and long misery
8 Might fall on her, and follow all the way,
   And that in endlesse error she might euer stray.

1 Whom overtaking, they gan loudly bray

gan > did; began to bray > cry out

2 With hollow howling and lamenting cry,

hollow > insincere

3 Shamefully at her railing all the way, 4 And her accusing of dishonesty,

dishonesty > unchastity, lewdness

5 That was the flower of faith and chastity; 6 And still, amidst her railing, she did pray

still > continually she > [Corceca; Abessa cannot talk - see 103.11:4]

7 That plagues, and mischiefs, and long misery,

mischiefs > misfortunes

8 Might fall on her, and follow all the way, 9 And that in endless error she might ever stray.

error > wandering; error

103.24

   But when she saw her prayers nought preuaile,
2 She backe returned with some labour lost;
     And in the way as she did weepe and waile,
4 A knight her met in mighty armes embost,
     Yet knight was not for all his bragging bost,
6 But subtill Archimag, that Vna sought
     By traynes into new troubles to haue tost:
8 Of that old woman tydings he besought,
   If that of such a Ladie she could tellen ought.

1 But when she saw her prayers naught prevail,
2 She back returned with some labour lost;
3 And in the way, as she did weep and wail,
4 A knight her met in mighty arms embossed:

arms > armour embossed > encased

5 Yet knight was not, for all his bragging boast,

boast > pomp, vainglory

6 But subtle Archimago, that Una sought

subtle > wily Una sought > [sought Una]

7 By trains into new troubles to have tossed.

trains > tricks, snares

8 Of that old woman tidings he besought,

besought > asked earnestly

9 If of such a lady she could tell aught.

103.25

   Therewith she gan her passion to renew,
2 And cry, and curse, and raile, and rend her heare,
     Saying, that harlot she too lately knew,
4 That causd her shed so many a bitter teare,
     And so forth told the story of her feare:
6 Much seemed he to mone her haplesse chaunce,
     And after for that Ladie did +inquire+;
8 Which being taught, he forward gan aduaunce
   His faire enchaunted steed, and eke his charmed launce.

7 inquire > inquere 1590, 1609

1 Therewith she began her passion to renew,

Therewith > With that; thereupon

2 And cry, and curse, and rail, and rend her hair,

rend > tear

3 Saying, that harlot she too lately knew,

too > [only too]

4 That caused her shed so many a bitter tear,

shed > [to shed]

5 And so forth told the story of her fear: 6 Much seemed he to moan her hapless chance,

moan > bewail, commiserate with

7 And after that lady did inquire; 8 Which being taught, he forward gan advance

gan > did

9 His fair enchanted steed, and eke his charmed lance.

eke > also

103.26

   Ere long he came, where Vna traueild slow,
2 And that wilde Champion wayting her besyde:
     Whom seeing such, for dread he durst not show
4 Himselfe too nigh at hand, but turned wyde
     Vnto an hill; from whence when she him spyde,
6 By his like seeming shield, her knight by name
     She weend it was, and towards him gan ryde:
8 Approching nigh, she wist it was the same,
   And with faire fearefull humblesse towards him shee came.

1 Ere long he came where Una travelled slow 2 And that wild champion waiting her beside:

waiting her beside > [was] attending on her, keeping watch beside her

3 Whom seeing such, for dread he dared not show

seeing such > [seeing; seeing the lion for what he was]

4 Himself too nigh at hand, but turned wide

wide > aside

5 To a hill; from whence when she him spied, 6 By his like seeming shield, her knight by name

like seeming > similar her knight by name > [her own knight; by name = particular]

7 She weened it was, and towards him gan ride:

weened > supposed, imagined gan > did

8 Approaching nigh, she wist it was the same,

wist > believed

9 And with fair fearful humblesse towards him she came.

humblesse > humility, humbleness

103.27

   And weeping said, Ah my long lacked Lord,
2 Where haue ye bene thus long out of my sight?
     Much feared I to haue bene quite abhord,
4 Or ought haue done, that ye displeasen might,
     That should as death vnto my deare hart light:
6 For since mine eye your ioyous sight did mis,
     My chearefull day is turnd to chearelesse night,
8 And eke my night of death the shadow is;
   But welcome now my light, and shining lampe of blis.

1 And, weeping, said, "Ah, my long-lacked lord,
2 Where have you been thus long out of my sight?
3 Much feared I to have been quite abhorred,
4 Or aught have done, that you displease might,

aught > anything

5 That should as death to my dear heart light:

dear > fond; grievous, hence: sad light > strike; befall; alight

6 For since my eye your joyous sight did miss, 7 My cheerful day is turned to cheerless night, 8 And eke my night of death the shadow is;

eke > also, moreover, in addition

9 But welcome now, my light, and shining lamp of bliss!"

103.28

   He thereto meeting said, My dearest Dame,
2 Farre be it from your thought, and fro my will,
     To thinke that knighthood I so much should shame,
4 As you to leaue, that haue me loued still,
     And chose in Faery court of meere goodwill,
6 Where noblest knights were to be found on earth:
     The earth shall sooner leaue her kindly skill
8 To bring forth fruit, and make eternall derth,
   Then I leaue you, my liefe, yborne of heauenly berth.

1 He thereto meeting said, "My dearest dame,

thereto > with that, to that meeting > opposing, dealing; hence: responding

2 Far be it from your thought, and from my will, 3 To think that knighthood I so much should shame 4 As you to leave, that have me loved still,

still > constantly

5 And chose in Faery Court, of mere goodwill,

mere > pure, complete; sheer

6 Where noblest knights were to be found on earth: 7 The earth shall sooner leave her kindly skill

leave > forsake; neglect kindly skill > natural knowledge, innate ability

8 To bring forth fruit, and make eternal dearth,

dearth > famine

9 Than I leave you, my lief, born of heavenly birth.

lief > dear, beloved

103.29

   And sooth to say, why I left you so long,
2 Was for to seeke aduenture in strange place,
     Where Archimago said a felon strong
4 To many knights did daily worke disgrace;
     But knight he now shall neuer more deface:
6 Good cause of mine excuse; that mote ye please
     Well to accept, and euermore embrace
8 My faithfull seruice, that by land and seas
   Haue vowd you to defend, now then your plaint appease.

1 "And sooth to say, why I left you so long

sooth > truth; truthfully, truly

2 Was to seek adventure in strange place,

strange > foreign, outlying

3 Where, Archimago said, a felon strong

Archimago said > (See 101.31:3)

4 To many knights did daily work disgrace;

disgrace > affront; misfortune

5 But knight he now shall never more deface:

deface > defame; disfigure; destroy

6 Good cause of my excuse; that might you please 7 Well to accept, and evermore embrace 8 My faithful service, that by land and seas

that > [of I that]

9 Have vowed you to defend; now then, your plaint appease."

plaint > complaint, lamentation appease > check, cease

103.30

   His louely words her seemd due recompence
2 Of all her passed paines: one louing howre
     For many yeares of sorrow can dispence:
4 A dram of sweet is worth a pound of sowre:
     She has forgot, how many a wofull stowre
6 For him she late endur'd; she speakes no more
     Of past: true is, that true loue hath no powre
8 To looken backe; his eyes be fixt before.
   Before her stands her knight, for whom she toyld so sore.

1 His lovely words her seemed due recompense

lovely > loving her seemed > [seemed to her]

2 Of all her passed pains: one loving hour 3 For many years of sorrow can dispense:

dispense > make amends

4 A dram of sweet is worth a pound of sour.

dram > {Drachm, one sixteenth of an ounce avoirdupois}

5 She has forgotten how many a woeful stour

stour > distress, time of distress

6 For him she late endured; she speaks no more

late > lately

7 Of past: true is, that true love has no power 8 To look back; its eyes are fixed before. 9 Before her stands her knight, for whom she toiled so sore.

103.31

   Much like, as when the beaten marinere,
2 That long hath wandred in the Ocean wide,
     Oft soust in swelling Tethys saltish teare,
4 And long time hauing tand his tawney hide
     With blustring breath of heauen, that none can bide,
6 And scorching flames of fierce Orions hound,
     Soone as the port from farre he has espide,
8 His chearefull whistle merrily doth sound,
   And Nereus crownes with cups; his mates him pledg around.

1 Much like when the beaten mariner 2 (That long has wandered in the ocean wide, 3 Oft soused in swelling Tethys' saltish tear,

saltish > salty

4 And long time having tanned his tawny hide 5 With blustering breath of heaven, that none can abide, 6 And scorching flames of fierce Orion's hound),

Orion's hound > (Sirius, in the constellation of Canis Major, one of Orion's two hounds; Orion is the giant hunter battling Taurus: cf. 103.16:1. Sirius is the brightest star in the sky, ascendant during the "dog days" of July and August, "at which time the Dogge starre, which is called Syrius, or Canicula, reigneth with immoderate heate, causing pestilence, drougth, and many diseases" (SC, gloss to "Julye"))

7 Soon as the port from far he has spied,

Soon > [As soon]

8 His cheerful whistle merrily does sound, 9 And Nereus crowns with cups; his mates him pledge around.

Nereus > (One of the sea deities, son of Tethys; see 304.19:4, 411.18-19) crowns > [he] crowns, honours; hence: renders thanks to him pledge around > [drink a toast to him]

103.32

   Such ioy made Vna, when her knight she found;
2 And eke th'enchaunter ioyous seemd no lesse,
     Then the glad marchant, that does vew from ground
4 His ship farre come from watrie wildernesse,
     He hurles out vowes, and Neptune oft doth blesse:
6 So forth they past, and all the way they spent
     Discoursing of her dreadfull late distresse,
8 In which he askt her, what the Lyon ment:
   Who +told+ +her all that+ fell in iourney as she went.

9 told > told, 1609 9 her all that > all that her sugg. Smith

1 Such joy made Una, when her knight she found; 2 And eke the enchanter joyous seemed no less

eke > moreover, also

3 Than the glad merchant, that does view from ground 4 His ship far come from watery wilderness; 5 He hurls out vows, and Neptune oft does bless.

Neptune > (God of the sea)

6 So forth they passed, and all the way they spent 7 Discoursing of her dreadful late distress, 8 In which he asked her what the lion meant: 9 Who told her all that fell, in journey as she went.

her all that fell > [all that befell her]

103.33

   They had not ridden farre, when they might see
2 One pricking towards them with hastie heat,
     Full strongly armd, and on a courser free,
4 That through his fiercenesse fomed all with sweat,
     And the sharpe yron did for anger eat,
6 When his hot ryder spurd his chauffed side;
     His looke was sterne, and seemed still to threat
8 Cruell reuenge, which he in hart did hyde,
   And on his shield Sans loy in bloudie lines was dyde.

1 They had not ridden far, when they might see

might > could

2 One pricking towards them with hasty heat,

pricking > spurring [his horse], riding heat > (Referring to the "humours" of medieval physiology)

3 Full strongly armed, and on a courser free

Full > Very, exceedingly free > willing, eager (cf. 102.8:4)

4 That through his fierceness foamed all with sweat, 5 And the sharp iron did for anger eat,

sharp > [deliberately] roughened iron > bit

6 When his hot rider spurred his chafed side;

chafed > chafed; heated; angry

7 His look was stern, and seemed still to threaten

stern > fierce, grim still > continually

8 Cruel revenge, which he in heart did hide, 9 And on his shield Sansloy in bloody lines was dyed.

103.34

   When nigh he drew vnto this gentle payre
2 And saw the Red-crosse, which the knight did beare,
     He burnt in fire, and gan eftsoones prepare
4 Himselfe to battell with his couched speare.
     Loth was that other, and did faint through +feare+,
6 To taste th'vntryed dint of deadly steele;
     But yet his Lady did so well him cheare,
8 That hope of new good hap he gan to feele;
   So bent his speare, and +spurnd+ his horse with yron heele.

5 feare > fe a 1596 9 spurnd > spurd 1590

1 When nigh he drew to this gentle pair

gentle > noble

2 And saw the red cross which the knight did bear, 3 He burnt in fire, and gan eftsoons prepare

gan > did eftsoons > forthwith

4 Himself to battle with his couched spear.

couched > {Placed in its rest and lowered, ready for attack}

5 Loath was that other, and did faint through fear,

other > (Relative to the Redcross Knight as well as Sansloy: i.e. Archimago, that other Knight of the Redcross) faint > lose heart

6 To taste the untried dint of deadly steel;

dint > blow, impact

7 But yet his lady did so well him cheer, 8 That hope of new good hap he began to feel;

hap > fortune

9 So bent his spear, and spurred his horse with iron heel.

bent > inclined, turned

103.35

   But that proud Paynim forward came so +fierce+,
2 And full of wrath, that with his sharp-head speare
     Through vainely crossed shield he quite did +pierce,+
4 And had his staggering steede not +shrunke+ for feare,
     Through shield and bodie eke he should him beare:
6 Yet so great was the puissance of his push,
     That from his saddle quite he did him beare:
8 He tombling rudely downe to ground did rush,
   And from his gored wound a well of bloud did gush.

1 fierce > ferce 1590 3 pierce, > perce; 1590 4 shrunke > shronke 1590

1 But that proud paynim forward came so fierce

paynim > pagan, heathen

2 And full of wrath, that, with his sharp-head spear, 3 Through vainly crossed shield he quite did pierce;

vainly crossed > (Because its cross is counterfeit)

4 And, had his staggering steed not shrunk for fear, 5 Through shield and body eke he should him bear:

eke > also; hence: both bear > [have] thrust

6 Yet so great was the puissance of his push,

puissance > power

7 That from his saddle quite he did him bear:

bear > carry

8 He tumbling rudely down to ground did rush,

He > (The phrasing of this line is ambiguous: (1) He, tumbling rudely down, to ground did rush; (2) He, tumbling rudely, down to ground did rush) rudely > clumsily, violently

9 And from his gored wound a well of blood did gush.

103.36

   Dismounting lightly from his loftie steed,
2 He to him lept, in mind to reaue his life,
     And proudly said, Lo there the worthie meed
4 Of him, that slew Sansfoy with bloudie knife;
     Henceforth his ghost freed from repining strife,
6 In peace may passen ouer Lethe lake,
     When +morning+ altars purgd with enemies life,
8 The blacke infernall Furies doen aslake:
   Life from Sansfoy thou tookst, Sansloy shall from thee take.

7 morning > mourning 1590, 1609

1 Dismounting lightly from his lofty steed,

lightly > quickly, lightly

2 He to him leapt, in mind to reave his life,

reave > take away

3 And proudly said, "Lo, there the worthy meed

meed > reward

4 Of him that slew Sansfoy with bloody knife;

knife > sword

5 Henceforth his ghost, freed from repining strife,

ghost > spirit, soul repining > fretting, fretful

6 In peace may pass over Lethe Lake,

Lethe > (A river in hell; those who drink from it lose all memory of their former life and become purified; see SC, gloss to "March", Aen. 6.745-51, PL 2.604)

7 When mourning altars, purged with enemy's life,

purged > purified

8 The black infernal Furies do aslake:

Furies > (In later accounts, Tisiphone, Megaera, and Alecto, three goddesses who guard the gates of hell; in earlier accounts, they are avenging deities, of indeterminate number, sent from hell to punish wrongdoers) aslake > assuage; cool

9 Life from Sansfoy you took, Sansloy shall from you take."

Life > [That life which; see 102.15-19]

103.37

   Therewith in haste his helmet gan vnlace,
2 Till Vna cride, O hold that heauie hand,
     Deare Sir, what euer that thou be in place:
4 Enough is, that thy foe doth vanquisht stand
     Now at thy mercy: Mercie not withstand:
6 For he is one the truest knight aliue,
     Though conquered now he lie on lowly land,
8 And whilest him fortune fauourd, faire did thriue
   In bloudie field: therefore of life him not depriue.

1 Therewith in haste his helmet gan unlace,

Therewith > With that; thereupon gan > [he] began to unlace > remove (prior to decapitating the vanquished)

2 Till Una cried, "O hold that heavy hand, 3 Dear sir, whatever you be in place:

in place > here; in rank, in sort [whatever you be in place = whoever you are]

4 Enough is, that your foe does vanquished stand 5 Now at your mercy. Mercy not withstand:

not withstand > do not stand in the way of, oppose; hence: deny

6 For he is one the truest knight alive,

one the > [the one; the]

7 Though conquered now he lies on lowly land; 8 And, whilst him fortune favoured, fair did thrive 9 In bloody field: therefore, of life him not deprive."

field > field of battle, battle

103.38

   Her piteous words might not abate his rage,
2 But rudely rending vp his helmet, would
     Haue slaine him straight: but when he sees his age,
4 And hoarie head of Archimago old,
     His hastie hand he doth amazed hold,
6 And halfe ashamed, wondred at the sight:
     For +the+ old man well knew he, though vntold,
8 In charmes and magicke to haue wondrous might,
   Ne euer wont in field, ne in round lists to fight.

7 the > that FE, probably referring to this line rather than line 6

1 Her piteous words might not abate his rage,

might > could

2 But, rudely rending up his helmet, would

rudely > roughly would > [he would]

3 Have slain him straight: but when he sees his age,

straight > straightway, immediately

4 And hoary head of Archimago old, 5 His hasty hand he does amazed hold, 6 And half ashamed, wondered at the sight:

wondered > marvelled

7 For that old man well knew he, though untold,

untold > [without needing to be told]

8 In charms and magic to have wondrous might, 9 Neither ever wont in field, nor in round lists, to fight.

wont > accustomed field > battle round lists > enclosures for tourneys ("lists" were the palisades enclosing the tilting-ground)

103.39

   And said, Why Archimago, lucklesse syre,
2 What doe I see? what hard mishap is this,
     That hath thee hither brought to taste mine yre?
4 Or thine the fault, or mine the error is,
     In stead of foe to wound my friend amis?
6 He answered nought, but in a traunce still lay,
     And on those guilefull dazed eyes of his
8 The cloud of death did sit. Which doen away,
   He left him lying so, ne would no lenger stay.

1 And said, "Why Archimago, luckless sire,

sire > {Aged or elderly man; father; the original form of "sir"}

2 What do I see? What hard mishap is this, 3 That has you hither brought to taste my ire? 4 Or yours the fault, or mine the error is,

Or > Either

5 Instead of foe to wound my friend amiss?" 6 He answered naught, but in a trance still lay,

still > motionless; yet

7 And on those guileful dazed eyes of his 8 The cloud of death did sit. Which done away,

Which done away > [When the swoon had passed]

9 He left him lying so, nor would no longer stay.

nor would no > [neither would any]

103.40

   But to the virgin comes, who all this while
2 Amased stands, her selfe so mockt to see
     By him, who has the guerdon of his guile,
4 For so misfeigning her true knight to bee:
     Yet is she now in more perplexitie,
6 Left in the hand of that same Paynim bold,
     From whom her booteth not at all to flie;
8 Who by her cleanly garment catching hold,
   Her from her Palfrey pluckt, her visage to behold.

1 But to the virgin comes; who all this while 2 Amazed stands, herself so mocked to see

herself so mocked to see > [to see herself so mocked]

3 By him, who has the guerdon of his guile,

guerdon > reward

4 For so misfeigning her true knight to be:

misfeigning > pretending

5 Yet is she now in more perplexity,

perplexity > trouble, distress

6 Left in the hand of that same paynim bold,

paynim > pagan, heathen

7 From whom her boots not at all to fly;

her boots > it avails her fly > flee

8 Who, by her cleanly garment catching hold,

cleanly > {Clean, neat, elegant; morally or spiritually clean}

9 Her from her palfrey plucked, her visage to behold.

palfrey > {Saddle-horse for ladies}

103.41

   But her fierce seruant full of kingly awe
2 And high disdaine, whenas his soueraine Dame
     So rudely handled by her foe he sawe,
4 With gaping iawes full greedy at him came,
     And ramping on his shield, did weene the same
6 Haue reft away with his sharpe rending clawes:
     But he was stout, and lust did now inflame
8 His corage more, that from his griping pawes
   He hath his shield redeem'd, and +foorth+ his +swerd+ he drawes.

9 foorth > forth 1590 9 swerd > sword 1609

1 But her fierce servant, full of kingly awe

awe > fierceness, rage; power to inspire fear

2 And high disdain, when his sovereign dame

disdain > indignation

3 So rudely handled by her foe he saw,

rudely > roughly, violently

4 With gaping jaws full greedy at him came,

full greedy > very reckless; very recklessly

5 And, ramping on his shield, did ween the same

ramping > leaping, rearing up ween > mean, intend

6 Have reft away with his sharp rending claws:

Have > [To have] reft > taken, torn

7 But he was stout, and lust did now inflame

he > [Sansloy] stout > bold, brave; resolute; physically robust

8 His courage more, that from his gripping paws

that > [so that]

9 He has his shield redeemed, and forth his sword he draws.

redeemed > recovered, recovered by force

103.42

   O then too weake and feeble was the forse
2 Of saluage beast, his puissance to withstand:
     For he was strong, and of so mightie corse,
4 As euer wielded speare in warlike hand,
     And feates of armes did wisely vnderstand.
6 Eftsoones he perced through his chaufed chest
     With thrilling point of deadly yron brand,
8 And launcht his Lordly hart: with death opprest
   He roar'd aloud, whiles life forsooke his stubborne brest.

1 O then too weak and feeble was the force 2 Of savage beast, his puissance to withstand:

savage > wild puissance > strength

3 For he was strong, and of so mighty corse,

so mighty > [as mighty a] corse > body; hence: physique

4 As ever wielded spear in warlike hand,

As > [As any who]

5 And feats of arms did wisely understand.

wisely > expertly

6 Eftsoons he pierced through his chafed chest

Eftsoons > Thereupon chafed > angry

7 With thrilling point of deadly iron brand,

thrilling > piercing brand > sword

8 And lanced his lordly heart: with death oppressed 9 He roared aloud, while life forsook his stubborn breast.

103.43

   Who now is left to keepe the forlorne maid
2 From raging spoile of lawlesse victors will?
     Her faithfull gard remou'd, her hope dismaid,
4 Her selfe a yeelded pray to saue or spill.
     He now Lord of the +field+, his pride to fill,
6 With foule reproches, and disdainfull spight
     Her vildly entertaines, and will or nill,
8 Beares her away vpon his courser light:
   Her prayers nought preuaile, his rage is more of might.

5 field > fied 1596

1 Who now is left to keep the forlorn maid 2 From raging spoil of lawless victor's will?

From > [From becoming the] of > [of the]

3 Her faithful guard removed, her hope dismayed, 4 Herself a yielded prey to save or spill.

spill > destroy

5 He, now lord of the field, his pride to fill,

He, now lord > (Or: He now, lord)

6 With foul reproaches and disdainful spite

disdainful > hateful; angry; contemptuous

7 Her vilely entertains and, will or nill,

entertains > treats will or nill > willy-nilly, will or will not

8 Bears her away upon his courser light:

light > eager, willing (cf. 103.33:3); or: easily, quickly

9 Her prayers naught prevail, his rage is more of might.

more of might > stronger

103.44

   And all the way, with great lamenting paine,
2 And piteous plaints she filleth his dull eares,
     That stony hart could riuen haue in twaine,
4 And all the way she wets with flowing teares:
     But he enrag'd with rancor, nothing heares.
6 Her seruile beast yet would not leaue her so,
     But followes her farre off, ne ought he feares,
8 To be partaker of her wandring woe,
   More mild in beastly kind, then that her beastly foe.

1 And all the way, with great lamenting pain 2 And piteous plaints she fills his dull ears,

plaints > lamentations dull > deaf

3 That stony heart could rived have in twain,

rived > split

4 And all the way she wets with flowing tears: 5 But he, enraged with rancour, nothing hears. 6 Her servile beast yet would not leave her so,

beast > [horse]

7 But follows her far off (nor aught he fears)

aught > anything at all

8 To be partaker of her wandering woe,

partaker of > [a] participant in

9 More mild, in beastly kind, than her beastly foe.

beastly > animal, beast-like kind > nature beastly > vile, despicable

CANTO IIII

   To sinfull house of Pride, Duessa
2 guides the faithfull knight,
   Where brothers death to wreak Sansioy
4 doth chalenge him to fight.

1 To sinful House of Pride Duessa 2 guides the faithful knight; 3 Where, brother's death to wreak, Sansjoy

wreak > avenge

4 does challenge him to fight.

104.1

   YOung knight, what euer that dost armes professe,
2 And through long labours huntest after fame,
     Beware of fraud, beware of ficklenesse,
4 In choice, and change of thy deare loued Dame,
     Least thou of her beleeue too lightly blame,
6 And rash misweening doe thy hart remoue:
     For vnto knight there is no greater shame,
8 Then lightnesse and inconstancie in loue;
   That doth this Redcrosse knights ensample plainly proue.

1 Young knight, whatever that do arms profess,

whatever that > whoever [you are] that arms > feats of arms profess > lay claim to, pretend to

2 And through long labours hunt after fame, 3 Beware of fraud, beware of fickleness,

fraud > faithlessness

4 In choice, and change of your dear-loved dame, 5 Lest you of her believe too lightly blame,

blame > accusation, charge; blame

6 And, rash misweening, do your heart remove:

rash misweening > rashly misunderstanding

7 For to knight there is no greater shame 8 Than lightness and inconstancy in love; 9 That does this Redcross Knight's example plainly prove.

104.2

   Who after that he had faire Vna lorne,
2 Through light misdeeming of her loialtie,
     And false Duessa in her sted had borne,
4 Called Fidess', and so supposd to bee;
     Long with her traueild, till at last they see
6 A goodly building, brauely garnished,
     The house of mightie Prince it seemd to bee:
8 And towards it a broad high way that led,
   All bare through peoples feet, which thither traueiled.

1 Who, after he had fair Una forlorn,

forlorn > lost; left, forsaken (catachr.)

2 Through light misdeeming of her loyalty,

misdeeming > misjudgement

3 And false Duessa in her stead had borne,

borne > taken as a companion

4 Called "Fidessa", and so supposed to be; 5 Long with her travelled, till at last they see 6 A goodly building, bravely garnished,

goodly > fine, beautiful bravely garnished > splendidly adorned

7 The house of mighty prince it seemed to be: 8 And towards it a broad highway that led,

broad highway > (See Matt. 7.13)

9 All bare through people's feet, which thither travelled.

people's feet, which > [the feet of people who]

104.3

   Great troupes of people traueild thitherward
2 Both day and night, of each degree and place,
     But few returned, hauing scaped hard,
4 With balefull beggerie, or foule disgrace,
     Which euer after in most wretched case,
6 Like loathsome lazars, by the hedges lay.
     Thither Duessa bad him bend his pace:
8 For she is wearie of the toilesome way,
   And also nigh consumed is the lingring day.

1 Great troops of people travelled thitherward

thitherward > towards there, thither

2 Both day and night, of each degree and place,

place > rank

3 But few returned, having scaped hard,

scaped hard > escaped with difficulty

4 With baleful beggary, or foul disgrace,

baleful > deadly, miserable

5 Which ever after, in most wretched case,

case > plight

6 Like loathsome lazars, by the hedges lay.

lazars > lepers

7 Thither Duessa bade him bend his pace:

bend > incline; turn, hence: divert (including sense of "diverting from the true path")

8 For she is weary of the toilsome way,

toilsome > wearisome

9 And also nigh consumed is the lingering day.

104.4

   A stately Pallace built of squared bricke,
2 Which cunningly was without morter laid,
     Whose wals were high, but nothing strong, nor thick,
4 And golden foile all ouer them displaid,
     That purest skye with brightnesse they dismaid:
6 High lifted vp were many loftie towres,
     And goodly galleries farre ouer laid,
8 Full of faire windowes, and delightfull bowres;
   And on the top a Diall told the timely howres.

1 A stately palace built of squared brick, 2 Which cunningly was without mortar laid, 3 Whose walls were high, but nothing strong, nor thick,

nothing > not at all, in no way

4 And golden foil all over them displayed, 5 That purest sky with brightness they dismayed:

That > [So that the]

6 High lifted up were many lofty towers, 7 And goodly galleries far over laid,

goodly > fine, beautiful far over laid > placed high above

8 Full of fair windows, and delightful bowers;

bowers > chambers, rooms

9 And on the top a dial told the timely hours.

104.5

   It was a goodly heape for to behould,
2 And spake the praises of the workmans wit;
     But full great pittie, that so faire a mould
4 Did on so weake foundation euer sit:
     For on a sandie hill, that still did flit,
6 And fall away, it mounted was full hie,
     That euery breath of heauen shaked it:
8 And all the hinder parts, that few could spie,
   Were ruinous and old, but painted cunningly.

1 It was a goodly heap to behold,

goodly > fine, beautiful heap > pile; hence: large building

2 And spoke the praises of the workman's wit;

wit > skill

3 But full great pity, that so fair a mould

full > very, exceedingly mould > form, structure

4 Did on so weak foundation ever sit:

so > such [a]

5 For on a sandy hill, that still did flit

still > continually flit > yield, crumble (see Matt. 7.26-7)

6 And fall away, it mounted was full high,

full > very, exceedingly

7 That every breath of heaven shook it:

That > [So that]

8 And all the hinder parts, that few could spy, 9 Were ruinous and old, but painted cunningly.

104.6

   Arriued there they passed in forth right;
2 For still to all the gates stood open wide,
     Yet charge of them was to a Porter hight
4 Cald Maluen{u\}, who entrance none denide:
     Thence to the hall, which was on euery side
6 With rich array and costly arras dight:
     Infinite sorts of people did abide
8 There waiting long, to win the wished sight
   Of her, that was the Lady of that Pallace bright.

1 Arrived there, they passed in forthright;

forthright > straightway; directly forward

2 For still to all the gates stood open wide,

still > ever, continually

3 Yet charge of them was to a porter hight,

hight > committed, entrusted (SUS)

4 Called Malven{u\}, who entrance none denied:

Malven{u\} > "Ill-welcome"; "Welcome to Evil"

5 Thence to the hall, which was on every side 6 With rich array and costly arras dight:

arras > {Tapestry wall-hanging, screen} dight > decked

7 Infinite sorts of people did abide

sorts > kinds; companies

8 There waiting long, to win the wished sight 9 Of her, that was the lady of that palace bright.

104.7

   By them they passe, all gazing on them round,
2 And to the Presence mount; whose glorious vew
     Their frayle amazed senses did confound:
4 In liuing Princes court none euer knew
     Such endlesse richesse, and so sumptuous shew;
6 Ne Persia selfe, the nourse of pompous pride
     Like euer saw. And there a noble crew
8 Of Lordes and Ladies stood on euery side,
   Which with their presence faire, the place much beautifide.

1 By them they pass, all gazing on them round,

round > from all sides

2 And to the presence mount; whose glorious view

presence > presence-chamber (where a sovereign receives guests) view > appearance

3 Their frail amazed senses did confound:

frail > {Weak; morally weak, unable to resist temptation}

4 In living prince's court none ever knew 5 Such endless richesse, and so sumptuous show;

richesse > opulence so sumptuous > such sumptuous; such a sumptuous; so sumptuous a

6 Nor Persia herself, the nurse of pompous pride, 7 Like ever saw. And there a noble crew 8 Of lords and ladies stood on every side, 9 Who, with their presence fair, the place much beautified.

104.8

   High aboue all a cloth of State was spred,
2 And a rich throne, as bright as sunny day,
     On which there sate most braue embellished
4 With royall robes and gorgeous array,
     A mayden Queene, that shone as Titans ray,
6 In glistring gold, and peerelesse pretious stone:
     Yet her bright blazing beautie did assay
8 To dim the brightnesse of her glorious throne,
   As enuying her selfe, that too exceeding shone.

1 High above all a cloth of state was spread,

cloth of state > {Baldachin, canopy suspended on pillars above throne}

2 And a rich throne, as bright as sunny day, 3 On which there sat, most brave embellished

brave > splendidly

4 With royal robes and gorgeous array, 5 A maiden queen, that shone as Titan's ray,

that > who (if the pronoun refers to Lucifera rather than the throne; the intention is not entirely clear) Titan > (The sun personified. In this context the name also brings to mind the Titans, who sought to dethrone Zeus (Jove); they are synonymous with rebellion and the overthrow of order. And the phrase "Titans ray" prepares the reader for a description of Phaethon in the next stanza)

6 In glistering gold and peerless precious stone: 7 Yet her bright blazing beauty did essay

essay > attempt

8 To dim the brightness of her glorious throne, 9 As envying herself, that too exceeding shone.

104.9

   Exceeding shone, like Ph{oe}bus fairest childe,
2 That did presume his fathers firie wayne,
     And flaming mouthes of steedes vnwonted wilde
4 Through highest heauen with weaker hand to rayne;
     Proud of such glory and aduancement vaine,
6 While flashing beames do daze his feeble eyen,
     He leaues the welkin way most beaten plaine,
8 And rapt with whirling wheeles, inflames the skyen,
   With fire not made to burne, but fairely for to shyne.

1 Exceeding shone, like Phoebus' fairest child,

Phoebus' fairest child > (Phaethon, son of Phoebus Apollo [Titan], who took his father's chariot and set the world on fire: killed by Jupiter with a thunderbolt. See 311.38, Met. 2.1 ff.)

2 That did presume his father's fiery wain

presume > usurp wain > chariot

3 And flaming mouths of steeds, unwonted wild

mouths > [control] unwonted > unaccustomedly, unusually (referring to Phaethon's handling of the reins)

4 Through highest heaven with weaker hand to rein;

weaker > too-weak; or: weaker (than his father's hand) rein > (Or reign; a typically Spenserian pun)

5 Proud of such glory and advancement vain, 6 While flashing beams do daze his feeble eyes, 7 He leaves the welkin way most beaten plain,

welkin > {Sky, skyey, heavenly; welkin way: the sun's path through the sky}

8 And, rapt with whirling wheels, inflames the skies

rapt > carried away, enraptured

9 With fire not made to burn, but fairly to shine.

fairly > gently, entirely, properly

104.10

   So proud she shyned in her Princely state,
2 Looking to heauen; for earth she did disdayne,
     And sitting high; for lowly she did hate:
4 Lo vnderneath her scornefull feete, was layne
     A dreadfull Dragon with an hideous trayne,
6 And in her hand she held a mirrhour bright,
     Wherein her face she often vewed fayne,
8 And in her selfe-lou'd semblance tooke delight;
   For she was wondrous faire, as any liuing wight.

1 So proud she shone in her princely state,

state > canopied throne; rank, condition

2 Looking to heaven; for earth she did disdain, 3 And sitting high (for lowly she did hate),

lowly > {Lowliness, humbleness; that which is, or they who are, lowly}

4 Lo underneath her scornful feet was lain 5 A dreadful dragon with a hideous train;

hideous > immense train > tail

6 And in her hand she held a mirror bright, 7 Wherein her face she often viewed fain,

fain > gladly, eagerly

8 And in her self-loved semblance took delight; 9 For she was wondrous fair, as any living wight.

wight > person, woman

104.11

   Of griesly Pluto she the daughter was,
2 And sad Proserpina the Queene of hell;
     Yet did she thinke her pearelesse +worth+ to pas
4 That parentage, with pride so did she swell,
     And thundring Ioue, that high in heauen doth dwell,
6 And wield the world, she claymed for her syre,
     Or if that any else did Ioue excell:
8 For to the highest she did still aspyre,
   Or if ought higher were then that, did it desyre.

3 worth > wroth 1596

1 Of grisly Pluto she the daughter was,

grisly > horrible, fearsome

2 And sad Proserpine, the queen of hell; 3 Yet did she think her peerless worth to pass

pass > excel, surpass

4 That parentage, with pride so did she swell; 5 And thundering Jove, that high in heaven does dwell

Jove > (Here, "Jupiter Tonans", lord of the thunderbolt; he killed
Phaethon with a bolt of lightning)

6 And wield the world, she claimed for her sire,

wield > rule, reign over sire > father

7 Or if that any else did Jove excel:

that any else > any else [that]

8 For to the highest she did still aspire, 9 Or, if aught higher were than that, did it desire.

104.12

   And proud Lucifera men did her call,
2 That made her selfe +a+ Queene, and crownd to be,
     Yet rightfull kingdome she had none at all,
4 Ne heritage of natiue soueraintie,
     But did vsurpe with wrong and tyrannie
6 Vpon the scepter, which she now did hold:
     Ne ruld her +Realmes+ with lawes, but pollicie,
8 And strong aduizement of six wisards old,
   That with their counsels bad her kingdome did vphold.

2 a > omitted from 1596 7 Realmes > Realme 1590

1 And proud Lucifera men did her call,

Lucifera > (Derived from "Lucifer", meaning "Light-bringer": a name for Satan, and for Venus as the morning star)

2 Who made herself a queen, and crowned to be; 3 Yet rightful kingdom she had none at all, 4 Nor heritage of native sovereignty,

native > {Rightful, by right of birth}

5 But did usurp with wrong and tyranny 6 Upon the sceptre which she now did hold:

Upon the > [The]

7 Nor ruled her realms with laws, but policy,

policy > political cunning, artfulness

8 And strong advisement of six wizards old,

advisement > advice six wizards > (Wizard = sage, here used derisively. The six are Sloth, Gluttony, Lechery, Avarice, Envy and Wrath, described in 104.18-35. Together with Lucifera herself, Pride, they comprise the Seven Deadly Sins)

9 That, with their counsels bad, her kingdom did uphold.

104.13

   Soone as the +Elfin+ knight in presence came,
2 And false Duessa seeming Lady faire,
     A gentle Husher, Vanitie by name
4 Made rowme, and passage for them did prepaire:
     So goodly brought them to the lowest staire
6 Of her high throne, where they on humble knee
     Making +obeyssance+, did the cause declare,
8 Why they were come, her royall state to see,
   To proue the wide report of her great Maiestee.

1 Elfin > Elfing 1596 7 obeyssance > obeisance 1609

1 Soon as the Elfin knight in presence came

Soon > [As soon] presence > presence-chamber (where a sovereign receives visitors)

2 (And false Duessa, seeming lady fair), 3 A gentle usher, Vanity by name,

gentle > gentle; noble (used ironically)

4 Made room, and passage for them did prepare: 5 So goodly brought them to the lowest stair

goodly > courteously

6 Of her high throne, where they, on humble knee 7 Making obeisance, did the cause declare

declare > declare, make clear; relate

8 Why they were come, her royal state to see,

state > throne; majesty, pomp

9 To prove the wide report of her great majesty.

prove > confirm by personal experience

104.14

   With loftie eyes, halfe loth to looke so low,
2 She thanked them in her disdainefull wise,
     Ne other grace vouchsafed them to show
4 Of Princesse worthy, scarse them bad arise.
     Her Lordes and Ladies all this while deuise
6 Themselues to setten forth to straungers sight:
     Some frounce their curled haire in courtly guise,
8 Some prancke their ruffes, and others trimly dight
   Their gay attire: each others greater pride does spight.

1 With lofty eyes, half loath to look so low, 2 She thanked them in her disdainful wise,

wise > manner

3 No other grace vouchsafed them to show

No > [But no]

4 Of princess worthy; scarce them bade arise. 5 Her lords and ladies all this while devise

devise > skilfully prepare, contrive; scheme

6 Themselves to set forth to strangers' sight:

set forth > exhibit, show off

7 Some frounce their curled hair in courtly guise;

frounce > twist into folds, plait guise > manner

8 Some prank their ruffs; and others trimly dight

prank > adjust; pleat dight > arrange

9 Their gay attire: each other's greater pride does spite.

spite > begrudge, envy

104.15

   Goodly they all that knight do entertaine,
2 Right glad with him to haue increast their crew:
     But to Duess' each one himselfe did paine
4 All kindnesse and faire courtesie to shew;
     For in that court whylome her well they knew:
6 Yet the stout Faerie mongst the middest crowd
     Thought all their glorie vaine in knightly vew,
8 And that great Princesse too exceeding prowd,
   That to strange knight no better countenance allowd.

1 Goodly they all that knight do entertain,

Goodly > Courteously entertain > receive

2 Right glad with him to have increased their crew:

Right > Very

3 But to Duessa each one himself did pain 4 All kindness and fair courtesy to show; 5 For in that court whilom her well they knew:

whilom > of old, formerly

6 Yet the stout Faery amongst the middest crowd

stout > unyielding; proud; brave, bold middest > midmost

7 Thought all their glory vain in knightly view,

vain > foolish; empty

8 And that great princess too exceeding proud, 9 That to strange knight no better countenance allowed.

strange > foreign; new-come countenance > demeanour

104.16

   Suddein vpriseth from her stately place
2 The royall Dame, and for her coche doth call:
     All +hurtlen+ forth, and she with Princely pace,
4 As faire Aurora in her purple pall,
     Out of the East the dawning day doth call:
6 So forth she comes: her brightnesse brode doth blaze;
     The heapes of people thronging in the hall,
8 Do ride each other, vpon her to gaze:
   Her glorious +glitterand+ light doth all mens eyes amaze.

3 hurtlen > hurlen 1609; cf. 104.40:1, 111.23:1, 205.8:7, 207.42:3 9 glitterand > glitter and 1596, 1609

1 Sudden uprises from her stately place 2 The royal dame, and for her coach does call: 3 All hurtle forth, and she with princely pace

hurtle > rush, dash pace > movement, motion; step

4 (As fair Aurora, in her purple pall,

Aurora > (Goddess of the dawn; "Lucifer" means "Light-bringer", and is one name for the morning star) pall > cloak (esp. of rich material)

5 Out of the east the dawning day does call): 6 So forth she comes; her brightness broad does blaze;

broad > abroad; broadly

7 The heaps of people thronging in the hall 8 Do ride each other, upon her to gaze: 9 Her glorious glittering light does all men's eyes amaze.

104.17

   So forth she comes, and to her coche does clyme,
2 Adorned all with gold, and girlonds gay,
     That seemd as fresh as Flora in her prime,
4 And stroue to match, in royall rich array,
     Great Iunoes golden chaire, the which they say
6 The Gods stand gazing on, when she does ride
     To Ioues high house through heauens bras-paued way
8 Drawne of faire Pecocks, that excell in pride,
   And full of Argus eyes their tailes dispredden wide.

1 So forth she comes, and to her coach does climb,
2 Adorned all with gold, and garlands gay,
3 That seemed as fresh as Flora in her prime,
4 And strove to match, in royal rich array,
5 Great Juno's golden chair; which, they say,

chair > chariot (see Iliad 5.727. Juno is the queen of the gods, sister and wife of Jupiter)

6 The gods stand gazing on, when she does ride 7 To Jove's high house through heaven's brass-paved way,

To Jove's high house > (See Met. 2.533 ff.) heaven's brass-paved way > (See Iliad 14.173)

8 Drawn of fair peacocks, that excel in pride,

of > by excel > surpass [all] others

9 And full of Argus eyes their tails dispread wide.

Argus > (Argus Panoptes, watchman with a hundred eyes, set by Juno to watch Io and killed by Mercury; Juno placed his eyes in the tail of the peacock. See Met. 1.622-723; SC, gloss to "Julye" and to "October") dispread > spread out

104.18

   But this was drawne of six vnequall beasts,
2 On which her six sage Counsellours did ryde,
     Taught to obay their bestiall beheasts,
4 With like conditions to their kinds applyde:
     Of which the first, that all the rest did guyde,
6 Was sluggish Idlenesse the nourse of sin;
     Vpon a slouthfull Asse he chose to ryde,
8 Arayd in habit blacke, and amis thin,
   Like to an holy Monck, the seruice to begin.

1 But this was drawn of six unequal beasts,

of > by unequal > different, ill-matched

2 On which her six sage counsellors did ride, 3 Taught to obey their bestial behests, 4 With like conditions to their kinds applied:

With like conditions to their kinds applied > (Literally, "With similar qualities to their natures employed"; each beast was appropriate to its rider)

5 Of which the first, that all the rest did guide, 6 Was sluggish Idleness, the nurse of sin;

Idleness > [Sloth]

7 Upon a slothful ass he chose to ride, 8 Arrayed in a habit black, and amice thin,

amice > cap, hood, cape (of some religious order)

9 Like a holy monk, the service to begin.

104.19

   And in his hand his Portesse still he bare,
2 That much was worne, but therein little red,
     For of deuotion he had little care,
4 Still drownd in sleepe, and most of his dayes ded;
     Scarse could he once vphold his heauie hed,
6 To looken, whether it were night or day:
     May seeme the wayne was very euill led,
8 When such an one had guiding of the way,
   That knew not, whether right he went, or else astray.

1 And in his hand his portas still he bore,

portas > {Portable breviary, Roman Catholic prayer-book containing the Divine Office for each day} still > ever, continually

2 That much was worn, but therein little read,

therein little > [little]

3 For of devotion he had little care, 4 Still drowned in sleep, and most of his days dead;

Still > Ever

5 Scarce could he once uphold his heavy head, 6 To look whether it were night or day: 7 May seem the wain was very evil led,

May > [It may] wain > carriage, wagon; hence: coach

8 When such a one had guiding of the way, 9 That knew not whether right he went, or else astray.

104.20

   From worldly cares himselfe he did esloyne,
2 And greatly shunned manly exercise,
     +From+ euery worke he chalenged essoyne,
4 For contemplation sake: yet otherwise,
     His life he led in lawlesse riotise;
6 By which he grew to grieuous malady;
     For in his lustlesse limbs through euill guise
8 A shaking feuer raignd continually:
   Such one was Idlenesse, first of this company.

3 From > For 1596, 1609

1 From worldly cares himself he did eloin,

eloin > remove, withdraw (as if from legal jurisdiction)

2 And greatly shunned manly exercise, 3 From every work he challenged essoin,

challenged essoin > claimed exemption (another legal term)

4 For contemplation's sake: yet otherwise 5 His life he led in lawless riotise,

riotise > indulgence, dissipation

6 By which he grew to grievous malady; 7 For in his lustless limbs, through evil guise,

lustless > {Listless; joyless, lacking pleasure or delight} guise > mode of life

8 A shaking fever reigned continually: 9 Such one was Idleness, first of this company.

104.21

   And by his side rode loathsome Gluttony,
2 Deformed creature, on a filthie swyne,
     His belly was vp-blowne with luxury,
4 And eke with fatnesse swollen were his eyne,
     And like a Crane his necke was long and fyne,
6 With which he swallowd vp excessiue feast,
     For want whereof poore people oft did pyne;
8 And all the way, most like a brutish beast,
   He spued vp his gorge, that all did him deteast.

1 And by his side rode loathsome Gluttony, 2 Deformed creature, on a filthy swine; 3 His belly was up-blown with luxury,

up-blown > swollen luxury > surfeit, excess; dissipation

4 And eke with fatness swollen were his eyes;

eke > moreover

5 And, like a crane's, his neck was long and fine,

fine > thin, scrawny

6 With which he swallowed up excessive feast,

excessive > greedy, excessive; intemperate

7 For want whereof poor people oft did pine;

pine > waste away

8 And all the way, most like a brutish beast, 9 He spewed up his gorge, that all did him detest.

gorge > {Contents of stomach} that > [so that]

104.22

   In greene vine leaues he was right fitly clad;
2 For other clothes he could not weare for heat,
     And on his head an yuie girland had,
4 From vnder which fast trickled downe the sweat:
     Still as he rode, he somewhat still did eat,
6 And in his hand did beare a bouzing can,
     Of which he supt so oft, that on his seat
8 His dronken corse he scarse vpholden can,
   In shape and life more like a monster, then a man.

1 In green vine-leaves he was right fitly clad:

fitly > (Spenser's Gluttony recalls Silenus (Met. 4.26-7, 11.89- 99); Silenus was the foster-father of Bacchus, god of wine)

2 For other clothes he could not wear for heat, 3 And on his head an ivy garland had,

ivy > (Sacred to Bacchus)

4 From under which fast trickled down the sweat. 5 Still as he rode he somewhat still did eat,

Still > Continually somewhat > a little, something

6 And in his hand did bear a boozing can,

boozing > drinking

7 Of which he supped so oft, that on his seat 8 His drunken corse he scarce uphold can,

corse > body

9 In shape and life more like a monster than a man.

104.23

   Vnfit he was for any worldly thing,
2 And eke +vnhable+ once to stirre or go,
     Not meet to be of counsell to a king,
4 Whose mind in meat and drinke was drowned so,
     That from his friend he +seldome+ knew his fo:
6 Full of diseases was his carcas blew,
     And a +dry dropsie+ through his flesh did flow:
8 Which by misdiet daily greater grew:
   Such one was Gluttony, the second of that crew.

2 vnhable > vnable 1609 5 seldome > seeldome 1590; sildom 1609 7 dry dropsie > drydropsie 1590; dire dropsie _conj. Upton after Horace's dirus hydrops; _hydropsy sugg. Collier

1 Unfit he was for any worldly thing, 2 And eke unable once to stir or go;

eke > also once > ever, at all go > walk

3 Not meet to be of counsel to a king,

meet > fit king > [sovereign, i.e. Lucifera]

4 Whose mind in meat and drink was drowned so, 5 That from his friend he seldom knew his foe: 6 Full of diseases was his carcase blue,

blue > (The colour of putrid flesh)

7 And a dry dropsy through his flesh did flow,

dry dropsy > ?swelling, corpulence (a "wet" dropsy is a disease in which watery fluid collects in the tissues and body cavities. See also Textual Appendix)

8 Which by misdiet daily greater grew:

misdiet > improper diet

9 Such one was Gluttony, the second of that crew.

104.24

   And next to him rode lustfull Lechery,
2 Vpon a bearded Goat, whose rugged haire,
     And whally eyes (the signe of gelosy,)
4 Was like the person selfe, whom he did beare:
     Who rough, and blacke, and filthy did appeare,
6 Vnseemely man to please faire Ladies eye;
     Yet he of Ladies oft was loued deare,
8 When fairer faces were bid standen by:
   O who does know the bent of womens fantasy?

1 And next to him rode lustful Lechery,

next to > immediately after; _the arrangement is:

FRONT Sloth Gluttony
Avarice Lechery
Envy Wrath
Satan
BACK Lucifera_

2 Upon a bearded goat, whose rugged hair

rugged > shaggy

3 And wall eyes (the sign of jealousy),

wall > whitely opaque; glaring

4 Was like the person himself whom it did bear:

Was like > [Resembled those of]

5 Who, rough and black, and filthy, did appear

appear > (Or "appear:", meaning "seem", "present himself to view")

6 Unseemly man to please fair ladies' eye; 7 Yet he of ladies oft was loved dear,

of > by

8 When fairer faces were bid to stand by: 9 O who does know the bent of women's fantasy?

104.25

   In a greene gowne he clothed was full faire,
2 Which vnderneath did hide his filthinesse,
     And in his hand a burning hart he bare,
4 Full of vaine follies, and new fanglenesse:
     For he was false, and fraught with ficklenesse,
6 And learned had to loue with secret lookes,
     And well could daunce, and sing with ruefulnesse,
8 And fortunes tell, and read in louing bookes,
   And thousand other wayes, to bait his fleshly hookes.

1 In a green gown he clothed was full fair,

full > very, exceedingly

2 Which underneath did hide his filthiness,

filthiness > obscenity, moral defilement

3 And in his hand a burning heart he bore, 4 Full of vain follies and new-fangleness: 5 For he was false, and fraught with fickleness,

fraught > filled

6 And learned had to love with secret looks, 7 And well could dance, and sing with ruefulness, 8 And fortunes tell, and read in loving books,

loving books > erotica

9 And thousand other ways to bait his fleshly hooks.

fleshly > lustful

104.26

   Inconstant man, that loued all he saw,
2 And lusted after all, that he did loue,
     Ne would his looser life be tide to law,
4 But ioyd weake wemens hearts to +tempt+ and proue
     If from their loyall loues he might them moue;
6 Which lewdnesse fild him with reprochfull paine
     Of that fowle euill, which all men reproue,
8 That rots the marrow, and consumes the braine:
   Such one was Lecherie, the third of all this traine.

4 tempt > tempt, 1590

1 Inconstant man, that loved all he saw, 2 And lusted after all that he did love, 3 Nor would his looser life be tied to law,

looser > too-loose

4 But joyed weak women's hearts to tempt, and prove

prove > test, try

5 If from their loyal loves he might them move; 6 Which lewdness filled him with reproachful pain

reproachful > {Worthy of reproach or censure}

7 Of that foul evil, which all men reprove,

that foul evil > [syphilis; or perhaps leprosy, noted by Hamilton (1980)]

8 That rots the marrow, and consumes the brain: 9 Such one was Lechery, the third of all this train.

104.27

   And greedy Auarice by him did ride,
2 Vpon a Camell loaden all with gold;
     Two iron +coffers+ hong on either side,
4 With precious mettall full, as they might hold,
     And in his lap an heape of coine he told;
6 For of his wicked pelfe his God he made,
     And vnto hell him selfe for money sold;
8 Accursed vsurie was all his trade,
   And right and wrong ylike in equall ballaunce waide.

3 coffers > coffets 1590

1 And greedy Avarice by him did ride,
2 Upon a camel laden all with gold:
3 Two iron coffers hung on either side,
4 With precious metal full as they might hold,

might > could

5 And in his lap a heap of coin he told;

told > counted

6 For of his wicked pelf his god he made,

pelf > money, cash, "filthy lucre"

7 And to hell himself for money sold; 8 Accursed usury was all his trade, 9 And right and wrong alike in equal balance weighed.

104.28

   His life was nigh vnto deaths doore yplast,
2 And thred-bare cote, and cobled shoes he ware,
     Ne scarse good morsell all his life did tast,
4 But both from backe and belly still did spare,
     To fill his bags, and richesse to compare;
6 Yet chylde ne kinsman liuing had he none
     To leaue them to; but thorough daily care
8 To get, and nightly feare to lose his owne,
   He led a wretched life vnto him selfe vnknowne.

1 His life was nigh to death's door placed, 2 And threadbare coat, and cobbled shoes, he wore;

cobbled > mended (usually repeatedly)

3 Nor scarce good morsel all his life did taste, 4 But both from back and belly still did spare,

still > always, continually

5 To fill his bags, and richesse to compare;

richesse > wealth compare > acquire, get

6 Yet child nor kinsman living had he none 7 To leave them to; but through daily care 8 To get, and nightly fear to lose, his own, 9 He led a wretched life, to himself unknown.

life, to himself unknown > [existence, not even realizing it; or, with a change in punctuation: life to himself, unknown (he was a solitary miser). Spenser may have intended both senses]

104.29

   Most wretched wight, whom nothing might suffise,
2 Whose greedy lust did lacke in greatest store,
     Whose need had end, but no end couetise,
4 Whose wealth was want, whose plenty made him pore,
     Who had enough, yet wished +euer more+;
6 A vile disease, and eke in foote and hand
     A grieuous gout tormented him full sore,
8 That well he could not touch, nor go, nor stand:
   Such one was Auarice, the +fourth+ of this faire band.

5 euer more > euermore 1609 9 fourth > forth 1590

1 Most wretched wight, whom nothing might suffice,

wight > creature

2 Whose greedy lust did lack in greatest store,

lust > desire lack in greatest store > (A proverb: He who desires the most lacks the most; lack = want, store = measure)

3 Whose need had end, but no end covetise,

no end covetise > [whose covetousness had no end]

4 Whose wealth was want, whose plenty made him poor, 5 Who had enough, yet wished ever more;

wished ever > [ever wished]

6 A vile disease, and eke in foot and hand

eke > moreover, in addition

7 A grievous gout tormented him full sore,

full > exceedingly

8 That well he could not touch, nor go, nor stand:

That > [So that] go > walk

9 Such one was Avarice, the fourth of this fair band.

104.30

   And next to him malicious Enuie rode,
2 Vpon a rauenous wolfe, and still did chaw
     Betweene his cankred teeth a venemous tode,
4 That all the poison ran about his +chaw+;
     But inwardly he chawed his owne maw
6 At neighbours wealth, that made him euer sad;
     For death it was, when any good he saw,
8 And wept, that cause of weeping none he had,
   But when he heard of harme, he wexed wondrous glad.

4 chaw > jaw 1609

1 And next to him malicious Envy rode

next to > immediately after

2 Upon a ravenous wolf, and still did chaw

still > ever, continually chaw > chew, champ upon; fig.: ruminate, brood upon

3 Between his cankered teeth a venomous toad,

cankered > ulcerated

4 That all the poison ran about his chaw;

That > [So that] chaw > jaw, jaws

5 But inwardly he chawed his own maw

maw > stomach

6 At neighbour's wealth, that made him ever sad;

neighbour > [specifically, perhaps, Avarice] wealth > wealth; or: well-being

7 For death it was, when any good he saw, 8 And wept, that cause of weeping none he had, 9 But when he heard of harm he waxed wondrous glad.

waxed > grew

104.31

   All in a kirtle of discolourd say
2 He clothed was, ypainted full of eyes;
     And in his bosome secretly there lay
4 An hatefull Snake, the which his taile vptyes
     In many folds, and mortall sting implyes.
6 Still as he rode, he gnasht his teeth, to see
     Those heapes of gold with griple Couetyse,
8 And grudged at the great felicitie
   Of proud Lucifera, and his owne companie.

1 All in a kirtle of discoloured say

kirtle > coat (reaching to knees or beyond) discoloured > varicoloured say > {A thin material used for cloaks, etc.}

2 He clothed was, painted full of eyes; 3 And in his bosom secretly there lay 4 A hateful snake, which its tail upties 5 In many folds, and mortal sting implies.

mortal > lethal implies > (Literally) enfolds; conceals

6 Still as he rode, he gnashed his teeth to see

Still > Continually

7 Those heaps of gold with gripple covetise,

gripple > griping, niggardly covetise > covetousness, avarice

8 And grudged at the great felicity

grudged at > begrudged, envied

9 Of proud Lucifera, and his own company.

104.32

   He hated all good workes and vertuous deeds,
2 And him no lesse, that any like did vse,
     And who with gracious bread the hungry feeds,
4 His almes for want of faith he doth accuse;
     So euery good to bad he doth abuse:
6 And eke the verse of famous Poets witt
     He does backebite, and spightfull poison spues
8 From leprous mouth on all, that euer writt:
   Such one vile Enuie was, that +fifte+ in row did sitt.

9 fifte > first 1590 etc.: FE

1 He hated all good works and virtuous deeds, 2 And him no less, that any like did use;

like > of the sort use > undertake, perform, practise

3 And who with gracious bread the hungry feeds,

who > [whoever]

4 His alms for want of faith he does accuse;

alms > charitable actions

5 So every good to bad he does abuse:

So every good to bad he does abuse > [He imputes his own values to everyone else; "abuse" here = "misrepresent"]

6 And eke the verse of famous poets' wit

eke > also

7 He does backbite, and spiteful poison spews 8 From leprous mouth on all that ever writ:

writ > was written; or: wrote

9 Such one vile Envy was, that fifth in row did sit.

104.33

   And him beside rides fierce reuenging Wrath,
2 Vpon a Lion, loth for to be led;
     And in his hand a burning brond he hath,
4 The which he brandisheth about his hed;
     His eyes did hurle forth sparkles fiery red,
6 And stared sterne on all, that him beheld,
     As ashes pale of hew and seeming ded;
8 And on his dagger still his hand he held,
   Trembling through hasty rage, when choler in him sweld.

1 And him beside rides fierce revenging Wrath, 2 Upon a lion, loath to be led; 3 And in his hand a burning brand he has,

brand > brand; or, perhaps: sword

4 Which he brandishes about his head; 5 His eyes did hurl forth sparkles fiery red, 6 And stared stern on all that him beheld,

stern > fiercely, mercilessly

7 As ashes pale of hue, and seeming dead;

hue > colour [his complexion was as pale as ashes]

8 And on his dagger still his hand he held,

still > continuously

9 Trembling through hasty rage, when choler in him swelled.

choler > (One of the four principal humours of the body, which, according to medieval belief, determine one's mental and physical attributes: phlegm, blood, black bile, and choler. Choler was associated with rage)

104.34

   His ruffin raiment all was staind with blood,
2 Which he had spilt, and all to rags yrent,
     Through vnaduized rashnesse woxen wood;
4 For of his hands he had no gouernement,
     Ne car'd for bloud in his auengement:
6 But when the furious fit was ouerpast,
     His cruell facts he often would repent;
8 Yet wilfull man he neuer would forecast,
   How many mischieues should ensue his heedlesse hast.

1 His ruffin raiment all was stained with blood

ruffin > ruffian, ruffianly (also the name of a fiend, and a cant- word for the Devil) raiment > clothing

2 Which he had spilt, and all to rags rent,

rent > torn

3 Through unadvised rashness waxed wood;

unadvised > ill-considered waxed > grown, become wood > furious, mad [When through ill-considered rashness he had become furious]

4 For of his hands he had no government,

government > control

5 Nor cared for blood in his avengement:

cared for > cared about, shrank from [shedding] avengement > vengeance

6 But, when the furious fit was overpassed,

overpassed > over, at an end

7 His cruel facts he often would repent;

facts > deeds

8 Yet, wilful man, he never would forecast

forecast > [consider beforehand]

9 How many mischiefs should ensue his heedless haste.

mischiefs > evils, misfortunes ensue > follow

104.35

   Full many mischiefes follow cruell Wrath;
2 Abhorred bloudshed, and tumultuous strife,
     Vnmanly murder, and vnthrifty scath,
4 Bitter despight, with rancours rusty knife,
     And fretting griefe the enemy of life;
6 All these, and many euils moe haunt ire,
     The swelling Splene, and Frenzy raging rife,
8 The shaking Palsey, and Saint Fraunces fire:
   Such one was Wrath, the last of this vngodly tire.

1 Full many mischiefs follow cruel Wrath:

Full > Very, exceedingly mischiefs > evils, misfortunes

2 Abhorred bloodshed, and tumultuous strife, 3 Unmanly murder, and unthrifty scathe,

Unmanly > {Dishonourable to, degrading to, unbefitting a man} unthrifty > unfortunate; prodigal, profligate scathe > damage, harm

4 Bitter despite, with rancour's rusty knife,

despite > rage; malice rusty > blood-stained; dirty; rusty

5 And fretting grief, the enemy of life;

fretting > devouring; gnawing (cf. 106.44:5)

6 All these, and many evils more, haunt Ire,

Ire > [Wrath]

7 The swelling spleen, and frenzy raging rife,

spleen > {Spite; the organ itself, with which anger and spite were associated}

8 The shaking palsy, and Saint Francis' fire:

Saint Francis' fire > {Erysipelas, a skin disease characterized by a deep red colour}

9 Such one was Wrath, the last of this ungodly tire.

tire > accoutrement, equipment; ornament, embellishment [of Lucifera] or: ?team (from the Common Romanic tirare, to draw, pull)

104.36

   And after all, vpon the wagon beame
2 Rode +Sathan+, with a smarting whip in hand,
     With which he forward lasht the laesie teme,
4 So oft as Slowth still in the mire did stand.
     Huge routs of people did about them band,
6 Showting for ioy, and still before their way
     A foggy mist had couered all the land;
8 And vnderneath their feet, all scattered lay
   Dead sculs and bones of men, whose life had gone astray.

2 Sathan > Satan 1609

1 And, after all, upon the wagon beam
2 Rode Satan, with a smarting whip in hand,
3 With which he forward lashed the lazy team,
4 So oft as Sloth still in the mire did stand.

still > motionless; yet

5 Huge routs of people did about them band,

routs > {Crowds, clamorous or riotous assemblages}

6 Shouting for joy; and still before their way 7 A foggy mist had covered all the land;

mist > (Symbol of deception: cf. 102.38:5, 212.34:5)

8 And, underneath their feet, all scattered lay 9 Dead skulls and bones of men whose life had gone astray.

104.37

   So forth they marchen in this goodly sort,
2 To take the solace of the open aire,
     And in fresh flowring fields themselues to sport;
4 Emongst the rest rode that false Lady faire,
     The fowle Duessa, next vnto the chaire
6 Of proud +Lucifera+, as one of the traine:
     But that good knight would not so nigh repaire,
8 Him selfe estraunging from their ioyaunce vaine,
   Whose fellowship seemd far vnfit for warlike swaine.

6 Lucifera > Lucifer' 1590

1 So forth they march in this goodly sort,

goodly > fine; courteous sort > company, band

2 To take the solace of the open air,

solace > pleasure, comfort (implying relief)

3 And in fresh flowering fields themselves to sport; 4 Amongst the rest rode that false lady fair, 5 The foul Duessa, next to the chair

chair > chariot, car; hence: coach

6 Of proud Lucifera, as one of the train: 7 But that good knight would not so nigh repair,

repair > go, betake himself

8 Himself estranging from their joyance vain,

estranging > distancing joyance > merrymaking; delight (this word apparently coined by Spenser) vain > vain; foolish, empty

9 Whose fellowship seemed far unfit for warlike swain.

swain > youth, young man

104.38

   So hauing solaced themselues a space
2 With pleasaunce of the breathing fields yfed,
     They backe returned to the Princely Place;
4 Whereas an errant knight in armes ycled,
     And heathnish shield, wherein with letters red
6 Was writ Sans ioy, they new arriued find:
     Enflam'd with fury and fiers hardy-hed,
8 He seemd in hart to harbour thoughts vnkind,
   And nourish bloudy vengeaunce in his bitter mind.

1 So, having solaced themselves a space, 2 With pleasance of the breathing fields fed,

breathing > airy

3 They back returned to the princely place; 4 Where an errant knight in arms clad,

errant > itinerant (a "knight errant" roamed in quest of adventure; the word-order here also implies the sense of erring, deviating, etc.)

5 And heathenish shield, wherein with letters red 6 Was written Sansjoy, they new arrived find:

new > newly

7 Inflamed with fury and fierce hardihood,

hardihood > audacity, boldness; hardness

8 He seemed in heart to harbour thoughts unkind, 9 And nourish bloody vengeance in his bitter mind.

104.39

   Who when the shamed shield of slaine Sans foy
2 He spide with that same Faery champions page,
     Bewraying him, that did of late destroy
4 His eldest brother, burning all with rage
     He to him leapt, and that same enuious gage
6 Of victors glory from him snatcht away:
     But th'Elfin knight, which ought that warlike wage,
8 Disdaind to +loose+ the meed he wonne in fray,
   And him +rencountring+ fierce, reskewd the noble pray.

8 loose > lose 1609 9 rencountring > re'ncountring 1609

1 Who, when the shamed shield of slain Sansfoy

shamed > (Because it is placed upside-down: see 104.41:9)

2 He spied with that same Faery champion's page

page > [the dwarf]

3 (Bewraying him that did of late destroy

Bewraying > Revealing, betraying

4 His eldest brother), burning all with rage 5 He to him leapt, and that same envious gage

envious > enviable; also: odious gage > pledge

6 Of victor's glory from him snatched away: 7 But the Elfin knight, which ought that warlike wage,

ought > owned wage > spoil of war

8 Disdained to loose the meed he won in fray;

loose > release meed > reward; hence: prize

9 And, him rencountering fierce, rescued the noble prey.

rencountering > engaging (in battle) prey > plunder, spoil

104.40

   Therewith they gan to +hurtlen+ greedily,
2 Redoubted battaile ready to darrayne,
     And clash their shields, and shake their +swords+ on hy,
4 That with their sturre they troubled all the traine;
     Till that great Queene vpon eternall paine
6 Of high displeasure, that ensewen might,
     Commaunded them their fury to refraine,
8 And if that either to that shield had right,
   In equall lists they should the morrow next it fight.

1 hurtlen > hurlen 1609 3 swords > swerds 1590

1 Therewith they began to hurtle greedily,

Therewith > With that; thereupon hurtle > brandish arms (catachr.); clash, rush together greedily > recklessly, eagerly

2 Redoubted battle ready to deraign,

Redoubted > Doughty, valiant, redoubtable deraign > {Challenge; fight a contest in order to settle a dispute}

3 And clash their shields, and shake their swords on high, 4 That with their stir they troubled all the train;

That > [So that] train > retinue

5 Till that great queen, upon eternal pain 6 Of high displeasure that ensue might,

ensue might > [might ensue]

7 Commanded them their fury to refrain, 8 And, if either to that shield had right, 9 In equal lists they should the morrow next it fight.

equal lists > impartial knightly contest ("lists" were the palisades enclosing the tilting-ground) it fight > [contest the right to the shield]

104.41

   Ah dearest Dame, (quoth then the Paynim bold,)
2 Pardon the errour of enraged wight,
     Whom great griefe made forget the raines to hold
4 Of reasons rule, to see this recreant knight,
     No knight, but treachour full of false despight
6 And shamefull treason, who through guile hath slayn
     The prowest knight, that euer field did fight,
8 Euen stout Sans foy (O who can then refrayn?)
   Whose shield he beares +renuerst+, the more to heape disdayn.

9 renuerst > re'nverst 1609

1 "Ah, dearest dame," quoth then the paynim bold,

paynim > pagan, heathen

2 "Pardon the error of enraged wight,

wight > person

3 Whom great grief made forget the reins to hold 4 Of reason's rule, to see this recreant knight

recreant > cowardly; apostate

5 (No knight, but treacher full of false despite

treacher > cheat, deceiver despite > malice

6 And shameful treason) who through guile has slain 7 The prowest knight that ever field did fight,

prowest > bravest field > [a] battle; [in the] field of battle

8 Even stout Sansfoy (O who can then refrain?),

Even > To wit; that is; no less than refrain > restrain oneself [from anger, desire for revenge]

9 Whose shield he bears reversed, the more to heap disdain.

reversed > upside-down (symbolizing ignominious defeat)

104.42

   And to augment the glorie of his guile,
2 His dearest loue the faire Fidessa loe
     Is there possessed of the traytour vile,
4 Who reapes the haruest sowen by his foe,
     Sowen in bloudy field, and bought with woe:
6 That brothers hand shall dearely well requight
     So be, {o^} Queene, you equall fauour showe.
8 Him litle answerd th'angry Elfin knight;
   He neuer meant with words, but swords to plead his right.

1 "And, to augment the glory of his guile,

glory > [boastful spirit]

2 His dearest love, the fair Fidessa, lo 3 Is there possessed of the traitor vile,

of > by

4 Who reaps the harvest sown by his foe, 5 Sown in bloody field, and bought with woe: 6 That brother's hand shall dearly well requite,

That > [That deed his]

7 So be, O Queen, you equal favour show!"

So be > If equal > impartial

8 Him little answered the angry Elfin knight; 9 He never meant with words, but swords, to plead his right.

104.43

   But threw his gauntlet as a sacred +pledge+,
2 His cause in combat the next day to try:
     So been they parted both, with harts on +edge+,
4 To be aueng'd each on his enimy.
     That night they pas in ioy and iollity,
6 Feasting and courting both in bowre and hall;
     For Steward was excessiue Gluttonie,
8 That of his plenty poured forth to all;
   Which doen, the Chamberlain Slowth did to rest them call.

1 pledge > pledg 1590 3 edge > edg 1590

1 But threw his gauntlet as a sacred pledge, 2 His cause in combat the next day to try: 3 So been they parted both, with hearts on edge

been > [were]

4 To be avenged each on his enemy. 5 That night they pass in joy and jollity,

jollity > revelry

6 Feasting and courting both in bower and hall; 7 For steward was excessive Gluttony, 8 That of his plenty poured forth to all; 9 Which done, the chamberlain, Sloth, did to rest them call.

104.44

   Now whenas darkesome night had all displayd
2 Her coleblacke curtein ouer brightest skye,
     The warlike youthes on dayntie couches layd,
4 Did chace away sweet sleepe from sluggish eye,
     To muse on meanes of hoped victory.
6 But whenas Morpheus had with leaden mace
     Arrested all that courtly company,
8 Vp-rose Duessa from her resting place,
   And to the Paynims lodging comes with silent pace.

1 Now when darksome Night had all displayed

Night > (See 105.20 ff.) displayed > spread, spread out

2 Her coal-black curtain over brightest sky, 3 The warlike youths, on dainty couches laid, 4 Did chase away sweet sleep from sluggish eye, 5 To muse on means of hoped victory. 6 But when Morpheus had with leaden mace

Morpheus > (The god of dreams: one of the sons of Somnus, the god of sleep)

7 Arrested all that courtly company, 8 Uprose Duessa from her resting place, 9 And to the paynim's lodging comes with silent pace.

paynim > pagan, heathen pace > movement, step

104.45

   Whom broad awake she finds, in troublous fit,
2 Forecasting, how his foe he might annoy,
     And him amoues with speaches seeming fit:
4 Ah deare Sans ioy, next dearest to Sans foy,
     Cause of my new griefe, cause of +my+ new ioy,
6 Ioyous, to see his ymage in mine eye,
     And greeu'd, to thinke how foe did him destroy,
8 That was the flowre of grace and cheualrye;
   Lo his Fidessa to thy secret faith I flye.

5 my > omitted from 1590 and 1596: FE

1 Whom broad awake she finds, in troublous fit,

fit > condition, mood

2 Forecasting how his foe he might annoy,

Forecasting > Planning annoy > injure

3 And him amoves with speeches seeming fit:

amoves > stirs fit > fit, appropriate

4 "Ah, dear Sansjoy, next dearest to Sansfoy, 5 Cause of my new grief, cause of my new joy; 6 Joyous, to see his image in my eye, 7 And grieved, to think how foe did him destroy, 8 That was the flower of grace and chivalry; 9 Lo his Fidessa, to your secret faith I fly."

104.46

   With gentle wordes he can her fairely greet,
2 And bad say on the secret of her hart.
     Then sighing soft, I learne that litle sweet
4 Oft tempred is (quoth she) with muchell smart:
     For since my brest was launcht with louely dart
6 Of deare Sansfoy, I neuer ioyed howre,
     But in eternall woes my weaker hart
8 Haue wasted, louing him with all my powre,
   And for his sake haue felt full many an heauie stowre.

1 With gentle words he can her fairly greet,

gentle > generous; courteous can > did fairly > courteously

2 And bade say on the secret of her heart.

say on > tell

3 Then, sighing soft, "I learn that little sweet 4 Oft tempered is," quoth she, "with mickle smart:

mickle > much

5 For since my breast was lanced with lovely dart

lovely > amorous

6 Of dear Sansfoy, I never joyed hour,

joyed > [enjoyed an]

7 But in eternal woes my weaker heart

weaker > too-weak

8 Have wasted, loving him with all my power, 9 And for his sake have felt full many a heavy stour.

full > very stour > [time of] turmoil or distress

104.47

   At last when perils all I weened past,
2 And hop'd to reape the crop of all my care,
     Into new woes vnweeting I was cast,
4 By this false faytor, who vnworthy ware
     His worthy shield, whom he with guilefull snare
6 Entrapped slew, and brought to shamefull graue.
     Me silly maid away with him he bare,
8 And euer since hath kept in darksome caue,
   For that I would not yeeld, that to Sans-foy I gaue.

1 "At last, when perils all I weened past,

weened > supposed

2 And hoped to reap the crop of all my care, 3 Into new woes unweeting I was cast

unweeting > ignorant, unwitting

4 By this false faitour, who unworthy wears

faitour > impostor, cheat wears > bears, carries

5 His worthy shield, whom he, with guileful snare,

His > [Sansfoy's] he > [the Redcross Knight]

6 Entrapped slew, and brought to shameful grave.

Entrapped slew > [Killed while trapped]

7 Me, silly maid, away with him he bore,

silly > defenceless; innocent

8 And ever since has kept in darksome cave, 9 For that I would not yield that to Sansfoy I gave.

For that > Because that > [that which]

104.48

   But since faire Sunne hath sperst that lowring clowd,
2 And to my loathed life now shewes some light,
     Vnder your beames I will me safely shrowd,
4 From dreaded storme of his disdainfull spight:
     To you th'inheritance belongs by right
6 Of brothers prayse, to you eke longs his loue.
     Let not his loue, let not his restlesse spright
8 Be vnreueng'd, that calles to you aboue
   From wandring Stygian shores, where it doth endlesse moue.

1 "But since fair sun has spersed that louring cloud,

spersed > dispersed

2 And to my loathed life now shows some light, 3 Under your beams I will me safely shroud

shroud > take shelter

4 From dreaded storm of his disdainful spite:

disdainful > angry

5 To you the inheritance belongs by right 6 Of brother's praise, to you eke belongs his love.

praise > praiseworthiness; merit, virtue eke > also

7 Let not his love, let not his restless spirit, 8 Be unrevenged, that calls to you above 9 From wandering Stygian shores, where it does endless move."

Stygian > {Of the River Styx, one of the five rivers of hell; the river across which dead souls must pass. See Aen., 6.312 ff.} endless > eternally

104.49

   Thereto said he, faire Dame, be nought dismaid
2 For sorrowes past; their griefe is with them gone:
     Ne yet of present perill be affraid;
4 For needlesse feare did neuer vantage none,
     And helplesse hap it booteth not to mone.
6 Dead is Sans-foy, his vitall paines are past,
     Though greeued ghost for vengeance deepe do grone:
8 He liues, that shall him pay his dewties last,
   And guiltie Elfin bloud shall sacrifice in hast.

1 Thereto said he, "Fair dame, be naught dismayed

Thereto > To that

2 For sorrows past; their grief is with them gone: 3 Nor yet of present peril be afraid; 4 For needless fear did never vantage none,

vantage > profit, benefit none > anyone

5 And helpless hap it boots not to moan.

helpless hap it boots not to moan > [it is of no avail to bemoan an unavoidable occurrence]

6 Dead is Sansfoy, his vital pains are past,

vital > [of life, worldly]

7 Though grieved ghost for vengeance deep do groan:

grieved > [his] injured

8 He lives, that shall him pay his duties last,

He > [The Redcross Knight] duties > debts

9 And guilty Elfin blood shall sacrifice in haste."

104.50

   O but I feare the fickle freakes (quoth shee)
2 Of fortune +false+, and oddes of armes in field.
     Why dame (quoth he) what oddes can euer bee,
4 Where both do fight alike, to win or yield?
     Yea but (quoth she) he beares a charmed shield,
6 And eke enchaunted armes, that none can perce,
     Ne none can wound the man, that does them wield.
8 Charmd or enchaunted (answerd he then ferce)
   I no whit reck, ne you the like need to reherce.

2 false > salse 1596

1 "O but I fear the fickle freaks," quoth she,

freaks > whims

2 "Of Fortune false, and odds of arms in field."

odds > differences, inequalities field > battle, the field of battle

3 "Why, dame," quoth he, "what odds can ever be, 4 Where both do fight alike, to win or yield?"

alike > [in equal lists: see 104.40:9]

5 "Yes, but," quoth she, "he bears a charmed shield, 6 And eke enchanted arms, that none can pierce,

eke > moreover

7 Nor none can wound the man that does them wield."

none can > can anyone

8 "Charmed or enchanted," answered he then fierce, 9 "I no whit reck; nor you the like need to rehearse.

reck > care about, take account of rehearse > give an account of

104.51

   But faire Fidessa, sithens fortunes guile,
2 Or enimies powre hath now captiued you,
     Returne from whence ye came, and rest a while
4 Till morrow next, that I the Elfe subdew,
     And with Sans-foyes dead dowry you endew.
6 Ay me, that is a double death (she said)
     With proud foes sight my sorrow to renew:
8 Where euer yet I be, my secret aid
   Shall follow you. So passing forth she him obaid.

1 "But, fair Fidessa, sithens Fortune's guile

sithens > since

2 Or enemy's power has now captived you,

captived you > taken you captive

3 Return from whence you came, and rest awhile, 4 Till morrow next, that I the Elf subdue,

that > when

5 And with Sansfoy's dead dowry you endew."

Sansfoy's dead > [dead Sansfoy's] endew > endow; or: endue

6 "Ay me! That is a double death," she said, 7 "With proud foe's sight my sorrow to renew: 8 Wherever yet I be, my secret aid 9 Shall follow you." So, passing forth, she him obeyed.

CANTO V

   The faithfull knight in equall field
2 subdewes his faithlesse foe,
   Whom false Duessa saues, and for
4 his cure to hell does goe.

1 The faithful knight in equal field

equal field > impartial battle

2 subdues his faithless foe, 3 Whom false Duessa saves, and for 4 his cure to hell does go.

105.1

   THe noble hart, that harbours vertuous thought,
2 And is with child of glorious great intent,
     Can neuer rest, vntill it forth haue brought
4 Th'eternall brood of glorie excellent:
     Such restlesse passion did all night torment
6 The flaming corage of that Faery knight,
     Deuizing, how that doughtie turnament
8 With greatest honour he atchieuen might;
   Still did +he+ wake, and still did watch for dawning light.

9 he > omitted from 1596

1 The noble heart, that harbours virtuous thought,

virtuous > potent, powerful, valorous

2 And is with child of glorious great intent,

with child > [pregnant] glorious > {Eager for glory}

3 Can never rest, until it forth has brought 4 The eternal brood of glory excellent:

excellent > excelling; supreme

5 Such restless passion did all night torment 6 The flaming courage of that Faery knight,

courage > heart, mind

7 Devising how that doughty tournament 8 With greatest honour he achieve might;

achieve > [bring to successful conclusion]

9 Still did he wake, and still did watch for dawning light.

Still > Continuously

105.2

   At last the golden Orientall +gate,+
2 Of greatest heauen gan to open faire,
     And Ph{oe}bus fresh, as bridegrome to his mate,
4 Came dauncing forth, shaking his deawie haire:
     And +hurld+ his glistring beames through gloomy aire.
6 Which when the wakeful Elfe perceiu'd, streight way
     He started vp, and did him selfe prepaire,
8 In sun-bright armes, and battailous array:
   For with that Pagan proud he combat will that day.

1 gate, > gate 1609 5 hurld > hurls 1590, 1596: FE; hurles 1609

1 At last the golden oriental gate

oriental > eastern

2 Of greatest heaven began to open fair, 3 And Phoebus fresh, as bridegroom to his mate,

bridegroom > (See Ps. 19.5)

4 Came dancing forth, shaking his dewy hair: 5 And hurled his glistering beams through gloomy air. 6 Which when the wakeful Elf perceived, straightway 7 He started up, and did himself prepare, 8 In sun-bright arms, and battailous array:

arms > {Arms and armour} battailous > warlike, ready for battle

9 For with that pagan proud he combat will that day.

105.3

   And forth he comes into the +commune+ hall,
2 Where earely waite him many a gazing eye,
     To weet what end to straunger knights may fall.
4 There many Minstrales maken melody,
     To driue away the dull melancholy,
6 And many Bardes, that to the trembling chord
     Can tune their timely voyces cunningly,
8 And many Chroniclers, that can record
   Old loues, and warres for Ladies doen by many a Lord.

1 commune > common 1609

1 And forth he comes into the common hall, 2 Where early wait him many a gazing eye, 3 To weet what end to stranger knights may fall.

weet > know, find out

4 There many minstrels make melody,

minstrels > musicians

5 To drive away the dull melancholy, 6 And many bards, that to the trembling chord

bards > singers

7 Can tune their timely voices cunningly,

Can > Did; knew how to timely > {Measured; keeping time with the music}

8 And many chroniclers, that can record

chroniclers > writers of epics can > can, knew how to

9 Old loves, and wars for ladies done by many a lord.

105.4

   Soone after comes the cruell Sarazin,
2 In wouen maile all armed warily,
     And sternly lookes at him, who not a pin
4 Does care for looke of liuing creatures eye.
     They bring them wines of Greece and Araby,
6 And daintie spices fetcht from furthest Ynd,
     To kindle heat of corage priuily:
8 And in the wine a solemne oth they bynd
   T'obserue the sacred lawes of armes, that are assynd.

1 Soon after comes the cruel Saracen,

Saracen > {Arab or Moslem of the time of the Crusades; pagan}

2 In woven mail all armed warily,

mail > chain armour warily > carefully

3 And sternly looks at him, who not a pin

sternly > fiercely

4 Does care for look of living creature's eye. 5 They bring them wines of Greece and Arabia, 6 And dainty spices fetched from furthest Ind,

dainty > precious Ind > India

7 To kindle heat of courage privily:

privily > inwardly

8 And in the wine a solemn oath they bind, 9 To observe the sacred laws of arms, that are assigned.

105.5

   At last forth comes that far renowmed Queene,
2 With royall pomp and Princely maiestie;
     She is ybrought vnto a paled greene,
4 And placed vnder stately canapee,
     The warlike feates of both those knights to see.
6 On th'other side in all mens open vew
     Duessa placed is, and on a tree
8 Sans-foy his shield is hangd with bloudy hew:
   Both those the lawrell girlonds to the victor dew.

1 At last forth comes that far renowned queen, 2 With royal pomp and princely majesty; 3 She is brought to a paled green,

paled > {Fenced, surrounded with palings}

4 And placed under stately canopy, 5 The warlike feats of both those knights to see. 6 On the other side in all men's open view 7 Duessa placed is, and on a tree 8 Sansfoy his shield is hung with bloody hue:

Sansfoy his > Sansfoy's with bloody hue > [with its bloodstains]

9 Both those the laurel garlands to the victor due.

105.6

   A shrilling trompet sownded from on hye,
2 And vnto battaill bad them selues addresse:
     Their shining shieldes about their +wrestes+ they tye,
4 And burning blades about their heads do blesse,
     The instruments of wrath and heauinesse:
6 With greedy force each other doth assayle,
     And strike so fiercely, that they do impresse
8 Deepe dinted furrowes in the battred mayle;
   The yron walles to ward their blowes are weake and fraile.

3 wrestes > wrists 1609

1 A shrilling trumpet sounded from on high,
2 And to battle bade themselves address:
3 Their shining shields about their wrists they tie,
4 And burning blades about their heads do bless,

bless > brandish

5 The instruments of wrath and heaviness:

heaviness > anger; grief

6 With greedy force each other does assail,

greedy > eager; insensate, reckless

7 And strike so fiercely, that they do impress 8 Deep dented furrows in the battered mail;

mail > chain armour

9 The iron walls to ward their blows are weak and frail.

iron walls > [of their armour]

105.7

   The Sarazin was stout, and wondrous strong,
2 And heaped blowes like yron hammers great:
     For after bloud and vengeance he did long.
4 The knight was fiers, and full of youthly heat:
     And doubled strokes, like dreaded thunders threat:
6 For all for prayse and honour he did fight.
     Both stricken strike, and beaten both do beat,
8 That from their shields forth flyeth firie light,
   And +helmets hewen+ deepe, shew marks of eithers might.

9 helmets hewen > hewen helmets 1590

1 The Saracen was stout, and wondrous strong,

stout > robust; proud; bold, brave

2 And heaped blows like iron hammers great: 3 For after blood and vengeance he did long. 4 The knight was fierce, and full of youthly heat: 5 And doubled strokes, like dreaded thunder's threat:

doubled > (Vb.)

6 For all for praise and honour he did fight. 7 Both stricken strike, and beaten both do beat, 8 That from their shields forth flies fiery light,

That > [So that]

9 And helmets hewed deep show marks of either's might.

deep > deeply

105.8

   So th'one for wrong, the other striues for right:
2 As when a Gryfon seized of his pray,
     A Dragon fiers encountreth in his flight,
4 Through widest ayre making his ydle way,
     That would his rightfull rauine rend away:
6 With hideous horrour both together smight,
     And souce so sore, that they the heauens affray:
8 The wise Southsayer seeing so sad sight,
   Th'amazed vulgar tels of warres and mortall fight.

1 So the one for wrong, the other strives for right: 2 As when a griffin, seized of his prey,

griffin > {Monster with the body of a lion and head and wings of an eagle} seized > in rightful possession

3 A dragon fierce encounters in his flight, 4 Through widest air making his idle way, 5 That would his rightful ravin rend away:

That > [The dragon] ravin > plunder, prey

6 With hideous horror both together smite,

hideous > abominable; terrific; immense

7 And souse so sore that they the heavens affray:

souse > strike heavy blows; perhaps also: swoop (as a hawk on its prey) affray > terrify

8 The wise soothsayer, seeing so sad sight,

sad > calamitous, ominous [a]

9 The amazed vulgar tells of wars and mortal fight.

vulgar > common people mortal > deadly, lethal

105.9

   So th'one for wrong, the other striues for right,
2 And each to deadly shame would driue his foe:
     The cruell steele so greedily doth bight
4 In tender flesh, that streames of bloud down flow,
     With which the armes, that earst so bright did show
6 Into a pure vermillion now are dyde:
     Great ruth in all the gazers harts did grow,
8 Seeing the gored woundes to gape so wyde,
   That victory they dare not wish to either side.

1 So the one for wrong, the other strives for right,
2 And each to deadly shame would drive his foe:
3 The cruel steel so greedily does bite
4 In tender flesh, that streams of blood down flow,
5 With which the arms, that erst so bright did show,

the arms > [the armour] erst > at first

6 Into a pure vermilion now are dyed: 7 Great ruth in all the gazers' hearts did grow,

ruth > pity

8 Seeing the gored wounds to gape so wide, 9 That victory they dare not wish to either side.

105.10

   At last the Paynim chaunst to cast his eye,
2 His suddein eye, flaming with wrathfull fyre,
     Vpon his brothers shield, which hong thereby:
4 Therewith redoubled was his raging yre,
     And said, Ah wretched sonne of wofull syre,
6 Doest thou sit wayling by black Stygian lake,
     Whilest here thy shield is hangd for victors hyre,
8 And sluggish german doest thy forces slake,
   To after-send his foe, that him may ouertake?

1 At last the paynim chanced to cast his eye,

paynim > pagan, heathen

2 His sudden eye, flaming with wrathful fire, 3 Upon his brother's shield, which hung thereby:

thereby > near by

4 Therewith redoubled was his raging ire,

Therewith > With that; thereupon

5 And said, "Ah wretched son of woeful sire,

sire > father

6 Do you sit wailing by black Stygian lake,

Stygian lake > (The River Styx, the river across which dead souls must pass)

7 Whilst here your shield is hung for victor's hire?

hire > wages

8 And, sluggish german, do your forces slake,

german > brother (now addressing himself rather than the soul of Sansfoy) slake > abate

9 To after-send his foe, that him may overtake?

105.11

   Goe caytiue Elfe, him quickly ouertake,
2 And soone redeeme from his long wandring woe;
     Goe guiltie ghost, to him my message make,
4 That I his shield haue quit from dying foe.
     Therewith vpon his crest he stroke him so,
6 That twise he reeled, readie twise to fall;
     End of the doubtfull battell deemed tho
8 The lookers on, and lowd to him gan call
   The false Duessa, Thine the shield, and I, and all.

1 "Go, caitiff Elf, him quickly overtake,

caitiff > despicable, servile

2 And soon redeem from his long wandering woe; 3 Go, guilty ghost, to him my message make,

ghost > soul, spirit make > represent, personify, frame (by virtue of your presence)

4 That I his shield have quit from dying foe."

quit > recovered, freed

5 Therewith upon his crest he struck him so,

Therewith > With that

6 That twice he reeled, ready twice to fall; 7 End of the doubtful battle deemed tho

doubtful > doubtful (of uncertain outcome); also: fearful, awful tho > thereupon, then

8 The lookers on, and loud to him gan call

gan > did

9 The false Duessa, "Yours the shield, and I, and all!"

105.12

   Soone as the Faerie heard his Ladie speake,
2 Out of his swowning dreame he gan awake,
     And quickning faith, that earst was woxen weake,
4 The creeping deadly cold away did shake:
     Tho mou'd with wrath, and shame, and Ladies sake,
6 Of all attonce he cast auengd to bee,
     And with so'exceeding furie at him strake,
8 That forced him to +stoupe+ vpon his knee;
   Had he not stouped so, he should haue clouen bee.

8 stoupe > stoope 1609

1 Soon as the Faery heard his lady speak, 2 Out of his swooning dream he gan awake,

gan > did

3 And quickening faith, that erst was waxed weak,

quickening > stirring, reviving erst > lately waxed > grown

4 The creeping deadly cold away did shake: 5 Tho moved with wrath, and shame, and lady's sake,

Tho > Then sake > consideration, regard

6 All at once he cast avenged to be,

cast > decided, resolved

7 And with so exceeding fury at him struck,

so > such

8 That forced him to stoop upon his knee;

forced > [it forced; he forced]

9 Had he not stooped so, he should have cloven be.

105.13

   And to him said, Goe now proud Miscreant,
2 Thy selfe thy message doe to german deare,
     Alone he wandring thee too long doth want:
4 Goe say, his foe thy shield with his doth beare.
     Therewith his heauie hand he high gan reare,
6 Him to haue slaine; when loe a darkesome clowd
     Vpon him fell: he no where doth appeare,
8 But vanisht is. The Elfe him cals alowd,
   But answer none receiues: the darknes him does shrowd.

1 And to him said, "Go now, proud miscreant,

miscreant > wretch, villain; heretic

2 Yourself your message do to german dear;

do > give, make (as 105.11:3) german > [your] brother dear > dear; also: dire, difficult. (If "german" is read as an adj. and "deare" as a sb. ("pain, nuisance"), then the Redcross Knight is insulting both brothers simultaneously)

3 Alone he, wandering, you too long does want: 4 Go say, his foe your shield with his does bear." 5 Therewith his heavy hand he high gan rear,

Therewith > With that gan > did

6 Him to have slain; when lo a darksome cloud 7 Upon him fell: he nowhere does appear, 8 But vanished is. The Elf him calls aloud, 9 But answer none receives: the darkness him does shroud.

shroud > shroud; shelter

105.14

   In haste Duessa from her place arose,
2 And to him running said, O prowest knight,
     That euer Ladie to her loue did chose,
4 Let now abate the terror of your might,
     And quench the flame of furious despight,
6 And bloudie vengeance; lo th'infernall powres
     Couering your foe with cloud of deadly night,
8 Haue borne him hence to Plutoes balefull bowres.
   The conquest yours, I yours, the shield, and glory yours.

1 In haste Duessa from her place arose, 2 And to him running said, "O prowest knight

prowest > bravest

3 That ever lady to her love did choose,

to > [as]

4 Let now abate the terror of your might, 5 And quench the flame of furious despite,

despite > rage

6 And bloody vengeance; lo the infernal powers, 7 Covering your foe with cloud of deadly night, 8 Have borne him hence to Pluto's baleful bowers.

Pluto's baleful bowers > hell (Pluto = god of the underworld; baleful = grim; bowers = chambers, rooms)

9 The conquest yours, I yours, the shield, and glory yours."

105.15

   Not all so satisfide, with greedie eye
2 He sought all round about, his thirstie blade
     To +bathe+ in bloud of faithlesse enemy;
4 Who all that while lay hid in secret shade:
     He standes amazed, how he thence should fade.
6 At last the +trumpets+ Triumph sound on hie,
     And running Heralds humble homage made,
8 Greeting him goodly with new victorie,
   And to him brought the shield, the cause of enmitie.

3 bathe > bath 1596 6 trumpets > trumpets, 1596, 1609

1 Not all so satisfied, with greedy eye

all so > wholly greedy > eager

2 He sought all round about, his thirsty blade 3 To bathe in blood of faithless enemy; 4 Who all that while lay hidden in secret shade.

shade > shadow

5 He stands amazed how he thence should fade.

how > [by the way that] fade > fade, vanish

6 At last the trumpets triumph sound on high,

triumph > [the triumphal fanfare]

7 And running heralds humble homage made, 8 Greeting him goodly with new victory,

Greeting > Congratulating [… on (SUFQ)] goodly > courteously

9 And to him brought the shield, the cause of enmity.

105.16

   Wherewith he goeth to that soueraine Queene,
2 And falling her before on lowly knee,
     To her makes present of his seruice seene:
4 Which she accepts, with thankes, and goodly gree,
     Greatly aduauncing his gay cheualree.
6 So marcheth home, and by her takes the knight,
     Whom all the people follow with great glee,
8 Shouting, and clapping all their hands on hight,
   That all the aire it fils, and flyes to heauen bright.

1 Wherewith he goes to that sovereign queen

Wherewith > With which

2 And, falling her before on lowly knee,

her before > [before her]

3 To her makes present of his service seen:

seen > shown, proven

4 Which she accepts with thanks and goodly gree,

thanks > goodwill, favour; graciousness goodly gree > gracious goodwill

5 Greatly advancing his gay chivalry.

advancing > extolling

6 So marches home, and by her takes the knight,

by > [beside]

7 Whom all the people follow with great glee, 8 Shouting, and clapping all their hands on high,

on high > on high; aloud

9 That all the air it fills, and flies to heaven bright.

That > [So that]

105.17

   Home is he brought, and laid in sumptuous bed:
2 Where many skilfull leaches him abide,
     To salue his hurts, that yet still freshly bled.
4 In wine and oyle they wash his woundes wide,
     And softly +can+ embalme on euery side.
6 And all the while, most heauenly melody
     About the bed sweet musicke did diuide,
8 Him to beguile of griefe and agony:
   And all the while Duessa wept full bitterly.

5 can > gan 1590

1 Home is he brought, and laid in sumptuous bed: 2 Where many skilful leeches him abide

leeches > doctors abide > await, attend

3 To salve his hurts, that yet still freshly bled.

salve > anoint

4 In wine and oil they wash his wounds wide, 5 And softly can embalm on every side.

can embalm > did anoint (see Textual Appendix)

6 And all the while most heavenly melody 7 About the bed sweet music did divide,

divide > {Perform with "divisions", descant}

8 Him to beguile of grief and agony:

grief > pain

9 And all the while Duessa wept full bitterly.

full > very

105.18

   As when a wearie traueller that strayes
2 By muddy shore of broad seuen-mouthed Nile,
     Vnweeting of the perillous wandring wayes,
4 Doth meete a cruell craftie Crocodile,
     Which in false griefe hyding his harmefull guile,
6 Doth weepe full sore, and sheddeth tender teares:
     The foolish man, that pitties all this while
8 His mournefull plight, is swallowd vp vnwares,
   Forgetfull of his owne, that mindes anothers cares.

1 As when a weary traveller, that strays 2 By muddy shore of broad seven-mouthed Nile,

seven-mouthed > (So described by Virgil, Aen. 6.800)

3 Unweeting of the perilous wandering ways,

Unweeting > Ignorant

4 Does meet a cruel crafty crocodile, 5 Which, in false grief hiding its harmful guile, 6 Does weep full sore, and sheds tender tears:

full > very, exceedingly sore > bitterly

7 The foolish man, that pities all this while 8 Its mournful plight, is swallowed up unwares,

unwares > unexpectedly

9 Forgetful of his own, that minds another's cares.

105.19

   So wept Duessa vntill euentide,
2 That shyning lampes in Ioues high house were light:
     Then forth she rose, ne lenger would abide,
4 But comes vnto the place, where th'Hethen knight
     In slombring +swownd+ nigh voyd of vitall spright,
6 Lay couer'd with inchaunted cloud all day:
     Whom when she found, as she him left in plight,
8 To wayle his woefull case she would not stay,
   But to the easterne coast of heauen makes speedy way.

5 swownd > swoune 1609

1 So wept Duessa until eventide, 2 That shining lamps in Jove's high house were light:

That > To the extent that; hence: until lamps > [stars] light > alight; lit

3 Then forth she rose, nor longer would abide,

abide > remain; await the issue

4 But comes to the place where the heathen knight, 5 In slumbering swoon, nigh void of vital spirit, 6 Lay covered with enchanted cloud all day: 7 Whom when she found, as she him left in plight,

as she him left in plight > [just as she had left him, in the same plight]

8 To wail his woeful case she would not stay,

wail > mourn

9 But to the eastern coast of heaven makes speedy way.

coast > region

105.20

   Where griesly Night, with visage deadly sad,
2 That Ph{oe}bus chearefull face durst neuer vew,
     And in a foule blacke pitchie mantle clad,
4 She findes forth comming from her darkesome mew,
     Where she all day did hide her hated hew.
6 Before the dore her yron charet stood,
     Alreadie harnessed for iourney new;
8 And coleblacke steedes yborne of hellish brood,
   That on their rustie bits did champ, as they were wood.

1 Where grisly Night (with visage deadly sad,

grisly > horrible, fearsome Night > (The pre-Olympian goddess Nox, progenitress of Aveugle (father of Sansfoy, Sansloy, and Sansjoy); see Myth. 3.12) sad > grave; dark-coloured

2 That Phoebus' cheerful face dared never view,

dared > (The subject is indifferently "visage" or "face")

3 And in a foul black pitchy mantle clad) 4 She finds forth coming from her darksome mew,

forth coming > [coming forth] mew > den, secret place (described as a "caue" at 105.21:6)

5 Where she all day did hide her hated hue.

hue > appearance; colour (cf. 302.28:1)

6 Before the door her iron charet stood,

charet > chariot

7 Already harnessed for journey new,

journey new > (I.e. across the heavens from east to west, the nocturnal counterpart of Phoebus's traverse of the sky. A "journey" originally meant "a day's travel"; cf. 312.47:4 (1590 stanzas))

8 And coal-black steeds born of hellish brood,

brood > parentage, race

9 That on their rusty bits did champ, as they were wood.

rusty > blood-stained; rusty as > [as though] wood > mad

105.21

   Who when she saw Duessa sunny bright,
2 Adornd with gold and iewels shining cleare,
     She greatly grew amazed at the sight,
4 And th'vnacquainted light began to feare:
     For neuer did such brightnesse there appeare,
6 And would haue backe retyred to her caue,
     Vntill the witches speech she gan to heare,
8 Saying, yet {o^} thou dreaded Dame, I craue
   Abide, till I haue told the message, which I haue.

1 Who, when she saw Duessa sunny-bright,

bright > bright; beautiful

2 Adorned with gold and jewels shining clear,

clear > brightly

3 She greatly grew amazed at the sight,

She > (Redundant)

4 And the unacquainted light began to fear

unacquainted > unfamiliar

5 (For never did such brightness there appear): 6 And would have back retired to her cave, 7 Until the witch's speech she began to hear, 8 Saying, "Yet, O you dreaded dame, I crave

Yet > [For now; for a while] crave > {Entreat, beg; demand as by right}

9 Abide, till I have told the message which I have."

Abide > [You to] wait

105.22

   She stayd, and foorth Duessa gan proceede,
2 O thou most auncient Grandmother of all,
     More old then Ioue, whom thou at first didst breede,
4 Or that great house of Gods c{ae}lestiall,
     Which wast begot in D{ae}mogorgons hall,
6 And sawst the secrets of the world vnmade,
     Why suffredst thou thy Nephewes deare to fall
8 With Elfin sword, most shamefully betrade?
   Lo where the stout Sansioy doth sleepe in deadly shade.

1 She stayed; and forth Duessa gan proceed:

stayed > remained; desisted [from starting her journey] gan > did

2 "O, you most ancient grandmother of all, 3 More old than Jove, whom you at first did breed, 4 Or that great house of gods celestial,

gods celestial > (The Olympian gods, over whom Jove reigned supreme; see Myth. 3.12)

5 Which was begotten in Demogorgon's hall,

Demogorgon > (A primordial enchanter commanding the underworld (DGDG 1.1); Chaos. Progenitor of all the gods. See also 101.37:8, 402.47:7)

6 And saw the secrets of the world unmade,

unmade > [in its chaotic or primeval state; see PL 2.890-6]

7 Why suffered you your nephews dear to fall

suffered > allowed nephews > grandsons; descendants [Sansfoy and Sansjoy]

8 With Elfin sword, most shamefully betrayed? 9 Lo, where the stout Sansjoy does sleep in deadly shade!

stout > brave; proud; robust

105.23

   And him before, I saw with bitter eyes
2 The bold Sansfoy shrinke vnderneath his speare;
     And now the pray of fowles in field he lyes,
4 Nor wayld of friends, nor laid on groning beare,
     That whylome was to me too dearely deare.
6 O what of Gods then boots it to be borne,
     If old Aveugles sonnes so euill heare?
8 Or who shall not great +Nightes+ children scorne,
   When two of three her Nephews are so fowle forlorne?

8 Nightes > Nights drad 1609

1 "And him before, I saw with bitter eyes

him before > [before him, i.e. chronologically]

2 The bold Sansfoy shrink underneath his spear;

his > [the Elf's, i.e. the Redcross Knight's]

3 And now the prey of fowls in field he lies, 4 Nor wailed of friends, nor laid on groaning bier,

Nor > Neither wailed of > mourned by groaning > sorrowful [surrounded by mourners]

5 That whilom was to me too dearly dear.

That > [He who] whilom > formerly dearly > dearly (in the modern sense); grievously

6 O what of gods then boots it to be born,

boots > avails

7 If old Aveugle's sons so evil hear?

Aveugle > "Blind", "Blind-man" (French word. He is the son of Nox and the father of Sansfoy, Sansloy, and Sansjoy) so evil hear > such evil is heard [If of old Aveugle's sons such evil is heard, made public: Latin audire male]

8 Or who shall not great Night's children scorn, 9 When two of three her nephews are so foul forlorn?

three her nephews > her three grandsons forlorn > ruined [by the Redcross Knight]; deserted, abandoned [by their grandmother]

105.24

   Vp then, vp dreary Dame, of darknesse Queene,
2 Go gather vp the reliques of thy race,
     Or else goe them auenge, and let be seene,
4 That dreaded Night in brightest day hath place,
     And can the children of faire light deface.
6 Her feeling speeches some compassion moued
     In hart, and chaunge in that great mothers face:
8 Yet pittie in her hart was neuer proued
   Till then: +for+ euermore she hated, neuer loued.

9 for > and 1596, 1609

1 "Up then, up, dreary dame, of darkness queen!

dreary > dreadful

2 Go gather up the relics of your race, 3 Or else go them avenge, and let be seen 4 That dreaded Night in brightest day has place,

place > rank, status

5 And can the children of fair Light deface."

deface > destroy; cast in the shade

6 Her feeling speeches some compassion moved 7 In heart, and change in that great mother's face: 8 Yet pity in her heart was never proved

proved > felt, experienced

9 Till then: for evermore she hated, never loved.

105.25

   And said, Deare daughter rightly may I rew
2 The fall of famous children borne of mee,
     And good successes, which their foes ensew:
4 But who can turne the streame of destinee,
     Or breake the chayne of strong necessitee,
6 Which fast is tyde to Ioues eternall seat?
     The sonnes of Day he fauoureth, I see,
8 And by my ruines thinkes to make them great:
   To make one great by others losse, is bad excheat.

1 And said, "Dear daughter, rightly may I rue 2 The fall of famous children borne of me,

of > by (indirectly or metaphorically)

3 And good successes, which their foes ensue:

their foes ensue > follow their foes

4 But who can turn the stream of destiny, 5 Or break the chain of strong necessity,

chain > (The "golden rope" of Zeus (Jove), suspended from heaven to earth, by which he controls all creation. See Iliad 8.18-27; 109.1:1-2, 207.46)

6 Which fast is tied to Jove's eternal seat?

fast > firmly seat > throne

7 The sons of Day he favours, I see, 8 And by my ruins thinks to make them great: 9 To make one great by other's loss is bad escheat.

escheat > {Reversion of property to crown or to feudal lord on intestacy; property so reverting; plunder; forced contribution; here, perhaps, = "exchange", "bargain"}

105.26

   Yet shall they not escape so freely all;
2 For some shall pay the price of others guilt:
     And he the man that made Sansfoy to fall,
4 Shall with his owne bloud price that he hath spilt.
     But what art thou, that telst of Nephews kilt?
6 I that do seeme not I, Duessa +am+,
     (Quoth she) how euer now in garments gilt,
8 And gorgeous gold arayd I to thee came;
   Duessa I, the daughter of Deceipt and Shame.

6 am > ame 1590

1 "Yet shall they not escape so freely all; 2 For some shall pay the price of others' guilt: 3 And he (the man that made Sansfoy to fall)

made > caused

4 Shall with his own blood price that he has spilt.

price > pay for that > [that which]

5 But what are you, that tell of nephews killed?"

nephews > grandchildren, descendants

6 "I, that do seem not I, Duessa am," 7 Quoth she, "however now in garments gilt

however > by whatever means (i.e. she implies that her apparel is of no consequence) gilt > gilded

8 And gorgeous gold arrayed I to you came; 9 Duessa I, the daughter of Deceit and Shame."

105.27

   Then bowing downe her aged backe, she kist
2 The wicked witch, saying; In that faire face
     The false resemblance of Deceipt, I wist
4 Did closely lurke; yet so true-seeming grace
     It carried, that I scarse in darkesome place
6 Could it discerne, though I the mother bee
     Of falshood, and root of Duessaes race.
8 O welcome child, whom I haue longd to see,
   And now haue seene vnwares. Lo now I go with thee.

1 Then, bowing down her aged back, she kissed 2 The wicked witch, saying: "In that fair face 3 The false resemblance of Deceit I wist

wist > became aware, recognized; knew

4 Did closely lurk; yet so true-seeming grace

closely > secretly, covertly so > such

5 It carried, that I scarce in darksome place 6 Could it discern, though I the mother be 7 Of falsehood, and root of Duessa's race. 8 O welcome child, whom I have longed to see, 9 And now have seen unwares. Lo, now I go with you."

unwares > unexpectedly

105.28

   Then to her yron wagon she betakes,
2 And with her beares the fowle welfauourd witch:
     Through mirkesome aire her readie way she makes.
4 Her twyfold Teme, of which two blacke as pitch,
     And two were browne, yet each to each vnlich,
6 Did softly swim away, ne euer stampe,
     Vnlesse she chaunst their stubborne mouths to twitch;
8 Then foming tarre, their bridles they would champe,
   And trampling the fine element, would fiercely rampe.

1 Then to her iron wagon she betakes,

betakes > [betakes herself]

2 And with her bears the foul well-favoured witch:

bears > carries; takes as a companion (cf. 102.45:9) well-favoured > beautiful

3 Through murksome air her ready way she makes.

murksome > dark, obscure (OED cites this as first occurrence) ready > {Lying directly before one; contrasted with the upward path at 110.33:9}

4 Her twofold team, of which two black as pitch, 5 And two were brown, yet each to each unlike,

brown > [merely] dusky, dark

6 Did softly swim away, nor ever stamp, 7 Unless she chanced their stubborn mouths to twitch;

twitch > jerk at; pinch, nip, pain

8 Then, foaming tar, their bridles they would champ, 9 And, trampling the fine element, would fiercely ramp.

fine element > [air] ramp > rear up

105.29

   So well they sped, that they be come at length
2 Vnto the place, whereas the Paynim lay,
     Deuoid of outward sense, and natiue strength,
4 Couerd with charmed cloud from vew of day,
     And sight of men, since his late luckelesse fray.
6 His cruell wounds with cruddy bloud congealed,
     They binden vp so wisely, as they may,
8 And handle softly, till they can be healed:
   So lay him in her charet, close in night concealed.

1 So well they sped, that they be come at length 2 To the place where the paynim lay,

paynim > pagan, heathen

3 Devoid of outward sense and native strength,

outward sense > [faculty of perceiving the outside world; he is unconscious] native > innate, natural

4 Covered with charmed cloud from view of day 5 And sight of men, since his late luckless fray. 6 His cruel wounds, with cruddy blood congealed,

cruddy > clotted

7 They bind up so wisely as they may,

wisely > skilfully

8 And handle softly, till they can be healed: 9 So lay him in her chariot, close in night concealed.

close > closely; secretly

105.30

   And all the while she stood vpon the ground,
2 The wakefull dogs did neuer cease to bay,
     As giuing warning of th'vnwonted sound,
4 With which her yron wheeles did them affray,
     And her darke griesly looke them much dismay;
6 The messenger of death, the ghastly Owle
     With drearie shriekes did also her bewray;
8 And hungry Wolues continually did howle,
   At her abhorred face, so filthy and so fowle.

1 And all the while she stood upon the ground, 2 The wakeful dogs did never cease to bay,

wakeful dogs > (See Aen. 6.257)

3 As giving warning of the unwonted sound

As > [As though] unwonted > unaccustomed

4 With which her iron wheels did them affray,

affray > terrify

5 And her dark grisly look them much dismay;

grisly > horrible, fearsome

6 The messenger of death, the ghastly owl,

ghastly > terrible, causing terror (from same root as "ghost") owl > (To the Romans, an omen of death: see Met. 10.453; see also 109.33:6, etc.)

7 With dreary shrieks did also her bewray;

dreary > dreadful bewray > betray, reveal

8 And hungry wolves continually did howl 9 At her abhorred face, so filthy and so foul.

105.31

   Thence turning backe in silence soft they stole,
2 And brought the heauie corse with easie pace
     To yawning gulfe of deepe Auernus hole.
4 By that same hole an entrance darke and bace
     With smoake and sulphure hiding all the place,
6 Descends to hell: there creature neuer past,
     That backe returned without heauenly grace;
8 But dreadfull Furies, which their chaines haue brast,
   And damned sprights sent forth to make ill men aghast.

1 Thence turning back in silence soft they stole, 2 And brought the heavy corse with easy pace

corse > body

3 To yawning gulf of deep Avernus' hole.

gulf > abyss Avernus > (Lake Avernus, a volcanic lake near Naples, still called Lago d'Averno. Near it was the cave of the Cumaean Sibyl, through which Aeneas descended to the infernal regions: see Aen. 6.237 ff.)

4 By that same hole an entrance, dark and base,

By > [By means of, through] base > low

5 With smoke and sulphur hiding all the place, 6 Descends to hell: there creature never passed, 7 That back returned without heavenly grace; 8 But dreadful Furies who their chains have burst,

But > [Except]

9 And damned sprites sent forth to make ill men aghast.

ill > evil aghast > frightened (esp. with terror of the supernatural)

105.32

   By that same way the direfull dames doe driue
2 Their mournefull charet, fild with rusty blood,
     And downe to Plutoes house are come biliue:
4 Which passing through, on euery side them stood
     The trembling ghosts with sad amazed mood,
6 Chattring their yron teeth, and staring wide
     With stonie eyes; and all the hellish brood
8 Of feends infernall flockt on euery side,
   To gaze on earthly wight, that with the Night durst ride.

1 By that same way the direful dames do drive 2 Their mournful chariot, fild with rusty blood,

fild > defiled; or: filled (cf. 107.9:9, etc.) rusty > rust-coloured; morally foul, corrupted

3 And down to Pluto's house are come belive:

belive > forthwith, without delay

4 Which passing through, on every side them stood

them > [of them]

5 The trembling ghosts with sad amazed mood,

sad > grave mood > mind, feeling, spirit

6 Chattering their iron teeth, and staring wide 7 With stony eyes; and all the hellish brood

stony > rigid, fixed brood > race

8 Of fiends infernal flocked on every side, 9 To gaze on earthly wight, that with the Night dared ride.

wight > creature, person, woman

105.33

   They pas the bitter waues of Acheron,
2 Where many soules sit wailing woefully,
     And come to fiery flood of Phlegeton,
4 Whereas the damned ghosts in torments fry,
     And with sharp shrilling shriekes doe bootlesse cry,
6 Cursing high Ioue, the which them thither sent.
     The house of endlesse paine is built thereby,
8 In which ten thousand sorts of punishment
   The cursed creatures doe eternally torment.

1 They pass the bitter waves of Acheron,

Acheron > (The "Stream of Woe": one of the five rivers of hell.
The others are Cocytus, Phlegethon, Lethe, and Styx)

2 Where many souls sit wailing woefully, 3 And come to fiery flood of Phlegethon,

Phlegethon > (The "Stream of Fire": one of the five rivers of hell, through which fire flows instead of water (see Aen. 6.551))

4 Where the damned ghosts in torments fry, 5 And with sharp shrilling shrieks do bootless cry,

bootless > hopelessly, without remedy

6 Cursing high Jove, who them thither sent. 7 The house of endless pain is built thereby,

thereby > there; next to it [Phlegethon]

8 In which ten thousand sorts of punishment 9 The cursed creatures do eternally torment.

105.34

   Before the threshold dreadfull Cerberus
2 His three deformed heads did lay along,
     Curled with thousand adders venemous,
4 And lilled forth his bloudie flaming tong:
     At them he gan to reare his bristles strong,
6 And felly gnarre, vntill dayes enemy
     Did him appease; then downe his taile he hong
8 And suffered them to passen quietly:
   For she in hell and heauen had power equally.

1 Before the threshold dreadful Cerberus

Cerberus > (The three-headed hound guarding the gates of hell. See Aen. 6.417 ff., Virgil's Gnat 345-52)

2 His three deformed heads did lay along,

along > at full length

3 Curled with thousand adders venomous, 4 And lilled forth his bloody flaming tongue:

lilled > lolled

5 At them he began to rear his bristles strong,

bristles > hackles

6 And felly gnarr, until day's enemy

felly > fiercely gnarr > growl, snarl

7 Did him appease; then down his tail he hung 8 And suffered them to pass quietly:

suffered > allowed

9 For she in hell and heaven had power equally.

105.35

   There was Ixion turned on a wheele,
2 For daring tempt the Queene of heauen to sin;
     And Sisyphus an huge round stone did reele
4 Against an hill, ne might from labour lin;
     There thirstie Tantalus hong by the chin;
6 And Tityus fed a vulture on his maw;
     Typh{oe}us ioynts were stretched on a gin,
8 Theseus condemned to endlesse slouth by law,
   And fifty sisters water in leake vessels draw.

1 There was Ixion, turned on a wheel

Ixion > (King of the Lapithae in Thessaly; for attempting to seduce Juno he was sent to hell and bound to a perpetually revolving wheel)

2 For daring tempt the queen of heaven to sin;

the queen of heaven > (Juno, sister and wife of Jove)

3 And Sisyphus a huge round stone did reel

Sisyphus > (In later accounts, a corrupt king of Corinth, the father of Ulysses. For his wickedness he was condemned to push uphill a great marble boulder which constantly rolled down again. See Virgil's Gnat 389-92) reel > roll

4 Against a hill, nor might from labour lin;

lin > cease, leave off

5 There thirsty Tantalus hung by the chin;

Tantalus > (An evil king, variously said to be of Lydia, Phrygia, Argos, or Corinth. According to the account preferred, his fatal crime was (1) to have divulged secrets entrusted to him by Jupiter, (2) to have offered his son Pelops, in cooked pieces, as food for the gods, (3) to have stolen ambrosia and nectar from the table of the gods, or (4) to have feloniously received a golden dog, the property of the goddess Rhea. He was punished by being placed within reach of food and water which drew back whenever he tried to eat or drink; moreover, a giant rock was suspended over his head, perpetually threatening to fall and crush him. See Odyssey 11.582-92, Virgil's Gnat 385-8)

6 And Tityus fed a vulture on his maw;

Tityus > (A giant who attempted to rape the goddess Latona (Diana, in some accounts): he was killed, stretched out on a rack, and condemned to having his liver perpetually eaten by two vultures. See Virgil's Gnat 377) maw > stomach

7 Typhoeus' joints were stretched on a gin;

Typhoeus > (Another name for Typhon, a fearsome giant who contended with the gods) gin > engine [of torture], rack (a long table with a roller at each end to which the ankles and wrists were attached by ropes)

8 Theseus, condemned to endless sloth by law;

Theseus > (Condemned for helping Pirithous in his attempt to abduct Proserpine; he was bound to the Chair of Forgetfulness, but was eventually rescued by Hercules. See Aen. 6.617-8)

9 And fifty sisters water in leaky vessels draw.

fifty sisters > (The Belides or Dana{i"}des, daughters of Dana{u"}s, condemned endlessly to draw water in sieves. They killed their bridegrooms, the fifty sons of Aegyptus; strictly, only forty- nine sisters were thus condemned, since one of their number, Hypermnestra, spared her husband. In the interests of scansion, Spenser wisely overlooks this detail. See Virgil's Gnat 393-6)

105.36

   They all beholding worldly wights in place,
2 Leaue off their worke, vnmindfull of their smart,
     To gaze on them; who forth by them doe pace,
4 Till they be come vnto the furthest part:
     Where was a Caue ywrought by wondrous art,
6 Deepe, darke, vneasie, dolefull, comfortlesse,
     In which sad {AE}sculapius farre +a part+
8 Emprisond was in chaines remedilesse,
   For that Hippolytus rent corse he did redresse.

7 a part > apart 1590, 1609

1 They all, beholding worldly wights in place,

worldly > mortal wights > creatures, people in place > there

2 Leave off their work, unmindful of their smart,

smart > suffering; sorrow; pain

3 To gaze on them; who forth by them do pace, 4 Till they be come to the furthest part: 5 Where was a cave wrought by wondrous art, 6 Deep, dark, uneasy, doleful, comfortless,

uneasy > disagreeable; without ease

7 In which sad Aesculapius, far apart,

Aesculapius > (God of medicine and healing, son of Apollo and
Coronis)

8 Imprisoned was in chains remediless,

remediless > without hope of rescue

9 For that Hippolytus' rent corse he did redress.

For that > Because Hippolytus > (Son of Theseus and Hippolyte (or her sister Antiope): see Met. 15.497 ff., Aen. 7.761 ff., DGDG 10.50) rent corse > torn body redress > restore, revivify

105.37

   Hippolytus a iolly huntsman was,
2 That wont in charet chace the foming Bore;
     He all his Peeres in beautie did surpas,
4 But Ladies loue as losse of time forbore:
     His wanton stepdame loued him the more,
6 But when she saw her offred sweets refused
     Her loue she turnd to hate, and him before
8 His father fierce of treason false accused,
   And with her gealous termes his open eares abused.

1 Hippolytus a jolly huntsman was,

jolly > gallant; handsome

2 That wont in chariot chase the foaming boar;

wont > was accustomed chase > [to chase]

3 He all his peers in beauty did surpass, 4 But ladies' love as loss of time forbore: 5 His wanton stepdame loved him the more,

stepdame > stepmother (Phaedra, wife of Theseus and daughter of Minos, King of Crete. See Aen. 7.761-82, Met. 15.497 ff.)

6 But, when she saw her offered sweets refused, 7 Her love she turned to hate, and him before 8 His father fierce of treason false accused,

fierce > fiercely; fierce

9 And with her jealous terms his open ears abused.

jealous > [arousing jealousy; she accused Hippolytus of making advances to her] terms > words, language open > receptive abused > deceived

105.38

   Who all in rage his Sea-god syre besought,
2 Some cursed vengeance on his sonne to cast:
     From surging gulf two monsters straight were brought,
4 With dread whereof his chasing steedes aghast,
     Both charet swift and huntsman ouercast.
6 His goodly corps on ragged +cliffs+ yrent,
     Was quite dismembred, and his members chast
8 Scattered on euery mountaine, as he went,
   That of Hippolytus was left no moniment.

6 cliffs > clifts 1590 etc.: FE

1 Who, all in rage, his sea-god sire besought

sea-god sire > (Neptune; though the father of Theseus was Aegeus, King of Athens)

2 Some cursed vengeance on his son to cast: 3 From surging gulf two monsters straight were brought,

straight > straightway, at once

4 With dread whereof his chasing steeds, aghast, 5 Both chariot swift and huntsman overcast. 6 His goodly corpse, on ragged cliffs rent,

goodly > fine, handsome rent > torn

7 Was quite dismembered, and his members chaste

members > limbs; organs, parts of his body

8 Scattered on every mountain as he went, 9 That of Hippolytus was left no monument.

That > [So that] monument > evidence; hence: trace

105.39

   His cruell stepdame seeing what was donne,
2 Her wicked dayes with wretched knife did end,
     In death auowing th'innocence of her sonne.
4 Which hearing his rash Syre, began to rend
     His haire, and hastie tongue, that did offend:
6 Tho gathering vp the +relicks+ of his smart
     By Dianes meanes, who was Hippolyts frend,
8 Them brought to {AE}sculape, that by his art
   Did heale them all againe, and ioyned euery part.

6 relicks > reliques 1609

1 His cruel stepdame, seeing what was done, 2 Her wicked days with wretched knife did end, 3 In death avowing the innocence of her son. 4 Which hearing, his rash sire began to rend

sire > father

5 His hair, and hasty tongue that did offend: 6 Tho, gathering up the relics of his smart,

Tho > Then the relics of his smart > [Hippolytus's remains, which give Theseus mental pain]

7 By Diana's means, who was Hippolytus' friend,

Diana > (Virgin goddess of hunting and the moon; daughter of Jupiter and Latona; sister of Apollo) means > mediation, intervention, hence: assistance

8 Them brought to Aesculapius, who by his art 9 Did heal them all again, and joined every part.

105.40

   Such wondrous science in mans wit to raine
2 When Ioue auizd, that could the dead reuiue,
     And fates expired could renew againe,
4 Of endlesse life he might him not depriue,
     But vnto hell did thrust him downe aliue,
6 With flashing thunderbolt ywounded sore:
     Where long remaining, he did alwaies striue
8 Himselfe with salues to health for to restore,
   And slake the heauenly fire, that raged euermore.

1 Such wondrous science in man's wit to reign,

science > knowledge, skill wit > mind, intelligence, mental capacity

2 When Jove advised, that could the dead revive

advised > perceived

3 And fates expired could renew again,

fate > {Life, term of life allotted by the Fates}

4 Of endless life he might him not deprive,

not > (Because Aesculapius is a god and thus immortal)

5 But to hell did thrust him down alive,
6 With flashing thunderbolt wounded sore:
7 Where, long remaining, he did always strive
8 Himself with salves to health to restore,
9 And slake the heavenly fire that raged evermore.

105.41

   There auncient Night arriuing, did alight
2 From her +nigh+ wearie waine, and in her armes
     To {AE}sculapius brought the wounded knight:
4 Whom hauing softly disarayd of armes,
     Tho gan to him discouer all his harmes,
6 Beseeching him with prayer, and with praise,
     If either salues, or oyles, or herbes, or charmes
8 A fordonne wight from dore of death mote raise,
   He would at her request prolong her nephews daies.

2 nigh > high 1596, 1609

1 There ancient Night, arriving, did alight 2 From her nigh weary wain, and in her arms

wain > chariot

3 To Aesculapius brought the wounded knight: 4 Whom having softly disarrayed of arms,

disarrayed of arms > relieved of armour

5 Tho gan to him discover all his harms,

Tho gan to him discover all his harms > [Then did show Aesculapius all Sansjoy's wounds]

6 Beseeching him with prayer, and with praise, 7 If either salves, or oils, or herbs, or charms,

charms > spells

8 A fordone wight from door of death might raise,

fordone > utterly ruined, undone wight > mortal

9 He would at her request prolong her nephew's days.

nephew > grandson

105.42

   Ah Dame (quoth he) thou temptest me in vaine,
2 To dare the thing, which daily yet I rew,
     And the old cause of my continued paine
4 With like attempt to like end to renew.
     Is not enough, that thrust from heauen dew
6 Here endlesse penance for one fault I pay,
     But that redoubled crime with vengeance new
8 Thou biddest me to eeke? Can Night defray
   The wrath of thundring Ioue, that rules both night and day?

1 "Ah Dame," quoth he, "you tempt me in vain,
2 To dare the thing which daily yet I rue,
3 And the old cause of my continued pain
4 With like attempt to like end to renew.
5 Is not enough that, thrust from heaven due,

Is > [Is it] heaven due > [my heavenly due]

6 Here endless penance for one fault I pay, 7 But that redoubled crime with vengeance new 8 You bid me to eke? Can Night defray

eke > increase (referring to "crime" or "vengeance", or both) defray > discharge, settle; appease

9 The wrath of thundering Jove, that rules both night and day?"

105.43

   Not so (quoth she) but sith that heauens king
2 From hope of heauen hath thee excluded quight,
     Why fearest thou, that canst not hope for thing,
4 And fearest not, that more thee hurten might,
     Now in the powre of euerlasting Night?
6 Goe to then, {o^} thou farre renowmed sonne
     Of great Apollo, shew thy famous might
8 In medicine, that else hath to thee wonne
   Great paines, and greater praise, both neuer to be donne.

1 "Not so," quoth she, "but, sith that heaven's king

sith that > since

2 From hope of heaven has you excluded quite, 3 Why fear you, that cannot hope for thing,

thing > [anything]

4 And fear not, that more you hurt might,

more you hurt might > [anything more might hurt you]

5 Now in the power of everlasting Night? 6 Go to then, O you far renowned son 7 Of great Apollo; show your famous might

Apollo > (Phoebus Apollo, god of the sun, music, prophecy, etc.; in later legend he is identified with Paean, Homer's god of healing)

8 In medicine, that else has to you won

else > in another place; at another time

9 Great pains, and greater praise, both never to be done."

done > outdone; ended

105.44

   Her words preuaild: And then the learned leach
2 His cunning hand gan to his wounds to lay,
     And all things else, the which his art did teach:
4 Which hauing seene, from thence arose away
     The mother of dread darknesse, and let stay
6 Aueugles sonne there in the leaches cure,
     And backe returning tooke her wonted way,
8 To runne her timely race, whilst Ph{oe}bus pure
   In westerne waues his wearie wagon did recure.

1 Her words prevailed: and then the learned leech

leech > doctor

2 His cunning hand began to his wounds to lay,

cunning > skilful, clever

3 And all things else, which his art did teach: 4 Which having seen, from thence arose away 5 The mother of dread darkness, and let stay 6 Aveugle's son there in the leech's cure;

cure > care, charge

7 And, back returning, took her wonted way,

wonted > accustomed

8 To run her timely race, whilst Phoebus pure

timely > {Measured; keeping time} Phoebus > (Who each day drives his chariot across the sky)

9 In western waves his weary wagon did recure.

recure > restore, refresh

105.45

   The false Duessa leauing noyous Night,
2 Returnd to stately pallace of dame Pride;
     Where when she came, she found the Faery knight
4 Departed thence, albe his woundes wide
     Not throughly heald, vnreadie were to ride.
6 Good cause he had to hasten thence away;
     For on a day his wary Dwarfe had spide,
8 Where in a +dongeon+ deepe huge numbers lay
   Of caytiue wretched thrals, that wayled night and day.

8 dongeon > dungeon 1590, 1609

1 The false Duessa, leaving noyous Night,

noyous > injurious, vexatious

2 Returned to stately palace of Dame Pride; 3 Where, when she came, she found the Faery knight 4 Departed thence, albe his wounds wide,

albe > albeit, although

5 Not thoroughly healed, unready were to ride.

ride > [be ridden with]

6 Good cause he had to hasten thence away; 7 For on a day his wary dwarf had spied 8 Where in a dungeon deep huge numbers lay 9 Of caitiff wretched thralls, that wailed night and day.

caitiff > captive, wretched thralls > slaves

105.46

   A ruefull sight, as could be seene with eie;
2 Of whom he learned had in secret wise
     The hidden cause of their captiuitie,
4 How mortgaging their liues to Couetise,
     Through wastfull Pride, and wanton Riotise,
6 They were by law of that proud Tyrannesse
     Prouokt with Wrath, and Enuies false surmise,
8 Condemned to that Dongeon mercilesse,
   Where they should liue in woe, and die in wretchednesse.

1 A rueful sight as could be seen with eye;

A rueful > [As rueful a]

2 Of whom he learned had in secret wise

secret wise > [a secret fashion]

3 The hidden cause of their captivity, 4 How, mortgaging their lives to Covetise,

Covetise > Avarice (covetise = covetousness)

5 Through wasteful pride and wanton riotise,

wasteful > causing ruin wanton riotise > wild extravagance, dissipation

6 They were by law of that proud tyranness

law > command tyranness > female tyrant (Pride)

7 (Provoked with Wrath, and Envy's false surmise),

surmise > accusation, accusations

8 Condemned to that dungeon merciless,

merciless > without hope of mercy; or: merciless [that merciless dungeon]

9 Where they should live in woe, and die in wretchedness.

105.47

   There was that great proud king of Babylon,
2 That would compell all nations to adore,
     And him as onely God to call vpon,
4 Till through celestiall doome throwne out of dore,
     Into an Oxe he was transform'd of yore:
6 There also was king Cr{ae}sus, that enhaunst
     His heart too high through his great riches store;
8 And proud Antiochus, the which aduaunst
   His cursed hand gainst God, and on his altars daunst.

1 There was that great proud king of Babylon,

king of Babylon > (Nebuchadnezzar (- 562 BC); see Dan. 1-4)

2 That would compel all nations to adore,

adore > [adore him]

3 And him as only god to call upon, 4 Till, through celestial doom thrown out of door,

doom > judgement

5 Into an ox he was transformed of yore:

of yore > of old, formerly

6 There also was King Croesus, that enhanced

Croesus > (King of Lydia, reigned 560-46 BC, who was fabled to turn everything he touched to gold) enhanced > exalted

7 His heart too high through his great riches' store;

riches' store > store of wealth

8 And proud Antiochus, who advanced

Antiochus > (Antiochus Epiphanes, - 164 BC, king of Syria who captured Judea and tried to eradicate Judaism, c. 166 BC)

9 His cursed hand gainst God, and on his altars danced.

gainst > against

105.48

   And them long time before, great Nimrod was,
2 That first the world with sword and fire warrayd;
     And after him old Ninus farre did pas
4 In princely pompe, of all the world obayd;
     There also was that mightie Monarch layd
6 Low vnder all, yet aboue all in pride,
     That name of natiue syre did fowle vpbrayd,
8 And would as Ammons sonne be magnifide,
   Till scornd of God and man a shamefull death he dide.

1 And them long time before, great Nimrod was,

Nimrod > (The first tyrant after Noah's Flood; associated with the founding of Babylon and Nineveh (Gen. 10.9-12))

2 That first the world with sword and fire warrayed;

warrayed > waged war on, laid to waste

3 And after him old Ninus far did pass

Ninus > (King Ninus of Assyria, fl. c. 1250 BC, the reputed founder of Nineveh) pass > surpass, go in excess of

4 In princely pomp, of all the world obeyed;

of > by

5 There also was that mighty monarch laid

monarch > (Alexander the Great, 356-323 BC, king of Macedon; conquered Thebes, Persia, Syria, Phoenicia, Egypt)

6 Low under all, yet above all in pride, 7 That name of native sire did foul upbraid,

native sire > [his] natural father upbraid > censure

8 And would as Ammon's son be magnified,

Ammon > (An Egyptian divinity to whom was dedicated a celebrated temple and oracle at Ammonium (Siwah), in Libya, which was visited by Alexander. Ammon was identified by the Romans with Jupiter)

9 Till, scorned of God and man, a shameful death he died.

of > by

105.49

   All these together in one heape were throwne,
2 Like carkases of beasts in butchers stall.
     And in another corner wide were strowne
4 The antique ruines of the Romaines fall:
     Great Romulus the Grandsyre of them all,
6 Proud Tarquin, and too lordly Lentulus,
     Stout Scipio, and stubborne Hanniball,
8 Ambitious Sylla, and sterne Marius,
   High C{ae}sar, great Pompey, and fierce Antonius.

1 All these together in one heap were thrown, 2 Like carcases of beasts in butcher's stall. 3 And in another corner wide were strewn 4 The antique ruins of the Romans' fall: 5 Great Romulus, the grandsire of them all,

Romulus > (Founder and first king of Rome, the twin brother of Remus) grandsire > grandfather

6 Proud Tarquin, and too lordly Lentulus,

Tarquin > (Lucius Tarquinius Superbus (died after 496 BC), last king of Rome) Lentulus > (One of the families of the patrician gens Cornelia; it gave rise to the Latin noun Lentulitas, coined by Cicero, meaning "the family pride of the Lentuli")

7 Stout Scipio, and stubborn Hannibal,

Stout > Proud; bold; obstinate Scipio > (Publius Cornelius Scipio (Scipio Africanus Major), c. 232- 183 BC, the general who defeated Hannibal at Zama, 202 BC) Hannibal > (247-183 BC, general of the Carthaginians in the Second Punic War; after his defeat by Scipio he suffered exile and committed suicide with poison)

8 Ambitious Sulla, and stern Marius,

Sulla > (Lucius Cornelius Sulla, 138-78 BC, rival of Marius, who rose from humble origins to become dictator of Rome) Marius > (Gaius Cornelius Marius, c. 155-86 BC, leader of the popular party in Rome, seven times a consul, conqueror of Jugurtha and the Cimbri)

9 High Caesar, great Pompey, and fierce Antonius.

Caesar > (Gaius Julius Caesar, c. 101-44 BC, whose overweening power and ambition led to his assassination) Pompey > (Pompeius Magnus, 106-48 BC, triumvir with Caesar and Crassus; Caesar's great rival) Antonius > (Marcus Antonius, Mark Antony, c. 83-30 BC, triumvir and general; committed suicide after defeat by Octavian)

105.50

   Amongst these mighty men were wemen mixt,
2 Proud wemen, vaine, forgetfull of their yoke:
     The bold Semiramis, whose sides transfixt
4 With sonnes owne blade, her fowle reproches spoke;
     Faire Sthenob{oe}a, that her selfe did choke
6 With wilfull cord, for wanting of her will;
     High minded Cleopatra, that with stroke
8 Of Aspes sting her selfe did stoutly kill:
   And thousands moe the like, that did that dongeon fill.

1 Amongst these mighty men were women mixed, 2 Proud women, vain, forgetful of their yoke: 3 The bold Semiramis, whose sides transfixed

Semiramis > (Fl. c. 1250 BC, queen of King Ninus of Assyria; seduced her own son, who murdered her)

4 With son's own blade, her foul reproaches spoke; 5 Fair Sthenoboea, that herself did choke

Sthenoboea > (Queen of King Proetus of Argos, rejected lover of his brother Bellerophon; committed suicide on Bellerophon's marriage)

6 With wilful cord, for wanting of her will;

wanting > being deprived

7 High-minded Cleopatra, that with stroke

Cleopatra > (69-30 BC, daughter of Ptolemy XI; queen of Egypt, mistress of Marcus Antonius; killed herself when Antony fell on his sword)

8 Of asp's sting herself did stoutly kill:

stoutly > proudly

9 And thousands more the like, that did that dungeon fill.

105.51

   Besides the endlesse routs of wretched thralles,
2 Which thither were assembled day by day,
     From all the world after their wofull falles,
4 Through wicked pride, and wasted wealthes decay.
     But most of all, which in +that+ Dongeon lay
6 Fell from high Princes courts, or Ladies bowres,
     Where they in idle pompe, or wanton play,
8 Consumed had their goods, and thriftlesse howres,
   And lastly throwne themselues into these heauy stowres.

5 that > the 1590 etc.: FE

1 Besides the endless routs of wretched thralls

routs > crowds thralls > slaves, prisoners

2 Who thither were assembled day by day 3 From all the world, after their woeful falls, 4 Through wicked pride, and wasted wealth's decay,

decay > downfall, destruction

5 But most of all, who in that dungeon lay,

But > (This does not follow from "Besides" in line 1. The sense seems to be: "Besides the endless routs … decay, were also, most of all, those who in that dungeon lay …")

6 Fallen from high princes' courts, or ladies' bowers,

bowers > bedrooms

7 Where they in idle pomp, or wanton play, 8 Consumed had their goods and thriftless hours, 9 And lastly thrown themselves into these heavy stours.

stours > straits, distressful circumstances

105.52

   Whose case when as the carefull Dwarfe had tould,
2 And made ensample of their mournefull sight
     Vnto his maister, he no lenger would
4 There dwell in perill of like painefull plight,
     But early rose, and ere that dawning light
6 Discouered had the world to heauen wyde,
     He by a priuie Posterne tooke his flight,
8 That of no enuious eyes he mote be spyde:
   For doubtlesse death ensewd, if any him descryde.

1 Whose case when the careful dwarf had told,

careful > {Full of care, wary}

2 And made example of their mournful sight

example > warning

3 To his master, he no longer would 4 There dwell in peril of like painful plight, 5 But early rose, and, ere that dawning light

ere that > [before the]

6 Discovered had the world to heaven wide,

Discovered > Revealed

7 He by a privy postern took his flight,

privy > secret, hidden postern > {Back door or gate; any door distinct from the main one}

8 That of no envious eyes he might be spied:

That of > [So that by] envious > malevolent

9 For, doubtless, death ensued if any him descried.

ensued > [would have ensued]

105.53

   Scarse could he footing find in that fowle way,
2 For many corses, like a great Lay-stall
     Of murdred men which therein strowed lay,
4 Without remorse, or decent funerall:
     Which all through that great Princesse pride did fall
6 And came to shamefull end. And them beside
     Forth ryding vnderneath the castell wall,
8 A donghill of dead carkases he spide,
   The dreadfull spectacle of that sad house of Pride.

1 Scarce could he footing find in that foul way, 2 For many corses, like a great laystall

For > [Because of the] corses > bodies laystall > {Place where bodies are laid; dunghill, midden}

3 Of murdered men, who therein strewn lay, 4 Without remorse or decent funeral:

remorse > pity

5 Who all through that great princess Pride did fall
6 And came to shameful end. And them beside,
7 Forth riding underneath the castle wall,
8 A dunghill of dead carcases he spied,
9 The dreadful spectacle of that sad House of Pride.

spectacle > example; model, pattern

CANTO VI

2 From lawlesse lust by wondrous grace
     fayre Vna is releast:
4 Whom saluage nation does adore,
     and learnes her wise beheast.

1 From lawless lust by wondrous grace 2 fair Una is released: 3 Whom savage nation does adore,

savage > wild, uncivilized

4 and learns her wise behest.

behest > {Bidding; injunction, often of a religious nature; cf. 107.18:7}

106.1

   AS when a ship, that flyes faire vnder saile,
2 An hidden rocke escaped hath vnwares,
     That lay in waite her wrack for to bewaile,
4 The Marriner yet halfe amazed stares
     At perill past, and yet +in+ doubt ne dares
6 To ioy at his foole-happie ouersight:
     So doubly is distrest twixt ioy and cares
8 The dreadlesse courage of this Elfin knight,
   Hauing escapt so sad ensamples in his sight.

5 in > it 1590 etc.: FE

1 As when a ship, that flies fair under sail, 2 A hidden rock escaped has unwares,

unwares > unwittingly

3 That lay in wait her wreck to bewail,

bewail > ?cause, ?choose, ?mourn (perhaps an error)

4 The mariner yet half amazed stares 5 At peril past, and yet in doubt neither dares

doubt > fear

6 To joy at his fool-happy oversight:

joy > rejoice fool-happy > lucky

7 So doubly is distressed 'twixt joy and cares 8 The dreadless courage of this Elfin knight,

dreadless courage > fearless spirit

9 Having escaped so sad examples in his sight.

so > such

106.2

   Yet sad he was that his too hastie speed
2 The faire Duess' had forst him leaue behind;
     And yet more sad, that Vna his deare dreed
4 Her truth had staind with treason so vnkind;
     Yet crime in her could neuer creature find,
6 But for his loue, and for her owne selfe sake,
     She wandred had from one to other Ynd,
8 Him for to seeke, ne euer would forsake,
   Till her vnwares the fierce Sansloy did ouertake.

1 Yet sad he was, that his too hasty speed 2 The fair Duessa had forced him leave behind;

leave > [to leave]

3 And yet more sad, that Una, his dear dread,

dread > loved one, object of reverence

4 Her truth had stained with treason so unkind;

unkind > unnatural; and perhaps: against her nature

5 Yet crime in her could never creature find, 6 But for his love, and for her own self sake, 7 She wandered had from one to other Ind

from one to other Ind > (Proverbial: a great distance; from the East to the West Indies. Cf. As You Like It III ii 78)

8 Him to seek, nor ever would forsake,

forsake > [forsake him]

9 Till her unwares the fierce Sansloy did overtake.

unwares > unexpectedly

106.3

   Who after Archimagoes fowle defeat,
2 Led her away into a forrest wilde,
     And turning wrathfull fire to lustfull heat,
4 With beastly sin thought her to haue defilde,
     And made the vassall of his pleasures vilde.
6 Yet first he cast by treatie, and by traynes,
     Her to perswade, that stubborne fort to yilde:
8 For greater conquest of hard loue he gaynes,
   That workes it to his will, then he that it constraines.

1 Who, after Archimago's foul defeat, 2 Led her away into a forest wild, 3 And, turning wrathful fire to lustful heat, 4 With beastly sin thought her to have defiled, 5 And made the vassal of his pleasures vile.

vassal > slave

6 Yet first he cast by treaty, and by trains,

cast > resolved, designed treaty > entreaty, persuasion trains > trickery

7 Her to persuade that stubborn fort to yield: 8 For greater conquest of hard love he gains, 9 That works it to his will, than he that it constrains.

constrains > forces; achieves by force

106.4

   With fawning wordes he courted her a while,
2 And looking louely, and oft sighing sore,
     Her constant hart did tempt with diuerse guile:
4 But +wordes+ and lookes, and sighes she did abhore,
     As rocke of Diamond stedfast euermore.
6 Yet for to feed his fyrie lustfull eye,
     He snatcht the vele, that hong her face before;
8 Then gan her beautie shine, as brightest skye,
   And burnt his beastly hart t'efforce her chastitye.

4 wordes > wordes, 1590, 1609

1 With fawning words he courted her awhile, 2 And looking lovely, and oft sighing sore,

lovely > lovingly

3 Her constant heart did tempt with diverse guile:

diverse > {Of different sorts}

4 But words, and looks, and sighs she did abhor,
5 As rock of diamond steadfast evermore.
6 Yet to feed his fiery lustful eye,
7 He snatched the veil that hung her face before;
8 Then gan her beauty shine as brightest sky,

gan > did

9 And burnt his beastly heart to efforce her chastity.

efforce > force, overcome by force (SUS); hence: violate

106.5

   So when he saw his flatt'ring arts to fayle,
2 And subtile engines bet from batteree,
     With greedy force he gan the fort assayle,
4 Whereof he weend possessed soone to bee,
     And +win+ rich spoile of ransackt chastetee.
6 Ah heauens, that do this hideous act behold,
     And heauenly virgin thus outraged see,
8 How can ye vengeance iust so long withhold,
   And hurle not flashing flames vpon that Paynim bold?

5 win > with 1596, 1609

1 So when he saw his flattering arts fail, 2 And subtile engines beat from battery,

subtile engines > cunning engines of warfare beat from battery > beaten back from the attack

3 With greedy force he gan the fort assail

greedy > eager, reckless gan > did

4 Whereof he weened possessed soon to be,

Whereof > Of which weened > supposed [himself]

5 And win rich spoil of ransacked chastity. 6 Ah heavens, that do this hideous act behold,

hideous > odious

7 And heavenly virgin thus outraged see, 8 How can you vengeance just so long withhold,

vengeance just > [just vengeance]

9 And hurl not flashing flames upon that paynim bold?

paynim > pagan, heathen

106.6

   The pitteous maiden carefull comfortlesse,
2 Does throw out thrilling shriekes, and shrieking cryes,
     The last vaine helpe of womens great distresse,
4 And with loud plaints importuneth the skyes,
     That molten starres do drop like weeping eyes;
6 And Ph{oe}bus flying so most shamefull sight,
     His blushing face in foggy cloud implyes,
8 And hides for shame. What wit of mortall wight
   Can now deuise to quit a thrall from such a plight?

1 The piteous maiden, careful, comfortless,

careful > {Full of cares, full of grief} comfortless > helpless, desolate

2 Does throw out thrilling shrieks, and shrieking cries

thrilling > piercing

3 (The last vain help of women's great distress), 4 And with loud plaints importunes the skies,

plaints > lamentations

5 That molten stars do drop like weeping eyes;

That > [So that]

6 And Phoebus, flying so most shameful sight,

flying > fleeing, flying from

7 His blushing face in foggy cloud implies,

implies > enfolds; conceals

8 And hides for shame. What wit of mortal wight

wight > man

9 Can now devise to quit a thrall from such a plight?

quit > rescue thrall > captive

106.7

   Eternall prouidence exceeding thought,
2 Where none appeares can make her selfe a way:
     A wondrous way it for this Lady wrought,
4 From Lyons clawes to pluck the griped pray.
     Her shrill outcryes and shriekes so loud did bray,
6 That all the woodes and forestes did resownd;
     A troupe of Faunes and Satyres far away
8 Within the wood were dauncing in a rownd,
   Whiles old Syluanus slept in shady arber sownd.

1 Eternal providence, exceeding thought,

exceeding thought > [transcending human thought]

2 Where none appears, can make itself a way: 3 A wondrous way it for this lady wrought, 4 From lion's claws to pluck the gripped pray. 5 Her shrill outcries and shrieks so loud did bray,

bray > cry, cry out

6 That all the woods and forests did resound; 7 A troop of fauns and satyrs far away

fauns > (Horned forest spirits, man-like above and goat-like below; comparatively benign) satyrs > (Horned forest spirits, man-like above and goat-like below; usually portrayed as more or less lustful. In Roman mythology, Satyr, one of the satyrs, is a companion of Bacchus with long, pointed ears, behind which are the stumps of horns, with the tail of a goat, bristly hair, and a flat nose)

8 Within the wood were dancing in a round,

round > {Ring; a dance in which the performers move in a ring}

9 While old Silvanus slept in shady arbour sound.

Silvanus > (Roman god of forests and the country; identified with Pan) sound > soundly

106.8

   Who when they heard that pitteous strained voice,
2 In haste forsooke their rurall meriment,
     And ran towards the far rebownded noyce,
4 To weet, what wight so loudly did lament.
     Vnto the place they come incontinent:
6 Whom when the raging Sarazin espide,
     A rude, +misshapen+, monstrous rablement,
8 Whose like he neuer saw, he durst not bide,
   But got his ready steed, and fast away gan ride.

7 misshapen > mishappen 1590; mishapen 1596

1 Who, when they heard that piteous strained voice, 2 In haste forsook their rural merriment, 3 And ran towards the far rebounded noise,

rebounded > re-echoed, reverberated

4 To weet what wight so loudly did lament.

weet > find out wight > creature, person

5 To the place they come incontinent:

incontinent > immediately, straightway

6 Whom when the raging Saracen espied

Saracen > {Arab or Moslem of the time of the Crusades; pagan}

7 (A rude, misshapen, monstrous rabblement,

rabblement > rabble

8 Whose like he never saw), he dared not abide, 9 But got his ready steed, and fast away gan ride.

ready > ready; willing gan > did

106.9

   The wyld woodgods arriued in the place,
2 There find the virgin dolefull desolate,
     With ruffled rayments, and faire blubbred face,
4 As her outrageous foe had left her late,
     And trembling yet through feare of former hate;
6 All stand amazed at so vncouth sight,
     And gin to pittie her vnhappie state,
8 All stand astonied at her beautie bright,
   In their rude eyes vnworthie of so wofull plight.

1 The wild wood-gods, arrived in the place, 2 There find the virgin doleful, desolate, 3 With ruffled raiment, and fair blubbered face,

raiment > clothing blubbered > {Swollen or stained with tears}

4 As her outrageous foe had left her late,

late > lately

5 And trembling yet through fear of former hate;

former hate > [her former hate: the object of her former hatred (Sansloy)]

6 All stand amazed at so uncouth sight,

uncouth > extraordinary [a]

7 And begin to pity her unhappy state; 8 All stand astonied at her beauty bright,

astonied > stunned, astonished; dazed

9 In their rude eyes unworthy of so woeful plight.

rude > uneducated; uncivilized so > [such a]

106.10

   She more amaz'd, in double dread doth dwell;
2 And euery tender part for feare does shake:
     As when a greedie Wolfe through hunger fell
4 A seely Lambe farre from the flocke does take,
     Of whom he meanes his bloudie feast to make,
6 A Lyon spyes fast running towards him,
     The innocent pray in hast he does forsake,
8 Which quit from death yet quakes in euery lim
   With chaunge of feare, to see the Lyon looke so grim.

1 She, more amazed, in double dread does dwell;

amazed > astounded; panic-stricken

2 And every tender part for fear does shake: 3 As when a greedy wolf, through hunger fell,

fell > fierce, terrible

4 A seely lamb far from the flock does take,

seely > helpless, innocent

5 Of whom he means his bloody feast to make, 6 A lion spies fast running towards him:

A > [And a]

7 The innocent prey in haste he does forsake; 8 Which, quit from death, yet quakes in every limb

quit > released, rescued

9 With change of fear, to see the lion look so grim.

fear > [the source of its fear] grim > fierce

106.11

   Such fearefull fit assaid her trembling hart,
2 Ne word to speake, ne ioynt to moue she had:
     The saluage nation feele her secret smart,
4 And read her sorrow in her count'nance sad;
     Their frowning forheads with rough hornes yclad,
6 And rusticke horror all a side doe lay,
     And gently grenning, shew a semblance glad
8 To comfort her, and feare to put away,
   Their backward bent knees teach her humbly to obay.

1 Such fearful fit assayed her trembling heart;

Such > [A similarly] assayed > assailed; tested

2 Neither word to speak, nor joint to move, she had:

joint > limb

3 The savage nation feel her secret smart,

nation > clan, tribe smart > pain, suffering

4 And read her sorrow in her countenance sad; 5 Their frowning foreheads, with rough horns clad, 6 And rustic horror, all aside do lay,

horror > roughness

7 And, gently grinning, show a semblance glad 8 To comfort her; and, fear to put away, 9 Their backward bent knees teach her humbly to obey.

Their backward bent knees teach her humbly to obey > [Teach their backward bent knees to obey her humbly; obey = bow, do obeisance; "backward bent" because fauns and satyrs have the legs of a goat]

106.12

   The doubtfull Damzell dare not yet commit
2 Her single person to their barbarous truth,
     But still twixt feare and hope amazd does sit,
4 Late learnd what harme to hastie trust ensu'th,
     They in compassion of her tender youth,
6 And wonder of her beautie soueraine,
     Are wonne with pitty and vnwonted ruth,
8 And all prostrate vpon the lowly plaine,
   Doe kisse her feete, and fawne on her with count'nance faine.

1 The doubtful damsel dare not yet commit

doubtful > fearful

2 Her single person to their barbarous truth,

single > solitary truth > {Allegiance; conduct in accordance with the divine standard; also: a variant spelling of "troth", good faith}

3 But still 'twixt fear and hope amazed does sit,

amazed > astounded

4 Late learned what harm to hasty trust ensues;

Late > Recently learned > taught; having learned

5 They, in compassion of her tender youth, 6 And wonder of her beauty sovereign,

of > at

7 Are won with pity and unwonted ruth,

won > overcome unwonted ruth > unaccustomed pity

8 And, all prostrate upon the lowly plain, 9 Do kiss her feet, and fawn on her with countenance fain.

fain > glad, eager

106.13

   Their harts she ghesseth by their humble guise,
2 And yieldes her to extremitie of time;
     So from the ground she fearelesse doth arise,
4 And walketh forth without suspect of crime:
     They all as glad, as birdes of ioyous Prime,
6 Thence lead her forth, about her dauncing round,
     Shouting, and singing all a shepheards ryme,
8 And with greene braunches strowing all the ground,
   Do worship her, as Queene, with oliue girlond cround.

1 Their hearts she guesses by their humble guise,

guesses > judges; esteems, reckons guise > behaviour; demeanour, manner

2 And yields her to extremity of time;

her to extremity of time > [herself to the necessity of the moment]

3 So from the ground she fearless does arise, 4 And walks forth without suspect of crime:

suspect > suspicion

5 They, all as glad as birds of joyous prime,

They, all > (Or: They all,) prime > springtime; sunrise, morning

6 Thence lead her forth, about her dancing round, 7 Shouting, and singing all a shepherd's rhyme, 8 And with green branches strewing all the ground, 9 Do worship her as queen, with olive garland crowned.

106.14

   And all the way their merry pipes they sound,
2 That all the woods with +doubled+ Eccho ring,
     And with their horned feet do weare the ground,
4 Leaping like wanton kids in pleasant Spring.
     So towards old Syluanus they her bring;
6 Who with the noyse awaked, commeth out,
     To weet the cause, his weake steps gouerning,
8 And aged limbs on Cypresse stadle stout,
   And with an yuie twyne his +wast+ is girt about.

2 doubled > double 1609 9 wast > waste 1590, 1609

1 And all the way their merry pipes they sound,

merry > merry; delightful

2 That all the woods with doubled echo ring,

That > [So that] echo > (Echo is also the name of a mountain-nymph; see Romeo and Juliet II ii 161)

3 And with their horned feet do wear the ground, 4 Leaping like wanton kids in pleasant spring. 5 So towards old Silvanus they her bring; 6 Who, with the noise awoken, comes out 7 To weet the cause, his weak steps governing

weet > discover governing > supporting, guiding (refers both to his "weak steps" and his "aged limbs")

8 And aged limbs on cypress staddle stout,

staddle > tree-trunk, prop, support; hence: staff (it is a cypress staddle because of his love for Cyparissus (cf. 106.17; DGDG 13.17; Myth. 5.10))

9 And with an ivy twine his waist is girt about.

ivy > (Sacred to Bacchus)

106.15

   Far off he wonders, what them makes so glad,
2 +Or+ Bacchus merry fruit they did inuent,
     Or Cybeles franticke rites haue made them mad;
4 They drawing nigh, vnto their God present
     That flowre of faith and beautie excellent.
6 The God himselfe vewing that mirrhour rare,
     Stood long amazd, and burnt in his intent;
8 His owne faire Dryope now he thinkes not faire,
   And Pholoe fowle, when her to this he doth compaire.

2 Or > Of 1596, 1609; If conj. Hughes

1 Far off, he wonders what them makes so glad, 2 Or Bacchus' merry fruit they did invent,

Or > Whether Bacchus > (The god of wine, son of Jupiter and Semele) merry > {Delightful, characterized by festivity. Until about 1575, "merry" also meant, as again it does now, "tipsy"} invent > discover

3 Or Cybele's frantic rites have made them mad;

Cybele > (Or Rhea, wife of Saturn and mother of Jupiter, a goddess worshipped by the Corybants with frenetic music and dancing. Cybele's priests practised self-castration, which may account for the reference to her here: cf. the libidinous satyrs at 310.44 ff.)

4 They, drawing nigh, to their god present 5 That flower of faith and beauty excellent.

excellent > supreme

6 The god himself, viewing that mirror rare,

mirror > reflection [of perfection]; hence: paragon of beauty

7 Stood long amazed, and burnt in his intent;

intent > attention; mental activity; hence: gaze

8 His own fair Dryope now he thinks not fair,

Dryope > (A wood-nymph, the wife of Faunus, who, like Silvanus, is identified with the Greek deity Pan: see Aen. 10.551)

9 And Pholoe foul, when her to this he does compare.

Pholoe > (A beautiful wood-nymph, loved by Pan)

106.16

   The woodborne people fall before her flat,
2 And worship her as Goddesse of the wood;
     And old Syluanus selfe bethinkes not, what
4 To thinke of wight so faire, but gazing stood,
     In doubt to deeme her borne of earthly brood;
6 Sometimes Dame Venus selfe he seemes to see,
     But Venus neuer had so sober mood;
8 Sometimes Diana he her takes to bee,
   But misseth bow, and shaftes, and buskins to her knee.

1 The wood-born people fall before her flat, 2 And worship her as Goddess of the Wood; 3 And old Silvanus himself bethinks not what

bethinks not > does not know, cannot decide

4 To think of wight so fair, but gazing stood,

wight > creature, person, woman

5 In doubt to deem her born of earthly brood;

brood > parentage, race

6 Sometimes Dame Venus herself he seems to see, 7 But Venus never had so sober mood;

so > [such a]

8 Sometimes Diana he her takes to be, 9 But misses bow, and shafts, and buskins to her knee.

shafts > arrows buskins > boots, half-boots (not extending to thigh)

106.17

   By vew of her he ginneth to reuiue
2 His ancient loue, and dearest Cyparisse,
     And calles to mind his pourtraiture aliue,
4 How faire he was, and yet not faire to this,
     And how he slew with glauncing dart amisse
6 A gentle Hynd, the which the louely boy
     Did loue as life, aboue all worldly blisse;
8 For griefe whereof the lad n'ould after ioy,
   But pynd away in anguish and selfe-wild annoy.

1 By view of her he begins to revive 2 His ancient love, and dearest Cyparissus,

and > (Redundant) Cyparissus > (A youth loved by Silvanus, transformed into a cypress by Apollo: DGDG 13.17, Myth. 5.10; Met. 10.106-42)

3 And calls to mind his portrait alive,

portrait alive > living likeness

4 How fair he was, and yet not fair to this,

to > compared with

5 And how he slew with glancing dart amiss

he > (Either Silvanus (following Myth.), or Cyparissus (following Met.))

6 A gentle hind, which the lovely boy 7 Did love as life, above all worldly bliss; 8 For grief whereof the lad nould after joy,

nould > would not (past tense of "nill", derived from "ne will", hence Spenser's apostrophe; cf. 310.35:9) joy > rejoice

9 But pined away in anguish and self-willed annoy.

self-willed annoy > [wilful or self-imposed grief]

106.18

   The wooddy Nymphes, faire Hamadryades
2 Her to behold do thither runne apace,
     And all the troupe of light-foot Naiades,
4 Flocke all about to see her louely face:
     But when they vewed haue her heauenly grace,
6 They enuie her in their malitious mind,
     And fly away for feare of fowle disgrace:
8 But all the Satyres scorne their woody kind,
   And henceforth nothing faire, but her on earth they find.

1 The woody nymphs, fair hamadryads,

woody > silvan, forest-dwelling hamadryads > (Or dryads: spirits of the trees; the Greek word drys means a timber-tree, and specifically the oak, sacred to Zeus (Jove))

2 Her to behold do thither run apace, 3 And all the troop of lightfoot naiads

lightfoot > light-footed naiads > (Or naiades: nymphs of fresh water)

4 Flock all about to see her lovely face:
5 But, when they viewed have her heavenly grace,
6 They envy her in their malicious mind,
7 And fly away for fear of foul disgrace:
8 But all the satyrs scorn their woody kind,

kind > race, sort

9 And henceforth nothing fair but her on earth they find.

106.19

   Glad of such lucke, the luckelesse lucky maid,
2 Did her content to please their feeble eyes,
     And long time with that saluage people staid,
4 To gather breath in many miseries.
     During which time her gentle wit she plyes,
6 To teach them truth, which worshipt her in vaine,
     And made her th'Image of Idolatryes;
8 But when their bootlesse zeale she did restraine
   From her own worship, they her Asse would worship fayn.

1 Glad of such luck, the luckless lucky maid 2 Did her content to please their feeble eyes,

her content > [content herself]

3 And long time with that savage people stayed,

savage > wild, uncivilized

4 To gather breath in many miseries. 5 During which time her gentle wit she plies,

gentle > gentle; courteous; noble

6 To teach them truth, who worshipped her in vain,

in vain > without understanding, profanely

7 And made her the image of idolatries; 8 But when their bootless zeal she did restrain

bootless > unavailing, futile

9 From her own worship, they her ass would worship fain.

fain > gladly [instead of Una herself]

106.20

   It fortuned a noble warlike knight
2 By iust occasion to that forrest came,
     To seeke his kindred, and the lignage right,
4 From whence he tooke his well deserued name:
     He had in armes abroad wonne muchell fame,
6 And fild far landes with glorie of his might,
     Plaine, faithfull, true, and enimy of shame,
8 And euer lou'd to fight for Ladies right,
   But in vaine glorious frayes he litle did delight.

1 It fortuned, a noble warlike knight 2 By just occasion to that forest came, 3 To seek his kindred, and the lineage right,

right > true

4 From whence he took his well deserved name:

name > (Sir Satyrane; he is not named until 106.28:6)

5 He had in arms abroad won mickle fame,

arms > feats of arms mickle > much

6 And filled far lands with glory of his might; 7 Plain, faithful, true, and enemy of shame, 8 And ever loved to fight for ladies' right, 9 But in vainglorious frays he little did delight.

106.21

   A Satyres sonne yborne in forrest wyld,
2 By straunge aduenture as it did betyde,
     And there begotten of a Lady myld,
4 Faire Thyamis the daughter of Labryde,
     That was in sacred bands of wedlocke tyde
6 To Therion, a loose vnruly swayne;
     Who had more ioy to raunge the forrest wyde,
8 And chase the saluage beast with busie payne,
   Then serue his Ladies loue, and wast in pleasures vayne.

1 A satyr's son, born in forest wild, 2 By strange adventure as it did betide,

adventure > chance betide > happen, befall

3 And there begotten of a lady mild,

mild > gracious, kind

4 Fair Thyamis, the daughter of Labryde,

Thyamis > "Passion"
Labryde > "Turbulent, Greedy"

5 That was in sacred bonds of wedlock tied 6 To Therion, a loose, unruly swain;

Therion > "Wild Beast" swain > youth, young man

7 Who had more joy to range the forest wide, 8 And chase the savage beast with busy pain,

savage > wild, but not necessarily savage busy pain > careful labour

9 Than serve his lady's love, and waste in pleasures vain.

waste > idle time away vain > foolish, empty

106.22

   The forlorne mayd did with loues longing burne,
2 And could not lacke her louers company,
     But to the wood she goes, to serue her turne,
4 And seeke her spouse, that from her still does fly,
     And followes other game and venery:
6 A Satyre chaunst her wandring for to find,
     And kindling coles of lust in brutish eye,
8 The loyall links of wedlocke did vnbind,
   And made her person thrall vnto his beastly kind.

1 The forlorn maid did with love's longing burn, 2 And could not lack her lover's company,

lack > do without

3 But to the wood she goes, to serve her turn,

serve her turn > answer her need

4 And seek her spouse, that from her still does fly,

still > continually fly > flee

5 And follows other game and venery.

venery > hunting; sexual pleasure

6 A satyr chanced her wandering to find, 7 And, kindling coals of lust in brutish eye, 8 The loyal links of wedlock did unbind, 9 And made her person thrall to his beastly kind.

thrall > slave kind > nature

106.23

   So long in secret cabin there he held
2 Her captiue to his sensuall desire,
     Till that with timely fruit her belly sweld,
4 And bore a boy vnto that saluage sire:
     Then home he suffred her for to retire,
6 For ransome leauing him the late borne childe;
     Whom till to ryper yeares he gan aspire,
8 He +noursled+ vp in life and manners wilde,
   Emongst wild beasts and woods, from lawes of men exilde.

8 noursled > nousled 1590 ( = nuzzled; cf. 411.32:8)

1 So long in secret cabin there he held

So long > [Thus for a long time] cabin > den; cave

2 Her captive to his sensual desire, 3 Till with timely fruit her belly swelled, 4 And bore a boy to that savage sire:

savage > wild, uncivilized sire > father

5 Then home he suffered her to retire,

suffered > allowed retire > return

6 For ransom leaving him the late-born child; 7 Whom, till to riper years he gan aspire,

gan aspire > did reach; grew

8 He noursled up in life and manners wild,

noursled up > brought up, reared

9 Amongst wild beasts and woods, from laws of men exiled.

106.24

   For all he taught the tender ymp, was but
2 To banish cowardize and bastard feare;
     His trembling hand he would him force to put
4 Vpon the Lyon and the rugged Beare,
     And from the she Beares teats her whelps to teare;
6 And eke wyld roring Buls he would him make
     To tame, and ryde their backes not made to beare;
8 And the Robuckes in flight to ouertake,
   That euery beast for feare of him did fly and quake.

1 For all he taught the tender imp was but

imp > child

2 To banish cowardice and bastard fear;

bastard > base

3 His trembling hand he would him force to put 4 Upon the lion and the rugged bear, 5 And from the she bear's teats her whelps to tear; 6 And eke wild roaring bulls he would him make

eke > also

7 To tame, and ride their backs, not made to bear; 8 And the roebucks in flight to overtake, 9 That every beast for fear of him did fly and quake.

That > [So that]

106.25

   Thereby so fearelesse, and so fell he grew,
2 That his owne sire and maister of his guise
     Did often tremble at his horrid vew,
4 And oft for dread of hurt would him aduise,
     The angry beasts not rashly to despise,
6 Nor too much to prouoke; for he would learne
     The Lyon stoup to him in lowly wise,
8 (A lesson hard) and make the Libbard sterne
   Leaue roaring, when in rage he for reuenge did earne.

1 Thereby so fearless and so fell he grew

fell > fierce, terrible

2 That his own sire and master of his guise

sire > father master > teacher, tutor guise > behaviour, demeanour, appearance; mode of life

3 Did often tremble at his horrid view,

horrid > rough, frightful view > appearance

4 And oft, for dread of hurt, would him advise 5 The angry beasts not rashly to despise,

despise > treat with contempt

6 Nor too much to provoke; for he would learn

learn > teach

7 The lion stoop to him in lowly wise,

stoop > [to stoop] wise > manner

8 (A lesson hard) and make the libbard stern

libbard > leopard stern > fierce

9 Leave roaring, when in rage he for revenge did yearn.

Leave > Leave off, desist from he > [either the leopard or, perhaps, Satyrane himself]

106.26

   And for to make his powre approued more,
2 Wyld beasts in yron yokes he would compell;
     The spotted Panther, and the tusked Bore,
4 The Pardale swift, and the Tigre cruell;
     The Antelope, and Wolfe both +fierce and fell+;
6 And them constraine in equall teme to draw.
     Such ioy he had, their stubborne harts to quell,
8 And sturdie courage tame with dreadfull aw,
   That his beheast they feared, as +a+ tyrans law.

5 fierce and fell > swifte and cruell 1590: FE 9 a > omitted from 1596; proud 1609

1 And to make his power approved more,

approved > put to the proof, demonstrated

2 Wild beasts in iron yokes he would compel;

compel > bring together; overpower, constrain

3 The spotted panther, and the tusked boar, 4 The pardal swift, and the tiger cruel;

pardal > panther; leopard

5 The antelope, and wolf both fierce and fell;

antelope > (Not the modern antelope, but the Greek antholops, a fierce horned beast) fell > terrible; merciless, cruel

6 And them constrain in equal team to draw.

in equal team > in pairs [in their "yron yokes"]

7 Such joy he had their stubborn hearts to quell, 8 And sturdy courage tame with dreadful awe,

sturdy > reckless, recklessly violent

9 That his behest they feared as a tyrant's law.

behest > bidding

106.27

   His louing mother came vpon a day
2 Vnto the woods, to see her little sonne;
     And chaunst vnwares to meet him in the way,
4 After his sportes, and cruell pastime donne,
     When after him a Lyonesse did runne,
6 That roaring all with rage, did lowd requere
     Her children deare, whom he away had wonne:
8 The Lyon whelpes she saw how he did beare,
   And lull in rugged armes, withouten childish feare.

1 His loving mother came upon a day 2 To the woods, to see her little son, 3 And chanced unwares to meet him in the way,

unwares > unexpectedly

4 After his sports and cruel pastime done;

done > [were done]

5 When after him a lioness did run, 6 That, roaring all with rage, did loud require

require > demand

7 Her children dear, whom he away had won: 8 The lion whelps she saw how he did bear, 9 And lull in rugged arms without childish fear.

rugged > rough; hairy

106.28

   The fearefull Dame all quaked at the sight,
2 And turning backe, gan fast to fly away,
     Vntill with loue reuokt from vaine affright,
4 She hardly yet perswaded was to stay,
     And then to him these womanish words gan say;
6 Ah Satyrane, my dearling, and my ioy,
     For loue of me leaue off this dreadfull play;
8 To dally thus with death, is no fit toy,
   Go find some other play-fellowes, mine own sweet boy.

1 The fearful dame all quaked at the sight, 2 And, turning back, began fast to fly away, 3 Until, with love revoked from vain affright,

revoked > restrained; called back vain > frail, weak; foolish affright > terror

4 She hardly yet persuaded was to stay,

hardly > with difficulty

5 And then to him these womanish words gan say:

gan > did

6 "Ah Satyrane, my darling, and my joy, 7 For love of me leave off this dreadful play; 8 To dally thus with death is no fit toy,

toy > game

9 Go find some other play-fellows, my own sweet boy."

106.29

   In these and like delights of bloudy game
2 He trayned was, till ryper yeares he raught,
     And there abode, whilst any beast of name
4 Walkt in that forest, whom he had not taught
     To feare his force: and then his courage haught
6 Desird of forreine foemen to be knowne,
     And far abroad for straunge aduentures sought:
8 In which his might was neuer ouerthrowne,
   But through all Faery lond his famous worth was blown.

1 In these and like delights of bloody game

game > sport; sport derived from hunting

2 He trained was, till riper years he raught,

raught > reached, attained

3 And there abode, whilst any beast of name

abode > dwelt name > note

4 Walked in that forest, whom he had not taught 5 To fear his force: and then his courage haught

haught > high, noble

6 Desired of foreign foemen to be known,

foemen > foes, adversaries

7 And far abroad for strange adventures sought: 8 In which his might was never overthrown, 9 But through all Faery Land his famous worth was blown.

106.30

   Yet euermore it was his manner faire,
2 After long labours and aduentures spent,
     Vnto those natiue woods for to repaire,
4 To see his sire and ofspring auncient.
     And now he thither came for like intent;
6 Where he vnwares the fairest Vna found,
     Straunge Lady, in so straunge habiliment,
8 Teaching the Satyres, which her sat around,
   Trew sacred lore, which from her sweet lips did redound.

1 Yet evermore it was his manner fair, 2 After long labours and adventures spent, 3 To those native woods to repair,

repair > go, betake himself; return

4 To see his sire and offspring ancient.

sire and offspring > father and origin

5 And now he thither came for like intent; 6 Where he unwares the fairest Una found,

unwares > unexpectedly

7 Strange lady, in so strange habiliment,

Strange > Foreign; new-come so > such habiliment > clothing, attire; or: ?surroundings

8 Teaching the satyrs, who her sat around, 9 True sacred lore, which from her sweet lips did redound.

redound > flow, proceed

106.31

   He wondred at her wisedome heauenly rare,
2 Whose like in womens wit he neuer knew;
     And when her curteous deeds he did compare,
4 Gan her admire, and her sad sorrowes rew,
     Blaming of Fortune, which such troubles threw,
6 And ioyd to make proofe of her crueltie
     On gentle Dame, so hurtlesse, and so trew:
8 Thenceforth he kept her goodly company,
   And learnd her discipline of faith and veritie.

1 He wondered at her wisdom heavenly rare,

wondered > marvelled

2 Whose like in women's wit he never knew;

wit > mind

3 And, when her courteous deeds he did compare,

compare > (A difficult word. If the modern meaning is taken, Satyrane might be comparing her courteous deeds with those of other women, or he might be admiring the capacity for courtesy shown by one in Una's present plight. Alternatively, the meaning might be "acquire" (cf. 104.28:5), in the sense that he acquires knowledge or experience of her courteous deeds. In any case, the word can probably be approximately glossed as "come to appreciate".)

4 Gan her admire, and her sad sorrows rue,

Gan > did

5 Blaming Fortune, which such troubles threw,

threw > prepared, threw [in Una's way]

6 And joyed to make proof of its cruelty

joyed > rejoiced, took pleasure

7 On gentle dame, so hurtless, and so true:

gentle > gentle; noble hurtless > harmless

8 Thenceforth he kept her goodly company,

kept her goodly company > [courteously kept her company; or: remained in her courteous company]

9 And learned her discipline of faith and verity.

discipline > teaching (from same word as "disciple")

106.32

   But she all vowd vnto the Redcrosse knight,
2 His wandring perill closely did lament,
     Ne in this new acquaintaunce could delight,
4 But her deare heart with anguish did torment,
     And all her wit in secret counsels spent,
6 How to escape. At last in priuie wise
     To Satyrane she shewed her intent;
8 Who glad to gain such fauour, gan deuise,
   How with that pensiue Maid he best might thence arise.

1 But she, all vowed to the Redcross Knight,

all vowed > altogether betrothed

2 His wandering peril closely did lament,

wandering > (Lit. and fig.) closely > secretly

3 Nor in this new acquaintance could delight, 4 But her dear heart with anguish did torment,

dear > sore, grieved

5 And all her wit in secret counsels spent,

wit > ingenuity

6 How to escape. At last in privy wise

in privy wise > in a secret manner, secretly

7 To Satyrane she showed her intent; 8 Who, glad to gain such favour, gan devise

gan devise > did plan

9 How with that pensive maid he best might thence arise.

pensive > anxious arise > depart

106.33

   So on a day when Satyres all were gone,
2 To do their seruice to Syluanus old,
     The gentle virgin left behind alone
4 He led away with courage stout and bold.
     Too late it was, to Satyres to be told,
6 Or euer hope recouer her againe:
     In vaine he seekes that hauing cannot hold.
8 So fast he carried her with carefull paine,
   That they the woods are past, and come now to the plaine.

1 So on a day when satyrs all were gone 2 To do their service to Silvanus old, 3 The gentle virgin, left behind alone,

gentle > noble; gentle

4 He led away with courage stout and bold.

stout > brave

5 Too late it was, to satyrs to be told, 6 Or ever hope recover her again:

recover > [to recover]

7 In vain he seeks, that having cannot hold. 8 So fast he carried her with careful pains,

pain > anxiety; trouble (taken in accomplishing something)

9 That they the woods are past, and come now to the plain.

106.34

   The better part now of the lingring day,
2 They traueild had, when as they farre espide
     A wearie wight forwandring by the way,
4 And towards him they gan in hast to ride,
     To weet of newes, that did abroad betide,
6 Or tydings of her knight of the Redcrosse.
     But he them spying, gan to turne aside,
8 For feare as seemd, or for some feigned losse;
   More greedy they of newes, fast towards him do crosse.

1 The better part now of the lingering day 2 They travelled had, when they far espied 3 A weary wight forwandering by the way,

wight > person, figure forwandering > wandering; wearying himself by wandering

4 And towards him they began in haste to ride, 5 To weet of news, that did abroad betide,

weet > learn betide > happen

6 Or tidings of her knight of the Redcross. 7 But he, them spying, began to turn aside, 8 For fear, as seemed, or for some feigned loss;

for some feigned loss > [as though he had lost something]

9 More greedy they of news, fast towards him do cross.

greedy > eager of > for

106.35

   A silly man, in simple weedes forworne,
2 And soild with dust of the long dried way;
     His sandales were with toilesome trauell torne,
4 And face all tand with scorching sunny ray,
     As he had traueild many a sommers day,
6 Through boyling sands of Arabie and Ynde;
     And in his hand a Iacobs staffe, to stay
8 His wearie limbes vpon: and eke behind,
   His scrip did hang, in which his needments he did bind.

1 A silly man, in simple weeds forworn,

silly > simple, guileless (cf. 101.29-30) weeds forworn > worn-out clothes

2 And soiled with dust of the long dried way; 3 His sandals were with toilsome travel torn,

toilsome > wearisome

4 And face all tanned with scorching sunny ray, 5 As he had travelled many a summer's day,

As > [As though]

6 Through boiling sands of Arabia and Ind;

Ind > India

7 And in his hand a Jacob's staff, to stay

Jacob's staff > pilgrim's staff (named after St James (Jacobus), whose symbols are a pilgrim's staff and a scallop shell; see Gen. 32.10) stay > rest, support

8 His weary limbs upon: and eke behind

eke > also

9 His scrip did hang, in which his needments he did bind.

scrip > {Satchel, wallet, esp. one carried by a pilgrim, shepherd, or beggar} needments > necessaries

106.36

   The knight approching nigh, of him inquerd
2 Tydings of warre, and of aduentures new;
     But warres, nor new aduentures none he herd.
4 Then Vna gan to aske, if ought he knew,
     Or heard abroad of that her champion trew,
6 That in his armour bare a croslet red.
     Aye me, Deare dame (quoth he) well may I rew
8 To tell the sad sight, which mine eies haue red:
   These eyes did see that knight both liuing and eke ded.

1 The knight, approaching nigh, of him inquired 2 Tidings of war, and of adventures new; 3 But wars, nor new adventures, none he heard.

wars > [of wars] he > [he had]

4 Then Una gan to ask, if aught he knew,

gan to > began to; did

5 Or heard abroad, of her champion true, 6 That in his armour bore a crosslet red.

in > [on] crosslet > small cross (term in heraldry)

7 "Ay me, dear dame!" quoth he, "well may I rue

Ay me > Ah me! Alas! (chiefly in northern dialect)

8 To tell the sad sight which my eyes have read:

read > seen

9 These eyes did see that knight both living and eke dead."

eke > also

106.37

   That cruell word her tender hart so thrild,
2 That suddein cold did runne through euery vaine,
     And stony horrour all her sences fild
4 With dying fit, that downe she fell for paine.
     The knight her lightly reared vp againe,
6 And comforted with curteous kind reliefe:
     Then wonne from death, she bad him tellen plaine
8 The further processe of her hidden griefe;
   The lesser pangs can beare, who hath endur'd the chiefe.

1 That cruel word her tender heart so thrilled

thrilled > pierced

2 That sudden cold did run through every vein, 3 And stony horror all her senses filled 4 With dying fit, that down she fell for pain.

dying > deathly that > [so that]

5 The knight her lightly reared up again,

lightly > easily, quickly

6 And comforted with courteous kind relief; 7 Then, won from death, she bade him tell plain

him > [the pilgrim]

8 The further process of her hidden grief:

process > story, account

9 The lesser pangs can bear, who has endured the chief.

can > [one can]

106.38

   Then gan the Pilgrim thus, I chaunst this day,
2 This fatall day, that shall I euer rew,
     To see two knights in trauell on my way
4 (A sory sight) arraung'd in battell new,
     Both breathing vengeaunce, both of wrathfull hew:
6 My fearefull flesh did tremble at their strife,
     To see their blades so greedily imbrew,
8 That +drunke+ with bloud, yet +thristed+ after life:
   What more? the Redcrosse knight was slaine with Paynim knife.

8 drunke > dronke 1590 8 thristed > thirsted 1609

1 Then began the pilgrim thus, "I chanced this day,
2 This fatal day, that shall I ever rue,
3 To see two knights in travel on my way
4 (A sorry sight) arranged in battle new,

new > [having already jousted on horseback with spears, and now fighting anew, on foot with swords]

5 Both breathing vengeance, both of wrathful hue:

hue > appearance

6 My fearful flesh did tremble at their strife, 7 To see their blades so greedily imbrue,

greedily > eagerly, recklessly imbrue > soak [themselves with blood]

8 That drunk with blood, yet thirsted after life:

drunk > drank; or: were drunk

9 What more? The Redcross Knight was slain with paynim knife."

paynim > pagan, heathen knife > sword

106.39

   Ah dearest Lord (quoth she) how might that bee,
2 And he the stoutest knight, that euer wonne?
     Ah dearest dame (quoth he) how might I see
4 The thing, that might not be, and yet was donne?
     Where is (said Satyrane) that Paynims sonne,
6 That him of life, and vs of ioy hath reft?
     Not far away (quoth he) he hence doth wonne
8 Foreby a fountaine, where I late him left
   Washing his bloudy wounds, that through the steele were cleft.

1 "Ah, dearest Lord!" quoth she, "how might that be, 2 And he the stoutest knight, that ever won?"

stoutest > bravest; strongest ever won > invariably used to win; or: ever lived

3 "Ah, dearest dame," quoth he, "how might I see 4 The thing that might not be, and yet was done?" 5 "Where is," said Satyrane, "that paynim's son,

paynim > pagan, heathen

6 That him of life, and us of joy, has reft?"

reft > bereaved

7 "Not far away," quoth he, "he hence does won,

hence > from here, away from here (pleonastic) won > dwell; hence: remain

8 Forby a fountain, where I late him left

Forby > Hard by, near late > recently

9 Washing his bloody wounds, that through the steel were cleft."

106.40

   Therewith the knight thence marched forth in hast,
2 Whiles Vna with huge heauinesse opprest,
     Could not for sorrow follow him so fast;
4 And soone he came, as he the place had ghest,
     Whereas that Pagan proud him selfe did rest,
6 In secret shadow by a fountaine side:
     Euen he it was, that earst would haue supprest
8 Faire Vna: whom when Satyrane espide,
   With fowle reprochfull words he boldly him defide.

1 Therewith the knight thence marched forth in haste,

Therewith > With that, thereupon

2 While Una, with huge heaviness oppressed,

heaviness > sadness, grief

3 Could not for sorrow follow him so fast; 4 And soon he came, as he the place had guessed, 5 Where that pagan proud himself did rest

that pagan proud > [Sansloy]

6 In secret shadow by a fountain's side:

secret > hidden

7 Even he it was, that erst would have suppressed

erst > recently suppressed > forced (cf. 106.4:9)

8 Fair Una: whom when Satyrane espied, 9 With foul reproachful words he boldly him defied.

106.41

   And said, Arise thou cursed Miscreaunt,
2 That hast with knightlesse guile and trecherous train
     Faire knighthood fowly shamed, and doest vaunt
4 That good knight of the Redcrosse to haue slain:
     Arise, and with like treason now maintain
6 Thy guilty wrong, or else thee guilty yield.
     The Sarazin this hearing, rose amain,
8 And catching vp in hast his three square shield,
   And shining helmet, soone him buckled to the field.

1 And said, "Arise, you cursed miscreant,

miscreant > infidel; villain; wretch

2 That has with knightless guile and treacherous train

knightless > unknightly, unchivalrous train > deceit

3 Fair knighthood foully shamed, and do vaunt

vaunt > boast

4 That good knight of the Redcross to have slain: 5 Arise, and with like treason now maintain

maintain > defend, uphold

6 Your guilty wrong, or else you guilty yield." 7 The Saracen, this hearing, rose amain,

amain > abruptly, violently

8 And, catching up in haste his three-square shield

three-square > equilaterally triangular

9 And shining helmet, soon him buckled to the field.

him buckled to the field > made himself ready for the field of battle; buckled his armour

106.42

   And drawing nigh him said, Ah misborne Elfe,
2 In euill houre thy foes thee hither sent,
     Anothers wrongs to wreake vpon thy selfe:
4 Yet ill thou blamest me, for hauing blent
     My name with guile and traiterous intent;
6 That Redcrosse knight, perdie, I neuer slew,
     But had he beene, where earst his armes were lent,
8 Th'enchaunter vaine his errour should not rew:
   But thou his errour shalt, I hope now prouen trew.

1 And, drawing nigh him, said, "Ah, misborn Elf!

misborn > {Base-born; born out of wedlock; deformed as a result of premature birth}

2 In evil hour your foes you hither sent, 3 Another's wrongs to wreak upon yourself: 4 Yet ill you blame me for having blended

ill > wrongly blended > stirred up; hence: rendered turbid, defiled

5 My name with guile and traitorous intent; 6 That Redcross Knight, pardie, I never slew,

pardie > truly; "by God"

7 But had he been where erst his arms were lent,

erst > lately (a reference to Sansloy's fight with the disguised Archimago at 103.34-39)

8 The enchanter vain his error should not rue:

vain > feeble, weak; foolish; vainly

9 But you his error shall, I hope, now prove true."

error > (Either Archimago's error in disguising himself as the Redcross Knight, or the error made by the Redcross Knight in killing Sansfoy, which ultimately led to Archimago being wounded and unhorsed) hope > think, predict prove > [through combat]

106.43

   Therewith they gan, both furious and fell,
2 To thunder blowes, and fiersly to assaile
     Each other bent his enimy to quell,
4 That with their force they perst both plate and maile,
     And made wide furrowes in their fleshes fraile,
6 That it would pitty any liuing eie.
     Large floods of bloud adowne their sides did raile;
8 But floods of bloud could not them satisfie:
   Both hungred after death: both chose to win, or die.

1 Therewith they began, both furious and fell,

Therewith > With that, thereupon fell > fierce, terrible

2 To thunder blows, and fiercely to assail,

assail > attack (quasi-intransitive)

3 Each other bent his enemy to quell,

bent > determined quell > kill (rather than merely vanquish: see line 9)

4 That with their force they pierced both plate and mail,

That > [So that] plate and mail > (Implying that they are wearing armour consisting both of steel plates and of chain mail)

5 And made wide furrows in their fleshes frail,

fleshes > bodies

6 That it would pity any living eye.

That > [So that] pity > [move to pity]

7 Large floods of blood down their sides did rail;

Large > Plentiful, copious rail > gush, flow

8 But floods of blood could not them satisfy: 9 Both hungered after death: both chose to win, or die.

106.44

   So long they fight, and +fell+ reuenge pursue,
2 That fainting each, themselues to breathen let,
     And oft refreshed, battell oft renue:
4 As when two Bores with rancling malice met,
     Their gory sides fresh bleeding fiercely fret,
6 Till breathlesse both them selues aside retire,
     Where foming wrath, their cruell tuskes they whet,
8 And trample th'earth, the whiles they may respire;
   Then backe to fight againe, new breathed and entire.

1 fell > full 1590

1 So long they fight, and fell revenge pursue,

fell > fierce, terrible

2 That, fainting each, themselves to breathe let,

fainting each, themselves to breathe let > [the fact that each becomes temporarily faint allows them both a chance to recover their breath]

3 And, oft refreshed, battle oft renew: 4 As when two boars, with rankling malice met, 5 Their gory sides fresh-bleeding fiercely fret,

fret > cut [with crisscross wounds]; gnaw, devour

6 Till, breathless, both themselves aside retire, 7 Where, foaming wrath, their cruel tusks they whet, 8 And trample the earth, while they may respire,

respire > breathe again, recover breath

9 Then back to fight again, new breathed and entire.

entire > fresh, refreshed

106.45

   So fiersly, when these knights had breathed once,
2 They gan to fight returne, increasing more
     Their puissant force, and cruell rage attonce,
4 With heaped strokes more hugely, then before,
     That with their drerie wounds and bloudy gore
6 They both deformed, scarsely could be known.
     By this sad Vna fraught with anguish sore,
8 Led with their noise, which through the aire was +thrown:+
   Arriu'd, where they in erth their fruitles bloud had sown.

8 thrown: > thrown, 1609

1 So fiercely, when these knights had breathed once, 2 They gan to fight return (increasing more

gan > did

3 Their puissant force and cruel rage at once

puissant > powerful at once > simultaneously

4 With heaped strokes, more hugely than before), 5 That with their dreary wounds and bloody gore

dreary > gory; grievous

6 They both, deformed, scarcely could be known.

deformed > disfigured, rendered hideous

7 By this sad Una, fraught with anguish sore,

By this > At this; by this time fraught > filled

8 Led with their noise, which through the air was thrown, 9 Arrived where they in earth their fruitless blood had sown.

106.46

   Whom all so soone as that proud Sarazin
2 Espide, he gan reuiue the memory
     Of his lewd lusts, and late attempted sin,
4 And left the doubtfull battell hastily,
     To catch her, newly offred to his eie:
6 But Satyrane with strokes him turning, staid,
     And sternely bad him other businesse plie,
8 Then hunt the steps of pure vnspotted Maid:
   Wherewith he all enrag'd, these bitter speaches said.

1 Whom all so soon as that proud Saracen 2 Espied, he gan revive the memory

gan > did

3 Of his lewd lusts and late attempted sin,

late > lately

4 And left the doubtful battle hastily,

doubtful > doubtful (of uncertain outcome); also: fearful, awful

5 To catch her, newly offered to his eye: 6 But Satyrane, with strokes him turning, stayed 7 And sternly bade him other business ply 8 Than hunt the steps of pure unspotted maid: 9 Wherewith he, all enraged, these bitter speeches said:

106.47

   O foolish faeries sonne, what furie mad
2 Hath thee incenst, to hast thy dolefull +fate+?
     Were it not better, I that Lady had,
4 Then that thou hadst repented it too late?
     Most sencelesse man he, that himselfe doth hate,
6 To loue another. Lo then for thine ayd
     Here take thy louers token on thy pate.
8 So they +two+ fight; the whiles the royall Mayd
   Fled farre away, of that proud Paynim sore afrayd.

2 fate > fete 1596 8 two > to 1590; cf. 203.28:1, 307.9:3

1 "O foolish Faery's son, what fury mad 2 Has you incensed to hasten your doleful fate? 3 Were it not better I that lady had, 4 Than that you had repented it too late? 5 Most senseless man he, that himself does hate, 6 To love another. Lo then, for your aid,

your aid > [your aiding Una]

7 Here, take your lover's token on your pate!"

lover's token > {Keepsake, mark of affection, e.g. a ribbon, often worn on the helmet}

8 So they two fight; the whiles the royal maid

two > (See Textual Appendix) the whiles > meanwhile

9 Fled far away, of that proud paynim sore afraid.

paynim > pagan, heathen

106.48

   But that false Pilgrim, which that leasing told,
2 Being in deed old Archimage, did stay
     In secret shadow, all this to behold,
4 And much reioyced in their bloudy fray:
     But when he saw the Damsell passe away
6 He left his stond, and her pursewd apace,
     In hope to bring her to her last decay.
8 But for to tell her lamentable cace,
   And eke this battels end, will need another place.

1 But that false pilgrim, who that leasing told,

leasing > lie, untrue story

2 Being indeed old Archimago, did stay 3 In secret shadow, all this to behold,

secret > hidden

4 And much rejoiced in their bloody fray: 5 But, when he saw the damsel pass away, 6 He left his stand, and her pursued apace,

apace > swiftly

7 In hope to bring her to her last decay.

decay > downfall, destruction (last decay = death)

8 But to tell her lamentable case, 9 And eke this battle's end, will need another place.

eke > also, moreover, in addition

CANTO VII

2 The Redcrosse knight is captiue made
     By Gyaunt proud opprest,
4 Prince Arthur meets with Vna great-
     ly with those newes distrest.

1 The Redcross Knight is captive made

made > [made and]

2 By giant proud oppressed,

proud > [proud is] oppressed > taken by surprise; suppressed, overwhelmed

3 Prince Arthur meets with Una great- 4 ly with this news distressed.

107.1

   WHat man so wise, what earthly wit so ware,
2 As to descry the crafty cunning traine,
     By which deceipt doth maske in visour faire,
4 And cast her colours dyed deepe in graine,
     To seeme like Truth, whose shape she well can faine,
6 And fitting gestures to her purpose +frame;+
     The guiltlesse man with guile to entertaine?
8 Great maistresse of her art was that false Dame,
   The false Duessa, cloked with Fidessaes name.

6 frame; > frame, 1609

1 What man so wise, what earthly wit so ware,

wit > mind, intelligence ware > vigilant, cautious

2 As to descry the crafty cunning train

train > wile, trick

3 By which Deceit does mask in visor fair,

mask > {Disguise [herself]; take part in a masquerade} visor > outward appearance

4 And cast her colours, died deep in grain,

cast > arrange, dispose (as an artist might when painting)

5 To seem like Truth (whose shape she well can feign), 6 And fitting gestures to her purpose frame, 7 The guiltless man with guile to entertain?

entertain > engage, keep occupied

8 Great mistress of her art was that false dame, 9 The false Duessa, cloaked with Fidessa's name.

107.2

   Who when returning from the drery Night,
2 She fownd not in that perilous house of Pryde,
     Where she had left, the noble Redcrosse knight,
4 Her hoped pray; she would no lenger bide,
     But forth she went, to seeke him far and wide.
6 Ere long she fownd, whereas he wearie sate,
     To reste him selfe, foreby a fountaine side,
8 Disarmed all of yron-coted Plate,
   And by his side his steed the grassy forage ate.

1 Who, when returning from the dreary Night,

dreary > cruel, dire

2 She found not in that perilous House of Pride 3 (Where she had left the noble Redcross Knight) 4 Her hoped prey, she would no longer bide,

bide > abide, remain, wait; sojourn (chiefly in northern dialect)

5 But forth she went, to seek him far and wide. 6 Ere long she found where he weary sat 7 To rest himself, forby a fountain side,

forby > hard by, near

8 Disarmed all of iron-coated plate,

plate > armour

9 And by his side his steed the grassy forage ate.

107.3

   He feedes vpon the cooling shade, and bayes
2 His sweatie forehead in the breathing wind,
     Which through the trembling leaues full gently playes
4 Wherein the cherefull birds of sundry kind
     Do chaunt sweet musick, to delight his mind:
6 The Witch approching gan him fairely greet,
     And with reproch of carelesnesse vnkind
8 Vpbrayd, for leauing her in place vnmeet,
   With fowle words tempring faire, soure gall with hony sweet.

1 He feeds upon the cooling shade, and bathes 2 His sweaty forehead in the breathing wind, 3 Which through the trembling leaves full gently plays,

full > entirely, quite

4 Wherein the cheerful birds of sundry kind 5 Do chant sweet music, to delight his mind. 6 The witch, approaching, gan him fairly greet,

gan > did fairly > courteously

7 And, with reproach of carelessness unkind, 8 Upbraid, for leaving her in place unmeet;

Upbraid > [Upbraid him] unmeet > unsuitable, improper, unfitting

9 With foul words tempering fair, sour gall with honey sweet.

107.4

   Vnkindnesse past, they gan of solace treat,
2 And bathe in pleasaunce of the ioyous shade,
     Which shielded them against the boyling heat,
4 And with greene boughes decking a gloomy glade,
     About the fountaine like a girlond made;
6 Whose bubbling waue did euer freshly well,
     Ne euer would through feruent sommer fade:
8 The sacred Nymph, which therein wont to dwell,
   Was out of Dianes fauour, as it then befell.

1 Unkindness past, they gan of solace treat,

gan > did; began to solace > pleasure, enjoyment treat > to discourse, to deal

2 And bathe in pleasance of the joyous shade,

pleasance > [the pleasure-giving quality]

3 Which shielded them against the boiling heat, 4 And, with green boughs decking a gloomy glade, 5 About the fountain like a garland made; 6 Whose bubbling wave did ever freshly well, 7 Nor ever would through fervent summer fade:

fade > weaken, decline

8 The sacred nymph, who therein wont to dwell,

nymph > (Nymphs are the minor female divinities with whom the Greeks peopled all parts of nature: the seas, springs, rivers, grottoes, trees, mountains. The nymph referred to here is one of the naiads (see 106.18:3), nymphs of fresh water. Many of these presided over springs which were believed to inspire those who drank the water) wont > was accustomed

9 Was out of Diana's favour, as it then befell.

107.5

   The cause was this: one day when Ph{oe}be fayre
2 With all her band was following the chace,
     This Nymph, quite tyr'd with heat of scorching ayre
4 Sat downe to rest in middest of the race:
     The goddesse wroth gan fowly +her+ disgrace,
6 And bad the waters, which from her did flow,
     Be such as she her selfe was then in place.
8 Thenceforth her waters waxed dull and slow,
   And all that drunke thereof, +did+ faint and feeble grow.

5 her > he 1596 9 did > do 1590

1 The cause was this: one day, when Phoebe fair

Phoebe > (A name for Diana in her aspect as goddess of the moon)

2 With all her band was following the chase, 3 This nymph, quite tired with heat of scorching air,

heat > [the heat]

4 Sat down to rest in middest of the race;

middest > the middle

5 The goddess, wroth, gan foully her disgrace,

gan > did disgrace > disparage, revile

6 And bade the waters, which from her did flow, 7 Be such as she herself was then in place.

Be > [To be] in place > there

8 Thenceforth her waters waxed dull and slow,

waxed > grew, became

9 And all that drank thereof did faint and feeble grow.

107.6

   Hereof this gentle knight vnweeting was,
2 And lying downe vpon the sandie graile,
     Drunke of the streame, as cleare as cristall +glas,+
4 Eftsoones his manly forces gan to faile,
     And mightie strong was turnd to feeble fraile.
6 His chaunged powres at first them selues not felt,
     Till crudled cold his corage can assaile,
8 And chearefull bloud in faintnesse chill did melt,
   Which like a feuer fit through all his body swelt.

3 glas, > glas: 1590; glas; 1609

1 Hereof this gentle knight unweeting was,

Hereof > Of this unweeting > ignorant

2 And, lying down upon the sandy grail,

grail > gravel

3 Drank of the stream, as clear as crystal glass; 4 Eftsoons his manly forces began to fail,

Eftsoons > Thereupon, forthwith manly > {Pertaining to human beings; also: manly, in the modern sense}

5 And mighty strong was turned to feeble frail. 6 His changed powers at first themselves not felt,

not > [were not]

7 Till curdled cold his courage can assail,

can > did

8 And cheerful blood in faintness chill did melt,

cheerful > lively, animating

9 Which like a fever-fit through all his body swelt.

swelt > broiled

107.7

   Yet goodly court he made still to his Dame,
2 Pourd out in loosnesse on the grassy grownd,
     Both carelesse of his health, and of his fame:
4 Till at the last he heard a dreadfull sownd,
     Which through the wood loud bellowing, did rebownd,
6 That all the earth for terrour seemd to shake,
     And trees did tremble. Th'Elfe therewith astownd,
8 Vpstarted lightly from his looser make,
   And his vnready weapons gan in hand to take.

1 Yet goodly court he made still to his dame, 2 Poured out in looseness on the grassy ground,

looseness > laxity, dissolution

3 Both careless of his health, and of his fame:

Both > [Both he and Duessa; or: He is both]

4 Till at the last he heard a dreadful sound

at the last > finally

5 Which, through the wood loudly bellowing, did rebound, 6 That all the earth for terror seemed to shake,

That > [So that]

7 And trees did tremble. The Elf, therewith astounded,

therewith > with that astounded > amazed, confounded

8 Upstarted lightly from his looser make,

Upstarted > Started up lightly > quickly looser > looser (in the modern moral sense); also: too-loose make > companion, mate

9 And his unready weapons began in hand to take.

107.8

   But ere he could his armour on him dight,
2 Or get his shield, his monstrous enimy
     With sturdie steps came stalking in his sight,
4 An hideous Geant horrible and hye,
     That with his talnesse seemd to threat the skye,
6 The ground eke groned vnder him for dreed;
     His liuing like saw neuer liuing eye,
8 Ne durst behold: his stature did exceed
   The hight of three the tallest sonnes of mortall seed.

1 But ere he could his armour on him dight,

dight > make ready, array; hence: fasten

2 Or get his shield, his monstrous enemy 3 With sturdy steps came stalking in his sight,

sturdy > stern; surly; reckless stalking > {Advancing with a striding, swaggering gait}

4 A hideous giant, horrible and high, 5 That with his tallness seemed to threaten the sky, 6 The ground eke groaned under him for dread;

eke > moreover, in addition

7 His living like saw never living eye, 8 Nor dared behold: his stature did exceed 9 The height of three the tallest sons of mortal seed.

three > [three of] seed > children, offspring

107.9

   The greatest Earth his vncouth mother was,
2 And blustring AEolus his boasted sire,
     Who with his breath, which through the world doth pas,
4 Her hollow womb did secretly inspire,
     And fild her hidden caues with stormie yre,
6 That she conceiu'd; and trebling the dew time,
     In which the wombes of women do expire,
8 Brought forth this monstrous masse of earthly slime,
   Puft vp with emptie wind, and fild with sinfull crime.

1 The greatest Earth his uncouth mother was,

uncouth > unknown, uncertainly known; strange, bizarre

2 And blustering Aeolus his boasted sire,

Aeolus > (God of the winds) sire > father

3 Who with his breath, which through the world does pass, 4 Her hollow womb did secretly inspire,

inspire > breathe life into, quicken

5 And filled her hidden caves with stormy ire, 6 That she conceived; and trebling the due time

That > [So that]

7 In which the wombs of women do expire,

expire > become void, come to an end, terminate, so: come to term

8 Brought forth this monstrous mass of earthly slime,

earthly > mortal slime > flesh

9 Puffed up with empty wind, and fild with sinful crime.

fild > filled; or: filed: defiled (cf. 105.32:2 etc. The same interpretation may apply in line 5)

107.10

   So growen great through arrogant delight
2 Of th'high descent, whereof he was yborne,
     And through presumption of his matchlesse might,
4 All other powres and knighthood he did scorne.
     Such now he marcheth to this man forlorne,
6 And left to losse: his stalking steps are stayde
     Vpon a snaggy Oke, which he had torne
8 Out of his mothers bowelles, and it made
   His mortall mace, wherewith his foemen he dismayde.

1 So grown great through arrogant delight 2 Of the high descent whereof he was born, 3 And through presumption of his matchless might, 4 All other powers and knighthood he did scorn. 5 Such now he marches to this man forlorn 6 And left to loss: his stalking steps are stayed

stalking > {Advancing with a striding, swaggering gait} stayed > supported

7 Upon a snaggy oak, which he had torn

snaggy > knotty

8 Out of his mother's bowels, and it made 9 His mortal mace, wherewith his foemen he dismayed.

mortal > lethal wherewith > with which foemen > foes dismayed > defeated

107.11

   That when the knight he spide, he gan aduance
2 With huge force and insupportable mayne,
     And towardes him with dreadfull fury praunce;
4 Who haplesse, and eke +hopelesse,+ all in vaine
     Did to him pace, sad battaile to darrayne,
6 Disarmd, disgrast, and inwardly dismayde,
     And eke so faint in euery ioynt and vaine,
8 Through that fraile fountaine, which him feeble made,
   That scarsely could he weeld his bootlesse single blade.

4 hopelesse, > hopelesse; 1590, 1596

1 When the knight he spied, he gan advance

gan > did; began to

2 With huge force and insupportable main,

insupportable > irresistible main > strength, power

3 And towards him with dreadful fury prance;

prance > swagger

4 Who, hapless, and eke hopeless, all in vain

eke > also

5 Did to him pace, sad battle to deraign,

to > towards sad > grievous deraign > challenge

6 Disarmed, disgraced, and inwardly dismayed, 7 And eke so faint in every joint and vein,

joint > limb

8 Through that frail fountain, which him feeble made,

frail > enfeebling

9 That scarcely could he wield his bootless single blade.

bootless > unavailing single > single, solitary; unaided

107.12

   The Geaunt strooke so maynly mercilesse,
2 That could haue ouerthrowne a stony towre,
     And were not heauenly grace, that him did blesse,
4 He had beene pouldred all, as thin as flowre:
     But he was wary of that deadly stowre,
6 And lightly lept from vnderneath the blow:
     Yet so exceeding was the villeins powre,
8 That with the wind it did him ouerthrow,
   And all his sences +stound+, that still he lay full low.

9 stound > stoond 1590

1 The giant struck so mainly merciless,

mainly > powerfully, violently

2 That could have overthrown a stony tower,

That > [That he; That the stroke]

3 And, were not heavenly grace that him did bless,

were not > [were it not; had it not been for] him > [the Redcross Knight] bless > guard, protect from evil

4 He had been powdered all as thin as flour:

had > [would have been]

5 But he was wary of that deadly stour,

stour > peril

6 And lightly leapt from underneath the blow:

lightly > quickly, easily

7 Yet so exceeding was the villain's power, 8 That with the wind it did him overthrow 9 And all his senses stun, that still he lay full low.

that > [so that] full > very, exceedingly

107.13

   As when that diuelish yron Engin wrought
2 In deepest Hell, and framd by Furies skill,
     With windy Nitre and quick Sulphur fraught,
4 And ramd with bullet round, ordaind to kill,
     Conceiueth fire, the heauens it doth fill
6 With thundring noyse, and all the ayre doth choke,
     That none can breath, nor see, nor heare at will,
8 Through smouldry cloud of duskish stincking smoke,
   That th'onely breath him daunts, who hath escapt the stroke.

1 As when that devilish iron engine, wrought 2 In deepest hell, and framed by Furies' skill,

framed > fashioned

3 With windy nitre and quick sulphur fraught,

windy > {Generating wind, gas} nitre > {Saltpetre or potassium nitrate, a component of gunpowder} quick > readily inflammable fraught > filled

4 And rammed with bullet round, ordained to kill,

bullet > cannon-ball

5 Conceives fire, the heavens it does fill

Conceives fire > Detonates

6 With thundering noise, and all the air does choke, 7 That none can breathe, nor see, nor hear at will,

That > [So that]

8 Through smouldry cloud of duskish stinking smoke,

smouldry > {Smothery, tending to smother}

9 That the only breath him daunts, who has escaped the stroke.

That > [?And] only breath > blast alone stroke > [impact of the ball]

107.14

   So daunted when the Geaunt saw the +knight+
2 His heauie hand he heaued vp on hye,
     And him to dust thought to haue battred quight,
4 Vntill Duessa loud to him gan crye;
     O great Orgoglio, greatest vnder skye,
6 O hold thy mortall hand for Ladies sake,
     Hold for my sake, and do him not to dye,
8 But vanquisht thine eternall bondslaue make,
   And me thy worthy meed vnto thy Leman take.

1 knight > knight, 1590, 1609

1 So daunted, when the giant saw the knight,

So daunted, > [The knight was similarly daunted; and]

2 His heavy hand he heaved up on high, 3 And him to dust thought to have battered quite, 4 Until Duessa loud to him gan cry:

gan > did

5 "O great Orgoglio, greatest under sky,

Orgoglio > "Pride" (Italian)

6 O hold thy mortal hand for lady's sake,

mortal > lethal

7 Hold for my sake, and do him not to die,

him not to die > [not put him to death; cf. 108.45:7]

8 But, vanquished, your eternal bondslave make; 9 And me, your worthy meed, unto your leman take."

meed > reward unto > as (expressing acquisition or addition) leman > lover

107.15

   He hearkned, and did stay from further harmes,
2 To gayne so goodly guerdon, as she spake:
     So willingly she came into his armes,
4 Who her as willingly to grace did take,
     And was possessed of his new found make.
6 Then vp he tooke the slombred sencelesse corse,
     And ere he could out of his swowne awake,
8 Him to his castle brought with hastie forse,
   And in a Dongeon deepe him threw without remorse.

1 He hearkened, and did stay from further harms,

stay > desist

2 To gain so goodly guerdon as she spoke:

goodly > beautiful [a] guerdon > reward, recompense [for denying himself the pleasure of killing the Redcross Knight] spoke > [spoke of]

3 So willingly she came into his arms, 4 Who her as willingly to grace did take,

to grace > into his favour

5 And was possessed of his newfound make.

was possessed of > was possessed of; was possessed by (in the sexual sense) make > mate

6 Then up he took the slumbered senseless corse,

slumbered > unconscious corse > body

7 And, ere he could out of his swoon awake, 8 Him to his castle brought with hasty force, 9 And in a dungeon deep him threw without remorse.

in > [into]

107.16

   From that day forth Duessa was his deare,
2 And highly honourd in his haughtie eye,
     He gaue her gold and purple pall to weare,
4 And triple crowne set on her head full hye,
     And her endowd with royall maiestye:
6 Then for to make her dreaded more of men,
     And peoples harts with awfull terrour tye,
8 A monstrous beast ybred in filthy fen
   He chose, which he had kept long time in darksome den.

1 From that day forth Duessa was his dear, 2 And highly honoured in his haughty eye; 3 He gave her gold and purple pall to wear,

pall > robe, cloak (see Rev. 17.4)

4 And triple crown set on her head full high,

triple crown > (The papal tiara) full > very, exceedingly

5 And her endowed with royal majesty: 6 Then, to make her dreaded more of men,

of > by

7 And people's hearts with awful terror tie,

tie > [to] bind, [to] confine

8 A monstrous beast, bred in filthy fen, 9 He chose, which he had kept long time in darksome den.

107.17

   Such one it was, as that renowmed Snake
2 Which great Alcides in Stremona slew,
     Long fostred in the filth of Lerna lake,
4 Whose many heads out budding euer new,
     Did breed him endlesse labour to subdew:
6 But this same Monster much more vgly was;
     For seuen great heads out of his body grew,
8 An yron brest, and backe of scaly bras,
   And all embrewd in bloud, his eyes did shine as glas.

1 Such one it was, as that renowned snake

snake > (The Hydra, which grew two heads for each one cut off: it lived in the swamps of Lerna Lake in Argos and was killed by Hercules as his second labour; see Met. 9.68-74)

2 Which great Alcides in Stremona slew,

Alcides > (Another name for Hercules, grandson of Alceus)
Stremona > (Perhaps another name for Thrace, of which the River
Strymon forms one boundary. Thrace was noted for its seditions
(Upton); though Lerna was not in Thrace)

3 Long fostered in the filth of Lerna lake, 4 Whose many heads, out-budding ever new, 5 Did breed him endless labour to subdue:

breed > engender

6 But this same monster much more ugly was; 7 For seven great heads out of his body grew,

seven great heads > (Referring to Rev. 13.1, and perhaps also to the seven hills of Rome)

8 An iron breast, and back of scaly brass, 9 And, all imbrued in blood, his eyes did shine as glass.

imbrued > stained, soaked

107.18

   His tayle was stretched out in wondrous length,
2 That to the house of heauenly gods it raught,
     And with extorted powre, and borrow'd strength,
4 The euer-burning lamps from thence it +brought+,
     And prowdly threw to ground, as things of +nought+;
6 And vnderneath his filthy feet did tread
     The sacred things, and holy heasts foretaught.
8 Vpon this dreadfull Beast with seuenfold head
   He set the false Duessa, for more aw and dread.

4 brought > braught 1590 5 nought > naught 1590

1 His tail was stretched out in wondrous length, 2 That to the house of heavenly gods it raught,

That > [So that] raught > reached

3 And with extorted power, and borrowed strength,

extorted > usurped (i.e. by the Roman Catholic church)

4 The ever-burning lamps from thence it brought,

lamps > [stars; see Dan. 8.10-13, 7.23]

5 And proudly threw to ground, as things of naught; 6 And underneath his filthy feet did tread 7 The sacred things, and holy hests foretaught.

hests > commands, injunctions, behests foretaught > taught of old

8 Upon this dreadful beast with sevenfold head 9 He set the false Duessa, for more awe and dread.

107.19

   The wofull Dwarfe, which saw his maisters fall,
2 Whiles he had keeping of his grasing steed,
     And valiant knight become a caytiue thrall,
4 When all was past, tooke vp his forlorne weed,
     His mightie armour, missing most at need;
6 His siluer shield, now idle maisterlesse;
     His poynant speare, that many made to bleed,
8 The rueful moniments of heauinesse,
   And with them all departes, to tell his great distresse.

1 The woeful dwarf, who saw his master's fall 2 While he had keeping of his grazing steed, 3 And valiant knight become a caitiff thrall,

And > [And saw a] caitiff thrall > wretched slave

4 When all was past, took up his forlorn weed,

weed > attire

5 His mighty armour, missing most at need;

most > [when most]

6 His silver shield, now idle, masterless; 7 His poignant spear, that many made to bleed,

poignant > sharp-pointed, piercing

8 The rueful monuments of heaviness,

heaviness > grief, sadness

9 And with them all departs, to tell his great distress.

tell > recount

107.20

   He had not trauaild long, when on the way
2 He wofull Ladie, wofull Vna met,
     Fast flying from +the+ Paynims greedy pray,
4 Whilest Satyrane him from pursuit did let:
     Who when her eyes she on the Dwarfe had set,
6 And saw the signes, that deadly tydings spake,
     She fell to ground for sorrowfull regret,
8 And liuely breath her sad brest did forsake,
   Yet might her pitteous hart be seene to pant and quake.

3 the > that 1590

1 He had not travelled long, when on the way 2 He woeful lady, woeful Una, met,

He > [He the]

3 Fast flying from the paynim's greedy prey,

flying > fleeing paynim > pagan, heathen [Sansloy] greedy prey > eager clutches ("prey" = the action of preying, seizing, or taking by force)

4 Whilst Satyrane him from pursuit did let:

let > hinder

5 Who, when her eyes she on the dwarf had set, 6 And saw the signs that deadly tidings spoke, 7 Fell to ground for sorrowful regret;

regret > {Distress caused by an external event: an obsolete usage}

8 And lively breath her sad breast did forsake,

lively > living, vital

9 Yet might her piteous heart be seen to pant and quake.

might > could piteous > {Pious, godly; compassionate; worthy of or exciting pity}

107.21

   The messenger of so vnhappie newes,
2 Would faine haue dyde: dead was his hart within,
     Yet outwardly some little comfort shewes:
4 At last recouering hart, he does begin
     To rub her temples, and to chaufe her chin,
6 And euery tender part does tosse and turne:
     So hardly he the flitted life does win,
8 Vnto her natiue prison to retourne:
   Then gins her grieued ghost thus to lament and mourne.

1 The messenger of so unhappy news

so > such

2 Would fain have died: dead was his heart within,

fain > gladly, willingly

3 Yet outwardly some little comfort shows: 4 At last, recovering heart, he does begin 5 To rub her temples, and to chafe her chin,

chafe > {Rub in order to restore circulation and sensation} chin > cheek, lower jaw (from Old Norse kinn)

6 And every tender part does toss and turn: 7 So hardly he the flitted life does win

hardly > with difficulty win > persuade

8 To her native prison to return:

native prison > natural prison [of her soul]; hence: heart, body

9 Then begins her grieved ghost thus to lament and mourn:

ghost > spirit

107.22

   Ye dreary instruments of dolefull sight,
2 That doe this deadly spectacle behold,
     Why do ye lenger feed on loathed light,
4 Or liking find to gaze on earthly mould,
     Sith cruell fates the carefull threeds vnfould,
6 The which my life and loue together tyde?
     Now let the stony dart of senselesse cold
8 Perce to my hart, and pas through euery side,
   And let eternall night so sad sight fro me hide.

1 "You dreary instruments of doleful sight, 2 That do this deadly spectacle behold, 3 Why do you longer feed on loathed light,

longer > still

4 Or liking find to gaze on earthly mould,

liking > pleasure mould > form, forms

5 Sith cruel Fates the careful threads unfold,

Sith > Since [the] Fates > (The three goddesses, Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos, who spin the thread of human destiny, cutting it with shears whenever they choose; see 402.48) careful > {Full of cares}

6 Which my life and love together tied? 7 Now let the stony dart of senseless cold 8 Pierce to my heart, and pass through every side, 9 And let eternal night so sad sight from me hide.

so > such a

107.23

   O lightsome day, the lampe of highest Ioue,
2 First made by him, mens wandring wayes to guyde,
     When darknesse he in deepest dongeon droue,
4 Henceforth thy hated face for euer hyde,
     And shut vp heauens windowes shyning wyde:
6 For earthly sight can nought but sorrow breed,
     And late repentance, which shall long abyde.
8 Mine eyes no more on vanitie shall feed,
   But seeled vp with death, shall haue their deadly meed.

1 "O lightsome day, the lamp of highest Jove, 2 First made by him, men's wandering ways to guide, 3 When darkness he in deepest dungeon drove, 4 Henceforth your hated face for ever hide, 5 And shut up heaven's windows, shining wide: 6 For earthly sight can naught but sorrow breed, 7 And late repentance, which shall long abide. 8 My eyes no more on vanity shall feed, 9 But, sealed up with death, shall have their deadly meed."

deadly > [of death] meed > reward

107.24

   Then downe againe she fell vnto the ground;
2 But he her quickly reared vp againe:
     Thrise did she sinke adowne in deadly swownd,
4 And thrise he her reviu'd with busie paine:
     At last when life recouer'd had the raine,
6 And ouer-wrestled his strong enemie,
     With foltring tong, and trembling euery vaine,
8 Tell on (quoth she) the wofull Tragedie,
   The which these reliques sad present vnto mine eie.

1 Then down again she fell to the ground; 2 But he her quickly reared up again: 3 Thrice did she sink adown in deadly swoon,

adown > down

4 And thrice he her revived with busy pain:

busy > careful; solicitous pain > effort, labour

5 At last, when life recovered had the reign,

reign > reign; or, perhaps: rein (cf. 304.35:5)

6 And over-wrestled his strong enemy, 7 With faltering tongue, and trembling every vein, 8 "Tell on," quoth she, "the woeful tragedy, 9 Which these relics sad present to my eye.

these relics > [the arms and armour of the Redcross Knight]

107.25

   Tempestuous fortune hath spent all her spight,
2 And thrilling sorrow throwne his vtmost dart;
     Thy sad tongue cannot tell more heauy plight,
4 Then that I feele, and harbour in mine hart:
     Who hath endur'd the whole, can beare each part.
6 If death it be, it is not the first wound,
     That launched hath my brest with bleeding smart.
8 Begin, and end the bitter balefull stound;
   If lesse, then that I +feare+ more fauour I haue found.

9 feare > feare, 1590, 1609

1 "Tempestuous Fortune has spent all her spite, 2 And thrilling Sorrow thrown his utmost dart;

thrilling > piercing

3 Your sad tongue cannot tell more heavy plight, 4 Than that I feel, and harbour in my heart:

that > [that which]

5 Who has endured the whole, can bear each part. 6 If death it be, it is not the first wound, 7 That lanced has my breast with bleeding smart.

smart > pain, acute pain; grief, sorrow

8 Begin, and end the bitter baleful stound;

stound > {Time of trial or pain (chiefly in northern dialect)}

9 If less than that I fear, more favour I have found."

that > [that which]

107.26

   Then gan the Dwarfe the whole discourse declare,
2 The subtill traines of Archimago old;
     The wanton loues of false Fidessa faire,
4 Bought with the bloud of vanquisht Paynim bold:
     The wretched payre transform'd to treen mould;
6 The house of Pride, and perils round about;
     The combat, which he with Sansioy did hould;
8 The lucklesse conflict with the Gyant stout,
   Wherein captiu'd, of life or death he stood in doubt.

1 Then gan the dwarf the whole discourse declare:

gan > did

2 The subtle trains of Archimago old;

trains > wiles, deceits, snares

3 The wanton loves of false Fidessa fair, 4 Bought with the blood of vanquished paynim bold;

paynim > pagan, heathen [Sansfoy]

5 The wretched pair transformed to treen mould;

treen mould > [the shape or form of trees]

6 The House of Pride, and perils round about; 7 The combat which he with Sansjoy did hold; 8 The luckless conflict with the giant stout,

stout > proud, haughty, arrogant; powerful

9 Wherein captived, of life or death he stood in doubt.

captived > taken captive doubt > doubt; fear

107.27

   She heard with patience all vnto the end,
2 And stroue to maister sorrowfull assay,
     Which greater grew, the more she did contend,
4 And almost rent her tender hart in tway;
     And loue fresh coles vnto her fire did lay:
6 For greater loue, the greater is the losse.
     Was neuer Ladie loued dearer day,
8 Then she did loue the knight of the Redcrosse;
   For whose deare sake so many troubles her did tosse.

1 She heard with patience all to the end, 2 And strove to master sorrowful assay,

assay > trial by affliction

3 Which greater grew, the more she did contend, 4 And almost rent her tender heart in twain;

rent > tore twain > two

5 And love fresh coals unto her fire did lay:

unto > [upon]

6 For greater love, the greater is the loss.

greater > [the greater the]

7 Was never lady loved dearer day,

loved dearer day > [who loved life more dearly]

8 Than she did love the Knight of the Redcross; 9 For whose dear sake so many troubles her did toss.

107.28

   At last when feruent sorrow slaked was,
2 She vp arose, resoluing him to find
     A liue or dead: and forward forth doth pas,
4 All as the Dwarfe the way to her assynd:
     And euermore in constant carefull mind
6 She fed her wound with fresh renewed bale;
     Long tost with stormes, and bet with bitter wind,
8 High ouer hils, and low adowne the dale,
   She wandred many a wood, and measurd many a vale.

1 At last, when fervent sorrow slaked was, 2 She up arose, resolving him to find 3 Alive or dead: and forward forth does pass, 4 All as the dwarf the way to her assigned:

assigned > pointed out

5 And evermore, in constant careful mind,

careful > {Sorrowful, full of cares}

6 She fed her wound with fresh renewed bale;

bale > torment, woe

7 Long tossed with storms, and beaten with bitter wind, 8 High over hills, and low adown the dale,

adown > down

9 She wandered many a wood, and measured many a vale.

measured > traversed

107.29

   At last she chaunced by good hap to meet
2 A goodly knight, faire marching by the way
     Together with his Squire, arayed meet:
4 His glitterand armour shined farre away,
     Like glauncing light of Ph{oe}bus brightest ray;
6 From top to toe no place appeared bare,
     That deadly dint of steele endanger may:
8 Athwart his brest a bauldrick braue he ware,
   That shynd, like twinkling stars, with stons most pretious rare.

1 At last she chanced by good hap to meet

hap > fortune

2 A goodly knight, fair marching by the way

goodly > {Well-favoured, of good appearance}

3 Together with his squire, arrayed meet:

squire > attendant meet > suitably

4 His glittering armour shone far away, 5 Like glancing light of Phoebus' brightest ray; 6 From top to toe no place appeared bare, 7 That deadly dint of steel endanger may:

dint > blow, stroke

8 Athwart his breast a baldric brave he wore,

baldric > {Belt worn pendent from the shoulder, often to support a sword} brave > splendid

9 That shone, like twinkling stars, with stones most precious rare.

precious > [precious and]

107.30

   And in the midst thereof one pretious stone
2 Of wondrous worth, and eke of wondrous mights,
     Shapt like a Ladies head, exceeding shone,
4 Like Hesperus emongst the lesser lights,
     And stroue for to amaze the weaker sights;
6 Thereby his mortall blade full comely hong
     In yuory sheath, ycaru'd with curious slights;
8 Whose hilts were burnisht gold, and handle strong
   Of mother pearle, and buckled with a golden tong.

1 And in the midst thereof one precious stone 2 Of wondrous worth, and eke of wondrous mights,

eke > also mights > virtue, efficacy, powers

3 Shaped like a lady's head, exceeding shone,

lady > (Presumably the Faery Queen. In the chronicle of Geoffrey of Monmouth (Historia Regum Britanniae 9.4), Arthur's shield bore an image of the Virgin Mary)

4 Like Hesperus amongst the lesser lights,

Hesperus > (The "Evening Star", i.e. the planet Venus)

5 And strove to amaze the weaker sights;

amaze > overwhelm

6 Thereby his mortal blade full comely hung

mortal > lethal full > very, exceedingly

7 In ivory sheath, carved with curious sleights;

sleights > designs, patterns (SUS)

8 Whose hilts were burnished gold, and handle strong

hilts were > [hilt was: the plural form, which is obsolete, is apparently used here catachr. to denote the guard, "that part of the hilt which protects the hand" (OED)]

9 Of mother pearl, and buckled with a golden tongue.

mother pearl > mother-of-pearl tongue > pin (of buckle)

107.31

   His haughtie helmet, horrid all with gold,
2 Both glorious brightnesse, and great terrour bred;
     For all the crest a Dragon did enfold
4 With greedie pawes, and ouer all did spred
     His golden wings: his dreadfull hideous hed
6 Close couched on the beuer, seem'd to throw
     From flaming mouth bright sparkles fierie red,
8 That suddeine horrour to faint harts did show;
   And scaly tayle was stretcht adowne his backe full low.

1 His haughty helmet, horrid all with gold,

haughty > high, imposing horrid > bristling, rough

2 Both glorious brightness, and great terror bred;

bred > engendered

3 For all the crest a dragon did enfold

dragon > (Geoffrey of Monmouth (HRB 9.4) says a dragon was engraved on Arthur's helmet; Arthur's father, Uther Pendragon, also wore such a device, and from it derived his name: the Brythonic "pen" = "head")

4 With greedy paws, and over all did spread

greedy > eager; greedy

5 His golden wings: his dreadful hideous head, 6 Close couched on the beaver, seemed to throw

couched > {Lying down, with head raised: a term in heraldry} beaver > visor (strictly, the lower part of face-guard of helmet)

7 From flaming mouth bright sparkles fiery red, 8 That sudden horror to faint hearts did show; 9 And scaly tail was stretched down his back full low.

full > exceedingly, very

107.32

   Vpon the top of all his loftie crest,
2 A bunch of haires discolourd diuersly,
     With sprincled pearle, and gold fully richly drest,
4 Did shake, and seem'd to daunce for iollity,
     Like to an Almond tree ymounted hye
6 On top of greene +Selinis+ all alone,
     With blossomes braue bedecked daintily;
8 +Whose+ tender locks do tremble euery one
   At euery little breath, that vnder heauen is blowne.

6 Selinis > Selinis 1590, 1609 8 Whose > Her 1590

1 Upon the top of all his lofty crest

crest > {Apex of the helmet}

2 A bunch of hairs discoloured diversely

hairs > plumes, perhaps horsehair plumes discoloured diversely > [rendered (dyed) in various colours]

3 (With sprinkled pearl and gold fully richly dressed), 4 Did shake, and seemed to dance for jollity,

jollity > magnificence

5 Like an almond tree mounted high 6 On top of green Selinus all alone,

Selinus > (A city built on a hill in south-western Sicily. Taken by the Carthaginians in 409, when the greater portion was destroyed, it is now called Selinoto, the "town of palms". Virgil (Aen. 3.705) mentions "Selinus of the Palms". It was a Roman custom to give the victorious gladiator a branch of the palm-tree)

7 With blossoms brave bedecked daintily;

brave > splendid

8 Whose tender locks do tremble every one 9 At every little breath that under heaven is blown.

107.33

   His warlike shield all closely couer'd was,
2 Ne might of mortall eye be euer seene;
     Not made of steele, nor of enduring bras,
4 Such earthly mettals soone consumed bene:
     But all of Diamond perfect pure and cleene
6 It framed was, one massie entire mould,
     Hewen out of Adamant rocke with engines keene,
8 That point of speare it neuer percen could,
   Ne dint of direfull sword diuide the substance would.

1 His warlike shield all closely covered was, 2 Nor might of mortal eye be ever seen;

Nor might of mortal eye be ever seen > [No mortal eye might ever look upon it]

3 Not made of steel, nor of enduring brass 4 (Such earthly metals soon consumed been):

been > [would have been]

5 But all of diamond perfect pure and clean

clean > unpatterned, unadorned

6 It framed was, one massy entire mould,

framed > fashioned, made massy > solid, weighty entire > [in one piece] mould > shape

7 Hewn out of adamant rock with engines keen,

adamant rock > diamond engines > tools, machines keen > sharp

8 That point of spear it never pierce could,

That > [So that]

9 Nor dint of direful sword divide the substance would.

dint > blow, impact direful > dreadful, terrible

107.34

   The same to wight he neuer wont disclose,
2 But when as monsters huge he would dismay,
     Or daunt vnequall armies of his foes,
4 Or when the flying heauens he would affray;
     For so exceeding shone his glistring ray,
6 That Ph{oe}bus golden face it did attaint,
     As when a cloud his beames doth ouer-lay;
8 And siluer Cynthia wexed pale and faint,
   As when her face is staynd with magicke arts constraint.

1 The same to wight he never wont disclose,

wight > being, person; hence: anyone wont disclose > was accustomed to reveal

2 But when monsters huge he would dismay,

But > Except dismay > dismay; defeat, overcome

3 Or daunt unequal armies of his foes, 4 Or when the flying heavens he would affray;

affray > terrify (cf. the similar passage describing the powers of Merlin himself at 303.12)

5 For so exceeding shone his glistering ray, 6 That Phoebus' golden face it did attaint,

attaint > dishonour; sully; hence: obscure

7 As when a cloud his beams does overlay; 8 And silver Cynthia waxed pale and faint,

waxed > grew, became

9 As when her face is stained with magic arts' constraint.

constraint > affliction, oppression (cf. 706.16, Met. 7.207-8, PL 2.665)

107.35

   No magicke arts hereof had any might,
2 Nor bloudie wordes of bold Enchaunters call,
     But all that was not such, as seemd in sight,
4 Before that shield did fade, and suddeine fall:
     And when him list the raskall routes appall,
6 Men into stones therewith he could transmew,
     And stones to dust, and dust to nought at all;
8 And when him list the prouder lookes subdew,
   He would them gazing blind, or turne to other hew.

1 No magic arts hereof had any might,

hereof > [respecting the shield]

2 Nor bloody words of bold enchanter's call; 3 But all that was not such as seemed in sight 4 Before that shield did fade, and sudden fall: 5 And when him list the rascal routs appal,

list > chose, decided, pleased (to …) rascal routs > rabble

6 Men into stones therewith he could transmute,

therewith > with that

7 And stones to dust, and dust to naught at all; 8 And, when him list the prouder looks subdue,

prouder looks > [looks of the too-proud]

9 He would them gazing blind, or turn to other hue.

hue > appearance, form

107.36

   Ne let it seeme, that credence this exceedes,
2 For he that made the same, was knowne right well
     To haue done much more admirable deedes.
4 It Merlin was, which whylome did excell
     All liuing wightes in might of magicke spell:
6 Both shield, and sword, and armour all he wrought
     For this young Prince, when first to armes he fell;
8 But when he dyde, the Faerie Queene it brought
   To Faerie lond, where yet it may be seene, if sought.

1 Nor let it seem that credence this exceeds, 2 For he that made the same was known right well

right > very

3 To have done much more admirable deeds.

admirable > wonderful

4 It Merlin was, who whilom did excel

Merlin > (The great soothsayer and magician of the Arthurian cycle) whilom > of old

5 All living wights in might of magic spell:

wights > men, people

6 Both shield and sword, and armour all he wrought 7 For this young prince, when first to arms he fell;

fell > came [came to arms as a duty or as his destiny]

8 But, when he died, the Faery Queen it brought

it > [Arthur's arms and armour; (metaphorically) his virtue]

9 To Faery Land, where yet it may be seen, if sought.

107.37

   A gentle youth, his dearely loued Squire
2 His speare of heben wood behind him bare,
     Whose harmefull head, thrice heated in the fire,
4 Had riuen many a brest with pikehead square;
     A goodly person, and could menage +faire,+
6 His stubborne steed with curbed canon bit,
     Who vnder him did +trample+ as the aire,
8 And chauft, that any on his backe should sit;
   The yron rowels into frothy fome he bit.

5 faire, > faire 1609 7 trample > amble 1590

1 A gentle youth, his dearly loved squire,

gentle > noble squire > attendant (this is Timias: he is not named till 301.18:9)

2 His spear of ebon wood behind him bore,

ebon > {Ebony, made of ebony, a tree of the family Ebenaceae, esp. Diospyros ebenus, producing hard black wood}

3 Whose harmful head, thrice heated in the fire, 4 Had rived many a breast with pikehead square;

rived > split pikehead > [the point of the spear] square > [Perhaps meaning square in cross-section; also: direct, straight, just, honourable; and adv. senses]

5 A goodly person, and could manege fair

goodly > {Well-favoured, of good appearance} manege > manage, control (a term in horsemanship)

6 His stubborn steed with curbed canon bit,

curbed > {Having a chain or strap passing under the lower jaw, fastened to the upper ends of the branches of the bit: used for controlling an unruly horse} canon bit > {A mild, uncruel bit}

7 Who under him did trample as the air, 8 And chafed that any on his back should sit; 9 The iron rowels into frothy foam he bit.

rowels > {Knobs on the bit}

107.38

   When as this knight nigh to the Ladie drew,
2 With louely court he gan her entertaine;
     But when he heard her answeres loth, he knew
4 Some secret sorrow did her heart distraine:
     Which to allay, and calme her storming paine,
6 Faire feeling words he wisely gan display,
     And for her humour fitting purpose faine,
8 To tempt the cause it selfe for to bewray;
   Wherewith +emmou'd+, these bleeding words she gan to say.

9 emmou'd > enmoud 1590

1 When this knight nigh to the lady drew, 2 With lovely court he gan her entertain;

lovely > affectionate, well intentioned gan > did; began to entertain > encounter; receive as a guest, hence: greet

3 But, when he heard her answers loath, he knew 4 Some secret sorrow did her heart distrain:

distrain > afflict, rend

5 Which to allay, and calm her storming pain, 6 Fair feeling words he wisely gan display,

gan > did display > expound

7 And for her humour fitting purpose feign,

humour > frame of mind purpose > conversation, discourse

8 To tempt the cause itself to bewray;

bewray > betray, reveal

9 Wherewith enmoved, these bleeding words she began to say:

Wherewith enmoved > Moved with which

107.39

   What worlds delight, or ioy of liuing speach
2 Can heart, so plung'd in sea of sorrowes deepe,
     And heaped with so huge misfortunes, reach?
4 The carefull cold beginneth for to creepe,
     And in my heart his yron arrow steepe,
6 Soone as I thinke vpon my bitter bale:
     Such helplesse harmes yts better hidden keepe,
8 Then rip vp griefe, where it may not auaile,
   My last left comfort is, my woes to weepe and waile.

1 "What world's delight, or joy of living speech, 2 Can heart, so plunged in sea of sorrows deep, 3 And heaped with so huge misfortunes, reach?

so > such

4 The careful cold begins to creep,

careful > sorrowful

5 And in my heart his iron arrow steep, 6 Soon as I think upon my bitter bale:

bale > woe

7 Such helpless harms it's better hidden keep,

helpless > {Beyond remedy} hidden keep > [to keep hidden]

8 Than rip up grief, where it may not avail, 9 My last left comfort is my woes to weep and wail."

left > remaining weep and wail > {Trans.: weep over and bewail}

107.40

   Ah Ladie deare, quoth then the gentle knight,
2 Well may I weene, your griefe is wondrous great;
     For wondrous great griefe groneth in my spright,
4 Whiles thus I heare you of your sorrowes treat.
     But wofull Ladie let me you intrete,
6 For to vnfold the anguish of your hart:
     Mishaps are maistred by aduice discrete,
8 And counsell mittigates the greatest smart;
   Found neuer helpe, who neuer would his hurts impart.

1 "Ah lady dear," quoth then the gentle knight,

gentle > noble

2 "Well may I ween, your grief is wondrous great;

ween > imagine

3 For wondrous great grief groans in my spirit, 4 While thus I hear you of your sorrows treat.

treat > discourse

5 But, woeful lady, let me you entreat 6 To unfold the anguish of your heart: 7 Mishaps are mastered by advice discreet,

discreet > judicious

8 And counsel mitigates the greatest smart;

smart > anguish; pain

9 Found never help, who never would his hurts impart."

107.41

   O but (quoth she) great griefe will not be tould,
2 And can more easily be thought, then said.
     Right so; (quoth he) but he, that neuer would,
4 Could neuer: will to might giues greatest aid.
     But griefe (quoth she) does greater grow displaid,
6 If then it find not helpe, and breedes despaire.
     Despaire breedes not (quoth he) where faith is staid.
8 No faith so fast (quoth she) but flesh does paire.
   Flesh may empaire (quoth he) but reason can repaire.

1 "O but," quoth she, "great grief will not be told, 2 And can more easily be thought than said." 3 "Right so," quoth he, "but he that never would 4 Could never: will to might gives greatest aid." 5 "But grief," quoth she, "does greater grow displayed,

displayed > [when] exhibited, made known (literally: unfolded)

6 If then it finds not help, and breeds despair." 7 "Despair breeds not," quoth he, "where faith is staid."

staid > constant

8 "No faith so fast," quoth she, "but flesh does impair."

fast > firm, steadfast impair > weaken

9 "Flesh may impair," quoth he, "but reason can repair."

107.42

   His goodly reason, and well guided speach
2 So deepe did settle in her gratious thought,
     That her perswaded to disclose the breach,
4 Which loue and fortune in her heart had wrought,
     And said; +faire+ Sir, I hope good hap hath brought
6 You to inquire the secrets of my griefe,
     Or that your wisedome will direct my thought,
8 Or that your prowesse can me yield reliefe:
   Then heare the storie sad, which I shall tell you briefe.

5 faire > Faire 1609

1 His goodly reason, and well guided speech, 2 So deep did settle in her gracious thought, 3 That her persuaded to disclose the breach

her > [they her]

4 Which love and fortune in her heart had wrought, 5 And said: "Fair sir, I hope good hap has brought

hap > fortune

6 You to inquire the secrets of my grief, 7 Or that your wisdom will direct my thought,

Or > Either

8 Or that your prowess can me yield relief:

prowess > valour

9 Then hear the story sad, which I shall tell you brief.

107.43

   The forlorne Maiden, whom your eyes haue seene
2 The laughing stocke of fortunes mockeries,
     Am th'only daughter of a King and Queene,
4 Whose parents deare, whilest equall destinies
     Did runne about, and their felicities
6 The fauourable heauens did not enuy,
     Did spread their rule through all the territories,
8 Which Phison and Euphrates floweth by,
   And +Gehons+ golden waues doe wash continually.

9 Gehons > Gebons 1596, 1609

1 "The forlorn maiden, whom your eyes have seen 2 The laughing-stock of fortune's mockeries, 3 Am the only daughter of a king and queen,

king and queen > [Adam and Eve; see 112.26]

4 Whose parents dear (whilst equal destinies

equal > impartial

5 Did run about, and their felicities

run about > revolve; run their course

6 The favourable heavens did not envy),

envy > begrudge

7 Did spread their rule through all the territories

the territories > [the Garden of Eden, Paradise; or: the entire known world]

8 Which Pishon and Euphrates flow by,

Pishon > (The first of the four rivers flowing out of Eden (Gen.
2.11))
Euphrates > (The fourth of the four rivers flowing out of Eden
(Gen. 2.14))

9 And Gihon's golden waves do wash continually,

Gihon > (The second of the four rivers flowing out of Eden (Gen. 2.13))

107.44

   Till that their cruell cursed enemy,
2 An huge great Dragon horrible in sight,
     Bred in the loathly lakes of Tartary,
4 With murdrous rauine, and deuouring might
     Their kingdome spoild, and countrey wasted quight:
6 Themselues, for feare into his iawes to fall,
     He forst to castle strong to take their flight,
8 Where fast embard in mightie brasen wall,
   He has them now foure yeres besiegd to make them thrall.

1 "Till their cruel cursed enemy 2 (A huge great dragon, horrible in sight,

dragon > [Satan]

3 Bred in the loathly lakes of Tartarus)

Tartarus > (The underworld of Roman mythology; hell)

4 With murderous ravin, and devouring might,

ravin > rapine, pillage

5 Their kingdom spoiled, and country wasted quite: 6 Themselves, for fear into his jaws to fall,

for fear into his jaws to fall > [for fear of falling into his jaws]

7 He forced to castle strong to take their flight, 8 Where, fast embarred in mighty brazen wall,

fast > firmly

9 He has them now four years besieged to make them thrall.

four years > (Rev. 12.6 states that the nourishment in heaven of "the woman clothed with the sun" lasted 1,260 days; at 12.14, having been cast down again, she flees from Satan to the wilderness and spends there "a time, and times, and half a time", possibly a reference to three and a half years; Hamilton (1980) suggests that "four years" might also represent 4,000 years, the period, in round terms, which, according to the Geneva Bible, elapsed between the Creation and the birth of Christ) thrall > captive, enslaved

107.45

   Full many knights aduenturous and stout
2 Haue enterprizd that Monster to subdew;
     From euery coast that heauen walks about,
4 Haue thither come the noble Martiall crew,
     That famous hard atchieuements still pursew,
6 Yet neuer any could that girlond win,
     But all still shronke, and still he greater grew:
8 All they for want of faith, or guilt of sin,
   The pitteous pray of his fierce crueltie haue bin.

1 "Full many knights, adventurous and stout,

Full > Very, exceedingly stout > valiant, fierce

2 Have enterprised that monster to subdue;

enterprised > undertaken

3 From every coast that heaven walks about,

coast > region walks about > walks around, revolves about

4 Have thither come the noble martial crew, 5 That famous hard achievements still pursue, 6 Yet never any could that garland win, 7 But all still shrank, and still he greater grew:

shrank > [shrank back]

8 All they, for want of faith, or guilt of sin, 9 The piteous prey of his fierce cruelty have been.

107.46

   At last yledd with farre reported praise,
2 Which flying fame throughout the world had spred,
     Of doughtie knights, whom Faery land did raise,
4 That noble order hight of Maidenhed,
     Forthwith to court of Gloriane I sped,
6 Of Gloriane great Queene of glory bright,
     Whose kingdomes seat Cleopolis is red,
8 There to obtaine some such redoubted knight,
   That Parents deare from tyrants powre deliuer might.

1 "At last, led with far reported praise, 2 Which flying fame throughout the world had spread, 3 Of doughty knights, whom Faery Land did raise 4 (That noble order, hight of Maidenhead),

hight > called, named Maidenhead > (A reference to the Order of the Garter, the highest chivalric order of English knighthood, instituted c. 1344; the sovereign (i.e. Elizabeth I, the Virgin Queen) is head of the order. Its emblems include the Red Cross and St George slaying the dragon)

5 Forthwith to court of Gloriana I sped, 6 Of Gloriana, great queen of glory bright,

bright > bright; beautiful (referring both to the queen and her glory)

7 Whose kingdom's seat Cleopolis is read,

seat > throne Cleopolis > "City of Glorious Fame" (Greek; allegorically: London) read > named

8 There to obtain some such redoubted knight,

redoubted > doughty, valiant, redoubtable

9 That parents dear from tyrant's power deliver might.

107.47

   It was my chance (my chance was faire and good)
2 There for to find a fresh vnproued knight,
     Whose manly hands imbrew'd in guiltie blood
4 Had neuer bene, ne euer by his might
     Had throwne to ground the vnregarded right:
6 Yet of his prowesse proofe he since hath made
     (I witnesse am) in many a cruell fight;
8 The groning ghosts of many one dismaide
   Haue felt the bitter dint of his auenging blade.

1 "It was my chance (my chance was fair and good)

chance > lot, luck

2 There to find a fresh unproved knight,

unproved > [in battle]

3 Whose manly hands imbrued in guilty blood

imbrued > stained, steeped

4 Had never been, nor ever by his might 5 Had thrown to ground the unregarded right: 6 Yet of his prowess proof he since has made

prowess > valour

7 (I witness am) in many a cruel fight; 8 The groaning ghosts of many one dismayed

ghosts > souls, spirits one > [a one] dismayed > defeated; dismayed

9 Have felt the bitter dint of his avenging blade.

bitter > cruel, severe dint > impact, stroke

107.48

   And ye the forlorne reliques of his powre,
2 His byting sword, and his deuouring speare,
     Which haue endured many a dreadfull stowre,
4 Can speake his prowesse, that did earst you beare,
     And well could rule: now he hath left you heare,
6 To be the record of his ruefull losse,
     And of my dolefull disauenturous deare:
8 O heauie record of the good Redcrosse,
   Where haue +you+ left your Lord, that could so well you tosse?

9 you > yee 1590

1 "And you, the forlorn relics of his power, 2 His biting sword, and his devouring spear, 3 Which have endured many a dreadful stour,

stour > conflict

4 Can speak his prowess, that did erst you bear,

speak > [speak of] prowess > valour erst > once, formerly; not long ago

5 And well could rule: now he has left you here, 6 To be the record of his rueful loss, 7 And of my doleful disadventurous dear:

disadventurous > unfortunate dear > beloved (some editors gloss this as "loss, injury")

8 O heavy record of the good Redcross, 9 Where have you left your lord, that could so well you toss?

107.49

   Well hoped I, and faire beginnings had,
2 That he my captiue +langour+ should redeeme,
     Till all vnweeting, an Enchaunter bad
4 His sence abusd, and made him to misdeeme
     My loyalty, not such as it did seeme;
6 That rather death desire, then such despight.
     Be iudge ye heauens, that all things right esteeme,
8 How I him lou'd, and loue with all my might,
   So thought I eke of him, and thinke I thought aright.

2 langour > languor 1590

1 "Well hoped I, and fair beginnings had, 2 That he my captive languor should redeem,

captive languor > wretched plight; or: languishment in captivity

3 Till, all unweeting, an enchanter bad

unweeting > ignorant, not knowing; hence: unsuspecting

4 His sense abused, and made him to misdeem

abused > deceived misdeem > misjudge

5 My loyalty, not such as it did seem; 6 That rather death desire, than such despite.

That > [I would] despite > {The affliction of contemptuously being thought disloyal}

7 Be judge, you heavens, that all things right esteem, 8 How I him loved, and love with all my might, 9 So thought I eke of him, and think I thought aright.

eke > also

107.50

   Thenceforth me desolate he quite forsooke,
2 To wander, where wilde fortune would me lead,
     And other bywaies he himselfe betooke,
4 Where neuer foot of liuing wight did tread,
     That brought not backe the balefull body dead;
6 In which him chaunced false Duessa meete,
     Mine onely foe, mine onely deadly dread,
8 Who with her witchcraft and misseeming sweete,
   Inueigled him to follow her desires vnmeete.

1 "Thenceforth me desolate he quite forsook, 2 To wander where wild fortune would me lead, 3 And other byways he himself betook,

betook > took; or: committed [himself to]

4 Where never foot of living wight did tread,

wight > person

5 That brought not back the baleful body dead;

baleful > deadly, miserable

6 In which him chanced false Duessa meet,

meet > [to meet]

7 My only foe, my only deadly dread, 8 Who, with her witchcraft and misseeming sweet,

misseeming sweet > sweet [but] deceptive appearance; or: deceiving sweetness

9 Inveigled him to follow her desires unmeet.

unmeet > improper

107.51

   At last by subtill sleights she him betraid
2 Vnto his foe, a Gyant huge and tall,
     Who him disarmed, dissolute, dismaid,
4 Vnwares surprised, and with mightie mall
     The monster mercilesse him made to fall,
6 Whose fall did neuer foe before behold;
     And now in darkesome dungeon, wretched thrall,
8 Remedilesse, for aie he doth him hold;
   This is my cause of griefe, more great, then may be told.

1 "At last, by subtle sleights she him betrayed 2 To his foe, a giant huge and tall, 3 Who him (disarmed, dissolute, dismayed)

dissolute > enfeebled, debauched; off guard

4 Unwares surprised, and with mighty maul

Unwares > Unexpectedly, suddenly maul > club

5 The monster merciless him made to fall, 6 Whose fall did never foe before behold; 7 And now in darksome dungeon, wretched thrall,

thrall > captive

8 Remediless for ay he does him hold;

Remediless > Without hope of rescue ay > ever, always

9 This is my cause of grief, more great than may be told."

107.52

   Ere she had ended all, she gan to faint:
2 But he her comforted and faire bespake,
     Certes, Madame, ye haue great cause of plaint,
4 +That+ stoutest heart, I weene, could cause to quake.
     But be of cheare, and comfort to you take:
6 For till I haue acquit your captiue knight,
     Assure your selfe, I will you not forsake.
8 His chearefull words reuiu'd her chearelesse spright,
   So forth they went, the Dwarfe them guiding euer right.

4 That > The conj. Morris

1 Ere she had ended all, she began to faint: 2 But he her comforted, and fair bespoke:

bespoke > addressed

3 "Certes, madam, you have great cause of plaint,

Certes > Assuredly plaint > lamentation; complaint

4 That stoutest heart, I ween, could cause to quake.

That > [The; That the; or, perhaps: That cause of plaint the] ween > think

5 But be of cheer, and comfort to you take: 6 For till I have acquitted your captive knight,

acquitted > delivered, freed

7 Assure yourself, I will you not forsake." 8 His cheerful words revived her cheerless spirit, 9 So forth they went, the dwarf them guiding ever right.

CANTO VIII

1 Faire virgin to redeeme her deare 2 brings Arthur to the fight: 3 Who slayes +the Gyant+, wounds the beast, 4 and strips Duessa quight.

3 the Gyant > that Gyaunt 1590 etc.: FE

   Fair virgin, to redeem her dear,
2 brings Arthur to the fight:
   Who slays the giant, wounds the beast,
4 and strips Duessa quite.

108.1

   AY me, how many perils doe enfold
2 The righteous man, to make him daily fall?
     Were not, that heauenly grace doth him vphold,
4 And stedfast truth acquite him out of all.
     Her loue is firme, her care continuall,
6 So oft as he through his owne foolish pride,
     Or weaknesse is to sinfull bands made thrall:
8 Else should this Redcrosse knight in bands haue dyde,
   For whose deliuerance she this Prince doth thither guide.

1 Ay me, how many perils do enfold

Ay me > Ah me! Alas! (chiefly in northern dialect)

2 The righteous man, to make him daily fall? 3 Were not that heavenly grace does him uphold,

not > [it not]

4 And steadfast Truth acquit him out of all.

acquit > deliver

5 Her love is firm, her care continual, 6 So oft as he, through his own foolish pride, 7 Or weakness, is to sinful bonds made thrall:

thrall > slave

8 Else should this Redcross Knight in bonds have died, 9 For whose deliverance she this prince does thither guide.

she > [Una]

108.2

   They sadly traueild thus, vntill they came
2 Nigh to a castle builded strong and hie:
     Then cryde the Dwarfe, lo yonder is the same,
4 In which my Lord my liege doth lucklesse lie,
     Thrall to that Gyants hatefull tyrannie:
6 Therefore, deare Sir, your mightie powres assay.
     The noble knight alighted by and by
8 From loftie steede, and bad the Ladie stay,
   To see what end of fight should him befall that day.

1 They sadly travelled thus, until they came
2 Nigh to a castle built strong and high:
3 Then cried the dwarf, "Lo yonder is the same
4 In which my lord, my liege, does luckless lie,

liege > {Lord to whom one owes feudal allegiance and service}

5 Thrall to that giant's hateful tyranny:

Thrall > Slave

6 Therefore, dear sir, your mighty powers assay."

assay > put to the proof, test

7 The noble knight alighted by and by

by and by > straight away

8 From lofty steed, and bade the lady stay, 9 To see what end of fight should him befall that day.

108.3

   So with +the+ Squire, th'admirer of his might,
2 He marched forth towards that castle wall;
     Whose gates he found fast shut, ne liuing wight
4 To ward the same, nor answere commers call.
     Then tooke that Squire an horne of bugle small,
6 Which hong adowne his side in twisted gold,
     And tassels gay. Wyde wonders ouer all
8 Of that same hornes great vertues weren told,
   Which had approued bene in vses manifold.

1 the > his 1590

1 So with the squire, the admirer of his might, 2 He marched forth towards that castle wall, 3 Whose gates he found fast shut, no living wight

fast > firmly wight > being

4 To ward the same, nor answer comer's call.

ward > guard

5 Then took that squire a horn of bugle small,

bugle > wild ox

6 Which hung adown his side in twisted gold

adown > down

7 And tassels gay. Wide wonders over all

over all > everywhere

8 Of that same horn's great virtues were told,

virtues > powers

9 Which had approved been in uses manifold.

approved > proved, demonstrated practically

108.4

   Was neuer wight, that heard that shrilling sound,
2 But trembling feare did feele in euery vaine;
     Three miles it might be easie heard around,
4 And Ecchoes three answerd it selfe againe:
     No false enchauntment, nor deceiptfull traine
6 Might once abide the terror of that blast,
     But presently was voide and wholly vaine:
8 No gate so strong, no locke so firme and fast,
   But with that percing noise flew open quite, or brast.

1 Was never wight, that heard that shrilling sound,

wight > [a] creature, being, person

2 But trembling fear did feel in every vein: 3 Three miles it might be easily heard around, 4 And echoes three answered itself again: 5 No false enchantment nor deceitful train

train > trick

6 Might once abide the terror of that blast, 7 But presently was void and wholly vain:

presently > instantly vain > useless; weak

8 No gate so strong, no lock so firm and fast,

fast > firm

9 But with that piercing noise flew open quite, or burst.

108.5

   The same before the Geants gate he blew,
2 That all the castle quaked from the ground,
     And euery dore of freewill open flew.
4 The Gyant selfe dismaied with that sownd,
     Where he with his Duessa dalliance fownd,
6 In hast came rushing forth from inner bowre,
     With staring countenance sterne, as one astownd,
8 And staggering steps, to weet, what suddein +stowre,+
   Had wrought that horror strange, and dar'd his dreaded powre.

8 stowre, > stowre 1609

1 The same before the giant's gate he blew, 2 That all the castle quaked from the ground,

That > [So that]

3 And every door of freewill open flew.

of > [of its own]

4 The giant himself, dismayed with that sound

dismayed > dismayed (but also with a pun on "dis-made", here implying "unjoined", "unlinked") with > by

5 Where he with his Duessa dalliance found, 6 In haste came rushing forth from inner bower,

bower > room, chamber

7 With staring countenance stern, as one astounded,

stern > fierce, grim astounded > astounded, panic-stricken

8 And staggering steps, to weet what sudden stour

weet > find out stour > commotion

9 Had wrought that horror strange, and dared his dreaded power.

108.6

   And after him the proud Duessa came,
2 High mounted on her manyheaded beast,
     And euery head with fyrie tongue did flame,
4 And euery head was crowned on his creast,
     And bloudie mouthed with late cruell feast.
6 That when the knight beheld, his mightie shild
     Vpon his manly arme he soone addrest,
8 And at him fiercely flew, with courage fild,
   And eger greedinesse through euery member thrild.

1 And after him the proud Duessa came, 2 High mounted on her many-headed beast, 3 And every head with fiery tongue did flame, 4 And every head was crowned on its crest,

crowned > (See Rev. 12.3)

5 And bloody-mouthed with late cruel feast. 6 That when the knight beheld, his mighty shield 7 Upon his manly arm he soon addressed,

soon > immediately addressed > put, fixed; hence: donned

8 And at him fiercely flew, with courage filled, 9 And eager greediness through every member thrilled.

greediness > eagerness, zeal member > limb

108.7

   Therewith the Gyant buckled him to fight,
2 Inflam'd with scornefull wrath and high disdaine,
     And lifting vp his dreadfull club on hight,
4 All arm'd with ragged snubbes and knottie graine,
     Him thought at first encounter to haue slaine.
6 But wise and warie was that noble Pere,
     And lightly leaping from so monstrous maine,
8 Did faire auoide the violence him nere;
   It booted nought, to thinke, such thunderbolts to beare.

1 Therewith the giant buckled himself to fight,

Therewith > With that, thereupon buckled > prepared

2 Inflamed with scornful wrath and high disdain,

disdain > anger

3 And, lifting up his dreadful club on high 4 (All armed with ragged snubs and knotty grain),

snubs > snags; stubs (cf. 107.10:7)

5 Him thought at first encounter to have slain. 6 But wise and wary was that noble peer,

peer > {One equally matched with another; nobleman}

7 And, lightly leaping from so monstrous main,

lightly > lightly; quickly so > such main > force

8 Did fair avoid the violence him near; 9 It booted naught to think such thunderbolts to bear.

booted naught to think > [did not bear thinking about]

108.8

   Ne shame he thought to shunne so hideous might:
2 The idle stroke, enforcing furious way,
     Missing the marke of his misaymed sight
4 Did fall to ground, and with his heauie sway
     So deepely dinted in the driuen clay,
6 That three yardes deepe a furrow vp did throw:
     The sad earth wounded with so sore assay,
8 Did grone full grieuous vnderneath the blow,
   And trembling with strange feare, did like an earthquake show.

1 No shame he thought to shun so hideous might:

thought > [thought it] so > such hideous > terrific; immense; odious

2 The idle stroke, enforcing furious way,

idle > futile

3 Missing the mark of his mis-aimed sight, 4 Did fall to ground and with his heavy sway

sway > swing, momentum of swing

5 So deeply dinted in the driven clay

dinted > impacted

6 That three yards deep a furrow up did throw: 7 The sad earth, wounded with so sore assay,

sad > steadfast; stiff, heavy so > such [a] assay > assault

8 Did groan full grievous underneath the blow,

full > very, exceedingly

9 And, trembling with strange fear, did like an earthquake show.

108.9

   As when almightie Ioue in wrathfull mood,
2 To wreake the guilt of mortall sins is bent,
     Hurles forth his thundring dart with deadly food,
4 Enrold in flames, and smouldring dreriment,
     Through riuen cloudes and molten firmament;
6 The fierce threeforked engin making way,
     Both loftie towres and highest trees hath rent,
8 And all that might his angrie passage stay,
   And shooting in the earth, casts vp a mount of clay.

1 As when almighty Jove, in wrathful mood, 2 To wreak the guilt of mortal sins is bent,

wreak > avenge mortal > {Pertaining to mortals; also: deserving death}

3 Hurls forth his thundering dart with deadly feud,

feud > hatred

4 Enrolled in flames, and smouldering dreariment,

dreariment > gloom

5 Through riven clouds and molten firmament; 6 The fierce three-forked engine, making way,

engine > engine of destruction, missile

7 Both lofty towers and highest trees has rent,

rent > torn, split asunder

8 And all that might its angry passage stay;

stay > hinder

9 And, shooting in the earth, casts up a mount of clay.

mount > hill, hillock; mound

108.10

   His boystrous club, so buried in the ground,
2 He could not rearen vp againe so light,
     But that the knight him at +auantage+ found,
4 And whiles he stroue his combred clubbe to quight
     Out of the earth, with blade all burning bright
6 He smote off his left arme, which like a blocke
     Did fall to ground, depriu'd of natiue might;
8 Large streames of bloud out of the truncked stocke
   Forth gushed, like fresh water streame from riuen rocke.

3 auantage > aduantage 1590

1 His boisterous club, so buried in the ground,

boisterous > cumbersome

2 He could not rear up again so lightly;

lightly > easily, quickly [as he had buried it]

3 But that the knight himself at advantage found,

But > [So]

4 And, while he strove his encumbered club to quit

quit > free

5 Out of the earth, with blade all burning bright 6 He smote off his left arm, which like a block 7 Did fall to ground, deprived of native might;

native > innate

8 Large streams of blood out of the trunked stock

trunked > truncated (Latin truncus: cf. 205.4:9)

9 Forth gushed, like freshwater stream from riven rock.

108.11

   Dismaied with so desperate deadly wound,
2 And eke impatient of vnwonted paine,
     He loudly brayd with beastly yelling sound,
4 That all the fields rebellowed againe;
     As great a noyse, as when in Cymbrian plaine
6 An heard of Bulles, whom kindly rage doth sting,
     Do for the milkie mothers want complaine,
8 And fill the fields with troublous bellowing,
   The neighbour woods around with hollow +murmur ring+.

9 murmur ring > murmuring 1590 etc.: FE

1 Dismayed with so desperate deadly wound,

Dismayed with > Dismayed by; dis-made by (again the pun: cf. 108.5:4) so > such [a]

2 And eke impatient of unwonted pain,

eke impatient of unwonted pain > also unable to endure unaccustomed pain

3 He loudly brayed with beastly yelling sound,

brayed > cried out

4 That all the fields rebellowed again;

That > [So that] rebellowed > bellowed in reply; loudly re-echoed

5 As great a noise, as when in Cymbrian plain

Cymbrian > (Various explanations of this word have been put forward: (1) Cumbrian: Cumbria is a region in NW England which Spenser probably knew; (2) Cambrian, meaning Welsh; (3) Cimbrian, after the Cimbrian peninsula in modern Denmark, once noted for the ferocity of its inhabitants; (4) Crimean: relating to the Tauric Chersonese, once inhabited by the Cimmerii)

6 A herd of bulls, whom kindly rage does sting,

kindly rage > lust (kindly = natural; rage = violent passion)

7 Do for the milky mothers' want complain,

want > lack

8 And fill the fields with troublous bellowing; 9 The neighbour woods around with hollow murmur ring.

murmur > grumbling [sound]

108.12

   That when his deare Duessa heard, and saw
2 The euill stownd, that daungerd her estate,
     Vnto his aide she hastily did draw
4 Her dreadfull beast, who swolne with bloud of late
     Came ramping forth with proud +presumpteous+ gate,
6 And threatned all his heads like flaming brands.
     But him the Squire made quickly to retrate,
8 Encountring fierce with single sword in hand,
   And twixt him and his Lord did like bulwarke stand.

5 presumpteous > presumptuous 1609

1 That when his dear Duessa heard, and saw 2 The evil stound that dangered her estate,

stound > {Time of peril or pain (chiefly in northern dialect)} dangered > endangered estate > prosperity, fortune; condition, rank, status

3 To his aid she hastily did draw 4 Her dreadful beast, who, swollen with blood of late, 5 Came ramping forth with proud presumptuous gait,

ramping > leaping

6 And threatened all his heads like flaming brands. 7 But him the squire made quickly to retrait,

retrait > retreat, retire

8 Encountering fiercely with single sword in hand, 9 And 'twixt him and his lord did like bulwark stand.

lord > [Arthur]

108.13

   The proud Duessa full of wrathfull spight,
2 And fierce disdaine, to be affronted so,
     Enforst her purple beast with all her might
4 That stop out of the way to ouerthroe,
     Scorning the let of so vnequall foe:
6 But nathemore would that courageous swayne
     To her yeeld passage, gainst his Lord to goe,
8 But with outrageous strokes did him restraine,
   And with his bodie bard the way atwixt them twaine.

1 The proud Duessa, full of wrathful spite 2 And fierce disdain, to be affronted so,

disdain > indignation, anger affronted > defied; confronted

3 Enforced her purple beast with all her might

Enforced > Encouraged; constrained

4 That stop out of the way to overthrow,

stop > obstacle [the squire]

5 Scorning the let of so unequal foe:

let > hindrance so > such [an]

6 But nathemore would that courageous swain

nathemore > never the more swain > youth, young man

7 To her yield passage, gainst his lord to go,

gainst > against

8 But with outrageous strokes did him restrain,

outrageous > violent him > [the beast]

9 And with his body barred the way atwixt them twain.

atwixt them twain > between the two of them

108.14

   Then tooke the angrie witch her golden cup,
2 Which she still bore, replete with magick artes;
     Death and despeyre did many thereof sup,
4 And secret poyson through their +inner+ parts,
     Th'eternall bale of heauie wounded harts;
6 Which after charmes and some enchauntments said,
     She lightly sprinkled on his weaker parts;
8 Therewith his sturdie courage soone was quayd,
   And all his senses were with suddeine dread dismayd.

4 inner > inward 1609

1 Then took the angry witch her golden cup,

golden cup > (See Rev. 17.4)

2 Which she still bore, replete with magic arts; 3 Death and despair did many thereof sup, 4 And secret poison through their inner parts, 5 The eternal bale of heavy wounded hearts;

bale > torment

6 Which, after charms and some enchantments said, 7 She lightly sprinkled on his weaker parts;

weaker > too-weak parts > abilities, capacities; hence: will, will-power

8 Therewith his sturdy courage soon was quayed,

Therewith > With that sturdy > courageous, ruthless soon > at once quayed > daunted

9 And all his senses were with sudden dread dismayed.

dismayed > overcome; defeated

108.15

   So downe he fell before the cruell beast,
2 Who on his necke his bloudie clawes did seize,
     That life +nigh+ crusht out of his panting brest:
4 No powre he had to stirre, nor will to rize.
     That when the carefull knight gan well auise,
6 He lightly left the foe, with whom he fought,
     And to the beast gan turne his enterprise;
8 For wondrous anguish in his hart it wrought,
   To see his loued Squire into such thraldome brought.

3 nigh > night 1596

1 So down he fell before the cruel beast, 2 Who on his neck his bloody claws did seize, 3 That life nigh crushed out of his panting breast: 4 No power he had to stir, nor will to rise. 5 That when the careful knight gan well advise,

careful > wary; anxious gan > did advise > notice, perceive

6 He lightly left the foe with whom he fought,

lightly > quickly

7 And to the beast gan turn his enterprise;

gan > did; began to

8 For wondrous anguish in his heart it wrought 9 To see his beloved squire into such thraldom brought.

thraldom > captivity, bondage

108.16

   And high aduauncing his bloud-thirstie blade,
2 Stroke one of those deformed heads so sore,
     That of his puissance proud ensample made;
4 His monstrous scalpe downe to his teeth it tore,
     And that misformed shape mis-shaped more:
6 A sea of bloud gusht from the gaping wound,
     That her gay garments staynd with filthy gore,
8 And ouerflowed all the field around;
   That ouer shoes in bloud he waded on the ground.

1 And, high advancing his bloodthirsty blade,

advancing > raising

2 Struck one of those deformed heads so sore 3 That of his puissance proud example made;

puissance > power, strength proud > (Refers to both "his puissance" and the "ensample")

4 His monstrous scalp down to his teeth it tore,

scalp > scalp; or: crown of the head, cranium

5 And that misformed shape mis-shaped more:

mis-shaped > made mis-shapen

6 A sea of blood gushed from the gaping wound, 7 That her gay garments stained with filthy gore, 8 And overflowed all the field around; 9 That over shoes in blood he waded on the ground.

That > [So that]

108.17

   Thereat he roared for exceeding paine,
2 That to haue heard, great horror would haue bred,
     And scourging th'emptie ayre with his long traine,
4 Through great impatience of his grieued hed
     His gorgeous ryder from her loftie sted
6 Would haue cast downe, and trod in durtie myre,
     Had not the Gyant soone her succoured;
8 Who all enrag'd with smart and franticke yre,
   Came hurtling in full fierce, and forst the knight retyre.

1 Thereat he roared for exceeding pain, 2 That, to have heard, great horror would have bred,

bred > engendered

3 And, scourging the empty air with his long train,

train > tail

4 Through great impatience of his grieved head,

impatience > {Intolerance of, inability to endure, pain. Cf. 108.11:2} grieved > wounded

5 His gorgeous rider from her lofty stead

stead > place; hence: seat

6 Would have cast down, and trod in dirty mire, 7 Had not the giant soon her succoured;

soon > immediately

8 Who, all enraged with smart and frantic ire,

smart > acute pain

9 Came hurtling in full fierce, and forced the knight retire.

hurtling > rushing full > exceedingly retire > [to retire]

108.18

   The force, which wont in two to be disperst,
2 In one alone left hand he now vnites,
     Which is through rage more strong then both were erst;
4 With which his hideous club aloft he dites,
     And at his foe with furious rigour smites,
6 That strongest Oake might seeme to ouerthrow:
     The stroke vpon his shield so heauie lites,
8 That to the ground it doubleth him full +low+
   What mortall wight could euer beare so monstrous blow?

8 low > lowe, 1609

1 The force, which wont in two to be dispersed,

wont > was accustomed, used

2 In one alone left hand he now unites,

left > remaining (cf. 108.10:6)

3 Which is through rage more strong than both were erst;

erst > previously

4 With which his hideous club aloft he dights,

hideous > terrific; immense; odious dights > prepares; hence: raises

5 And at his foe with furious rigour smites,

rigour > violence

6 That strongest oak might seem to overthrow:

strongest > [the strongest]

7 The stroke upon his shield so heavily alights, 8 That to the ground it doubles him full low:

full > very, exceedingly

9 What mortal wight could ever bear so monstrous blow?

wight > being, man so > such [a]

108.19

   And in his fall his shield, that couered was,
2 Did loose his vele by chaunce, and open flew:
     The light whereof, that heauens light did pas,
4 Such blazing brightnesse through the aier threw,
     That eye mote not the same endure to vew.
6 Which when the Gyaunt spyde with staring eye,
     He downe let fall his arme, and soft withdrew
8 His weapon huge, that heaued was on hye
   For to haue slaine the man, that on the ground did lye.

1 And in his fall his shield, that covered was, 2 Did lose its veil by chance, and open flew:

veil > covering (see 107.33:1-2)

3 The light whereof, that heaven's light did surpass, 4 Such blazing brightness through the air threw 5 That eye might not the same endure to view. 6 Which when the giant spied with staring eye, 7 He down let fall his arm, and soft withdrew 8 His weapon huge, that heaved was on high 9 To have slain the man, that on the ground did lie.

108.20

   And eke the fruitfull-headed beast, amaz'd
2 At flashing beames of that sunshiny shield,
     Became starke blind, and all his senses daz'd,
4 That downe he tumbled on the durtie field,
     And seem'd himselfe as conquered to yield.
6 Whom when his maistresse proud perceiu'd to fall,
     Whiles yet his feeble feet for faintnesse reeld,
8 Vnto the Gyant loudly she gan call,
   O helpe Orgoglio, helpe, or else we perish all.

1 And eke the fruitful-headed beast, amazed

eke > moreover fruitful-headed > {Having or producing many heads} amazed > astounded; panic-stricken; ?terrified

2 At flashing beams of that sunshiny shield, 3 Became stark blind, and all his senses dazed, 4 That down he tumbled on the dirty field,

That > [So that]

5 And seemed himself as conquered to yield.
6 Whom when his mistress proud perceived to fall,
7 While yet his feeble feet for faintness reeled,
8 To the giant loudly she gan call:

gan > did

9 "O help, Orgoglio, help, or else we perish all!"

108.21

   At her so pitteous cry was much +amoou'd,+
2 Her champion stout, and for to ayde his frend,
     Againe his wonted angry weapon proou'd:
4 But all in vaine: for he has read his end
     In that bright shield, and all +their+ forces spend
6 Themselues in vaine: for since that glauncing sight,
     He hath no powre to hurt, nor to defend;
8 As where th'Almighties lightning brond does light,
   It dimmes the dazed eyen, and daunts the senses quight.

1 amoou'd, > amoou'd 1609 5 their > his sugg. Church; "their" may refer to Orgoglio and Duessa

1 At her so piteous cry was much moved 2 Her champion stout, and to aid his friend

stout > bold; fierce; arrogant friend > lover

3 Again his wonted angry weapon proved:

wonted > customary proved > tried

4 But all in vain: for he has read his end

read > seen

5 In that bright shield, and all their forces spend

their > (See Textual Appendix)

6 Themselves in vain: for, since that glancing sight,

glancing > flashing

7 He has no power to hurt, nor to defend; 8 As where the Almighty's lightning brand does alight, 9 It dims the dazed eyes, and daunts the senses quite.

dazed > dazzled

108.22

   Whom when the Prince, to battell new addrest,
2 And threatning high his dreadfull stroke did see,
     His sparkling blade about his head he blest,
4 And smote off quite his right leg by the knee,
     That downe he tombled; as an aged tree,
6 High growing on the top of rocky clift,
     Whose hartstrings with keene steele nigh hewen be,
8 The mightie trunck halfe rent, with ragged rift
   Doth roll adowne the rocks, and fall with fearefull drift.

1 Whom when the prince, to battle new addressed, 2 And threatening high his dreadful stroke, did see, 3 His sparkling blade about his head he blessed,

blessed > brandished

4 And smote off quite his right leg by the knee, 5 That down he tumbled; as an aged tree,

That > [So that]

6 High growing on the top of rocky cliff, 7 Whose heartstrings with keen steel nigh hewed be,

heartstrings > {Tendons or nerves supporting the heart; hence, here: central fibres of heartwood} keen > sharp

8 The mighty trunk half rent, with ragged rift

rent > split, torn ragged rift > ragged fissure ("ragged" also = "discordant", "harsh" (e.g. at 112.23:4); "rift" may also mean "rubble": cf. this same phrase at 212.4:5)

9 Does roll adown the rocks, and fall with fearful drift.

adown > down drift > motion, momentum (cf. Aen. 2.626-631)

108.23

   Or as a Castle reared high and round,
2 By subtile engins and malitious slight
     Is vndermined from the lowest ground,
4 And her foundation forst, and feebled quight,
     At last downe falles, and with her heaped hight
6 Her hastie ruine does more heauie make,
     And yields it selfe vnto the victours might;
8 Such was this Gyaunts fall, that seemd to shake
   The stedfast globe of earth, as it for feare did quake.

1 Or as a castle, reared high and round, 2 By subtile engines and malicious sleight

subtile > subtle; sly, cunning (cf. 106.5:2) engines > machines, contrivances; siege-engines sleight > skill; artifice, ruse

3 Is undermined from the lowest ground, 4 And its foundation forced, and enfeebled quite, 5 At last down falls, and with its heaped height 6 Its hasty ruin does more heavy make,

ruin > {The act of collapse of a building, etc.} heavy > heavy; grave; thunderous

7 And yields itself to the victor's might: 8 Such was this giant's fall, that seemed to shake 9 The steadfast globe of earth, as it for fear did quake.

steadfast > (Cf. 108.8:7-9) as > [as if]

108.24

   The knight then lightly leaping to the pray,
2 With mortall steele him smot againe so sore,
     That headlesse his vnweldy bodie lay,
4 All wallowd in his owne fowle bloudy gore,
     Which flowed from his wounds in wondrous +store,+
6 But soone as breath out of his brest did pas,
     That huge great body, which the Gyaunt bore,
8 Was vanisht quite, and of that monstrous mas
   Was nothing left, but like an emptie bladder was.

5 store, > store. 1590; store: 1609

1 The knight, then lightly leaping to the prey,

lightly > lightly; quickly

2 With mortal steel him smote again so sore

mortal > lethal

3 That headless his unwieldy body lay, 4 All wallowed in his own foul bloody gore, 5 Which flowed from his wounds in wondrous store. 6 But, soon as breath out of his breast did pass, 7 That huge great body, which the giant bore, 8 Was vanished quite; and of that monstrous mass 9 Was nothing left, but like an empty bladder was.

108.25

   Whose grieuous fall, when false Duessa spide,
2 Her golden cup she cast vnto the ground,
     And crowned mitre rudely threw aside;
4 Such percing griefe her stubborne hart did wound,
     That she could not endure that dolefull stound,
6 But leauing all behind her, fled away:
     The light-foot Squire her quickly turnd around,
8 And by hard meanes enforcing her to stay,
   So brought vnto his Lord, as his deserued pray.

1 Whose grievous fall when false Duessa spied, 2 Her golden cup she cast to the ground, 3 And crowned mitre rudely threw aside;

mitre > head-dress; sacerdotal head-dress (often associated with episcopal office or dignity) rudely > roughly

4 Such piercing grief her stubborn heart did wound,

stubborn > intractable

5 That she could not endure that doleful stound,

stound > {Period of alarm and tumult; peril (chiefly in northern dialect)}

6 But, leaving all behind her, fled away: 7 The lightfoot squire her quickly turned around,

lightfoot > light-footed

8 And by hard means enforcing her to stay, 9 So brought to his lord, as his deserved prey.

So brought > [Thus brought her]

108.26

   The royall Virgin, which beheld from farre,
2 In pensiue plight, and sad perplexitie,
     The whole atchieuement of this doubtfull warre,
4 Came running fast to greet his victorie,
     With sober gladnesse, and myld modestie,
6 And with sweet ioyous cheare him thus bespake;
     Faire braunch of noblesse, flowre of cheualrie,
8 That with your worth the world amazed make,
   How shall I quite the paines, ye suffer for my sake?

1 The royal virgin, who beheld from far, 2 In pensive plight and sad perplexity,

pensive > apprehensive, anxious perplexity > distress

3 The whole achievement of this doubtful war,

doubtful > uncertain, unpredictable

4 Came running fast to greet his victory

greet > congratulate him on (SUFQ)

5 With sober gladness and mild modesty,

mild > gracious

6 And with sweet joyous cheer him thus bespoke:

cheer > expression; bearing bespoke > addressed

7 "Fair branch of noblesse, flower of chivalry,

noblesse > nobility

8 That with your worth the world amazed make, 9 How shall I requite the pains you suffer for my sake?

108.27

   And you fresh bud of vertue springing fast,
2 Whom these sad eyes saw nigh vnto deaths dore,
     What hath poore Virgin for such perill past,
4 Wherewith you to reward? Accept therefore
     My simple selfe, and seruice euermore;
6 And he that high does sit, and all things see
     With equall +eyes+, their merites to restore,
8 Behold what ye this day haue done for mee,
   And what I cannot quite, requite with vsuree.

7 eyes > eye 1590

1 "And you, fresh bud of virtue springing fast,

you > [now addressing the squire] virtue > valour

2 Whom these sad eyes saw nigh to death's door, 3 What has poor virgin for such peril past 4 Wherewith you to reward? Accept therefore

Wherewith > With which

5 My simple self, and service evermore;
6 And He that high does sit, and all things see
7 With equal eyes, their merits to restore,
8 Behold what you this day have done for me,

Behold > [May He behold]

9 And what I cannot requite, +requite+ with usury.

requite > [may He requite] usury > interest

108.28

   But sith the heauens, and your faire +handeling+
2 Haue made you maister of the field this day,
     Your fortune maister eke with gouerning,
4 And well begun end all so well, I pray,
     Ne let that wicked woman scape away;
6 For she it is, that did my Lord bethrall,
     My dearest Lord, and deepe in dongeon lay,
8 Where he his better dayes hath wasted all.
   O heare, how piteous he to you for ayd does call.

1 handeling > handling 1609

1 "But sith the heavens, and your fair handling,

sith > since handling > treatment, management; hence: conduct

2 Have made you master of the field this day,

field > field of battle; battle

3 Your fortune master eke with governing,

master > (Vb.) eke > likewise

4 And well-begun, end all so well, I pray;

all so > equally

5 Nor let that wicked woman scape away:

scape > escape

6 For she it is that did my lord thrall,

thrall > enslave, take captive

7 My dearest lord, and deep in dungeon laid, 8 Where he his better days has wasted all. 9 O hear, how piteously he to you for aid does call!"

108.29

   Forthwith he gaue in charge vnto his Squire,
2 That scarlot whore to keepen carefully;
     Whiles he himselfe with greedie great desire
4 Into the Castle entred +forcibly,+
     Where liuing creature none he did espye;
6 Then gan he lowdly through the house to call:
     But no man car'd to answere to his crye.
8 There raignd a solemne silence ouer all,
   Nor voice was heard, nor wight was seene in bowre or hall.

4 forcibly, > forcibly. 1596

1 Forthwith he gave in charge to his squire 2 That scarlet whore to keep carefully;

scarlet > (The colour of her clothing; and also, of sins: heinous, deep-dyed (Isa. 1.18))

3 While he himself with greedy great desire

greedy > eager

4 Into the castle entered forcibly, 5 Where living creature none he did espy; 6 Then began he loudly through the house to call: 7 But no man cared to answer to his cry. 8 There reigned a solemn silence over all; 9 Nor voice was heard, nor wight was seen in bower or hall.

Nor > Neither [a] wight > creature, being, person bower > room, chamber hall > {A spacious public room in a castle, palace, etc., used for banquets and receptions, much larger than the inner rooms or bowers}

108.30

   At last with creeping crooked pace forth came
2 +An+ old old man, with beard as white as snow,
     That on a staffe his feeble steps did frame,
4 And guide his wearie gate both too and fro:
     For his eye sight him failed long ygo,
6 And on his arme a bounch of keyes he bore,
     The which vnused rust did ouergrow:
8 Those were the keyes of euery inner dore,
   But he could not them vse, but kept them still in store.

2 An > And 1596

1 At last, with creeping crooked pace, forth came 2 An old old man, with beard as white as snow,

old man > (This compound word can be taken here in its literal sense and as a synonym for unregenerate human nature, as in "Old Adam")

3 That on a staff his feeble steps did frame,

frame > give shape to, direct

4 And guide his weary gait both to and fro: 5 For his eyesight him failed long ago, 6 And on his arm a bunch of keys he bore, 7 Which, unused, rust did overgrow: 8 Those were the keys of every inner door, 9 But he could not them use, but kept them still in store.

still > yet; stationary (i.e. unused, unturned)

108.31

   But very vncouth sight was to behold,
2 How he did fashion his vntoward pace,
     For as he forward moou'd his footing old,
4 So backward still was turnd his wrincled face,
     Vnlike to men, who euer as they trace,
6 Both feet and face one way are wont to lead.
     This was the auncient keeper of that place,
8 And foster father of the Gyant dead;
   His name Ignaro did his nature right aread.

1 But very uncouth sight was to behold

uncouth > strange, unseemly was > [it was]

2 How he did fashion his untoward pace,

untoward > ungainly; perverse

3 For as he forward moved his footing old, 4 So backward still was turned his wrinkled face,

still > continuously

5 Unlike to men, who ever, as they trace,

to > [the manner of] trace > tread, proceed

6 Both feet and face one way are wont to lead.

wont > accustomed

7 This was the ancient keeper of that place, 8 And foster-father of the giant dead; 9 His name Ignaro did his nature right aread.

Ignaro > "Ignorance" aread > bespeak; make known

108.32

   His reuerend haires and holy grauitie
2 The knight much honord, as beseemed well,
     And gently askt, where all the people bee,
4 Which in that stately building wont to dwell.
     Who answerd him full soft, he could not tell.
6 Againe he askt, where that same knight was layd,
     Whom great Orgoglio with his puissaunce fell
8 Had made his caytiue +thrall,+ againe he sayde,
   He could not tell: ne euer other answere made.

8 thrall, > thrall: 1590; thrall; 1609

1 His reverend hair and holy gravity 2 The knight much honoured, as beseemed well,

beseemed > seemed fitting, seemed appropriate

3 And gently asked where all the people be,

gently > gently; politely be > [were]

4 Who in that stately building wont to dwell.

wont > were accustomed, used

5 Who answered him full soft, he could not tell.

full > very

6 Again he asked where that same knight was laid, 7 Whom great Orgoglio with his puissance fell

puissance > power, strength fell > fierce, terrible

8 Had made his caitiff thrall; again he said,

caitiff > wretched thrall > slave

9 He could not tell: nor ever other answer made.

108.33

   Then asked he, which way he in might pas:
2 He could not tell, againe he answered.
     Thereat the curteous knight displeased was,
4 And said, Old sire, it seemes thou hast not red
     How ill it +sits+ with that same siluer hed
6 In vaine to mocke, or mockt in vaine to bee:
     But if thou be, as thou art pourtrahed
8 With natures pen, in ages graue degree,
   Aread in grauer wise, what I demaund of thee.

5 sits > fits 1596, 1609; cf. 101.30:9

1 Then asked he which way he in might pass: 2 He could not tell, again he answered. 3 Thereat the courteous knight displeased was,

Thereat > Thereupon; as a result of that

4 And said, "Old sire, it seems you have not read

sire > {Father; form of address to an elderly man; the original form of "sir"} read > discerned; thought; understood

5 How ill it sits with that same silver head

sits with > suits, befits (see Textual Appendix)

6 In vain to mock, or mocked in vain to be: 7 But if you are as you are portrayed 8 With nature's pen, in age's grave degree, 9 Aread in graver wise what I demand of you."

Aread > make known; declare wise > manner demand > ask, inquire (the modern sense is rather too strong)

108.34

   His answere likewise was, he could not tell.
2 Whose sencelesse speach, and doted ignorance
     When as the noble Prince had marked well,
4 He ghest his nature by his countenance,
     And calmd his wrath with goodly temperance.
6 Then to him stepping, from his arme did reach
     Those keyes, and made himselfe free enterance.
8 Each dore he opened without any breach;
   There was no barre to stop, nor foe him to empeach.

1 His answer likewise was, he could not tell. 2 Whose senseless speech, and doted ignorance,

doted > deranged, weak-headed

3 When the noble prince had marked well, 4 He guessed his nature by his countenance,

countenance > demeanour

5 And calmed his wrath with goodly temperance. 6 Then, to him stepping, from his arm did reach 7 Those keys, and made himself free entrance. 8 Each door he opened without any breach;

breach > interruption; [need for] breaking [it] down

9 There was no bar to stop, nor foe him to impeach.

impeach > impede

108.35

   There all within full rich arayd he found,
2 With royall arras and resplendent gold.
     And did with store of euery thing abound,
4 That greatest Princes presence might behold.
     But all the floore (too filthy to be told)
6 With bloud of guiltlesse babes, and innocents trew,
     Which there were slaine, as sheepe out of the fold,
8 Defiled was, that dreadfull was to vew,
   And sacred ashes ouer it was strowed new.

1 There all within full richly arrayed he found,

full > very, exceedingly

2 With royal arras and resplendent gold,

arras > {Tapestry wall-hanging, screen; see 301.34:2}

3 And did with store of everything abound, 4 That greatest princes' presence might behold.

princes' > (Or "prince's", possibly referring directly to Arthur)

5 But all the floor (too filthy to be told)
6 With blood of guiltless babes, and innocents true,
7 Who there were slain, as sheep out of the fold,
8 Defiled was, that dreadful was to view,
9 And sacred ashes over it were strewn new.

sacred > {Sacred, because used to soak up Christians' blood: see 108.36:3; detestable, accursed, consecrated to one of the in- fernal deities, hence: devoted to destruction (Latin sacer)} new > newly, recently

108.36

   And there beside of marble stone was built
2 An Altare, caru'd with cunning imagery,
     On which true Christians bloud was often spilt,
4 And holy Martyrs often doen to dye,
     With cruell malice and strong tyranny:
6 Whose blessed sprites from vnderneath the stone
     To God for vengeance cryde continually,
8 And with great griefe were often heard to grone,
   That hardest heart would bleede, to heare their piteous mone.

1 And there beside of marble stone was built 2 An altar, carved with cunning imagery,

cunning > occult; deceitful imagery > idolatrous images

3 On which true Christians' blood was often spilt, 4 And holy martyrs often done to die

die > [death]

5 With cruel malice and strong tyranny: 6 Whose blessed spirits, from underneath the stone, 7 To God for vengeance cried continually, 8 And with great grief were often heard to groan, 9 That hardest heart would bleed to hear their piteous moan.

That > [So that the] moan > lamentation, lamentations

108.37

   Through euery rowme he sought, and euery bowr,
2 But no where could he find that wofull thrall:
     At last he came vnto an yron doore,
4 That fast was lockt, but key found not at all
     Emongst that bounch, to open it withall;
6 But in the same a little grate was pight,
     Through which he sent his voyce, and lowd did call
8 With all his powre, to weet, if liuing wight
   Were housed therewithin, whom he enlargen might.

1 Through every room he sought, and every bower,

bower > inner room, bed-chamber

2 But nowhere could he find that woeful thrall:

thrall > captive

3 At last he came to an iron door 4 That fast was locked, but key found not at all

fast > firmly

5 Amongst that bunch to open it withal;

withal > therewith

6 But in the same a little grate was pight,

grate > grating, grille pight > placed

7 Through which he sent his voice, and loud did call 8 With all his power, to weet if living wight

weet > find out wight > person

9 Were housed therewithin, whom he enlarge might.

enlarge > set free

108.38

   Therewith an hollow, dreary, murmuring voyce
2 These piteous plaints and dolours did resound;
     O who is that, which brings me happy choyce
4 Of death, that here lye dying euery stound,
     Yet liue perforce in balefull darkenesse bound?
6 For now three Moones haue changed thrice their hew,
     And haue beene thrice hid vnderneath the ground,
8 Since I the heauens chearefull face did vew,
   O welcome thou, that doest of death bring tydings trew.

1 Therewith a hollow, dreary, murmuring voice

Therewith > Thereupon murmuring > murmuring; complaining

2 These piteous plaints and dolours did resound:

plaints > complaints, lamentations dolours > griefs, sorrows

3 "O who is that, who brings me happy choice

choice > alternative [to a living death]

4 Of death, that here lie dying every stound,

stound > moment (of time)

5 Yet live perforce in baleful darkness bound?

baleful > deadly, miserable

6 For now three moons have changed thrice their hue,

hue > appearance

7 And have been thrice hidden underneath the ground, 8 Since I the heavens' cheerful face did view, 9 O welcome you, that do of death bring tidings true!"

108.39

   Which when that Champion heard, with percing point
2 Of pitty deare his hart was thrilled sore,
     And trembling horrour ran through euery ioynt,
4 For ruth of gentle knight so fowle forlore:
     Which shaking off, he rent that yron dore,
6 With furious force, and indignation fell;
     Where entred in, his foot could find no flore,
8 But all a deepe descent, as darke as hell,
   That breathed euer forth a filthie banefull smell.

1 Which when that champion heard, with piercing point 2 Of pity dear his heart was thrilled sore,

dear > grievous thrilled > pierced

3 And trembling horror ran through every joint,

joint > limb

4 For ruth of gentle knight so foul forlorn:

ruth > pity gentle > noble

5 Which shaking off, he rent that iron door

rent > tore

6 With furious force and indignation fell;

fell > fierce, terrible

7 Where entered in, his foot could find no floor, 8 But all a deep descent, as dark as hell, 9 That breathed ever forth a filthy baneful smell.

baneful > life-destroying, poisonous

108.40

   But neither darkenesse fowle, nor filthy bands,
2 Nor noyous smell his purpose could withhold,
     (Entire affection hateth nicer hands)
4 But that with constant zeale, and courage bold,
     After long paines and labours manifold,
6 He found the meanes that Prisoner vp to reare;
     Whose feeble thighes, vnhable to vphold
8 His pined corse, him scarse to light could +beare,+
   A ruefull spectacle of death and ghastly drere.

8 beare, > beare. 1596

1 But neither darkness foul, nor filthy bonds, 2 Nor noyous smell his purpose could withhold

noyous > noisome

3 (Entire affection hates nicer hands),

Entire > Perfect, wholly devoted, unreserved nicer > too-fastidious

4 But with constant zeal and courage bold, 5 After long pains and labours manifold,

pains > efforts

6 He found the means that prisoner up to rear; 7 Whose feeble thighs, unable to uphold 8 His pined corse, him scarce to light could bear,

pined corse > wasted body

9 A rueful spectacle of death and ghastly drear.

drear > sorrow, grief

108.41

   His sad dull eyes deepe sunck in hollow pits,
2 Could not endure th'vnwonted sunne to view;
     His bare thin cheekes for want of better bits,
4 And empty sides deceiued of their dew,
     Could make a stony hart his hap to rew;
6 His rawbone armes, whose mighty brawned bowrs
     Were wont to riue steele plates, +and+ helmets hew,
8 Were cleane consum'd, and all his vitall powres
   Decayd, and all his flesh shronk vp like withered flowres.

7 and > omitted from 1596

1 His sad dull eyes, deep sunk in hollow pits, 2 Could not endure the unwonted sun to view;

unwonted > unaccustomed

3 His bare, thin cheeks, for want of better bits,

bits > [of food]

4 And empty sides deceived of their due,

deceived > deprived, cheated

5 Could make a stony heart his hap to rue;

hap > lot, fortune

6 His raw-boned arms, whose mighty brawned bowers

raw-boned > {Gaunt; having projecting bones} brawned bowers > brawny muscles

7 Were wont to rive steel plates, and helmets hew,

wont > accustomed

8 Were clean consumed, and all his vital powers 9 Decayed, and all his flesh shrunk up like withered flowers.

108.42

   Whom when his Lady saw, to him she ran
2 With hasty ioy: to see him made her glad,
     And sad to view his visage pale and wan,
4 Who earst in flowres of freshest youth was clad.
     Tho when her well of teares she wasted had,
6 She said, Ah dearest Lord, what euill starre
     On you hath fround, and pourd his influence bad,
8 That of your selfe ye thus berobbed arre,
   And this misseeming hew your manly looks doth marre?

1 Whom when his lady saw, to him she ran 2 With hasty joy: to see him made her glad, 3 And sad to view his visage pale and wan, 4 Who erst in flowers of freshest youth was clad.

erst > once, previously

5 Tho, when her well of tears she wasted had,

Tho > Then

6 She said, "Ah, dearest lord, what evil star 7 On you has frowned, and poured his influence bad, 8 That of yourself you thus berobbed are,

berobbed > robbed (the prefix is intensive)

9 And this misseeming hue your manly looks does mar?

misseeming hue > unseemly appearance manly > {Pertaining to human beings; also: manly, in the modern sense}

108.43

   But welcome now my Lord, in wele or woe,
2 Whose presence I +haue+ lackt too long a day;
     And +fie+ on Fortune mine auowed foe,
4 Whose wrathfull wreakes them selues do now alay.
     And for these wrongs shall treble penaunce pay
6 Of treble good: good growes of euils priefe.
     The chearelesse man, whom sorrow did dismay,
8 Had no delight to treaten of his griefe;
   His long endured famine needed more reliefe.

2 haue > kaue 1596 3 fie > sie 1590; fye FE

1 "But welcome now my lord, in weal or woe,

weal > happiness, prosperity

2 Whose presence I have lacked too long a day; 3 And fie on Fortune, my avowed foe, 4 Whose wrathful wreaks themselves do now allay;

wreaks > {Vindictive or vengeful acts (mainly northern dialect)}

5 And for these wrongs shall treble penance pay 6 Of treble good: good grows of evil's proof."

proof > trial, experience

7 The cheerless man, whom sorrow did dismay, 8 Had no delight to treat of his grief;

treat > talk

9 His long endured famine needed more relief.

108.44

   Faire Lady, then said that victorious knight,
2 The things, that grieuous were to do, or beare,
     Them to renew, I wote, breeds no delight;
4 Best musicke breeds +delight+ in loathing eare:
     But th'onely good, that growes of passed feare,
6 Is to be wise, and ware of like agein.
     This dayes ensample hath this lesson deare
8 Deepe written in my heart with yron pen,
   That blisse may not abide in state of mortall men.

4 delight > dislike _conj. Jortin; despight conj. various editors_

1 "Fair lady," then said that victorious knight, 2 "The things that grievous were to do, or bear, 3 Them to renew, I wot, breeds no delight;

renew > go over again wot > know

4 Best music breeds delight in loathing ear:

delight > (See Textual Appendix; if the reading is good, the intention might perhaps be: "Best music, rather than going over old ground, breeds delight …")

5 But the only good that grows of passed fear 6 Is to be wise, and ware of like again.

ware > wary, cautious in avoiding

7 This day's example has this lesson dear

dear > hard, grievous; dire, difficult; costly

8 Deep written in my heart with iron pen,

iron pen > (See Job 19.24)

9 That bliss may not abide in state of mortal men.

state > [the state]

108.45

   Henceforth sir knight, take to you wonted strength,
2 And maister these mishaps with patient might;
     Loe where your foe lyes stretcht in monstrous length,
4 And loe that wicked woman in your sight,
     The roote of all your care, and wretched plight,
6 Now in your powre, to let her liue, or dye.
     To do her dye (quoth Vna) were despight,
8 And shame t'auenge so weake an enimy;
   But spoile her of her scarlot robe, and let her fly.

1 "Henceforth, sir knight, take to you wonted strength,

wonted > [your] accustomed

2 And master these mishaps with patient might; 3 Lo where your foe lies stretched in monstrous length,

in > [at; he refers to the empty skin (see 108.24:9)]

4 And lo that wicked woman in your sight, 5 The root of all your care and wretched plight,

care > sorrow

6 Now in your power, to let her live, or die." 7 "To do her die," quoth Una, "were despite,

do her die > put her to death were > [would be] despite > [an act of] spite, malice

8 And shame to avenge so weak an enemy;

avenge > punish, take vengeance upon

9 But spoil her of her scarlet robe, and let her fly."

spoil > strip (with less sense of violence than modern usage implies) scarlet > (Also the colour of her sins: heinous, deep-dyed (Isa. 1.18)) fly > flee

108.46

   So as she bad, that witch they disaraid,
2 And robd of royall robes, and purple pall,
     And ornaments that richly were displaid;
4 Ne spared they to strip her naked all.
     Then when they had despoild her tire and call,
6 Such as she was, their eyes might her behold,
     That her +misshaped+ parts did them appall,
8 A loathly, wrinckled hag, ill fauoured, old,
   Whose secret filth good manners biddeth not be told.

7 misshaped > mishaped 1596

1 So, as she bade, that witch they disarrayed,

disarrayed > unclothed

2 And robbed of royal robes, and purple pall,

pall > robe, cloak (esp. of rich material; and see Rev. 17.4)

3 And ornaments that richly were displayed; 4 Nor spared they to strip her naked all. 5 Then, when they had despoiled her tire and caul,

despoiled > stripped tire > head-dress caul > {Netted cap worn by women; here ?supporting a wig?}

6 Such as she was, their eyes might her behold, 7 That her misshapen parts did them appal:

That > [So that]

8 A loathly, wrinkled hag, ill-favoured, old,

loathly > loathsome, repulsive ill-favoured > ugly

9 Whose secret filth good manners bids not be told.

be > [to be]

108.47

   Her craftie head was altogether bald,
2 And as in hate of honorable eld,
     Was ouergrowne with scurfe and filthy scald;
4 Her teeth out of her rotten gummes were feld,
     And her sowre breath abhominably smeld;
6 Her dried dugs, like bladders lacking wind,
     Hong downe, and filthy matter from them weld;
8 Her wrizled skin as rough, as maple rind,
   So scabby was, that would haue loathd all womankind.

1 Her crafty head was altogether bald, 2 And, as in hate of honourable eld,

eld > age, old age

3 Was overgrown with scurf and filthy scall;

scall > {A scabby disease of the skin, esp. of the scalp}

4 Her teeth out of her rotten gums were felled,

felled > fallen

5 And her sour breath abominably smelled; 6 Her dried dugs, like bladders lacking wind,

dugs > breasts

7 Hung down, and filthy matter from them welled; 8 Her wrizzled skin, as rough as maple rind,

wrizzled > wrinkled, shrivelled

9 So scabby was that would have loathed all womankind.

would have loathed > [it would have excited loathing in]

108.48

   Her neather parts, the shame of all her kind,
2 My chaster Muse for shame doth blush to +write+
     But at her rompe she growing had behind
4 A foxes taile, with dong all fowly dight;
     And eke her feete most monstrous were in sight;
6 For one of them was like an Eagles claw,
     With griping talaunts armd to greedy fight,
8 The other like a Beares vneuen paw:
   More vgly shape yet neuer liuing creature saw.

2 write > write; 1590, 1609

1 Her nether parts, the shame of all her kind, 2 My chaster Muse for shame does blush to write;

chaster > too-chaste write > write of, describe

3 But at her rump she growing had behind 4 A fox's tail, with dung all foully dight;

dight > dressed, fitted; hence: encrusted, smeared

5 And eke her feet most monstrous were in sight;

eke > moreover

6 For one of them was like an eagle's claw, 7 With gripping talons armed to greedy fight,

greedy > eager, rapacious

8 The other like a bear's uneven paw:

uneven > irregular; rugged (see Rev. 13.2)

9 More ugly shape yet never living creature saw.

108.49

   Which when the knights beheld, amazd they were,
2 And wondred at so fowle deformed wight.
     Such then (said Vna) as she seemeth here,
4 Such is the face of falshood, such the sight
     Of fowle Duessa, when her borrowed light
6 Is laid away, and counterfesaunce knowne.
     Thus when they had the witch disrobed quight,
8 And all her filthy feature open showne,
   They let her goe at will, and wander wayes vnknowne.

1 Which when the knights beheld, amazed they were, 2 And wondered at so foul deformed wight.

wondered > marvelled so > such [a] wight > creature

3 "Such then," said Una, "as she seems here, 4 Such is the face of falsehood: such the sight 5 Of foul Duessa, when her borrowed light 6 Is laid away, and counterfeisance known."

counterfeisance > imposture

7 Thus when they had the witch disrobed quite, 8 And all her filthy feature open shown,

feature > {Form, proportions; bodily shape or build}

9 They let her go at will, and wander ways unknown.

108.50

   She flying fast from heauens hated face,
2 And from the world that her discouered wide,
     Fled to the wastfull wildernesse apace,
4 From liuing eyes her open shame to hide,
     And +lurkt+ in rocks and caues long vnespide.
6 But that faire crew of knights, and Vna faire
     Did in that castle afterwards abide,
8 To rest them selues, and weary powres repaire,
   Where store they found of all, that dainty was and rare.

5 lurkt > lurket 1596

1 She, flying fast from heaven's hated face,

flying > fleeing

2 And from the world that her discovered wide,

discovered > exposed to view

3 Fled to the wasteful wilderness apace,

wasteful > uninhabited, desolate apace > rapidly

4 From living eyes her open shame to hide, 5 And lurked in rocks and caves, long unespied.

unespied > unseen

6 But that fair crew of knights, and Una fair, 7 Did in that castle afterwards abide, 8 To rest themselves, and weary powers repair, 9 Where store they found of all that dainty was and rare.

dainty > pleasing; scarce; choice, delicious rare > excellent, fine

CANTO IX

   His loues and lignage Arthur +tells:+
2 The knights knit friendly +bands+:
   Sir Treuisan flies from Despayre,
4 Whom Redcrosse knight withstands.

1 tells: > tells 1596 2 bands > hands 1590: FE

1 His loves and lineage Arthur tells: 2 The knights knit friendly bands:

bands > bonds (esp. of unity); uniting influences. (See also Textual Appendix: 1590 is supported by 109.1:8, 109.18:9)

3 Sir Trevisan flies from Despair, 4 Whom Redcross Knight withstands.

109.1

   O Goodly golden chaine, wherewith yfere
2 The vertues linked are in louely wize:
     And noble minds of yore allyed were,
4 In braue poursuit of cheualrous emprize,
     That none did others safety despize,
6 Nor aid enuy to him, in need that stands,
     But friendly each did others prayse +deuize,+
8 How to aduaunce with fauourable hands,
   As this good Prince redeemd the Redcrosse knight from bands.

7 deuize, > deuize 1609

1 O goodly golden chain, wherewith yfere

golden chain > (Of Zeus (Jupiter): see Iliad 8.18-27; see also Knight's Tale, 2990 and Troilus and Criseyde 3.1746-9; and cf. 105.25, 207.46) wherewith yfere > with which together

2 The virtues linked are in lovely wise,

wise > manner, fashion

3 And noble minds of yore allied were

of yore > of old, formerly

4 In brave pursuit of chivalrous emprise:

emprise > undertaking, enterprise

5 That none did other's safety despise,

That > [So that] other's > (Or: "others'") despise > treat as valueless

6 Nor aid envy to him, in need that stands,

envy to > begrudge

7 But friendly each did other's praise devise

praise > praiseworthiness; virtue devise > contrive, scheme

8 How to advance with favourable hands, 9 As this good prince redeemed the Redcross Knight from bonds.

As > [Just as]

109.2

   Who when their +powres+ empaird through labour long,
2 With dew repast they had recured well,
     And that weake captiue wight now wexed strong,
4 Them list no lenger there at leasure dwell,
     But forward fare, as their aduentures fell,
6 But ere they parted, Vna faire besought
     That straunger knight his name and nation tell;
8 Least so great good, as he for her had wrought,
   Should die vnknown, and buried be in thanklesse thought.

1 powres > powres, 1609

1 Who, when their powers, impaired through labour long, 2 With due repast they had recured well,

recured > recovered

3 And that weak captive wight now waxed strong,

wight > man, person waxed > [had] grown

4 Them list no longer there at leisure dwell,

Them list > It pleased them dwell > [to dwell]

5 But forward fare, as their adventures fell;

fell > befell, should befall

6 But, ere they parted, Una fair besought

Una fair > fair Una; Una fairly (fairly = becomingly, in a fair manner)

7 That stranger knight his name and nation tell:

stranger > foreign; new-come nation > family; country; nationality

8 Lest so great good, as he for her had wrought, 9 Should die unknown, and buried be in thankless thought.

109.3

   Faire virgin (said the Prince) ye me require
2 A thing without the compas of my wit:
     For both the lignage and the certain Sire,
4 From which I sprong, from me are hidden yit.
     For all so soone as life did me admit
6 Into this world, and shewed heauens light,
     From mothers pap I taken was vnfit:
8 And streight deliuered to a Faery knight,
   To be vpbrought in gentle thewes and martiall might.

1 "Fair virgin," said the prince, "you me require

require > ask

2 A thing without the compass of my wit:

without > outside, beyond

3 For both the lineage and the certain sire

sire > father

4 From which I sprang from me are hidden yet. 5 For, all so soon as life did me admit

all so > just as

6 Into this world, and showed heaven's light, 7 From mother's pap I taken was unfit:

pap > teat

8 And straight delivered to a Faery knight, 9 To be upbrought in gentle thews and martial might.

upbrought > brought up gentle > noble thews > manners, qualities

109.4

   Vnto old Timon he me brought byliue,
2 Old Timon, who in youthly yeares hath beene
     In warlike feates th'expertest man aliue,
4 And is the wisest now on earth I weene;
     His dwelling is low in a valley greene,
6 Vnder the foot of Rauran mossy hore,
     From whence the riuer Dee as siluer cleene
8 His tombling billowes rolls with gentle rore:
   There all my dayes he traind me vp in vertuous lore.

1 "To old Timon he me brought belive,

Timon > (The Faery knight of 109.3:8. "Timon" is a Greek personal name meaning "he who is honoured", "he who is held in respect". Plainly Arthur is referring here to Sir Ector, to whom (in Malory) his upbringing was entrusted by Merlin) he > [Merlin] belive > without delay

2 Old Timon, who in youthly years has been 3 In warlike feats the expertest man alive, 4 And is the wisest now on earth, I ween;

ween > believe

5 His dwelling is low in a valley green, 6 Under the foot of Rauran mossy hoar,

Rauran > (Given by Bayley (1966) as Rauran-fawr, a hill in Merioneth, Wales, though this name is not in the Ordnance Survey Gazetteer of Great Britain or the Times Index-Gazetteer of the World. See also note in Hamilton (1980)) mossy > overgrown with moss (if referring to the hill); or: marshy, peaty (if referring to the valley) hoar > {Venerable with age; grey; "mossy hoar" might be read as "mossy and hoar"}

7 From whence the River Dee as silver clean

River Dee > (Rises in Bala Lake, Merioneth, Wales, reaching the sea 70 miles east and north at West Kirby)

8 His tumbling billows rolls with gentle roar: 9 There all my days he trained me up in virtuous lore.

lore > doctrine, teaching

109.5

   Thither the great Magicien Merlin came,
2 As was his vse, ofttimes to visit me:
     For he had charge my discipline to frame,
4 And Tutours nouriture to ouersee.
     Him oft and oft I askt in priuitie,
6 Of what loines and what lignage I did spring:
     Whose aunswere bad me still assured bee,
8 That I was sonne and heire vnto a king,
   As time in her iust terme the truth to light should bring.

1 "Thither the great magician Merlin came, 2 As was his use, often to visit me:

use > custom

3 For he had charge my discipline to frame,

discipline > {Education; mental and moral training}

4 And tutor's nouriture to oversee.

nouriture > {Nurture, the business of bringing up a child}

5 Him oft and oft I asked in privity,

privity > privacy, seclusion

6 Of what loins and what lineage I did spring: 7 Whose answer bade me still assured be

still > continually

8 That I was son and heir to a king, 9 As time in her just term the truth to light should bring."

just > full, proper

109.6

   Well worthy impe, said then the Lady gent,
2 And Pupill fit for such a Tutours hand.
     But what aduenture, or what high intent
4 Hath brought you hither into Faery land,
     Aread Prince Arthur, crowne of Martiall band?
6 Full hard it is (quoth he) to read aright
     The course of heauenly cause, or vnderstand
8 The secret meaning of th'eternall might,
   That rules mens wayes, and rules the thoughts of liuing wight.

1 "Well worthy imp," said then the lady gent,

imp > child, scion gent > noble, high-born; graceful, elegant

2 "And pupil fit for such a tutor's hand! 3 But what adventure, or what high intent,

adventure > chance occurrence, fortune intent > purpose; desire

4 Has brought you hither into Faery Land, 5 Aread, Prince Arthur, crown of martial band?"

Aread > Make known

6 "Full hard it is," quoth he, "to read aright

Full > Very, exceedingly read > discern; expound

7 The course of heavenly cause, or understand

cause > [divine] intention

8 The secret meaning of the eternal might 9 That rules men's ways, and rules the thoughts of living wight.

wight > mortal, being, person

109.7

   For whither he though fatall deepe foresight
2 Me hither sent, for cause to me vnghest,
     Or that fresh bleeding wound, which day and night
4 Whilome doth rancle in my riuen brest,
     With forced fury following his behest,
6 Me hither brought by wayes yet neuer found,
     You to haue helpt I hold my selfe yet blest.
8 Ah curteous knight (quoth she) what secret wound
   Could euer find, to grieue the gentlest hart on ground?

1 "For whether He, though fatal deep foresight,

fatal > preordained

2 Me hither sent, for cause to me unguessed, 3 Or that fresh bleeding wound (which day and night

Or > [Or whether]

4 Whilom does rankle in my riven breast),

Whilom > Continually; from the past until the present time

5 With forced fury, following his behest,

his > its (if referring to the wound); or: His (God's)

6 Me hither brought by ways yet never found, 7 You to have helped I hold myself yet blessed." 8 "Ah, courteous knight," quoth she, "what secret wound 9 Could ever find to grieve the gentlest heart on ground?"

find > contrive, devise gentlest > noblest; most gentle on ground > on Earth, in the world

109.8

   Dear Dame (quoth he) you sleeping sparkes awake,
2 Which troubled once, into huge flames will grow,
     Ne euer will their feruent fury slake,
4 Till liuing moysture into smoke do flow,
     And wasted life do lye in ashes low.
6 Yet sithens silence lesseneth not my fire,
     But told it flames, and hidden it does glow,
8 I will reuele, what ye so much desire:
   Ah Loue, lay downe thy bow, the whiles I may respire.

1 "Dear dame," quoth he, "you sleeping sparks awake, 2 Which, troubled once, into huge flames will grow; 3 Nor ever will their fervent fury slake,

slake > abate

4 Till living moisture into smoke do flow,

living moisture > [the humours comprising the body]

5 And wasted life do lie in ashes low.

wasted > consumed, squandered lie > (With a pun on "lye")

6 Yet sithens silence lessens not my fire,

sithens > since

7 But, told, it flames; and, hidden, it does glow, 8 I will reveal what you so much desire: 9 Ah, Love, lay down your bow, while I may respire!

Love > [Cupid] respire > breathe again, recover breath

109.9

   It was in freshest flowre of youthly yeares,
2 When courage first does creepe in manly chest,
     Then first +the+ coale of kindly heat appeares
4 To kindle loue in euery liuing brest;
     But me had warnd old Timons wise behest,
6 Those creeping flames by reason to subdew,
     Before their rage grew to so great vnrest,
8 As miserable louers vse to rew,
   Which still wex old in woe, whiles woe still wexeth new.

3 the > that 1590: FE, a lection defended, however, by Church

1 "It was in freshest flower of youthly years, 2 When courage first does creep in manly chest:

courage > lustiness, vigour creep > come on slowly, grow by degrees

3 Then first the coal of kindly heat appears

kindly > natural (cf. 108.11:6)

4 To kindle love in every living breast; 5 But me had warned old Timon's wise behest,

warned > forewarned, put on guard

6 Those creeping flames by reason to subdue 7 Before their rage grew to so great unrest,

so > such

8 As miserable lovers use to rue,

use to > observe as a custom; hence: customarily

9 Who still wax old in woe, while woe still waxes new.

wax > grow

109.10

   That idle name of loue, and louers life,
2 As losse of time, and vertues enimy
     I euer scornd, and ioyd to stirre vp strife,
4 In middest of their mournfull Tragedy,
     Ay wont to laugh, when them I heard to cry,
6 And blow the fire, which them to ashes brent:
     Their God himselfe, grieu'd at my libertie,
8 Shot many a dart at me with fiers intent,
   But I them warded all with wary gouernment.

1 "That idle name of Love, and lover's life, 2 As loss of time, and virtue's enemy, 3 I ever scorned, and joyed to stir up strife 4 In middest of their mournful tragedy,

middest > [the midmost part of]

5 Ay wont to laugh when them I heard to cry,

Ay > Ever wont > accustomed

6 And blow the fire which them to ashes burnt: 7 Their god himself, grieved at my liberty,

god > [Cupid]

8 Shot many a dart at me with fierce intent, 9 But I them warded all with wary government.

government > conduct, discretion

109.11

   But all in vaine: no fort can be so strong,
2 Ne fleshly brest can armed be so sound,
     But will at last be wonne with battrie long,
4 Or +vnawares+ at disauantage found;
     Nothing is sure, that growes on earthly ground:
6 And who most trustes in arme of fleshly might,
     And boasts, in beauties chaine not to be bound,
8 Doth soonest fall in disauentrous fight,
   And yeeldes his caytiue neck to victours most despight.

4 vnawares > vnwares 1596

1 "But all in vain: no fort can be so strong, 2 No fleshly breast can armed be so sound, 3 But will at last be won with battery long,

battery > battering; assault with many blows

4 Or unawares at disadvantage found;
5 Nothing is sure that grows on earthly ground:
6 And who most trusts in arm of fleshly might,
7 And boasts in beauty's chain not to be bound,
8 Does soonest fall in disadventurous fight,

disadventurous > unfortunate, disastrous

9 And yields his caitiff neck to victor's most despite.

caitiff > wretched; captive most > greatest despite > scorn, malice, outrage

109.12

   Ensample make of him your haplesse ioy,
2 And of my selfe now mated, as ye see;
     Whose prouder vaunt that proud auenging boy
4 Did soone pluck downe, and curbd my libertie.
     For on a day prickt forth with iollitie
6 Of looser life, and heat of hardiment,
     Raunging the forest wide on courser free,
8 The fields, the floods, the heauens with one consent
   Did seeme to laugh +on+ me, and fauour mine intent.

9 on > at 1590, 1596: FE

1 "Example make of him, your hapless joy,

him > [the Redcross Knight] joy > [source or object of delight]

2 And of myself now mated, as you see;

mated > overcome, stupefied; also: mated as in chess [by the Faery Queen]

3 Whose prouder vaunt that proud avenging boy

prouder vaunt > too-proud boast that proud avenging boy > [Cupid]

4 Did soon pluck down, and curbed my liberty. 5 For on a day, pricked forth with jollity

pricked forth > spurred on, goaded jollity > pleasure, lust

6 Of looser life, and heat of hardiment,

looser > too-loose; the looser hardiment > hardihood, boldness

7 Ranging the forest wide on courser free, 8 The fields, the floods, the heavens, with one concent

concent > harmony, concord

9 Did seem to laugh on me, and favour my intent.

laugh on > smile on, favour intent > purpose, intention, desire; frame of mind

109.13

   For-wearied with my sports, I did alight
2 From loftie steed, and downe to sleepe me layd;
     The verdant gras my couch did goodly dight,
4 And pillow was my helmet faire displayd:
     Whiles euery sence the humour sweet embayd,
6 And slombring soft my hart did steale away,
     Me seemed, by my side a royall Mayd
8 Her daintie limbes full softly down did lay:
   So faire a creature yet saw neuer sunny day.

1 "Forwearied with my sports, I did alight

Forwearied > Wearied, exhausted

2 From lofty steed, and down to sleep me laid; 3 The verdant grass my couch did goodly dight,

dight > prepare, arrange; hence: provide

4 And pillow was my helmet fair displayed;

displayed > spread out (presumably his head was resting on the "bunch of haires" mentioned at 107.32:2, and "helmet" should thus be read as "helm" or "crest"; but cf. 304.53:9)

5 While every sense the humour sweet embayed,

humour > dew [of sleep: cf. 101.36:2] embayed > bathed

6 And, slumbering soft, my heart did steal away; 7 Me seemed by my side a royal maid

Me seemed > [It seemed to me that]

8 Her dainty limbs full softly down did lay:

dainty > delightful, comely full > very, exceedingly

9 So fair a creature yet saw never sunny day.

109.14

   Most goodly glee and louely blandishment
2 She to me made, and bad me loue her deare,
     For dearely sure her loue was to me bent,
4 As when iust time expired should appeare.
     But whether dreames delude, or true it were,
6 Was neuer hart so rauisht with delight,
     Ne liuing man like words did euer heare,
8 As she to me deliuered all that night;
   And at her parting said, She Queene of Faeries hight.

1 "Most goodly glee and lovely blandishment

goodly > gracious, courteous; beautiful glee > {Entertainment; a state of exaltation or joy} lovely > loving blandishment > gentle cajolery, flattery

2 She to me made, and bade me love her dear, 3 For dearly sure her love was to me bent,

to me bent > to me inclined; aimed at me

4 As, when just time expired, should appear.

just > due should > [it should]

5 But whether dreams delude, or true it were, 6 Was never heart so ravished with delight, 7 Nor living man like words did ever hear, 8 As she to me delivered all that night; 9 And at her parting said she `Queen of Faeries' hight.

hight > was called

109.15

   When I awoke, and found her place deuoyd,
2 And nought but pressed gras, where she had lyen,
     I sorrowed all so much, as earst I ioyd,
4 And washed all her place with watry eyen.
     From that day forth I lou'd that face diuine;
6 From that day forth I cast in carefull mind,
     To seeke her out with labour, and long tyne,
8 And neuer +vow+ to rest, till her I find,
   Nine monethes I seeke in vaine yet ni'll that vow vnbind.

8 vow > vowd 1590

1 "When I awoke, and found her place devoid,

devoid > empty

2 And naught but pressed grass where she had lain, 3 I sorrowed all so much as erst I joyed,

all so > just as erst > previously joyed > [had joyed]

4 And washed all her place with watery eyes. 5 From that day forth I loved that face divine; 6 From that day forth I cast in careful mind,

cast > resolved, decided careful > {Sorrowful, full of cares}

7 To seek her out with labour and long teen,

teen > affliction, trouble

8 And never vow to rest, till her I find: 9 Nine months I seek in vain, yet nill that vow unbind."

nill > will not

109.16

   Thus as he spake, his visage wexed pale,
2 And chaunge of hew great passion did bewray;
     Yet still he stroue to cloke his inward bale,
4 And hide the smoke, that did his fire display,
     Till gentle Vna thus to him gan say;
6 O happy Queene of Faeries, that hast found
     Mongst many, one that with his prowesse may
8 Defend thine honour, and thy foes confound:
   True Loues are often sown, but seldom grow on ground.

1 Thus as he spoke, his visage waxed pale,

waxed > grew

2 And change of hue great passion did bewray;

hue > colour bewray > betray

3 Yet still he strove to cloak his inward bale,

bale > torment; also, mainly in northern usage: a great consuming fire, pyre, bonfire

4 And hide the smoke that did his fire display, 5 Till gentle Una thus to him gan say:

gentle > courteous; generous gan > did

6 "O happy Queen of Faeries, that has found, 7 Amongst many, one that with his prowess may

prowess > valour

8 Defend your honour, and your foes confound: 9 True loves are often sown, but seldom grow on ground."

109.17

   Thine, O then, said the gentle Redcrosse knight,
2 Next to that Ladies loue, shalbe the place,
     O fairest virgin, full of heauenly light,
4 Whose wondrous faith, exceeding earthly race,
     Was firmest fixt in mine extremest case.
6 And you, my Lord, the Patrone of my life,
     Of that great Queene may well gaine worthy grace:
8 For onely worthy you through +prowes+ priefe
   Yf liuing man mote worthy be, to be her liefe.

8 prowes > prowesse 1609

1 "Yours, O then," said the gentle Redcross Knight,

gentle > generous, courteous; (to take the meaning of this word as "noble, high-born" would be to anticipate the revelation at 110.65 ff.)

2 "Next to that lady's love, shall be the place, 3 O fairest virgin, full of heavenly light, 4 Whose wondrous faith, exceeding earthly race,

faith > fidelity; faith, loyalty earthly > [that of earthly]

5 Was firmest fixed in my extremest case.

case > plight

6 And you, my lord, the patron of my life,

patron > champion, defender; also: pattern, model (see I:130)

7 Of that great queen may well gain worthy grace:

worthy > deserved

8 For only worthy you through prowess' proof,

prowess' > valour's proof > trial, proof

9 If living man might worthy be to be her lief."

lief > beloved

109.18

   So diuersly discoursing of their loues,
2 The golden Sunne his glistring head gan shew,
     And sad remembraunce now the Prince amoues,
4 With fresh desire his voyage to pursew:
     Als Vna earnd her traueill to renew.
6 Then those two knights, fast friendship for to bynd,
     And loue establish each to other trew,
8 Gaue goodly gifts, the signes of gratefull mynd,
   And eke +as+ pledges firme, right hands together ioynd.

9 as > the 1596, 1609

1 So diversely discoursing of their loves,

So > Thus

2 The golden sun his glistering head gan show,

gan > did; began to

3 And sad remembrance now the prince moves 4 With fresh desire his voyage to pursue:

voyage > journey

5 Als Una yearned her travel to renew.

Als > As; also (chiefly in northern dialect)

6 Then those two knights, fast friendship to bind,

fast > firm

7 And love establish each to other true, 8 Gave goodly gifts, the signs of grateful mind,

grateful > grateful; also: agreeable, pleasing

9 And eke, as pledges firm, right hands together joined.

eke > also

109.19

   Prince Arthur gaue a boxe of Diamond sure,
2 Embowd with gold and gorgeous ornament,
     Wherein were closd few drops of liquor pure,
4 Of wondrous worth, and vertue excellent,
     That any wound could heale incontinent:
6 Which to requite, the Redcrosse knight him gaue
     A booke, wherein his Saueours testament
8 Was writ with golden letters rich and braue;
   A worke of wondrous grace, and able soules to saue.

1 Prince Arthur gave a box of diamond sure,

sure > steadfast (if referring to the diamond); secure (if referring to the box)

2 Embowed with gold and gorgeous ornament,

Embowed > Encircled

3 Wherein were closed few drops of liquor pure,

few > [a few]

4 Of wondrous worth, and virtue excellent,

virtue > powers, efficacy

5 That any wound could heal incontinent:

incontinent > immediately

6 Which to requite, the Redcross Knight him gave 7 A book, wherein his Saviour's testament

testament > (The New Testament)

8 Was written with golden letters rich and brave;

brave > splendid

9 A work of wondrous grace, and able souls to save.

109.20

   Thus beene they parted, Arthur on his way
2 To seeke his loue, and th'other for to fight
     With Vnaes foe, that all her realme did pray.
4 But she now weighing the decayed plight,
     And shrunken synewes of her chosen knight,
6 Would not a while her forward course pursew,
     Ne bring him forth in face of dreadfull fight,
8 Till he recouered had his former hew:
   For him to be yet weake and wearie well she knew.

1 Thus been they parted, Arthur on his way

been > [were]

2 To seek his love, and the other to fight 3 With Una's foe, that all her realm did prey.

prey > plunder, ravage

4 But she, now weighing the decayed plight
5 And shrunken sinews of her chosen knight,
6 Would not awhile her forward course pursue,
7 Nor bring him forth in face of dreadful fight,
8 Till he recovered had his former hue:

hue > appearance

9 For him to be yet weak and weary well she knew.

109.21

   So as they traueild, lo they gan espy
2 An armed knight towards them gallop fast,
     That seemed from some feared foe to fly,
4 Or other griesly thing, that him +agast+.
     Still as he fled, his eye was backward cast,
6 As if his feare still followed him behind;
     Als flew his steed, as he his bands had brast,
8 And with his winged heeles did tread the wind,
   As he had beene a fole of Pegasus his kind.

4 agast > aghast 1590

1 So as they travelled, lo they gan espy

gan > did

2 An armed knight towards them galloping fast, 3 That seemed from some feared foe to fly,

fly > flee

4 Or other grisly thing that him agast.

grisly > horrible, fearsome agast > terrified (esp. with fear of the supernatural: cognate with "ghost"; only the past participle of this verb [aghast] remains in current use)

5 Still as he fled, his eye was backward cast,

Still > Continually, ever; yet

6 As if his fear still followed him behind; 7 Als flew his steed, as he his bands had burst,

Als > Also flew > flew; fled as > [as though] bands > [bridle]

8 And with his winged heels did tread the wind, 9 As he had been a foal of Pegasus his kind.

As > [As though] Pegasus his kind > Pegasus's kind (kind = breed. Pegasus is the winged horse, said to have sprung from the blood of Medusa (see Met. 4.785-6). In later myth, he is regarded as the horse of the Muses, for it was with a stroke of his hoof that the inspiring fountain Hippocrene, on Mount Helicon, was caused to well forth. In the almost incredible fecundity of his vision, Spenser at this point is surely alive to the image of such a horse (i.e. art, poetry) serving to carry a man away from despair)

109.22

   Nigh as he drew, they might perceiue his head
2 To be vnarmd, and curld vncombed heares
     Vpstaring stiffe, dismayd with vncouth dread;
4 Nor drop of bloud in all his face appeares
     Nor life in limbe: and to increase his feares,
6 In fowle reproch of knighthoods faire degree,
     About his neck an hempen rope he weares,
8 That with his glistring armes does ill agree;
   But he of rope or armes has now no memoree.

1 Nigh as he drew, they might perceive his head

might > could

2 To be unarmed, and curled uncombed hairs

unarmed > without a helmet

3 Upstaring stiff, dismayed with uncouth dread;

Upstaring > Standing erect uncouth > strange, bizarre

4 Nor drop of blood in all his face appears,

Nor > Neither

5 Nor life in limb: and, to increase his fears, 6 In foul reproach of knighthood's fair degree,

degree > social station

7 About his neck a hempen rope he wears 8 That with his glistering arms does ill agree;

arms > {Weapons, shield and armour} ill > (Because hanging was not considered fit punishment for a knight)

9 But he of rope or arms has now no memory.

109.23

   The Redcrosse knight toward him crossed fast,
2 To weet, what mister wight was so dismayd:
     There him he finds all sencelesse and aghast,
4 That of him selfe he seemd to be afrayd;
     Whom hardly he from flying forward stayd,
6 Till he these wordes to him deliuer might;
     Sir knight, aread who hath ye thus arayd,
8 And eke from whom make ye this hasty +flight:+
   For neuer knight I saw in such misseeming plight.

8 flight: > flight. 1596

1 The Redcross Knight toward him crossed fast, 2 To weet what mister wight was so dismayed:

weet > find out mister wight > kind of man (mister = occupation; hence = class, sort)

3 There him he finds all senseless and aghast

all > [all so]

4 That of himself he seemed to be afraid; 5 Whom hardly he from flying forward stayed,

hardly > with difficulty stayed > hindered; checked, stopped

6 Till he these words to him deliver might:

might > could

7 "Sir knight, aread who has you thus arrayed,

aread > make known; declare arrayed > attired; put into your present state, afflicted

8 And eke from whom make you this hasty flight:

eke > also

9 For never knight I saw in such misseeming plight."

misseeming > unseemly

109.24

   He answerd nought at all, but adding new
2 Feare to his first amazment, staring wide
     With stony eyes, and hartlesse hollow hew,
4 Astonisht stood, as one that had +aspide+
     Infernall furies, with their chaines vntide.
6 Him yet againe, and yet againe bespake
     The gentle knight; who nought to him replide,
8 But trembling euery ioynt did inly quake,
   And foltring tongue at last these words seemd forth to shake.

4 aspide > espide 1609

1 He answered naught at all, but adding new 2 Fear to his first amazement, staring wide

amazement > confusion, amazement

3 With stony eyes and heartless hollow hue,

stony > rigid, motionless heartless > timorous hue > expression, appearance

4 Astonished stood, as one that had espied 5 Infernal Furies with their chains untied. 6 Him yet again, and yet again, bespoke

bespoke > addressed

7 The gentle knight; who naught to him replied 8 But, trembling every joint, did inly quake;

joint > limb inly > inwardly

9 And faltering tongue at last these words seemed forth to shake:

109.25

   For Gods deare loue, Sir knight, do me not stay;
2 For loe he comes, he comes fast after mee.
     Eft looking backe would faine haue runne away;
4 But he him forst to stay, and tellen free
     The secret cause of his perplexitie:
6 Yet nathemore by his bold hartie speach,
     Could his bloud-frosen hart emboldned bee,
8 But through his boldnesse rather feare did reach,
   Yet forst, at last he made through silence suddein breach.

1 "For God's dear love, sir knight, do me not stay;

stay > detain

2 For lo, he comes, he comes fast after me!" 3 Eft looking back, would fain have run away;

Eft > Again would fain > [he] would gladly, eagerly

4 But he him forced to stay, and tell freely 5 The secret cause of his perplexity:

perplexity > distress

6 Yet nathemore by his bold, hearty speech

nathemore > never the more hearty > courageous; energetic; genial

7 Could his blood-frozen heart emboldened be, 8 But through his boldness rather fear did reach, 9 Yet, forced, at last he made through silence sudden breach.

109.26

   And am I now in safetie sure (quoth he)
2 From him, that would haue forced me to dye?
     And is the point of death now turnd fro mee,
4 That I may tell this haplesse history?
     Feare nought: (quoth he) no daunger now is +nye?+
6 Then shall I you recount a ruefull cace,
     (Said he) the which with this vnlucky eye
8 I late beheld, and had not greater grace
   Me reft from it, had bene partaker of the place.

5 nye? > nye. conj. various editors

1 "And am I now in safety sure," quoth he, 2 "From him that would have forced me to die? 3 And is the point of death now turned from me, 4 That I may tell this hapless history?"

That > [So that]

5 "Fear naught," quoth he, "no danger now is nigh." 6 "Then shall I you recount a rueful case,"

you > [to you]

7 Said he, "which with this unlucky eye 8 I late beheld and, had not greater grace

late > lately greater > [than that experienced by Sir Terwin - see following stanzas]

9 Me reft from it, had been partaker of the place.

reft > torn; removed had been partaker of the place > [would have been one who shared the place occupied (i.e. fate suffered) by Sir Terwin]

109.27

   I lately chaunst (Would I had neuer chaunst)
2 With a faire knight to keepen companee,
     Sir Terwin hight, that well himselfe aduaunst
4 In all affaires, and was both bold and free,
     But not so happie as mote happie bee:
6 He lou'd, as was his lot, a Ladie gent,
     That him againe lou'd in the least degree:
8 For she was proud, and of too high intent,
   And ioyd to see her louer languish and lament.

1 "I lately chanced (would I had never chanced!) 2 With a fair knight to keep company, 3 Sir Terwin hight, that well himself advanced

hight > named

4 In all affairs, and was both bold and free, 5 But not so happy as might happy be:

happy > happy; fortunate

6 He loved, as was his lot, a lady gent

gent > high-born

7 That him again loved in the least degree:

again > in return

8 For she was proud, and of too high intent,

high intent > [proud a frame of mind]

9 And joyed to see her lover languish and lament.

109.28

   From whom returning sad and comfortlesse,
2 As on the way together we did fare,
     We met that villen (God from him me blesse)
4 That cursed wight, from whom I scapt whyleare,
     A man of hell, that cals himselfe Despaire:
6 Who first vs greets, and after faire areedes
     Of tydings strange, and of aduentures rare:
8 So creeping close, as Snake in hidden weedes,
   Inquireth of our states, and of our knightly deedes.

1 "From whom returning sad and comfortless,

comfortless > desolate

2 As on the way together we did fare, 3 We met that villain (God from him me bless!),

bless > preserve, deliver

4 That cursed wight, from whom I scaped whilere,

wight > creature scaped > escaped whilere > erewhile: lately

5 A man of hell, that calls himself Despair: 6 Who first us greets, and after fair areads

fair areads > expertly tells

7 Of tidings strange, and of adventures rare:

adventures > happenings

8 So creeping close, as snake in hidden weeds, 9 Inquires of our states, and of our knightly deeds.

states > circumstances; marital states

109.29

   Which when he knew, and felt our feeble harts
2 Embost with bale, and bitter byting griefe,
     Which loue had +launched+ with his deadly darts,
4 With wounding words and termes of foule repriefe,
     He pluckt from vs all hope of due reliefe,
6 That earst vs held in loue of lingring life;
     Then hopelesse hartlesse, gan the cunning thiefe
8 Perswade vs die, to stint all further strife:
   To me he lent this rope, to him a rustie knife.

3 launched > launced 1609

1 "Which when he knew, and felt our feeble hearts 2 Embossed with bale and bitter biting grief

Embossed > Swollen; encased; driven to extremity (as a hunted animal) bale > torment

3 (Which Love had lanced with his deadly darts),

Love > [Cupid]

4 With wounding words, and terms of foul reproof, 5 He plucked from us all hope of due relief, 6 That erst us held in love of lingering life;

erst > previously

7 Then hopeless, heartless, gan the cunning thief

gan > did; began to

8 Persuade us die, to stint all further strife:

die > [to die]

9 To me he lent this rope, to him a rusty knife.

rusty > blood-stained; dirty; rusty

109.30

   With which sad instrument of hastie death,
2 That wofull louer, loathing lenger light,
     A wide way made to let forth liuing breath.
4 But I more fearefull, or more luckie wight,
     Dismayd with that deformed dismall sight,
6 Fled fast away, halfe dead with dying feare:
     Ne yet assur'd of life by you, Sir knight,
8 Whose like infirmitie like chaunce may beare:
   But God you neuer let his charmed speeches heare.

1 "With which sad instrument of hasty death 2 That woeful lover, loathing longer light,

light > daylight (i.e. life; cf. 107.27:7)

3 A wide way made to let forth living breath. 4 But I, more fearful or more lucky wight,

wight > creature, person

5 Dismayed with that deformed dismal sight,

deformed > perverted, morally repulsive

6 Fled fast away, half dead with dying fear:

dying fear > fear of dying

7 Not yet assured of life by you, sir knight, 8 Whose +like+ infirmity like chance may bear:

like > similar

9 But God you never let his charmed speeches hear!"

But > [But may] his > [Despair's]

109.31

   How may a man (said he) with idle speach
2 Be wonne, to spoyle the Castle of his health?
     I wote (quoth he) whom triall late did teach,
4 That like would not for all this worldes wealth:
     His +subtill tongue+, like dropping honny, +mealt'h+
6 Into the hart, and searcheth euery vaine,
     That ere one be aware, by secret stealth
8 His powre is reft, and weaknesse doth remaine.
   O neuer Sir desire to try his guilefull traine.

5 subtill tongue > subtilltongue 1596 5 mealt'h > mealt'th conj. Smith, who cites 202.4:5

1 "How may a man," said he, "with idle speech

idle > empty; weak-headed

2 Be won to spoil the castle of his health?"

won > persuaded castle of his health > [his bodily well-being; Sir Thomas Elyot's The Castel of Helth was published in 1534]

3 "I wot," quoth he, "whom trial late did teach,

wot > know [one such] late > lately

4 That like would not for all this world's wealth:

like would not > [would not repeat the trial of listening to Despair]

5 His subtle tongue, like dropping honey, melts 6 Into the heart, and searches every vein, 7 That, ere one be aware, by secret stealth

That > [So that]

8 One's power is reft, and weakness does remain.

reft > taken away

9 O never, sir, desire to try his guileful train!"

try > test train > treachery

109.32

   Certes (said he) hence shall I neuer rest,
2 Till I that treachours art haue heard and tride;
     And you Sir knight, whose name mote I request,
4 Of grace do me vnto his cabin guide.
     I that hight Treuisan (quoth he) will ride
6 Against my liking backe, to doe you grace:
     But nor for gold nor +glee+ will I abide
8 By you, when ye arriue in that same place;
   For leuer had I die, then see his deadly face.

7 glee > fee conj. Church; cf. 110.43:6, but also 605.39:3

1 "Certes," said he, "hence shall I never rest,

Certes > Assuredly

2 Till I that treacher's art have heard and tried;

treacher > deceiver, trickster

3 And you, sir knight, whose name might I request, 4 Of grace do me to his cabin guide."

Of grace > As a favour, as a kindness cabin > cave (see 109.33:2); also: den, hovel

5 "I, that hight Trevisan," quoth he, "will ride

hight > am called

6 Against my liking back, to do you grace: 7 But +nor+ for gold nor glee will I abide

nor > neither gold nor glee > ["love nor money": glee = beauty, joy]

8 By you, when you arrive in that same place; 9 For liefer had I die than see his deadly face."

liefer had > rather would

109.33

   Ere long they come, where that same wicked wight
2 His dwelling has, low in an hollow caue,
     Farre vnderneath a craggie clift ypight,
4 Darke, dolefull, drearie, like a greedie graue,
     That still for carrion carcases doth craue:
6 On top whereof aye dwelt the ghastly Owle,
     Shrieking his balefull note, which euer draue
8 Farre from that haunt all other chearefull fowle;
   And all about it wandring ghostes did waile and howle.

1 Ere long they come where that same wicked wight

wight > creature

2 His dwelling has, low in a hollow cave,

hollow > insincere, false; also: hungry (these readings are suggested by the tautology: cf. 101.11:6, but also 303.8:3)

3 Far underneath a craggy cliff pight:

pight > placed

4 Dark, doleful, dreary, like a greedy grave,

greedy > greedy, eager

5 That still for carrion carcases does crave;

still > continuously

6 On top whereof ay dwelt the ghastly owl,

ay > ever, always ghastly > terrible, causing terror (esp. of the supernatural) owl > (To the Romans, an omen of death: see Met. 10.453; see also 105.30:6, etc.)

7 Shrieking his baleful note, which ever drove 8 Far from that haunt all other cheerful fowl; 9 And all about it wandering ghosts did wail and howl.

109.34

   And all about old stockes and stubs of trees,
2 Whereon nor fruit, nor leafe was euer seene,
     Did hang vpon the ragged rocky knees;
4 On which had many wretches hanged beene,
     Whose carcases were +scattered+ on the greene,
6 And throwne about the +cliffs+. Arriued there,
     That bare-head knight for dread and dolefull teene,
8 Would faine haue fled, ne durst approchen neare,
   But th'other forst him stay, and comforted in feare.

5 scattered > scattred 1590 6 cliffs > clifts 1590 etc.: FE

1 And all about old stocks and stubs of trees,

stocks > dead trunks; also: stumps stubs > {Broken branches remaining on the stem; also: stumps}

2 Whereon +nor+ fruit nor leaf was ever seen,

nor > neither

3 Did hang upon the ragged rocky knees;

knees > projections [of rock]

4 On which had many wretches hanged been, 5 Whose carcases were scattered on the green, 6 And thrown about the cliffs. Arrived there, 7 That bare-headed knight, for dread and doleful teen,

teen > grief, pain

8 Would fain have fled, nor dared approach near,

fain > gladly

9 But the other forced him stay, and comforted in fear.

stay > [to stay] comforted > [comforted him]

109.35

   That darkesome caue they enter, where they find
2 That cursed man, low sitting on the ground,
     Musing full sadly in his sullein mind;
4 His +griesie+ lockes, long growen, and vnbound,
     Disordred hong about his shoulders round,
6 And hid his face; through which his hollow eyne
     Lookt deadly dull, and stared as astound;
8 His raw-bone cheekes through penurie and pine,
   +Were+ shronke into his iawes, as he did neuer dine.

4 griesie > griesly 1611 9 Were > Where 1596

1 That darksome cave they enter, where they find 2 That cursed man, low sitting on the ground, 3 Musing full sadly in his sullen mind;

full > very sullen > malignant; melancholy

4 His griesy locks, long grown, and unbound,

griesy > squalid, hideous (see also Textual Appendix)

5 Disordered hung about his shoulders round, 6 And hid his face; through which his hollow eyes 7 Looked deadly dull, and stared as astounded;

as > [as though] astounded > {Stupefied; shocked with alarm, surprise, or wonder}

8 His raw-boned cheeks, through penury and pine,

raw-boned > {Gaunt; having projecting bones} pine > starvation, want

9 Were shrunk into his jaws, as he did never dine.

as > [as though]

109.36

   His garment nought but many ragged clouts,
2 With thornes together pind and patched was,
     The which his naked sides he wrapt abouts;
4 And him beside there lay vpon the gras
     A drearie corse, whose life away did pas,
6 All wallowd in his owne yet luke-warme blood,
     That from his wound yet welled fresh alas;
8 In which a rustie knife fast fixed stood,
   And made an open passage for the gushing flood.

1 His garment, naught but many ragged clouts,

clouts > rags

2 With thorns together pinned and patched was, 3 Which his naked sides he wrapped abouts;

abouts > about (characteristic of northern dialect)

4 And him beside there lay upon the grass 5 A dreary corse, whose life away did pass,

dreary > gory; dreadful, grim corse > body

6 All wallowed in his own yet lukewarm blood,

wallowed > prostrated

7 That from his wound yet welled fresh, alas; 8 In which a rusty knife fast fixed stood,

rusty > blood-stained; dirty; rusty fast > firmly

9 And made an open passage for the gushing flood.

109.37

   Which piteous spectacle, approuing trew
2 The wofull tale that Treuisan had told,
     When as the gentle Redcrosse knight did vew,
4 With firie zeale he burnt in courage bold,
     Him to auenge, before his bloud were cold,
6 And to the villein said, Thou damned wight,
     The author of this fact, we here behold,
8 What iustice can but iudge against thee right,
   With thine owne bloud to price his bloud, here shed in sight.

1 Which piteous spectacle, proving true 2 The woeful tale that Trevisan had told, 3 When the gentle Redcross Knight did view,

gentle > courteous; generous

4 With fiery zeal he burnt in courage bold 5 Him to avenge, before his blood were cold,

his blood > [the Redcross Knight's metaphorical, or Sir Terwin's literal, blood]

6 And to the villain said, "You damned wight,

wight > creature

7 The author of this fact we here behold,

fact > deed

8 What justice can but judge against you right,

justice can but > [system of justice can do anything but]

9 With your own blood to price his blood, here shed in sight?"

price > pay for

109.38

   What franticke fit (quoth he) hath thus distraught
2 Thee, foolish man, so rash a doome to giue?
     What iustice euer other iudgement taught,
4 But he should die, who merites not to liue?
     None else to death this man despayring driue,
6 But his owne guiltie mind deseruing death.
     Is then vniust to each his due to giue?
8 Or let him die, that loatheth +liuing+ breath?
   Or let him die at ease, that liueth here vneath?

8 liuing > liniug 1596

1 "What frantic fit," quoth he, "has thus distracted

frantic > deliriously mad, frenzied

2 You, foolish man, so rash a doom to give?

doom > judgement, sentence

3 What justice ever other judgement taught,

justice > [system of justice]

4 But he should die, who merits not to live?

But > [But that]

5 None else to death this man despairing drive,

drive > drives; drove

6 But his own guilty mind, deserving death. 7 Is then unjust to each his due to give,

Is > [Is it]

8 Or let him die, that loathes living breath, 9 Or let him die at ease, that lives here uneath?

uneath > uneasily

109.39

   Who trauels by the wearie wandring way,
2 To come vnto his wished home in haste,
     And meetes a flood, that doth his passage stay,
4 Is not great grace to helpe him ouer past,
     Or free his feet, that in the myre sticke fast?
6 Most enuious man, that grieues at neighbours good,
     And fond, that ioyest in the woe thou hast,
8 Why wilt not let him passe, that long hath stood
   Vpon the banke, yet wilt thy selfe not passe the flood?

1 "Who travels by the weary wandering way,

Who > [Whoever, He who]

2 To come to his wished home in haste, 3 And meets a flood that does his passage stay,

stay > obstruct

4 Is not great grace to help him over past,

Is > [Is it] over past > ?over and past; ?over-pass

5 Or free his feet, that in the mire stick fast?

fast > firmly

6 Most envious man, that grieves at neighbour's good, 7 And fond, that joys in the woe you have!

fond > foolish, foolishly tender

8 Why will not let him pass, that long has stood

will > [will you]

9 Upon the bank, yet will yourself not pass the flood?

109.40

   He there does now enioy eternall rest
2 And happie ease, which thou doest want and craue,
     And further from it daily wanderest:
4 What if some litle paine the passage haue,
     That makes fraile flesh to feare the bitter waue?
6 Is not short paine well borne, that brings long ease,
     And layes the soule to sleepe in quiet graue?
8 Sleepe after toyle, port after stormie seas,
   Ease after warre, death after life does greatly please.

1 "He there does now enjoy eternal rest

He there > [Sir Terwin]

2 And happy ease, which you do want and crave, 3 And further from it daily wander: 4 What if some little pain the passage have, 5 That makes frail flesh fear the bitter wave? 6 Is not short pain well borne, that brings long ease, 7 And lays the soul to sleep in quiet grave? 8 Sleep after toil, port after stormy seas, 9 Ease after war, death after life does greatly please."

109.41

   The knight much wondred at his suddeine wit,
2 And said, The terme of life is limited,
     Ne may a man prolong, nor shorten it;
4 The souldier may not moue from watchfull sted,
     Nor leaue his stand, vntill his Captaine bed.
6 Who life did limit by almightie doome,
     (Quoth he) knowes best the termes established;
8 And he, that points the Centonell his roome,
   Doth license him depart at sound of morning droome.

1 The knight much wondered at his sudden wit,

wondered > marvelled sudden > quick, sharp

2 And said, "The term of life is limited, 3 Nor may a man prolong, nor shorten, it;

Nor > Neither

4 The soldier may not move from watchful stead,

stead > place, post

5 Nor leave his stand, until his captain bids."

bids." > (Spenser's rendition of dialogue elsewhere, using "quoth he" to introduce a new speaker, seems to indicate, as does the context, that the Redcross Knight now finishes talking and Despair begins, though this assumption may not necessarily be correct)

6 "Who life did limit by almighty doom,"

Who > [He who] doom > judgement

7 Quoth he, "knows best the terms established; 8 And he, that appoints the sentinel his room,

his > [to his] room > place

9 Does license him depart at sound of morning drum."

depart > [to depart] morning > (Ambiguous spelling: see Textual Appendix at 103.36:7)

109.42

   Is not his deed, what euer thing is donne,
2 In heauen and earth? did not he all create
     To die againe? all ends that was begonne.
4 Their times in his eternall booke of fate
     Are written sure, and haue their certaine date.
6 Who then can striue with strong necessitie,
     That holds the world in his still chaunging state,
8 Or shunne the death ordaynd by destinie?
   When houre of death is come, let none aske whence, nor why.

1 "Is not His deed, whatever thing is done

Is > [Is it]

2 In heaven and earth? Did not He all create 3 To die again? All ends that was begun. 4 Their times in His eternal book of fate 5 Are written sure, and have their certain date.

date > span (of life); end (cf. 201.44:8)

6 Who then can strive with strong necessity, 7 That holds the world in its still changing state,

still > continually

8 Or shun the death ordained by destiny? 9 When hour of death is come, let none ask whence, nor why.

109.43

   The lenger life, I wote the greater sin,
2 The greater sin, the greater punishment:
     All those great battels, which thou boasts to win,
4 Through strife, and bloud-shed, and auengement,
     Now praysd, hereafter deare thou shalt repent:
6 For life must life, and bloud must bloud repay.
     Is not enough thy euill life forespent?
8 For he, that once hath missed the right way,
   The further he doth goe, the further he doth stray.

1 "The longer life, I wot, the greater sin,

wot > know, know for a fact

2 The greater sin, the greater punishment: 3 All those great battles (which you boast to win 4 Through strife, and bloodshed, and avengement),

avengement > vengeance

5 Now praised, hereafter dear you shall repent:

dear > dearly

6 For life must life, and blood must blood, repay. 7 Is not enough your evil life forespent?

Is not enough your evil life forespent? > [Is it not enough that your evil life has been utterly wasted? Or, more probably: Has not enough of your evil life already been utterly wasted?]

8 For he that once has missed the right way, 9 The further he does go, the further he does stray.

109.44

   Then do no further goe, no further stray,
2 But here lie downe, and to thy rest betake,
     Th'ill to preuent, that life ensewen may.
4 For what hath life, that may it loued make,
     And giues not rather cause it to forsake?
6 Feare, sicknesse, age, losse, labour, sorrow, strife,
     Paine, hunger, cold, that makes the hart to quake;
8 And euer fickle fortune rageth rife,
   All which, and thousands mo do make a loathsome life.

1 "Then do no further go, no further stray, 2 But here lie down, and to your rest betake,

betake > commit yourself, betake yourself

3 The ill to prevent, that life ensue may.

ill > evil ensue may > may pursue; may result from; hence, by hypallage: may cause to ensue

4 For what has life, that may it loved make,
5 And gives not rather cause it to forsake?
6 Fear, sickness, age, loss, labour, sorrow, strife,
7 Pain, hunger, cold that makes the heart to quake;
8 And ever fickle fortune rages rife,
9 All which, and thousands more, do make a loathsome life.

109.45

   Thou wretched man, of death hast greatest need,
2 If in true ballance thou wilt weigh thy state:
     For neuer knight, that dared warlike deede,
4 More lucklesse disauentures did amate:
     Witnesse the dongeon deepe, wherein of late
6 Thy life shut vp, for death so oft did call;
     And though good lucke prolonged hath thy date,
8 Yet death then, would the like mishaps forestall,
   Into the which hereafter thou maiest happen fall.

1 "You, wretched man, of death have greatest need, 2 If in true balance you will weigh your state: 3 For never knight, that dared warlike deed,

dared > dared to undertake [a]

4 More luckless disadventures did amate:

disadventures > misfortunes amate > cast down; also: act as a mate to (his disadventures being personified by Duessa: cf. 101.51:4)

5 Witness the dungeon deep, wherein of late 6 Your life, shut up, for death so oft did call; 7 And though good luck prolonged has your date,

date > span of life

8 Yet death then would the like mishaps forestall,

then > [when in the dungeon] the like > similar

9 Into which hereafter you may happen fall.

happen > [chance to]

109.46

   Why then doest thou, {o^} man of sin, desire
2 To draw thy dayes forth to their last degree?
     Is not the measure of thy sinfull hire
4 High heaped vp with huge iniquitie,
     Against the day of wrath, to burden thee?
6 Is not enough, that to this Ladie milde
     Thou falsed hast thy faith with periurie,
8 And sold thy selfe to serue Duessa vilde,
   With whom in all abuse thou hast thy selfe defilde?

1 "Why then do you, O man of sin, desire 2 To draw your days forth to their last degree? 3 Is not the measure of your sinful hire

hire > wages

4 High heaped up with huge iniquity, 5 Against the day of wrath, to burden you? 6 Is not enough, that to this lady mild

Is > [Is it]

7 You falsed have your faith with perjury,

falsed have > [have betrayed]

8 And sold yourself to serve Duessa vile, 9 With whom in all abuse you have yourself defiled?

109.47

   Is not he iust, that all this doth behold
2 From highest heauen, and beares an equall eye?
     Shall he thy sins vp in his knowledge fold,
4 And guiltie be of thine impietie?
     Is not his law, Let euery sinner die:
6 Die shall all flesh? what then must needs be donne,
     Is it not better to doe willinglie,
8 Then linger, till the glasse be all out ronne?
   Death is the end of woes: die soone, O faeries sonne.

1 "Is not He just, that all this does behold 2 From highest heaven, and bears an equal eye?

equal > impartial

3 Shall He your sins up in His knowledge fold, 4 And guilty be of your impiety? 5 Is not His law, Let every sinner die: 6 Die shall all flesh? What then must needs be done,

needs be done > [needs doing]

7 Is it not better to do willingly, 8 Than linger till the glass be all outrun?

glass > {Hourglass, filled with sand}

9 Death is the end of woes: die soon, O Faery's son!"

soon > without delay

109.48

   The knight was much enmoued with his speach,
2 That as a swords point through his hart did perse,
     And in his conscience made a secret breach,
4 Well knowing true all, that he did reherse,
     And to his fresh remembrance did reuerse
6 The vgly vew of his deformed crimes,
     That all his manly powres it did disperse,
8 As he were charmed with inchaunted rimes,
   That oftentimes he quakt, and fainted oftentimes.

1 The knight was much enmoved with his speech,

enmoved > moved

2 That as a sword's point through his heart did pierce, 3 And in his conscience made a secret breach,

conscience > innermost consciousness

4 Well knowing true all that he did rehearse;

true > [to be true] rehearse > give an account of

5 And to his fresh remembrance did reverse

reverse > recall

6 The ugly view of his deformed crimes,

deformed > perverted, morally repulsive

7 That all his manly powers it did disperse,

That > [So that] manly > {Pertaining to human beings; also: manly, in the modern sense}

8 As he were charmed with enchanted rhymes;

As > [As though]

9 That oftentimes he quaked, and fainted oftentimes.

That > [So that] fainted > lost heart oftentimes > many times, frequently

109.49

   In which amazement, when the Miscreant
2 Perceiued him to wauer weake and fraile,
     Whiles trembling horror did his conscience dant,
4 And hellish anguish did his soule assaile,
     To driue him to despaire, and quite to quaile,
6 He shew'd him painted in a table plaine,
     The damned ghosts, that doe in torments waile,
8 And thousand feends that doe them endlesse paine
   With fire and brimstone, which for euer shall remaine.

1 In which amazement, when the miscreant

amazement > stupefaction, confusion; amazement miscreant > unbeliever, infidel; wretch, villain

2 Perceived him to waver, weak and frail,

frail > frail; morally weak

3 While trembling horror did his conscience daunt, 4 And hellish anguish did his soul assail, 5 To drive him to despair, and quite to quail, 6 He showed him, painted in a table plain,

table > picture

7 The damned ghosts that do in torments wail, 8 And thousand fiends that do them endless pain

do > cause

9 With fire and brimstone, which for ever shall remain.

109.50

   The sight whereof so throughly him dismaid,
2 That nought but death before his eyes he saw,
     And euer burning wrath before him laid,
4 By righteous sentence of th'Almighties law:
     Then gan the villein him to ouercraw,
6 And brought vnto him swords, ropes, poison, fire,
     And all that might him to perdition draw;
8 And bad him choose, what death he would desire:
   For death was due to him, that had prouokt Gods ire.

1 The sight whereof so thoroughly him dismayed,

whereof > of which

2 That naught but death before his eyes he saw, 3 And ever-burning wrath before him laid, 4 By righteous sentence of the Almighty's law: 5 Then began the villain him to overcrow,

overcrow > crow over, exult over

6 And brought to him swords, ropes, poison, fire, 7 And all that might him to perdition draw; 8 And bade him choose what death he would desire: 9 For death was due to him that had provoked God's ire.

109.51

   But when as none of them he saw him take,
2 He to him raught a dagger sharpe and keene,
     And gaue it him in hand: his hand did quake,
4 And tremble like a leafe of Aspin greene,
     And troubled bloud though his pale face was seene
6 To come, and goe with tydings from the hart,
     As it a running messenger had beene.
8 At last resolu'd to worke his finall smart,
   He lifted vp his hand, that backe againe did start.

1 But, when none of them he saw him take, 2 He to him raught a dagger sharp and keen,

raught > held out, proffered

3 And gave it him in hand: his hand did quake 4 And tremble like a leaf of aspen green, 5 And troubled blood though his pale face was seen 6 To come and go with tidings from the heart, 7 As it a running messenger had been.

As > [As though]

8 At last, resolved to work his final smart,

smart > pain, acute pain; grief; final smart = death

9 He lifted up his hand, that back again did start.

109.52

   Which when as Vna +saw+, through euery vaine
2 The crudled cold ran to her well of life,
     As in a swowne: but soone +reliu'd+ againe,
4 Out of his hand she snatcht the cursed knife,
     And threw it to the ground, enraged rife,
6 And to him said, Fie, fie, faint harted knight,
     What meanest thou by this reprochfull strife?
8 Is this the battell, which thou vauntst to fight
   With that fire-mouthed Dragon, horrible and bright?

1 saw > heard 1590 3 reliu'd > relieu'd 1609

1 Which when Una saw, through every vein 2 The curdled cold ran to her well of life,

well of life > [heart]

3 As in a swoon: but, soon relived again,

soon > soon; immediately relived > revived, come to life

4 Out of his hand she snatched the cursed knife, 5 And threw it to the ground, enraged rife,

rife > manifoldly; abundantly, hence: greatly

6 And to him said, "Fie, fie, faint-hearted knight! 7 What mean you by this reproachful strife?

reproachful > disgraceful

8 Is this the battle which you vaunt to fight

vaunt > boast

9 With that fire-mouthed dragon, horrible and bright?

109.53

   Come, come away, fraile, +feeble+, fleshly wight,
2 Ne let vaine words bewitch thy manly hart,
     Ne diuelish thoughts dismay thy constant spright.
4 In heauenly mercies hast thou not a part?
     Why shouldst thou then despeire, that chosen art?
6 Where iustice growes, there grows eke greater grace,
     The which doth quench the brond of hellish smart,
8 And that accurst hand-writing doth +deface,+
   Arise, Sir knight arise, and leaue this cursed place.

1 feeble > seely 1596; silly 1609; cf. 107.6:5, 107.11:8 8 deface, > deface. 1590; deface: 1609

1 "Come, come away, frail, feeble, fleshly wight,

frail > morally weak wight > creature

2 Neither let vain words bewitch your manly heart,

vain > empty; foolish manly > {Pertaining to human beings; also: manly, in the modern sense}

3 Nor devilish thoughts dismay your constant spirit. 4 In heavenly mercies have you not a part? 5 Why should you then despair, that chosen are? 6 Where justice grows, there grows eke greater grace,

eke > in addition, also

7 Which does quench the brand of hellish smart,

smart > pain, grief

8 And that accursed handwriting does deface.

handwriting > (See Col. 2.14)

9 Arise, sir knight; arise, and leave this cursed place!"

109.54

   So vp he rose, and thence amounted streight.
2 Which when the carle beheld, and saw his guest
     Would safe depart, for all his subtill sleight,
4 He chose an halter from among the rest,
     And with it hung himselfe, vnbid vnblest.
6 But death he could not worke himselfe thereby;
     For thousand times he so himselfe had drest,
8 Yet nathelesse it could not doe him die,
   Till he should die his last, that is eternally.

1 So up he rose, and thence amounted straight.

amounted > mounted, mounted up straight > straightway

2 Which when the carl beheld, and saw his guest

carl > villain, churl

3 Would safe depart, for all his subtle sleight,

for > despite subtle > crafty, sly sleight > trickery; knowledge; nimbleness of mind

4 He chose a halter from among the rest, 5 And with it hanged himself, unbid, unblessed.

unbid > not prayed for (cf. 101.30:7, 110.3:8)

6 But death he could not work himself thereby; 7 For thousand times he so himself had dressed,

dressed > disposed; put in that position; arrayed [with the halter]

8 Yet natheless it could not do him die,

natheless > nevertheless do him die > kill him

9 Till he should die his last, that is, eternally.

CANTO X

   Her faithfull knight faire Vna brings
2 to house of Holinesse,
   Where he is taught repentance, and
4 the way to heauenly blesse.

1 Her faithful knight fair Una brings 2 to House of Holiness, 3 Where he is taught repentance, and 4 the way to heavenly bliss.

110.1

   WHat man is he, that boasts of fleshly might,
2 And vaine assurance of mortality,
     Which all so soone, as it doth come to fight,
4 Against spirituall foes, yeelds by and by,
     Or from the field most cowardly doth fly?
6 Ne let the man ascribe it to his skill,
     That thorough grace hath gained victory.
8 If any strength we haue, it is to ill,
   But all the good is Gods, both power and eke will.

1 What man is he, that boasts of fleshly might 2 And vain assurance of mortality, 3 Who, all so soon as it does come to fight

all so > just as

4 Against spiritual foes, yields by and by,

by and by > before long; straightway

5 Or from the field most cowardly does fly?

field > battle; field of battle fly > flee

6 Nor let the man ascribe it to his skill, 7 That through grace has gained victory. 8 If any strength we have, it is to ill,

ill > evil, wickedness; ill purpose, ill result

9 But all the good is God's, both power and eke will.

eke > also

110.2

   By that, which lately hapned, Vna saw,
2 That this her knight was feeble, and too faint;
     And all his sinews woxen weake and raw,
4 Through long +enprisonment+, and hard constraint,
     Which he endured in his late restraint,
6 That yet he was vnfit for bloudie fight:
     Therefore to cherish him with diets daint,
8 She cast to bring him, where he chearen might,
   Till he recouered had his late decayed plight.

4 enprisonment > imprisonment 1609

1 By that which lately happened, Una saw 2 That this her knight was feeble, and too faint;

faint > sluggish; spiritless, lacking courage

3 And all his sinews waxed weak and raw

waxed > became; hence: had become raw > raw-boned, wasted; or: unready

4 Through long imprisonment and hard constraint,

constraint > restriction of liberty; affliction; oppression

5 Which he endured in his late restraint,

late restraint > recent restriction of liberty

6 That yet he was unfit for bloody fight:

That > [So that]

7 Therefore, to cherish him with diets daint,

daint > dainty, choice, pleasing, delicious

8 She cast to bring him where he cheer might,

cast > decided cheer > take heart

9 Till he recovered had his late decayed plight.

recovered had > had recovered from decayed > wasted, ruined (of health)

110.3

   There was an auntient house not farre away,
2 Renowmd throughout the world for sacred lore,
     And pure vnspotted life: so well they say
4 It gouernd was, and guided euermore,
     Through wisedome of a matrone graue and hore;
6 Whose onely ioy was to relieue the needes
     Of wretched soules, and helpe the helpelesse pore:
8 All night she spent in bidding of her bedes,
   And all the day in doing good and godly deedes.

1 There was an ancient house not far away,

house > religious house; convent

2 Renowned throughout the world for sacred lore,

lore > teaching, doctrine

3 And pure unspotted life: so well, they say, 4 It governed was, and guided evermore, 5 Through wisdom of a matron grave and hoar;

hoar > {Venerable; grey-haired with age}

6 Whose only joy was to relieve the needs 7 Of wretched souls, and help the helpless poor: 8 All night she spent in bidding of her beads,

bidding of her beads > saying her rosary, saying her prayers

9 And all the day in doing good and godly deeds.

110.4

   Dame C{ae}lia men did her call, as thought
2 From heauen to come, or thither to arise,
     The mother of three daughters, well vpbrought
4 In goodly thewes, and godly exercise:
     The eldest two most sober, chast, and wise,
6 Fidelia and Speranza virgins were,
     Though spousd, yet wanting wedlocks solemnize;
8 But faire Charissa to a louely fere
   Was lincked, and by him had many pledges dere.

1 Dame Caelia men did her call, as thought

Caelia > "Heavenly" (from the Latin caelum, the heavens)

2 From heaven to come, or thither to arise, 3 The mother of three daughters, well upbrought

upbrought > brought up

4 In goodly thews, and godly exercise:

thews > habits, morals; qualities exercise > worship, rites

5 The eldest two, most sober, chaste, and wise, 6 Fidelia and Speranza, virgins were,

Fidelia > "Faith" (from the Latin fides, faith)
Speranza > "Hope" (from the Latin spes, hope)

7 Though spoused, yet wanting wedlock's solemnize;

spoused > betrothed solemnize > solemnization; solemnizing

8 But fair Charissa to a lovely fere

Charissa > "Charity" (from the old French charit{e/}, charity) lovely fere > loving husband

9 Was linked, and by him had many pledges dear.

pledges > [children]

110.5

   Arriued there, the dore they find fast lockt;
2 For it was warely watched night and day,
     For feare of many foes: but when they knockt,
4 The Porter opened vnto them streight way:
     He was an aged syre, all hory gray,
6 With lookes full lowly cast, and gate full slow,
     Wont on a staffe his feeble steps to stay,
8 Hight Humilt{a/}. They passe in stouping low;
   For streight and narrow was the way, which he did show.

1 Arrived there, the door they find fast locked,

fast > firmly

2 For it was warely watched night and day,

warely > vigilantly

3 For fear of many foes: but when they knocked 4 The porter opened to them straightway: 5 He was an aged sire, all hoary grey,

sire > {Aged or elderly man}

6 With looks full lowly cast, and gait full slow

full > very

7 (Wont on a staff his feeble steps to stay),

Wont > Accustomed stay > support

8 Hight Umilt{a\}. They pass in, stooping low:

Hight > Called, named
Umilt{a\} > "Humility" (Italian)

9 For straight and narrow was the way which he did show.

straight and narrow > (See Matt. 7.14; and cf. 104.2:8)

110.6

   Each goodly thing is hardest to begin,
2 But entred in a spacious court they see,
     Both plaine, and pleasant to be walked in,
4 Where them does meete a francklin faire and free,
     And entertaines with comely courteous glee,
6 His name was Zele, that him right well became,
     For in his speeches and behauiour hee
8 Did labour liuely to expresse the same,
   And gladly did them guide, till to the Hall they came.

1 Each goodly thing is hardest to begin,

goodly > fine

2 But, entered in, a spacious court they see, 3 Both plain, and pleasant to be walked in, 4 Where them does meet a franklin fair and free,

franklin > free man (as opposed to a villein or serf); land-owner (of free but not noble birth)

5 And entertains with comely courteous glee;

glee > joy

6 His name was Zeal, that him right well became,

right > very

7 For in his speeches and behaviour he 8 Did labour lively to express the same, 9 And gladly did them guide, till to the hall they came.

110.7

   There fairely them receiues a gentle Squire,
2 Of milde demeanure, and rare courtesie,
     Right cleanly clad in comely sad attire;
4 In word and deede that shew'd great modestie,
     And knew his good to all of each degree,
6 Hight Reuerence. He them with speeches meet
     Does faire entreat; no courting nicetie,
8 But simple true, and eke vnfained sweet,
   As might become a Squire so great persons to greet.

1 There fairly them receives a gentle squire

fairly > becomingly, courteously gentle squire > noble attendant

2 Of mild demeanour and rare courtesy,

mild > gracious, kindly

3 Right cleanly clad in comely sad attire;

Right > Very sad > sober-coloured

4 In word and deed that showed great modesty, 5 And knew his good to all of each degree,

knew > made known; hence: applied, demonstrated good > grace; virtue, goodness degree > social station

6 Hight Reverence. He them with speeches meet

Hight > Called, named meet > seemly, appropriate

7 Does fair entreat: no courting nicety,

fair entreat > becomingly treat courting nicety > courtly foolishness, artificiality

8 But simple true, and eke unfeigned sweet,

true > truth eke > moreover sweet > {Sweetness; that which is pleasant to the mind}

9 As might become a squire so great persons to greet.

so > such

110.8

   And afterwards them to his Dame he leades,
2 That aged Dame, the Ladie of the place:
     Who all this while was busie at her beades:
4 Which doen, she vp arose with seemely grace,
     And toward them full matronely did pace.
6 Where when that fairest Vna she beheld,
     Whom well she knew to spring from heauenly race,
8 Her hart with ioy vnwonted inly sweld,
   As feeling wondrous comfort in her weaker eld.

1 And afterwards them to his dame he leads, 2 That aged dame, the lady of the place: 3 Who all this while was busy at her beads:

beads > prayers

4 Which done, she up arose with seemly grace, 5 And toward them full matronly did pace.

full > very, exceedingly

6 Where, when fairest Una she beheld, 7 Whom well she knew to spring from heavenly race, 8 Her heart with joy unwonted inly swelled,

unwonted > unaccustomed inly > inwardly

9 As feeling wondrous comfort in her weaker eld.

comfort > {Renewal of strength; comfort} weaker > too-weak eld > age, old age

110.9

   And her embracing said, {o^} happie earth,
2 Whereon thy innocent feet doe euer tread,
     Most vertuous virgin borne of heauenly berth,
4 That to redeeme thy woefull parents head,
     From tyrans rage, and euer-dying dread,
6 Hast wandred through the world now long a day;
     Yet ceasest not thy wearie soles to lead,
8 What grace hath thee now hither brought this way?
   Or doen thy feeble feet vnweeting hither stray?

1 And, her embracing, said, "O happy earth, 2 Whereon your innocent feet do ever tread,

Whereon > On which

3 Most virtuous virgin, born of heavenly birth, 4 That, to redeem your woeful parents' head

head > position of command, hence: rule

5 From tyrant's rage and ever-dying dread,

ever-dying dread > [continual fear of death; fear of eternal death]

6 Have wandered through the world now long a day;

long a > [for many a long]

7 Yet cease not your weary soles to lead, 8 What grace has you now hither brought this way? 9 Or do your feeble feet unweeting hither stray?

unweeting > unwittingly

110.10

   Strange thing it is an errant knight to see
2 Here in this place, or any other wight,
     That hither turnes his steps. So few there bee,
4 That +chose+ the narrow path, or seeke the right:
   All keepe the broad high way, and take delight
6 With many rather for to go astray,
     And be partakers of their euill plight,
8 Then with a few to walke the rightest way;
   O foolish men, why haste ye to your owne decay?

4 chose > chuse 1609

1 "Strange thing it is an errant knight to see

errant > itinerant (a "knight errant" roamed in quest of adventure; the word-order here also implies the sense of erring, deviating, etc.)

2 Here in this place, or any other wight,

wight > person, man

3 That hither turns his steps. So few there be 4 That choose the narrow path, or seek the right: 5 All keep the broad highway, and take delight

broad highway > (Cf. 104.2:8, 207.21:3)

6 With many rather to go astray, 7 And be partakers of their evil plight, 8 Than with a few to walk the rightest way; 9 O foolish men, why hasten you to your own decay?"

decay > downfall, destruction

110.11

   Thy selfe to see, and tyred limbs to rest,
2 O matrone sage (quoth she) I hither came,
     And this good knight his way with me addrest,
4 Led with thy prayses and broad-blazed fame,
     That vp to heauen is blowne. The auncient Dame,
6 Him goodly greeted in her modest guise,
     And entertaynd them both, as best became,
8 With all the court'sies, that she could deuise,
   Ne wanted ought, to shew her bounteous or wise.

1 "Yourself to see, and tired limbs to rest, 2 O matron sage," quoth she, "I hither came, 3 And this good knight his way with me addressed,

addressed > directed; also: set to rights, made straight (for Caelia has just described him as "errant")

4 Led with your praises and broad-blazed fame, 5 That up to heaven is blown." The ancient dame 6 Him goodly greeted in her modest guise,

goodly > courteously guise > manner

7 And entertained them both, as best became,

best became > was most fitting

8 With all the courtesies that she could devise, 9 Nor wanted aught to show her bounteous or wise.

bounteous > {Full of goodness; beneficent}

110.12

   Thus as they gan of sundry things deuise,
2 Loe two most goodly virgins came in place,
     Ylinked arme in arme in louely wise,
4 With countenance demure, and modest grace,
     They numbred euen steps and equall pace:
6 Of which the eldest, that Fidelia hight,
     Like sunny beames threw from her Christall face,
8 That could haue dazd the rash beholders sight,
   And round about her head did shine like heauens light.

1 Thus as they gan of sundry things devise,

gan > did devise > talk

2 Lo two most goodly virgins came in place,

goodly > beautiful in place > there

3 Linked arm-in-arm in lovely wise,

lovely > [a] loving, lovely wise > manner

6 Of whom the elder, that Fidelia hight,

hight > was named

7 Like sunny beams threw from her crystal face,

Like > [Something resembling] crystal > {Clear, having the qualities of crystal, as purity, luminosity}

8 That could have dazed the rash beholder's sight,

dazed > dazzled

9 And round about her head did shine like heaven's light.

110.13

   She was araied all in lilly white,
2 And in her right hand bore a cup of gold,
     With wine and water fild vp to the hight,
4 In which a Serpent did himselfe enfold,
     That horrour made to all, that did behold;
6 But she no whit did chaunge her constant mood:
     And in her other hand she fast did hold
8 A booke, that was both signd and seald with blood,
   Wherein darke things were writ, hard to be vnderstood.

1 She was arrayed all in lily white, 2 And in her right hand bore a cup of gold, 3 With wine and water filled up to the height,

height > [brim]

4 In which a serpent did himself enfold, 5 That horror made to all that did behold; 6 But she no whit did change her constant mood: 7 And in her other hand she fast did hold

fast > firmly

8 A book, that was both signed and sealed with blood,

book > (The New Testament)

9 Wherein dark things were written, hard to be understood.

Wherein > In which dark things > (The Revelation)

110.14

   Her younger sister, that Speranza hight,
2 Was clad in blew, that her beseemed well;
     Not all so chearefull seemed she of sight,
4 As was her sister; whether dread did dwell,
     Or anguish in her hart, is hard to tell:
6 Vpon her arme a siluer anchor lay,
     Whereon she leaned euer, as befell:
8 And euer vp to heauen, as she did pray,
   Her stedfast eyes were bent, ne swarued other way.

1 Her younger sister, that Speranza hight,

hight > was named

2 Was clad in blue, that her beseemed well;

blue > (The traditional colour of hope) beseemed > suited

3 Not all so cheerful seemed she of sight,

of sight > in appearance, of aspect

4 As was her sister; whether dread did dwell, 5 Or anguish in her heart, is hard to tell: 6 Upon her arm a silver anchor lay,

anchor > (The symbol of hope: see Heb. 6.19)

7 Whereon she leaned ever, as befell:

befell > was fitting; it happened

8 And ever up to heaven, as she did pray, 9 Her steadfast eyes were bent, nor swerved other way.

bent > directed

110.15

   They seeing Vna, towards her gan wend,
2 Who them encounters with like courtesie;
     Many kind speeches they betwene them spend,
4 And greatly ioy each other +well+ to see:
     Then to the knight with shamefast modestie
6 They turne themselues, at Vnaes meeke request,
     And him salute with well beseeming glee;
8 Who faire them quites, as him beseemed best,
   And goodly +gan+ discourse of many a noble gest.

4 well > for 1590 9 gan > can 1609

1 They, seeing Una, towards her gan wend,

gan > did

2 Who them encounters with like courtesy;

encounters > addresses; goes forward to meet

3 Many kind speeches they between them spend, 4 And greatly joy each other well to see: 5 Then to the knight with shamefast modesty

shamefast > shy, bashful

6 They turn themselves, at Una's meek request, 7 And him salute with well beseeming glee;

beseeming > suitable glee > joy, delight

8 Who fair them requites, as him beseemed best,

him beseemed best > seemed most fitting to him

9 And goodly gan discourse of many a noble gest.

goodly > courteously; well gan > did gest > exploit, deed

110.16

   Then Vna thus; But she your sister deare,
2 The deare Charissa where is she become?
     Or wants she health, or busie is elsewhere?
4 Ah no, said they, but forth she may not come:
     For she of late is lightned of her wombe,
6 And hath encreast the world with one sonne more,
     That her to see should be but troublesome.
8 Indeede (quoth she) that should +her+ trouble sore,
   But thankt be God, and her encrease so euermore.

8 her > be 1590 etc.: FE

1 Then Una thus: "But she, your sister dear, 2 The dear Charissa, where is she become?

is she become > [has she gone, is she]

3 Or wants she health, or busy is elsewhere?"

Or > Either; hence, here: perhaps

4 "Ah no," said they, "but forth she may not come: 5 For she of late is lightened of her womb, 6 And has increased the world with one son more, 7 That her to see should be but troublesome."

That > [So that] be > [be for Charissa]

8 "Indeed," quoth she, "that should her trouble sore, 9 But thanked be God, and her increase so evermore!"

increase so > [may He make more fruitful in this way]

110.17

   Then said the aged C{oe}lia, Deare dame,
2 And you good Sir, I wote that of your toyle,
     And labours long, through which ye hither came,
4 Ye both forwearied be: therefore a whyle
     I read you rest, and to your bowres recoyle.
6 Then called she a Groome, that forth him led
     Into a goodly lodge, and gan despoile
8 Of puissant armes, and laid in easie bed;
   His name was meeke Obedience rightfully ared.

1 Then said the aged Caelia, "Dear dame, 2 And you, good sir, I wot that of your toil

wot > know

3 And labours long, through which you hither came, 4 You both forwearied be: therefore a while

forwearied > exhausted

5 I read you rest, and to your bowers recoil."

read you > advise you to bowers > rooms recoil > retire

6 Then called she a groom, that forth him led

groom > young man, manservant

7 Into a goodly lodge, and gan despoil

lodge > lodging, temporary abode gan > did despoil > strip

8 Of puissant arms, and laid in easy bed;

puissant > warlike arms > {Weapons, shield and armour}

9 His name was meek Obedience, rightfully aread.

aread > made known, declared

110.18

   Now when their wearie limbes with kindly rest,
2 And bodies were refresht with due repast,
     Faire Vna gan Fidelia faire request,
4 To haue her knight into her schoolehouse plaste,
     That of her heauenly learning he might taste,
6 And heare the wisedome of her words diuine.
     She graunted, and that knight so much agraste,
8 That she him taught celestiall discipline,
   And opened his dull eyes, that light mote in them shine.

1 Now when their weary limbs with kindly rest,

kindly > natural

2 And bodies were refreshed with due repast,

refreshed > (Takes both "bodies" and "limbes" as direct objects)

3 Fair Una gan Fidelia fair request

gan > did fair > courteously

4 To have her knight into her schoolhouse placed, 5 That of her heavenly learning he might taste,

That > [So that]

6 And hear the wisdom of her words divine. 7 She granted, and that knight so much aggraced

aggraced > favoured

8 That she him taught celestial discipline,

celestial > heavenly discipline > {Learning; mental and moral training}

9 And opened his dull eyes, that light might in them shine.

that > [so that]

110.19

   And that her sacred Booke, with bloud ywrit,
2 That none could read, except she did them teach,
     She vnto him disclosed euery whit,
4 And heauenly documents thereout did preach,
     That weaker wit of man could neuer reach,
6 Of God, of grace, of iustice, of free will,
     That wonder was to heare her goodly speach:
8 For she was able, with her words to kill,
   And raise againe to life the hart, that she did thrill.

1 And her sacred book, with blood written,

blood > [of Christ]

2 That none could read, except she did them teach,

except > unless

3 She to him disclosed every whit; 4 And heavenly documents thereout did preach,

documents > lessons; proofs thereout > out of that

5 That weaker wit of man could never reach,

weaker > [the] too-weak wit > mind, intelligence, mental faculty

6 Of God, of grace, of justice, of free will, 7 That wonder was to hear her goodly speech:

goodly > fine, beautiful

8 For she was able with her words to kill, 9 And raise again to life, the heart that she did thrill.

thrill > pierce

110.20

   And when she list poure out her larger spright,
2 She would commaund the hastie Sunne to stay,
     Or backward turne his course from heauens hight;
4 Sometimes great hostes of men she could dismay,
     Dry-shod to passe, she parts the flouds in tway;
6 And eke huge mountaines from their natiue seat
     She would commaund, themselues to beare away,
8 And throw in raging sea with roaring threat.
   Almightie God her gaue such powre, and puissance great.

5 This line was added in 1609.

1 And, when she list pour out her larger spirit,

list > chose to larger spirit > greater power, higher power

2 She would command the hasty sun to stay,

stay > wait (see Josh. 10.12)

3 Or backward turn its course from heaven's height;

backward > (See 2 Kings 20.10)

4 Sometimes great hosts of men she could dismay;

hosts > armies (see Judg. 7.21) dismay > defeat

5 Dry-shod to pass, she parts the floods in tway,

parts > (See Exod. 14.21 ff.) tway > two

6 And eke huge mountains from their native seat

eke > moreover mountains > (See Matt. 21.21) native seat > natural throne (i.e. foundations)

7 She would command themselves to bear away, 8 And throw in raging sea with roaring threat.

threat > pressure, thrust, hence: force (Latin trudere, to press, thrust, urge); also: threat, peril

9 Almighty God her gave such power, and puissance great.

puissance > strength

110.21

   The faithfull knight now grew in litle space,
2 By hearing her, and by her sisters lore,
     To such perfection of all heauenly grace,
4 That wretched world he gan for to abhore,
     And mortall life gan loath, as thing forlore,
6 Greeu'd with remembrance of his wicked wayes,
     And prickt with anguish of his sinnes so sore,
8 That he +desirde,+ to end his wretched dayes:
   So much the dart of sinfull guilt the soule dismayes.

8 desirde, > desirde 1609

1 The faithful knight now grew in little space, 2 By hearing her, and by her sister's lore,

lore > teaching

3 To such perfection of all heavenly grace 4 That wretched world he began to abhor, 5 And mortal life gan loathe as thing forlorn,

gan > did; began to forlorn > wretched, depraved; morally lost, doomed

6 Grieved with remembrance of his wicked ways, 7 And pricked with anguish of his sins so sore 8 That he desired to end his wretched days: 9 So much the dart of sinful guilt the soul dismays.

110.22

   But wise Speranza gaue him comfort sweet,
2 And taught him how to take assured hold
     Vpon her siluer anchor, as was meet;
4 Else had his sinnes so great, and manifold
     Made him forget all that Fidelia told.
6 In this distressed doubtfull agonie,
     When him his dearest Vna did behold,
8 Disdeining life, desiring leaue to die,
   She found her selfe assayld with great perplexitie.

1 But wise Speranza gave him comfort sweet,

comfort > {Renewal of strength; comfort}

2 And taught him how to take assured hold 3 Upon her silver anchor, as was meet;

meet > fitting

4 Else had his sins, so great and manifold,

Else had > [Otherwise would have]

5 Made him forget all that Fidelia told. 6 In this distressed doubtful agony,

doubtful > apprehensive, fearful agony > (In the Middle Ages, this word also applied specifically to Christ's mental anguish in Gethsemane)

7 When him his dearest Una did behold, 8 Disdaining life, desiring leave to die, 9 She found herself assailed with great perplexity,

perplexity > perplexity; distress

110.23

   And came to C{oe}lia to declare her smart,
2 Who well acquainted with that commune plight,
     Which sinfull horror workes in wounded hart,
4 Her wisely comforted all that she might,
     With goodly counsell and aduisement right;
6 And streightway sent with carefull diligence,
     To fetch a Leach, the which had great insight
8 In that disease of grieued conscience,
   And well could cure the same; His name was Patience.

1 And came to Caelia to declare her smart.

smart > pain; grief

2 Who, well acquainted with that common plight 3 Which sinful horror works in wounded heart, 4 Her wisely comforted all that she might,

might > could

5 With goodly counsel and advisement right;

advisement > advice

6 And straightway sent with careful diligence 7 To fetch a leech, who had great insight

leech > physician

8 Into that disease of grieved conscience, 9 And well could cure the same; his name was Patience.

110.24

   Who comming to that soule-diseased knight,
2 Could hardly him intreat, to tell his griefe:
     Which knowne, and all that noyd his heauie spright,
4 Well searcht, eftsoones he gan apply +reliefe+
     Of salues and med'cines, which had passing priefe,
6 And thereto added words of wondrous might:
     By which to ease he him recured briefe,
8 And much asswag'd the passion of his plight,
   That he his paine endur'd, as seeming now more light.

4 reliefe > relief 1590; reliefe. 1596

1 Who, coming to that soul-diseased knight, 2 Could hardly him entreat to tell his grief:

hardly > with difficulty entreat > persuade

3 Which known, and all that noyed his heavy spirit

noyed > troubled, harassed

4 Well searched, eftsoons he gan apply relief

searched > probed, examined eftsoons > forthwith gan > did

5 Of salves and medicines, which had passing proof,

passing > surpassing, excellent proof > proven worth; hence: efficacy

6 And thereto added words of wondrous might:

thereto > moreover, also

7 By which to ease he him recured brief,

ease > (Sb.) recured > cured, restored brief > rapidly; briefly, temporarily

8 And much assuaged the passion of his plight,

passion > suffering

9 That he his pain endured, as seeming now more light.

That > [So that]

110.25

   But yet the cause and root of all his ill,
2 Inward corruption, and infected sin,
     Not purg'd nor heald, behind remained still,
4 And festring sore did rankle yet within,
     Close creeping twixt the marrow and the skin.
6 Which to extirpe, he laid him priuily
     Downe in a darkesome lowly place farre in,
8 Whereas he meant his corrosiues to apply,
   And with +streight+ diet tame his stubborne malady.

9 streight > streict 1609

1 But yet the cause and root of all his ill

ill > trouble, disorder

2 (Inward corruption and infected sin) 3 Not purged nor healed, behind remained still, 4 And festering sore did rankle yet within, 5 Close creeping 'twixt the marrow and the skin.

marrow > {The vital part or "core" of the body}

6 Which to extirp, he laid him privily

extirp > extirpate privily > secretly; hence: away from view

7 Down in a darksome lowly place far in, 8 Where he meant his corrosives to apply,

corrosives > remedies, caustic drugs

9 And with strait diet tame his stubborn malady.

strait > strict diet > {Way of living or thinking} stubborn > unyielding, intractable (cf. 108.25:4)

110.26

   In ashes and sackcloth he did array
2 His daintie corse, proud humors to abate,
     And dieted with fasting euery day,
4 The swelling of his wounds to mitigate,
     And made him pray both earely and eke late:
6 And euer as superfluous flesh did rot
     Amendment readie still at hand did wayt,
8 To pluck it out with pincers firie whot,
   That soone in him was left no one corrupted iot.

1 In ashes and sackcloth he did array 2 His dainty corse, proud humours to abate,

dainty corse > handsome body proud > proud, arrogant; lascivious; swollen, superfluous humours > {Habits of mind; mental qualities, inclinations; also: the four cardinal "humours" of the body whose proportions, in medieval physiology, were believed to determine one's mental and physical qualities} abate > destroy; abate

3 And dieted with fasting every day, 4 The swelling of his wounds to mitigate, 5 And made him pray both early and eke late:

eke > also

6 And ever, as superfluous flesh did rot, 7 Amendment ready still at hand did wait, 8 To pluck it out with pincers fiery hot, 9 That soon in him was left not one corrupted jot.

That > [So that]

110.27

   And bitter Penance with an yron whip,
2 Was wont him once to disple euery day:
     And sharp Remorse his hart did pricke and nip,
4 That drops of bloud thence like a well did play;
     And sad Repentance vsed to embay,
6 +His bodie in salt water smarting sore,+
     The filthy blots of sinne to wash away.
8 So in short space they did to health restore
   The man that would not liue, but earst lay at deathes dore.

6 His bodie in salt water smarting sore, > His blamefull body in salt water sore, 1590

1 And bitter Penance, with an iron whip, 2 Was wont him once to disple every day:

Was wont > Was accustomed; used disple > discipline (esp. as a religious practice)

3 And sharp Remorse his heart did prick and nip, 4 That drops of blood thence like a well did play;

That > [So that]

5 And sad Repentance used to embay

sad > solemn; grievous; sad; heavy embay > bathe, drench

6 His body in salt water smarting sore, 7 The filthy blots of sin to wash away. 8 So in short space they did to health restore 9 The man that would not live, but erst lay at death's door.

erst > lately

110.28

   In which his torment often was so great,
2 That like a Lyon he would cry and rore,
     And rend his flesh, and his owne synewes eat.
4 His owne deare Vna hearing euermore
     His ruefull shriekes and gronings, often tore
6 Her guiltlesse garments, and her golden heare,
     For pitty of his paine and anguish sore;
8 Yet all with patience wisely she did beare;
   For well she wist, his crime could else be neuer cleare.

1 In which his torment often was so great 2 That like a lion he would cry and roar, 3 And rend his flesh, and his own sinews eat.

rend > tear

4 His own dear Una, hearing evermore

evermore > constantly

5 His rueful shrieks and groanings, often tore 6 Her guiltless garments and her golden hair, 7 For pity of his pain and anguish sore; 8 Yet all with patience wisely she did bear; 9 For well she wist his crime could else be never clear.

wist > knew crime > {Wrongdoing, sins taken collectively} else > otherwise clear > clean; cleared, cleansed, purified

110.29

   Whom thus recouer'd by wise Patience,
2 And trew Repentance they to Vna brought:
     Who ioyous of his cured conscience,
4 Him dearely kist, and fairely eke besought
     Himselfe to chearish, and consuming thought
6 To put away out of his carefull brest.
     By this Charissa, late in child-bed brought,
8 Was woxen strong, and left her fruitfull nest;
   To her faire Vna brought this vnacquainted guest.

1 Whom, thus recovered by wise Patience 2 And true Repentance, they to Una brought; 3 Who, joyous of his cured conscience, 4 Him dearly kissed, and fairly eke besought

fairly > gently; courteously (when applied to "besought"); becomingly, equitably (when applied to "chearish") eke > also

5 Himself to cherish, and consuming thought

cherish > cheer (see Ephes. 5.29); hold dear, cherish consuming > destructive, diseased

6 To put away out of his careful breast.

careful > {Sorrowful, full of cares}

7 By this Charissa, late in childbed brought,

By this > By this time late > lately

8 Was waxed strong, and left her fruitful nest;

Was waxed > Had grown

9 To her fair Una brought this unacquainted guest.

unacquainted > unknown, un-introduced; or: unusual, strange

110.30

   She was a woman in her freshest age,
2 Of wondrous beauty, and of bountie rare,
     With goodly grace and comely personage,
4 That was on earth not easie to compare;
     Full of great loue, but Cupids wanton snare
6 As hell she hated, chast in worke and will;
     Her necke and breasts were euer open bare,
8 That ay thereof her babes might sucke their fill;
   The rest was all in yellow robes arayed still.

1 She was a woman in her freshest age, 2 Of wondrous beauty, and of bounty rare,

bounty > virtue, goodness; kindness, generosity

3 With goodly grace and comely personage,

goodly > attractive, beautiful personage > {The body and appearance as distinct from clothing}

4 That was on earth not easy to compeer;

compeer > equal, rival

5 Full of great love, but Cupid's wanton snare

Cupid > (God of love, the son of Jupiter and Venus)

6 As hell she hated, chaste in work and will; 7 Her neck and breasts were ever open bare, 8 That ay thereof her babes might suck their fill;

ay > ever, always

9 The rest was all in yellow robes arrayed still.

yellow > (The colour of fertility: see Met. 10.1) still > ever, always

110.31

   A multitude of babes about her hong,
2 Playing their sports, that ioyd her to behold,
     Whom still she fed, whiles they were weake and young,
4 But thrust them forth still, as they wexed old:
     And on her head she wore a tyre of gold,
6 Adornd with gemmes and owches wondrous +faire,+
     Whose passing price vneath was to be told;
8 And by her side there sate a gentle paire
   Of turtle doues, she sitting in an yuorie chaire.

6 faire, > faire. 1596

1 A multitude of babes about her hung, 2 Playing their sports, that joyed her to behold,

sports > games joyed her > made her delighted, gave her joy; also rejoiced her

3 Whom still she fed, while they were weak and young,

still > continually, habitually, invariably

4 But thrust them forth still, as they waxed old:

still > always, invariably waxed > grew

5 And on her head she wore a tire of gold,

tire > head-dress

6 Adorned with gems and ouches wondrous fair,

ouches > {Jewels; golden sockets to hold these}

7 Whose passing price uneath was to be told;

passing > surpassing uneath > scarcely

8 And by her side there sat a gentle pair 9 Of turtle doves, she sitting in an ivory chair.

110.32

   The knight and Vna entring, faire her greet,
2 And bid her ioy of that her happie brood;
     Who them requites with court'sies seeming meet,
4 And entertaines with friendly chearefull mood.
     Then Vna her besought, to be so good,
6 As in her vertuous rules to schoole her knight,
     Now after all his torment well withstood,
8 In that sad house of Penaunce, where his spright
   Had past the paines of hell, and long enduring night.

1 The knight and Una entering, fair her greet,

fair > courteously

2 And bid her joy of that her happy brood; 3 Who them requites with courtesies seeming meet,

meet > appropriate

4 And entertains with friendly cheerful mood.

entertains > receives; hence: greets

5 Then Una her besought to be so good 6 As in her virtuous rules to school her knight, 7 Now after all his torment well withstood 8 In that sad house of Penance, where his spirit

sad house of Penance > (Cf. 105.53:9; "sad" here = "grave"; also: "steadfast")

9 Had passed the pains of hell, and long-enduring night.

passed > endured

110.33

   She was right ioyous of her iust request,
2 And taking by the hand that Faeries sonne,
     Gan him instruct in euery good behest,
4 Of loue, and righteousnesse, and well to donne,
     And wrath, and hatred warely to shonne,
6 That drew on men Gods hatred, and his wrath,
     And many soules in dolours had fordonne:
8 In which when him she well instructed hath,
   From thence to heauen she teacheth him the ready path.

1 She was right joyous of her just request,

right joyous of > very delighted by just > righteous; proper

2 And, taking by the hand that Faery's son, 3 Gan him instruct in every good behest

Gan > Did; began to behest > injunction (esp. of a religious nature)

4 Of love and righteousness, and well to do,

well > good

5 And wrath and hatred warely to shun,

warely > vigilantly, cautiously

6 That drew on men God's hatred, and His wrath, 7 And many souls in dolours had fordone:

dolours > sorrows, griefs fordone > utterly ruined

8 In which when him she well instructed has, 9 From thence to heaven she teaches him the ready path.

teaches > shows ready > {Straight, direct; lying immediately before him}

110.34

   Wherein his weaker wandring steps to guide,
2 An auncient matrone she to her does call,
     Whose sober lookes her wisedome well descride:
4 Her name was Mercie, well knowne ouer all,
     To be both gratious, and eke liberall:
6 To whom the carefull charge of him she gaue,
     To lead aright, that he should neuer fall
8 In all his wayes through this wide +worldes+ waue,
   That Mercy in the end his righteous soule might saue.

8 worldes > worlds 1609

1 Wherein his weaker wandering steps to guide,

Wherein > In which; in respect of which weaker > too-weak

2 An ancient matron she to her does call, 3 Whose sober looks her wisdom well descried:

descried > announced, bespoke

4 Her name was Mercy, well known over all

over all > everywhere

5 To be both gracious and eke liberal:

eke > also

6 To whom the careful charge of him she gave, 7 To lead aright, that he should never fall

that > [so that]

8 In all his ways through this wide world's wave, 9 That Mercy in the end his righteous soul might save.

That > [And that]

110.35

   The godly Matrone by the hand him beares
2 Forth from her presence, by a narrow way,
     Scattred with bushy thornes, and ragged breares,
4 Which still before him she remou'd away,
     That nothing might his ready passage stay:
6 And euer when his feet encombred were,
     Or gan to shrinke, or from the right to stray,
8 She held him fast, and firmely did vpbeare,
   As carefull Nourse her child from falling oft does reare.

1 The godly matron by the hand him bears 2 Forth from her presence, by a narrow way

her > [Charissa's]

3 Scattered with bushy thorns and ragged briers, 4 Which still before him she removed away,

still > continually

5 That nothing might his ready passage stay:

That > [So that] ready > straight, direct stay > hinder

6 And ever, when his feet encumbered were, 7 Or began to shrink, or from the right to stray, 8 She held him fast, and firmly did upbear,

fast > firmly did > [did him]

9 As careful nurse her child from falling often does rear.

110.36

   Eftsoones vnto an holy Hospitall,
2 That was fore by the way, she did him bring,
     In which seuen Bead-men that had vowed all
4 Their life to seruice of high heauens king
     Did spend their dayes in doing godly thing:
6 +There+ gates to all were open euermore,
     That by the wearie way were traueiling,
8 And one sate wayting euer them before,
   To call +in commers-by+, that needy were and pore.

6 There > Their 1609; cf. 202.30:1, 206.27:9, 211.21:8, 304.41:7, 312.28:1 9 in commers-by > in-commers by 1590, 1596

1 Eftsoons to a holy hospital,

Eftsoons > Forthwith, soon hospital > {Charitable institution for housing and aiding the needy; place of lodging}

2 That was forby the way, she did him bring;

forby > hard by, near

3 In which seven beadsmen (that had vowed all

beadsmen > holy men; "men of prayer"

4 Their life to service of high heaven's King) 5 Did spend their days in doing godly things: 6 Their gates to all were open evermore

Their > Their; or, conceivably: there (see Textual Appendix; though even among the educated the two spellings were occasionally used indifferently) evermore > constantly

7 That by the weary way were travelling,

travelling > (Here, especially, includes the sense of "travailing", = "toiling")

8 And one sat waiting ever them before,

waiting > keeping watch

9 To call in comers-by that needy were and poor.

comers-by > passers-by

110.37

   The first of them that eldest was, and best,
2 Of all the house had charge and gouernement,
     As Guardian and Steward of the rest:
4 His office was to giue entertainement
     And lodging, vnto all that came, and went:
6 Not vnto such, as could him feast againe,
     And double quite, for that he on them spent,
8 But such, as want of harbour did constraine:
   Those for Gods sake his dewty was to entertaine.

1 The first of them, that eldest was and best,

best > most kind

2 Of all the house had charge and government, 3 As guardian and steward of the rest: 4 His office was to give entertainment

office > duty, function entertainment > hospitality

5 And lodging to all that came and went: 6 Not to such as could him feast again,

again > in return

7 And doubly requite for that he on them spent,

that > [that which]

8 But such as want of harbour did constrain:

harbour > shelter constrain > distress

9 Those for God's sake his duty was to entertain.

110.38

   The second was +as+ Almner of the place,
2 His office was, the hungry for to feed,
     And thristy giue to drinke, a worke of grace:
4 He feard not once him selfe to be in need,
     Ne car'd to hoord for those, whom he did breede:
6 The grace of God he layd vp still in store,
     Which as a stocke he left vnto his seede;
8 He had enough, what need him care for more?
   And had he lesse, yet some he would giue to the pore.

1 as > an 1609

1 The second was as almoner of the place:

was as almoner > [occupied the position of almoner, = official distributor of alms]

2 His office was the hungry to feed,

office > duty, function

3 And thirsty give to drink, a work of grace. 4 He feared not once himself to be in need, 5 Nor cared to hoard for those whom he did breed:

breed > father [that is, his children]

6 The grace of God he laid up still in store,

still > continuously

7 Which as a stock he left to his seed;

stock > estate, endowment seed > children, heirs

8 He had enough, what need him care for more? 9 And had he less, yet some he would give to the poor.

110.39

   The third had of their wardrobe custodie,
2 In which were not rich tyres, nor garments gay,
     The plumes of pride, and wings of vanitie,
4 But +clothes+ meet to keepe keene could away,
     And naked nature seemely to aray;
6 With which bare wretched wights he dayly clad,
     The images of God in earthly clay;
8 And if that no spare +cloths+ to giue he had,
   His owne coate he would cut, and it distribute glad.

4 clothes > clothez 1609, emphasizing the disyllable; cf. 200.5:4, 204.28:8, 206.39:5 8 cloths > clothes 1590, 1609

1 The third had of their wardrobe custody, 2 In which were not rich tires, nor garments gay,

tires > articles of clothing (attire); accoutrements

3 The plumes of pride, and wings of vanity,

wings > [plumes and birds' wings as used to adorn clothing]

4 But clothes meet to keep keen cold away,

meet > suitable keen > sharp

5 And naked nature seemly to array;

seemly > suitably, properly

6 With which bare wretched wights he daily clad,

wights > people

7 The images of God in earthly clay; 8 And, if no spare clothes to give he had, 9 His own coat he would cut, and it distribute gladly.

110.40

   The fourth appointed by his office was,
2 Poore prisoners to relieue with gratious ayd,
     And captiues to redeeme with price of bras,
4 From Turkes and Sarazins, which them had stayd;
     And though they faultie were, yet well he wayd,
6 That God to vs forgiueth euery howre
     Much more then that, why they in bands were layd,
8 And he that harrowd hell with heauie stowre,
   The faultie soules from thence brought to his heauenly bowre.

1 The fourth appointed, by his office was

appointed > fixed by appointment; who had been appointed office > duty, function

2 Poor prisoners to relieve with gracious aid, 3 And captives to redeem with price of brass,

price > payment brass > money

4 From Turks and Saracens, who them had stayed;

Saracens > {Arabs or Moslems of the time of the Crusades; pagans} stayed > detained, taken hostage

5 And though they faulty were, yet well he weighed

they > (The hostages as well as their captors) faulty > guilty; at fault

6 That God to us forgives every hour

hour > hour; moment

7 Much more than that why they in bonds were laid,

why > [for which]

8 And he, that harrowed hell with heavy stour,

he > (Christ: see The Apocryphal New Testament 94-146) harrowed > harried heavy > grievous; intense stour > turmoil, conflict

9 The faulty souls from thence brought to his heavenly bower.

bower > dwelling

110.41

   The fift had charge sicke persons to attend,
2 And comfort those, in point of death which lay;
     For them most needeth comfort in the end,
4 When sin, and hell, and death do most dismay
     The feeble soule departing hence away.
6 All is but lost, that liuing we bestow,
     If not well ended at our dying day.
8 O man haue mind of that last bitter throw;
   For as the tree does fall, so lyes it euer low.

1 The fifth had charge sick persons to attend, 2 And comfort those in point of death who lay;

in > [at the]

3 For them most need comfort in the end, 4 When sin, and hell, and death, do most dismay 5 The feeble soul departing hence away. 6 All is but lost, that living we bestow,

bestow > stow away, store up

7 If not well ended at our dying day. 8 O Man, have mind of that last bitter throe;

throe > (Equally, "throw", = the fall of a tree when cut down)

9 For as the tree does fall, so lies it ever low.

110.42

   The sixt had charge of them now being dead,
2 In seemely sort their corses to engraue,
     And deck with dainty flowres their bridall bed,
4 That to their heauenly spouse both sweet and braue
     They might appeare, when he their soules shall saue.
6 The wondrous workemanship of Gods owne mould,
     Whose face he made, all beasts to feare, and gaue
8 All in his hand, euen dead we honour should.
   Ah dearest God me graunt, I dead be not defould.

1 The sixth had charge of them now being dead, 2 In seemly sort their corses to ingrave,

sort > manner corses > bodies ingrave > inter

3 And deck with dainty flowers their bridal bed, 4 That to their heavenly spouse both sweet and brave

That > [So that] heavenly spouse > [Christ] brave > finely dressed, splendid

5 They might appear, when he their souls shall save. 6 The wondrous workmanship of God's own mould,

mould > image; shape, form

7 Whose face He made all beasts to fear, and gave 8 All in His hand, even dead we honour should.

dead > [when dead]

9 Ah, dearest God, me grant, I dead be not defouled!

defouled > defiled, befouled; defaced

110.43

   The seuenth now after death and buriall done,
2 Had charge the tender Orphans of the dead
     And widowes ayd, least they should be vndone:
4 In face of iudgement he their right would plead,
     Ne ought the powre of mighty men did dread
6 In their defence, nor would for gold or fee
     Be wonne their rightfull causes downe to tread:
8 And when they stood in most necessitee,
   He did supply their want, and gaue them euer free.

1 The seventh, now after death and burial done, 2 Had charge the tender orphans of the dead 3 And widows aid, lest they should be undone:

aid > [to aid] undone > ruined, made destitute

4 In face of judgement he their right would plead,

judgement > [legal judgement]

5 Neither aught the power of mighty men did dread

aught > at all

6 In their defence, nor would for gold or fee

fee > bribe; fee

7 Be won their rightful causes down to tread:

won > persuaded

8 And, when they stood in most necessity, 9 He did supply their want, and gave them ever free.

want > need

110.44

   There when the Elfin knight arriued was,
2 The first and chiefest of the seuen, whose care
     Was guests to welcome, towardes him did pas:
4 Where seeing Mercie, that his steps vp bare,
     And alwayes led, to her with reuerence rare
6 He humbly louted in meeke lowlinesse,
     And seemely welcome for her did prepare:
8 For of their order she was Patronesse,
   Albe Charissa were their chiefest founderesse.

1 There when the Elfin knight arrived was, 2 The first and chiefest of the seven, whose care 3 Was guests to welcome, towards him did pas:

pas > pace; pass

4 Where, seeing Mercy, who his steps upbore,

upbore > did support

5 And always led, to her with reverence rare

rare > excellent, fine

6 He humbly louted in meek lowliness,

louted > bowed, made obeisance

7 And seemly welcome for her did prepare: 8 For of their order she was patroness, 9 Albe Charissa was their chiefest foundress.

Albe > Although foundress > {Female founder}

110.45

   There she awhile him stayes, him selfe to rest,
2 That to the rest more able he might bee:
     During which time, in euery good behest
4 And godly worke of Almes and charitee
     She him instructed with great industree;
6 Shortly therein so perfect he became,
     That from the first vnto the last degree,
8 His mortall life he learned had to frame
   In holy righteousnesse, without rebuke or blame.

1 There she awhile him stays, himself to rest,

stays > detains

2 That to the rest more able he might be:

That to > [So that to accomplish]

3 During which time, in every good behest

behest > injunction (esp. of a religious nature)

4 And godly work of alms and charity, 5 She him instructed with great industry. 6 Shortly therein so perfect he became 7 That, from the first to the last degree, 8 His mortal life he learned had to frame

frame > give shape to, direct

9 In holy righteousness, without rebuke or blame.

without > beyond the reach of; without blame > accusation, charge; blame

110.46

   Thence forward by that painfull way they pas,
2 Forth to an hill, that was both steepe and hy;
     On top whereof a sacred chappell was,
4 And eke a litle Hermitage thereby,
     Wherein an aged holy man did lye,
6 That day and night said his deuotion,
     Ne other worldly busines did apply;
8 His name was heauenly Contemplation;
   Of God and goodnesse was his meditation.

1 Thence forward by that painful way they pas,

pas > pass; pace

2 Forth to a hill that was both steep and high; 3 On top whereof a sacred chapel was,

whereof > of which

4 And eke a little hermitage thereby,

eke > in addition (cf. 101.34)

5 Wherein an aged holy man did lie, 6 Who day and night said his devotion, 7 Nor other worldly business did apply;

apply > pursue

8 His name was heavenly Contemplation; 9 Of God and goodness was his meditation.

110.47

   Great grace that old man to him giuen had;
2 For God he often saw from heauens hight,
     All were his earthly eyen both blunt and bad,
4 And through great age had lost their kindly sight,
     Yet wondrous quick and persant was his spright,
6 As Eagles eye, that can behold the Sunne:
     That hill they scale with all their powre and might,
8 That his frayle thighes nigh wearie and fordonne
   Gan faile, but by her helpe the top at last he wonne.

1 Great grace that old man to him given had; 2 For God he often saw from heaven's height, 3 All were his earthly eyes both blunt and bad,

All > Even; hence: even though, although

4 And through great age had lost their kindly sight,

kindly > native, natural

5 Yet wondrous quick and perceant was his spirit,

perceant > piercing, percipient

6 As eagle's eye, that can behold the sun:

behold the sun > (Cf. Parliament of Fowls 330-1)

7 That hill they scale with all their power and might, 8 That his frail thighs, nigh weary and fordone,

That > [So that] fordone > ruined; exhausted

9 Gan fail; but by her help the top at last he won.

Gan > Did; began to won > reached, attained

110.48

   There they do finde that godly aged Sire,
2 With snowy lockes adowne his shoulders shed,
     As hoarie frost with spangles doth attire
4 The mossy braunches of an Oke halfe ded.
     Each bone might through his body well be red,
6 And euery sinew seene through his long fast:
     For nought he car'd his carcas long vnfed;
8 His mind was full of spirituall repast,
   And pyn'd his flesh, to keepe his body low and chast.

1 There they do find that godly aged sire,

sire > father; elderly man

2 With snowy locks adown his shoulders shed,

adown > down

3 As hoary frost with spangles does attire 4 The mossy branches of an oak half dead. 5 Each bone might through his body well be read,

read > seen

6 And every sinew seen, through his long fast:

through > as a result of

7 For naught he cared his carcase long unfed;

naught > not at all, nothing at all cared > [cared about; cared for]

8 His mind was full of spiritual repast, 9 And pined his flesh to keep his body low and chaste.

pined > starved low > weak, lacking vigour

110.49

   Who when these two approching he aspide,
2 At their first presence grew agrieued sore,
     That forst him lay his heauenly thoughts aside;
4 And had he not that Dame respected more,
     Whom highly he did reuerence and adore,
6 He would not once haue moued for the knight.
     They him saluted standing far afore;
8 Who well them greeting, humbly did requight,
   And asked, to what end they clomb that tedious height.

1 Who, when these two approaching he espied, 2 At their first presence grew aggrieved sore, 3 That forced him lay his heavenly thoughts aside;

That > [In that their presence] lay > [to lay]

4 And had he not that dame respected more 5 (Whom highly he did reverence and adore), 6 He would not once have moved for the knight. 7 They him saluted, standing far afore;

afore > in front [of him]

8 Who, well them greeting, humbly did requite,

requite > [them requite, return the compliment]

9 And asked to what end they climbed that tedious height.

climbed > [had climbed]

110.50

   What end (quoth +she+) should cause vs take such paine,
2 But that same end, which euery liuing wight
     Should make his marke, high heauen to attaine?
4 Is not from hence the way, that leadeth right
     To that most glorious house, that glistreth bright
6 With burning starres, and euerliuing fire,
     Whereof the keyes are to thy hand behight
8 By wise Fidelia? she doth thee require,
   To shew it to this knight, according his desire.

1 she > he 1596

1 "What end," quoth she, "should cause us take such pain,

take > [to take]

2 But that same end, which every living wight

wight > mortal, person

3 Should make his mark, high heaven to attain? 4 Is not from hence the way, that leads right 5 To that most glorious house, that glisters bright 6 With burning stars and ever-living fire, 7 Whereof the keys are to your hand behight

Whereof > Of which behight > delivered, granted (catachr.); promised

8 By wise Fidelia? She does you require

require > request

9 To show it to this knight, according his desire."

according > agreeing to grant; hence: granting

110.51

   Thrise happy man, said then the father graue,
2 Whose staggering steps thy steady hand doth lead,
     And shewes the way, his sinfull soule to saue.
4 Who better can the way to heauen aread,
     Then thou thy selfe, that was both borne and bred
6 In heauenly throne, where thousand Angels shine?
     Thou doest the prayers of the righteous sead
8 Present before the maiestie diuine,
   And his auenging wrath to clemencie incline.

1 "Thrice happy man," said then the father grave,

happy > blessed, beatified; fortunate; happy grave > important, influential; grave; gravely

2 "Whose staggering steps your steady hand does lead, 3 And shows the way his sinful soul to save! 4 Who better can the way to heaven aread

aread > make known; declare

5 Than you yourself, that was both born and bred 6 In heavenly throne, where thousand angels shine? 7 You do the prayers of the righteous seed

righteous seed > sinless children [the redeemed]

8 Present before the majesty divine, 9 And His avenging wrath to clemency incline.

110.52

   Yet +since+ thou bidst, thy pleasure shalbe donne.
2 Then come thou man of earth, and see the way,
     That neuer yet was seene of Faeries sonne,
4 That neuer leads the traueiler astray,
     But after labours long, and sad delay,
6 +Brings+ +them+ to ioyous rest and endlesse blis.
     But first thou must a season fast and pray,
8 Till from her bands the spright assoiled is,
   And haue her strength recur'd from fraile infirmitis.

1 since > sith 1609 6 Brings > Bring 1590, 1596 6 them > him conj. Morris, who also sugg. the alternative of "traueilers" in line 4

1 "Yet, since you bid, your pleasure shall be done. 2 Then come, you man of earth, and see the way

man of earth > (See 110.66)

3 That never yet was seen by Faery's son; 4 That never leads the traveller astray, 5 But after labours long, and sad delay,

sad > grievous; sorrowful

6 Brings them to joyous rest and endless bliss. 7 But first you must a season fast and pray,

a season > for a while

8 Till from its bonds the spirit assoiled is,

assoiled > absolved; set free

9 And has its strength recured from frail infirmities."

recured from > recovered from; cured of frail > weak, morally weak

110.53

   That done, he leads him to the highest Mount;
2 Such one, as that same mighty man of God,
     That bloud-red billowes like a walled front
4 On either side disparted with his rod,
     Till that his army dry-foot through them yod,
6 Dwelt fortie dayes vpon; where writ in stone
     With bloudy letters by the hand of God,
8 The bitter doome of death and balefull mone
   He did receiue, whiles flashing fire about him shone.

1 That done, he leads him to the highest mount; 2 Such one as that same mighty man of God

one > [a one] man of God > (Moses, on Mount Sinai: see Deut. 33.1, Exod. 24.18)

3 (That blood-red billows, like a walled front, 4 On either side disparted with his rod,

disparted > clove, parted asunder (see Exod. 14.21-2)

5 Till his army dry-foot through them yode)

yode > went

6 Dwelt forty days upon; where, written in stone 7 With bloody letters by the hand of God, 8 The bitter doom of death and baleful moan

doom > judgement, sentence baleful > deadly, miserable moan > {State of grief or lamentation}

9 He did receive, while flashing fire about him shone.

fire > (See Deut. 4.11)

110.54

   Or like that sacred hill, whose head full hie,
2 Adornd with fruitfull Oliues all arownd,
     Is, as it were for endlesse memory
4 Of that deare Lord, who oft thereon was fownd,
     For euer with a flowring girlond crownd:
6 Or like that pleasaunt Mount, that is for ay
     Through famous Poets verse each where renownd,
8 On which the thrise three learned Ladies play
   Their heauenly notes, and make full many a louely lay.

1 Or like that sacred hill, whose head full high

sacred hill > (The Mount of Olives; see e.g. Luke 22.39 ff.) full > exceedingly, very

2 (Adorned with fruitful olives all around)

olives > [olive-trees]

3 Is, as it were, for endless memory

memory > memorial

4 Of that dear Lord, who often thereon was found, 5 For ever with a flowering garland crowned: 6 Or like that pleasant mount, that is for ay

mount > (Mount Parnassus, in Phocis, sacred to Apollo and the nine Muses) ay > ever, always

7 Through famous poets' verse each where renowned,

each where > everywhere

8 On which the thrice three learned ladies play 9 Their heavenly notes, and make full many a lovely lay.

full many a lovely lay > [very many lovely songs]

110.55

   From thence, far off he vnto him did shew
2 A litle path, that was both steepe and long,
     Which to a goodly Citie led his vew;
4 Whose wals and towres were builded high and strong
     Of perle and precious stone, that earthly tong
6 Cannot describe, nor wit of man can tell;
     Too high a ditty for my simple song;
8 The Citie of the great king hight it well,
   Wherein eternall peace and happinesse doth dwell.

1 From thence, far off he to him did show 2 A little path, that was both steep and long, 3 Which to a goodly city led his view;

goodly > beautiful city > (See Rev. 21.10-21)

4 Whose walls and towers were built high and strong 5 Of pearl and precious stone, that earthly tongue 6 Cannot describe, nor wit of man can tell;

wit > skill, mental capacity

7 Too high a ditty for my simple song;

ditty > subject, theme

8 The city of the great King hight it well,

hight > was named

9 Wherein eternal peace and happiness do dwell.

110.56

   As he thereon stood gazing, he might see
2 The blessed Angels to and fro descend
     From highest heauen, in gladsome companee,
4 And with great ioy into that Citie wend,
     As commonly as friend does with his frend.
6 Whereat he wondred much, and gan enquere,
     What stately building durst so high extend
8 Her loftie towres vnto the starry sphere,
   And what vnknowen nation there empeopled were.

1 As he thereon stood gazing, he might see

might > could (see Gen. 28.12)

2 The blessed angels to and fro descend 3 From highest heaven, in gladsome company, 4 And with great joy into that city wend, 5 As commonly as friend does with his friend.

commonly > familiarly

6 Whereat he wondered much, and gan inquire

Whereat > At which wondered > marvelled gan > did

7 What stately building dared so high extend 8 Its lofty towers to the starry sphere, 9 And what unknown nation there empeopled were.

empeopled > established [as the population: SUS]

110.57

   Faire knight (quoth he) Hierusalem that is,
2 The new Hierusalem, that God has built
     For those to dwell in, that are chosen his,
4 His chosen people purg'd from sinfull guilt,
     With +pretious+ bloud, which cruelly was spilt
6 On cursed tree, of that vnspotted lam,
     That for the sinnes of all the world was kilt:
8 Now are they Saints all in that Citie sam,
   More deare vnto their God, then younglings to their dam.

5 pretious > piteous 1590 etc.: FE

1 "Fair knight," quoth he, "Jerusalem that is, 2 The new Jerusalem, that God has built 3 For those to dwell in that are chosen his, 4 His chosen people, purged from sinful guilt 5 With precious blood, which cruelly was spilt 6 On cursed tree, of that unspotted lamb

cursed tree > [the cross: see Gal. 3.13] of > of; by unspotted > blameless, innocent lamb > [Christ]

7 That for the sins of all the world was killed: 8 Now are they saints all in that city sam,

sam > together, mutually

9 More dear to their God than younglings to their dam."

younglings > young ones dam > mother

110.58

   Till now, said then the knight, I weened well,
2 That great Cleopolis, where I haue beene,
     In which that fairest Faerie Queene doth dwell
4 The fairest Citie was, that might be seene;
     And that bright towre all built of christall cleene,
6 Panthea, seemd the brightest thing, that was:
     But now by proofe all otherwise I weene;
8 For this great Citie that does far surpas,
   And this bright Angels towre quite dims that towre of glas.

1 "Till now," said then the knight, "I weened well

weened > supposed, imagined

2 That great Cleopolis, where I have been

Cleopolis > "City of Glorious Fame" (Greek; allegorically: London)

3 (In which that fairest Faery Queen does dwell), 4 The fairest city was that might be seen;

might > could

5 And that bright tower, all built of crystal clean,

bright > bright; beautiful clean > {Clear, transparent; free from moral or spiritual pollution; pure and uncluttered in style}

6 Panthea, seemed the brightest thing that was:

Panthea > "All Sights", "Totality of Visions" (Greek, meaning
"Nonesuch", "Nonpareil", etc. Possibly identifiable as
Westminster Abbey or the Queen's Palace of Richmond)

7 But now by proof all otherwise I ween;

ween > think

8 For this great city that does far surpass, 9 And this bright angels' tower quite dims that tower of glass."

110.59

   Most trew, then said the holy aged man;
2 Yet is Cleopolis for earthly +frame+,
     The fairest peece, that eye beholden can:
4 And well beseemes all knights of noble name,
     That couet in th'immortall booke of fame
6 To be eternized, that same to haunt,
     And doen their seruice to that soueraigne Dame,
8 That glorie does to them for guerdon graunt:
   For she is heauenly borne, and heauen may iustly vaunt.

2 frame > fame 1590 etc.: FE

1 "Most true," then said the holy aged man; 2 "Yet is Cleopolis, for earthly frame,

frame > structure, building

3 The fairest piece that eye behold can:

piece > piece of work

4 And well beseems all knights of noble name

beseems > suits, becomes name > repute, distinction; name

5 (That covet in the immortal book of fame

covet > wish, desire

6 To be eternized) that same to haunt,

eternized > eternalized, immortalized haunt > frequent

7 And do their service to that sovereign dame,

that sovereign dame > [the Faery Queen]

8 That glory does to them for guerdon grant:

guerdon > reward

9 For she is heavenly born, and heaven may justly vaunt.

vaunt > boast of [as her origin]

110.60

   And thou faire ymp, sprong out from English race,
2 How euer now +accompted+ Elfins sonne,
     Well worthy doest thy seruice for her grace,
4 To aide a virgin desolate foredonne.
     But when thou famous victorie hast wonne,
6 And high emongst all knights hast hong thy shield,
     Thenceforth the suit of earthly conquest shonne,
8 And wash thy hands from guilt of bloudy field:
   For bloud can nought but sin, and wars but sorrowes yield.

2 accompted > accounted 1609

1 "And you, fair imp, sprung out from English race,

imp > child

2 However now accounted Elfin's son, 3 Well worthily do your service for her grace,

grace > favour, goodwill

4 To aid a virgin desolate, fordone.

fordone > ruined, undone

5 But when you famous victory have won, 6 And high amongst all knights have hung your shield, 7 Thenceforth the suit of earthly conquest shun,

suit > pursuit

8 And wash your hands from guilt of bloody field:

field > battle; field of battle

9 For blood can naught but sin, and wars but sorrows yield.

110.61

   Then seeke this path, that I to thee presage,
2 Which after all to heauen shall thee send;
     Then +peaceably thy+ painefull pilgrimage
4 To yonder same Hierusalem do bend,
     Where is for thee ordaind a blessed end:
6 For thou emongst those Saints, whom thou doest see,
     Shalt be a Saint, and thine owne nations frend
8 And Patrone: thou Saint George shalt called bee,
   Saint George of mery England, the signe of victoree.

3 peaceably thy > peaceably to thy 1596

1 "Then seek this path, that I to you presage,

presage > prophesy; also: make known (SUS)

2 Which after all to heaven shall you send; 3 Then peaceably your painful pilgrimage 4 To yonder same Jerusalem do bend,

bend > incline, direct

5 Where is for you ordained a blessed end:
6 For you (amongst those saints whom you do see)
7 Shall be a saint, and your own nation's friend
8 And patron: you Saint George shall called be,

patron > champion; patron saint

9 Saint George of merry England, the sign of victory."

merry > pleasant sign > emblem

110.62

   Vnworthy wretch (quoth he) of so great grace,
2 How dare I thinke such glory to attaine?
     These that haue it attaind, were in like cace
4 +(Quoth he) as wretched, and liu'd in like paine.+
     But deeds of armes must I at last be faine,
6 And Ladies loue to leaue so dearely bought?
     What need of armes, where peace doth ay remaine,
8 (Said he) and +battailes none are to be+ fought?
   As for loose loues +are+ vaine, and vanish into nought.

4 (Quoth he) as wretched, and liu'd in like paine. > As wretched men, and liued in like paine. 1590 8 battailes none are to be > bitter battailes all are 1590 9 are > they'are 1590; but cf. 503.22:5

1 "Unworthy wretch," quoth he, "of so great grace,

of > (Dependent upon "Vnworthy": "I, wretch, unworthy of so great grace") so > such

2 How dare I think such glory to attain?" 3 "These, that have it attained, were in like case,"

like case > [a] similar plight

4 Quoth he, "as wretched, and lived in like pain." 5 "But deeds of arms must I at last be fain

fain > obliged

6 And ladies' love, to leave, so dearly bought?" 7 "What need of arms, where peace does ay remain,"

ay > ever, always

8 Said he, "and battles none are to be fought? 9 As for loose loves, they are vain, and vanish into naught."

110.63

   O let me not (quoth he) +then turne+ againe
2 Backe to the world, whose ioyes so fruitlesse are;
     But let me here for aye in peace remaine,
4 Or streight way on that last long voyage fare,
     That nothing may my present hope empare.
6 That may not be (said he) ne maist thou yit
     Forgo that royall maides bequeathed care,
8 Who did her cause into thy hand commit,
   Till from her cursed foe thou haue her freely quit.

1 then turne > returne 1609

1 "O let me not," quoth he, "then turn again 2 Back to the world, whose joys so fruitless are; 3 But let me here for ay in peace remain,

ay > ever, always

4 Or straightway on that last long voyage fare,

voyage > journey

5 That nothing may my present hope impair."

That > [So that] impair > weaken, lessen; impair

6 "That may not be," said he, "nor may you yet 7 Forgo that royal maid's bequeathed care,

bequeathed > committed, assigned (the adventure was assigned to him by the Faery Queen; see I:152-81)

8 Who did her cause into your hand commit, 9 Till from her cursed foe you have her freely quit."

quit > rescued

110.64

   Then shall I soone, (quoth he) so God me grace,
2 Abet that virgins cause disconsolate,
     And shortly backe returne vnto this place,
4 To walke this way in Pilgrims poore estate.
     But now aread, old father, why of late
6 Didst thou behight me borne of English blood,
     Whom all a Faeries sonne +doen nominate+?
8 That word shall I (said he) auouchen good,
   Sith to thee is vnknowne the cradle of thy brood.

7 doen nominate > doen then nominate 1596

1 "Then shall I soon," quoth he, "so God me grace,

grace > show favour to, countenance

2 Abet that virgin's cause disconsolate,

Abet > Uphold

3 And shortly back return to this place, 4 To walk this way in pilgrim's poor estate. 5 But now aread, old father, why of late

aread > make known, declare of late > just now

6 Did you behight me born of English blood,

behight > call

7 Whom all a Faery's son do nominate?"

nominate > call [by the name of: see e.g. 105.11:1]

8 "That word shall I," said he, "avouch good, 9 Sith to you is unknown the cradle of your brood.

Sith > Since brood > parentage, race (this use is characteristic of Spenser)

110.65

   For well I wote, thou springst from ancient race
2 Of Saxon kings, that haue with mightie hand
     And many bloudie battailes fought in +place+
4 High reard their royall throne in +Britans+ land,
     And vanquisht them, vnable to withstand:
6 From thence a Faerie thee vnweeting reft,
     There as thou slepst in tender swadling band,
8 And her base Elfin brood there for thee left.
   Such men do Chaungelings call, so chaungd by Faeries theft.

3 place > face 1590 4 Britans > Britane 1596, 1609

1 "For well I wot, you spring from ancient race

wot > know

2 Of Saxon kings, that have, with mighty hand 3 And many bloody battles fought in place,

in place > there

4 High reared their royal throne in Britain land, 5 And vanquished them unable to withstand:

vanquished > {Subdued by physical or spiritual power} them > [those who were]: apparently meaning the native Britons, a statement at odds with the succeeding account (e.g. in 210) of English genealogy

6 From thence a Faery you unweeting reft,

unweeting > unsuspecting [not knowing the identity of the child; perhaps also referring to "you"] reft > took away

7 There as you slept in tender swaddling-bands,

tender > infantile; youthly swaddling-bands > swaddling-clothes [strips of cloth in which infants were wrapped]

8 And her base Elfin brood there for you left:

Elfin brood > Faery offspring for > in place of, instead of

9 Such, men do changelings call, so changed by Faery's theft.

changed > exchanged

110.66

   Thence she thee brought into this Faerie lond,
2 And in an heaped furrow did thee hyde,
     Where thee a Ploughman all vnweeting fond,
4 As he his toylesome teme that way did guyde,
     And brought thee vp in ploughmans state to byde,
6 Whereof Georgos he thee gaue to name;
     Till prickt with courage, and thy forces pryde,
8 To Faery court thou cam'st to seeke for fame,
   And proue thy puissaunt armes, as seemes thee best became.

1 "Thence she you brought into this Faery land, 2 And in a heaped furrow did you hide, 3 Where you a ploughman all unweeting found,

unweeting > unsuspecting, unwitting (or adv.: referring to the ploughman or to "you", as at 110.65:6)

4 As he his toilsome team that way did guide,

team > (Of plough-beasts, oxen or horses)

5 And brought you up in ploughman's state to bide,

state > {Condition or state in life} bide > remain; await [this revelation]

6 Whereof Georgos he you gave to name;

Whereof > By reason of which Georgos > "Man of the Earth" (Greek) to > as a

7 Till pricked with courage, and your forces' pride,

pricked > spurred (and the double meaning would have been understood in 1590) courage > courage; lustiness pride > {State of physical perfection; elation; sexual desire}

8 To Faery court you came to seek for fame, 9 And prove your puissant arms, as seems you best became."

puissant arms > powerful deeds of arms seems > [it seems] became > suited

110.67

   O holy Sire (quoth he) how shall I quight
2 The many fauours I with thee haue found,
     That hast my name and nation red aright,
4 And taught the way that does to heauen bound?
     This said, adowne he looked to the ground,
6 To haue returnd, but dazed were his eyne,
     Through passing brightnesse, which did quite confound
8 His feeble sence, and too exceeding shyne.
   So darke are earthly things compard to things diuine.

1 "O holy sire," quoth he, "how shall I requite

sire > father

2 The many favours I with you have found, 3 That have my name and nation read aright,

nation > country; nationality read > expounded; discerned

4 And taught the way that does to heaven boun?"

boun > go, set out; hence: lead

5 This said, adown he looked to the ground,

adown > down

6 To have returned; but dazed were his eyes 7 Through passing brightness (which did quite confound

passing > surpassing

8 His feeble sense) and too exceeding shine.

shine > brilliance

9 So dark are earthly things compared to things divine.

to > with

110.68

   At last whenas himselfe he gan to find,
2 To Vna back he cast him to retire;
     Who him awaited still with pensiue mind.
4 Great thankes and goodly meed to that good syre,
     He thence departing gaue for his paines hyre.
6 So came to Vna, who him ioyd to see,
     And after litle rest, gan him desire,
8 Of her aduenture mindfull for to bee.
   So leaue they take of C{oe}lia, and her daughters three.

1 At last, when himself he began to find,

find > [recover]

2 To Una back he cast himself to retire;

cast > resolved, decided

3 Who him awaited still with pensive mind.

pensive > apprehensive, anxious

4 Great thanks, and goodly meed, to that good sire

goodly meed > courteous reward; hence: praise, thanks sire > father, elderly man

5 He thence departing gave for his pains' hire.

for his pains' hire > as reward for his efforts

6 So came to Una, who him joyed to see, 7 And, after little rest, gan him desire

gan > did

8 Of her adventure mindful to be. 9 So leave they take of Caelia, and her daughters three.

CANTO XI

   The knight with that old Dragon fights
2 two dayes incessantly:
   The third him ouerthrowes, and gayns
4 most glorious victory.

1 The knight with that old dragon fights

that old dragon > (Cf. Rev. 20.2)

2 two days incessantly: 3 The third him overthrows, and gains 4 most glorious victory.

111.1

   HIgh time now gan it wex for Vna faire,
2 To thinke of those her captiue Parents deare,
     And their forwasted kingdome to repaire:
4 Whereto whenas they now approched neare,
     With hartie words her knight she gan to cheare,
6 And in her modest manner thus bespake;
     Deare knight, as deare, as euer knight was deare,
8 That all these sorrowes suffer for my sake,
   High heauen behold the tedious toyle, ye for me take.

1 High time now gan it wax for Una fair

gan > did wax > grow

2 To think of those her captive parents dear, 3 And their forwasted kingdom to repair:

forwasted > ravaged, laid to waste repair > restore, re-establish

4 Whereto when they now approached near,

Whereto > To which

5 With hearty words her knight she began to cheer,

hearty > sincere; cordial; encouraging

6 And in her modest manner thus bespoke:

bespoke > spoke

7 "Dear knight, as dear as ever knight was dear, 8 That all these sorrows suffer for my sake, 9 High heaven behold the tedious toil you for me take!

111.2

   Now are we come vnto my natiue soyle,
2 And to the place, where all our perils dwell;
     Here haunts that feend, and does his dayly spoyle,
4 Therefore henceforth be at your keeping well,
     And euer ready for your foeman fell.
6 The sparke of noble courage now awake,
     And striue your excellent selfe to excell;
8 That shall ye euermore renowmed make,
   Aboue all knights on earth, that batteill vndertake.

1 "Now are we come to my native soil, 2 And to the place where all our perils dwell; 3 Here haunts that fiend, and does his daily spoil,

spoil > damage, spoliation

4 Therefore henceforth be at your keeping well,

at your keeping > on your guard

5 And ever ready for your foeman fell.

foeman > foe, enemy, enemy in war fell > fierce, terrible

6 The spark of noble courage now awake, 7 And strive your excellent self to excel; 8 That shall you evermore renowned make 9 Above all knights on earth, that battle undertake."

111.3

   +And+ pointing forth, lo yonder is (said she)
2 The brasen towre in which my parents deare
     For dread of that huge feend emprisond +be+
4 Whom I from +far,+ see on the walles +appeare+
     Whose sight my feeble soule doth greatly cheare:
6 And on the top of all I do espye
     The watchman wayting tydings glad to heare,
8 That {o^} my parents might I happily
   Vnto you bring, to ease you of your misery.

This stanza was added in 1596 3 be > be, 1609 4 far, > far 1609 4 appeare > appeare, 1609

1 And pointing forth, "Lo yonder is," said she, 2 "The brazen tower in which my parents dear 3 For dread of that huge fiend imprisoned be,

be > [are]

4 Whom I from far see on the walls appear, 5 Whose sight my feeble soul does greatly cheer:

Whose sight > The sight of whom

6 And on the top of all I do espy 7 The watchman waiting tidings glad to hear, 8 That, O my parents, might I happily 9 To you bring, to ease you of your misery!"

111.4

   With that they heard a roaring hideous sound,
2 That all the ayre with terrour filled wide,
     And seemd vneath to shake the stedfast ground.
4 Eftsoones that dreadfull Dragon they espide,
     Where +stretcht+ he lay vpon the sunny +side,+
6 Of a great hill, himselfe like a great hill.
     But all so soone, as he from far descride
8 Those glistring armes, that heauen with light did fill,
   He rousd himselfe full blith, and hastned them vntill.

5 stretcht > stretch 1596 5 side, > side 1609

1 With that they heard a roaring hideous sound,

hideous > terrific; odious; immense; hence: loud, horrible

2 That all the air with terror filled wide, 3 And seemed uneath to shake the steadfast ground.

uneath > with difficulty; hence: almost

4 Eftsoons that dreadful dragon they espied,

Eftsoons > Thereupon; soon afterwards

5 Where stretched he lay upon the sunny side 6 Of a great hill, himself like a great hill. 7 But, all so soon as he from far descried 8 Those glistering arms that heaven with light did fill,

arms > {Weapons, shield and armour}

9 He roused himself full blithe, and hastened them until.

full > very blithe > joyful; benignant; (and adv. A peculiarly sinister description; or perhaps the dragon does not as yet choose to recognize the newcomers as a threat) them until > towards them

111.5

   Then bad the knight +his+ Lady yede aloofe,
2 And to an hill her selfe +with draw+ aside,
     From whence she might behold that battailles proof
4 And eke be safe from daunger far descryde:
     She him obayd, and turnd a little wyde.
6 Now O thou sacred Muse, most learned Dame,
     Fayre ympe of Ph{oe}bus, and his aged bride,
8 The Nourse of time, and euerlasting fame,
   That warlike hands ennoblest with immortall name;

1 his > this 1590 etc.: FE 2 with draw > withdraw 1590

1 Then bade the knight his Lady yode aloof,

yode > go aloof > away, apart

2 And to a hill herself withdraw aside; 3 From whence she might behold that battle's proof,

proof > outcome

4 And eke be safe from danger far descried:

eke > also

5 She him obeyed, and turned a little wide. 6 Now, O you sacred Muse, most learned dame, 7 Fair imp of Phoebus and his aged bride,

imp > child Phoebus > (Phoebus Apollo, god of music and poetry. In later accounts he is the leader of the choir of Muses, and receives the name Musagetes as a result. According to Myth. 4.10, the Muses are the children of Apollo, rather than of Jupiter)

8 The nurse of time and everlasting fame, 9 That warlike hands ennobles with immortal name;

name > fame, reputation

111.6

   O gently come into my feeble brest,
2 Come gently, but not with that mighty rage,
     Wherewith the martiall troupes thou doest infest,
4 And harts of great Hero{e"}s doest enrage,
     That nought their kindled courage may +aswage,+
6 Soone as thy dreadfull trompe begins to +sownd;+
     The God of warre with his fiers equipage
8 Thou doest awake, sleepe neuer he so sownd,
   And +scared+ nations doest with horrour sterne astownd.

5 aswage, > asswage; 1609 6 sownd; > sound, 1609 9 scared > feared 1590 etc.: FE

1 O gently come into my feeble breast, 2 Come gently, but not with that mighty rage 3 Wherewith the martial troops you do infest,

Wherewith > With which infest > harass, molest, infest; (catachr.) infect, inspire

4 And hearts of great heroes do enrage,

enrage > inspire

5 That naught their kindled courage may assuage;

That > [So that] naught > nothing at all

6 Soon as your dreadful trump begins to sound,

Soon > [As soon] trump > trumpet; trumpet note

7 The god of war with his fierce equipage 8 You do awake, sleep never he so sound, 9 And scared nations do with horror stern astound.

stern > stern; fierce, cruel astound > stupefy

111.7

   Faire Goddesse lay that furious fit aside,
2 Till I of warres and bloudy Mars do sing,
     And Briton fields with Sarazin bloud bedyde,
4 Twixt that great faery Queene and Paynim king,
     That with their horrour heauen and earth did ring,
6 A worke of labour long, and endlesse prayse:
     But now a while let downe that haughtie string,
8 And to my tunes thy second tenor rayse,
   That I this man of God his godly armes may blaze.

1 Fair goddess, lay that furious fit aside,

fit > mood, humour; or: strain of music

2 Till I of wars and bloody Mars do sing,

Till > (Perhaps a reference to the mooted twelve-book work on the public virtues; see I:92-4)

3 And Briton fields with Saracen blood bedyed,

Briton > British Saracen > {Arab, Moslem; pagan; here = Spanish} bedyed > dyed on all sides, thoroughly dyed; the prefix is also an intensive, hence: soaked

4 'Twixt that great Faery Queen and paynim king,

paynim > pagan, heathen king > (Philip II of Spain)

5 That with their horror heaven and earth did ring,

ring > cause to resound (cf. line 7); or, perhaps: encircle, encompass

6 A work of labour long, and endless praise:

praise > {Praising, the process of praising: the work is that of praising rather than being worthy of praise, as the modern sense implies}

7 But now awhile let down that haughty string,

let down > loosen haughty > high; hence: high-pitched; also: haughty, arrogant

8 And to my tunes your second tenor raise,

second tenor > {The next bell to the tenor bell; hence: lesser music}

9 That I this man of God his godly arms may blaze.

That > [So that] his > (Obsolete genitive form; cf. 105.5:8) arms > {Deeds of arms} blaze > proclaim (as with a trumpet); blazon forth; portray

111.8

   By this the dreadfull Beast drew nigh to hand,
2 Halfe flying, and halfe footing in his hast,
     That with his largenesse measured much land,
4 And made wide shadow vnder his huge wast;
     As mountaine doth the valley ouercast.
6 Approching nigh, he reared high afore
     His body monstrous, horrible, and +vast+,
8 Which to increase his wondrous greatnesse more,
   Was swolne with wrath, and poyson, and with bloudy gore.

7 vast > vaste 1590; wast 1596

1 By this the dreadful beast drew nigh to hand,

By this > At this; by this time

2 Half flying and half footing in his haste, 3 That with his largeness measured much land, 4 And made wide shadow under his huge waist;

waist > girth (cf. SC, "April", 134); or: waste: abundance (this usage not recorded, in OED, until 1725)

5 As mountain does the valley overcast. 6 Approaching nigh, he reared high afore

reared high afore > (If, as seems likely, "reared" is transitive, the dragon reared his body high afore ( = before, in front). But if "reared" is intransitive, a comma is wanted after "afore": "he reared high afore, His body monstrous" etc.)

7 His body monstrous, horrible, and vast, 8 Which, to increase his wondrous greatness more, 9 Was swollen with wrath and poison, and with bloody gore.

111.9

   And ouer, all with brasen scales was armd,
2 Like plated coate of steele, so couched neare,
     That nought mote perce, ne might his corse be harmd
4 With dint of sword, nor push of pointed speare;
     Which as an Eagle, seeing pray appeare,
6 His aery plumes doth rouze, full rudely dight,
     So shaked he, that horrour was to heare,
8 For as the clashing of an Armour bright,
   Such noyse his rouzed scales did send vnto the knight.

1 And over, all with brazen scales was armed,

over > moreover; also: over [his body]

2 Like plated coat of steel, so couched near

couched near > closely laid

3 That naught might pierce, nor might his corse be harmed

corse > body

4 With dint of sword, nor push of pointed spear:

dint > blow, impact

5 Which as an eagle, seeing prey appear, 6 His airy plumes does rouse, full rudely dight,

rouse > shake (used of a hawk shaking its feathers. Spenser reveals an intimate knowledge of falconry and its language in this canto, as elsewhere in the poem) full rudely dight > very roughly arranged

7 So shook he, that horror was to hear,

was > [it was]

8 For as the clashing of an armour bright, 9 Such noise his roused scales did send to the knight.

111.10

   His flaggy wings when forth he did display,
2 Were like two sayles, in which the hollow wynd
     Is gathered full, and worketh speedy way:
4 And eke the pennes, that did his pineons +bynd,+
     Were like mayne-yardes, with flying canuas lynd,
6 With which whenas him list the ayre to beat,
     And there by force vnwonted passage find,
8 The cloudes before him fled for terrour great,
   And all the heauens stood still amazed with his threat.

4 bynd, > bynd 1596

1 His flaggy wings, when forth he did display,

flaggy > drooping display > spread [them]; or: exhibit himself ostentatiously (cf. King Lear II iv 40)

2 Were like two sails, in which the hollow wind 3 Is gathered full, and works speedy way: 4 And eke the pens, that did his pinions bind,

eke > also pens > feathers (here = wing-coverts) pinions > flight-feathers (primaries and secondaries)

5 Were like main-yards, with flying canvas lined, 6 With which when he list the air to beat,

list > chose

7 And there by force unwonted passage find,

unwonted > unaccustomed [the air being unaccustomed to such treatment]

8 The clouds before him fled for terror great, 9 And all the heavens stood still, amazed with his threat.

amazed with > overwhelmed by, confounded by threat > thrust; menace, threat

111.11

   His huge long tayle wound vp in hundred foldes,
2 Does ouerspred his long bras-scaly backe,
     Whose wreathed boughts when euer he vnfoldes,
4 And thicke entangled knots adown does +slacke.+
     Bespotted +as+ with shields of red and blacke,
6 It sweepeth all the land behind him farre,
     And of three furlongs does but litle lacke;
8 And at the point two stings in-fixed arre,
   Both deadly sharpe, that sharpest steele exceeden farre.

4 slacke. > slack. 1590; slack; 1609 5 as > all 1590 etc.: FE

1 His huge long tail, wound up in hundred folds,

hundred > [a hundred, a large number]

2 Does overspread his long brass-scaly back, 3 Whose wreathed boughts whenever he unfolds,

boughts > coils

4 And thick entangled knots adown does slack,

adown > down

5 Bespotted as with shields of red and black,

Bespotted > {Spotted all over; the prefix is intensive}

6 It sweeps all the land behind him far, 7 And of three furlongs does but little lack;

furlong > {An eighth of a mile, 220 yards, about 201 metres}

8 And at the point two stings infixed are, 9 Both deadly sharp, that sharpest steel exceed far.

sharpest steel exceed > [exceed sharpest steel in sharpness]

111.12

   But stings and sharpest steele did far exceed
2 The sharpnesse of his cruell rending clawes;
     Dead was it sure, as sure as death in deed,
4 What euer thing does touch his rauenous pawes,
     Or what within his reach he euer drawes.
6 But his most hideous head my toung to +tell,+
     Does tremble: for his deepe deuouring iawes
8 Wide gaped, like the griesly mouth of hell,
   Through which into his darke abisse all rauin fell.

6 tell, > tell 1609

1 But stings and sharpest steel did far exceed

did far exceed > [were far exceeded by]

2 The sharpness of his cruel rending claws; 3 Dead was it sure, as sure as death indeed, 4 Whatever thing does touch his ravenous paws, 5 Or what within his reach he ever draws. 6 But his most hideous head my tongue to tell

hideous > immense; odious; hideous tell > describe

7 Does tremble: for his deep devouring jaws 8 Wide gaped, like the grisly mouth of hell,

grisly > horrible, fearsome

9 Through which into his dark abyss all ravin fell.

abyss > abyss; infernal region ravin > plunder, prey

111.13

   And that more wondrous was, in either iaw
2 Three ranckes of yron teeth enraunged were,
     In which yet trickling bloud and gobbets raw
4 Of late deuoured bodies did appeare,
     That sight thereof bred cold congealed feare:
6 Which to increase, and all atonce to kill,
     A cloud of smoothering smoke and sulphur seare
8 Out of his stinking gorge forth steemed still,
   That all the ayre about with smoke and stench did fill.

1 And, that more wondrous was, in either jaw 2 Three ranks of iron teeth enranged were,

enranged > arranged

3 In which yet-trickling blood and gobbets raw

gobbets > {Lumps of raw or semi-digested flesh or food}

4 Of late devoured bodies did appear,

late > recently

5 That sight thereof bred cold congealed fear:

That > [So that] congealed > frozen

6 Which to increase, and all at once to kill,

at once > at one time; hence: at a stroke

7 A cloud of smothering smoke and sulphur sere

sere > yellow; or perhaps: searing

8 Out of his stinking gorge forth steamed still,

gorge > throat; maw still > continually

9 That all the air about with smoke and stench did fill.

111.14

   His blazing eyes, like two bright shining shields,
2 Did burne with wrath, and sparkled liuing fyre;
     As two broad Beacons, set in open fields,
4 Send forth their flames farre off to euery shyre,
     And warning giue, that enemies conspyre,
6 With fire and sword the region to inuade;
     So flam'd his eyne with rage and rancorous yre:
8 But farre within, as in a hollow glade,
   Those glaring lampes were set, that made a dreadfull shade.

1 His blazing eyes, like two bright shining shields, 2 Did burn with wrath, and sparkled living fire; 3 As two broad beacons, set in open fields, 4 Send forth their flames far off to every shire,

shire > county (perhaps a topical simile, alluding to the chain of beacon-fires set up along the English cliffs to warn of the approach of the Spanish Armada, lit on 29 July 1588)

5 And warning give that enemies conspire 6 With fire and sword the region to invade; 7 So flamed his eyes with rage and rancorous ire: 8 But far within, as in a hollow glade, 9 Those glaring lamps were set that made a dreadful shade.

111.15

   So dreadfully he towards him did pas,
2 Forelifting vp aloft his speckled brest,
     And often bounding on the brused gras,
4 As for great ioyance of his newcome guest.
     Eftsoones he gan aduance his haughtie crest,
6 As chauffed Bore his bristles doth vpreare,
     And shoke his scales to battell readie drest;
8 That made the Redcrosse knight nigh quake for feare,
   As bidding bold defiance to his foeman neare.

1 So dreadfully he towards him did pas,

pas > pace; pass

2 Forelifting up aloft his speckled breast,

Forelifting up > [Lifting up before, lifting up in front]

3 And often bounding on the bruised grass, 4 As for great joyance of his new-come guest.

As > [As though] joyance of > delight in; hence: delight in the arrival of

5 Eftsoons he gan advance his haughty crest,

Eftsoons > Thereupon gan > did haughty > arrogant; high, imposing

6 As chafed boar his bristles does uprear,

chafed > enraged; fretting

7 And shook his scales to battle ready dressed;

dressed > arrayed

8 That made the Redcross Knight nigh quake for fear, 9 As bidding bold defiance to his foeman near.

bidding > offering, proclaiming, threatening foeman > foe, enemy, enemy in war

111.16

   The knight gan fairely couch his steadie speare,
2 And fiercely ran at him with rigorous might:
     The pointed steele arriuing rudely theare,
4 His harder hide would neither perce, nor bight,
     But glauncing by forth passed forward right;
6 Yet sore amoued with so puissant push,
     The wrathfull beast about him turned light,
8 And him so rudely passing by, did brush
   With his long tayle, that horse and man to ground did rush.

1 The knight gan fairly couch his steady spear,

gan fairly > did expertly couch > {Place it in its rest and hold it ready for attack}

2 And fiercely ran at him with rigorous might: 3 The pointed steel, arriving rudely there,

rudely > violently; roughly

4 His harder hide would neither pierce nor bite,

harder > too-hard; or: harder [than the spear]

5 But, glancing by, forth passed forward right;

glancing > darting, shooting (esp. obliquely)

6 Yet, sore moved with so puissant push,

puissant > powerful [a]

7 The wrathful beast about him turned light,

light > at once; nimbly, quickly

8 And him so rudely passing by, did brush 9 With his long tail, that horse and man to ground did rush.

111.17

   Both horse and man vp lightly rose againe,
2 And fresh encounter towards him addrest:
     But th'idle stroke yet backe recoyld in vaine,
4 And found no place his deadly point to rest.
     Exceeding rage enflam'd the furious beast,
6 To be auenged of so great despight;
     For neuer felt his imperceable brest
8 So wondrous force, from hand of liuing wight;
   Yet had he prou'd the powre of many a puissant knight.

1 Both horse and man up lightly rose again,

lightly > immediately; easily

2 And fresh encounter towards him addressed: 3 But the idle stroke yet back recoiled in vain,

idle > futile

4 And found no place its deadly point to rest. 5 Exceeding rage inflamed the furious beast, 6 To be avenged of so great despite;

so > such a despite > outrage; act of defiance

7 For never felt his impierceable breast

impierceable > {Not pierceable}

8 So wondrous force from hand of living wight;

So > Such wight > being, person, mortal

9 Yet had he proved the power of many a puissant knight.

proved > tested puissant > powerful

111.18

   Then with his wauing wings displayed wyde,
2 Himselfe vp high he lifted from the ground,
     And with strong flight did forcibly diuide
4 The yielding aire, which nigh too feeble found
     Her flitting partes, and element +vnsound+,
6 To beare so great a weight: he cutting way
     With his broad sayles, about him soared round:
8 At last low stouping with vnweldie sway,
   Snatcht vp both horse and man, to beare them quite away.

5 vnsound > vnfound 1596

1 Then, with his waving wings displayed wide,

displayed > spread, spread out

2 Himself up high he lifted from the ground, 3 And with strong flight did forcibly divide 4 The yielding air, which nigh too feeble found 5 Her flitting parts and element unsound,

flitting > unsubstantial; yielding (cf. 104.5:5, 208.2:4) unsound > unsubstantial

6 To bear so great a weight: he, cutting way 7 With his broad sails, about him soared round:

sails > wings (of a hawk)

8 At last, low stooping with unwieldy sway,

stooping > swooping (as a hawk on its prey) sway > momentum, swing; sweep; force

9 Snatched up both horse and man, to bear them quite away.

111.19

   Long he them bore aboue the subiect plaine,
2 So farre as Ewghen bow a shaft may send,
     Till struggling strong did him at last constraine,
4 To let them downe before his flightes end:
     As hagard hauke presuming to contend
6 With hardie fowle, aboue his hable might,
     His wearie pounces all in vaine doth spend,
8 To trusse the pray too heauie for his flight;
   Which comming downe to ground, does free it selfe by fight.

1 Long he them bore above the subject plain,

subject > {Subjacent, lying below}

2 So far as yewen bow a shaft may send,

yewen > {Made of yew, the traditional wood for longbows}

3 Till struggling strong did him at last constrain 4 To let them down before his flight's end: 5 As haggard hawk, presuming to contend

haggard > untamed; wild (used of a hawk caught as an adult)

6 With hardy fowl, above its able might,

able might > strength, capabilities

7 Its weary pounces all in vain does spend

pounces > claws, talons

8 To truss the prey too heavy for its flight;

truss > {Seize in the talons, usually in mid air, and carry off; used of birds of prey}

9 Which, coming down to ground, does free itself by fight.

111.20

   He so disseized of his gryping grosse,
2 The knight his thrillant speare againe assayd
     In his bras-plated body to embosse,
4 And three mens strength vnto the stroke he layd;
     Wherewith the stiffe beame quaked, as affrayd,
6 And glauncing from his scaly necke, did glyde
     Close vnder his left wing, then broad displayd.
8 The percing steele there wrought a wound full wyde,
   That with the vncouth smart the Monster lowdly cryde.

1 He so disseized of his gripping gross,

so disseized > thus dispossessed gripping gross > heavy grasping; gripped load; strong hold; clumsy hold; or perhaps an amalgam of these ideas, as: heavy and strongly gripped load

2 The knight his thrilling spear again essayed

thrilling > piercing essayed > attempted

3 In his brass-plated body to emboss,

emboss > encase; hence: bury

4 And three men's strength to the stroke he laid; 5 Wherewith the stiff beam quaked as afraid,

Wherewith > With which beam > shaft as > [as though]

6 And glancing from his scaly neck did glide

glancing > darting, shooting (esp. obliquely)

7 Close under his left wing, then broad displayed.

displayed > spread, spread out

8 The piercing steel there wrought a wound full wide,

full > exceedingly

9 That with the uncouth smart the monster loudly cried.

That > [So that] uncouth > strange, unusual smart > acute pain

111.21

   He cryde, as raging seas are wont to rore,
2 When wintry storme his wrathfull wreck does threat,
     The rolling billowes beat the ragged shore,
4 As they the earth would shoulder from her seat,
     And greedie gulfe does gape, as he would eat
6 His neighbour element in his reuenge:
     Then gin the blustring brethren boldly threat,
8 To moue the world from off his stedfast henge,
   And boystrous battell make, each other to auenge.

1 He cried, as raging seas are wont to roar

wont > accustomed

2 When wintry storm its wrathful wreck does threaten;

wreck > destruction, overthrow of order

3 The rolling billows beat the ragged shore, 4 As they the earth would shoulder from her seat,

As > [As though]

5 And greedy gulf does gape, as it would eat

gulf > depths; abyss; also: chasm, ravine; perhaps: throat [?the hollow beneath a comber on the point of breaking] as > [as though]

6 Its neighbour element in its revenge:

neighbour element > (Earth and Water being two of the four elements of ancient philosophy, the others being Air and Fire)

7 Then gin the blustering brethren boldly threat

gin > do brethren > [brother waves] threat > threaten

8 To move the world from off its steadfast hinge,

hinge > axis

9 And boisterous battle make, each other to avenge.

boisterous > violently fierce, truculent, boisterous

111.22

   The steely head stucke fast still in his flesh,
2 Till with his cruell clawes he snatcht the wood,
     And quite a sunder broke. Forth flowed fresh
4 A gushing riuer of blacke goarie blood,
     That drowned all the land, whereon he stood;
6 The streame thereof would driue a water-mill.
     Trebly augmented was his furious mood
8 With bitter sense of his deepe rooted ill,
   That flames of fire he threw forth from his large nosethrill.

1 The steely head stuck fast still in his flesh,

fast > firmly

2 Till with his cruel claws he snatched the wood, 3 And quite asunder broke. Forth flowed fresh 4 A gushing river of black gory blood, 5 That drowned all the land whereon he stood; 6 The stream thereof would drive a water-mill. 7 Trebly augmented was his furious mood 8 With bitter sense of his deep-rooted ill,

sense > sensation, awareness ill > injury; distress; also: wickedness

9 That flames of fire he threw forth from his large nostril.

That > [So that]

111.23

   His hideous tayle then hurled he about,
2 And therewith all enwrapt the nimble thyes
     Of his froth-fomy steed, whose courage stout
4 Striuing to loose the knot, that fast him tyes,
     Himselfe in streighter bandes too rash implyes,
6 That to the ground he is perforce constraynd
     To throw his rider: who can quickly ryse
8 From off the earth, with durty bloud distaynd,
   For that reprochfull fall right fowly he disdaynd.

1 His hideous tail then hurled he about,

hideous > terrific; immense hurled > whirled; drove with force

2 And therewith all enwrapped the nimble thighs

therewith > with that [with his tail]

3 Of his froth-foamy steed, whose courage stout,

his > [the knight's] stout > proud; fierce; bold

4 Striving to loose the knot that fast him ties,

fast > firmly

5 Himself in straiter bonds too rash implies,

Himself > (The horse; allegorically, the knight also: cf. e.g. 102.8:4) straiter > stricter, tighter, more confining rash > hastily; suddenly implies > enfolds, entangles

6 That to the ground he is perforce constrained

That > [So that] perforce > by force; perforce

7 To throw his rider: who can quickly rise

can > did

8 From off the earth, with dirty blood distained;

distained > stained; defiled, sullied

9 For that reproachful fall right foully he disdained.

reproachful > shameful (of the ignoble means whereby it was brought about) he disdained > he disdained; moved him to anger; moved him to indignation

111.24

   And fiercely tooke his trenchand blade in hand,
2 With which he stroke so furious and so fell,
     That nothing seemd the puissance could withstand:
4 Vpon his crest the hardned yron fell,
     But his more hardned crest was armd so well,
6 That deeper dint therein it would not make;
     Yet so extremely did the buffe him quell,
8 That from thenceforth he shund the like to take,
   But when he saw them come, he did them still forsake.

1 And fiercely took his trenchant blade in hand,

trenchant > sharp

2 With which he struck so furious and so fell,

fell > fierce, fiercely

3 That nothing seemed the puissance could withstand:

nothing seemed > [it seemed nothing] puissance > power, strength

4 Upon his crest the hardened iron fell, 5 But his more hardened crest was armed so well 6 That deeper dint therein it would not make;

dint > dent; hence: cut

7 Yet so extremely did the buff him quell,

buff > blow, buffet quell > subdue

8 That from thenceforth he shunned the like to take, 9 But when he saw them come he did them still forsake.

still forsake > invariably withdraw from

111.25

   The knight was +wrath+ to see his stroke beguyld,
2 And smote againe with more outrageous might;
     But backe againe the sparckling steele recoyld,
4 And left not any marke, where it did light;
     As if in Adamant rocke it had bene pight.
6 The beast impatient of his smarting wound,
     And of so fierce and forcible despight,
8 Thought with his wings to stye aboue the ground;
   But his late wounded wing vnseruiceable found.

1 wrath > wroth 1590, 1609

1 The knight was wroth to see his stroke beguiled,

beguiled > foiled

2 And smote again with more outrageous might;

outrageous > fierce, violent

3 But back again the sparkling steel recoiled, 4 And left not any mark where it did light;

light > strike; fall, alight

5 As if in adamant rock it had been pight.

pight > pitched, placed; hence: struck

6 The beast, impatient of his smarting wound

impatient > intolerant, unable to bear the agony smarting > acutely painful

7 And of so fierce and forcible despite,

so > such forcible > strong; unavoidable despite > anger; injury; defiance

8 Thought with his wings to sty above the ground;

sty > rise

9 But his late wounded wing unserviceable found.

late > lately

111.26

   Then full of griefe and anguish vehement,
2 He lowdly brayd, that like was neuer heard,
     And from his wide deuouring ouen sent
4 A flake of fire, that flashing in his beard,
     Him all amazd, and almost made affeard:
6 The scorching flame sore +swinged+ all his face,
     And through his armour all his bodie seard,
8 That he could not endure so cruell cace,
   But thought his armes to leaue, and helmet to vnlace.

6 swinged > singed 1609

1 Then, full of grief and anguish vehement,

grief > pain

2 He loudly brayed, that like was never heard,

brayed > cried out that > [such that the]

3 And from his wide devouring oven sent 4 A flake of fire that, flashing in his beard,

flake > {Flash; fragment of burning matter} his > [the knight's]

5 Him all amazed, and almost made afeard:

amazed > confused, confounded; overwhelmed almost > for the most part afeard > frightened

6 The scorching flame sore swinged all his face,

swinged > singed

7 And through his armour all his body seared, 8 That he could not endure so cruel case,

That > [So that] case > [a] plight; also, punningly: case, enclosure

9 But thought his arms to leave, and helmet to unlace.

arms > {Weapons, shield and armour}

111.27

   Not that great Champion of the antique world,
2 Whom famous Poetes verse so much doth +vaunt+,
     And hath for twelue huge labours high extold,
4 So many furies and sharpe fits did haunt,
     When him the poysoned garment did enchaunt
6 With Centaures bloud, and bloudie verses charm'd,
     As did this knight twelue thousand dolours daunt,
8 Whom fyrie steele now burnt, that earst him arm'd,
   That erst him goodly arm'd, now most of all him harm'd.

2 vaunt > daunt 1596, 1609

1 Not that great champion of the antique world

champion > (Hercules) antique > ancient

2 (Whom famous poets' verse so much does vaunt,

vaunt > display, make a show of; boast of

3 And has for twelve huge labours high extolled),

high > [been highly; high been] extolled > praised; praised overmuch

4 So many furies and sharp fits did haunt,

So > (Follows from line 1: "Not so many furies did haunt that great champion as did this knight twelve thousand dolours daunt") haunt > visit; molest

5 When him the poisoned garment did enchant

garment > (A white garment soaked in the blood of the centaur Nessus, by which Hercules was killed (see Met. 9.134 ff.)) enchant > {Exert an evil magical influence upon}

6 (With centaur's blood and bloody verses charmed), 7 As did this knight twelve thousand dolours daunt,

dolours > pains

8 Whom fiery steel now burnt, that erst him armed,

erst > [at] first

9 That erst him goodly armed, now most of all him harmed.

111.28

   Faint, wearie, sore, emboyled, grieued, brent
2 With heat, toyle, wounds, armes, smart, and inward fire
     That neuer man such mischiefes did torment;
4 Death better were, death did he oft desire,
     But death will neuer come, when needes require.
6 Whom so dismayd when that his foe beheld,
     He cast to suffer him no more respire,
8 But gan his sturdie sterne about to weld,
   And him so strongly stroke, that to the ground him feld.

1 Faint, weary, sore, emboiled, grieved, burnt,

emboiled > {Boiling with heat; boiling with rage; caused to be boiling with rage: SUS} grieved > hurt

2 With heat, toil, wounds, arms, smart, and inward fire,

smart > acute pain

3 That never man such mischiefs did torment;

mischiefs > misfortunes, evils; injuries

4 Death better were: death did he often desire, 5 But death will never come when needs require. 6 Whom so dismayed, when that his foe beheld,

so dismayed > thus overcome that > [that entity, that dragon]

7 He cast to suffer him no more respire,

He cast > [The dragon] resolved suffer > allow respire > [to] draw breath, live

8 But began his sturdy stern about to wield, 9 And him so strongly struck that to the ground him felled.

111.29

   It fortuned (as faire it then befell)
2 Behind his backe vnweeting, where he stood,
     Of auncient time there was a springing well,
4 From which fast trickled forth a siluer flood,
     Full of great vertues, and for med'cine good.
6 Whylome, before that cursed Dragon got
     That happie land, and all with innocent blood
8 Defyld those sacred waues, it rightly hot
   The well of life, ne yet his vertues had forgot.

1 It fortuned (as fair it then befell)

fair > favourably

2 Behind his back, unweeting where he stood,

unweeting > unwittingly; hence: unnoticed

3 Of ancient time there was a springing well

well > {Spring, spring with supernatural powers}

4 From which fast trickled forth a silver flood, 5 Full of great virtues, and for medicine good.

virtues > powers

6 Whilom, before that cursed dragon got

Whilom > Of yore, in ancient times; formerly

7 That happy land, and all with innocent blood

happy > happy; fortunate

8 Defiled those sacred waves, it rightly hight

hight > was called

9 "The Well of Life", nor yet its virtues had forgotten.

forgotten > lost

111.30

   For vnto life the dead it could restore,
2 And guilt of sinfull crimes cleane wash away,
     Those that with sicknesse were infected sore,
4 It could recure, and aged long decay
     Renew, as +one+ were borne that very day.
6 Both Silo this, and Iordan did excell,
     And th'English Bath, and eke the german Spau,
8 Ne can Cephise, nor Hebrus match this well:
   Into the same the knight backe ouerthrowen, fell.

5 one > it 1590 etc.: FE; lection defended by Collier

1 For to life the dead it could restore, 2 And guilt of sinful crimes clean wash away.

clean > entirely; cleanly

3 Those that with sickness were infected sore 4 It could recure, and aged long decay

recure > cure, restore to life

5 Renew, as one were born that very day. 6 Both Siloam this, and Jordan, did excel,

(The word-order in line 6 is exceptionally convoluted: "This did excel both Siloam and Jordan") Siloam > (Or Silo, the pool of Siloam; see John 9.7) Jordan > (The River Jordan, in which Naaman was cured of leprosy (2 Kings 5.1-14) and in which Christ was baptized by John (Matt. 3))

7 And the English Bath, and eke the German Spau,

Bath > (In Avon, England, a spa since at least Roman times)
eke > also
Spau > (Near Li{e\}ge in Belgium)

8 Nor can Cephissus, nor Hebrus, match this well:

can > did; can Cephissus > (The waters of this Greek river were used to purify Deucalion and Pyrrha (Met. 1.369-70); and for washing and whitening fleeces (Pliny, Hist. Nat. 2.106)) Hebrus > (A river in Thrace with unusually pure water (see Horace, Epistles 1.16:13)) well > {Spring, spring with supernatural powers}

9 Into the same the knight, back overthrown, fell.

111.31

   Now gan the golden Ph{oe}bus for to steepe
2 His fierie face in billowes of the west,
     And his faint steedes watred in Ocean deepe,
4 Whiles from their iournall labours they did rest,
     When that infernall Monster, hauing kest
6 His wearie foe into that liuing well,
     Can high aduance his broad discoloured brest,
8 Aboue his wonted pitch, with countenance fell,
   And clapt his yron wings, as victor he did dwell.

1 Now began the golden Phoebus to steep

Phoebus > (Who each day drives his chariot across the sky)

2 His fiery face in billows of the west, 3 And his faint steeds watered in ocean deep, 4 While from their journal labours they did rest,

journal > daily; diurnal; or: viatical (a "journal" was also a day's travel, or any journey)

5 When that infernal monster, having cast 6 His weary foe into that living well,

living > constantly flowing; refreshing well > {Spring, spring with supernatural powers}

7 Can high advance his broad discoloured breast

Can > Did discoloured > varicoloured, hence: speckled (111.15:2); also: stained, dingy

8 Above his wonted pitch, with countenance fell,

wonted > accustomed pitch > height (to which a bird of prey rises before stooping on its prey) fell > fierce, terrible

9 And clapped his iron wings, as victor he did dwell.

as > [as though as] dwell > live; hence: survive, remain

111.32

   Which when his pensiue Ladie saw from farre,
2 Great woe and sorrow did her soule assay,
     As weening that the sad end of the warre,
4 And gan to highest God entirely pray,
     That feared chance from her to turne away;
6 With folded hands and knees full lowly bent
     All night she watcht, ne once adowne would lay
8 Her daintie limbs in her sad dreriment,
   But praying still did wake, and waking did lament.

1 Which when his pensive lady saw from far,

pensive > apprehensive, anxious

2 Great woe and sorrow did her soul assay,

assay > assault; test, make trial of

3 As weening that the sad end of the war,

weening > supposing that > [that sight]

4 And gan to highest God entirely pray,

gan > did entirely > unreservedly; or: inwardly (cf. e.g. 408.23:9)

5 That feared chance from her to turn away; 6 With folded hands, and knees full lowly bent,

full > very

7 All night she watched, nor once adown would lay

adown > down

8 Her dainty limbs in her sad dreariment,

dainty > {Delightful; of delicate beauty} dreariment > affliction, melancholy

9 But praying still did wake, and waking did lament.

still > continually

111.33

   The morrow next gan early to appeare,
2 That Titan rose to runne his daily race;
     But early ere the morrow next gan reare
4 Out of the sea faire Titans deawy face,
     Vp rose the gentle virgin from her place,
6 And looked all about, if she might spy
     Her loued knight to moue his manly pace:
8 For she had great doubt of his safety,
   Since late she saw him fall before his enemy.

1 The morrow next began early to appear, 2 That Titan rose to run his daily race;

That > [So that; when] race > journey

3 But early, ere the morrow next gan rear

gan > did

4 Out of the sea fair Titan's dewy face, 5 Up rose the gentle virgin from her place,

gentle > gentle; noble

6 And looked all about, if she might spy

if > [in the hope that]

7 Her beloved knight to move his manly pace:

to move > [moving]

8 For she had great doubt of his safety,

doubt of > fear for

9 Since late she saw him fall before his enemy.

late > recently

111.34

   At last she saw, where he vpstarted braue
2 Out of the well, wherein he drenched lay;
     As Eagle fresh out of the Ocean waue,
4 Where he hath left his plumes all hoary gray,
     And deckt himselfe with feathers youthly gay,
6 Like Eyas hauke vp mounts vnto the skies,
     His newly budded pineons to assay,
8 And marueiles at himselfe, still as he flies:
   So new this new-borne knight to battell new did rise.

1 At last she saw where he upstarted brave

upstarted > started up brave > brave; splendid; and adv.

2 Out of the well wherein he drenched lay;

well > {Spring, spring with supernatural powers} drenched > bathed

3 As eagle, fresh out of the ocean wave

eagle > (Described in many medieval bestiaries as renewing itself by submersion in water)

4 (Where he has left his plumes all hoary grey, 5 And decked himself with feathers youthly gay), 6 Like eyas hawk up mounts to the skies,

eyas > {A young hawk from the nest; one not fully trained}

7 His newly-budded pinions to assay,

assay > test, try out

8 And marvels at himself still as he flies:

still > continually

9 So new this new-born knight to battle new did rise.

111.35

   Whom when the damned feend so fresh did +spy,+
2 No wonder if he wondred at the sight,
     And doubted, whether his late enemy
4 It were, or other new supplied knight.
     +He, now+ to proue his late renewed might,
6 High brandishing his bright deaw-burning blade,
     Vpon his crested scalpe so sore did smite,
8 That to the scull a yawning wound it made:
   The deadly dint his dulled senses all dismaid.

1 spy, > spy. 1596 5 He, now > He now, 1590

1 Whom when the damned fiend so fresh did spy, 2 No wonder if he wondered at the sight,

wondered > marvelled

3 And doubted whether his late enemy

doubted > doubted; feared late > former

4 It were, or other new-supplied knight. 5 He now, to prove his lately renewed might, 6 High brandishing his bright dew-burning blade,

burning > glittering (see 111.36:2)

7 Upon his crested scalp so sore did smite,

scalp > crown of the head, cranium

8 That to the skull a yawning wound it made: 9 The deadly dint his dulled senses all dismayed.

dint > blow, impact

111.36

   I wote not, whether the reuenging steele
2 Were hardned with that holy water dew,
     Wherein he fell, or sharper edge did feele,
4 Or his baptized hands now greater grew;
     Or other secret vertue did ensew;
6 Else neuer could the force of fleshly arme,
     Ne molten mettall in his bloud embrew:
8 For till that stownd could neuer wight him harme,
   By subtilty, nor slight, nor might, nor mighty charme.

1 I wot not whether the revenging steel

wot > know

2 Were hardened with that holy water dew

dew > dew (sb.); also: due, merited, belonging by right

3 Wherein he fell, or sharper edge did feel, 4 Or his baptized hands now greater grew; 5 Or other secret virtue did ensue;

virtue > power ensue > result [from his immersion]

6 Else never could the force of fleshly arm,

Else > Otherwise

7 Nor molten metal in his blood imbrue:

imbrue > steep (i.e. even molten metal could not be steeped in the dragon's blood)

8 For till that stound could never wight him harm

stound > {Moment; time of trial or pain} wight > person, mortal

9 By subtlety, nor sleight, nor might, nor mighty charm.

charm > magic spell

111.37

   The cruell wound enraged him so sore,
2 That loud he +yelded+ for exceeding paine;
     As hundred ramping Lyons seem'd to rore,
4 Whom rauenous hunger did thereto constraine:
     Then gan he tosse aloft his stretched traine,
6 And therewith scourge the buxome aire so sore,
     That to his force to yeelden it was faine;
8 Ne ought his sturdie strokes might stand afore,
   That high trees ouerthrew, and rocks in peeces tore.

2 yelded > yelled 1609; yelped dub. conj. Smith

1 The cruel wound enraged him so sore, 2 That loud he yelled for exceeding pain; 3 As hundred ramping lions seemed to roar,

ramping > rearing

4 Whom ravenous hunger did thereto constrain:

thereto > to that [roaring]

5 Then gan he toss aloft his stretched train,

gan > did train > tail

6 And therewith scourge the buxom air so sore,

therewith > with it buxom > yielding, pliant

7 That to his force to yield it was fain;

fain > obliged

8 Neither aught his sturdy strokes might stand before,

aught > anything sturdy > recklessly violent might stand before > could withstand

9 That high trees overthrew, and rocks in pieces tore.

111.38

   The same aduauncing high aboue his head,
2 With sharpe intended sting so rude him smot,
     That to the earth him droue, as stricken dead,
4 Ne liuing wight would haue him life behot:
     The mortall sting his angry needle shot
6 Quite through his shield, and in his shoulder seasd,
     Where fast it stucke, ne would there out be got:
8 The griefe thereof him wondrous sore diseasd,
   Ne might his ranckling paine with patience be appeasd.

1 The same advancing high above his head,

The same > [His tail] advancing > raising

2 With sharp intended sting so rude him smote,

intended > extended; intended rude > violently, roughly

3 That to the earth him drove, as stricken dead; 4 No living wight would have him life behight:

wight > person behight > {Held out hope of}

5 The mortal sting its angry needle shot 6 Quite through his shield, and in his shoulder seized,

seized > fastened, fixed itself (SUS)

7 Where fast it stuck, nor would thereout be got:

fast > firmly thereout > thence

8 The grief thereof him wondrous sore diseased,

grief > pain diseased > "dis-eased", discomforted, distressed, tormented

9 Nor might his rankling pain with patience be appeased.

111.39

   But yet more mindfull of his honour deare,
2 Then of the grieuous smart, which him did wring,
     From loathed soile he can him lightly reare,
4 And stroue to loose the farre infixed +sting+:
     Which when in vaine he tryde with struggeling,
6 Inflam'd with wrath, his raging blade he heft,
     And strooke so strongly, that the knotty +string+
8 Of his huge taile he quite +a+ sunder cleft,
   Fiue ioynts thereof he hewd, and but the stump him left.

4 sting > string 1596, 1609 7 string > sting 1596, 1609 8 a > in 1609

1 But yet more mindful of his honour dear 2 Than of the grievous smart which him did wring,

smart > acute pain wring > rack, vex

3 From loathed soil he can him lightly rear,

can him > did himself lightly > quickly

4 And strove to loosen the far infixed sting: 5 Which when in vain he tried with struggling, 6 Inflamed with wrath, his raging blade he heft,

heft > raised

7 And struck so strongly that the knotty string 8 Of his huge tail he quite asunder cleft: 9 Five joints thereof he hewed, and but the stump him left.

but > only

111.40

   Hart cannot thinke, what outrage, and what cryes,
2 With foule enfouldred smoake and flashing fire,
     The hell-bred beast threw forth vnto the skyes,
4 That all was couered with darknesse dire:
     Then fraught with rancour, and engorged ire,
6 He cast at once him to auenge for all,
     And gathering vp himselfe out of the mire,
8 With his vneuen wings did fiercely +fall,+
   Vpon his sunne-bright shield, and gript it fast withall.

8 fall, > fall 1609

1 Heart cannot think what outrage, and what cries,

Heart > Mind

2 With foul enfouldred smoke and flashing fire,

enfouldred > {?As black as a thunder-cloud. SU; cf. 202.20:9}

3 The hell-bred beast threw forth to the skies, 4 That all was covered with darkness dire:

That > [So that]

5 Then, fraught with rancour and engorged ire,

fraught > filled engorged > swallowed; hence: internal, swelling, choking

6 He cast at once him to avenge for all,

cast > decided, resolved him > [himself] for all > [once and for all]

7 And, gathering up himself out of the mire, 8 With his uneven wings did fiercely fall

uneven > (One has been hurt)

9 Upon his sun-bright shield, and gripped it fast withal.

fast > firmly withal > notwithstanding [his pain]; as well, moreover

111.41

   Much was the man encombred with his hold,
2 In feare to lose his weapon in his paw,
     Ne wist yet, how his talants to vnfold;
4 +For+ harder was from Cerberus greedie iaw
     To plucke a bone, then from his cruell claw
6 To reaue by +strength,+ the griped gage away:
     Thrise he assayd it from his foot to draw,
8 And thrise in vaine to draw it did assay,
   It booted nought to thinke, to robbe him of his pray.

4 For > Nor 1609; cf. 506.26:5-6 6 strength, > strength 1609

1 Much was the man encumbered with his hold, 2 In fear to lose his weapon in his paw, 3 Nor wist yet how his talons to unfold;

wist > knew

4 For harder was from Cerberus' greedy jaw 5 To pluck a bone, than from his cruel claw 6 To reave by strength the gripped gage away:

reave > take gage > battle-token (cf. 104.39:5, where another shield is the gage)

7 Thrice he essayed it from his foot to draw,

essayed > attempted

8 And thrice in vain to draw it did essay; 9 It booted naught to think to rob him of his prey.

booted naught > [availed nothing, was useless]

111.42

   Tho when he saw no power might preuaile,
2 His trustie sword he cald to his last aid,
     Wherewith he fiercely did his foe assaile,
4 And double blowes about him stoutly laid,
     That glauncing fire out of the yron plaid;
6 As sparckles from the Anduile vse to fly,
     When heauie hammers on the wedge are swaid;
8 Therewith at last he forst him to vnty
   One of his grasping feete, him to defend thereby.

1 Tho, when he saw no power might prevail,

Tho > Then

2 His trusty sword he called to his last aid, 3 Wherewith he fiercely did his foe assail,

Wherewith > With which

4 And double blows about him stoutly laid,

stoutly > boldly, bravely, resolutely

5 That glancing fire out of the iron played,

That > [So that]

6 As sparkles from the anvil use to fly,

use to > observe as a custom; hence: customarily, do

7 When heavy hammers on the wedge are swayed;

wedge > {Blacksmith's tool held in tongs and used on an anvil for cutting red-hot iron; also: ingot of gold or silver} swayed > swung

8 Therewith at last he forced him to untie

Therewith > With that

9 One of his grasping feet, him to defend thereby.

him > [himself, the dragon]

111.43

   The other foot, fast fixed on his +shield+
2 Whenas no strength, nor stroks mote him constraine
     To loose, ne yet the warlike pledge to yield,
4 He smot thereat with all his might and maine,
     That nought so wondrous puissance might sustaine;
6 Vpon the ioynt the lucky steele did light,
     And made such way, that hewd it quite in twaine;
8 The paw yet missed not his minisht might,
   But hong still on the shield, as it at first was pight.

1 shield > shield, 1609

1 The other foot, fast fixed on his shield,

fast > firmly

2 When no strength, nor strokes, might him constrain 3 To loose, nor yet the warlike pledge to yield,

loose > loosen

4 He smote thereat with all his might and main,

main > force, strength

5 That naught so wondrous puissance might sustain;

so > such puissance > power, strength sustain > endure

6 Upon the joint the lucky steel did light,

light > strike; fall, alight

7 And made such way, that hewed it quite in twain;

that > [that it] twain > two

8 The paw yet missed not his minished might,

his > [the paw's or the dragon's] minished > reduced, diminished

9 But hung still on the shield, as it at first was pight.

as > [just as] pight > pitched, placed; hence: held, held down, held in place

111.44

   For griefe thereof, and diuelish despight,
2 From his infernall fournace forth he threw
     Huge flames, that dimmed all the heauens light,
4 Enrold in duskish smoke and brimstone blew;
     As burning Aetna from his boyling stew
6 Doth belch out flames, and rockes in peeces broke,
     And ragged ribs of mountaines molten new,
8 Enwrapt in coleblacke clouds and filthy smoke,
   That all the land with stench, and heauen with horror choke.

1 For grief thereof, and devilish despite,

grief > pain despite > spite, malice

2 From his infernal furnace forth he threw 3 Huge flames that dimmed all the heavens' light, 4 Enrolled in duskish smoke and brimstone blue;

blue > {Burning without redness, as a candle is said to do in the presence of ghosts, death, or Satan}

5 As burning Etna from its boiling stew

Etna > (The volcano in Sicily, which was very active in the 16th century; see also Aen. 3.571-7) stew > cauldron

6 Does belch out flames, and rocks in pieces broken, 7 And ragged ribs of mountains molten new, 8 Enwrapped in coal-black clouds and filthy smoke, 9 That all the land with stench, and heaven with horror, choke.

111.45

   The heate whereof, and harmefull pestilence
2 So sore him noyd, that forst him to retire
     A little backward for his best defence,
4 To saue his bodie from the scorching fire,
     Which he from hellish entrailes did expire.
6 It chaunst (eternall God that chaunce did guide)
     As he recoyled backward, in the mire
8 His nigh forwearied feeble feet did slide,
   And downe he fell, with dread of shame sore terrifide.

1 The heat whereof, and harmful pestilence,

whereof > of which pestilence > noxiousness

2 So sore him noyed, that forced him to retire

noyed > vexed, harassed; injured that > [that it]

3 A little backward for his best defence, 4 To save his body from the scorching fire, 5 Which he from hellish entrails did expire.

he > [the dragon] expire > exhale

6 It chanced (eternal God that chance did guide) 7 As he recoiled backward, in the mire 8 His nigh forwearied feeble feet did slide,

forwearied > exhausted

9 And down he fell, with dread of shame sore terrified.

111.46

   There grew a goodly tree him faire beside,
2 Loaden with fruit and apples rosie red,
     As they in pure vermilion had beene dide,
4 Whereof great vertues ouer all were red:
     For happie life to all, which thereon fed,
6 And life eke euerlasting did befall:
     Great God it planted in that blessed sted
8 With his almightie hand, and did it call
   +The tree of life+, the crime of our first fathers fall.

9 The tree of life > The tree of life 1609; cf. 111.29:9

1 There grew a goodly tree him fair beside,

goodly > fine, beautiful (cf. Gen. 2.9, Rev. 2.7) fair > becomingly; favourably, luckily; plainly to be seen

2 Loaded with fruit and apples rosy red, 3 As they in pure vermilion had been dyed,

As > [As though] vermilion > {Scarlet-giving pigment, esp. cinnabar or red crystalline mercuric sulphide, used as a dye}

4 Whereof great virtues over all were read:

Whereof > Of which virtues > powers over all > everywhere read > discerned; made known

5 For happy life to all who thereon fed,

happy > fortunate; happy

6 And life eke everlasting, did befall:

eke > also, moreover

7 Great God it planted in that blessed stead

stead > place

8 With His almighty hand, and did it call 9 "The Tree of Life", the crime of our first father's fall.

crime > cause of accusation (in Gen. 3.22-4, Adam, having disobediently eaten (3.6-7) from the tree of knowledge, was banished by God from the Garden of Eden for fear that he would also taste the fruit of the tree of life. Adam thus laid himself open to the accusation of his descendants that he had denied them the opportunity to dwell in the Garden of Eden)

111.47

   In all the world like was not to be found,
2 Saue in that soile, where all good things did grow,
     And freely sprong out of the fruitfull ground,
4 As incorrupted Nature did them sow,
     Till that dread Dragon all did ouerthrow.
6 Another like faire tree eke grew thereby,
     Whereof who so did eat, eftsoones did know
8 Both good and ill: O mornefull memory:
   That tree through one mans fault hath doen vs all to dy.

1 In all the world like was not to be found,

like > [the like]

2 Save in that soil, where all good things did grow, 3 And freely sprung out of the fruitful ground, 4 As incorrupted Nature did them sow,

incorrupted > pure, sound, uncorrupted

5 Till that dread dragon all did overthrow. 6 Another like fair tree eke grew thereby,

Another > (The tree of the knowledge of good and evil: see Gen. 2.9-17) like > similar, similarly eke > also

7 Whereof whosoever did eat, eftsoons did know

Whereof > Of which eftsoons > forthwith

8 Both good and ill: O mournful memory:

memory > recollection, remembrance; written memorial record (that is, these lines of FQ)

9 That tree through one man's fault has done us all to die.

done > caused

111.48

   From that first tree forth flowd, as from a well,
2 A trickling streame of Balme, most soueraine
     And daintie deare, which on the ground still fell,
4 And ouerflowed all the fertill plaine,
     As it had deawed bene with timely raine:
6 Life and long health that gratious ointment gaue,
     And deadly woundes could +heale+ and reare againe
8 The senselesse corse appointed for the graue.
   Into that same he fell: which did from death him saue.

7 heale > heale, 1590, 1609

1 From that first tree forth flowed, as from a well,

well > {Spring, spring with supernatural powers}

2 A trickling stream of balm, most sovereign

sovereign > supremely efficacious

3 And dainty dear, which on the ground still fell,

dainty dear > preciously rare still > continually

4 And overflowed all the fertile plain, 5 As it had dewed been with timely rain:

As > [As though] timely > seasonal; seasonable, opportune

6 Life and long health that gracious ointment gave,

gracious > [imbued with heavenly grace]

7 And deadly wounds could heal, and rear again 8 The senseless corse appointed for the grave.

corse > body appointed > made ready

9 Into that same he fell: which did from death him save.

111.49

   For nigh thereto the euer damned beast
2 Durst not approch, for he was deadly made,
     And all that life preserued, did detest:
4 Yet he it oft aduentur'd to inuade.
     By this the drouping day-light gan to fade,
6 And yeeld his roome to sad succeeding night,
     Who with her sable mantle gan to shade
8 The face of earth, and wayes of liuing wight,
   And high her burning torch set vp in heauen bright.

1 For nigh thereto the ever-damned beast

thereto > to that

2 Dared not approach, for he was deadly made,

deadly > [of death]

3 And all that life preserved did detest: 4 Yet he it often adventured to invade.

adventured > ventured invade > enter (SUS)

5 By this the drooping daylight began to fade,

By this > By this time

6 And yield its room to sad succeeding Night,

room > place, space sad > dark, dismal Night > (Nox; see 105.20 ff.)

7 Who with her sable mantle began to shade 8 The face of earth, and ways of living wight,

wight > creature, being, person

9 And high her burning torch set up in heaven bright.

her burning torch > [the moon]

111.50

   When gentle Vna saw the second fall
2 Of her deare knight, who wearie of long fight,
     And faint through losse of bloud, mou'd not at all,
4 But lay as in a dreame of deepe delight,
     Besmeard with pretious Balme, whose vertuous might
6 Did heale his wounds, and scorching heat alay,
     Againe she stricken was with sore affright,
8 And for his safetie gan deuoutly pray;
   And watch the noyous night, and wait for ioyous day.

1 When gentle Una saw the second fall

gentle > noble; gentle

2 Of her dear knight (who, weary of long fight, 3 And faint through loss of blood, moved not at all, 4 But lay as in a dream of deep delight, 5 Besmeared with precious balm, whose virtuous might

virtuous > {Having "virtue" or healing power}

6 Did heal his wounds, and scorching heat allay), 7 Again she stricken was with sore fright, 8 And for his safety gan devoutly pray;

gan > did; began to

9 And watch the noyous night, and wait for joyous day.

watch > [keep watch on] noyous > irksome, vexatious

111.51

   The ioyous day gan early to appeare,
2 And faire Aurora from +the+ deawy bed
     Of aged Tithone gan her selfe to reare,
4 With rosie cheekes, for shame as blushing red;
     Her golden lockes for haste were loosely shed
6 About her eares, when Vna her did marke
     Clymbe to her charet, all with flowers +spred;+
8 From heauen high to chase the chearelesse +darke,+
   With merry note her loud salutes the mounting larke.

2 the > her 1596, 1609 7 spred; > spred, conj. Smith 8 darke, > darke; conj. Smith

1 The joyous day began early to appear, 2 And fair Aurora from the dewy bed

Aurora > (Cf. 102.7: the two dawns mark the essential beginning and end of the knight's spiritual journey)

3 Of aged Tithonus began herself to rear, 4 With rosy cheeks, for shame as blushing red;

for shame as > [as though for shame]

5 Her golden locks for haste were loosely shed 6 About her ears, when Una her did mark

her > [Aurora] mark > see, notice

7 Climb to her chariot, all with flowers spread,

chariot > (Conflating Aurora with Phoebus Apollo, god of the sun, who each day drives his chariot across the sky)

8 From heaven high to chase the cheerless dark; 9 With merry note her loud salutes the mounting lark.

merry > delightful, charming

111.52

   Then freshly vp arose the doughtie knight,
2 All healed of his hurts and woundes wide,
     And did himselfe to battell readie dight;
4 Whose early foe awaiting him beside
     To haue deuourd, so soone as day he spyde,
6 When now he saw himselfe so freshly reare,
     As if late fight had nought him damnifyde,
8 He woxe dismayd, and gan his fate to feare;
   Nathlesse with wonted rage he him aduaunced neare.

1 Then freshly up arose the doughty knight, 2 All healed of his hurts and wounds wide, 3 And did himself to battle ready dight;

dight > prepare, arrange

4 Whose early foe (awaiting him beside

awaiting > keeping watch

5 To have devoured so soon as day he spied),

To > [In order to] so > [him as] day > [daylight] he > [the dragon]

6 When now he saw himself so freshly rear,

he > [the dragon] himself > [the knight]

7 As if late fight had naught him damnified,

late > [the] recent naught > not at all damnified > injured

8 He waxed dismayed, and began his fate to fear;

He waxed > [The dragon] grew

9 Natheless with wonted rage he him advanced near.

Natheless > Nevertheless wonted > customary

111.53

   And in his first encounter, gaping wide,
2 He thought attonce him to haue swallowd quight,
     And rusht vpon him with outragious pride;
4 Who him r'encountring fierce, as hauke in flight,
     Perforce rebutted backe. The weapon bright
6 Taking aduantage of his open iaw,
     Ran through his mouth with so importune might,
8 That deepe emperst his darksome hollow maw,
   And back retyrd, his life bloud forth with all did draw.

1 And in his first encounter, gaping wide, 2 He thought at once him to have swallowed quite,

at once > at once; at one time; hence: in one mouthful

3 And rushed upon him with outrageous pride;

outrageous > intemperate, excessively fierce

4 Who, him rencountering fierce, as hawk in flight,

rencountering > colliding with; coming into hostile contact with

5 Perforce rebutted back. The weapon bright,

Perforce > By force

6 Taking advantage of his open jaw, 7 Ran through his mouth with so importune might

so importune > such grievous

8 That deep empierced his darksome hollow maw,

That > [That it] empierced > transfixed

9 And, back retired, his life-blood forth withal did draw.

withal > with that, hence: with the sword

111.54

   So downe he fell, and forth his life did breath,
2 That vanisht into smoke and cloudes swift;
     So downe he fell, that th'earth him vnderneath
4 Did grone, as feeble so great load to lift;
     So downe he fell, as an huge rockie clift,
6 Whose false foundation waues haue washt away,
     With dreadfull +poyse+ is from the mayneland rift,
8 And rolling downe, great Neptune doth dismay;
   So downe he fell, and like an heaped mountaine lay.

7 poyse > noyse conj. Morris

1 So down he fell, and forth his life did breathe, 2 That vanished into smoke and clouds swift; 3 So down he fell, that the earth him underneath

that > [so that]

4 Did groan, as feeble, so great load to lift;

so > [such a]

5 So down he fell, as a huge rocky cliff, 6 Whose false foundation waves have washed away,

false > (Required by the allegory: cf. 104.5:4, 108.23:4)

7 With dreadful poise is from the mainland rived,

poise > weight, gravity

8 And, rolling down, great Neptune does dismay;

Neptune > (See Rev. 21.1)

9 So down he fell, and like a heaped mountain lay.

111.55

   The knight himselfe euen trembled at his fall,
2 So huge and horrible a masse it seem'd;
     And his deare Ladie, that beheld it all,
4 Durst not approch for dread, which she misdeem'd,
     But yet at last, when as the direfull feend
6 She saw not stirre, off-shaking vaine affright,
     She nigher drew, and saw that ioyous end:
8 Then God she praysd, and thankt her faithfull knight,
   That had atchieu'd so great a conquest by his might.

1 The knight himself even trembled at his fall, 2 So huge and horrible a mass it seemed; 3 And his dear lady, that beheld it all, 4 Dared not approach for dread, which she misdeemed,

misdeemed > [had conceived through misjudgement]

5 But yet at last, when the direful fiend

direful > terrible, dreadful

6 She saw not stir, off-shaking vain affright,

off-shaking > shaking off vain > frail, weak; futile; foolish affright > terror

7 She nigher drew, and saw that joyous end: 8 Then God she praised, and thanked her faithful knight, 9 That had achieved so great a conquest by his might.

his > his; His (see 201.33:2-3)

CANTO XII

   Faire Vna to the Redcrosse knight
2 betrouthed is with ioy:
   Though false Duessa it to barre
4 her false sleights doe imploy.

1 Fair Una to the Redcross Knight 2 betrothed is with joy: 3 Though false Duessa, it to bar,

bar > debar, prevent

4 her false sleights does employ.

sleights > ruses, stratagems

112.1

   BEhold I see the hauen nigh at hand,
2 To which I meane my wearie course to bend;
     Vere the maine shete, and beare vp with the land,
4 The which afore is fairely to be kend,
     And seemeth safe from stormes, that may offend;
6 There this faire virgin wearie of her way
     Must landed be, now at her iourneyes end:
8 There eke my feeble barke a while may stay,
   Till merry wind and weather call her thence away.

1 Behold, I see the haven nigh at hand, 2 To which I mean my weary course to bend; 3 Veer the main sheet, and bear up with the land,

Veer > Let out main sheet > {Mainsail; rope or chain attached to this and used for adjusting its inclination or volume} bear up with > [allowing the ship to run before the wind, steer towards]

4 Which afore is fairly to be kenned,

afore > in front; hence: ahead fairly > well; beautifully; actually, really kenned > seen, descried

5 And seems safe from storms that may offend;

offend > attack, harm, do damage

6 There this fair virgin, weary of her way, 7 Must landed be, now at her journey's end: 8 There eke my feeble bark awhile may stay,

eke > also bark > vessel

9 Till merry wind and weather call her thence away.

merry > pleasant

112.2

   Scarsely had Ph{oe}bus in the glooming East
2 Yet harnessed his firie-footed teeme,
     Ne reard aboue the earth his flaming creast,
4 When the last deadly smoke aloft did steeme,
     That signe of last outbreathed life did seeme,
6 Vnto the watchman on the castle wall;
     Who thereby dead that balefull Beast did deeme,
8 And to his Lord and Ladie lowd gan call,
   To tell, how he had seene the Dragons fatall +fall.+

9 fall. > fall, 1590, 1596

1 Scarcely had Phoebus in the glooming east

glooming > gloaming, becoming light; louring; scowling

2 Yet harnessed his fiery-footed team,

team > (Of horses pulling his chariot across the sky)

3 Nor reared above the earth his flaming crest, 4 When the last deadly smoke aloft did steam, 5 That sign of last outbreathed life did seem

sign > [a sign, the sign]

6 To the watchman on the castle wall; 7 Who thereby dead that baleful beast did deem, 8 And to his lord and lady loud gan call,

gan > did

9 To tell how he had seen the dragon's fatal fall.

fatal > fatal; also: destined, ordained by fate

112.3

   Vprose with hastie ioy, and feeble speed
2 That aged Sire, the Lord of all that land,
     And looked forth, to weet, if true indeede
4 Those tydings were, as he did vnderstand,
     Which whenas true by tryall he out +found+,
6 He bad to open wyde his brazen gate,
     Which long time had bene shut, and out of hond
8 Proclaymed ioy and peace through all his state;
   For dead now was their foe, which them forrayed late.

5 found > fond 1590

1 Uprose with hasty joy, and feeble speed 2 That aged sire, the lord of all that land,

sire > elderly man, father

3 And looked forth, to weet if true indeed

weet > find out

4 Those tidings were, as he did understand: 5 Which when true by trial he out found,

trial > inquiry, ascertaining the facts; seeing [for himself]

6 He bade to open wide his brazen gate, 7 Which long time had been shut, and out of hand

out of hand > straight away

8 Proclaimed joy and peace through all his state; 9 For dead now was their foe, which them forayed late.

forayed late > [had] recently pillaged

112.4

   Then gan triumphant Trompets sound on hie,
2 That sent to heauen the ecchoed report
     Of their new ioy, and happie victorie
4 Gainst him, that had them long opprest with tort,
     And fast imprisoned in sieged fort.
6 Then all the people, as in solemne feast,
     To him assembled with one full consort,
8 Reioycing at the fall of that great beast,
   From whose eternall bondage now they were releast.

1 Then gan triumphant trumpets sound on high,

gan > did

2 That sent to heaven the echoed report 3 Of their new joy, and happy victory 4 Against him, that had them long oppressed with tort,

tort > wrong; injury

5 And fast imprisoned in besieged fort.

fast > securely

6 Then all the people, as in solemn feast,

solemn > {Sacred, having a religious character} feast > festival, festivity, rejoicing

7 To him assembled with one full consort,

consort > consent, accord; company, assembly

8 Rejoicing at the fall of that great beast, 9 From whose eternal bondage now they were released.

112.5

   Forth came that auncient Lord and aged Queene,
2 Arayd in antique robes downe to the ground,
     And sad habiliments right well beseene;
4 A noble crew about them waited round
     Of sage and sober Peres, all grauely gownd;
6 Whom farre before did march a goodly band
     Of tall young men, all hable armes to sownd,
8 But now they laurell braunches bore in hand;
   Glad signe of victorie and peace in all their land.

1 Forth came that ancient lord and aged queen,

lord > [Adam] queen > [Eve]

2 Arrayed in antique robes down to the ground, 3 And sad habiliments right well beseen;

sad habiliments > sober-coloured clothing right > very well beseen > good-looking, attractive

4 A noble crew about them waited round 5 Of sage and sober peers, all gravely gowned;

peers > nobles gravely > [in a grave and dignified manner]

6 Whom far before did march a goodly band

goodly > well-favoured; courteous

7 Of tall young men, all able arms to sound,

tall > tall; handsome; valiant, doughty arms > arms, weapons; or perhaps, though less likely in view of "But now" at line 8: feats of arms sound > clash, wield in battle; or perhaps, though less likely in view of "But now" at line 8: celebrate, proclaim, make known

8 But now they laurel branches bore in hand;

laurel > (Used to make a wreath for conquerors)

9 Glad sign of victory and peace in all their land.

sign > emblem

112.6

   Vnto that doughtie Conquerour they came,
2 And him before themselues prostrating low,
     Their Lord and Patrone loud did him proclame,
4 And at his feet their laurell boughes did throw.
     Soone after them all dauncing on a row
6 The comely virgins came, with girlands dight,
     As fresh as flowres in medow greene do grow,
8 When morning deaw vpon their leaues doth light:
   And in their hands sweet Timbrels all vpheld on hight.

1 To that doughty conqueror they came, 2 And him before themselves prostrating low, 3 Their lord and patron loud did him proclaim,

patron > champion, protector; patron saint

4 And at his feet their laurel boughs did throw. 5 Soon after them, all dancing on a row,

on > in

6 The comely virgins came, with garlands dight,

dight > arranged, dressed; hence: hung, decked

7 As fresh as flowers in meadow green do grow, 8 When morning dew upon their leaves does light:

light > alight; give light, twinkle

9 And in their hands sweet timbrels all upheld on high.

timbrel > tambourine (or similar percussion instrument)

112.7

   And them before, the fry of children young
2 Their wanton sports and childish mirth did play,
     And to the Maydens sounding +tymbrels+ +sung+
4 In well attuned notes, a ioyous lay,
     And made delightfull musicke all the way,
6 Vntill they came, where that faire virgin stood;
     As faire Diana in fresh sommers +day,+
8 Beholdes her Nymphes, enraung'd in shadie wood,
   Some wrestle, some do run, some bathe in christall flood.

3 tymbrels > tymbrel 1590 3 sung > song 1590 7 day, > day 1609

1 And them before, the fry of children young 2 Their wanton sports and childish mirth did play,

wanton sports > frisky games mirth > sport; diversion, entertainment

3 And to the maidens sounding timbrels sang,

timbrel > tambourine (or similar percussion instrument)

4 In well attuned notes, a joyous lay,

lay > song

5 And made delightful music all the way,
6 Until they came where that fair virgin stood;
7 As fair Diana in fresh summer's day
8 Beholds her nymphs, enranged in shady wood:

enranged > ranging

9 Some wrestle, some do run, some bathe in crystal flood.

flood > river, stream

112.8

   So she beheld those maydens meriment
2 With chearefull vew; who when to her they came,
     Themselues to ground with gratious humblesse bent,
4 And her ador'd by honorable name,
     Lifting to heauen her euerlasting fame:
6 Then on her head they set a girland greene,
     And crowned her twixt earnest and twixt game;
8 Who in her selfe-resemblance and well beseene,
   Did seeme such, as she was, a goodly maiden Queene.

1 So she beheld those maidens' merriment 2 With cheerful view; who when to her they came, 3 Themselves to ground with gracious humblesse bent,

humblesse > humbleness, humility

4 And her adored by honourable name,

by honourable name > by giving her honourable titles; by name (her name being honourable)

5 Lifting to heaven her everlasting fame: 6 Then on her head they set a garland green, 7 And crowned her 'twixt earnest and 'twixt game; 8 Who, in her self resemblance and well beseen,

self resemblance > trueness to herself well beseen > beauty (beseen = arranged; well beseen = good-looking: cf. 112.5:3)

9 Did seem such as she was: a goodly maiden queen.

goodly > beautiful; gracious

112.9

   And +after,+ all the raskall many ran,
2 Heaped together in rude rablement,
     To see the face of that victorious man:
4 Whom all admired, as from heauen sent,
     And gazd vpon with gaping wonderment.
6 But when they came, where that dead Dragon lay,
     Stretcht on the ground in +monstrous+ large extent,
8 The sight with idle feare did them dismay,
   Ne durst approch him nigh, to touch, or once assay.

1 after, > after 1590 7 monstrous > monstrons 1596

1 And after, all the rascal many ran,

rascal > rabble (adj.) many > [many people; hence: multitude]

2 Heaped together in rude rabblement,

rude > [a] rough, clumsy; simple, uneducated rabblement > tumult

3 To see the face of that victorious man: 4 Whom all admired, as from heaven sent,

admired > [viewed with wonder or surprise; admired]

5 And gazed upon with gaping wonderment. 6 But when they came where that dead dragon lay, 7 Stretched on the ground in monstrous large extent, 8 The sight with idle fear did them dismay:

idle > empty, baseless; weak-headed

9 None dared approach him nigh, to touch, or once assay.

assay > test; hence: find out whether the dragon was still alive

112.10

   Some feard, and fled; some feard and well it faynd;
2 One that would wiser seeme, then all the rest,
     Warnd him not touch, for yet perhaps remaynd
4 Some lingring life within his hollow brest,
     Or in his wombe might lurke some hidden nest
6 Of many Dragonets, his fruitfull seed;
     Another said, that in his eyes did rest
8 Yet sparckling fire, and bad thereof take heed;
   Another said, he saw him moue his eyes indeed.

1 Some feared, and fled; some feared and well it feigned;

feigned > concealed (SUS)

2 One, that would wiser seem than all the rest, 3 Warned him not touch, for yet perhaps remained

touch > [to touch]

4 Some lingering life within his hollow breast, 5 Or in his womb might lurk some hidden nest 6 Of many dragonets, his fruitful seed;

fruitful seed > abundant offspring

7 Another said that in his eyes did rest 8 Yet sparkling fire, and bade thereof take heed; 9 Another said, he saw him move his eyes indeed.

112.11

   One mother, when as her foolehardie chyld
2 Did come too neare, and with his talants play,
     Halfe dead through feare, her litle babe reuyld,
4 And to her +gossips+ gan in counsell say;
     How can I tell, but that his +talants+ may
6 Yet scratch my sonne, or rend his tender hand?
     So diuersly themselues in vaine they fray;
8 Whiles some more bold, to measure him nigh stand,
   To proue how many acres he did spread of land.

4 gossips > gossibs 1590 5 talants > talents 1590 etc.: FE

1 One mother, when her foolhardy child
2 Did come too near, and with his talons play,
3 Half dead through fear, her little babe reviled,
4 And to her gossips gan in counsel say:

gossips > friends, woman-friends gan > did in counsel > in private, in confidence

5 "How can I tell, but that his talons may 6 Yet scratch my son, or rend his tender hand?" 7 So diversely themselves in vain they fray;

diversely > variously; also: distractingly (SUS) in vain > in vain; foolishly; profanely, without understanding (cf. 106.19:6) fray > frighten

8 While some, more bold, to measure him nigh stand, 9 To prove how many acres he did spread of land.

112.12

   Thus flocked all the folke him round about,
2 The whiles that hoarie king, with all his traine,
     Being arriued, where that champion stout
4 After his foes defeasance did remaine,
     Him goodly greetes, and faire does entertaine,
6 With princely gifts of yuorie and gold,
     And thousand thankes him yeelds for all his paine.
8 Then when his daughter deare he does behold,
   Her dearely doth imbrace, and kisseth manifold.

1 Thus flocked all the folk him round about, 2 The whiles that hoary king, with all his train

The whiles > Meanwhile hoary > {Grey-haired with age; ancient}

3 (Being arrived where that champion stout

stout > bold, brave

4 After his foe's defeasance did remain),

defeasance > undoing, ruin; also: rendering null and void (of a condition, right, etc.: a legal term)

5 Him goodly greets, and fair does entertain,

goodly greets > courteously congratulates, courteously greets fair > fittingly entertain > receive; hence: greet

6 With princely gifts of ivory and gold, 7 And thousand thanks him yields for all his pain.

pain > effort, pains; pain

8 Then when his daughter dear he does behold, 9 Her dearly does embrace, and kisses manifold.

manifold > many times; in many ways

112.13

   And after to his Pallace he them brings,
2 With shaumes, and trompets, and with Clarions sweet;
     And all the way the ioyous people sings,
4 And with their garments strowes the paued street:
     Whence mounting vp, they find purueyance meet
6 Of all, that royall Princes court became,
     And all the floore was vnderneath their feet
8 Bespred with costly scarlot of great name,
   On which they lowly sit, and fitting purpose frame.

1 And after to his palace he them brings, 2 With shawms, and trumpets, and with clarions sweet;

shawm > {Ancient instrument rather like an oboe} clarion > {Shrill trumpet with a narrow tube}

3 And all the way the joyous people sings, 4 And with their garments strews the paved street: 5 Whence, mounting up, they find purveyance meet

purveyance > victuals, provisions meet > fitting, suitable

6 Of all that royal prince's court became,

Of all > [Of all things, of all provisions] royal > [a royal] became > suited, was appropriate to

7 And all the floor was underneath their feet 8 Bespread with costly scarlet of great name,

scarlet > {A rich kind of cloth, usually red or orange in colour} name > reputation, value

9 On which they lowly sit, and fitting purpose frame.

purpose > discourse, conversation; questions

112.14

   What needs me tell their feast and goodly guize,
2 In which was nothing riotous nor vaine?
     What needes of daintie dishes to deuize,
4 Of comely seruices, or courtly trayne?
     My narrow leaues cannot in them containe
6 The large discourse of royall Princes state.
     Yet was their manner then but bare and plaine:
8 For th'antique world excesse and pride did hate;
   Such proud luxurious pompe is swollen vp but late.

1 What needs me tell their feast and goodly guise,

needs me tell > need do I have to describe goodly > gracious, courteous; attractive guise > behaviour, demeanour

2 In which was nothing riotous nor vain?

vain > vain; foolish

3 What needs of dainty dishes to devise,

dainty > choice, delicious devise > talk, recount

4 Of comely services, or courtly train?

services > {The act of waiting at table; the manner in which this is done; also: the courses served}

5 My narrow leaves cannot in them contain 6 The large discourse of royal prince's state.

large discourse of > [necessarily] broad disquisition upon

7 Yet was their manner then but bare and plain: 8 For the antique world excess and pride did hate;

antique > ancient

9 Such proud luxurious pomp is swollen up but late.

luxurious > outrageous, extravagant; lascivious late > recently

112.15

   Then when with meates and drinkes of euery kinde
2 Their feruent appetites they quenched had,
     That auncient Lord gan fit occasion finde,
4 Of straunge aduentures, and of perils sad,
     Which in his trauell him befallen had,
6 For to demaund of his renowmed guest:
     Who then with vtt'rance graue, and count'nance sad,
8 From point to point, as is before exprest,
   Discourst his voyage long, according his request.

1 Then, when with meats and drinks of every kind 2 Their fervent appetites they quenched had, 3 That ancient lord gan fit occasion find

gan > did

4 Of strange adventures, and of perils sad,

Of > [An account of] sad > grievous

5 Which in his travel him befallen had, 6 To demand of his renowned guest:

demand > request (the modern sense is rather too strong)

7 Who then with utterance grave, and countenance sad,

sad > sober

8 From point to point, as is before expressed, 9 Discoursed his voyage long, according his request.

Discoursed > Told of voyage > journey according > granting

112.16

   Great +pleasure+ mixt with pittifull regard,
2 That godly King and Queene did passionate,
     Whyles they his pittifull aduentures heard,
4 That oft they did lament his lucklesse state,
     And often blame the too importune fate,
6 That heapd on him so many wrathfull wreakes:
     For neuer gentle knight, as he of late,
8 So tossed was in fortunes cruell freakes;
   And all the while salt teares bedeawd the hearers cheaks.

1 pleasure > pleasures 1596, 1609

1 Great pleasure mixed with pitiful regard 2 That godly king and queen did passionate,

passionate > {Excite or imbue with passion; express with passion}

3 While they his pitiful adventures heard, 4 That oft they did lament his luckless state,

That > [So that]

5 And often blame the too importune fate

blame > reprove importune > grievous

6 That heaped on him so many wrathful wreaks:

wreaks > {Vindictive or vengeful acts (mainly northern dialect)}

7 For never gentle knight, as he of late,

gentle > noble; gentle

8 So tossed was in Fortune's cruel freaks;

in > [by] freaks > whims, vagaries

9 And all the while salt tears bedewed the hearers' cheeks.

112.17

   Then said +the+ royall Pere in sober wise;
2 Deare Sonne, great beene the euils, which ye bore
     From first to last in your late enterprise,
4 That I note, whether prayse, or pitty more:
     For neuer liuing man, I weene, so sore
6 In sea of deadly daungers was distrest;
     But +since+ now safe ye seised haue the shore,
8 And well arriued are, (high God be blest)
   Let vs deuize of ease and euerlasting rest.

1 the > that 1590 7 since > sith 1609

1 Then said the royal peer in sober wise:

peer > nobleman wise > manner

2 "Dear son, great been the evils which you bore

great been > [so] great were

3 From first to last in your late enterprise,

late > recent

4 That I no'te whether praise or pity more:

no'te > know not praise > [to praise] pity > [to pity you]

5 For never living man, I ween, so sore

ween > think, believe

6 In sea of deadly dangers was distressed; 7 But since now safe you seized have the shore,

seized > reached, gained

8 And well arrived are (high God be blessed), 9 Let us devise of ease and everlasting rest."

devise > talk

112.18

   Ah dearest Lord, said then that doughty knight,
2 Of ease or rest I may not yet deuize;
     For by the faith, which I to armes haue plight,
4 I bounden am streight after this emprize,
     As that your daughter can ye well aduize,
6 Backe to returne to that great Faerie Queene,
     And her to serue six yeares in warlike wize,
8 Gainst that proud +Paynim+ king, that workes her teene:
   Therefore I ought craue pardon, till I there haue beene.

8 Paynim > Pynim 1596

1 "Ah dearest lord," said then that doughty knight, 2 "Of ease or rest I may not yet devise;

devise > talk

3 For by the faith which I to arms have plight,

plight > pledged

4 I bound am straight after this emprise

straight > straight; strictly emprise > enterprise, undertaking

5 (As that your daughter can you well advise), 6 Back to return to that great Faery Queen, 7 And her to serve six years in warlike wise,

wise > manner

8 Against that proud paynim king, that works her teen:

paynim king > heathen king [Philip II of Spain] teen > grief, trouble

9 Therefore I ought crave pardon, till I there have been.

crave > [to crave your]

112.19

   Vnhappie falles that hard necessitie,
2 (Quoth he) the troubler of my happie peace,
     And vowed foe of my felicitie;
4 Ne I against the same can iustly preace:
     But +since+ that band ye cannot now release,
6 Nor doen vndo; (for vowes may not be vaine)
     Soone as the terme of those six yeares shall cease,
8 Ye then shall hither backe returne againe,
   The marriage to accomplish vowd betwixt you twain.

5 since > sith 1609

1 "Unhappy falls that hard necessity," 2 Quoth he, "the troubler of my happy peace, 3 And vowed foe of my felicity; 4 Nor I against the same can justly press: 5 But since that bond you cannot now release, 6 Nor done, undo (for vows may not be vain);

done > [once done] vain > idle, empty [made vain; made in vain]

7 Soon as the term of those six years shall cease,

Soon > [As soon]

8 You then shall hither back return again, 9 The marriage to accomplish, vowed betwixt you twain.

twain > two

112.20

   Which for my part I couet to performe,
2 In sort as through the world I did proclame,
     That who so kild that monster most deforme,
4 And him in hardy battaile ouercame,
     Should haue mine onely daughter to his Dame,
6 And of my kingdome heire apparaunt bee:
     Therefore +since+ now to thee perteines the same,
8 By dew desert of noble cheualree,
   Both daughter and eke kingdome, lo I yield to thee.

7 since > sith 1609

1 "Which for my part I covet to perform,

covet > desire, long

2 In sort as through the world I did proclaim

In sort > [Even]

3 That whoso killed that monster most deformed,

whoso > whoever deformed > perverted, morally ugly; deformed

4 And him in hardy battle overcame, 5 Should have my only daughter to his dame,

to his dame > as his wife

6 And of my kingdom heir apparent be: 7 Therefore since now to you pertains the same, 8 By due desert of noble chivalry,

desert > merit

9 Both daughter and eke kingdom, lo I yield to you."

eke > also

112.21

   Then forth he called that his daughter faire,
2 The fairest Vn' his onely daughter deare,
     His onely daughter, and his onely heyre;
4 Who forth proceeding with sad sober cheare,
     As bright as doth the morning starre appeare
6 Out of the East, with flaming lockes bedight,
     To tell +that+ dawning day is +drawing+ neare,
8 And to the world does bring long wished light;
   So faire and fresh that Lady shewd her selfe in sight.

7 that > the 1596, 1609 7 drawing > dawning 1596, 1609

1 Then forth he called his daughter fair,
2 The fairest Una, his only daughter dear,
3 His only daughter, and his only heir;
4 Who forth proceeding with sad sober cheer,

sad > steadfast; grave cheer > expression, mood

5 As bright as does the morning star appear 6 Out of the east, with flaming locks bedight,

bedight > adorned

7 To tell that dawning day is drawing near, 8 And to the world does bring long-wished light; 9 So fair and fresh that lady showed herself in sight.

So > Thus

112.22

   So faire and fresh, as freshest flowre in May;
2 For she had layd her mournefull stole aside,
     And widow-like sad wimple throwne away,
4 Wherewith her +heauenly+ beautie she did hide,
     Whiles on her wearie iourney she did ride;
6 And on her now a garment she did weare,
     All lilly white, withoutten spot, or pride,
8 That seemd like silke and siluer wouen neare,
   But neither silke nor siluer therein did appeare.

4 heauenly > heaunnly 1596

1 So fair and fresh, as freshest flower in May; 2 For she had laid her mournful stole aside,

stole > robe (it is black: see 101.4:5)

3 And widow-like sad wimple thrown away,

wimple > {Linen or silk garment enveloping head, chin, and sides of face and neck}

4 Wherewith her heavenly beauty she did hide

Wherewith > With which

5 While on her weary journey she did ride; 6 And on her now a garment she did wear, 7 All lily white, without spot, or pride,

pride > adornment

8 That seemed like silk and silver woven near,

near > closely together

9 But neither silk nor silver therein did appear.

112.23

   The blazing brightnesse of her beauties beame,
2 And glorious light of her sunshyny face
     To tell, were as to striue against the streame.
4 My ragged rimes are all too rude and bace,
     Her heauenly lineaments for to enchace.
6 Ne wonder; for her owne deare loued knight,
     All were she dayly with himselfe in place,
8 Did wonder much at her celestiall sight:
   Oft had he seene her faire, but neuer so faire dight.

1 The blazing brightness of her beauty's beam,
2 And glorious light of her sunshiny face
3 To tell, were as to strive against the stream.
4 My ragged rhymes are all too rude and base

ragged > harsh, discordant rude > rough, uneducated

5 Her heavenly lineaments to enchase.

enchase > make a setting for (as a jeweller might make a setting for a precious stone)

6 No wonder; for her own dear loved knight, 7 All were she daily with himself in place,

All were she > [Although she had been] in place > there; hence: together, in company

8 Did wonder much at her celestial sight:

wonder > marvel sight > appearance

9 Often had he seen her fair, but never so fairly dight.

fair > beauty dight > arranged, dressed; hence: displayed

112.24

   So fairely dight, when she in presence came,
2 She to her Sire made humble reuerence,
     And bowed low, that her right well became,
4 And added grace vnto her excellence:
     Who with great wisedome, and graue eloquence
6 Thus gan to say. But eare he thus had said,
     With flying speede, and seeming great pretence,
8 Came running in, much like a man dismaid,
   A Messenger with letters, which his message said.

1 So fairly dight, when she in presence came,

So > Thus presence > presence [of the king]; [the] presence-chamber (where the sovereign receives visitors)

2 She to her sire made humble reverence,

sire > father

3 And bowed low, that her right well became,

right > very became > suited

4 And added grace to her excellence: 5 Who with great wisdom, and grave eloquence 6 Thus began to say … But ere he thus had said, 7 With flying speed, and seeming great pretence,

pretence > intention, importance; show of dignity

8 Came running in, much like a man dismayed, 9 A messenger with letters, which his message said.

112.25

   All in the open hall amazed stood,
2 At suddeinnesse of that vnwarie sight,
     And wondred at his breathlesse hastie mood.
4 But he for nought would stay his passage right,
     Till fast before the king he did alight;
6 Where falling flat, great humblesse he did make,
     And kist the ground, whereon his foot was pight;
8 Then to his hands that writ he did betake,
   Which he disclosing, red thus, as the paper spake.

1 All in the open hall amazed stood,

hall > {A spacious public room in a castle, palace, etc., used for banquets and receptions} amazed > astounded; confounded

2 At suddenness of that unwary sight,

unwary > unexpected (SU)

3 And wondered at his breathless hasty mood.

wondered > marvelled

4 But he for naught would stay his passage right,

stay > check, delay right > {Straight, direct; leading towards the place he desired to reach}

5 Till fast before the king he did alight;

fast > close; rapidly alight > stop (SU)

6 Where, falling flat, great humblesse he did make,

humblesse > [show of] humbleness, humility

7 And kissed the ground whereon his foot was pight;

pight > placed

8 Then to his hands that writ he did beteach,

writ > document, paper beteach > yield; commit, entrust

9 Which he disclosing, read thus, as the paper spoke.

disclosing > opening up, unfolding (also in the fig. sense of revealing to the knowledge of others)

112.26

   To thee, most mighty king of Eden faire,
2 Her greeting sends in these sad lines addrest,
     The wofull daughter, and forsaken heire
4 Of that great Emperour of all the West;
     And bids thee be aduized for the best,
6 Ere thou thy daughter linck in holy band
     Of wedlocke to that new vnknowen guest:
8 For he already plighted his right hand
   Vnto another loue, and to another land.

1 "To you, most mighty king of Eden fair,
2 Her greeting sends, in these sad lines addressed,
3 The woeful daughter, and forsaken heir
4 Of that great emperor of all the west;

emperor > (See 102.22:7-9)

5 And bids you be advised for the best, 6 Ere you your daughter link in holy bond 7 Of wedlock to that new unknown guest: 8 For he already plighted his right hand

plighted > [has] pledged right hand > allegiance

9 To another love, and to another land.

112.27

   To me sad mayd, or rather widow sad,
2 He was affiaunced long time before,
     And sacred pledges he both gaue, and had,
4 False erraunt knight, infamous, and forswore:
     Witnesse the burning Altars, which he swore,
6 And guiltie heauens of his bold periury,
     Which though he hath polluted oft +of+ yore,
8 Yet I to them for iudgement iust do fly,
   And them coniure t'auenge this shamefull iniury.

7 of > and 1596, 1609

1 "To me, sad maid, or rather widow sad, 2 He was affianced long time before, 3 And sacred pledges he both gave, and had, 4 False errant knight, infamous, and forsworn:

errant > itinerant (a "knight errant" roamed in quest of adventure; the context here also implies the sense of erring, deviating) forsworn > perjurious; in breach of a solemn oath

5 Witness the burning altars, which he swore,

which > [on which, by which]

6 And guilty heavens of his bold perjury,

of > [made guilty by]

7 Which though he has polluted often of yore,

Which > [The heavens] yore > old

8 Yet I to them for judgement just do fly, 9 And them conjure to avenge this shameful injury.

conjure > call upon by oath injury > {Wrongful action; also: intentionally offensive speech or words}

112.28

   Therefore +since+ mine he is, or free or bond,
2 Or false or trew, or liuing or else dead,
     Withhold, O soueraine Prince, your hasty hond
4 From knitting league with him, I you aread;
     Ne weene my right with strength adowne to tread,
6 Through weaknesse of my widowhed, or woe:
     For truth is strong, +her+ rightfull cause to plead,
8 And shall find friends, if need requireth soe,
   So bids thee well to fare, Thy neither friend, nor foe, Fidessa.

1 since > sith 1609 7 her > his 1596, 1609

1 "Therefore since mine he is, +or+ free or bound,

or > either

2 Or false or true, +or+ living or else dead,

Or > Either or > either

3 Withhold, O sovereign prince, your hasty hand 4 From knitting league with him, I you aread;

aread > counsel

5 Nor ween my right with strength adown to tread,

ween > think, intend adown > down

6 Through weakness of my widowhood, or woe: 7 For truth is strong, her rightful cause to plead, 8 And shall find friends, if need requires so, 9 So bids you well to fare, Your neither friend nor foe, Fidessa."

well to fare > [farewell]

112.29

   When he these bitter byting words had red,
2 The tydings straunge did him abashed make,
     That still he sate long time astonished
4 As in great muse, ne word to creature spake.
     At last his solemne silence thus he brake,
6 With doubtfull eyes fast fixed on his guest;
     Redoubted knight, that for mine onely sake
8 Thy life and honour late aduenturest,
   Let nought be hid from me, that ought to be exprest.

1 When he these bitter biting words had read, 2 The tidings strange did him abashed make, 3 That still he sat long time astonished,

That > [So that]

4 As in great muse, nor word to creature spoke.

muse > {Abstraction; the action of musing}

5 At last his solemn silence thus he broke, 6 With doubtful eyes fast fixed on his guest:

fast > firmly

7 "Redoubted knight, that for my only sake

Redoubted > Distinguished; feared; dreaded

8 Your life and honour late adventured,

adventured > risked

9 Let naught be hidden from me, that ought to be expressed.

112.30

   What meane these bloudy vowes, and idle threats,
2 Throwne out from womanish impatient mind?
     What heauens? what altars? what enraged heates
4 Here heaped vp with termes of loue vnkind,
     My conscience cleare with guilty bands would bind?
6 High God be witnesse, that I guiltlesse ame.
     But if your selfe, Sir knight, ye faultie find,
8 Or wrapped be in loues of former Dame,
   With crime do not it couer, but disclose the same.

1 "What mean these bloody vows, and idle threats,

idle > empty

2 Thrown out from womanish impatient mind? 3 What heavens? what altars? what enraged heats,

heats > fits of passion; quarrels

4 Here heaped up with terms of love unkind,

terms > words, language unkind > unnatural; unkind

5 My conscience clear with guilty bonds would bind? 6 High God be witness that I guiltless am. 7 But if yourself, sir knight, you faulty find,

faulty > guilty

8 Or wrapped be in loves of former dame,

dame > lady, woman; mistress

9 With crime do not it cover, but disclose the same."

crime > [false denial]

112.31

   To whom the Redcrosse knight this answere sent,
2 My Lord, my King, be nought hereat dismayd,
     Till well ye wote by graue intendiment,
4 What woman, and wherefore doth me vpbrayd
     With breach of loue, and loyalty betrayd.
6 It was in my mishaps, as hitherward
     I lately traueild, that vnwares I strayd
8 Out of my way, through perils straunge and hard;
   That day should faile me, ere I had them all declard.

1 To whom the Redcross Knight this answer sent,

answer > {Rejoinder; reply to an accusation}

2 "My lord, my king, be naught hereat dismayed, 3 Till well you wot by grave intendiment

wot > learn, discover; know grave > careful intendiment > attention; consideration; intendment

4 What woman, and wherefore does me upbraid

wherefore > on which account; in consequence of which does > [she] does

5 With breach of love, and loyalty betrayed. 6 It was in my mishaps, as hitherward 7 I lately travelled, that unwares I strayed

unwares > unwittingly; unexpectedly

8 Out of my way, through perils strange and hard; 9 That day should fail me, ere I had them all declared.

That day should fail me > [It would take a very long time]

112.32

   There did I find, or rather I was found
2 Of this false woman, that Fidessa hight,
     Fidessa hight the falsest Dame on ground,
4 Most false Duessa, royall richly dight,
     That easie was +t'inuegle+ weaker sight:
6 Who by her wicked arts, and wylie skill,
     Too false and strong for earthly skill or might,
8 Vnwares me wrought vnto her wicked will,
   And to my foe betrayd, when least I feared ill.

5 t'inuegle > to inuegle 1590 etc.: FE

1 "There did I find (or rather I was found 2 Of) this false woman, that Fidessa hight,

Of > By hight > is named

3 Fidessa hight the falsest dame on ground,

dame > lady, woman

4 Most false Duessa, royal richly dight,

royal richly dight > [so] royally [and] richly dressed

5 That easy was to inveigle weaker sight:

That > [That it] inveigle > blind [in mind or judgement]; deceive weaker > too-weak

6 Who by her wicked arts, and wily skill

skill > skill; occult powers

7 (Too false and strong for earthly skill or might), 8 Unwares me worked to her wicked will,

Unwares > Unwittingly

9 And to my foe betrayed, when least I feared ill."

ill > evil

112.33

   Then stepped forth the goodly royall Mayd,
2 And on the ground her selfe prostrating low,
     With sober countenaunce thus to him sayd;
4 O pardon me, my soueraigne Lord, to show
     The secret treasons, which of late I know
6 To haue bene wroght by that false sorceresse.
     She onely she it is, that earst did throw
8 This gentle knight into so great distresse,
   That death him did awaite in dayly wretchednesse.

1 Then stepped forth the goodly royal maid,

goodly > beautiful; gracious

2 And on the ground herself prostrating low, 3 With sober countenance thus to him said: 4 "O pardon me, my sovereign lord, to show

pardon me > [give me leave]

5 The secret treasons, which of late I know 6 To have been wrought by that false sorceress.

wrought > worked

7 She, only she, it is, that erst did throw

erst > recently; formerly

8 This gentle knight into so great distress,

gentle > noble; gentle so > such

9 That death him did await in daily wretchedness.

That > [Such that] him > him; he

112.34

   And now it seemes, that she suborned hath
2 This craftie messenger with letters vaine,
     To worke new woe and +improuided+ scath,
4 By breaking of the band betwixt vs twaine;
     Wherein she vsed hath the practicke paine
6 Of this false footman, clokt with simplenesse,
     Whom if ye please for to discouer plaine,
8 Ye shall him Archimago find, I ghesse,
   The falsest man aliue; +who+ tries shall find no lesse.

3 improuided > vnprouided reported by Todd in some 1596 copies 9 who > wo 1590, 1596: FE

1 "And now it seems that she suborned has 2 This crafty messenger with letters vain,

vain > vain, proud; empty, useless; foolish

3 To work new woe and improvided scathe,

improvided > unforeseen (SU) scathe > harm, damage

4 By breaking the bond betwixt us twain;

twain > two

5 Wherein she used has the practic pain

practic > artful, cunning pain > pains, efforts

6 Of this false footman, cloaked with simpleness, 7 Whom if you please to discover plain,

discover > uncover, unmask, reveal

8 You shall him Archimago find, I guess, 9 The falsest man alive; who tries shall find no less."

who > [he who; whoever]

112.35

   The king was greatly moued at her speach,
2 And all with suddein indignation fraight,
     Bad on that Messenger rude hands to reach.
4 Eftsoones the Gard, which on his state did wait,
     Attacht that faitor false, and bound him strait:
6 Who seeming sorely chauffed at his band,
     As chained Beare, whom cruell dogs do bait,
8 With idle force did faine them to withstand,
   And often semblaunce made to scape out of their hand.

1 The king was greatly moved at her speech, 2 And, all with sudden indignation fraught,

fraught > filled

3 Bade on that messenger rude hands to reach.

rude > rough reach > seize

4 Eftsoons the guard, which on his state did wait,

Eftsoons > Thereupon state > canopied throne; majesty

5 Attached that faitour false, and bound him strait:

Attached > Arrested faitour > impostor, cheat strait > strictly, tightly; straightway

6 Who, seeming sorely chafed at his bond

chafed > angry

7 (As chained bear, whom cruel dogs do bait), 8 With idle force did feign them to withstand,

idle > empty, futile; or: simulated

9 And often semblance made to scape out of their hand.

scape > escape their hand > [the constraint of the bonds; the custody of the guards]

112.36

   But they him layd full low in dungeon deepe,
2 And bound him hand and foote with yron chains.
     And with continuall watch did warely keepe;
4 Who then would thinke, that by his subtile trains
     He could escape fowle death or deadly paines?
6 Thus when that Princes wrath was pacifide,
     He gan renew the late forbidden +banes+,
8 And to the knight his daughter deare he tyde,
   With sacred rites and vowes for euer to abyde.

7 banes > bains 1590

1 But they him laid full low in dungeon deep,

full > very, exceedingly

2 And bound him hand and foot with iron chains. 3 And with continual watch did warely keep;

warely keep > vigilantly observe

4 Who then would think, that by his subtile trains

subtile > subtle; sly, crafty trains > tricks, wiles

5 He could escape foul death or deadly pains?

deadly > fatal

6 Thus, when that prince's wrath was pacified, 7 He gan renew the late forbidden banns,

gan > did renew > resume late forbidden > lately challenged

8 And to the knight his daughter dear he tied, 9 With sacred rites and vows for ever to abide.

abide > remain, remain true

112.37

   His owne two hands the holy knots did knit,
2 That none but death for euer can deuide;
     His owne two hands, for such a turne most fit,
4 The housling fire did kindle and prouide,
     And holy water thereon sprinckled wide;
6 At which +the+ bushy Teade a groome did light,
     And sacred lampe in secret chamber hide,
8 Where it should not be quenched day nor night,
   For feare of euill fates, but burnen euer bright.

6 the > a 1609

1 His own two hands the holy knots did knit, 2 That none but death for ever can divide; 3 His own two hands, for such a turn most fit,

turn > task (mainly northern and Scottish dialect)

4 The houseling fire did kindle and provide,

houseling > sacramental

5 And holy water thereon sprinkled wide; 6 At which the bushy tede a groom did light,

tede > torch (made of pine or other resinous wood); hence: hymeneal torch (cf. Epithalamion 27, Muiopotmos 293)

7 And sacred lamp in secret chamber hide, 8 Where it should not be quenched day nor night, 9 For fear of evil fates, but burn ever bright.

112.38

   Then gan they sprinckle all the posts with wine,
2 And made great feast to solemnize that day;
     They all perfumde with frankencense diuine,
4 And precious odours fetcht from far away,
     That all the house did sweat with great aray:
6 And all the while sweete Musicke did apply
     Her curious skill, the warbling notes to play,
8 To driue away the dull Melancholy;
   The whiles one sung a song of loue and iollity.

1 Then gan they sprinkle all the posts with wine,

gan > did sprinkle all the posts with wine > (A Roman custom; cf. Epithalamion 253)

2 And made great feast to solemnize that day; 3 They all perfumed with frankincense divine,

all > everything

4 And precious odours fetched from far away,

fetched > [which had been imported]

5 That all the house did sweat with great array:

That > [So that] sweat > {Exude drops of moisture; hence: exhale fragrance} array > {State of special preparation for festivities}

6 And all the while sweet Music did apply

Music > (Music personified; the art of the Muses)

7 Her curious skill, the warbling notes to play,

curious > skilled; elaborate; exquisite

8 To drive away the dull melancholy;

melancholy > (Cf. 105.3:5)

9 The whiles one sang a song of love and jollity.

The whiles > Meanwhile jollity > pleasure, revelry; magnificence

112.39

   During the which there was an heauenly noise
2 Heard sound through all the Pallace pleasantly,
     Like as it had bene many an Angels voice,
4 Singing before th'eternall maiesty,
     In their trinall triplicities on hye;
6 Yet wist no creature, whence that heauenly sweet
     Proceeded, yet eachone felt secretly
8 Himselfe thereby reft of his sences meet,
   And rauished with rare impression in his +sprite+.

9 sprite > spreete 1611

1 During which there was a heavenly noise

noise > {Melodious sound}

2 Heard sound through all the palace pleasantly,

sound > [to sound; sounding]

3 Like as it had been many an angel's voice,

Like as > As if

4 Singing before the eternal majesty,

before > in front of

5 In their trinal triplicities on high;

trinal > triple triplicities > trios, triads (referring to the nine angelic orders of St Thomas Aquinas and others. The three Hierarchies are each divided into three Orders of Choirs: Seraphim, Cherubim, Thrones; Dominations, Virtues, Powers; Principalities, Archangels, Angels)

6 Yet wist no creature whence that heavenly sweet

wist > knew sweet > sweetness

7 Proceeded, yet each one felt secretly 8 Himself thereby reft of his senses meet,

reft > deprived, robbed senses meet > proper senses

9 And ravished with rare impression in his spirit.

112.40

   Great ioy was made that day of young and old,
2 And solemne feast proclaimd throughout the land,
     That their exceeding merth may not be told:
4 Suffice it heare by signes to vnderstand
     The vsuall ioyes at knitting of loues band.
6 Thrise happy man the knight himselfe did hold,
     Possessed of his Ladies hart and hand,
8 And euer, when his eye did her behold,
   +His+ heart did seeme to melt in pleasures manifold.

9 His > Her 1596, 1609

1 Great joy was made that day of young and old,

of > by

2 And solemn feast proclaimed throughout the land,

solemn > {Sacred, having a religious character} feast > festival, festivity, rejoicing

3 That their exceeding mirth may not be told:

That > [Such that]

4 Suffice it here by signs to understand

signs > traces, vestiges; hence: hints

5 The usual joys at knitting of love's bond.

knitting > [the knitting]

6 Thrice happy man the knight himself did hold, 7 Possessed of his lady's heart and hand, 8 And ever, when his eye did her behold, 9 His heart did seem to melt in pleasures manifold.

112.41

   Her ioyous presence and sweet company
2 In full content he there did long enioy,
     Ne wicked enuie, +ne+ vile gealosy
4 His deare delights were able to annoy:
     Yet swimming in that sea of blisfull ioy,
6 He nought forgot, how he whilome had sworne,
     In case he could that monstrous beast destroy,
8 Vnto his Farie Queene backe to returne:
   The which he shortly did, and Vna left to mourne.

3 ne > nor 1609

1 Her joyous presence and sweet company 2 In full content he there did long enjoy,

content > pleasure, satisfaction

3 Neither wicked envy, nor vile jealousy 4 His dear delights were able to annoy:

annoy > afflict, vex; hence: spoil

5 Yet, swimming in that sea of blissful joy, 6 He naught forgot, how he whilom had sworn,

whilom > formerly

7 In case he could that monstrous beast destroy, 8 To his Faery Queen back to return: 9 Which he shortly did, and Una left to mourn.

Una left > [left Una]

112.42

   Now strike your sailes ye iolly Mariners,
2 For we be come vnto a quiet rode,
     Where we must land some of our passengers,
4 And light this wearie vessell of her lode.
     Here she a while may make her safe abode,
6 Till she repaired haue her tackles spent,
     And wants supplide. And then againe abroad
8 On the long voyage whereto she is bent:
   Well may she speede and fairely finish her intent.

1 Now strike your sails, you jolly mariners,

strike > lower jolly > gallant, fine

2 For we be come to a quiet road,

be > [are, have] road > {Sheltered stretch of water near the shore where vessels may safely anchor}

3 Where we must land some of our passengers, 4 And lighten this weary vessel of her load. 5 Here she awhile may make her safe abode, 6 Till she repaired have her tackles spent,

tackles spent > worn-out rigging

7 And wants supplied. And then again abroad 8 On the long voyage whereto she is bent:

bent > inclined, directed

9 Well may she speed, and fairly finish her intent.

FINIS LIB. I

END OF BOOK I

=>
                              THE SECOND
2 BOOKE OF THE
                            FAERIE QVEENE.
4 Contayning,
                       THE LEGEND OF SIR GVYON.
6 OR
                           Of Temperaunce.

1 THE SECOND 2 BOOK OF THE 3 FAERY QUEEN 4 Containing 5 THE LEGEND OF SIR GUYON 6 or 7 OF TEMPERANCE

200.1

   RIght well I wote most mighty Soueraine,
2 That all this famous antique history,
     Of some th'aboundance of an idle braine
4 Will iudged be, and painted forgery,
     Rather then matter of iust memory,
6 Sith none, that breatheth liuing aire, does know,
     Where is that happy land of Faery,
8 Which I so much do vaunt, yet no where show,
   But vouch antiquities, which no body can know.

1 Right well I wot, most mighty sovereign,

wot > know

2 That all this famous antique history

antique > ancient; old-fashioned; also: antic: grotesque, bizarre

3 Of some the abundance of an idle brain

Of > By abundance > superfluity

4 Will judged be, and painted forgery,

painted > {Ornamented; given a false colouring}

5 Rather than matter of just memory,

just > true, correct memory > recollection; historical record

6 Sith none, that breathes living air, does know

Sith > Since living > refreshing; vital, giving life

7 Where is that happy land of Faery, 8 Which I so much do vaunt, yet nowhere show,

vaunt > reveal, display, make a show of; praise

9 But vouch antiquities, which nobody can know.

vouch > cite; affirm as true, certify antiquities > ancient records (cf. 100.2:4)

200.2

   But let that man with better sence aduize,
2 That of the world least part to vs is red:
     And dayly how through hardy enterprize,
4 Many great Regions are discouered,
     Which to late age were neuer mentioned.
6 Who euer heard of th'Indian Peru?
     Or who in venturous vessell measured
8 The +Amazons+ huge riuer now found trew?
   Or fruitfullest Virginia who did euer vew?

8 Amazons > Amarons 1590; Amazon FE

1 But let that man with better sense advise

advise > consider

2 That of the world least part to us is read:

least > [the least] read > discerned; known

3 And daily how through hardy enterprise 4 Many great regions are discovered, 5 Which to late age were never mentioned.

to late age > [to those living in recent times]

6 Who ever heard of the Indian Peru?

Indian > (America was thought to be India)

7 Or who in venturous vessel measured

venturous > bold, daring; adventurous measured > measured; traversed

8 The Amazon's huge river, now found true? 9 Or fruitfullest Virginia who did ever view?

200.3

   Yet all these were, when no man did them know;
2 Yet haue from wisest ages hidden beene:
     And later times things more vnknowne shall show.
4 Why then should witlesse man so much misweene
     That nothing is, but that which he hath seene?
6 What if within the Moones faire shining spheare?
     What if in euery other starre vnseene
8 Of other worldes he happily should heare?
   He wonder would much more: yet such to some appeare.

1 Yet all these were, when no man did them know; 2 Yet have from wisest ages hidden been: 3 And later times things more unknown shall show. 4 Why then should witless man so much misween

misween > hold the wrong opinion

5 That nothing is, but that which he has seen? 6 What if within the moon's fair shining sphere; 7 What if in every other star unseen 8 Of other worlds he happily should hear?

happily > perhaps; by chance; by good fortune; with mental pleasure

9 He wonder would much more: yet such to some appear.

more > [further]

200.4

   Of Faerie lond yet if he more inquire,
2 By certaine signes here set in sundry place
     He may it find; ne let him then admire,
4 But yield his sence to be too blunt and bace,
     That no'te without an hound fine footing trace.
6 And +thou+, O fairest Princesse vnder sky,
     In this faire mirrhour maist behold thy face,
8 And thine owne realmes in lond of Faery,
   And in this antique Image thy great auncestry.

6 thou > then 1590

1 Of Faery Land yet if he more inquire,

inquire > seek

2 By certain signs here set in sundry place

sundry place > [various places]

3 He may it find; neither let him then admire,

admire > {Feel or express astonishment}

4 But yield his sense to be too blunt and base,

yield > concede, admit

5 That no'te without a hound fine footing trace.

no'te > cannot fine footing trace > trace faint tracks

6 And you, O fairest princess under sky,

you > [Elizabeth]

7 In this fair mirror may behold your face,

this fair mirror > [the poem; Gloriana; "mirror" also = "paragon of beauty", cf. 106.15:6]

8 And your own realms in land of Faery, 9 And in this antique image your great ancestry.

antique > ancient; old-fashioned; also: antic: grotesque, bizarre

200.5

   The which O pardon me thus to enfold
2 In couert vele, and wrap in shadowes light,
     That feeble eyes your glory may behold,
4 Which else could not endure those +beames+ bright,
     But would be dazled with exceeding light.
6 O pardon, and vouchsafe with patient eare
     The braue aduentures of this Faery knight
8 The good Sir Guyon gratiously to heare,
   In whom great rule of Temp'raunce goodly doth appeare.

4 beames > beamez 1609, emphasizing the disyllable; cf. 110.39:4, 204.28:8, 206.39:5

1 Which O pardon me thus to enfold

pardon > {Make courteous allowance for}

2 In covert veil, and wrap in shadows light, 3 That feeble eyes your glory may behold,

That > [So that]

4 Which else could not endure those beams bright,

else > otherwise

5 But would be dazzled with exceeding light. 6 O pardon, and vouchsafe with patient ear 7 The brave adventures of this Faery knight

brave > brave; splendid

8 (The good Sir Guyon) graciously to hear,

9 In whom great rule of Temperance goodly does appear.

goodly > gracefully; excellently

CANTO I

   Guyon by Archimage abusd,
2 The Redcrosse knight awaytes,
   Findes Mordant and Amauia slaine
4 With pleasures poisoned baytes.

1 Guyon, by Archimago abused,

Guyon > (The origin of this name is not clear. It may be derived from "Gihon", the river in Eden associated with temperance; from "gyon", meaning "wrestler"; or from "Guy", the name of various romance heroes) abused > deceived; ill-used

2 The Redcross Knight awaits,

awaits > keeps watch for; waylays

3 Finds Mordant and Amavia slain

Mordant > "Biting" (the spelling at 201.49:9 (see Textual Appendix) also signifies "Death-giver") Amavia > "Life-loving"; "The Way of Love" (Latin)

4 With Pleasure's poisoned baits.

Pleasure > (The enchantress, Acrasia, so named at 212.1:8 and 212.48:8)

201.1

   THat cunning Architect of cancred guile,
2 Whom Princes late displeasure left in bands,
     For falsed letters and suborned wile,
4 Soone as the Redcrosse knight he vnderstands,
     To beene departed out of Eden lands,
6 To serue againe his soueraine Elfin Queene,
     His artes he moues, and out of +caytiues+ +hands+
8 Himselfe he frees by secret meanes vnseene;
   His shackles emptie left, him selfe escaped cleene.

7 caytiues > caytiue 1609: i.e. the adj., caitiff, captive, vile (improving on the sense of 1596, which may well be a misprint) 7 hands > bands conj. some editors, even though this duplicates the rhyme

1 That cunning architect of cankered guile,

cankered > festering; malignant

2 Whom prince's late displeasure left in bonds

late > recent (see 112.35 ff.)

3 (For falsed letters and suborned wile),

falsed > forged wile > deceit, subtlety

4 Soon as the Redcross Knight he understands

Soon > [As soon]

5 To be departed out of Eden lands, 6 To serve again his sovereign Elfin queen, 7 His arts he moves, and out of caitiffs' hands

moves > puts in motion; hence: employs caitiffs > wretches (?his gaolers: see 112.35:3, and Textual Appendix)

8 Himself he frees by secret means unseen; 9 His shackles empty left, himself escaped clean.

clean > cleanly, entirely

201.2

   And forth he fares full of malicious mind,
2 To worken mischiefe and auenging woe,
     Where euer he that godly knight may find,
4 His onely hart sore, and his onely foe,
     Sith Vna now he algates must forgoe,
6 Whom his victorious hands did earst restore
     To +natiue+ crowne and kingdome late ygoe:
8 Where she enioyes sure peace for euermore,
   As weather-beaten ship arriu'd on happie shore.

7 natiue > natiues 1596, 1609

1 And forth he fares, full of malicious mind,

mind > intention; memory

2 To work mischief and avenging woe

mischief > injury, disaster; evil

3 Wherever he that godly knight may find, 4 His only heart-sore, and his only foe,

only > pre-eminent [the only one worth considering] heart-sore > cause of grief

5 Sith Una now he algates must forgo,

Sith > Since algates > after all; altogether

6 Whom his victorious hands did erst restore

his > [the Redcross Knight's] erst > lately

7 To native crown and kingdom late ago:

late ago > lately

8 Where she enjoys sure peace for evermore, 9 As weather-beaten ship arrived on happy shore.

201.3

   Him therefore now the obiect of his spight
2 And deadly +food+ he makes: him to offend
     By forged treason, or by open fight
4 He seekes, of all his drift the aymed end:
     Thereto his subtile engins he does +bend+
6 His practick wit, and his faire filed tong,
     With thousand other sleights: for well he kend,
8 His credit now in doubtfull ballaunce hong;
   For hardly could +be+ hurt, who was already stong.

2 food > feude 1609 5 bend > bend, 1609 9 be > he 1609

1 Him therefore now the object of his spite 2 And deadly feud he makes: him to offend

feud > hatred, hostility offend > {Cause to stumble or sin; attack; harm}

3 By forged treason or by open fight

forged > fabricated

4 He seeks, of all his drift the aimed end:

drift > intention; plot

5 Thereto his subtile engines he does bend,

subtile > subtle; sly, crafty engines > wiles

6 His practic wit, and his fair filed tongue,

practic > artful, cunning filed > smooth, polished

7 With thousand other sleights: for well he kenned

kenned > recognized; acknowledged

8 His credit now in doubtful balance hung;

credit > reputation; authority; credibility

9 For hardly could be hurt, who was already stung.

hardly could > with difficulty could [one]

201.4

   Still as he went, he craftie stales did +lay,+
2 With cunning traines him to entrap vnwares,
     And priuie spials plast in all his way,
4 To weete what course he takes, and how he fares;
     To ketch him at +a vantage+ in his snares.
6 +But+ now so wise and warie was the knight
     By triall of his former harmes and cares,
8 That he descride, and shonned still his slight:
   The fish that once was caught, new bait will hardly bite.

1 lay, > lay. 1590, 1596 5 a vantage > avantage 1609 6, 7 Lines 6 and 7 are transposed in 1596 and 1609

1 Still as he went, he crafty stales did lay,

Still > Continually stales > decoys; lures

2 With cunning trains him to entrap unwares,

trains > tricks, snares unwares > unexpectedly

3 And privy spials placed in all his way,

privy spials > hidden spies

4 To weet what course he takes, and how he fares;

weet > find out

5 To catch him at a vantage in his snares.

vantage > advantage

6 But now so wise and wary was the knight 7 By trial of his former harms and cares, 8 That he descried, and shunned still, his sleight:

still > constantly his sleight > [Archimago's] cunning, trickery

9 The fish that once was caught, new bait will hardly bite.

201.5

   Nath'lesse th'Enchaunter would not spare his paine,
2 In hope to win occasion to his will;
     Which when he long awaited had in vaine,
4 He chaungd his minde from one to other ill:
     For to all good he enimy was still.
6 Vpon the way him fortuned to meet,
     Faire marching vnderneath a shady hill,
8 A goodly knight, all armd in harnesse meete,
   That from his head no place appeared to his feete.

1 Natheless the enchanter would not spare his pain,

Natheless > Nevertheless pain > efforts

2 In hope to win occasion to his will;

win > persuade, subdue, seize; hence: shape occasion > circumstances

3 Which when he long awaited had in vain, 4 He changed his mind from one to other ill:

other > another; the other

5 For to all good he enemy was still.

still > ever, always

6 Upon the way him fortuned to meet,

him > (The same construction is found at 102.12:5-6; Archimago is the object of "meet"; the knight is the subject of "fortuned")

7 Fair marching underneath a shady hill, 8 A goodly knight, all armed in harness meet,

goodly > handsome, well-favoured; courteous, gracious; kindly all > completely harness > {Body-armour; suit of mail; the accoutrements of an armed horseman} meet > close-fitting; appropriate

9 That from his head no place appeared to his feet.

That > [So that]

201.6

   His carriage was full comely and vpright,
2 His countenaunce demure and temperate,
     But yet so sterne and terrible in sight,
4 That cheard his friends, and did his foes amate:
     He was an Elfin borne of noble state,
6 And mickle worship in his natiue land;
     Well could he tourney and in lists debate,
8 And knighthood tooke of good Sir Huons hand,
   When with king Oberon he came to Faerie land.

1 His carriage was full comely and upright,

full > very

2 His countenance demure and temperate,

demure > sober, grave; reserved

3 But yet so stern and terrible in sight

stern > fierce

4 That cheered his friends, and did his foes amate:

That > [That it] amate > daunt

5 He was an Elfin born of noble state,

state > {Condition or state in life}

6 And mickle worship in his native land;

mickle > much worship > honour, renown

7 Well could he tourney and in lists debate,

tourney > joust (esp. with blunt weapons when taking part in a tournament) lists > knightly contests ("lists" were the palisades enclosing the tilting-ground) debate > fight

8 And knighthood took of good Sir Huon's hand,

took of > received from Huon > (Hero of the 13th-century romance, Huon de Bordeaux; Oberon's successor)

9 When with King Oberon he came to Faery Land.

Oberon > (King of Faery Land; see 210.75-6)

201.7

   Him als accompanyd vpon the way
2 A comely Palmer, clad in blacke attire,
     Of ripest yeares, and haires all hoarie gray,
4 That with a staffe his feeble steps did stire,
     Least his long way his aged limbes should tire:
6 And if by lookes one may the mind aread,
     He seemd to be a sage and sober sire,
8 And euer with slow pace the knight did lead,
   Who taught his trampling steed with equall steps to tread.

1 Him als accompanied upon the way

als > also

2 A comely palmer, clad in black attire,

comely > decorous, decent, pleasing palmer > {Pilgrim who has returned from the Holy Land, carrying a palm-leaf or palm-branch as a token; also: an itinerant monk}

3 Of ripest years, and hair all hoary grey, 4 That with a staff his feeble steps did steer,

steer > steer; or, perhaps: stir

5 Lest his long way his aged limbs should tire: 6 And if by looks one may the mind aread,

aread > divine

7 He seemed to be a sage and sober sire,

sire > {Aged or elderly man, father}

8 And ever with slow pace the knight did lead, 9 Who taught his trampling steed with equal steps to tread.

equal > equable (the horse again symbolizes its rider, as 102.8, etc.)

201.8

   Such whenas Archimago did them view,
2 He weened well to worke some vncouth wile,
     Eftsoones vntwisting his deceiptfull clew,
4 He gan to weaue a web of wicked guile,
     And +with faire+ countenance and flattring stile,
6 To them approching, thus the knight bespake:
     Faire sonne of Mars, that seeke with warlike +spoile,+
8 And great atchieu'ments great your selfe to make,
   Vouchsafe to stay your steed for humble misers sake.

5 with faire > with a faire 1596 7 spoile, > spoile. 1596

1 Such when Archimago did them view, 2 He weened well to work some uncouth wile:

weened > {Thought it possible or likely} uncouth > strange; bizarre; unseemly

3 Eftsoons untwisting his deceitful clew,

Eftsoons > Thereupon clew > ball of thread

4 He began to weave a web of wicked guile, 5 And, with fair countenance and flattering style, 6 To them approaching, thus the knight bespoke:

bespoke > addressed

7 "Fair son of Mars, that seeks with warlike spoil

spoil > plunder, booty

8 And great achievements great yourself to make, 9 Vouchsafe to stay your steed for humble miser's sake."

stay > detain; halt miser > wretch

201.9

   He stayd his steed for humble misers sake,
2 And bad tell on the tenor of his plaint;
     Who feigning then in euery limbe to quake,
4 Through inward feare, and seeming pale and faint
     With piteous mone his percing speach gan paint;
6 Deare Lady how shall I declare thy cace,
     Whom late I left in +langourous+ constraint?
8 Would God thy selfe now present were in place,
   To tell this ruefull tale; thy sight could win thee grace.

7 langourous > languorous 1590

1 He stayed his steed for humble miser's sake, 2 And bade tell on the tenor of his plaint;

plaint > {Statement of grievance made in seeking redress}

3 Who, feigning then in every limb to quake, 4 Through inward fear, and seeming pale and faint, 5 With piteous moan his piercing speech gan paint:

gan > did; began to

6 "Dear lady, how shall I declare your case,

case > plight

7 Whom late I left in languorous constraint?

languorous > sorrowful constraint > affliction; restriction of liberty

8 Would God yourself now present were in place,

Would > [Please; I desire of] yourself > [that you yourself - he is still addressing the "Deare Lady"] present > {Being in the place being considered, being there as opposed to here} in place > here

9 To tell this rueful tale; your sight could win you grace.

your sight > [the sight of you]

201.10

   Or rather would, O would it so had chaunst,
2 That you, most noble Sir, had present beene,
     When that lewd ribauld with vile lust aduaunst
4 Layd first his filthy hands on virgin cleene,
     To spoile her daintie corse so faire and sheene,
6 As on the earth, great mother of vs all,
     With liuing eye more faire was neuer seene,
8 Of chastitie and honour virginall:
   Witnesse ye heauens, whom she in vaine to helpe did call.

1 "Or rather would, O would it so had chanced, 2 That you, most noble sir, had present been, 3 When that lewd ribald, with vile lust advanced,

ribald > {Rascal; wicked, blasphemous, dissolute, or licentious fellow} advanced > moved forward; hence: impelled, incited

4 Laid first his filthy hands on virgin clean,

clean > pure, unsullied

5 To spoil her dainty corse (so fair and sheen

spoil > strip (cf. 108.45:9); despoil corse > body sheen > beautiful

6 As on the earth, great mother of us all, 7 With living eye more fair was never seen) 8 Of chastity and honour virginal: 9 Witness you heavens, whom she in vain to help did call."

201.11

   How may it be, (said then the knight halfe wroth,)
2 That knight should knighthood euer so haue shent?
     None but that saw (quoth he) would weene for troth,
4 How shamefully that Maid he did torment.
     Her looser golden lockes he rudely rent,
6 And drew her on the ground, and his sharpe sword,
     Against her snowy brest +he+ fiercely bent,
8 And threatned death with many a bloudie word;
   Toung hates to tell the rest, that eye to see abhord.

7 he > be 1596

1 "How may it be," said then the knight half wroth, 2 "That knight should knighthood ever so have shent?"

knight > [a knight, any knight] shent > disgraced

3 "None but that saw," quoth he, "would ween for troth

None but that saw > [Nobody except one who saw] ween > believe, imagine troth > truth

4 How shamefully that maid he did torment.

maid > virgin; young woman

5 Her looser golden locks he rudely rent,

looser > too-loose; hence: unfastened, dishevelled rudely > roughly, violently; ignobly rent > tore

6 And drew her on the ground; and his sharp sword 7 Against her snowy breast he fiercely bent, 8 And threatened death with many a bloody word; 9 Tongue hates to tell the rest, that eye to see abhorred."

201.12

   Therewith amoued from his sober mood,
2 And liues he yet (said he) that wrought this act,
     And doen the heauens afford him vitall food?
4 He liues, (quoth he) and boasteth of the fact,
     Ne yet hath any knight his courage crackt.
6 Where may that treachour then (said he) be found,
     Or by what meanes may I his footing tract?
8 That shall I shew (said he) as sure, as hound
   The stricken Deare doth chalenge by the bleeding wound.

1 Therewith amoved from his sober mood,

Therewith > With that; thereupon amoved > stirred

2 "And lives he yet," said he, "that wrought this act,

that > [he who]

3 And do the heavens afford him vital food?" 4 "He lives," quoth he, "and boasts of the fact,

fact > deed, crime

5 Nor yet has any knight his courage cracked." 6 "Where may that treacher then," said he, "be found,

treacher > deceiver; traitor

7 Or by what means may I his footing tract?"

footing tract > trail trace

8 "That shall I show," said he, "as sure as hound 9 The stricken deer does challenge by the bleeding wound."

challenge > {Call to account: a term used in hunting when the hounds first cry at finding the scent}

201.13

   He staid not lenger talke, but with fierce ire
2 And zealous hast away is quickly gone
     To seeke that knight, where him that craftie Squire
4 Supposd to be. They do arriue anone,
     Where sate a gentle Lady all alone,
6 With garments rent, and haire discheueled,
     Wringing her hands, and making piteous mone;
8 Her swollen eyes were much disfigured,
   And her faire face with teares was fowly blubbered.

1 He stayed not longer talk, but with fierce ire

talk > [talking, to talk, for talk]

2 And zealous haste away is quickly gone 3 To seek that knight, where him that crafty squire

squire > (See 201.21:6-9)

4 Supposed to be. They do arrive anon

Supposed > {Stated, asserted as a fact} anon > straightway; (catachr.) soon

5 Where sat a gentle lady all alone,

gentle > noble; gentle

6 With garments rent, and hair dishevelled,

rent > torn

7 Wringing her hands, and making piteous moan;

moan > lamentation

8 Her swollen eyes were much disfigured, 9 And her fair face with tears was foully blubbered.

blubbered > swollen, stained

201.14

   The knight approching nigh, thus to her said,
2 Faire Ladie, through foule sorrow ill bedight,
     Great pittie is to see you thus dismaid,
4 And marre the blossome of your beautie bright:
     For thy appease your griefe and heauie plight,
6 And tell the cause of your conceiued paine.
     For if he liue, that hath you doen +despight,+
8 He shall you doe due recompence againe,
   Or else his wrong with greater puissance maintaine.

7 despight, > despight; 1596, 1609

1 The knight, approaching nigh, thus to her said, 2 "Fair lady, through foul sorrow ill-bedight,

ill-bedight > ill-adorned; hence: disfigured

3 Great pity is to see you thus dismayed, 4 And mar the blossom of your beauty bright;

mar > [to see you mar]

5 For-thy appease your grief and heavy plight,

For-thy > For this reason, therefore appease > desist from, check

6 And tell the cause of your conceived pain:

conceived > {Taken or admitted into the mind; also: apparent, hence: self-evident}

7 For if he live, that has you done despite,

live > [lives; the subjunctive here is all but obsolete] despite > outrage

8 He shall you do due recompense again, 9 Or else his wrong with greater puissance maintain."

puissance > strength, force maintain > uphold, defend

201.15

   Which when she heard, as in despightfull wise,
2 She wilfully her sorrow did augment,
     And offred hope of comfort did despise:
4 Her golden lockes most cruelly she rent,
     And scratcht her face with ghastly dreriment,
6 Ne would she speake, ne see, ne yet be seene,
     But hid her visage, and her head downe bent,
8 Either for grieuous shame, or for great teene,
   As if her hart with sorrow had transfixed beene.

1 Which when she heard, as in despiteful wise,

despiteful > [a] scornful wise > manner

2 She wilfully her sorrow did augment, 3 And offered hope of comfort did despise: 4 Her golden locks most cruelly she rent,

rent > tore

5 And scratched her face with ghastly dreariment,

dreariment > affliction, melancholy

6 Neither would she speak, nor see, nor yet be seen, 7 But hid her visage, and her head down bent,

down bent > bent down, inclined; or: down-bent (describing her head which she hid)

8 Either for grievous shame, or for great teen,

teen > grief; woe

9 As if her heart with sorrow had transfixed been.

201.16

   Till her that Squire bespake, Madame my +liefe+,
2 For Gods deare loue be not so wilfull bent,
     But doe vouchsafe now to receiue reliefe,
4 The which good fortune doth to you present.
     For what bootes it to weepe and to wayment,
6 When ill is chaunst, but doth the ill increase,
     And the weake mind with double woe +torment?+
8 When she her Squire heard speake, she gan appease
   Her voluntarie paine, and feele some secret ease.

1 liefe > life 1590; cf. 201.52:5 7 torment? > torment{inverse ?} 1596

1 Till her that squire bespoke: "Madam, my lief,

that squire > [Archimago] bespoke > addressed lief > friend, dear

2 For God's dear love be not so wilful bent,

wilful bent > wilfully inclined

3 But do vouchsafe now to receive relief, 4 Which good fortune does to you present. 5 For what boots it to weep and to wayment

boots > avails wayment > lament; wail

6 When ill is chanced, but does the ill increase,

ill > evil chanced > happened upon; hence: experienced but > [for weeping only]

7 And the weak mind with double woe torment." 8 When she her squire heard speak, she gan appease

gan > did; began to appease > check

9 Her voluntary pain, and feel some secret ease.

voluntary > self-induced, self-inflicted

201.17

   Eftsoone she said, Ah gentle trustie Squire,
2 What comfort can I wofull wretch conceaue,
     Or why should euer I henceforth +desire,+
4 To see faire heauens face, and life not leaue,
     Sith that false Traytour did my honour reaue?
6 False traytour certes (said the Faerie knight)
     I read the man, that euer would deceaue
8 A gentle Ladie, or her wrong through might:
   Death were too little paine for such a foule despight.

3 desire, > desyre, 1590; desire 1609

1 Eftsoons she said, "Ah, gentle trusty squire,

Eftsoons > Thereupon gentle > noble

2 What comfort can I, woeful wretch, conceive, 3 Or why should ever I henceforth desire 4 To see fair Heaven's face, and life not leave, 5 Sith that false traitor did my honour reave?"

Sith > Since reave > take away; plunder, despoil

6 "False traitor certes," said the Faery knight,

certes > assuredly

7 "I read the man, that ever would deceive

read > consider

8 A gentle lady, or her wrong through might:

gentle > noble; gentle wrong > (Vb.)

9 Death were too little pain for such a foul despite.

despite > outrage

201.18

   But now, faire Ladie, comfort to you make,
2 And read, who hath ye wrought this shamefull +plight;+
     That short reuenge the man may ouertake,
4 Where so he be, and soone vpon him light.
     Certes (saide she) I wote not how he hight,
6 But vnder him a gray steede +did he+ wield,
     Whose sides with dapled circles weren dight;
8 Vpright he rode, and in his siluer shield
   He bore a bloudie Crosse, that quartred all the field.

2 plight; > plight. 1590, 1596 6 did he > he did 1590

1 "But now, fair lady, comfort to you make, 2 And read who has you wrought this shameful plight;

read > declare

3 That short revenge the man may overtake,

That > [So that] short > quick, speedy; immediate

4 Whereso he be, and soon upon him light."

Whereso > Wherever light > fall

5 "Certes," said she, "I wot not how he hight,

Certes > Assuredly wot > know hight > is named

6 But under him a grey steed did he wield,

wield > manage, control

7 Whose sides with dappled circles were dight;

dight > arranged; hence: marked

8 Upright he rode, and in his silver shield

in > [on]

9 He bore a bloody cross, that quartered all the field."

bloody > blood-red quartered > {Divided into four; a technical term in heraldry} field > {Surface of the shield; another term in heraldry}

201.19

   Now by my head (said Guyon) much I muse,
2 How that same knight should do so foule amis,
     Or euer gentle Damzell so abuse:
4 For may I boldly say, he surely is
     A right good knight, and true of word ywis:
6 I present was, and can it witnesse well,
     When armes he swore, and streight did enterpris
8 Th'aduenture of the Errant damozell,
   In which he hath great glorie wonne, as I heare tell.

1 "Now by my head," said Guyon, "much I muse

by my head > (An oath) muse > marvel, wonder; am at a loss to understand

2 How that same knight should do so foul amiss,

amiss > [an] evil deed (cf. Hamlet IV v 18)

3 Or ever gentle damsel so abuse:

gentle > noble; gentle abuse > violate, ill-use

4 For, may I boldly say, he surely is 5 A right good knight, and true of word iwis:

right > very iwis > certainly, indeed

6 I present was, and can it witness well, 7 When arms he swore, and straight did enterprise

arms > [the oaths of knighthood] straight > straightway enterprise > undertake

8 The adventure of the Errant Damsel,

Errant Damsel > (Una, who wandered in order to find a knight to free her parents; see Book I)

9 In which he has great glory won, as I hear tell.

201.20

   Nathlesse he shortly shall againe be tryde,
2 And fairely quite him of th'imputed blame,
     Else be ye sure he dearely shall abyde,
4 Or make you good amendment for the same:
     All wrongs haue mends, but no amends of shame.
6 Now therefore Ladie, rise out of your paine,
     And see the saluing of your blotted name.
8 Full loth she seemd thereto, but yet did faine;
   For she was inly glad her purpose so to gaine.

1 "Natheless he shortly shall again be tried,

Natheless > Nevertheless

2 And fairly quit himself of the imputed blame,

quit > absolve, clear blame > charge

3 Else be you sure he dearly shall aby,

Else > Otherwise dearly > sorely; expensively aby > atone, pay the penalty; suffer (cf. 204.40:4)

4 Or make you good amendment for the same: 5 All wrongs have mends, but no amends of shame.

mends > compensations (partly aphetic for "amends") no amends of > [there can be no reparation for]

6 Now, therefore, lady, rise out of your pain, 7 And see the salving of your blotted name."

salving > restoration, making good

8 Full loath she seemed thereto, but yet did feign;

thereto > in that purpose; with that feign > dissimulate (this spelling suggested by 201.21:1); also: fain: become glad

9 For she was inly glad her purpose so to gain.

inly > inwardly

201.21

   Her purpose was not such, as she did faine,
2 Ne yet her person such, as it was seene,
     But vnder simple shew and semblant plaine
4 Lurckt false Duessa secretly vnseene,
     As a chast Virgin, that had wronged beene:
6 So had false Archimago her disguisd,
     To cloke her guile with sorrow and sad teene;
8 And eke himselfe had craftily deuisd
   To be her Squire, and do her seruice well aguisd.

1 Her purpose was not such as she did feign, 2 Nor yet her person such as it was seen, 3 But under simple show and semblant plain

show > appearance (cf. 102.45:7) semblant > outward aspect, semblance

4 Lurked false Duessa, secretly unseen, 5 As a chaste virgin, that had wronged been: 6 So had false Archimago her disguised, 7 To cloak her guile with sorrow and sad teen;

teen > grief; woe

8 And eke himself had craftily devised

eke > also

9 To be her squire, and do her service well aguised.

squire > attendant aguised > arrayed

201.22

   Her late forlorne and naked he had found,
2 Where she did wander in waste wildernesse,
     Lurking in rockes and caues farre vnder ground,
4 And with greene mosse cou'ring her nakednesse,
     To hide her shame and loathly filthinesse;
6 Sith her Prince Arthur of proud ornaments
     And borrow'd beautie spoyld. Her nathelesse
8 Th'enchaunter finding fit for his intents,
   Did thus reuest, and deckt with due habiliments.

1 Her late forlorn and naked he had found,

late > lately

2 Where she did wander in waste wilderness,

waste > desolate, uninhabited (see 108.50:3)

3 Lurking in rocks and caves far underground, 4 And with green moss covering her nakedness, 5 To hide her shame and loathly filthiness;

loathly > loathsome, repulsive, hateful filthiness > obscenity, moral defilement

6 Sith her Prince Arthur of proud ornaments

Sith > Since

7 And borrowed beauty spoiled. Her natheless

spoiled > stripped (with less sense of violence than modern usage implies) natheless > nevertheless

8 The enchanter finding fit for his intents,

intents > purposes

9 Did thus revest, and decked with due habiliments.

revest > reinstate; dress, apparel ("her" being understood from line 7) due habiliments > appropriate attire

201.23

   For all he did, was to deceiue good knights,
2 And draw them from pursuit of praise and fame,
     To slug in slouth and sensuall delights,
4 And end their daies with irrenowmed shame.
     And now exceeding griefe him ouercame,
6 To see the Redcrosse thus aduaunced hye;
     Therefore this craftie engine he did frame,
8 Against his praise to stirre vp enmitye
   Of such, as vertues like mote vnto him allye.

1 For all he did was to deceive good knights, 2 And draw them from pursuit of praise and fame, 3 To slug in sloth and sensual delights,

slug > laze; waste time

4 And end their days with irrenowned shame.

irrenowned > infamous (WU)

5 And now exceeding grief him overcame, 6 To see the Redcross thus advanced high;

advanced > raised; extolled (referring either to the knight or his heraldic bearing, the red cross)

7 Therefore this crafty engine he did frame,

engine > contrivance, snare frame > fashion

8 Against his praise to stir up enmity

praise > praiseworthiness; good reputation

9 Of such as virtues like might to him ally.

such as virtues like > [those people whose similar virtues] ally > [ally themselves]

201.24

   So now he Guyon guides an vncouth way
2 Through woods and mountaines, till they came at last
     Into a pleasant dale, that lowly lay
4 Betwixt two hils, whose high heads ouerplast,
     The valley did with coole shade ouercast;
6 Through midst thereof a little riuer rold,
     By which there sate a knight with helme vnlast,
8 Himselfe refreshing with the liquid cold,
   After his trauell long, and labours manifold.

1 So now he Guyon guides an uncouth way

uncouth > unaccustomed; unfrequented; desolate, wild

2 Through woods and mountains, till they came at last 3 Into a pleasant dale, that lowly lay

lowly > {Low in situation}

4 Betwixt two hills, whose high heads overplaced

overplaced > overhanging; looming

5 The valley did with cool shade overcast; 6 Through midst thereof a little river rolled, 7 By which there sat a knight with helm unlaced,

helm > helmet

8 Himself refreshing with the liquid cold, 9 After his travel long, and labours manifold.

201.25

   Loe yonder he, cryde Archimage alowd,
2 That wrought the shamefull fact, which I did shew;
     And now he doth himselfe in secret shrowd,
4 To flie the vengeance for his outrage dew;
     But vaine: for ye shall dearely do him rew,
6 So God ye speed, and send you good successe;
     Which we farre off will here abide to vew.
8 So they him left, inflam'd with wrathfulnesse,
   That streight against that knight his speare he did addresse.

1 "Lo yonder he," cried Archimago aloud, 2 "That wrought the shameful fact which I did show;

fact > deed, crime show > behold; make known, describe

3 And now he does himself in secret shroud,

shroud > hide

4 To fly the vengeance for his outrage due;

fly > flee, avoid for his outrage due > [due to him for his outrage]

5 But vain: for you shall dearly do him rue,

vain > vainly; in vain dearly > sorely; dearly do him > make him, cause him to (cf. "do him die", e.g. 109.54:8)

6 So God you speed, and send you good success;

speed > assist

7 Which we far off will here abide to view."

abide > remain

8 So they him left, inflamed with wrathfulness, 9 That straight against that knight his spear he did address.

That > [So that] straight > immediately, straightway; directly

201.26

   Who seeing him from farre so fierce to pricke,
2 His warlike armes about him gan embrace,
     And in the rest his readie speare did sticke;
4 Tho when as still he saw him towards pace,
     He gan rencounter him in equall race.
6 They bene ymet, both readie to affrap,
     When suddenly that warriour gan abace
8 His threatned speare, as if some new mishap
   Had him +betidde+, or hidden daunger did entrap.

9 betidde > betide 1590

1 Who, seeing him from far so fierce to prick,

prick > spur [his horse]; ride

2 His warlike arms about him gan embrace,

gan > did embrace > put (usually just a shield) on the arm; hence: put on, take up (shield and lance, etc.)

3 And in the rest his ready spear did stick;

rest > {Socket in the saddle for the heel of the lance}

4 Tho when still he saw him towards pace,

Tho > Then towards > [in his direction]

5 He gan rencounter him in equal race.

gan rencounter > did engage equal race > {The level course along which the two jousting knights in a tourney charge toward one another, here used fig.}

6 They been met, both ready to affrap,

been met > [came together in battle] affrap > strike (WUFQ)

7 When suddenly that warrior gan abase

that warrior > [Guyon, as the next stanza makes clear] gan abase > did lower

8 His threatened spear, as if some new mishap 9 Had him betide, or hidden danger did entrap.

betide > befallen

201.27

   And cryde, Mercie Sir knight, and mercie Lord,
2 For mine offence and heedlesse hardiment,
     That had almost committed crime abhord,
4 And with reprochfull shame mine honour shent,
     Whiles cursed steele against that badge I bent,
6 The sacred badge of my Redeemers death,
     Which on your shield is set for ornament:
8 But his fierce foe his steede could stay vneath,
   Who prickt with courage kene, did cruell battell breath.

1 And cried, "Mercy, sir knight, and mercy Lord, 2 For my offence and heedless hardiment,

offence > {Assault; occasion of doubt, unbelief, or apostasy} hardiment > hardihood, boldness; audacity

3 That had almost committed crime abhorred, 4 And with reproachful shame my honour shent,

shent > disgraced

5 While cursed steel against that badge I bent,

bent > inclined, directed

6 The sacred badge of my Redeemer's death, 7 Which on your shield is set for ornament." 8 But his fierce foe his steed could stay uneath,

uneath > scarcely, with difficulty

9 Who, pricked with courage keen, did cruel battle breathe.

Who > (The knight or his horse; see note at 102.8:4) courage > spirit; courage keen > fierce; brave; savage

201.28

   But when he heard him speake, streight way he knew
2 His error, and himselfe inclyning sayd;
     Ah deare Sir Guyon, +well+ becommeth you,
4 But me behoueth rather to vpbrayd,
     Whose hastie hand so farre from reason strayd,
6 That almost it did haynous violence
     On that faire image of that heauenly Mayd,
8 That decks and armes your shield with faire defence:
   Your court'sie takes on you anothers due offence.

3 well > ill 1679

1 But when he heard him speak, straightway he knew 2 His error and, himself inclining, said:

inclining > [bending the head and body forward; hence: yielding]

3 "Ah, dear Sir Guyon, well becomes you,

becomes > [it becomes]

4 But me behoves rather to upbraid,

me behoves rather to upbraid > [it behoves that I should be upbraided rather than you]

5 Whose hasty hand so far from reason strayed 6 That almost it did heinous violence 7 On that fair image of that heavenly maid,

On > To that heavenly maid > (The Faery Queen: see e.g. 209.4:1-2)

8 That decks and arms your shield with fair defence: 9 Your courtesy takes on you another's due offence."

on you > on yourself; to your own account

201.29

   So bene they both +attone+, and doen vpreare
2 Their beuers bright, each other for to greete;
     Goodly comportance each to other beare,
4 And entertaine themselues with court'sies meet.
     Then said the Redcrosse knight, Now mote I weet,
6 Sir Guyon, why with so fierce saliaunce,
     And fell intent ye did at earst me meet;
8 For sith I know your goodly gouernaunce,
   Great cause, I weene, you guided, or some vncouth chaunce.

1 attone > at one 1590

1 So been they both at one, and do uprear

been > [were] uprear > raise

2 Their beavers bright, each other to greet;

beaver > visor (strictly, the lower part of the face-guard)

3 Goodly comportance each to other bear,

comportance > behaviour; accordance

4 And entertain themselves with courtesies meet.

meet > fitting

5 Then said the Redcross Knight, "Now might I weet,

weet > know

6 Sir Guyon, why with so fierce salience

so > such [a] salience > {Leaping forward, projection from the norm; hence: onslaught}

7 And fell intent you did at erst me meet;

fell > fierce, terrible intent > purpose, intention erst > first

8 For sith I know your goodly governance,

sith > since governance > demeanour, behaviour; self-control

9 Great cause, I ween, you guided, or some uncouth chance."

ween > imagine, think uncouth > strange

201.30

   Certes (said he) well mote I shame to tell
2 The fond encheason, that me hither led.
     A false infamous faitour late befell
4 Me for to meet, that seemed ill bested,
     And playnd of grieuous outrage, which he red
6 A knight had wrought against a Ladie gent;
     Which to auenge, he to this place me led,
8 Where you he made the marke of his intent,
   And now is fled; foule shame him follow, where he went.

1 "Certes," said he, "well might I shame to tell

Certes > Assuredly shame > feel shame, feel ashamed

2 The fond encheason that me hither led.

fond > foolish encheason > cause, reason

3 A false infamous faitour late befell

faitour > impostor, cheat late > recently

4 Me to meet, that seemed ill-bested,

ill-bested > hard-pressed, threatened, in trouble (bested = placed)

5 And plained of grievous outrage, which he read

plained > complained read > [had] observed; declared, made known

6 A knight had wrought against a lady gent;

gent > graceful, elegant; noble

7 Which to avenge, he to this place me led, 8 Where you he made the mark of his intent, 9 And now is fled; foul shame him follow, where he went."

where > wherever

201.31

   So can he turne his earnest vnto game,
2 Through goodly +handling+ and wise temperance.
     By this his aged guide in presence came;
4 Who soone as on that knight his eye did glance,
     Eft soones of him had perfect cognizance,
6 Sith him in Faerie court he late auizd;
     And said, +faire+ sonne, God giue you happie chance,
8 And that deare Crosse vpon your shield deuizd,
   Wherewith aboue all knights ye goodly seeme aguizd.

2 handling > handing 1596 7 faire > fayre 1590; Faire 1609

1 So can he turn his earnest to game,

can he > did he; does he know how to

2 Through goodly handling and wise temperance.

handling > treatment, management; hence: conduct

3 By this his aged guide in presence came;

By this > At this; by this time

4 Who, soon as on that knight his eye did glance,

soon > [as soon]

5 Eftsoons of him had perfect cognizance,

Eftsoons > Forthwith cognizance > recognition (SUS)

6 Sith him in Faery court he late advised;

Sith > Since late > recently advised > saw, noticed, observed

7 And said, "Fair son, God give you happy chance,

happy > fortunate; happy

8 And that dear cross upon your shield devised,

devised > contrived, skilfully prepared; hence: painted ("device" (sb.) = "design", and, specifically in heraldry, "emblem")

9 Wherewith above all knights you goodly seem aguised.

Wherewith > With which aguised > arrayed; hence: protected

201.32

   Ioy may you haue, and euerlasting fame,
2 Of late most hard atchieu'ment by you donne,
     For which enrolled is your glorious name
4 In heauenly Registers aboue the Sunne,
     Where you a Saint with Saints your seat haue wonne:
6 But wretched we, where ye haue left your marke,
     Must now anew begin, like race to runne;
8 God guide thee, Guyon, well to end thy warke,
   And to the wished hauen bring thy weary barke.

1 "Joy may you have, and everlasting fame, 2 Of late most hard achievement by you done,

late > [the] recent

3 For which enrolled is your glorious name 4 In heavenly registers above the sun,

heavenly registers > (See Luke 10.20; Rev. 3.5)

5 Where you a saint with saints your seat have won: 6 But wretched we, where you have left your mark, 7 Must now anew begin, like race to run;

like > [a] similar race > {Journey, voyage; competitive race [against the forces of evil]; course in a tourney (cf. 201.26:5); strong current in the sea or a river (cf. esp. 212); course of events; course of a narrative}

8 God guide you, Guyon, well to end your work, 9 And to the wished haven bring your weary bark."

bark > vessel

201.33

   Palmer, (him answered the Redcrosse knight)
2 His be the praise, that this atchieu'ment wrought,
     Who made my hand the organ of his might;
4 More then goodwill to me attribute nought:
     For all I did, I did but as I ought.
6 But you, faire Sir, whose pageant next ensewes,
     Well mote yee thee, as well can wish your thought,
8 That home ye may report +thrise+ happie newes;
   For well ye worthie bene for worth and gentle thewes.

8 thrise > these 1590 etc.: FE

1 "Palmer," him answered the Redcross Knight, 2 "His be the praise, that this achievement wrought, 3 Who made my hand the organ of His might;

organ > instrument, agent (cf. 312.40:5); organ

4 More than goodwill to me attribute naught: 5 For all I did, I did but as I ought. 6 But you, fair sir, whose pageant next ensues,

pageant > {Exhibition, show; scene or act of a medieval mystery play; tableau or tableaux from such a play. The same word is used in the dedicatory sonnet to Charles Howard at I:537} next > (See I:183 ff.: "The second day ther came in a Palmer …")

7 Well might you thee, as well can wish your thought,

thee > thrive; grow your > [your own]

8 That home you may report thrice happy news;

That > [So that] report > carry; send back; report

9 For well you worthy be for worth and gentle thews."

gentle thews > noble qualities

201.34

   So courteous conge both did giue and take,
2 With right hands plighted, pledges of good will.
     Then Guyon forward gan his voyage make,
4 With his blacke Palmer, that him guided still.
     Still he him guided ouer dale and hill,
6 And with his +steedie+ staffe did point his way:
     His race with reason, and with words his will,
8 From foule intemperance he oft did stay,
   And suffred not in wrath his hastie steps to stray.

6 steedie > steedy 1590; steadie 1609; steady 1590 reported by Grosart

1 So courteous cong{e/} both did give and take,

cong{e/} > leave, farewell

2 With right hands plighted, pledges of goodwill.

plighted > plaited, knitted; hence: clasped

3 Then Guyon forward gan his voyage make,

gan > did; began to voyage > journey

4 With his black palmer, that him guided still.

black > (Referring to the colour of his clothes: see 201.7:2) still > continually

5 Still he him guided over dale and hill, 6 And with his steady staff did point his way: 7 His race with reason, and with words his will,

race > (Meanings as at 201.32:7)

8 From foul intemperance he oft did stay,

stay > hold back

9 And suffered not in wrath his hasty steps to stray.

suffered > allowed

201.35

   In this faire wize they traueild long yfere,
2 Through many hard assayes, which did betide;
     Of which he honour still away did beare,
4 And spred his glorie through all countries wide.
     At last as chaunst them by a forest side
6 To passe, for succour from the scorching ray,
     They heard a ruefull voice, that dearnly cride
8 With percing shriekes, and many a dolefull lay;
   Which to attend, a while their forward steps they stay.

1 In this fair wise they travelled long yfere,

wise > manner yfere > together

2 Through many hard assays, which did betide;

assays > trials betide > befall

3 Of which he honour still away did bear,

still > always

4 And spread his glory through all countries wide. 5 At last, as chanced them by a forest side 6 To pass, for succour from the scorching ray,

succour > relief; protection, shelter

7 They heard a rueful voice, that dernly cried

dernly > darkly; dismally (SUS)

8 With piercing shrieks, and many a doleful lay;

lay > song, strain; hence: cry, lamentation

9 Which to attend, awhile their forward steps they stay.

attend > listen to stay > check

201.36

   But if that carelesse heauens (quoth she) despise
2 The doome of iust reuenge, and take delight
     To see sad pageants of mens miseries,
4 As bound by them to liue in +liues+ despight,
     Yet can they not warne death from wretched wight.
6 Come then, come soone, come sweetest death to mee,
     And take away this long lent loathed light:
8 Sharpe be thy wounds, but sweet the medicines bee,
   That long captiued soules from wearie thraldome free.

4 liues > lifes 1609

1 "But if careless heavens," quoth she, "despise

despise > set at naught; treat with contempt

2 The doom of just revenge, and take delight

doom > judgement, sentence; righteousness, equity; power, authority

3 To see sad pageants of men's miseries,

pageants > {Acted scenes on stage}

4 As bound by them to live in life's despite,

bound > fated, compelled [by the heavens] life's despite > [life's malicious circumstances; or, perhaps: scorning, defiant of, life]

5 Yet can they not warn death from wretched wight.

warn death from > refuse death to [a] wight > mortal, woman

6 Come then, come soon, come sweetest death to me, 7 And take away this long lent loathed light: 8 Sharp be your wounds, but sweet the medicines be, 9 That long captived souls from weary thraldom free.

thraldom > captivity, bondage

201.37

   But thou, sweet Babe, whom frowning froward fate
2 Hath made sad witnesse of thy fathers fall,
     Sith heauen thee deignes to hold in liuing state,
4 Long maist thou liue, and better thriue withall,
     Then to thy lucklesse parents did befall:
6 Liue thou, and to thy mother dead attest,
     That cleare she dide from blemish criminall;
8 Thy litle hands embrewd in bleeding brest
   Loe I for pledges leaue. So giue me leaue to rest.

1 "But you, sweet babe, whom frowning froward Fate

froward > perverse; adverse; evilly disposed

2 Has made sad witness of your father's fall, 3 Sith heaven you deigns to hold in living state,

Sith > Since

4 Long may you live, and better thrive withal

withal > with it, in addition

5 Than to your luckless parents did befall: 6 Live you, and to your mother dead attest

mother dead > [dead mother] attest > testify (this obsolete use is indicated by the preceding "to"; though better sense is made if the "to" is omitted, as: "attest that your dead mother died clear from criminal blemish")

7 That clear she died from blemish criminal; 8 Your little hands imbrued in bleeding breast

imbrued > steeped; stained, defiled

9 Lo I for pledges leave. So give me leave to rest."

201.38

   With that a deadly shrieke she forth did throw,
2 That through the wood reecchoed againe,
     And after gaue a grone so deepe and low,
4 That seemd her tender heart was rent in twaine,
     Or thrild with point of thorough piercing paine;
6 As gentle Hynd, whose sides with cruell steele
     Through +launched+, forth her bleeding life does raine,
8 Whiles the sad pang approching she does feele,
   Brayes out her latest breath, and vp her eyes doth seele.

7 launched > launced 1609

1 With that a deadly shriek she forth did throw, 2 That through the wood re-echoed again, 3 And after gave a groan so deep and low 4 That seemed her tender heart was rent in twain,

That > [That it] rent > torn twain > two

5 Or thrilled with point of through-piercing pain;

thrilled > pierced

6 As gentle hind, whose sides with cruel steel 7 Through lanced, forth her bleeding life does rain, 8 While the sad pang approaching she does feel,

sad > heavy; solemn; dismal; grievous

9 Brays out her latest breath, and up her eyes does seel.

Brays > Cries latest > last seel > close

201.39

   Which when that warriour heard, dismounting straict
2 From his tall steed, he rusht into the thicke,
     And soone arriued, where that sad pourtraict
4 Of death and +dolour+ lay, halfe dead, halfe quicke,
     In whose white alabaster brest did sticke
6 A cruell knife, that made a griesly wound,
     From which forth gusht a streme of gorebloud thick,
8 That all her goodly garments staind around,
   And into a deep sanguine dide the grassie ground.

4 dolour > labour 1596, 1609

1 Which when that warrior heard, dismounting straight

straight > straightway, immediately; hence, perhaps: intemperately

2 From his tall steed, he rushed into the thick,

the thick > the thicket, the copse, with perhaps a sly connotation of: the thick of it

3 And soon arrived where that sad portrait 4 Of death and dolour lay, half dead, half quick,

dolour > pain; anguish (see Textual Appendix; I have chosen 1590 as the more obvious reading, though "labour" more graphically describes Amavia's suffering and may also refer to her labour in bearing the child) quick > alive

5 In whose white alabaster breast did stick 6 A cruel knife, that made a grisly wound,

grisly > horrible, fearsome

7 From which forth gushed a stream of goreblood thick,

goreblood > {?Gory blood; ?blood shed by carnage or butchery}

8 That all her goodly garments stained around, 9 And into a deep sanguine dyed the grassy ground.

sanguine > blood-red

201.40

   Pittifull spectacle of deadly smart,
2 Beside a bubbling fountaine low she lay,
     Which she increased with her bleeding hart,
4 And the cleane waues with purple +gore+ did ray;
     Als in her lap a +louely+ babe did play
6 His cruell sport, in stead of sorrow dew;
     For in her streaming blood he did embay
8 His litle hands, and tender ioynts embrew;
   Pitifull spectacle, as euer eye did view.

4 gore > gold 1596, 1609 5 louely > little 1609

1 Pitiful spectacle of deadly smart,

smart > {Grief, sorrow; suffering; sharp or biting pain. Spenser may have known that "smart" is perhaps related to the Latin mordere, to bite: see 201.0:3}

2 Beside a bubbling fountain low she lay, 3 Which she increased with her bleeding heart, 4 And the clean waves with purple gore did beray;

purple > red, blood-red beray > defile; asperse, bespatter

5 Als in her lap a lovely babe did play

Als > As; also

6 His cruel sport, instead of sorrow due;

due > fitting, proper; merited

7 For in her streaming blood he did embay

embay > bathe

8 His little hands, and tender joints imbrue;

joints > arms; limbs imbrue > steep; defile

9 Pitiful spectacle as ever eye did view.

Pitiful > [As pitiful a]

201.41

   Besides them both, vpon the soiled gras
2 The dead corse of an armed knight was spred,
     Whose armour all with bloud besprinckled was;
4 His ruddie lips did smile, and rosy red
     Did paint his chearefull cheekes, yet being +ded,+
6 Seemd to haue beene a goodly personage,
     Now in his freshest flowre of lustie hed,
8 Fit to inflame faire Lady with loues rage,
   But that fiers fate did crop the blossome of his age.

5 ded, > ded: 1609

1 Beside them both, upon the soiled grass

soiled > stained; sullied; defiled

2 The dead corse of an armed knight was spread,

corse > body

3 Whose armour all with blood besprinkled was;

besprinkled > {Sprinkled all over; the prefix is intensive}

4 His ruddy lips did smile, and rosy red 5 Did paint his cheerful cheeks, yet being dead:

yet > although

6 Seemed to have been a goodly personage,

Seemed > [He seemed] goodly > well-favoured, handsome

7 Now in his freshest flower of lustihead,

lustihead > lustiness, vigour; lustfulness

8 Fit to inflame fair lady with love's rage, 9 But that fierce fate did crop the blossom of his age.

201.42

   Whom when the good Sir Guyon did behold,
2 His hart gan wexe as starke, as marble stone,
     And his fresh bloud did frieze with fearefull cold,
4 That all his senses seemd bereft +attone:+
     At last his mightie ghost gan deepe to grone,
6 As Lyon grudging in his great disdaine,
     Mournes inwardly, and makes to himselfe mone;
8 Till ruth and fraile affection did +constraine,+
   His +stout courage+ to stoupe, and shew his inward paine.

4 attone: > attone, 1596 8 constraine, > constraine 1609 9 stout courage > courage stout 1609

1 Whom when the good Sir Guyon did behold, 2 His heart gan wax as stark as marble stone,

gan > did; began to wax > grow stark > rigid, incapable of movement

3 And his fresh blood did freeze with fearful cold, 4 That all his senses seemed bereft at one:

That > [So that] at one > at once, simultaneously

5 At last his mighty ghost began deep to groan,

ghost > spirit

6 As lion, grudging in his great disdain,

grudging > murmuring, grumbling; hence: growling disdain > indignation, anger

7 Mourns inwardly, and makes to himself moan; 8 Till ruth and frail affection did constrain

ruth > pity

9 His stout courage to stoop, and show his inward pain.

stout > proud; bold courage > heart, mind, spirit

201.43

   Out of her gored wound the cruell steele
2 He lightly snatcht, and did the floudgate stop
     With his faire garment: then gan softly feele
4 Her feeble pulse, to proue if any drop
     Of liuing bloud yet in her veynes did hop;
6 Which when he felt to moue, he hoped faire
     To call backe life to her forsaken shop;
8 So well he did her deadly wounds repaire,
   That at the last she gan to breath out liuing aire.

1 Out of her gored wound the cruel steel 2 He lightly snatched, and did the floodgate stop

lightly > quickly, lightly

3 With his fair garment: then gan softly feel

gan > did

4 Her feeble pulse, to prove if any drop 5 Of living blood yet in her veins did hop;

hop > hop, hence: beat, pulse

6 Which when he felt to move, he hoped fair 7 To call back life to her forsaken shop;

shop > {Place where something is produced or elaborated, often said of heart, liver, and other internal organs; hence, here: heart}

8 So well he did her deadly wounds repair, 9 That at the last she began to breathe out living air.

201.44

   Which he perceiuing greatly gan reioice,
2 And goodly counsell, that for wounded hart
     Is meetest med'cine, tempred with sweet voice;
4 Ay me, deare Lady, which the image art
     Of ruefull pitie, and impatient smart,
6 What direfull chance, armd with +reuenging+ fate,
     Or cursed hand hath plaid this cruell part,
8 Thus fowle to hasten your vntimely date;
   Speake, O deare Lady speake: help neuer comes too late.

6 reuenging > auenging 1590

1 Which he perceiving, greatly gan rejoice,

gan > did; began to

2 And goodly counsel (that for wounded heart 3 Is meetest medicine) tempered with sweet voice:

meetest > most suitable tempered > blended; moderated; adapted; kept in check

4 "Ay me, dear lady, who the image are

Ay me > Ah me! Alas! (chiefly in northern dialect) image > emblem; personification

5 Of rueful pity, and impatient smart,

impatient smart > unendurable pain

6 What direful chance, armed with revenging fate,

direful > terrible

7 Or cursed hand has played this cruel part, 8 Thus foul to hasten your untimely date;

date > end

9 Speak, O dear lady, speak: help never comes too late!"

201.45

   Therewith her dim eie-lids she vp gan reare,
2 On which the drery death did sit, as sad
     As lump of lead, and made darke clouds appeare;
4 But when as him all in bright armour clad
     Before her standing she espied had,
6 As one out of a deadly dreame affright,
     She weakely started, yet she nothing drad:
8 Streight downe againe her selfe in great despight,
   She groueling threw to ground, as hating life and light.

1 Therewith her dim eyelids she up gan rear,

Therewith > With that gan > did

2 On which the dreary death did sit, as sad

sad > heavy

3 As lump of lead, and made dark clouds appear; 4 But when him (all in bright armour clad) 5 Before her standing she espied had, 6 As one out of a deadly dream affright

affright > terrified

7 She weakly started, yet she nothing dreaded: 8 Straight down again herself in great despite

despite > defiance; scorn

9 She grovelling threw to ground, as hating life and light.

grovelling threw > threw [herself] face-down as > [as though]

201.46

   The gentle knight her soone with carefull paine
2 Vplifted light, and softly did vphold:
     Thrise he her reard, and thrise she sunke againe,
4 Till he his armes about her sides gan fold,
     And to her said; Yet if the stony cold
6 Haue not all seized on your frozen hart,
     Let one word fall that may your griefe vnfold,
8 And tell the secret of your mortall smart;
   He oft finds present helpe, who does his griefe impart.

1 The gentle knight her soon with careful pain

gentle > noble; gentle soon > soon; immediately pain > pains, effort

2 Uplifted light, and softly did uphold: 3 Thrice he her reared, and thrice she sank again, 4 Till he his arms about her sides gan fold,

gan > did

5 And to her said: "Yet if the stony cold
6 Has not all seized on your frozen heart,
7 Let one word fall that may your grief unfold,
8 And tell the secret of your mortal smart;

smart > pain; biting pain

9 He oft finds present help, who does his grief impart."

present > prompt, ready

201.47

   Then casting vp a deadly looke, full +low+
2 Shee +sight+ from bottome of her wounded brest,
     And after, many bitter throbs did throw
4 With lips full pale and foltring tongue opprest,
     These words she breathed forth from riuen chest;
6 Leaue, ah leaue off, what euer wight thou bee,
     To let a wearie wretch from her dew rest,
8 And trouble dying soules tranquilitee.
   Take not away now got, which none would giue to me.

1 low > low, 1596 2 sight > sigh't 1609

1 Then, casting up a deadly look, full low

full > very, exceedingly

2 She sighed from bottom of her wounded breast, 3 And after, many bitter throbs did throw 4 With lips full pale and faltering tongue oppressed; 5 These words she breathed forth from riven chest:

riven > split, torn asunder

6 "Leave, ah leave off, whatever wight you be,

wight > person, man

7 To let a weary wretch from her due rest,

let > hinder

8 And trouble dying soul's tranquillity. 9 Take not away now got, which none would give to me."

now > [that which I have now]

201.48

   Ah farre be it (said he) Deare dame fro mee,
2 To hinder soule from her desired rest,
     Or hold sad life in long captiuitee:
4 For all I seeke, is but to haue redrest
     The bitter pangs, that doth your heart infest.
6 Tell then, {o^} Lady tell, what fatall priefe
     Hath with so huge misfortune you opprest?
8 That I may cast to compasse your reliefe,
   Or die with you in sorrow, and partake your griefe.

1 "Ah, far be it," said he, "dear dame, from me 2 To hinder soul from its desired rest, 3 Or hold sad life in long captivity: 4 For all I seek is but to have redressed

redressed > remedied; removed

5 The bitter pangs that do your heart infest.

infest > harass, molest; (catachr.) infect

6 Tell then, O lady tell, what fatal proof

proof > experience, trial

7 Has with so huge misfortune you oppressed?

so > such

8 That I may cast to compass your relief,

That > [So that] cast > contrive compass > accomplish

9 Or die with you in sorrow, and partake your grief."

partake > share in (trans.)

201.49

   With feeble hands then stretched forth on hye,
2 As heauen accusing guiltie of her death,
     And with dry drops congealed in her eye,
4 In these sad words she spent her vtmost breath:
     Heare then, {o^} man, the sorrowes that vneath
6 My tongue can tell, so farre all sense they pas:
     Loe this dead corpse, that lies here vnderneath,
8 The gentlest knight, that euer on greene gras
   Gay steed with spurs did pricke, the good Sir +Mortdant+ was.

9 Mortdant > Mordant 1609

1 With feeble hands then stretched forth on high 2 (As heaven accusing guilty of her death),

As heaven accusing > [As if accusing heaven of being]

3 And with dry drops congealed in her eye, 4 In these sad words she spent her utmost breath:

utmost > final

5 "Hear then, O man, the sorrows that uneath

uneath > scarcely, with difficulty

6 My tongue can tell, so far all sense they pass:

pass > surpass

7 Lo this dead corpse, that lies here underneath, 8 The gentlest knight, that ever on green grass

gentlest > noblest; gentlest

9 Gay steed with spurs did prick, the good Sir Mordant was.

prick > spur; hence: ride

201.50

   Was, (ay the while, that he is not so now)
2 My Lord my loue; my deare Lord, my deare loue,
     So long as heauens iust with equall +brow,+
4 Vouchsafed to behold vs from aboue,
     One day when him high courage did emmoue,
6 As wont ye knights to seeke aduentures wilde,
     He pricked forth, his puissant force to proue,
8 Me then he left enwombed of this child,
   This lucklesse child, whom thus ye see with bloud defild.

3 brow, > brow 1609

1 "Was (ay the while, that he is not so now!)

ay the while > alas the time (expressing grief at the present compared with the past)

2 My lord my love; my dear lord, my dear love,

dear > dear; grievous

3 So long as heavens just with equal brow

heavens just > [the] just heavens equal > impartial brow > countenance

4 Vouchsafed to behold us from above. 5 One day, when him high courage did amove

amove > stir

6 (As wont you knights to seek adventures wild),

wont you knights > you knights are accustomed

7 He pricked forth, his puissant force to prove;

pricked > spurred; hence: rode puissant > mighty (esp. in relation to deeds of arms)

8 Me then he left enwombed of this child,

enwombed of > [holding in the womb, pregnant with]

9 This luckless child, whom thus you see with blood defiled.

201.51

   Him fortuned (hard fortune ye may ghesse)
2 To come, where vile Acrasia does wonne,
     Acrasia a false enchaunteresse,
4 That many errant knights hath foule fordonne:
     Within a wandring Island, that doth ronne
6 And stray in perilous gulfe, her dwelling is,
     Faire Sir, if euer there ye trauell, shonne
8 The cursed land where many wend amis,
   And know it by the name; it hight the Bowre of blis.

1 "Him fortuned (hard fortune you may guess)

fortuned > [it fortuned]

2 To come where vile Acrasia does won,

Acrasia > (Medieval Latin word signifying "incontinence", "unchastity", "absence of self restraint") won > dwell

3 Acrasia, a false enchantress 4 That many errant knights has foul fordone:

errant > itinerant (a "knight errant" roamed in quest of adventure; the word-order here also implies the sense of erring, deviating, etc.) fordone > utterly ruined; destroyed

5 Within a wandering island, that does run

run > course, flow

6 And stray in perilous gulf, her dwelling is; 7 Fair sir, if ever there you travel, shun 8 The cursed land where many wend amiss,

wend amiss > go astray

9 And know +it+ by the name: it hight the Bower of Bliss.

it > [its nature] hight > is called Bower > Dwelling, Abode

201.52

   Her blisse is all in pleasure and delight,
2 Wherewith she makes her louers drunken mad,
     And then with words and weedes of wondrous might,
4 On them she workes her will to vses bad:
     My +lifest+ Lord she thus beguiled had;
6 For he was flesh: (all flesh doth frailtie breed.)
     Whom when I heard to beene so ill bestad,
8 Weake wretch I wrapt my selfe in Palmers weed,
   And cast to seeke him forth through danger and great dreed.

5 lifest > liefest 1590; cf. 201.16:1

1 "Her bliss is all in pleasure and delight, 2 Wherewith she makes her lovers drunken mad,

Wherewith > With which

3 And then, with words and weeds of wondrous might,

weeds > herbs, drugs

4 On them she works her will to uses bad: 5 My liefest lord she thus beguiled had;

liefest > dearest

6 (For he was flesh: all flesh does frailty breed)

frailty > weakness; moral weakness

7 Whom when I heard to been so ill-bestad,

been > [have been] ill-bestad > badly beset, assailed (SUS)

8 Weak wretch, I wrapped myself in palmer's weed,

Weak wretch > (Referring to herself) palmer > {Pilgrim who has returned from the Holy Land, carrying a palm-leaf or palm-branch as a token; also: an itinerant monk} weed > attire, habit

9 And cast to seek him forth through danger and great dread.

cast > resolved

201.53

   Now had faire Cynthia by euen tournes
2 Full measured three quarters of her yeare,
     And thrise three times had fild her crooked hornes,
4 Whenas my wombe her burdein would forbeare,
     And bad me call Lucina to me neare.
6 Lucina came: a manchild forth I brought:
     The woods, the Nymphes, my bowres, my midwiues weare,
8 Hard helpe at need. So deare thee babe I bought,
   Yet nought too deare I deemd, while so my dear I sought.

1 "Now had fair Cynthia by even turns 2 Full measured three-quarters of her year, 3 And thrice three times had filled her crooked horns,

horns > [horns of the crescent moon, filled once a month at the full moon]

4 When my womb its burden would forbear,

forbear > part with

5 And bade me call Lucina to me near.

Lucina > (The goddess of childbirth, sometimes identified, as here, with Diana)

6 Lucina came: a manchild forth I brought: 7 The woods, the nymphs, my bowers, my midwives were,

nymphs > (Nymphs are the minor female divinities with whom the Greeks peopled all parts of nature: the seas, springs, rivers, grottoes, trees, mountains. The nymphs referred to here are evidently dryads, wood-nymphs) bowers > rooms, hence: shelter [the woods were my shelter, the nymphs my midwives]; or, just possibly, in view of the spelling and number of bowres: muscles [the woods, the nymphs, and my own exertions were my only help in childbirth]

8 Hard help at need. So dear you babe I bought,

need > [a time of need] dear > dearly, grievously

9 Yet naught too dear I deemed, while so my dear I sought.

naught > not at all so my dear > [thus Sir Mordant]

201.54

   Him so I sought, and so at last I found,
2 Where him that witch had thralled to her will,
     In chaines of lust and lewd desires ybound,
4 And so transformed from his former skill,
     That me he knew not, neither his owne ill;
6 Till through wise handling and faire gouernance,
     I him recured to a better will,
8 Purged from drugs of foule intemperance:
   Then meanes I gan deuise for his deliuerance.

1 "Him so I sought, and so at last I found,

so > thus

2 Where him that witch had thralled to her will,

thralled > enslaved, made a captive

3 In chains of lust and lewd desires bound, 4 And so transformed from his former skill

skill > reason, power of discrimination; knowledge

5 That me he knew not, neither his own ill;

neither > [neither did he know] ill > distress; wickedness

6 Till, through wise handling and fair governance,

handling > treatment governance > governing, management; self-control

7 I him recured to a better will,

recured > restored

8 Purged from drugs of foul intemperance: 9 Then means I gan devise for his deliverance.

gan > did; began to

201.55

   Which when the vile Enchaunteresse perceiu'd,
2 How that my Lord from her I would repriue,
     With cup thus charmd, him parting she deceiu'd;
4 Sad verse, giue death to him that death does giue,
     And losse of loue, to her that loues to liue,
6 So soone as Bacchus with the Nymphe does +lincke,+

     So parted we and on our iourney driue,
8 Till comming to this well, he stoupt to drincke:
   The charme fulfild, dead suddenly he downe did sincke.

6 lincke, > lincke: 1609

1 "Which when the vile enchantress perceived, 2 How my lord from her I would reprieve,

reprieve > reprieve; rescue

3 With cup thus charmed, him parting she deceived:

charmed > enchanted parting > [in parting, while parting]

4 `Sad verse, give death to him that death does give,

Sad > Heavy; ill-omened verse > charm, spell (cf. 312.36:4) death does give > (See note on "Mordant" at 201.0:3)

5 And loss of love, to her that loves to live,

loves to live > (See note on "Amavia" at 201.0:3)

6 So soon as Bacchus with the nymph does link';

Bacchus > (The god of wine; wine itself) nymph > (Nymphs are the minor female divinities with whom the Greeks peopled all parts of nature: the seas, springs, rivers, grottoes, trees, mountains. The nymph figuratively referred to here is a naiad, a nymph of fresh water; hence, fresh water itself)

7 So parted we and on our journey drove, 8 Till, coming to this well, he stooped to drink: 9 The charm fulfilled, dead suddenly he down did sink.

201.56

   Which when I wretch, Not one word more she sayd
2 But breaking +off+ the end for want of breath,
     And slyding soft, as downe to sleepe her layd,
4 And ended all her woe in quiet death.
     That seeing good Sir Guyon, could vneath
6 From teares abstaine, for griefe his hart did grate,
     And from so heauie sight his head did wreath,
8 Accusing fortune, and too cruell fate,
   Which plunged had faire Ladie in so wretched state.

2 off > of, 1590; off, 1596

1 "Which when I wretch …" Not one word more she said, 2 But, breaking off the end for want of breath, 3 And sliding soft, as down to sleep her laid, 4 And ended all her woe in quiet death. 5 That seeing, good Sir Guyon could uneath

uneath > scarcely

6 From tears abstain: for grief his heart did grate,

grate > grind (cf. 101.19:6)

7 And from so heavy sight his head did wreathe,

so heavy > [such a sad] wreathe > turn

8 Accusing Fortune, and too cruel Fate, 9 Which plunged had fair lady in so wretched state.

so > [such a]

201.57

   Then turning to +his+ Palmer said, Old syre
2 Behold the image of mortalitie,
     And feeble nature cloth'd with fleshly tyre,
4 When raging passion with fierce tyrannie
     Robs reason of her due regalitie,
6 And makes it seruant to her basest part:
     The strong it weakens with infirmitie,
8 And with bold furie armes the weakest hart; [smart.
   The strong through pleasure soonest falles, the weake through

1 his > the 1609

1 Then, turning to his palmer, said, "Old sire,

sire > {Father; form of address to a holy or elderly man}

2 Behold the image of mortality,

image > emblem; personification

3 And feeble nature clothed with fleshly tire,

tire > dress, attire

4 When raging passion with fierce tyranny 5 Robs reason of its due regality, 6 And makes it servant to its basest part: 7 The strong it weakens with infirmity, 8 And with bold fury arms the weakest heart; 9 The strong through pleasure soonest falls, the weak through smart."

smart > pain; acute pain

201.58

   But temperance (said he) with golden squire
2 Betwixt them both can measure out a meane,
     Neither to melt in pleasures whot desire,
4 Nor +fry+ in hartlesse griefe and dolefull teene.
     Thrise happie man, who fares them both atweene:
6 But sith this wretched woman ouercome
     Of anguish, rather then of crime hath beene,
8 Reserue her cause to her eternall doome,
   And in the meane vouchsafe her honorable toombe.

4 fry > frye 1590; fryze _sugg. Smith, from Church's conj. of frieze or frize (i.e. "freeze") cf. 201.42:3, 610.33:9; 201.46:6_

1 "But temperance," said he, "with golden square

square > {Carpenter's square, for measuring right-angles, a traditional symbol of temperance; also: rule, precept, model, pattern}

2 Betwixt them both can measure out a mean, 3 Neither to melt in pleasure's hot desire,

pleasure > (Or: Pleasure; see note at 201.0:4)

4 Nor freeze in heartless grief and doleful teen.

freeze > (See Textual Appendix) heartless > [lacking courage] teen > affliction, woe

5 Thrice happy man, who fares them both atween:

atween > between

6 But sith this wretched woman overcome

sith > since

7 Of anguish, rather than of crime has been,

Of > By of crime > by sin

8 Reserve her cause to her eternal doom,

cause > case, suit doom > heavenly judgement

9 And in the mean vouchsafe her honourable tomb."

mean > [mean time] honourable > [an honourable]

201.59

   Palmer (quoth he) death is an +equall+ doome
2 To good and bad, the common Inne of rest;
     But after death the tryall is to come,
4 When best shall be to them, that liued best:
     But both alike, when death hath both supprest,
6 Religious reuerence doth buriall teene,
     Which who so wants, wants so much of his rest:
8 For all so great shame after death I weene,
   As selfe to dyen bad, vnburied bad to beene.

1 equall > euill 1596, 1609

1 "Palmer," quoth he, "death is an equal doom 2 To good and bad, the common inn of rest; 3 But after death the trial is to come, 4 When best shall be to them that lived best: 5 But both alike, when death has both suppressed,

both > [?to both: see next line] suppressed > pressed down; hence: laid low

6 Religious reverence does burial teem,

does burial > [burial does] teem > produce, bear (as offspring); hence: ?yield (this assumes that the spelling has been forced by the rhyme. Another interpretation, suggested by Roche (1978), retains the given spelling, but assumes that "buriall teene" is a misprint for "bury all teene" (teen = grief, woe))

7 Which whoso wants, wants so much of his rest:

whoso > whosoever wants > lacks

8 For all so great shame after death, I ween,

all so > [it is an] equally ween > think

9 As self to die bad, unburied bidden to been."

As self to die bad, unburied bidden to been > [To have died badly as to be left unburied; "bide" (pa. ppl. "bidden") = "to remain in some state or condition"]

201.60

   So both agree their bodies to engraue;
2 The great earthes wombe they open to the sky,
     And with sad Cypresse seemely it embraue,
4 Then couering with a clod their closed eye,
     They lay therein those corses tenderly,
6 And bid them sleepe in euerlasting peace.
     But ere they did their vtmost obsequy,
8 Sir Guyon more affection to increace,
   Bynempt a sacred vow, which none should aye releace.

1 So both agree their bodies to ingrave;

ingrave > inter

2 The great earth's womb they open to the sky, 3 And with sad cypress seemly it embrave,

seemly > fitting (if referring to the cypress branches); fittingly, becomingly (if referring to the action) embrave > adorn

4 Then, covering with a clod their closed eye, 5 They lay therein those corses tenderly,

corses > bodies

6 And bid them sleep in everlasting peace. 7 But, ere they did their utmost obsequy,

utmost obsequy > final obsequies

8 Sir Guyon, more affection to increase, 9 Benamed a sacred vow, which none should ay release.

Benamed > Declared solemnly ay release > ever cancel

201.61

   The dead knights sword out of his sheath he drew,
2 With which he cut a locke of all their heare,
     Which medling with their bloud and earth, he threw
4 Into the graue, and gan deuoutly sweare;
     Such and such euill God on Guyon reare,
6 And worse and worse young Orphane be thy paine,
     If I or thou dew vengeance doe forbeare,
8 Till guiltie bloud her guerdon doe obtaine:
   So shedding many teares, they closd the earth againe.

1 The dead knight's sword out of his sheath he drew, 2 With which he cut a lock of all their hair,

all > (It is not clear whether Guyon and the palmer are included)

3 Which, meddling with their blood and earth, he threw

meddling > mixing

4 Into the grave, and gan devoutly swear:

gan > did

5 "Such-and-such evil God on Guyon rear,

on Guyon rear > [rear up against Guyon]

6 And worse and worse, young orphan, be your pain, 7 If I or you due vengeance do forbear, 8 Till guilty blood her guerdon do obtain!"

guerdon > recompense

9 So, shedding many tears, they closed the earth again.

CANTO II

   Babes bloudie hands may not be clensd,
2 the face of golden Meane.
   Her sisters two Extremities:
4 striue her to banish cleane.

1 Babe's bloody hands may not be cleansed: 2 the face of golden Mean.

face > {External appearance; face of a place or building (e.g. a castle), esp. that comprehended between the flanked angles of two neighbouring bastions} golden > (See 201.58:1, 202.11:6; 202.15:7, Odes 2.10:5) Mean > Medina (named at 202.14:4)

3 Her sisters, two extremities,

extremities > extreme points, extremenesses

4 strive her to banish clean.

clean > entirely, utterly

202.1

   THus when Sir Guyon with his faithfull guide
2 Had with due rites and dolorous lament
     The end of their sad Tragedie vptyde,
4 The litle babe vp in his armes he hent;
     Who with sweet pleasance and bold blandishment
6 Gan smyle on them, that rather ought to weepe,
     As carelesse of his woe, or innocent
8 Of that was doen, that ruth emperced deepe
   In that knights heart, and wordes with bitter teares did steepe.

1 Thus when Sir Guyon with his faithful guide 2 Had with due rites and dolorous lament 3 The end of their sad tragedy uptied,

uptied > tied up

4 The little babe up in his arms he hent;

hent > took, held

5 Who, with sweet pleasance and bold blandishment,

pleasance > joy; disposition to please, complaisance blandishment > {Flattery, cajolery; allurement; anything that pleases}

6 Gan smile on them, that rather ought to weep,

Gan > Did

7 As careless of his woe, or innocent

As > [As if]

8 Of that was done, that ruth empierced deep

that > [that which] that > [so that] ruth > pity empierced > penetrated

9 In that knight's heart, and words with bitter tears did steep.

202.2

   Ah lucklesse babe, borne vnder cruell starre,
2 And in dead parents balefull ashes bred,
     Full litle weenest thou, what sorrowes are
4 Left thee for portion of thy liuelihed,
     Poore Orphane in the wide world scattered,
6 As budding braunch rent from the natiue tree,
     And throwen forth, till it be withered:
8 Such is the state of men: thus enter wee
   Into this life with woe, and end with miseree.

1 "Ah, luckless babe, born under cruel star, 2 And in dead parents' baleful ashes bred,

baleful > unhappy, sorrowful; full of active evil; "bale" also = "funeral pyre", so alluding to the legend of the phoenix

3 Full little ween you what sorrows are

Full > Very, exceedingly ween you > do you imagine

4 Left you for portion of your livelihead;

portion > {Share of an estate left to an heir} livelihead > inheritance; means of living

5 Poor orphan in the wide world scattered, 6 As budding branch rent from the native tree,

As > [Like a] rent > torn native > {Parent; pertaining to one's birthright}

7 And thrown forth, till it be withered: 8 Such is the state of men: thus enter we 9 Into this life with woe, and end with misery."

202.3

   Then soft himselfe inclyning on his knee
2 Downe to that well, did in the water weene
     (So loue does loath disdainfull nicitee)
4 His guiltie hands from bloudie gore to cleene.
     He washt them oft and oft, yet nought they beene
6 For all his washing cleaner. Still he stroue,
     Yet still the litle hands were bloudie seene;
8 The which him into great amaz'ment droue,
   And into diuerse doubt his wauering wonder cloue.

1 Then soft himself inclining on his knee 2 Down to that well, did in the water ween

well > spring; spring with supernatural powers ween > intend

3 (So love does loathe disdainful nicety)

nicety > scrupulosity, fastidiousness

4 His guilty hands from bloody gore to clean.

His > [The baby's]

5 He washed them oft and oft, yet naught they been

naught > not at all been > [were]

6 (For all his washing) cleaner. Still he strove, 7 Yet still the little hands were bloody seen; 8 Which him into great amazement drove, 9 And into diverse doubt his wavering wonder clove.

diverse > diverse; also: distracting (SUS) clove > cleft, divided

202.4

   He wist not whether blot of foule offence
2 Might not be purgd with water nor with bath;
     Or that high God, in +lieu+ of innocence,
4 Imprinted had that token of his wrath,
     To shew how sore bloudguiltinesse he +hat'th+;
6 Or that the charme and venim, which they druncke,
     Their bloud with secret filth infected hath,
8 Being diffused through the senselesse truncke,
   That through the great contagion direfull deadly stunck.

3 lieu > loue sugg. Church 5 hat'th > hat'h 1590; cf. 109.31:5

1 He wist not whether blot of foul offence

wist > knew

2 Might not be purged with water nor with bath; 3 Or that high God, in lieu of innocence,

Or > Either in lieu > in place, instead

4 Imprinted had that token of His wrath, 5 To show how sore blood-guiltiness He hates;

sore > severely; seriously; intensely blood-guiltiness > responsibility for bloodshed

6 Or that the charm and venom, which they drank,

venom > poison drank > (Applies literally to the poison and figuratively to the charm)

7 Their blood with secret filth infected has, 8 Being diffused through the senseless trunk,

trunk > {Corpse; body considered apart from its soul}

9 That, through the great contagion, direful deadly stank.

202.5

   Whom thus at gaze, the Palmer gan to bord
2 With goodly reason, and thus faire bespake;
     Ye bene right +hard+ amated, gratious Lord,
4 And of your ignorance great maruell make,
     Whiles cause not well conceiued ye mistake.
6 But know, that secret vertues are infusd
     In euery fountaine, and in euery lake,
8 Which who hath skill them rightly to haue chusd,
   To proofe of passing wonders hath full often vsd.

3 hard > hart 1590

1 Whom, thus at gaze, the palmer began to board

at gaze > {Gazing in wonder, bewilderment, or perplexity} board > draw near to and address, accost

2 With goodly reason, and thus fair bespoke:

bespoke > spoke

3 "You been right hard amated, gracious lord,

been > [are; have been] amated > daunted, subdued; cast down

4 And of your ignorance great marvel make, 5 While cause not well conceived you mistake.

mistake > imagine erroneously

6 But know that secret virtues are infused

virtues > properties, powers; occult properties

7 In every fountain, and in every lake, 8 Which who has skill them rightly to have chosen,

who has skill > [whoever has the knowledge]

9 To proof of passing wonders has full often used.

proof of > make proof of, prove; hence: demonstrate passing > surpassing full > very

202.6

   Of those some were so from their sourse indewd
2 By great Dame Nature, from whose fruitfull pap
     Their welheads spring, and are with moisture deawd;
4 Which feedes each liuing plant with liquid sap,
     And filles with flowres faire Floraes painted lap:
6 But other some by gift of later grace,
     Or by good prayers, or by other hap,
8 Had vertue pourd into their waters bace,
   And thenceforth were renowmd, and sought from place to place.

1 "Of those some were so from their source endued 2 By great Dame Nature, from whose fruitful pap

pap > breast

3 Their well-heads spring, and are with moisture dewed; 4 Which feeds each living plant with liquid sap, 5 And fills with flowers fair Flora's painted lap: 6 But other some, by gift of later grace,

other some > [some others]

7 Or by good prayers, or by other hap,

hap > chance, fortune

8 Had virtue poured into their waters base,

virtue > efficacy, power; occult power

9 And thenceforth were renowned, and sought from place to place.

202.7

   Such is this well, wrought by occasion straunge,
2 Which to her Nymph befell. Vpon a day,
     As she the woods with bow and shafts did raunge,
4 The hartlesse Hind and Robucke to dismay,
     Dan Faunus chaunst to meet her by the way,
6 And kindling fire at her faire burning eye,
     Inflamed was to follow beauties +chace+,
8 And chaced her, that fast from him did fly;
   As Hind from her, so she fled from her enimy.

7 chace > pray sugg. Collier, after a note by Drayton in a copy of the 1611 edition

1 "Such is this well, wrought by occasion strange

well > spring; spring with supernatural powers occasion > incident, juncture of circumstances

2 Which to its nymph befell. Upon a day,

nymph > (Nymphs are the minor female divinities with whom the Greeks peopled all parts of nature: the seas, springs, rivers, grottoes, trees, mountains. The nymph referred to here is one of the naiads, nymphs of fresh water. Many of these presided over springs which were believed to inspire those who drank the water)

3 As she the woods with bow and shafts did range,

shafts > arrows

4 The hartless hind and roebuck to dismay,

hartless > {Timid (heartless); lacking a hart or harts (hart = the adult male deer, esp. Red Deer)} hind > {Adult female deer, esp. Red Deer} dismay > overcome, defeat; hence: hunt, kill

5 Dan Faunus chanced to meet her by the way,

Dan > {Title of honour, as "Master", "Sir"} Faunus > (The Roman god of the woods, half man and half goat, grandson of Saturn; identified with the Greek Pan)

6 And, kindling fire at her fair burning eye, 7 Inflamed was to follow beauty's chase, 8 And chased her, that fast from him did fly;

fly > flee

9 As hind from her, so she fled from her enemy.

202.8

   At last when fayling breath began to faint,
2 And saw no meanes to scape, of shame affrayd,
     She +set+ her downe to weepe for sore constraint,
4 And to Diana calling lowd for ayde,
     Her deare besought, to let her dye a mayd.
6 The goddesse heard, and suddeine where she sate,
     Welling out streames of teares, and quite dismayd
8 With stony feare of that rude rustick mate,
   Transformd her to a stone from stedfast virgins state.

3 set > sate 1609

1 "At last when failing breath began to faint,

faint > become faint, grow weak; hence: give out

2 And saw no means to scape, of shame afraid,

saw > [she saw] scape > escape

3 She set her down to weep for sore constraint,

her > [herself] constraint > distress

4 And to Diana calling loud for aid, 5 Her dear besought to let her die a maid.

dear > earnestly

6 The goddess heard, and suddenly, where she sat 7 (Welling out streams of tears, and quite dismayed 8 With stony fear of that rude rustic mate), 9 Transformed her to a stone from steadfast virgin's state.

202.9

   Lo now she is that stone, from +whose+ two heads,
2 As from two weeping eyes, fresh streames do flow,
     Yet cold through feare, and old conceiued dreads;
4 And yet the stone her semblance seemes to show,
     Shapt like a maid, that such ye may her know;
6 And yet her vertues in her water byde:
     For it is chast and pure, as purest snow,
8 Ne lets her waues with any filth +be+ dyde,
   But euer like her selfe vnstained hath beene tryde.

1 whose > those 1596, 1609 8 be > he 1596

1 "Lo now she is that stone, from whose two heads, 2 As from two weeping eyes, fresh streams do flow, 3 Yet cold through fear, and old conceived dreads;

Yet > Still

4 And yet the stone her semblance seems to show, 5 Shaped like a maid, that such you may her know;

such > [as such]

6 And yet her virtues in her water bide:

virtues > (Playing on both meanings: "virtues" in the modern sense, and "virtues" as at 202.5:6) bide > remain; remain unchanged

7 For it is chaste and pure, as purest snow, 8 Nor lets her waves with any filth be dyed, 9 But ever like herself, unstained, has been tried.

tried > shown to be

202.10

   From thence it comes, that this babes bloudy hand
2 May not be clensd with water of this well:
     Ne certes Sir striue you it to withstand,
4 But let them still be bloudy, as befell,
     That they his mothers innocence may tell,
6 As she bequeathd in her last testament;
     That as a sacred Symbole it may dwell
8 In her sonnes flesh, to minde reuengement,
   And be for all chast Dames an endlesse moniment.

1 "From thence it comes that this babe's bloody hand 2 May not be cleansed with water of this well:

well > spring; spring with supernatural powers

3 Neither certes sir, strive you it to withstand,

certes > assuredly

4 But let them still be bloody, as befell,

still > always befell > [it befell]

5 That they his mother's innocence may tell,

That > [So that]

6 As she bequeathed in her last testament; 7 That as a sacred symbol it may dwell

That > [So that] dwell > remain

8 In her son's flesh, to mind revengement,

In > On; in (cf. Rom. 7.20) mind > bring to mind revengement > revenge, retribution; punishment

9 And be for all chaste dames an endless monument."

202.11

   He hearkned to his reason, and the childe
2 Vptaking, to the Palmer gaue to beare;
     But his sad fathers armes with bloud defilde,
4 An heauie load himselfe did lightly reare,
     And turning to that place, in which whyleare
6 He left his loftie steed with golden sell,
     And goodly gorgeous barbes, him found not theare.
8 By other accident that earst befell,
   He is conuaide, but how or where, here fits not tell.

1 He hearkened to his reason, and the child 2 Uptaking, to the palmer gave to bear; 3 But his sad father's arms, with blood defiled,

arms > {Weapons, shield and armour}

4 A heavy load, himself did lightly rear,

lightly > easily

5 And turning to that place, in which whilere

turning > returning whilere > erewhile: lately

6 He left his lofty steed with golden sell,

sell > saddle

7 And goodly gorgeous bards, him found not there.

bards > horse-armour

8 By other accident that erst befell,

other > [another] accident > unforeseen event, chance erst > recently

9 He is conveyed, but how or where, here fits not tell.

conveyed > removed in an underhand manner (described at 203.4) tell > [to tell]

202.12

   Which when Sir Guyon saw, all were he wroth,
2 Yet algates mote he soft himselfe appease,
     And fairely fare on foot, how euer loth;
4 His double burden did him sore disease.
     So long they traueiled with litle ease,
6 Till that at last they to a Castle came,
     Built on a rocke adioyning to the +seas,+
8 It was an auncient worke of antique fame,
   And wondrous strong by nature, and by skilfull frame.

7 seas, > seas: 1609

1 Which when Sir Guyon saw, all were he wroth,

all were he wroth > [although he was angry]

2 Yet algates might he soft himself appease,

algates > after all; at any rate

3 And fairly fare on foot, however loath; 4 His double burden did him sore disease.

disease > dis-ease: discomfort, distress

5 So long they travelled with little ease, 6 Till at last they to a castle came, 7 Built on a rock adjoining the sea; 8 It was an ancient work of antique fame, 9 And wondrous strong by nature, and by skilful frame.

frame > construction; architectural intent

202.13

   Therein three sisters dwelt of sundry sort,
2 The children of one sire by mothers three;
     Who dying whylome did diuide this fort
4 To them by equall shares in equall fee:
     But +strifull+ minde, and diuerse qualitee
6 Drew them in parts, and each made others foe:
     Still they did striue, and dayly disagree;
8 The eldest did against the youngest goe,
   And both against the middest meant to worken woe.

5 strifull > strifefull 1609

1 Therein three sisters dwelt of sundry sort,

sundry > different; distinct

2 The children of one sire by mothers three;

sire > father

3 Who, dying whilom, did divide this fort

whilom > at some past time; a while ago (the intended pointing might also be "Who, dying, whylome did diuide …") divide > {Separate into parts and distribute}

4 To them by equal shares in equal fee:

fee > {Estate of inheritance held in land}

5 But strifeful mind and diverse quality

quality > disposition, character

6 Drew them in parts, and each made others' foe:

in parts > into factions ("part" is cognate with "party", = prin- cipal in legal proceeding) others' > [the others'; or: the other's, in view of lines 7-9]

7 Still they did strive, and daily disagree;

Still > Always, ever

8 The eldest did against the youngest go, 9 And both against the middest meant to work woe.

middest > midmost, middle [sister]

202.14

   Where when the knight arriu'd, he was right well
2 Receiu'd, as knight of so much worth became,
     Of second sister, who did far excell
4 The other two; Medina was her name,
     A sober sad, and comely curteous Dame;
6 Who rich arayd, and yet in modest guize,
     In goodly garments, that her well became,
8 Faire marching forth in honorable wize,
   Him at the threshold met, and well did enterprize.

1 Where when the knight arrived, he was right well

right > very

2 Received, as knight of so much worth became,

became > fitted, suited

3 Of second sister, who did far excel

Of > [By the]

4 The other two; Medina was her name,

Medina > "Mean", "Central" (Latin medius, middle); hence:
"Temperate"

5 A sober, sad, and comely courteous dame;

sad > grave, serious comely > decorous, decent

6 Who (rich arrayed, and yet in modest guise,

guise > appearance; demeanour; behaviour

7 In goodly garments, that her well became), 8 Fair marching forth in honourable wise,

wise > manner

9 Him at the threshold met, and well did enterprise.

enterprise > undertake, take in hand; hence: welcome, entertain

202.15

   She led him vp into a goodly bowre,
2 And comely courted with meet modestie,
     Ne in her speach, ne in her hauiour,
4 Was lightnesse seene, or looser vanitie,
     But gratious womanhood, and grauitie,
6 Aboue the reason of her youthly yeares:
     Her golden lockes she roundly did vptye
8 In +breaded+ tramels, that no looser heares
   Did out of order stray about her daintie eares.

8 breaded > brayded 1609

1 She led him up into a goodly bower,

bower > room, chamber

2 And comely courted with meet modesty;

comely > decorously meet > appropriate, fitting

3 Neither in her speech, nor in her haviour,

haviour > deportment, bearing; behaviour

4 Was lightness seen, or looser vanity,

looser > too-loose; loose

5 But gracious womanhood, and gravity, 6 Above the reason of her youthly years:

Above the reason of > [Beyond those to be expected from one of]

7 Her golden locks she roundly did uptie

roundly > completely; severely uptie > tie up, bind

8 In braided trammels, that no looser hairs

trammels > constraints, restraints (her hair is held in place by braids rather than a snood or net) that > [so that] looser > too-loose; loose

9 Did out of order stray about her dainty ears.

202.16

   Whilest she her selfe thus busily did frame,
2 Seemely to entertaine her new-come guest,
     Newes hereof to her other sisters came,
4 Who all this while were at their wanton rest,
     Accourting each her friend with lauish fest:
6 They were two knights of perelesse puissance,
     And famous far abroad for warlike gest,
8 Which to these Ladies loue did countenaunce,
   And to his mistresse each himselfe stroue to aduaunce.

1 Whilst she herself thus busily did frame,

frame > direct, give shape to; hence: proceed

2 Seemly to entertain her new-come guest,

Seemly > Suitably, properly, seemlily

3 News hereof to her other sisters came, 4 Who all this while were at their wanton rest, 5 Accourting each her friend with lavish feast:

Accourting > Courting, entertaining (WU) friend > lover

6 They were two knights of peerless puissance,

puissance > strength, power

7 And famous far abroad for warlike gest,

gest > exploits

8 Who to these ladies love did countenance,

countenance > make a show of; pretend

9 And to his mistress each himself strove to advance.

202.17

   He that made loue vnto the eldest Dame,
2 Was hight Sir Huddibras, an hardy man;
     Yet not so good of deedes, as great of name,
4 Which he by many rash aduentures wan,
     Since errant armes to sew he first began;
6 More huge in strength, then wise in workes he was,
     And reason with foole-hardize ouer ran;
8 Sterne melancholy did his courage pas,
   And was for terrour more, all armd in shyning bras.

1 He that made love to the eldest dame 2 Was hight Sir Huddibras, a hardy man;

hight > called Huddibras > (A name catalogued by Spenser in his roll of British kings at 210.25:4. Glossed by Roche (1978) as "Rashness"; Hamilton (1980) speculates on "Hardi-bras", "Foolhardiness"; this might also be interpreted as "One Who Chances His Arm". The name "Hudibras" was used by Samuel Butler for his satire of that name published in 1662, but according to the Grub Street Journal (1731), Butler derived the name from that of Hugh de Bras, the patron saint of Cornwall)

3 Yet not so good of deeds, as great of name,

name > reputation, fame

4 Which he by many rash adventures won, 5 Since errant arms to sue he first began;

errant arms > [feats of arms performed by a knight errant] sue > {Pursue, go in quest of; take as a model, pattern, or ideal}

6 More huge in strength than wise in works he was, 7 And reason with foolhardice overran;

foolhardice > foolhardiness

8 Stern melancholy did his courage pass,

Stern > Fierce, grim, harsh melancholy > melancholy, gloom; irascibility pass > surpass, exceed

9 And was, for terror more, all armed in shining brass.

terror more > [greater terror]

202.18

   But he that lou'd the youngest, was Sans-loy,
2 He that faire Vna late fowle outraged,
     The most vnruly, and the boldest boy,
4 That euer warlike weapons menaged,
     And to all lawlesse lust encouraged,
6 Through strong opinion of his matchlesse might:
     Ne ought he car'd, whom he endamaged
8 By tortious wrong, or whom bereau'd of right.
   He now this Ladies champion chose for loue to fight.

1 But he that loved the youngest was Sansloy 2 (He that fair Una late foul outraged),

late > lately (see 103.43-44, 106.3-8)

3 The most unruly, and the boldest, boy 4 That ever warlike weapons managed,

managed > wielded

5 And to all lawless lust encouraged,

encouraged > [was encouraged]

6 Through strong opinion of his matchless might: 7 Ne aught he cared whom he endamaged

Ne aught > Naught; and naught endamaged > inflicted injury upon; hurt

8 By tortious wrong, or whom bereaved of right.

tortious > injurious; wicked; illegal

9 He now this lady's champian chose for love to fight.

champian > campaign, field of military operations

202.19

   These two gay knights, vowd to so diuerse loues,
2 Each other does enuie with deadly hate,
     And dayly warre against his foeman moues,
4 In hope to win more fauour with his mate,
     And th'others pleasing seruice to abate,
6 To magnifie his owne. But when they heard,
     How in that place straunge knight arriued late,
8 Both knights and Ladies forth right angry far'd,
   And fiercely vnto battell sterne themselues prepar'd.

1 These two gay knights, vowed to so diverse loves,

gay > fine so diverse > [such different]

2 Each other does envy with deadly hate,

envy > begrudge

3 And daily war against his foeman moves,

foeman > foe, enemy moves > stirs up

4 In hope to win more favour with his mate, 5 And the other's pleasing service to abate, 6 To magnify his own. But when they heard 7 How in that place strange knight arrived late,

strange > [a foreign, an unknown] late > recently

8 Both knights and ladies forth right angry fared,

right > at once; very

9 And fiercely to battle stern themselves prepared.

stern > hard, stubbornly contested; fierce

202.20

   But ere they could proceede vnto the place,
2 Where he abode, themselues at discord fell,
     And cruell combat ioynd in middle space:
4 With horrible assault, and furie fell,
     They heapt huge strokes, the scorned life to quell,
6 That all on vprore from her settled seat,
     The house was raysd, and all that in did dwell;
8 Seemd that lowde thunder with amazement great
   Did rend the ratling skyes with flames of fouldring heat.

1 But ere they could proceed to the place 2 Where he abode, themselves at discord fell, 3 And cruel combat joined in middle space:

joined > (To "join battle" is to come together and begin fighting)

4 With horrible assault, and fury fell,

fell > fierce, terrible

5 They heaped huge strokes, the scorned life to quell,

the > (Each other's; and each is also careless of his own) quell > destroy; extinguish

6 That all on uproar from its settled seat

That > [So that]

7 The house was raised, and all that in did dwell; 8 Seemed that loud thunder with amazement great

Seemed > [It seemed] amazement > consternation, frenzy

9 Did rend the rattling skies with flames of fouldering heat.

fouldering > {Flashing or thundering forth; cf. 111.40:2}

202.21

   The noyse thereof +calth+ forth that straunger knight,
2 To weet, what dreadfull thing was there in +hand+;
     Where when as two braue knights in bloudy fight
4 With deadly rancour he enraunged fond,
     His sunbroad shield about his wrest he bond,
6 And shyning blade vnsheathd, with which he ran
     Vnto that stead, their strife to vnderstond;
8 And at his first arriuall, them began
   With goodly meanes to pacifie, well as he can.

1 calth > cald 1590 2 hand > hond 1609

1 The noise thereof called forth that stranger knight,

stranger > new-come; foreign; unknown

2 To weet what dreadful thing was there in hand;

weet > find out

3 Where when two brave knights in bloody fight

brave > brave; splendid

4 With deadly rancour he enranged found,

enranged > arranged; ranged [in battle]

5 His sun-broad shield about his wrist he bound, 6 And shining blade unsheathed, with which he ran 7 To that stead, their strife to understand;

stead > place

8 And at his first arrival them began 9 With goodly means to pacify, well as he can.

well > [as well]

202.22

   But they him spying, both with greedy forse
2 Attonce vpon him ran, and him beset
     With strokes of mortall steele without remorse,
4 And on his shield like yron sledges bet:
     As when a Beare and Tygre being met
6 In cruell fight on lybicke Ocean wide,
     Espye a traueiler with feet surbet,
8 Whom they in equall pray hope to deuide,
   They stint their strife, and him assaile on euery side.

1 But they, him spying, both with greedy force

greedy > eager; mad, reckless

2 At once upon him ran, and him beset

At once > Immediately; together, simultaneously

3 With strokes of mortal steel without remorse,

remorse > {Compunction; mitigation; also: biting or cutting force (SUFQ; cf. 402.15:3)}

4 And on his shield like iron sledges beat:

sledges > sledge-hammers

5 As when a bear and tiger, being met 6 In cruel fight on Libyan ocean wide,

ocean > {A great expanse of anything; hence: desert}

7 Espy a traveller with feet surbated,

surbated > bruised, sore (from too much walking)

8 Whom they in equal prey hope to divide, 9 They stint their strife, and him assail on every side.

202.23

   But he, not like a wearie traueilere,
2 Their sharpe assault right +bloudy+ did rebut,
     And suffred not their blowes to byte him nere,
4 But with redoubled buffes them backe did put:
     Whose grieued mindes, which choler did englut,
6 Against themselues turning their wrathfull spight,
     Gan with new rage their shields to hew and cut;
8 But still when Guyon came to part their fight,
   With heauie load on him they freshly gan to smight.

2 bloudy > boldly 1590; boldy 1609

1 But he, not like a weary traveller,

not like > unlike

2 Their sharp assault right boldly did rebut, 3 And suffered not their blows to bite him near,

suffered > allowed

4 But with redoubled buffs them back did put:

buffs > buffets, blows

5 Whose grieved minds, which choler did englut,

choler > (One of the four principal humours of the body which, according to medieval belief, were supposed to determine one's mental and physical attributes: phlegm, blood, black bile, and choler. Choler was associated with rage) englut > swallow, engulf; satiate

6 Against themselves turning their wrathful spite, 7 Began with new rage their shields to hew and cut; 8 But still when Guyon came to part their fight,

still > ever, always

9 With heavy load on him they freshly began to smite.

heavy > heavy; grievous; intense

202.24

   As a tall ship tossed in troublous seas,
2 Whom raging windes threatning to make the pray
     Of the rough rockes, do diuersly disease,
4 Meetes two contrary billowes by the way,
     That her on either side do sore assay,
6 And boast to swallow her in greedy graue;
     She scorning both their spights, does make wide way,
8 And with her brest breaking the fomy waue,
   Does ride on both their backs, and faire her selfe doth saue.

1 As a tall ship, tossed in troublous seas,

As > [As when]

2 Whom raging winds (threatening to make the prey

Whom > (Aiding the understanding. A ship is still referred to as "she")

3 Of the rough rocks) do diversely disease,

diversely > variously; also: distractingly (SUS) disease > dis-ease: trouble, distress

4 Meets two contrary billows by the way, 5 That her on either side do sore assay,

assay > assail; make trial of

6 And boast to swallow her in greedy grave;

boast > threaten

7 She, scorning both their spites, does make wide way, 8 And with her breast breaking the foamy wave 9 Does ride on both their backs, and fair herself does save.

202.25

   So boldly he him beares, and rusheth forth
2 Betweene them both, by conduct of his blade.
     Wondrous great prowesse and heroick worth
4 He shewd that day, and rare ensample made,
     When two so mighty warriours he dismade:
6 Attonce he wards and strikes, he takes and payes,
     Now forst to yield, now forcing to inuade,
8 Before, behind, and round about him layes:
   So double was his paines, so double be his prayse.

1 So boldly he him bears, and rushes forth

So > Similarly him > [himself]

2 Between them both, by conduct of his blade.

conduct > management, control

3 Wondrous great prowess and heroic worth

prowess > valour

4 He showed that day, and rare example made, 5 When two so mighty warriors he dismayed:

so > such dismayed > overcame, defeated

6 At once he wards and strikes, he takes and pays, 7 Now forced to yield, now forcing to invade, 8 Before, behind, and round about him lays: 9 So double were his pains, so double be his praise.

pains > efforts

202.26

   Straunge sort of fight, three valiaunt knights to see
2 Three combats ioyne in one, and to darraine
     A triple warre with triple enmitee,
4 All for their Ladies froward loue to gaine,
     Which gotten was but hate. So loue does raine
6 In stoutest minds, and maketh monstrous warre;
     He maketh warre, he maketh peace againe,
8 And yet his peace is but continuall iarre:
   O miserable men, that to him subiect arre.

1 Strange sort of fight, three valiant knights to see 2 Three combats join in one, and to deraign

deraign > {Challenge; determine; fight a contest in order to settle a dispute}

3 A triple war with triple enmity, 4 All for their ladies' froward love to gain,

froward > perverse, evilly disposed

5 Which gotten was but hate. So Love does reign

gotten > [once got, once secured] Love > [Cupid]

6 In stoutest minds, and makes monstrous war;

stoutest > [the] bravest

7 He makes war, he makes peace again, 8 And yet his peace is but continual jar:

jar > discord

9 O miserable men, that to him subject are.

202.27

   Whilst thus they mingled were in furious armes,
2 The faire Medina with her tresses torne,
     And naked brest, in pitty of their harmes,
4 Emongst them ran, and falling them beforne,
     Besought them by the womb, which them had borne,
6 And by the loues, which were to them most deare,
     And by the knighthood, which they sure had sworne,
8 Their deadly cruell discord to forbeare,
   And to her iust conditions of faire peace to heare.

1 Whilst thus they mingled were in furious arms,

arms > deeds of arms; hence: armed combat

2 The fair Medina, with her tresses torn, 3 And naked breast, in pity of their harms,

harms > troubles, pains

4 Amongst them ran and, falling them before, 5 Besought them by the womb which them had borne, 6 And by the loves, which were to them most dear, 7 And by the knighthood which they sure had sworn,

knighthood > [vows of chivalry]

8 Their deadly cruel discord to forbear, 9 And to her just conditions of fair peace to hear.

hear > listen, give audience

202.28

   But her two other sisters standing by,
2 Her lowd gainsaid, and both +their champions+ bad
     Pursew the end of their strong enmity,
4 As euer of their loues they would be glad.
     Yet she with pitthy words and counsell sad,
6 Still stroue their stubborne rages to reuoke,
     That at the last suppressing fury mad,
8 They gan abstaine from dint of direfull stroke,
   And hearken to the sober speaches, which she spoke.

2 their champions > her champions 1590; their champion 1596, 1609; this correction is generally agreed

1 But her two other sisters, standing by,

other > (Superfluous to the sense)

2 Her loud gainsaid, and both their champions bade 3 Pursue the end of their strong enmity, 4 As ever of their loves they would be glad.

As > [As; if]

5 Yet she, with pithy words and counsel sad,

pithy > significant, full of meaning sad > grave

6 Still strove their stubborn rages to revoke,

revoke > restrain

7 That at the last, suppressing fury mad,

That > [So that]

8 They gan abstain from dint of direful stroke,

gan > did dint > [the dealing of blows; the force] direful > dreadful, terrible stroke > (Collectively)

9 And hearken to the sober speeches which she spoke.

202.29

   Ah puissaunt Lords, what cursed euill Spright,
2 Or fell +Erinnys+ in your noble +harts,+
     Her hellish brond hath kindled with despight,
4 And stird you vp to worke your wilfull smarts?
     Is this the ioy of armes? be these the parts
6 Of glorious knighthood, after bloud to +thrust+,
     And not regard dew right and iust desarts?
8 Vaine is the vaunt, and victory vniust,
   That more to mighty hands, then rightfull cause doth trust.

2 Erinnys > Erinnys, 1609 2 harts, > harts 1609 6 thrust > thurst 1609

1 "Ah, puissant lords, what cursed evil spirit,

puissant > mighty

2 Or fell Erinnys in your noble hearts,

fell > fierce, terrible Erinnys > (The Erinnyes or Furies are three goddesses who guard the gates of hell)

3 Her hellish brand has kindled with despite,

brand > burning, fire; torch; sword (if the last sense applies, "kindled" = "made to glow") despite > rage, malice

4 And stirred you up to work your wilful smarts?

smarts > sharp pains

5 Is this the joy of arms? Be these the parts

parts > qualities; abilities

6 Of glorious knighthood, after blood to thrust,

thrust > thrust; thirst

7 And not regard due right and just deserts? 8 Vain is the vaunt, and victory unjust,

vaunt > boast

9 That more to mighty hands than rightful cause does trust.

202.30

   And were +there+ rightfull cause of difference,
2 Yet were not better, faire it to accord,
     Then with +bloud guiltnesse+ to heape offence,
4 And mortall vengeaunce ioyne to crime abhord?
     O fly from wrath, fly, O my liefest Lord:
6 Sad be the sights, and bitter fruits of warre,
     And thousand furies wait on wrathfull sword;
8 Ne ought the prayse of prowesse more doth marre,
   Then fowle reuenging rage, and base contentious iarre.

1 there > their 1596, 1609; cf. 110.36:6, 206.27:9, 211.21:8, 304.41:7, 312.28:1 3 bloud guiltnesse > bloodguiltnesse 1590; bloodguiltinesse 1609; cf. 202.4:5

1 "And were there rightful cause of difference, 2 Yet were not better, fair it to accord,

were > [were it] accord > reconcile

3 Than with blood-guiltiness to heap offence,

blood-guiltiness > responsibility for bloodshed offence > hurt, harm, damage; injury

4 And mortal vengeance join to crime abhorred? 5 O fly from wrath, fly, O my liefest lord:

liefest > dearest

6 Sad be the sights and bitter fruits of war, 7 And thousand furies wait on wrathful sword;

furies > (Or Furies, traditionally (in later accounts) the three goddesses who guard the gates of hell; in earlier accounts, they are avenging deities, of indeterminate number, sent from hell to punish wrongdoers) wait on > [attend the]

8 Ne aught the praise of prowess more does mar,

Ne aught > Naught; and naught praise > praiseworthiness prowess > valour

9 Than foul revenging rage, and base contentious jar.

jar > discord

202.31

   But louely concord, and most sacred peace
2 Doth nourish vertue, and fast friendship breeds;
     Weake she makes strong, and strong thing does increace,
4 Till it the pitch of highest prayse exceeds:
     Braue be her warres, and honorable deeds,
6 By which she triumphes ouer ire and pride,
     And winnes an Oliue girlond for her meeds:
8 Be therefore, O my deare Lords, pacifide,
   And this misseeming discord meekely lay aside.

1 "But lovely concord, and most sacred peace,

lovely > loving

2 Does nourish virtue, and fast friendship breeds;

fast > firm

3 Weak she makes strong, and strong thing does increase, 4 Till it the pitch of highest praise exceeds: 5 Brave be her wars, and honourable deeds, 6 By which she triumphs over ire and pride, 7 And wins an olive garland for her meeds:

olive > (The emblem of peace and concord; see Gen. 8.11, Ps. 128.3) meeds > meed, reward

8 Be therefore, O my dear lords, pacified, 9 And this misseeming discord meekly lay aside."

misseeming > unseemly

202.32

   Her gracious wordes their rancour did appall,
2 And suncke so deepe into their boyling brests,
     That downe they let their cruell weapons fall,
4 And lowly did abase their loftie crests
     To her faire presence, and discrete behests.
6 Then she began a treatie to procure,
     And stablish termes betwixt both their requests,
8 That as a law for euer should endure;
   Which to obserue in word of knights they did assure.

1 Her gracious words their rancour did appal,

appal > {Make pale, flat, or stale, cause to fade; hence: quell}

2 And sank so deep into their boiling breasts 3 That down they let their cruel weapons fall, 4 And lowly did abase their lofty crests

abase > lower (lit. or fig.)

5 To her fair presence and discreet behests.

behests > bidding, injunctions

6 Then she began a treaty to procure,

procure > bring about

7 And establish terms betwixt both their requests,

requests > demands

8 That as a law for ever should endure: 9 Which to observe, in word of knights they did assure.

assure > pledge [each giving his word as a knight]

202.33

   Which to confirme, and fast to bind their league,
2 After their wearie sweat and bloudy toile,
     She them besought, during their quiet treague,
4 Into her lodging to repaire a while,
     To rest themselues, and grace to reconcile.
6 They soone consent: so forth with her they fare,
     Where they are well receiu'd, and made to spoile
8 Themselues of soiled armes, and to prepare
   Their minds to pleasure, and their mouthes to dainty fare.

1 Which to confirm, and fast to bind their league,

fast > firmly

2 After their weary sweat and bloody toil, 3 She them besought, during their quiet treague,

treague > truce

4 Into her lodging to repair awhile,

repair > go, betake themselves

5 To rest themselves, and grace to reconcile.

grace > in goodwill; gracefully; goodwill reconcile > (Taking the first two senses of "grace" requires this to be reflexive, "themselves" being understood from the previous verb)

6 They soon consent: so forth with her they fare,

soon > immediately

7 Where they are well received, and made to spoil

spoil > divest

8 Themselves of soiled arms, and to prepare

arms > armour

9 Their minds to pleasure, and their mouths to dainty fare.

dainty > pleasing; scarce; choice (esp. of food)

202.34

   And those two froward sisters, their faire loues
2 Came with them eke, all were they wondrous loth,
     And fained cheare, as for the time behoues,
4 But could not colour yet so well the troth,
     But that their natures bad appeard in both:
6 For both did at their second sister grutch,
     And inly grieue, as doth an hidden moth
8 The inner garment fret, not th'vtter touch;
   One +thought their+ cheare too litle, th'other thought too mutch.

9 thought their > thoug ther _1590: i.e. a misprint of thought her, "which we should perhaps read" (Smith)_

1 And those two froward sisters, their fair loves,

froward > perverse, evilly disposed

2 Came with them eke, all were they wondrous loath,

eke > also all were they > [although they were]

3 And feigned cheer, as for the time behoves, 4 But could not colour yet so well the troth,

colour > [give a colour to; hence: simulate] troth > allegiance, covenant; truth

5 But that their natures bad appeared in both:

both > each

6 For both did at their second sister grutch,

grutch > murmur, grumble

7 And inly grieve, as does a hidden moth

inly > inwardly

8 The inner garment fret, not the utter touch;

fret > gnaw not > [but not] utter > outer; outward

9 One thought her cheer too little, the other thought too much.

202.35

   Elissa (so the eldest hight) did deeme
2 Such entertainment base, ne ought would eat,
     Ne ought would speake, but euermore did seeme
4 As discontent for want of merth or meat;
     No solace could her Paramour intreat
6 Her once to show, ne court, nor dalliance,
     But with bent lowring browes, as she would threat,
8 She scould, and frownd with froward countenaunce,
   Vnworthy of faire Ladies comely gouernaunce.

1 Elissa (so the eldest hight) did deem

Elissa > "Too Little" (Greek) hight > was named

2 Such entertainment base, nor aught would eat,

entertainment > hospitality

3 Nor aught would speak, but evermore did seem 4 As discontent for want of mirth or meat;

As discontent > [As though discontented] want > lack mirth > diversion, entertainment meat > food

5 No solace could her paramour entreat

solace > pleasure, enjoyment

6 Her once to show, nor court, nor dalliance,

court > {Courteous or amorous attention} dalliance > {Idle and amusing talk, banter}

7 But with bent louring brows, as she would threat,

as > [as if] threat > threaten

8 She scowled, and frowned with froward countenance,

froward > perverse

9 Unworthy of fair lady's comely governance.

governance > demeanour; behaviour

202.36

   But young Perissa was of other mind,
2 Full of disport, still laughing, loosely light,
     And quite contrary to her sisters kind;
4 No measure in her mood, no rule of right,
     But poured out in pleasure and delight;
6 In wine and meats she flowd aboue the bancke,
     And in excesse exceeded her owne might;
8 In sumptuous tire she ioyed her selfe to prancke,
   But of her loue too lauish (litle haue she thancke.)

1 But young Perissa was of other mind,

Perissa > "Too Much" (Greek)

2 Full of disport, still laughing, loosely light,

disport > merriment, diversion still > continually

3 And quite contrary to her sister's kind;

sister's > (Clearly meaning Elissa) kind > nature

4 No measure in her mood, no rule of right, 5 But poured out in pleasure and delight; 6 In wine and meats she flowed above the bank,

meats > food, viands

7 And in excess exceeded her own might; 8 In sumptuous tire she joyed herself to prank,

tire > attire prank > {Dress up; dress or deck oneself in a showy manner}

9 But of her love too lavish (little have she thought).

little have she thought > [she has thought of little; she is empty- headed]

202.37

   +Fast+ by her side did sit the bold Sans-loy,
2 Fit mate for such a mincing mineon,
     Who in her loosenesse tooke exceeding ioy;
4 Might not be found a franker franion,
     Of her lewd parts to make companion;
6 But Huddibras, more like a Malecontent,
     Did see and grieue at his bold fashion;
8 Hardly could he endure his hardiment,
   Yet still he sat, and inly did him selfe torment.

1 Fast > First 1590 etc.: FE

1 Fast by her side did sit the bold Sansloy,

Fast > Very closely

2 Fit mate for such a mincing minion,

mincing > affectedly dainty minion > lady-love, paramour

3 Who in her looseness took exceeding joy; 4 Might not be found a franker franion

Might > [There might] franker > freer, looser; more ingenuous, more outspoken franion > paramour, ladies' man

5 Of her lewd parts to make companion;

parts > capacities, attributes (also "lewd parts" = "private parts")

6 But Huddibras, more like a malcontent, 7 Did see and grieve at his bold fashion; 8 Hardly could he endure his hardiment,

hardiment > boldness

9 Yet still he sat, and inly did himself torment.

inly > inwardly

202.38

   Betwixt them both the faire Medina sate
2 With sober grace, and goodly carriage:
     With equall measure she did moderate
4 The strong extremities of their outrage;
     That +forward+ paire she euer would asswage,
6 When they would striue dew reason to exceed;
     But that same froward twaine would accourage,
8 And of her plenty adde vnto their need:
   So kept she them in order, and her selfe in heed.

5 forward > froward dub. conj. Morris, in view of line 7

1 Betwixt them both the fair Medina sat 2 With sober grace, and goodly carriage: 3 With equal measure she did moderate

equal > equal; impartial

4 The strong extremities of their outrage;

outrage > intemperance

5 That forward pair she ever would assuage,

That forward pair > [Perissa and Sansloy] assuage > pacify, appease

6 When they would strive due reason to exceed;

due > appropriate, proper

7 But that same froward twain would accourage,

froward > perverse (also, as an adv. or prep., "fromward", and so pointing the contrast with "that forward pair") twain > two, pair (Elissa and Huddibras) accourage > encourage (WUFQ)

8 And of her plenty add to their need: 9 So kept she them in order, and herself in heed.

in heed > heeded, regarded

202.39

   Thus fairely she attempered her feast,
2 And pleasd them all with meete satietie,
     At last when lust of meat and drinke was ceast,
4 She Guyon deare besought of curtesie,
     To tell from whence he came through ieopardie,
6 And whither now on new aduenture bound.
     Who with bold grace, and comely grauitie,
8 Drawing to him the eyes of all around,
   From lofty siege began these words aloud to sound.

1 Thus fairly she attempered her feast,

fairly > well, expertly attempered > regulated; tempered, moderated

2 And pleased them all with meet satiety;

meet > appropriate satiety > {Sufficiency; the condition of being fully satisfied, without the modern connotation of surfeit}

3 At last when lust of meat and drink was ceased,

lust of meat > desire for food

4 She Guyon dear besought of courtesy

dear > earnestly, heartily of courtesy > by favour, as an indulgence (on Guyon's part)

5 To tell from whence he came through jeopardy, 6 And whither now on new adventure bound. 7 Who with bold grace, and comely gravity, 8 Drawing to him the eyes of all around, 9 From lofty siege began these words aloud to sound.

siege > seat (esp. one used by person of rank or distinction)

202.40

   This thy demaund, {o^} Lady, doth reuiue
2 Fresh memory in me of that great Queene,
     Great and most glorious virgin Queene aliue,
4 That with her soueraigne powre, and scepter shene
     All Faery lond does +peaceably+ sustene.
6 In widest Ocean she her throne does reare,
     That ouer all the earth it may be seene;
8 As morning Sunne her beames dispredden cleare,
   And in her face faire peace, and mercy doth appeare.

5 peaceably > peaceable 1596, 1609

1 "This, your demand, O lady, does revive

demand > request

2 Fresh memory in me of that great queen,

that great queen > [Gloriana]

3 Great and most glorious virgin queen alive, 4 That with her sovereign power and sceptre sheen

sheen > shining, resplendent

5 All Faery Land does peaceably sustain. 6 In widest ocean she her throne does rear, 7 That over all the earth it may be seen;

That > [So that]

8 As morning sun her beams dispread clear,

dispread > [are] spread out; spread about

9 And in her face fair peace and mercy do appear.

202.41

   In her the richesse of all heauenly +grace,+
2 In chiefe degree are heaped vp on hye:
     And all that else this worlds enclosure +bace,+
4 Hath great or glorious in mortall +eye,+
     Adornes the person of her Maiestie;
6 That men beholding so great excellence,
     And rare perfection in mortalitie,
8 Do her adore with sacred reuerence,
   As th'Idole of her makers great magnificence.

1 grace, > grace 1609 3 bace, > bace 1609 4 eye, > eye. 1596

1 "In her the richesse of all heavenly grace

richesse > riches

2 In chief degree are heaped up on high: 3 And all that else this world's enclosure base

else > otherwise enclosure base > [earthly confines, lowly confines]

4 Has great or glorious in mortal eye,

Has > [Holds which is]

5 Adorns the person of her majesty; 6 That men, beholding so great excellence,

That > [So that] so > such

7 And rare perfection in mortality,

mortality > mortal form; mortal existence; mortals collectively

8 Do her adore with sacred reverence, 9 As the idol of her Maker's great magnificence.

idol > image

202.42

   To her I homage and my seruice owe,
2 In number of the noblest knights on ground,
     Mongst whom on me she deigned to bestowe
4 Order of Maydenhead, the most renownd,
     That may this day in all the world be +found,+
6 An yearely solemne feast she wontes to +make+
     The day that first doth lead the yeare around;
8 To which all knights of worth and courage bold
   Resort, to heare of straunge aduentures to be told.

5 found, > found: 1609 6 make > hold conj. various editors

1 "To her I homage and my service owe, 2 In number of the noblest knights on ground,

number > [the company] on ground > in the world

3 Amongst whom on me she deigned to bestow 4 Order of Maidenhead, the most renowned

Order of Maidenhead > (A reference to the Order of the Garter, the highest chivalric order of English knighthood, instituted c. 1344; the sovereign (i.e. Elizabeth I, the Virgin Queen) is head of the order)

5 That may this day in all the world be found: 6 A yearly solemn feast she wonts to make

yearly > (See I:144-8: "The beginning therefore of my history …") wonts > is accustomed make > [observe, hold: see Textual Appendix]

7 The day that first does lead the year around;

day > (Probably Lady Day, 25 March, the first day of the new year in the Julian calendar; cf. also this passage in the general argument to SC: "For it is wel known, and stoutely mainteyned with strong reasons of the learned, that the yeare beginneth in March")

8 To which all knights of worth and courage bold 9 Resort, to hear of strange adventures to be told.

202.43

   There this old Palmer shewed himselfe that day,
2 And to that mighty Princesse did complaine
     Of grieuous mischiefes, which a wicked Fay
4 Had wrought, and many whelmd in deadly paine,
     Whereof he crau'd redresse. My Soueraine,
6 Whose glory is in gracious deeds, and ioyes
     Throughout the world her mercy to maintaine,
8 Eftsoones deuisd redresse for such annoyes;
   Me all vnfit for so great purpose she employes.

1 "There this old palmer showed himself that day, 2 And to that mighty princess did complain 3 Of grievous mischiefs, which a wicked fay

mischiefs > wrongs, evil-doing fay > fairy; enchantress [Acrasia; cf. Antony and Cleopatra IV viii 12]

4 Had wrought, and many whelmed in deadly pain,

whelmed > engulfed, buried, covered completely

5 Whereof he craved redress. My sovereign 6 (Whose glory is in gracious deeds, and joys 7 Throughout the world her mercy to maintain) 8 Eftsoons devised redress for such annoys;

Eftsoons > Soon, thereupon annoys > annoyances, vexations, injuries

9 Me, all unfit for so great purpose, she employs.

all > wholly so > [such a]

202.44

   Now hath faire Ph{oe}be with her siluer face
2 Thrise seene the shadowes of the neather world,
     Sith last I left that honorable place,
4 In which her royall presence is +introld+;
     Ne euer shall I rest in house nor hold,
6 Till I that false Acrasia haue wonne;
     Of whose fowle deedes, too hideous to be +told,+
8 I witnesse am, and this their wretched sonne,
   Whose wofull parents she hath wickedly fordonne.

4 introld > entrold 1590; enrold conj. various editors 7 told, > told 1596

1 "Now has fair Phoebe with her silver face 2 Thrice seen the shadows of the nether world, 3 Sith last I left that honourable place

Sith > Since (i.e. three months have passed)

4 In which her royal presence is introld;

introld > (Meaning uncertain; see Textual Appendix. "Enrolled" = "inscribed", "recorded", and hence "celebrated". Cf. 210.4:8)

5 Nor ever shall I rest in house nor hold,

hold > {Place of refuge or shelter; fort; prison cell}

6 Till I that false Acrasia have won;

won > overcome, defeated

7 Of whose foul deeds, too hideous to be told, 8 I witness am, and this their wretched son,

this their wretched son > ([Likewise] the baby)

9 Whose woeful parents she has wickedly fordone."

fordone > destroyed

202.45

   Tell on, faire Sir, said she, that dolefull tale,
2 From which sad ruth does seeme you to restraine,
     That we may pitty such vnhappy bale,
4 And learne from pleasures poyson to abstaine:
     Ill by ensample good doth often gayne.
6 Then forward he his purpose gan pursew,
     And told the storie of the mortall payne,
8 Which Mordant and Amauia did rew;
   As with lamenting eyes him selfe did lately vew.

1 "Tell on, fair sir," said she, "that doleful tale, 2 From which sad ruth does seem you to restrain,

ruth > pity

3 That we may pity such unhappy bale,

That > [So that] bale > woe, torment

4 And learn from Pleasure's poison to abstain: 5 Ill, by example, good does often gain."

Ill > Evil

6 Then forward he his purpose gan pursue,

purpose > {Discourse; that which forms the subject of discourse} gan > did; began to

7 And told the story of the mortal pain 8 Which Mordant and Amavia did rue; 9 As with lamenting eyes himself did lately view.

As > [Just as] himself > [he himself]

202.46

   Night was far spent, and now in Ocean deepe
2 Orion, flying fast from hissing snake,
     His flaming head did hasten for to steepe,
4 When of his pitteous tale he end did make;
     Whilest with delight of that he wisely spake,
6 Those guestes beguiled, did beguile their eyes
     Of kindly sleepe, that did them ouertake.
8 At last when they had markt the chaunged skyes,
   They wist their houre was spent; then each to rest him hyes.

1 Night was far spent, and now in ocean deep 2 Orion, flying fast from hissing Snake,

Orion > (The constellation; Orion is also called "The Hunter")
Snake > [Scorpio]

3 His flaming head did hasten to steep, 4 When of his piteous tale he end did make; 5 Whilst with delight of that he wisely spoke,

that > [that of which] wisely > sagely; informatively

6 Those guests beguiled did beguile their eyes

guests beguiled > [beguiled guests]

7 Of kindly sleep, that did them overtake.

kindly > natural; benign

8 At last, when they had marked the changed skies,

marked the changed skies > [noticed the changed relationship between the earth and the constellations]

9 They wist their hour was spent; then each to rest him hies.

wist > knew, realized hies > hastens

CANTO III

   Vaine Braggadocchio getting Guyons
2 horse is made the scorne
   Of knighthood trew, and is of fayre
3 Belph{oe}be fowle forlorne.

1 Vain Braggadocchio, getting Guyon's

Vain > Weak; foolish Braggadocchio > "Braggart", "Boaster" ("brag" + Italian augment- ative. The name gives rise to "braggadocio", a general term either for an idle braggart or for his boasting. Spenser's spelling varies, so "Braggadocchio", the first encountered, is here used as the standard)

2 horse, is made the scorn 3 Of knighthood true, and is of fair

of > by

4 Belphoebe foul forlorn.

Belphoebe > "Beautifully Radiant", "Beautiful and Pure" (Latin and Greek; foster-daughter of Diana or Phoebe, virgin goddess of hunting and the moon (see 306.28:5). For correspondence to Elizabeth, see I:118-24) foul > insultingly forlorn > abandoned, deserted; hence: rejected

203.1

   SOone as the morrow faire with purple beames
2 Disperst the shadowes of the mistie night,
     And Titan playing on the eastern streames,
4 Gan cleare the deawy ayre with springing light,
     Sir Guyon mindfull of his vow yplight,
6 Vprose from drowsie couch, and him addrest
     Vnto the iourney which he had behight:
8 His puissaunt armes about his noble brest,
   And many-folded shield he bound about his wrest.

1 Soon as the morrow fair with purple beams

Soon > [As soon]

2 Dispersed the shadows of the misty night, 3 And Titan, playing on the eastern streams, 4 Gan clear the dewy air with springing light,

Gan > Did; began to springing > rising, growing; dawning

5 Sir Guyon, mindful of his vow plight,

vow plight > [plighted vow]

6 Uprose from drowsy couch, and himself addressed 7 To the journey which he had behight:

behight > promised (to Gloriana)

8 His puissant arms about his noble breast,

puissant > mighty arms > armour (shares the vb. "bound" with the "shield" in line 9)

9 And many-folded shield he bound about his wrist.

many-folded > (Consisting of many layers, seven in fact: see 205.6:3, 208.32:5. Guyon carries the classical seven-layered shield as borne by Ajax at Iliad 7.220 (imitated by Virgil at Aen. 12.925). In Homer the layers are of bull's-hide)

203.2

   Then taking Cong{e/} of that virgin pure,
2 The bloudy-handed babe vnto her truth
     Did earnestly commit, and her coniure,
4 In vertuous lore to traine his tender youth,
     And all that gentle noriture ensu'th:
6 And that so soone as ryper yeares he raught,
     He might for memorie of that dayes ruth,
8 Be called Ruddymane, and thereby taught,
   T'auenge his Parents death on them, that had it wrought.

1 Then, taking cong{e/} of that virgin pure,

cong{e/} > leave that virgin pure > [Medina]

2 The bloody-handed babe to her truth

truth > {Virtue, integrity, conduct in accordance with the divine standard; hence: trust, care; also a variant spelling of: troth, good faith}

3 Did earnestly commit, and her conjure

conjure > implore; adjure

4 In virtuous lore to train his tender youth,

lore > doctrine, teaching

5 And all that gentle nouriture ensues:

gentle > noble nouriture > {Nurture, the business of bringing up a child} ensues > follows, conforms to; hence: involves, entails

6 And that (so soon as riper years he raught)

raught > reached

7 He might, for memory of that day's ruth,

ruth > sorrow; calamity; occasion of regret

8 Be called Ruddymane, and thereby taught

Ruddymane > "Bloody-handed"

9 To avenge his parents' death on them that had it wrought.

203.3

   So forth he far'd, as now befell, on foot,
2 Sith his good steed is lately from him gone;
     Patience perforce; helpelesse what may it boot
4 To fret for anger, or for griefe to mone?
     His Palmer now shall foot no more alone:
6 So fortune wrought, as vnder greene woods syde
     He lately heard that dying Lady grone,
8 He left his steed without, and speare besyde,
   And rushed in on foot to ayd her, ere she dyde.

1 So forth he fared, as now befell, on foot, 2 Sith his good steed is lately from him gone;

Sith > Since

3 Patience perforce; helpless, what may it boot

Patience perforce > (Proverbial: patience upon compulsion, i.e. when there is no other course. Cf. 310.3:1) boot > avail

4 To fret for anger, or for grief to moan?

moan > lament, bewail one's lot

5 His palmer now shall foot no more alone:

foot > walk

6 So Fortune wrought, as under green wood's side

wrought > fashioned [it] green > [a] green

7 He lately heard that dying lady groan: 8 He left his steed without, and spear beside,

without > outside (the thicket)

9 And rushed in on foot to aid her, ere she died.

203.4

   The whiles a losell wandring by the way,
2 One that to bountie neuer cast his mind,
     Ne thought of honour euer did assay
4 His baser brest, but in his kestrell kind
     A pleasing vaine of glory +vaine+ did find,
6 To which his flowing toung, and troublous spright
     Gaue him great ayd, and made him more inclind:
8 He that braue steed there finding ready dight,
   Purloynd both steed and speare, and ran away full light.

5 vaine > he 1590

1 The whiles a losel wandering by the way

The whiles > Meanwhile losel > scoundrel, ne'er-do-well, ragamuffin (one who is lost, esp. fig.)

2 (One that to bounty never cast his mind,

bounty > goodness, virtue; generosity; valour

3 Nor thought of honour ever did assay

assay > assail; make a test of

4 His baser breast, but in his kestrel kind

baser > more base; most base kestrel > {A small falcon, Falco tinnunculus, deemed worthless for sport. The Boke of St Albans defines the hawk appropriate to each social station: the eagle for an emperor, the peregrine for an earl, and so down the scale until the kestrel is assigned to a "knave". Hence "kestrel" here = "knavish". The word is also confused with "coistrel" = "groom", "varlet"; cf. Twelfth Night I iii 37} kind > nature; disposition; social class

5 A pleasing vein of glory vain did find,

glory vain > {Vainglory; "glory" on its own = "boastful spirit". See also Textual Appendix}

6 To which his flowing tongue, and troublous spirit 7 Gave him great aid, and made him more inclined): 8 He, that brave steed there finding ready dight,

brave > splendid dight > decked, prepared; hence: caparisoned

9 Purloined both steed and spear, and ran away full light.

full light > very quickly, very easily

203.5

   Now gan his hart all swell in iollitie,
2 And of him selfe great hope and helpe conceiu'd,
     That puffed vp with smoke of vanitie,
4 And with selfe-loued personage deceiu'd,
     He gan to hope, of men to be receiu'd
6 For such, as he him thought, or faine would bee:
     But for in court gay portaunce he perceiu'd,
8 And gallant shew to be in greatest gree,
   Eftsoones to court he cast t'+auaunce+ his first degree.

9 auaunce > aduaunce 1590

1 Now gan his heart all swell in jollity,

gan > did; began ( … to) jollity > pleasure, revelry; magnificence

2 And of himself great hope and help conceived,

help > relief [of his former poverty]; remedy [for his lowliness]

3 That, puffed up with smoke of vanity,

That > [So that]

4 And with self-loved personage deceived,

personage > {The body and appearance as distinct from clothing; hence: image}

5 He began to hope of men to be received

of > by

6 For such as he himself thought, or fain would be:

For > As fain > gladly

7 But for in court gay portance he perceived,

for > because portance > carriage, demeanour, bearing; conduct

8 And gallant show, to be in greatest gree,

gree > favour; pre-eminence, superiority

9 Eftsoons to court he cast to advance his first degree.

Eftsoons > Thereupon cast > resolved degree > step; rung [stage in ascending the social ladder]

203.6

   And by the way he chaunced to espy
2 One sitting idle on a sunny bancke,
     To whom auaunting in great brauery,
4 As Peacocke, that his painted plumes doth prancke,
     He smote his courser in the trembling flancke,
6 And to him threatned his hart-thrilling speare:
     The seely man seeing him ryde so rancke,
8 And ayme at him, fell flat to ground for feare,
   And crying Mercy lowd, his pitious hands gan reare.

1 And by the way he chanced to espy 2 One sitting idle on a sunny bank, 3 To whom avaunting in great bravery,

avaunting > advancing; boasting; hence: proudly advancing bravery > bravado; boastful display

4 As peacock, that his painted plumes does prank,

prank > {Make a display of}

5 He smote his courser in the trembling flank, 6 And to him threatened his heart-thrilling spear:

thrilling > piercing

7 The seely man, seeing him ride so rank,

seely > helpless; insignificant; pitiable rank > proudly; swiftly; impetuously

8 And aim at him, fell flat to ground for fear, 9 And crying "Mercy!" loud, his piteous hands gan rear.

gan > did

203.7

   Thereat the Scarcrow wexed wondrous prowd,
2 Through fortune of his first aduenture faire,
     And with big thundring voyce reuyld him lowd;
4 Vile Caytiue, vassall of dread and despaire,
     Vnworthie of the +commune+ breathed aire,
6 Why liuest thou, dead dog, a lenger day,
     And doest not vnto death thy selfe prepaire.
8 Dye, or thy selfe my captiue yield for ay;
   Great fauour I thee graunt, for aunswere thus to stay.

5 commune > common 1609

1 Thereat the scarecrow waxed wondrous proud

waxed > grew

2 Through fortune of his first adventure fair, 3 And with big thundering voice reviled him loud: 4 "Vile caitiff, vassal of dread and despair,

caitiff > wretch vassal > slave

5 Unworthy of the common breathed air,
6 Why live you, dead dog, a longer day,
7 And do not to death yourself prepare?
8 Die, or yourself my captive yield for ay;

ay > ever

9 Great favour I you grant, for answer thus to stay."

stay > delay, hold back

203.8

   Hold, {o^} deare Lord, hold your dead-doing hand,
2 Then loud he cryde, I am your humble thrall.
     Ah wretch (quoth he) thy destinies withstand
4 My wrathfull will, and do for mercy call.
     I giue thee life: therefore prostrated fall,
6 And kisse my stirrup; that thy homage bee.
     The Miser threw him selfe, as an Offall,
8 Streight at his foot in base humilitee,
   And cleeped him his liege, to hold of him in fee.

1 "Hold, O dear lord, hold your dead-doing hand,"

dead-doing > murderous, death-dealing

2 Then loud he cried, "I am your humble thrall!"

thrall > captive; slave

3 "Ah wretch," quoth he, "your destinies withstand 4 My wrathful will, and do for mercy call. 5 I give you life: therefore prostrated fall, 6 And kiss my stirrup; that your homage be."

that > [let that]

7 The miser threw himself, as an offal,

miser > wretch an offal > offal, dross, refuse; carrion, putrid flesh (also used opprobriously of the bodies or limbs of those killed in battle)

8 Straight at his foot in base humility, 9 And cleped him his liege, to hold of him in fee.

cleped > called liege > {Lord to whom one owes feudal allegiance and service} of him > [his loyalty] fee > service

203.9

   So happy peace they made and faire accord:
2 Eftsoones this liege-man gan to wexe more bold,
     And when he felt the folly of his Lord,
4 In his owne kind he gan him selfe vnfold:
     For he was wylie witted, and growne old
6 In cunning sleights and practick knauery.
     +From+ that day forth he cast for to vphold
8 His idle humour with fine flattery,
   And blow the bellowes to his swelling vanity.

7 From > For 1596

1 So happy peace they made and fair accord: 2 Eftsoons this liege man began to wax more bold,

Eftsoons > Soon liege man > {Vassal; faithful follower or subject} wax > grow

3 And, when he felt the folly of his lord, 4 In his own kind he gan himself unfold:

kind > nature (or perhaps this is a misprint for "mind") gan > did unfold > reveal, disclose; make plain

5 For he was wily witted, and grown old 6 In cunning sleights and practic knavery.

practic > artful, cunning

7 From that day forth he cast to uphold

cast > decided

8 His idle humour with fine flattery,

His > [Braggadocchio's] idle > empty; vain, trifling humour > frame of mind

9 And blow the bellows to his swelling vanity.

203.10

   Trompart fit man for Braggadochio,
2 To serue at court in view of vaunting eye;
     Vaine-glorious man, when fluttring wind does blow
4 In his light wings, is lifted vp to skye:
     The scorne of knighthood and trew cheualrye,
6 To thinke without desert of gentle deed,
     And noble worth to be aduaunced hye:
8 Such prayse is shame; but honour vertues meed
   Doth beare the fairest flowre in honorable seed.

1 Trompart, fit man for Braggadocchio,

Trompart > "Deceiver", "Fraud" (French); "Trumpet" (via French)

2 To serve at court in view of vaunting eye;

vaunting > boasting

3 Vainglorious man, when fluttering wind does blow 4 In his light wings, is lifted up to sky: 5 The scorn of knighthood and true chivalry, 6 To think without desert of gentle deed,

desert > merit gentle > noble

7 And noble worth to be advanced high: 8 Such praise is shame; but honour, virtue's meed,

meed > reward

9 Does bear the fairest flower in honourable seed.

honourable seed > [the nobility; honourable = noble, illustrious; seed = children, offspring]

203.11

   So forth they pas, a well consorted paire,
2 Till that at length with Archimage they meet:
     Who seeing one that shone in armour faire,
4 On goodly courser thundring with his feet,
     Eftsoones supposed him a person meet,
6 Of his reuenge to make the instrument:
     For since the Redcrosse knight he earst did weet,
8 To beene with Guyon knit in one consent,
   The ill, which earst to him, he now to Guyon ment.

1 So forth they pas, a well consorted pair,

pas > pace; pass consorted > associated; accorded

2 Till at length with Archimago they meet: 3 Who, seeing one that shone in armour fair, 4 On goodly courser thundering with his feet, 5 Eftsoons supposed him a person meet

Eftsoons > Thereupon meet > fit, suitable

6 Of his revenge to make the instrument: 7 For, since the Redcross Knight he erst did weet

erst > lately weet > understand, learn

8 To been with Guyon knit in one consent,

been > [have been; be] consent > accord

9 The ill which erst to him, he now to Guyon meant.

ill > evil erst > earlier; recently him > [the Redcross Knight] meant > intended; or, perhaps ment (ppl. of "meng") joined, attached

203.12

   And comming close to Trompart gan inquere
2 Of him, what mighty warriour that mote bee,
     That rode in golden sell with single spere,
4 But wanted sword to wreake his enmitee.
     He is a great aduenturer, (said he)
6 That hath his sword through hard assay forgone,
     And now hath vowd, till he auenged bee,
8 Of that despight, neuer to wearen none;
   That speare is him enough to doen a thousand grone.

1 And, coming close to Trompart, gan inquire

gan > did

2 Of him what mighty warrior that might be, 3 That rode in golden sell with single spear,

sell > saddle single > {Solitary; unsupported by a sword}

4 But wanted sword to wreak his enmity.

wanted > lacked [a]

5 "He is a great adventurer," said he, 6 "That has his sword through hard assay forgone,

assay > trial; endeavour; assault forgone > forgone; forsaken (cf. Braggadocchio's own account at 203.17)

7 And now has vowed, till he avenged be 8 Of that despite, never to wear none;

despite > outrage none > (The double negative serves as an intensive)

9 That spear is him enough to do a thousand groan."

him enough > [enough for him] do > cause, produce groan > [groans]

203.13

   Th'enchaunter greatly ioyed in the vaunt,
2 And weened well ere long his will to win,
     And both his foen with equall foyle to daunt.
4 Tho to him louting lowly, did begin
     To plaine of wrongs, which had committed bin
6 By Guyon, and by that false Redcrosse knight,
     Which two through treason and deceiptfull gin,
8 Had slaine Sir Mordant, and his Lady bright:
   That mote him honour win, to wreake so foule despight.

1 The enchanter greatly joyed in the vaunt,

joyed > took pleasure; rejoiced vaunt > boast

2 And weened well ere long his will to win,

weened > imagined, supposed win > achieve

3 And both his foes with equal foil to daunt.

equal > {Equal, adequate to the task of defeating them; or: similar, identical} foil > defeat, throw; or: sword, weapon daunt > overcome, subdue

4 Tho to him louting lowly, did begin

Tho > Then louting > bowing, making obeisance

5 To plain of wrongs which had committed been

plain > complain

6 By Guyon and by that false Redcross Knight, 7 Which two, through treason and deceitful gin,

gin > craftiness; [a] scheme, trick

8 Had slain Sir Mordant and his lady bright:

bright > beautiful

9 That might him honour win, to wreak so foul despite.

him > [Braggadocchio] wreak > avenge so > [such a] despite > outrage

203.14

   Therewith all suddeinly he seemd enraged,
2 And threatned death with dreadfull countenaunce,
     As if their liues had in his hand beene gaged;
4 And with stiffe force shaking his mortall launce,
     To let him weet his doughtie valiaunce,
6 Thus said; Old man, great sure shalbe thy meed,
     If where those knights for feare of dew vengeaunce
8 Do lurke, thou certainly to me areed,
   That I may wreake on them their hainous hatefull deed.

1 Therewith all suddenly he seemed enraged,

Therewith > With that; thereupon he > [Braggadocchio]

2 And threatened death with dreadful countenance, 3 As if their lives had in his hand been gaged;

gaged > pledged; left in pledge

4 And with stiff force shaking his mortal lance

stiff > violent mortal > deadly

5 (To let him weet his doughty valiance),

weet > know, perceive valiance > valour, bravery

6 Thus said: "Old man, great sure shall be your meed,

meed > reward

7 If where those knights (for fear of due vengeance) 8 Do lurk, you certainly to me aread,

certainly > reliably, with certainty aread > make known

9 That I may wreak on them their heinous hateful deed."

That > [So that] wreak > visit [visit on them the equivalent of their misdeed]

203.15

   Certes, my Lord, (said he) that shall I soone,
2 And giue you eke good helpe to their decay,
     But mote I wisely you aduise to doon;
4 Giue no ods to your foes, but do puruay
     Your selfe of sword before that bloudy day:
6 For they be two the prowest knights on ground,
     And oft approu'd in many hard assay,
8 And eke of surest steele, that may be found,
   Do arme your selfe against that day, them to confound.

1 "Certes, my lord," said he, "that shall I soon,

Certes > Assuredly that > [aread where those knights do lurk]

2 And give you eke good help to their decay,

eke > moreover to > [in bringing about] decay > destruction, death

3 But might I wisely you advise to do:

do > [do the following]

4 Give no odds to your foes, but do purvey

purvey > provide

5 Yourself of sword before that bloody day:

of > [with a]

6 For they be two the prowest knights on ground,

be > [are] the prowest > [of] the bravest on ground > in the world

7 And oft approved in many hard assay,

approved > proved, tested assay > assaults; trials

8 And eke of surest steel that may be found

eke of > [moreover, with the]

9 Do arm yourself against that day, them to confound."

203.16

   Dotard (said he) let be thy deepe aduise;
2 Seemes that through many yeares thy wits thee faile,
     And that weake eld hath left thee nothing wise,
4 Else neuer should thy iudgement be so fraile,
     To measure manhood by the sword or maile.
6 Is not enough foure quarters of a man,
     Withouten sword or shield, an host to quaile?
8 Thou little wotest, what this right hand can:
   Speake they, which haue beheld the battailes, which it wan.

1 "Dotard," said he, "let be your deep advice;

deep > solemn; profound

2 Seems that through many years your wits you fail,

Seems > [It seems] through > [as a result of your]

3 And that weak eld has left you nothing wise,

eld > old age nothing > not at all

4 Else never should your judgement be so frail 5 To measure manhood by the sword or mail.

To > [As to] mail > chain-mail; chain-armour

6 Is not enough four quarters of a man, 7 Without sword or shield, a host to quail?

host > army quail > daunt

8 You little wot what this right hand can:

wot > know can > [can do; is capable of]

9 Speak they, who have beheld the battles which it won!"

203.17

   The man was much abashed at his boast;
2 Yet well he wist, that who so would contend
     With either of those knights on euen coast,
4 Should need of all his armes, him to defend;
     Yet feared least his boldnesse should offend,
6 When Braggadocchio said, Once I did sweare,
     When with one sword seuen knights I brought to end,
8 Thence forth in battell neuer sword to beare,
   But it were that, which noblest knight on earth doth weare.

1 The man was much abashed at his boast; 2 Yet well he wist that whoso would contend

wist > knew whoso > whosoever

3 With either of those knights on even coast

even coast > even ground; or: equal cost, equal terms (cf. 403.24:8)

4 Should need of all his arms, himself to defend;

need > [have need]

5 Yet feared lest his boldness should offend, 6 When Braggadocchio said, "Once I did swear,

Once > Once; once and for all; to sum up, in a word

7 When with one sword seven knights I brought to end, 8 Thenceforth in battle never sword to bear, 9 But it were that which noblest knight on earth does wear."

But it > [Unless the sword]

203.18

   Perdie Sir knight, said then th'enchaunter bliue,
2 That shall I shortly purchase to your hond:
     For now the best and noblest knight aliue
4 Prince Arthur is, that wonnes in Faerie lond;
     He hath a sword, that flames like burning brond.
6 The same by my +deuice+ I vndertake
     Shall by to morrow by thy side be fond.
8 At which bold word that boaster gan to quake,
   And wondred in his mind, what mote that monster make.

6 deuice > aduise 1596, 1609

1 "Pardie, sir knight," said then the enchanter belive,

Pardie > Truly; "by God" belive > without delay

2 "That shall I shortly purchase to your hand:

purchase > procure; hence: deliver

3 For now the best and noblest knight alive 4 Prince Arthur is, that wons in Faery Land;

wons > dwells

5 He has a sword that flames like burning brand. 6 The same, by my device, I undertake

device > ingenuity

7 Shall by tomorrow by your side be found." 8 At which bold word that boaster began to quake, 9 And wondered in his mind what might that monster make.

what might that monster make > [how that marvel might be achieved; monster = marvel]

203.19

   He stayd not for more bidding, but away
2 Was suddein vanished out of his sight:
     The Northerne wind his wings did broad display
4 At his commaund, and reared him vp light
     From off the earth to take his aerie flight.
6 They lookt about, but no where could espie
     Tract of his foot: then dead through great affright
8 They both nigh were, and each bad other flie:
   Both fled attonce, ne euer backe returned eie.

1 He stayed not for more bidding, but away

He > [Archimago] bidding > entreaty

2 Was sudden vanished out of his sight: 3 The northern wind his wings did broad display

display > extend, spread out; display

4 At his command, and reared him up light

light > lightly; quickly, easily

5 From off the earth, to take his airy flight. 6 They looked about, but nowhere could espy 7 Tract of his foot: then dead through great affright

Tract > Trace affright > terror

8 They both nigh were, and each bade other fly:

other fly > [the other to flee]

9 Both fled at once, nor ever back returned eye.

at once > immediately; together

203.20

   Till that they come vnto a forrest greene,
2 In which they shrowd themselues from causelesse feare;
     Yet feare them followes still, where so they beene,
4 Each trembling leafe, and whistling wind they heare,
     As ghastly bug +their haire on end does reare+:
6 Yet both doe striue their fearfulnesse to faine.
     At last they heard a horne, that shrilled cleare
8 Throughout the wood, that ecchoed againe,
   And made the forrest ring, as it would riue in twaine.

5 their haire on end does reare > does vnto them affeare 1590; does greatly them affeare _FE; perhaps the 1590 reading is a mis- print of appeare, with Spenser subsequently forgetting this, or changing his mind, when compiling FE and again when revising the text of 1590 for the 1596 edition (Smith)_

1 Till they come to a forest green, 2 In which they shroud themselves from causeless fear;

shroud > shelter; conceal

3 Yet fear them follows still, whereso they be,

still > continually whereso > wherever

4 Each trembling leaf and whistling wind they hear 5 As ghastly bug their hair on end does rear:

As > [Like a] ghastly > {Ghostly; causing terror of the supernatural} bug > {Bugbear, bogy, object of needless dread}

6 Yet both do strive their fearfulness to feign.

feign > conceal (SUS; cf. 112.10:1)

7 At last they heard a horn, that shrilled clear 8 Throughout the wood, that echoed again, 9 And made the forest ring, as it would rive in twain.

it would rive > [if it would split it] twain > two

203.21

   Eft through the thicke they heard one rudely rush;
2 With noyse whereof he from his loftie steed
     Downe fell to ground, and crept into a bush,
4 To hide his coward head from dying dreed.
     But Trompart stoutly stayd to taken +heed,+
6 Of what might hap. Eftsoone there stepped forth
     A goodly Ladie clad in hunters weed,
8 That seemd to be a woman of great worth,
   And by her stately portance, borne of heauenly birth.

5 heed, > heed 1609

1 Eft through the thick they heard one rudely rush;

Eft > Thereupon (aphetic for "eftsoons") thick > thicket, copse rudely > violently

2 With noise whereof he from his lofty steed

he > [Braggadocchio]

3 Down fell to ground, and crept into a bush, 4 To hide his coward head from dying dread.

dying dread > fear of dying

5 But Trompart stoutly stayed to take heed

stoutly > bravely

6 Of what might hap. Eftsoons there stepped forth

hap > happen, come about by chance Eftsoons > Soon, soon afterwards

7 A goodly lady clad in hunter's weed,

goodly > beautiful; fine weed > garb

8 That seemed to be a woman of great worth,

worth > merit, rank

9 And, by her stately portance, born of heavenly birth.

portance > carriage, demeanour

203.22

   Her face so faire as flesh it seemed not,
2 But heauenly pourtraict of bright Angels hew,
     Cleare as the skie, withouten blame or blot,
4 Through goodly mixture of complexions dew;
     And in her cheekes the vermeill red did shew
6 Like roses in a bed of lillies shed,
     The which ambrosiall odours from them threw,
8 And gazers sense with double pleasure fed,
   Hable to heale the sicke, and to reuiue the ded.

1 Her face so fair as flesh it seemed not,

so fair as > [was so fair that like]

2 But heavenly portrait of bright angel's hue,

portrait > image hue > appearance, form

3 Clear as the sky, without blame or blot,

Clear > Brightly shining blame > fault

4 Through goodly mixture of complexions due;

complexions due > (Due or proper combination of the four cardinal "humours" of the body whose proportions, in medieval physiology, were supposed to determine one's mental and physical qualities. Cf. 306.38:5, 310.59:3)

5 And in her cheeks the vermeil red did show

vermeil > scarlet

6 Like roses in a bed of lilies shed, 7 Which ambrosial odours from them threw,

ambrosial > divinely fragrant

8 And gazer's sense with double pleasure fed, 9 Able to heal the sick, and to revive the dead.

203.23

   In her faire eyes two liuing lamps did flame,
2 Kindled aboue at th'heauenly makers light,
     And darted fyrie beames out of the same,
4 So passing +persant+, and so wondrous bright,
     That quite bereau'd the rash beholders sight:
6 In them the blinded god his lustfull fire
     To kindle oft assayd, but had no might;
8 For with +dredd+ Maiestie, and awfull ire,
   She broke his wanton darts, and quenched base desire.

4 persant > pearceant 1609 8 dredd > drad 1609

1 In her fair eyes two living lamps did flame,
2 Kindled above at the heavenly Maker's light,
3 And darted fiery beams out of the same,
4 So passing perceant, and so wondrous bright,

passing > surpassingly perceant > piercing, percipient

5 That quite bereaved the rash beholder's sight:

That > [That they]

6 In them the blinded god his lustful fire

the blinded god > [Cupid, who shoots his arrows without caring whom they hit. He is often depicted wearing a blindfold]

7 To kindle oft essayed, but had no might;

essayed > attempted

8 For with dread majesty, and awful ire, 9 She broke his wanton darts, and quenched base desire.

203.24

   Her iuorie forhead, full of bountie braue,
2 Like a broad table did it selfe dispred,
     For Loue his loftie triumphes to engraue,
4 And write the battels of his great godhed:
     All good and honour might therein be red:
6 For there their dwelling was. And when she spake,
     Sweet words, like dropping honny she did shed,
8 And twixt the perles and rubins softly brake
   A siluer sound, that heauenly musicke seemd to make.

1 Her ivory forehead, full of bounty brave,

bounty > goodness, virtue brave > splendid, fine

2 Like a broad table did itself dispread,

table > {Surface on which picture is painted; cf. 109.49:6} dispread > spread out, extend

3 For Love his lofty triumphs to engrave, 4 And write the battles of his great godhead: 5 All good and honour might therein be read:

read > seen, discerned

6 For there their dwelling was. And when she spoke, 7 Sweet words, like dropping honey, she did shed, 8 And 'twixt the pearls and rubies softly broke

pearls and rubies > [teeth and lips]

9 A silver sound, that heavenly music seemed to make.

203.25

   Vpon her eyelids many Graces sate,
2 Vnder the shadow of her euen browes,
     Working belgards, and amorous retrate,
4 And euery one her with a grace endowes:
     And euery one with meekenesse to her bowes.
6 So glorious mirrhour of celestiall grace,
     And soueraine moniment of mortall vowes,
8 How shall fraile pen descriue her heauenly face,
   For feare through want of skill her beautie to disgrace?

1 Upon her eyelids many Graces sat,

Graces > (Aglaia, Thalia, and Euphrosyne, the handmaids of Venus; hence, here: charms, refinements. Cf. SC, gloss to "June")

2 Under the shadow of her even brows, 3 Working belgards, and amorous retrait,

belgards > loving looks (WUS) retrait > portrait; hence: countenance

4 And every one her with a grace endows: 5 And every one with meekness to her bows. 6 So glorious mirror of celestial grace,

So > [Such a] mirror > reflection [of perfection]; hence: paragon of beauty (cf. 106.15:6)

7 And sovereign monument of mortal vows,

sovereign > (A direct reference to Elizabeth)

8 How shall frail pen describe her heavenly face, 9 For fear, through want of skill, her beauty to disgrace?

disgrace > disfigure; disparage

203.26

   So faire, and thousand thousand times more faire
2 She seemd, when she presented was to sight,
     And was yclad, for heat of scorching aire,
4 All in a silken Camus lylly whight,
     Purfled vpon with many a folded plight,
6 Which all aboue besprinckled was throughout,
     With golden aygulets, that glistred bright,
8 Like twinckling starres, and all the skirt about
   +Was hemd with golden fringe+

9 Sic, 1590 etc.

1 So fair, and thousand thousand times more fair
2 She seemed, when she presented was to sight,
3 And was clad, for heat of scorching air,
4 All in a silken camis lily white,

camis > {properly, a light loose dress; here, possibly, = "chemise", meaning "body garment", via Spanish or Portuguese camisa}

5 Purfled upon with many a folded pleat,

Purfled upon > {Embroidered; trimmed with metallic lace, pearls, etc.}

6 Which all above besprinkled was throughout

besprinkled > {Sprinkled all over; the prefix is intensive}

7 With golden aglets that glistered bright,

aglets > spangles; tags, pendants

8 Like twinkling stars, and all the skirt about 9 Was hemmed with golden fringe

203.27

   Below her ham her weed did somewhat traine,
2 And her streight legs most brauely were embayld
     In gilden buskins of costly Cordwaine,
4 All bard with golden bendes, which were entayld
     With curious antickes, and full faire aumayld:
6 Before they fastned were vnder her knee
     In a rich Iewell, and therein entrayld
8 The ends of all +their+ knots, that none might see,
   How they within their fouldings close enwrapped bee.

8 their > the 1590; end 1609

1 Below her ham her weed did somewhat train,

ham > {Back of the knee} weed > garment train > hang down

2 And her straight legs most bravely were embaled

bravely > splendidly embaled > enclosed

3 In gilded buskins of costly cordwain,

buskins > boots, half-boots (not extending to thigh) cordwain > cordovan (leather from the Spanish town of Corduba, much used for shoes, etc. by the wealthy in the Middle Ages)

4 All barred with golden bends, which were entailed

bends > {Flat strips, straps, bands} entailed > carved; ornamented; intaglioed

5 With curious antics, and full fair amelled:

antics > {Fantastic or grotesque representations of birds, animals, plants} full fair amelled > very becomingly enamelled

6 Before they fastened were under her knee

Before > In front

7 In a rich jewel, and therein entrailed

In > [With] entrailed > were intertwined

8 The ends of all their knots, that none might see

that > [so that]

9 How they within their foldings close enwrapped be.

foldings > folds close > (Referring adj. to "foldings", or adv. to "enwrapped")

203.28

   Like two faire marble pillours they were seene,
2 Which doe the temple of the Gods support,
     Whom all the people decke with girlands greene,
4 And honour in their festiuall resort;
     Those same with stately grace, and princely port
6 She taught to tread, when she her selfe would grace,
     But with the wooddie Nymphes when she did +play+,
8 Or when the flying Libbard she did chace,
   She could them nimbly moue, and after fly apace.

7 play > sport conj. Smith

1 Like two fair marble pillars they were seen,
2 Which do the temple of the gods support,
3 Whom all the people deck with garlands green,
4 And honour in their festival resort;

festival > {Glad, merry; pertaining to a feast or feast-day} resort > assembly, concourse of people

5 Those same with stately grace and princely port

port > deportment, bearing

6 She taught to tread, when she herself would grace;

grace > {Endow with (heavenly) grace; gratify, delight; confer honour or dignity upon}

7 But with the woody nymphs when she did play,

woody > forest-dwelling nymphs > (Nymphs are the minor female divinities with whom the Greeks peopled all parts of nature: the seas, springs, rivers, grottoes, mountains. The "wooddie" nymphs referred to here are evidently the dryads and hamadryads, the nymphs associated with trees and woodland)

8 Or when the flying libbard she did chase,

libbard > leopard

9 She could them nimbly move, and after fly apace.

apace > swiftly

203.29

   And in her hand a sharpe bore-speare she held,
2 And at her backe a bow and quiuer gay,
     Stuft with steele-headed darts, wherewith she queld
4 The saluage beastes in her victorious play,
     Knit with a golden bauldricke, which forelay
6 Athwart her snowy brest, and did diuide
     Her daintie paps; which like young fruit in May
8 Now little gan to swell, and being tide,
   Through her thin weed their places only signifide.

1 And in her hand a sharp boar-spear she held, 2 And at her back a bow and quiver gay 3 (Stuffed with steel-headed darts, wherewith she quelled

darts > arrows wherewith > with which quelled > killed

4 The savage beasts in her victorious play),

savage > wild; savage

5 Knit with a golden baldric, which forelay

Knit > Fastened, held baldric > {Belt worn pendent from the shoulder, here supporting the quiver} forelay > lay before

6 Athwart her snowy breast, and did divide 7 Her dainty paps; which, like young fruit in May,

paps > breasts

8 Now little began to swell and, being tied,

little > [a] little

9 Through her thin weed their places only signified.

weed > garment

203.30

   Her yellow lockes crisped, like golden wyre,
2 About her shoulders were loosely shed,
     And when the winde emongst them did inspyre,
4 They waued like a penon wide +dispred+,
     And low behinde her backe were scattered:
6 And whether art it were, or heedlesse hap,
     As through the flouring forrest rash she fled,
8 In her rude haires sweet flowres themselues did lap,
   And flourishing fresh leaues and blossomes did enwrap.

4 dispred > disspred 1609

1 Her yellow locks crisped, like golden wire,

crisped > (Ppl. adj.) closely curled

2 About her shoulders were loosely shed, 3 And, when the wind amongst them did inspire,

inspire > quicken, breathe

4 They waved like a pennon wide dispread,

dispread > spread out

5 And low behind her back were scattered: 6 And whether art it were, or heedless hap,

hap > chance

7 As through the flowering forest rash she fled,

rash > nimbly, quickly; impetuously, rashly fled > flew (this somewhat catachr. spelling chosen for the sake of the rhyme)

8 In her rude hair sweet flowers themselves did lap,

rude > wild, uncultivated; hence: untrammelled, disordered lap > wrap up, enfold; surround

9 And flourishing fresh leaves and blossoms did enwrap.

enwrap > [enwrap themselves]

203.31

   Such as Diana by the sandie shore
2 Of swift Eurotas, or on Cynthus greene,
     Where all the Nymphes haue her vnwares forlore,
4 Wandreth alone with bow and arrowes keene,
     To seeke her game: Or as that famous Queene
6 Of Amazons, whom Pyrrhus did destroy,
     The day that first of Priame she was seene,
8 Did shew her selfe in great triumphant ioy,
   To succour the weake state of sad afflicted Troy.

1 Such as Diana by the sandy shore 2 Of swift Eurotas, or on Cynthus green,

Eurotas > (Principal river of Sparta)
Cynthus > (A mountain on the island of Delos, the birthplace of
Apollo and Diana: these deities are thus also called Cynthius and
Cynthia respectively)

3 Where all the nymphs have her unwares forlorn,

unwares > unwittingly; unexpectedly forlorn > forsaken

4 Wanders alone with bow and arrows keen, 5 To seek her game: or as that famous queen

queen > (Penthesilea, an ally of Priam against the Greeks in the Trojan War; killed by Achilles or his son Pyrrhus)

6 Of Amazons, whom Pyrrhus did destroy,

Amazons > (A mythical race of warlike females, said to have come from the Caucasus and to have settled in Asia Minor, where they founded the city of Themiscyra. The Amazons were ruled by a queen, and the female children had their right breasts burned off so that they might better use a bow and arrow. The ninth labour of Hercules was to take the girdle of Hippolyte, an earlier queen of the Amazons)

7 The day that first of Priam she was seen,

of > by Priam > (The last king of Troy)

8 Did show herself in great triumphant joy, 9 To succour the weak state of sad afflicted Troy.

203.32

   Such when as hartlesse Trompart her did vew,
2 He was dismayed in his coward mind,
     And doubted, whether he himselfe should shew,
4 Or fly away, or bide alone behind:
     Both feare and hope he in her face did find,
6 When she at last him spying thus bespake;
     Hayle Groome; didst not thou see a bleeding Hind,
8 Whose right haunch earst my stedfast arrow strake?
   If thou didst, tell me, that I may her ouertake.

1 Such when heartless Trompart her did view,

heartless > pusillanimous

2 He was dismayed in his coward mind, 3 And doubted whether he himself should show, 4 Or fly away, or bide alone behind:

fly > fly; flee bide > remain

5 Both fear and hope he in her face did find, 6 When she at last, him spying, thus bespoke:

bespoke > spoke

7 "Hail, groom; did not you see a bleeding hind,

Hail, groom > You there! (groom = man, fellow, man-servant) hind > {Adult female deer, esp. Red Deer}

8 Whose right haunch erst my steadfast arrow strake?

erst > lately strake > streaked, marked with a line; hence: wounded; perhaps also: struck

9 If you did, tell me, that I may her overtake."

that > [so that]

203.33

   Wherewith reviu'd, this answere forth he threw;
2 O Goddesse, (for such I thee take to bee)
     For neither doth thy face terrestriall shew,
4 Nor voyce sound mortall; I auow to thee,
     Such wounded beast, as that, I did not see,
6 Sith earst into this forrest wild I came.
     But mote thy goodlyhed forgiue it mee,
8 To weet, which of the Gods I shall thee name,
   That vnto thee due worship I may rightly frame.

1 Wherewith revived, this answer forth he threw:

Wherewith > With which

2 "O Goddess (for such I you take to be: 3 For neither does your face terrestrial show,

show > seem, appear

4 Nor voice sound mortal), I avow to you, 5 Such wounded beast, as that, I did not see, 6 Sith erst into this forest wild I came.

Sith erst > Since first

7 But might Your Goodlihead forgive it me

Your Goodlihead > Your Goodliness; Your Excellency

8 To weet which of the gods I shall you name,

weet > learn

9 That to you due worship I may rightly frame?"

That > [So that] frame > fashion, give shape to; hence: offer, address

203.34

   To whom she thus; but ere her words ensewed,
2 Vnto the bush her eye did suddein glaunce,
     In which vaine Braggadocchio was mewed,
4 And saw it stirre: she left her percing launce,
     And towards gan a deadly shaft aduaunce,
6 In mind to marke the beast. At which sad stowre,
     Trompart forth stept, to stay the mortall chaunce,
8 Out crying, {o^} what euer heauenly powre,
   Or earthly wight thou be, withhold this deadly howre.

1 To whom she thus … but ere her words ensued, 2 To the bush her eye did sudden glance, 3 In which vain Braggadocchio was mewed,

vain > weak; foolish mewed > cooped up (of poultry)

4 And saw it stir: she left her piercing lance, 5 And towards gan a deadly shaft advance,

towards > [in the direction of the bush] gan > did; began ( … to) shaft > arrow (most editors gloss "left" in line 4 as "lifted", but 203.35:2 (cf. usage at 106.16:9) and 203.43:4 cast doubt on that meaning. We may be intended to infer that in line 4 she lets go of the spear in order to shoot an arrow. At 203.42:7 she apparently recovers the spear)

6 In mind to mark the beast. At which sad stour

mark > aim at; strike stour > peril

7 Trompart forth stepped, to stay the mortal chance,

stay > hinder; prevent mortal chance > fatal accident

8 Out crying, "O, whatever heavenly power 9 Or earthly wight you be, withhold this deadly hour!

wight > creature, woman hour > time, moment

203.35

   O stay thy +hand,+ for yonder is no game
2 For thy fierce arrowes, them to exercize,
     But loe my Lord, my liege, whose warlike name,
4 Is farre renowmd through many bold emprize;
     And now in shade he shrowded yonder lies.
6 She staid: with that he crauld out of his nest,
     Forth creeping on his caitiue hands and thies,
8 And standing stoutly vp, his loftie crest
   Did fiercely shake, and rowze, as comming late from rest.

1 hand, > hand 1596; hand: 1609

1 "O stay your hand, for yonder is no game 2 For your fierce arrows, them to exercise,

exercise > employ, put to use

3 But lo my lord, my liege, whose warlike name

liege > {Lord to whom one owes feudal allegiance and service} name > name; reputation

4 Is far renowned through many bold emprise;

bold > [a bold] emprise > undertaking, enterprise

5 And now in shade he shrouded yonder lies."

shrouded > hidden

6 She stayed: with that he crawled out of his nest,

stayed > desisted, held back

7 Forth creeping on his caitiff hands and thighs,

caitiff > wretched, despicable; servile

8 And, standing stoutly up, his lofty crest

stoutly > boldly, bravely crest > [plumes on his hat]

9 Did fiercely shake, and rouse, as coming late from rest.

rouse > shake (used of a hawk shaking its feathers); rise (of gamebirds flushed from cover); rouse (in the modern sense) as > [as if]

203.36

   As fearefull fowle, that long in secret caue
2 For dread of soaring hauke her selfe hath hid,
     Not caring how, her silly life to saue,
4 She her gay painted plumes disorderid,
     Seeing at last her selfe from daunger rid,
6 Peepes +foorth+, and soone renewes her natiue pride;
     She gins her feathers foule disfigured
8 Proudly to prune, and set on euery side,
   So shakes off shame, ne thinks how erst she did her hide.

6 foorth > forth 1590

1 As fearful fowl (that long in secret cave 2 For dread of soaring hawk herself has hidden, 3 Not caring how, her silly life to save,

silly > silly; feeble, frail, insignificant

4 She her gay painted plumes disordered), 5 Seeing at last herself from danger rid,

rid > spared; delivered

6 Peeps forth, and soon renews her native pride;

native > natural, innate pride > magnificence, splendour ("in his pride" is a heraldic term applied to the peacock in splendour)

7 She begins her feathers foul disfigured 8 Proudly to prune, and set on every side,

prune > preen

9 So shakes off shame, nor thinks how erst she did her hide.

erst > previously her > [herself]

203.37

   So when her goodly visage he beheld,
2 He gan himselfe to vaunt: but when he vewed
     Those deadly tooles, which in her hand she held,
4 Soone into other fits he was transmewed,
     Till she to him her gratious speach renewed;
6 All haile, Sir knight, and well may thee befall,
     As all the like, which honour haue pursewed
8 Through deedes of armes and prowesse martiall;
   All vertue merits praise, but such the most of all.

1 So when her goodly visage he beheld,

goodly > beautiful

2 He began himself to vaunt: but when he viewed

vaunt > display; or perhaps aphetic for: avaunt: advance proudly (cf. 203.6:3)

3 Those deadly tools, which in her hand she held,

tools > weapons

4 Soon into other fits he was transmewed,

fits > moods, humours; hence: a frame of mind transmewed > transmuted

5 Till she to him her gracious speech renewed: 6 "All hail, sir knight, and well may you befall,

well > well-being; hence: good fortune

7 As all the like, who honour have pursued 8 Through deeds of arms and prowess martial;

prowess > valour

9 All virtue merits praise, but such the most of all."

203.38

   To whom he thus; {o^} fairest vnder skie,
2 True be thy words, and worthy of thy praise,
     That warlike feats doest highest glorifie.
4 Therein +haue I+ spent all my youthly daies,
     And many battailes fought, and many fraies
6 Throughout the world, wher so they might be found,
     Endeuouring my dreadded name to raise
8 Aboue the Moone, that fame may it resound
   In her eternall trompe, with laurell girland cround.

4 haue I > I haue 1590

1 To whom he thus: "O fairest under sky, 2 True be your words, and worthy of your praise, 3 That warlike feats do highest glorify.

That > [You who]

4 Therein have I spent all my youthly days, 5 And many battles fought, and many frays 6 Throughout the world, whereso they might be found,

whereso > wherever

7 Endeavouring my dreaded name to raise 8 Above the moon, that fame may it resound

Above the moon > In heaven, in eternity (Belphoebe's foster-mother,
Diana, is the goddess of the moon, making this choice of phrase
splendidly crass)
that > [so that]

9 In her eternal trump, with laurel garland crowned.

trump > {Trumpet-note; hence: proclamation of fame, glory, etc.} laurel > (Used to make a wreath for conquerors)

203.39

   But what art thou, {o^} Ladie, which doest raunge
2 In this wilde forrest, where no pleasure is,
     And doest not it for ioyous court exchaunge,
4 Emongst thine equall peres, where happie blis
     And all delight does raigne, much more then this?
6 There thou maist loue, and dearely loued bee,
     And swim in pleasure, which thou here doest mis;
8 There maist thou best be seene, and best maist see:
   The wood is fit for beasts, the court is fit for thee.

1 "But what are you, O lady, who do range 2 In this wild forest, where no pleasure is, 3 And do not it for joyous court exchange, 4 Amongst your equal peers, where happy bliss

peers > nobles; peers (those equally matched with her)

5 And all delight do reign, much more than this? 6 There you may love, and dearly loved be, 7 And swim in pleasure, which you here do miss;

do miss > lack, want; do without

8 There may you best be seen, and best may see: 9 The wood is fit for beasts, the court is fit for you."

203.40

   Who so in pompe of proud estate (quoth she)
2 Does swim, and bathes himselfe in courtly blis,
     Does waste his dayes in darke obscuritee,
4 And in obliuion euer buried is:
     Where ease abounds, yt's eath to doe amis;
6 But who his limbs with labours, and his mind
     Behaues with cares, cannot so easie mis.
8 Abroad in armes, at home in studious kind
   Who seekes with painfull toile, shall honor soonest find.

1 "Whoso in pomp of proud estate," quoth she,

Whoso > Whosoever estate > rank, status; condition

2 "Does swim, and bathes himself in courtly bliss, 3 Does waste his days in dark obscurity, 4 And in oblivion ever buried is: 5 Where ease abounds, it's eath to do amiss;

eath > easy amiss > evil; [an] evil deed (cf. Hamlet IV v 18)

6 But who his limbs with labours, and his mind

who > [he who]

7 Behaves with cares, cannot so easy miss.

Behaves > Conducts, regulates cares > concern; thought, study miss > go wrong

8 Abroad in arms, at home in studious kind,

arms > deeds of arms kind > station in life, place; manner, way

9 Who seeks with painful toil, shall Honour soonest find.

Who > [He who]

203.41

   In woods, in waues, in warres she wonts to dwell,
2 And will be found with perill and with paine;
     Ne can the man, that moulds in idle cell,
4 Vnto her happie mansion attaine:
     Before her gate high God did Sweat ordaine,
6 And wakefull watches euer to abide:
     But easie is the way, and passage plaine
8 To pleasures pallace; it may soone be spide,
   And day and night her dores to all stand open wide.

1 "In woods, in waves, in wars she wonts to dwell,

she > [Honour] wonts > is accustomed

2 And will be found with peril and with pain; 3 Nor can the man, that moulds in idle cell,

moulds > moulders, decays cell > {Dwelling consisting of a single chamber, occupied by a hermit; small room with single occupant, as in a monastery, prison, etc.}

4 To her happy mansion attain:

mansion > (In the modern sense: a large and stately residence, to contrast with the "cell' in line 3)

5 Before her gate high God did sweat ordain,

sweat > exertion, toil; pains, trouble

6 And wakeful watches ever to abide:

watches > sentinels abide > remain

7 But easy is the way, and passage plain

plain > clear; open; public (cf. 104.2:8)

8 To Pleasure's palace; it may soon be spied,

Pleasure > (The enchantress, Acrasia (so named at 212.1:8 and 212.48:8))

9 And day and night her doors to all stand open wide.

203.42

   In Princes court, The rest she would haue said,
2 But that the foolish man, fild with delight
     Of her sweet words, that all his sence dismaid,
4 And with her wondrous beautie rauisht quight,
     Gan burne in filthy lust, and leaping light,
6 Thought in his bastard armes her to embrace.
     With that she swaruing backe, her Iauelin bright
8 Against him bent, and fiercely did menace:
   So turned her about, and fled away apace.

1 "In prince's court …" The rest she would have said, 2 But that the foolish man (filled with delight

But > Except

3 Of her sweet words, that all his sense dismayed,

dismayed > overcame

4 And with her wondrous beauty ravished quite), 5 Gan burn in filthy lust, and leaping light,

Gan > Did; began to light > quickly

6 Thought in his bastard arms her to embrace.

bastard > base, lowly

7 With that she, swerving back, her javelin bright

swerving > shrinking; swerving

8 Against him bent, and fiercely did menace:

bent > directed, brought to bear

9 So turned her about, and fled away apace.

her > [herself] apace > swiftly

203.43

   Which when the Peasant saw, amazd he stood,
2 And +grieued+ at her flight; yet durst he not
     Pursew her steps, through wild vnknowen wood;
4 Besides he feard her wrath, and threatned shot
     Whiles in the bush he lay, not yet forgot:
6 Ne car'd he greatly for her presence vaine,
     But turning said to Trompart, What foule blot
8 Is this to knight, that Ladie should againe
   Depart to woods vntoucht, and leaue so proud disdaine?

2 grieued > greiued 1596

1 Which when the peasant saw, amazed he stood,

peasant > boor, clown, lout

2 And grieved at her flight; yet dared he not

at > by

3 Pursue her steps, through wild unknown wood; 4 Besides, he feared her wrath, and threatened shot 5 While in the bush he lay, not yet forgotten: 6 Nor cared he greatly for her presence vain,

vain > vain, proud; useless (because she is inexplicably resistant to his charms)

7 But, turning, said to Trompart, "What foul blot 8 Is this to knight, that lady should again 9 Depart to woods untouched, and leave so proud disdain?"

untouched > (Sexually: cf. 102.40:9) leave so > [leave such; leave in such] disdain > indignation, anger; dudgeon

203.44

   Perdie (said Trompart) let her passe at will,
2 Least by her presence daunger mote befall.
     For who can tell (and sure I feare it ill)
4 But that she is some powre celestiall?
     For whiles she spake, her great words did apall
6 My feeble courage, and my hart oppresse,
     That yet I quake and tremble ouer all.
8 And I (said Braggadocchio) thought no lesse,
   When first I heard her horne sound with such ghastlinesse.

1 "Pardie," said Trompart, "let her pass at will,

Pardie > truly; "by God"

2 Lest by her presence danger might befall. 3 For who can tell (and sure I fear it ill) 4 But that she is some power celestial? 5 For while she spoke, her great words did appal 6 My feeble courage, and my heart oppress,

courage > spirit

7 That yet I quake and tremble over all."

That > [So that] over all > everywhere (in all parts of my body)

8 "And I," said Braggadocchio, "thought no less, 9 When first I heard her horn sound with such ghastliness.

ghastliness > {Ghostliness; that which induces terror of the supernatural}

203.45

   For from my mothers wombe this grace I haue
2 Me giuen by eternall destinie,
     That earthly thing may not my courage braue
4 Dismay with feare, or cause +on+ foot to flie,
     But either hellish feends, or powres on hie:
6 Which was the cause, when earst that horne I heard,
     Weening it had beene thunder in the skie,
8 I hid my selfe from it, as one affeard;
   But when I other knew, my selfe I boldly reard.

4 on > one 1609

1 "For from my mother's womb this grace I have 2 Me given by eternal destiny,

Me given > [Given to me]

3 That earthly thing may not my courage brave

brave > splendid, fine; brave

4 Dismay with fear, or cause on foot to fly,

on > (See Textual Appendix) fly > flee

5 But either hellish fiends, or powers on high:

But > Unless [it be]

6 Which was the cause, when erst that horn I heard,

erst > first

7 Weening it had been thunder in the sky,

Weening > Supposing, believing

8 I hid myself from it, as one afeard;

afeard > frightened

9 But when I other knew, myself I boldly reared.

other > otherwise

203.46

   But now for feare of worse, that may betide,
2 Let vs soone hence depart. They soone agree;
     So to his steed he got, and gan to ride,
4 As one vnfit therefore, that all might see
     He had not trayned bene in cheualree.
6 Which well that valiant courser did discerne;
     For he despysd to tread in dew degree,
8 But chaufd and fom'd, with courage fierce and sterne,
   And to be easd of that base burden still did +erne+.

9 erne > yerne 1609

1 "But now, for fear of worse that may betide,

betide > happen, befall

2 Let us soon hence depart." They soon agree;

soon > at once

3 So to his steed he got, and began to ride, 4 As one unfit therefor, that all might see

therefor > for that [for riding such a steed]

5 He had not trained been in chivalry.

chivalry > cavalry, horsemanship; knightly conduct

6 Which well that valiant courser did discern; 7 For he despised to tread in due degree,

in due degree > carefully, slowly

8 But chafed and foamed with courage fierce and stern,

stern > stern; terrible

9 And to be eased of that base burden still did yearn.

still > ever

CANTO IV

   Guyon does Furor bind in chaines,
2 and stops Occasion:
   Deliuers +Phedon+, and therefore
4 by +strife+ is rayld vpon.

3 Phedon > Phaon 1590 4 strife > Strife 1609

1 Guyon does Furor bind in chains,

Furor > "Madness" (Latin)

2 and stops Occasion:

Occasion > "Opportunity"

3 Delivers Phedon, and therefore

Phedon > (Meaning and origin uncertain)

4 by Strife is railed upon.

Strife > Atin (named at 204.42:5) railed upon > abused

204.1

   IN braue pursuit of honorable deed,
2 There is I know not what great difference
     Betweene the vulgar and the noble seed,
4 Which vnto things of valorous pretence
     Seemes to be borne by natiue influence;
6 As feates of armes, and loue to entertaine,
     But chiefly skill to ride, seemes a science
8 Proper to gentle bloud; some others faine
   To menage steeds, as did this vaunter; but in vaine.

1 In brave pursuit of honourable deed,

brave > fine, splendid

2 There is I know not what great difference 3 Between the vulgar and the noble seed,

vulgar > common, ordinary seed > children, offspring (hence "noble seed" = "nobility")

4 Which to things of valorous pretence

Which > (Referring to "the noble seed") pretence > expressed intention, purpose, design

5 Seems to be born by native influence;

native > [virtue of] natal; hence: astrological

6 As feats of arms, and love to entertain,

As > [Such as] entertain > deal with; occupy oneself with; receive, be receptive to; cherish

7 But chiefly skill to ride, seems a science

science > skill, lore

8 Proper to gentle blood; some others feign

Proper > Belonging, peculiar; proper gentle > noble feign > [pretend to be able]

9 To manage steeds, as did this vaunter; but in vain.

vaunter > boaster [Braggadocchio]

204.2

   But he the rightfull owner of that steed,
2 Who well could menage and subdew his pride,
     The whiles on foot was forced for to yeed,
4 With that blacke Palmer, his most trusty guide;
     Who suffred not his wandring feet to slide.
6 But when strong passion, or weake fleshlinesse
     Would from the right way seeke to draw him wide,
8 He would through temperance and stedfastnesse,
   Teach him the weake to strengthen, and the strong suppresse.

1 But he, the rightful owner of that steed,

he > [Guyon]

2 Who well could manage and subdue his pride,

pride > (Again the horse appears as a symbol of its rider's nature: cf. 102.8, etc.)

3 The whiles on foot was forced to yode,

The whiles > Meanwhile yode > go

4 With that black palmer, his most trusty guide;

black > (Referring to the colour of his clothes; see 201.7:2)

5 Who suffered not his wandering feet to slide.

suffered > allowed slide > [slide into error]

6 But when strong passion, or weak fleshliness, 7 Would from the right way seek to draw him wide, 8 He would, through temperance and steadfastness, 9 Teach him the weak to strengthen, and the strong suppress.

204.3

   It fortuned forth faring on his way,
2 He saw from farre, or seemed for to see
     Some troublous vprore or contentious fray,
4 Whereto he drew in haste it to agree.
     A mad man, or that feigned mad to bee,
6 Drew by the haire along vpon the ground,
     A handsome stripling with great crueltee,
8 Whom sore he bett, and gor'd with many a wound,
   That cheekes with teares, and sides with bloud did all abound.

1 It fortuned, forth faring on his way,
2 He saw from far, or seemed to see,
3 Some troublous uproar or contentious fray,
4 Whereto he drew in haste it to agree.

agree > settle, reconcile

5 A madman, or that feigned mad to be,

madman > [Furor] that > [one that]

6 Drew by the hair, along upon the ground, 7 A handsome stripling with great cruelty, 8 Whom sore he beat, and gored with many a wound, 9 That cheeks with tears, and sides with blood did all abound.

That > [So that the stripling's]

204.4

   And him behind, a wicked Hag did stalke,
2 In ragged robes, and filthy disaray,
     Her other leg was lame, that she no'te +walke,+
4 But on a staffe her feeble steps did stay;
     Her lockes, that loathly were and hoarie gray,
6 Grew all afore, and +loosely+ hong vnrold,
     But all behind was bald, and worne away,
8 That none thereof could euer taken hold,
   And eke her face ill fauourd, full of wrinckles old.

3 walke, > walke. 1590, 1596 6 loosely > loosly 1590

1 And him behind a wicked hag did stalk,

a wicked hag > [Occasion]

2 In ragged robes, and filthy disarray,

disarray > {Imperfect or improper attire}

3 Her other leg was lame, that she no'te walk,

that > [so that] no'te > could not

4 But on a staff her feeble steps did stay;

stay > support

5 Her locks, that loathly were and hoary grey,

loathly > loathsome, repulsive

6 Grew all afore, and loosely hung unrolled, 7 But all behind was bald, and worn away, 8 That none thereof could ever take hold,

That > [So that]

9 And eke her face ill-favoured, full of wrinkles old.

eke > also [was] ill-favoured > ugly

204.5

   And euer as she went, her tongue did walke
2 In foule reproch, and termes of vile despight,
     Prouoking him by her outrageous talke,
4 To heape more vengeance on that wretched wight;
     Sometimes she raught him stones, wherwith to smite,
6 Sometimes her staffe, though it her one leg were,
     Withouten which she could not go vpright;
8 Ne any euill meanes she did forbeare,
   That might him moue to wrath, and indignation reare.

1 And ever as she went her tongue did walk

walk > move, remain in motion

2 In foul reproach, and terms of vile despite,

terms > words, language despite > anger; malice; contempt

3 Provoking him, by her outrageous talk,

him > [Furor] outrageous > outrageous; excessively fierce

4 To heap more vengeance on that wretched wight;

wight > person [Phedon]

5 Sometimes she raught him stones, wherewith to smite,

raught > reached, handed wherewith > with which

6 Sometimes her staff, though it her one leg were, 7 Without which she could not go upright; 8 Neither any evil means she did forbear, 9 That might him move to wrath, and indignation rear.

rear > arouse

204.6

   The noble Guyon mou'd with great remorse,
2 Approching, first the Hag did thrust away,
     And after adding more impetuous forse,
4 His mightie hands did on the madman lay,
     And pluckt him backe; who all on fire streight way,
6 Against him turning all his fell intent,
     With beastly brutish rage gan him assay,
8 And smot, and bit, and kickt, and scratcht, and rent,
   And did he wist not what in his auengement.

1 The noble Guyon, moved with great remorse,

remorse > pity, compassion

2 Approaching, first the hag did thrust away 3 And, after adding more impetuous force, 4 His mighty hands did on the madman lay, 5 And plucked him back; who, all on fire straightway, 6 Against him turning all his fell intent,

fell > fierce, terrible

7 With beastly brutish rage gan him assay,

gan > did assay > assail

8 And smote, and bit, and kicked, and scratched, and rent,

rent > tore

9 And did he wist not what in his avengement.

wist > knew avengement > vengeance

204.7

   And sure he was a man of mickle might,
2 Had he had gouernance, it well to guide:
     But when the franticke fit inflamd his spright,
4 His force was vaine, and strooke more often wide,
     Then at the aymed marke, which he had eide:
6 And oft himselfe he chaunst to hurt vnwares,
     Whilst reason blent through passion, nought descride,
8 But as a blindfold Bull at randon fares,
   And where he hits, nought knowes, and whom he hurts, nought cares.

1 And sure he was a man of mickle might,

mickle > much

2 Had he had governance, it well to guide:

governance > management, self-control

3 But when the frantic fit inflamed his spirit 4 His force was vain, and struck more often wide

vain > empty, unavailing

5 Than at the aimed mark, which he had eyed: 6 And oft himself he chanced to hurt unwares,

unwares > unwittingly

7 Whilst reason, blended through passion, naught descried,

blended > blinded; also: stirred up, hence: spoiled, rendered turbid naught > nothing at all

8 But as a blindfolded bull at random fares, 9 And where he hits naught knows, and whom he hurts naught cares.

naught > not at all naught > nothing at all

204.8

   His rude assault and rugged handeling
2 Straunge seemed to the knight, that aye with foe
     In faire defence and goodly menaging
4 Of armes was wont to fight, yet nathemoe
     Was he abashed now not fighting so,
6 But more enfierced through his currish play,
     Him sternely grypt, and haling to and fro,
8 To ouerthrow him strongly did assay,
   But ouerthrew himselfe vnwares, and lower lay.

1 His rude assault and rugged handling

rude > violent rugged > rough handling > treatment, management; hence: conduct

2 Strange seemed to the knight, that ay with foe

ay > ever, always

3 In fair defence and goodly managing

managing > handling, wielding

4 Of arms was wont to fight, yet nathemore

wont > accustomed nathemore > never the more, not at all

5 Was he abashed now not fighting so, 6 But, more enfierced through his currish play,

enfierced > made fierce currish > cur-like: quarrelsome, snappish

7 Him sternly gripped and, haling to and fro,

sternly > fiercely haling > hauling, dragging

8 To overthrow him strongly did essay,

essay > attempt

9 But overthrew himself unwares, and lower lay.

unwares > unexpectedly

204.9

   And being downe the villein sore did beat,
2 And bruze with clownish fistes his manly face:
     And eke the Hag with many a bitter threat,
4 Still cald vpon to kill him in the place.
     With whose reproch and odious menace
6 The knight emboyling in his haughtie hart,
     Knit all his forces, and gan soone vnbrace
8 His grasping hold: so lightly did vpstart,
   And drew his deadly weapon, to maintaine his part.

1 And, being down, the villein sore did beat,

villein > villain; serf

2 And bruise with clownish fists his manly face:

clownish > coarse; clumsy

3 And eke the hag, with many a bitter threat,

eke > also

4 Still called upon to kill him in the place.

Still > Continuously upon > [upon Furor] in the place > there; on the spot, right away

5 With whose reproach and odious menace 6 The knight, emboiling in his haughty heart,

emboiling > boiling with rage (SUS)

7 Knit all his forces, and gan soon unbrace

gan soon unbrace > did immediately loosen

8 His grasping hold: so lightly did upstart,

lightly > quickly, lightly upstart > get up

9 And drew his deadly weapon, to maintain his part.

maintain > defend part > {Side in a contest; cause}

204.10

   Which when the Palmer saw, he loudly cryde,
2 Not so, {o^} Guyon, neuer thinke that so
     That Monster can be maistred or destroyd:
4 He is +not+, ah, he is not such a foe,
     As steele can wound, or strength can ouerthroe.
6 That same is Furor, cursed cruell wight,
     That vnto knighthood workes much shame and woe;
8 And that same Hag, his aged mother, hight
   Occasion, the root of all wrath +and+ despight.

4 not > no 1590 etc.: FE 9 and > aud 1596

1 Which when the palmer saw, he loudly cried, 2 "Not so, O Guyon, never think that so

so > thus

3 That monster can be mastered or destroyed: 4 He is not, ah, he is not such a foe 5 As steel can wound, or strength can overthrow. 6 That same is Furor, cursed cruel wight,

wight > creature, being

7 That to knighthood works much shame and woe; 8 And that same hag, his aged mother, hight

hight > is called

9 Occasion, the root of all wrath and despite.

despite > malice; rage; outrage

204.11

   With her, who so will raging Furor tame,
2 Must first begin, and well her amenage:
     First her restraine from her reprochfull blame,
4 And euill meanes, with which she doth enrage
     Her franticke sonne, and kindles his courage,
6 Then when she is withdrawen, or strong withstood,
     It's eath his idle furie to asswage,
8 And calme the tempest of his passion wood;
   The bankes are ouerflowen, when stopped is the flood.

1 "With her, whoso will raging Furor tame

whoso > whoever

2 Must first begin, and well her amenage:

amenage > tame, domesticate; control (WU)

3 First her restrain from her reproachful blame

reproachful > shameful, disgraceful blame > {Reproach, the action of censuring, reprehension}

4 And evil means, with which she does enrage 5 Her frantic son, and kindles his courage,

courage > wrath; confidence

6 Then when she is withdrawn, or strong withstood, 7 It's eath his idle fury to assuage,

eath > easy idle > empty; unavailing, futile assuage > abate

8 And calm the tempest of his passion wood;

passion > {Outburst of anger; overpowering access of emotion; affection of the mind; also: suffering, affliction} wood > furious, mad

9 The banks are overflowed, when stopped is the flood."

204.12

   Therewith Sir Guyon left his first emprise,
2 And turning to that woman, fast her hent
     By the hoare lockes, that hong before her eyes,
4 And to the ground her threw: yet n'ould she stent
     Her bitter rayling and foule reuilement,
6 But still prouokt her sonne to wreake her wrong;
     But nathelesse he did her still torment,
8 And catching hold of her vngratious +tong+,
   Thereon an yron +lock+ did fasten firme and strong.

8 tong > tongue 1590; tonge FE 9 lock > lock, 1590, 1596

1 Therewith Sir Guyon left his first emprise

Therewith > With that emprise > undertaking, enterprise

2 And, turning to that woman, fast her hent

fast > firmly hent > seized

3 By the hoar locks that hung before her eyes,

hoar > hoary, grey

4 And to the ground her threw: yet nould she stint

nould > would not stint > desist from

5 Her bitter railing and foul revilement,

revilement > {The action of reviling}

6 But still provoked her son to wreak her wrong;

wrong > evil intent

7 But natheless he did her still torment,

natheless > nevertheless

8 And, catching hold of her ungracious tongue,

ungracious > wicked

9 Thereon an iron lock did fasten firm and strong.

lock > {Any contrivance for fastening; cf. Isa. 37.29}

204.13

   Then when as vse of speach was from her reft,
2 With her two crooked handes she signes did make,
     And beckned him, the last helpe she had left:
4 But he that last left helpe away did take,
     And both her hands fast bound vnto a stake,
6 That she +note+ stirre. Then gan her sonne to flie
     Full fast away, and did her quite forsake;
8 But Guyon after him in haste did hie,
   And soone him ouertooke in sad perplexitie.

6 note > no'te 1609

1 Then, when use of speech was from her reft,

reft > taken away

2 With her two crooked hands she signs did make, 3 And beckoned him (the last help she had left):

him > [Furor]

4 But he that last left help away did take,

he > [Guyon]

5 And both her hands fast bound to a stake,

fast > firmly

6 That she no'te stir. Then began her son to fly

no'te > could not fly > flee

7 Full fast away, and did her quite forsake;

Full > Very, exceedingly

8 But Guyon after him in haste did hie, 9 And soon him overtook in sad perplexity.

perplexity > distress

204.14

   In his strong armes he stiffely him embraste,
2 Who him gainstriuing, nought at all preuaild:
     For all his power was vtterly defaste,
4 And furious fits at earst quite weren quaild:
     Oft he re'nforst, and oft his forces fayld,
6 Yet yield he would not, nor his rancour slacke.
     Then him to ground he cast, and rudely hayld,
8 And both his hands fast bound behind his backe,
   And both his feet in fetters to an yron racke.

1 In his strong arms he stiffly him embraced,

stiffly > strongly; tightly

2 Who, him gainstriving, naught at all prevailed:

gainstriving > opposing, striving against

3 For all his power was utterly defaced,

defaced > destroyed

4 And furious fits at erst quite were quailed:

erst > once (catachr.) quailed > overpowered

5 Oft he reinforced, and oft his forces failed,

reinforced > made a fresh effort

6 Yet yield he would not, nor his rancour slack. 7 Then him to ground he cast, and rudely haled,

rudely > roughly, violently haled > hauled, dragged

8 And both his hands fast bound behind his back,

fast > firmly

9 And both his feet in fetters to an iron rack.

rack > {Iron bar to which prisoners were secured}

204.15

   With hundred yron chaines he did him bind,
2 And hundred knots that did him sore constraine:
     Yet his great yron teeth he still did grind,
4 And grimly gnash, threatning reuenge in vaine:
     His burning eyen, whom bloudie strakes did staine,
6 Stared full wide, and threw forth sparkes of fire,
     And more for ranck despight, then for great paine,
8 Shakt his long lockes, colourd like copper-wire,
   And bit his tawny beard to shew his raging ire.

1 With hundred iron chains he did him bind, 2 And hundred knots that did him sore constrain:

hundred knots > (Cf. Aen. 1.294-6, where Furor is bound with a bronze chain of 100 links)

3 Yet his great iron teeth he still did grind, 4 And grimly gnash, threatening revenge in vain:

grimly > grimly, fiercely; dreadfully

5 His burning eyes, which bloody strakes did stain,

strakes > streaks

6 Stared full wide, and threw forth sparks of fire,

Stared > {Glared; opened wide in madness or fury} full > exceedingly

7 And, more for rank despite than for great pain,

rank > proud, rebellious; violent; excessive; festering; virulent despite > malice, spite; rage

8 Shook his long locks, coloured like copper wire,

Shook > [He shook]

9 And bit his tawny beard to show his raging ire.

204.16

   Thus when as Guyon Furor had captiu'd,
2 Turning about he saw that wretched Squire,
     Whom that mad man of life nigh late depriu'd,
4 Lying on ground, all soild with bloud and mire:
     Whom when as he perceiued to respire,
6 He gan to comfort, and his wounds to dresse.
     Being at last recured, he gan inquire,
8 What hard mishap him brought to such distresse,
   And made that caitiues thral, the thral of wretchednesse.

1 Thus when Guyon Furor had captived,

captived > made captive

2 Turning about, he saw that wretched squire

squire > {One ranking next to a knight in the feudal system of military service and tenure; also: a gallant, lover}

3 (Whom that madman of life nigh late deprived)

late > lately

4 Lying on ground, all soiled with blood and mire: 5 Whom when he perceived to respire, 6 He began to comfort, and his wounds to dress. 7 Being at last recured, he gan inquire

recured > recovered, restored he gan > [Guyon did]

8 What hard mishap him brought to such distress, 9 And made that caitiff's thrall, the thrall of wretchedness.

caitiff's thrall > wretch's slave

204.17

   With hart then throbbing, and with watry eyes,
2 Faire Sir (quoth he) what man can shun the hap,
     That hidden lyes vnwares him to +surpryse?+
4 Misfortune waites aduantage to entrap
     The man most warie in her whelming lap.
6 So me weake wretch, of many weakest +one+,
     Vnweeting, and vnware of such mishap,
8 She brought to mischiefe through +occasion+,
   Where this same wicked villein did me +light vpon+.

3 surpryse? > surpryse 1590, 1596 6 one > wretch 1590 8 occasion > her guilful trech 1590 9 light vpon > wandring ketch 1590

1 With heart then throbbing, and with watery eyes, 2 "Fair sir," quoth he, "what man can shun the hap

hap > chance, fortune

3 That hidden lies unwares him to surprise?

unwares > unexpectedly; suddenly

4 Misfortune waits advantage to entrap

waits > lies in wait for advantage > [a] time of advantage, chance, opportunity

5 The man most wary in her whelming lap.

whelming > submerging, engulfing; ruinous

6 So me, weak wretch, of many weakest one,

weakest > [the weakest]

7 Unweeting, and unware of such mishap,

Unweeting > Unwitting, unsuspecting unware > unaware; unvigilant

8 She brought to mischief through occasion,

She > [Misfortune] mischief > misfortune, disaster; evil occasion > [an] opportunity

9 Where this same wicked villein did me light upon.

Where > [In which, at which] villein > villain; serf

204.18

   It was a faithlesse Squire, that was the sourse
2 Of all my sorrow, and of these sad teares,
     With whom from tender dug of commune nourse,
4 Attonce I was vpbrought, and eft when yeares
     More rype vs reason lent to +chose+ our Peares,
6 Our selues in league of vowed loue we knit:
     In which we long time without gealous feares,
8 +Or+ faultie thoughts continewd, as was fit;
   And for my part I vow, dissembled not a whit.

5 chose > chuse 1609 8 Or > Our 1609

1 "It was a faithless squire, that was the source

squire > gallant, lover

2 Of all my sorrow, and of these sad tears, 3 With whom from tender dug of common nurse,

dug > breast; teat

4 At once I was upbrought, and eft, when years

At once > Together, simultaneously upbrought > brought up eft > afterwards

5 More ripe us reason lent to choose our peers,

peers > companions

6 Ourselves in league of vowed love we knit: 7 In which we long time, without jealous fears 8 Or faulty thoughts, continued, as was fit; 9 And, for my part I vow, dissembled not a whit.

204.19

   +It+ was my fortune commune to that age,
2 To loue a Ladie faire of great degree,
     The which was borne of noble parentage,
4 And set in highest seat of dignitee,
     Yet seemd no lesse to loue, then loued to bee:
6 Long I her seru'd, and found her faithfull still,
     Ne euer thing could cause vs disagree:
8 Loue that two harts makes +one,+ makes eke one will:
   Each stroue to please, and others pleasure to fulfill.

1 It > Is 1596 8 one, > one; 1596

1 "It was my fortune, common to that age,

age > {Time of life}

2 To love a lady fair of great degree,

degree > social station

3 Who was born of noble parentage, 4 And set in highest seat of dignity, 5 Yet seemed no less to love, than loved to be: 6 Long I her served, and found her faithful still,

still > always

7 Ne ever thing could cause us disagree:

Ne ever > Nor ever; never disagree > [to disagree]

8 Love that two hearts makes one, makes eke one will:

eke > also

9 Each strove to please, and other's pleasure to fulfil.

204.20

   My friend, hight Philemon, I did +partake,+
2 Of all my loue and all my priuitie;
     Who greatly ioyous seemed for my sake,
4 And gratious to that Ladie, as to mee,
     Ne euer wight, that mote so welcome bee,
6 As he to her, withouten blot or blame,
     Ne euer thing, that she could thinke or see,
8 But vnto him she would impart the same:
   O wretched man, that would abuse so gentle Dame.

1 partake, > partake 1609

1 "My friend, hight Philemon, I did partake

hight > named Philemon > "My Friend" (Greek) partake > inform

2 Of all my love and all my privity;

privity > private knowledge, secrets

3 Who greatly joyous seemed for my sake, 4 And gracious to that lady, as to me;

gracious > [as gracious]

5 Ne ever wight that might so welcome be,

Ne ever > Never [a] wight > person

6 As he to her, without blot or blame,

blame > imputation

7 Ne ever thing that she could think or see,

Ne ever > Nor ever; never

8 But to him she would impart the same: 9 O wretched man, that would abuse so gentle dame!

abuse > deceive; take advantage of; violate gentle > gentle; noble [a]

204.21

   At last such grace I found, and meanes I wrought,
2 That I that Ladie to my spouse had wonne;
     Accord of friends, consent of parents sought,
4 Affiance made, my happinesse begonne,
     There wanted nought but few rites to be donne,
6 Which mariage make; that day too farre did seeme:
     Most ioyous man, on whom the shining +Sunne,+
8 Did shew his face, my selfe I did esteeme,
   And that my falser friend did no lesse ioyous deeme.

7 Sunne, > Sunne 1609

1 "At last such grace I found, and means I wrought,

grace > favour, goodwill

2 That I that lady to my spouse had won;

to > [to become] won > persuaded

3 Accord of friends, consent of parents sought, 4 Affiance made, my happiness begun,

Affiance > Betrothal

5 There wanted naught but few rites to be done,
6 Which marriage make; that day too far did seem:
7 Most joyous man on whom the shining sun
8 Did show his face, myself I did esteem,

esteem > estimate, reckon

9 And that my falser friend did no less joyous deem.

that > [that day] falser > falsest; too false

204.22

   But ere that wished day his beame disclosd,
2 He either enuying my toward good,
     Or of himselfe to treason ill +disposd+
4 One day vnto me came in friendly mood,
     And told for secret how he vnderstood
6 That Ladie whom I had to me assynd,
     Had both distaind her honorable blood,
8 And eke the faith, which she to me did bynd;
   And therfore wisht me stay, till I more truth should fynd.

3 disposd > disposd, 1609

1 "But ere that wished day its beam disclosed, 2 He, either envying my toward good,

envying > begrudging; envying toward > approaching, impending; propitious

3 Or of himself to treason ill disposed, 4 One day to me came in friendly mood, 5 And told for secret how he understood 6 That lady, whom I had to me assigned,

That > [That that] assigned > allotted; designated (for marriage)

7 Had both distained her honourable blood

distained > sullied

8 And eke the faith which she to me did bind;

eke > also

9 And therefore wished me stay till I more truth should find.

stay > [to] wait

204.23

   The gnawing anguish and sharpe gelosy,
2 Which his sad speech infixed in my brest,
     Ranckled so sore, and festred inwardly,
4 That my engreeued mind could find no rest,
     Till that the truth thereof I did outwrest,
6 And him besought by that same sacred band
     Betwixt vs both, to counsell me the best.
8 He then with solemne oath and plighted hand
   Assur'd, ere long the truth to let me vnderstand.

1 "The gnawing anguish and sharp jealousy, 2 Which his sad speech infixed in my breast, 3 Rankled so sore, and festered inwardly, 4 That my engrieved mind could find no rest,

engrieved > aggravated; grieved

5 Till the truth thereof I did outwrest,

outwrest > wrest out, extract

6 And him besought, by that same sacred band 7 Betwixt us both, to counsel me the best. 8 He then, with solemn oath and plighted hand, 9 Assured, ere long, the truth to let me understand.

Assured > Pledged

204.24

   Ere long with like againe he boorded mee,
2 Saying, he now had boulted all the floure,
     And that it was a groome of base degree,
4 Which of my loue was partner Paramoure:
     Who vsed in a darkesome inner bowre
6 Her oft to meet: which better to approue,
     He promised to bring me at that howre,
8 When I should see, that would me nearer moue,
   And driue me to withdraw my blind abused loue.

1 "Ere long with like again he boarded me,

boarded > drew near to and addressed, accosted

2 Saying, he now had bolted all the flour,

bolted > sifted; examined by sifting, searched (proverbial)

3 And that it was a groom of base degree,

groom > fellow degree > rank

4 Who of my love was partner paramour:

paramour > (Adv.) in sexual love

5 Who used in a darksome inner bower

used > was accustomed, was in the habit of bower > chamber

6 Her oft to meet: which better to approve,

approve > prove, demonstrate

7 He promised to bring me at that hour 8 When I should see that would me nearer move,

that > [that which] nearer move > affect more deeply

9 And drive me to withdraw my blind abused love.

abused > deceived; abused

204.25

   This gracelesse man for furtherance of his guile,
2 Did court the handmayd of my Lady deare,
     Who glad t'embosome his affection vile,
4 Did all she might, more pleasing to appeare.
     One day to worke her to his will more neare,
6 He woo'd her thus: Pryene (so she hight)
     What great despight doth fortune to thee beare,
8 Thus lowly to abase thy beautie bright,
   That it should not deface all others lesser light?

1 "This graceless man, for furtherance of his guile, 2 Did court the handmaid of my lady dear, 3 Who, glad to embosom his affection vile,

embosom > embrace (chiefly fig.)

4 Did all she might, more pleasing to appear. 5 One day, to work her to his will more near,

near > closely

6 He wooed her thus: `Pryene,' (so she hight)

Pryene > (The name is possibly derived from pyr, the Greek word for fire (cf. "prytaneum"), in that she is identified as both an incendiary in the story (see 204.29:8) and herself inflamed with love (204.27:1)) hight > is named

7 `What great despite does Fortune to you bear,

despite > ill-will, malice

8 Thus lowly to abase your beauty bright, 9 That it should not deface all others' lesser light?

deface > cast in the shade

204.26

   But if she had her least helpe to thee lent,
2 T'adorne thy forme according thy desart,
     Their blazing pride thou wouldest soone haue blent,
4 And staynd their prayses with thy least good part;
     Ne should faire Claribell with all her art,
6 Though she thy Lady be, approch thee neare:
     For proofe thereof, this euening, as thou art,
8 Aray thy selfe in her most gorgeous geare,
   That I may more delight in thy embracement deare.

1 "`But if she had her least help to you lent,

she > [Fortune]

2 To adorn your form according your desert,

your desert > [to your merits]

3 Their blazing pride you would soon have blended,

blended > stirred up; hence: rendered turbid, spoiled

4 And stained their praises with your least good part;

stained > {Deprived of colour and lustre} praises > [the praises they receive; cf. 111.7:6] part > quality; accomplishment

5 Neither should fair Claribella, with all her art,

Claribella > "Clear and Beautiful" (Latin. This spelling is adopted in view of 204.28:3, and to differentiate her from the "Claribell" in 612)

6 Though she your lady be, approach you near: 7 For proof thereof, this evening, as you are, 8 Array yourself in her most gorgeous gear,

gear > clothes

9 That I may more delight in your embracement dear.'

That > [So that] embracement > embrace, embraces

204.27

   The Maiden proud through prayse, and mad through loue
2 Him hearkned to, and soone her selfe arayd,
     The whiles to me the treachour did remoue
4 His craftie engin, and as he had sayd,
     Me leading, in a secret corner layd,
6 The sad spectatour of my Tragedie;
     Where left, he went, and his owne false part playd,
8 Disguised like that groome of base degree,
   Whom he had feignd th'abuser of my loue to bee.

1 "The maiden, proud through praise, and mad through love, 2 Him hearkened to, and soon herself arrayed; 3 The whiles to me the treacher did remove

The whiles > Meanwhile treacher > deceiver; traitor remove > [transfer from Pryene to myself]

4 His crafty engine and, as he had said,

engine > contrivance, scheme

5 Me leading, in a secret corner laid, 6 The sad spectator of my tragedy; 7 Where left, he went, and his own false part played, 8 Disguised like that groom of base degree

groom > fellow degree > rank

9 Whom he had feigned the abuser of my love to be.

204.28

   Eftsoones he came vnto th'appointed place,
2 And with him brought +Priene+, rich arayd,
     In Claribellaes clothes. Her proper face
4 I not +descerned+ in that darkesome shade,
     But weend it was my loue, with whom he playd.
6 Ah God, what horrour and tormenting griefe
     My hart, my hands, mine eyes, and all assayd?
8 Me liefer were ten thousand +deathes+ priefe,
   Then wound of gealous worme, and shame of such repriefe.

2 Priene > Pryene 1590 4 descerned > discerned 1609 8 deathes > deathez 1609, to emphasize the disyllable; cf. 110.39:4, 200.5:4, 206.39:5

1 "Eftsoons he came to the appointed place,

Eftsoons > Thereupon

2 And with him brought Pryene, rich arrayed, 3 In Claribella's clothes. Her proper face

proper > own; beautiful; excellent, admirable

4 I not discerned in that darksome shade, 5 But weened it was my love with whom he played.

weened > supposed

6 Ah God, what horror and tormenting grief 7 My heart, my hands, my eyes, and all assayed?

assayed > assailed; made trial of

8 Me liefer were ten thousand deaths' proof,

Me liefer > Preferable to me, dearer to me proof > trial, experience

9 Than wound of jealous worm, and shame of such reproof.

worm > snake, serpent [of jealousy]; passion, gnawing torment reproof > shame, disgrace

204.29

   I home returning, fraught with fowle despight,
2 And chawing vengeance all the way I went,
     Soone as my loathed loue appeard in sight,
4 With wrathfull hand I slew her innocent;
     That after soone I dearely did lament:
6 For when the cause of that outrageous deede
     Demaunded, I made plaine and euident,
8 Her faultie Handmayd, which that bale did breede,
   Confest, how Philemon her wrought to chaunge her weede.

1 "I, home returning (fraught with foul despite,

fraught > filled despite > anger; malice

2 And chawing vengeance all the way I went),

chawing > chewing, champing; fig.: ruminating upon, brooding over

3 Soon as my loathed love appeared in sight,

Soon > [As soon]

4 With wrathful hand I slew her innocent; 5 That after soon I dearly did lament:

That > [That deed] dearly > sorely, grievously

6 For when the cause of that outrageous deed

cause of > [motive for]

7 Demanded (I made plain and evident),

Demanded > [Was demanded] made > [made it]

8 Her faulty handmaid, who that bale did breed,

faulty > guilty bale > torment; infliction of death (and, keeping the meaning of "Pryene" in mind, see 101.16:7)

9 Confessed how Philemon her wrought to change her weed.

weed > clothing

204.30

   Which when I heard, with horrible affright
2 And hellish fury all enragd, I sought
     Vpon my selfe that vengeable despight
4 To punish: yet it better first I thought,
     To wreake my wrath on him, that first it wrought.
6 To Philemon, false faytour Philemon
     I cast to pay, that I so dearely bought;
8 Of deadly drugs I gaue him drinke anon,
   And washt away his guilt with guiltie potion.

1 "Which when I heard, with horrible affright

affright > terror

2 And hellish fury all enraged, I sought 3 Upon myself that vengeable despite

vengeable > {Characterized by or arising from revenge; cruel, dreadful} despite > outrage; rage; malice

4 To punish: yet it better first, I thought,

punish > inflict [by way of punishment]

5 To wreak my wrath on him that first it wrought. 6 To Philemon, false faitour Philemon,

faitour > impostor

7 I cast to pay that I so dearly bought;

cast > decided, resolved that > [that which] dearly > grievously; expensively

8 Of deadly drugs I gave him drink anon,

drink > [to drink] anon > straightway; (catachr.) soon

9 And washed away his guilt with guilty potion.

204.31

   Thus heaping crime on crime, and griefe on griefe,
2 To losse of loue adioyning losse of frend,
     I meant to purge both with a third mischiefe,
4 And in my woes beginner it to end:
     That was Pryene; she did first offend,
6 She last should smart: with which cruell intent,
     When I at her my murdrous blade did bend,
8 She fled away with ghastly dreriment,
   And I pursewing my fell purpose, after went.

1 "Thus heaping crime on crime, and grief on grief, 2 To loss of love adjoining loss of friend,

adjoining > uniting

3 I meant to purge both with a third mischief, 4 And in my woes' beginner it to end:

beginner > initiator, author

5 That was Pryene; she did first offend, 6 She last should smart: with which cruel intent,

smart > suffer

7 When I at her my murderous blade did bend,

bend > direct, bring to bear

8 She fled away with ghastly dreariment,

ghastly > frightful, terrible dreariment > horror

9 And I, pursuing my fell purpose, after went.

fell > terrible, dreadful

204.32

   Feare gaue her wings, and rage enforst my flight;
2 Through woods and plaines so long I did her chace,
     Till this mad man, whom your victorious might
4 Hath now fast bound, me met in middle space,
     As I her, so he me pursewd apace,
6 And shortly ouertooke: +I+ breathing yre,
     Sore chauffed at my stay in such a cace,
8 And with my heat kindled his cruell fyre;
   Which kindled once, his mother did more rage inspyre.

6 I > I, 1609

1 "Fear gave her wings, and rage enforced my flight;

enforced > strengthened, reinforced

2 Through woods and plains so long I did her chase,

so > thus, in that manner

3 Till this madman, whom your victorious might 4 Has now fast bound, me met in middle space,

fast > firmly middle space > (Cf. 202.20:3)

5 As I her, so he me pursued apace,

apace > swiftly

6 And shortly overtook: I, breathing ire, 7 Sore chafed at my stay in such a case,

chafed > fretted stay > detention, hindrance

8 And with my heat kindled his cruel fire; 9 Which, kindled once, his mother did more rage inspire.

inspire > blow upon [his cruel fire, as if with bellows expelling rage]; also: inspire [in him]

204.33

   Betwixt them both, they haue me doen to dye,
2 Through wounds, and strokes, and stubborne handeling,
     That death were better, then such agony,
4 As griefe and furie vnto me did bring;
     Of which in me yet stickes the mortall sting,
6 That during life will neuer be appeasd.
     When he thus ended had his sorrowing,
8 Said Guyon, Squire, sore haue ye beene diseasd;
   But all your hurts may soone through temperance be easd.

1 "Betwixt them both, they have me done to die,

done > caused, made; tried to make

2 Through wounds, and strokes, and stubborn handling,

stubborn > inflexible, unyielding handling > treatment

3 That death were better than such agony

That > [So that]

4 As grief and fury to me did bring; 5 Of which in me yet sticks the mortal sting, 6 That during life will never be appeased."

appeased > assuaged

7 When he thus ended had his sorrowing, 8 Said Guyon, "Squire, sore have you been diseased;

diseased > troubled, distressed

9 But all your hurts may soon through temperance be eased."

204.34

   Then gan the Palmer thus, +most+ wretched man,
2 That to affections does the bridle lend;
     In their beginning they are weake and wan,
4 But soone through suff'rance grow to fearefull end;
     Whiles they are weake betimes with them contend:
6 For when they once to perfect strength do grow,
     Strong warres they make, and cruell battry bend
8 Gainst fort of Reason, it to ouerthrow:
   Wrath, gelosie, griefe, loue this Squire haue layd thus low.

1 most > Most 1609

1 Then began the palmer thus, "Most wretched man, 2 That to affections does the bridle lend;

affections > emotions (esp. strong emotions, as passion, lust, etc.)

3 In their beginning they are weak and wan, 4 But soon through sufferance grow to fearful end;

sufferance > acquiescence, non-intervention; toleration

5 While they are weak, betimes with them contend:

betimes > in good time, early

6 For when they once to perfect strength do grow, 7 Strong wars they make, and cruel battery bend

battery > assault with many blows bend > direct, bring to bear

8 Against fort of Reason, it to overthrow: 9 Wrath, jealousy, grief, love, this squire have laid thus low.

204.35

   Wrath, gealosie, griefe, loue do thus expell:
2 Wrath is a fire, and gealosie a weede,
     Griefe is a flood, and loue a monster fell;
4 The fire of sparkes, the weede of little seede,
     The flood of drops, the Monster filth did breede:
6 But sparks, seed, drops, and filth do thus delay;
     The sparks soone quench, the springing seed +outweed+
8 The drops dry vp, and filth wipe cleane away:
   So shall wrath, gealosie, griefe, loue dye and decay.

7 outweed > outweed, 1609

1 "Wrath, jealousy, grief, love do thus expel:

expel > (Imperative mood)

2 Wrath is a fire, and jealousy a weed, 3 Grief is a flood, and love a monster fell;

fell > fierce, terrible

4 The fire of sparks, the weed of little seed, 5 The flood of drops, the monster filth did breed;

filth > (Cf. 101.21, 107.17:3, 311.51:7-9)

6 But sparks, seed, drops, and filth do thus delay:

delay > mitigate; assuage

7 The sparks soon quench, the springing seed outweed,

outweed > (The meaning is not clear. Two possible interpretations are (1) become weeded out, i.e. the springing seed soon gives rise to a plant which dies and is therefore thinned out; (2) germinate, spring out as a weed, with implication of subsequent death and decay. In either event one is in little doubt about the intention)

8 The drops dry up, and filth wipe clean away: 9 So shall wrath, jealousy, grief, love, die and decay."

So > Thus

204.36

   Vnlucky Squire (said Guyon) sith thou hast
2 Falne +into+ mischiefe through intemperaunce,
     Henceforth take heede of that thou now hast past,
4 And guide thy wayes with warie gouernaunce,
     Least worse betide thee by some later chaunce.
6 But read how art thou nam'd, and of what kin.
     +Phedon+ I hight (quoth he) and do aduaunce
8 Mine auncestry from famous Coradin,
   Who first to rayse our house to honour did begin.

2 into > vnto 1596 7 Phedon > Phaon 1590

1 "Unlucky squire," said Guyon, "sith you have

sith > since

2 Fallen into mischief through intemperance,

mischief > misfortune, disaster; evil

3 Henceforth take heed of that you now have passed,

that > [that which] passed > [in the temporal sense]

4 And guide your ways with wary governance,

governance > management, self-control

5 Lest worse betide you by some later chance.

betide > befall chance > chance, accident (Occasion)

6 But read how are you named, and of what kin."

read > make known, declare

7 "Phedon I hight," quoth he, "and do advance

hight > am called advance > boast of, lay claim to

8 My ancestry from famous Coradin,

Coradin > "Uncontrollable Spirit" (Latin cor, heart; Greek adunateo, to lack strength or spirit)

9 Who first to raise our house to honour did begin."

204.37

   Thus as he spake, lo far away they spyde
2 A varlet running towards hastily,
     Whose flying feet so fast their way applyde,
4 That round about a cloud of dust did fly,
     Which mingled all with sweate, did dim his eye.
6 He soone approched, panting, breathlesse, whot,
     And all so soyld, that none could him descry;
8 His countenaunce was bold, and bashed not
   For Guyons lookes, but scornefull eyglaunce at him shot.

1 Thus as he spoke, lo far away they spied 2 A varlet running towards hastily,

varlet > knight's attendant; menial; rogue towards > [in their direction]

3 Whose flying feet so fast their way applied

applied > plied, pursued

4 That round about a cloud of dust did fly, 5 Which, mingled all with sweat, did dim his eye. 6 He soon approached, panting, breathless, hot, 7 And all so soiled that none could him descry; 8 His countenance was bold, and bashed not

bashed > was abashed, was disconcerted

9 For Guyon's looks, but scornful eyeglance at him shot.

204.38

   Behind his backe he bore a brasen shield,
2 On which was drawen faire, in colours fit,
     A flaming fire in midst of bloudy field,
4 And round about the wreath this word was writ,
     Burnt I do burne. Right well beseemed it,
6 To be the shield of some redoubted knight;
     And in his hand two darts exceeding flit,
8 And deadly sharpe he held, whose heads were dight
   In poyson and in bloud, of malice and despight.

1 Behind his back he bore a brazen shield, 2 On which was drawn fair, in colours fit, 3 A flaming fire in midst of bloody field,

bloody > blood-red field > {Surface of the shield; a technical term in heraldry}

4 And round about the wreath this word was written:

wreath > {Representation of a ring or circlet used as a bearing or device; another heraldic term} word > declaration; motto, phrase

5 Burnt I do burn. Right well beseemed it,

beseemed it > [it seemed appropriate]

6 To be the shield of some redoubted knight; 7 And in his hand two darts, exceeding fleet

fleet > swift, fast-flying

8 And deadly sharp, he held, whose heads were dight

dight > decked, prepared; hence: dipped, steeped

9 In poison and in blood, of malice and despite.

despite > rage

204.39

   When he in presence came, to Guyon first
2 He boldly spake, Sir knight, if knight thou bee,
     Abandon this forestalled place at erst,
4 For feare of further harme, I counsell thee,
     Or bide the chaunce at thine owne ieoperdie.
6 The knight at his great boldnesse wondered,
     And though he scornd his idle vanitie,
8 Yet mildly him to purpose answered;
   For not to grow of nought he it coniectured.

1 When he in presence came, to Guyon first

presence > [their presence]

2 He boldly spoke, "Sir knight, if knight you be, 3 Abandon this forestalled place at erst,

forestalled > {Pre-occupied, taken or spoken for already} erst > once (catachr.)

4 For fear of further harm, I counsel you, 5 Or bide the chance at your own jeopardy."

bide > await chance > outcome

6 The knight at his great boldness wondered,

wondered > marvelled

7 And though he scorned his idle vanity,

idle > empty

8 Yet mildly him to purpose answered;

purpose > the point

9 For not to grow of naught he it conjectured.

it > [the varlet's boldness]

204.40

   Varlet, this place most dew to me I deeme,
2 Yielded by him, that held it forcibly.
     But whence should come that harme, which thou doest seeme
4 To threat to him, that minds his chaunce t'abye?
     Perdy (said he) here comes, and is hard by
6 A knight of wondrous powre, and great assay,
     That neuer yet encountred enemy,
8 But did him deadly daunt, or fowle dismay;
   Ne thou for better hope, if thou his presence stay.

1 "Varlet, this place most due to me I deem, 2 Yielded by him that held it forcibly.

him > [Furor]

3 But whence should come that harm, which you do seem 4 To threat to him, that minds his chance to aby?"

threat > threaten minds > [is of a mind] chance > fortune, luck (cf. 204.39:5) aby > abide, await, await the issue of

5 "Pardie," said he, "here comes, and is hard by,

Pardie > Truly; "by God"

6 A knight of wondrous power, and great assay,

assay > proven worth; quality

7 That never yet encountered enemy, 8 But did him deadly daunt, or foul dismay;

But > [Except that he] deadly daunt > kill foul dismay > ignominiously defeat

9 Nor you for better hope, if you his presence stay."

hope > (Vb.) stay > await, remain for

204.41

   How hight he then (said Guyon) and from whence?
2 +Pyrochles+ is his name, renowmed farre
     For his bold feats and hardy confidence,
4 Full oft approu'd in many a cruell warre,
     The brother of Cymochles, both which arre
6 The sonnes of old Acrates and Despight,
     Acrates sonne of Phlegeton and Iarre;
8 But Phlegeton +is sonne of+ Herebus and Night;
   But Herebus sonne of Aeternitie is hight.

2 Pyrochles > Pyrrochles passim 1590 etc.: FE 8 is sonne of > of dub. conj. Smith, since the line is hypermetrical

1 "How hight he then," said Guyon, "and from whence?"

hight > is he named

2 "Pyrochles is his name, renowned far

Pyrochles > "Fiery Troublemaker" (Greek pyr, fire, ochleo, to disturb, cause trouble)

3 For his bold feats and hardy confidence,

confidence > hardihood

4 Full oft approved in many a cruel war,

Full > Exceedingly approved > tested

5 The brother of Cymochles, both which are

Cymochles > "Wavering Troublemaker" (Greek kyma, wave, ochleo, to disturb, cause trouble) which > of whom

6 The sons of old Acrates and Despite,

Acrates > "Without Control", "Intemperate" (Greek; cf. "Acrasia",
201.51:2)
Despite > Rage

7 Acrates, son of Phlegethon and Jar;

Phlegethon > (The "Stream of Fire": one of the five rivers of hell, though which fire flows instead of water) Jar > Discord

8 But Phlegethon is son of Erebus and Night;

Erebus > Darkness (son of Chaos, brother and husband of Nox.
Personified in Hesiod, Theogony 125)
Night > (Nox; see 105.20 ff.)

9 But Erebus son of Eternity is hight.

hight > called

204.42

   So from immortall race he does proceede,
2 That mortall hands may not withstand his might,
     Drad for his derring do, and bloudy deed;
4 For all in bloud and spoile is his delight.
     His am I Atin, his in wrong and right,
6 That matter make for him to worke vpon,
     And stirre him vp to strife and cruell fight.
8 Fly therefore, fly this fearefull stead anon,
   Least thy foolhardize worke thy sad confusion.

1 "So from immortal race he does proceed,

So > Thus proceed > spring from

2 That mortal hands may not withstand his might,

That > [So that]

3 Dreaded for his derring do and bloody deed;

derring do > {Daring feats; desperate courage (catachr.; cf. Troilus and Criseyde 5.837)}

4 For all in blood and spoil is his delight.

spoil > plunder, booty

5 His am I, Atin, his in wrong and right,

Atin > "Strife" (Greek; cf. Ate, the goddess of discord, at 207.55:5)

6 That matter make for him to work upon, 7 And stir him up to strife and cruel fight. 8 Fly therefore, fly this fearful stead anon,

Fly > Flee stead > place anon > immediately

9 Lest your foolhardice work your sad confusion."

foolhardice > foolhardiness work > bring about sad confusion > calamitous ruin

204.43

   His be that care, whom most it doth concerne,
2 (Said he) but whither with such hasty flight
     Art thou now bound? for well mote I discerne
4 Great cause, that carries thee so swift and light.
     My Lord (quoth he) me sent, and streight behight
6 To seeke +Occasion;+ where so she bee:
     For he is all disposd to bloudy fight,
8 And breathes out wrath and hainous crueltie;
   Hard is his hap, that first fals in his ieopardie.

6 Occasion; > Occasion, 1609

1 "His be that care, whom most it does concern,"
2 Said he, "but whither with such hasty flight
3 Are you now bound? For well might I discern
4 Great cause, that carries you so swift and light."

light > quickly

5 "My lord," quoth he, "me sent, and straight behight

straight > directly; or: straict: strict, strictly behight > ordained (catachr.); hence: appointed

6 To seek Occasion whereso she be:

whereso > wherever

7 For he is all disposed to bloody fight, 8 And breathes out wrath and heinous cruelty;

heinous > heinous; grievous; full of hate

9 Hard is his hap, that first falls in his jeopardy."

hap > fortune in his jeopardy > [in Pyrochles's way; "jeopardy" has its modern meaning here]

204.44

   Madman (said then the Palmer) that does seeke
2 Occasion to wrath, and cause of strife;
     She comes vnsought, and shonned followes eke.
4 Happy, who can abstaine, when Rancour rife
     Kindles Reuenge, and threats his rusty knife;
6 Woe neuer wants, where euery cause is caught,
     And rash Occasion makes vnquiet life.
8 Then loe, where bound she +sits+, whom thou hast sought,
   (Said Guyon,) let that message to thy Lord be brought.

8 sits > fits 1596

1 "Madman," said then the palmer, "that does seek

seek > {Pursue, harass; try to effect or bring about; in the passive voice, "seek" is also used of a woman being courted or wooed}

2 Occasion to wrath, and cause of strife; 3 She comes unsought, and shunned follows eke.

eke > also, moreover

4 Happy who can abstain when Rancour rife

Happy > [He is happy]

5 Kindles Revenge, and threats his rusty knife;

threats > threatens, brandishes rusty > blood-stained; dirty; rusty

6 Woe never wants, where every cause is caught, 7 And rash Occasion makes unquiet life." 8 "Then lo, where bound she sits, whom you have sought," 9 Said Guyon, "let that message to your lord be brought!"

204.45

   That when the varlet heard and saw, streight way
2 He wexed wondrous wroth, and said, Vile knight,
     That knights and knighthood doest with shame vpbray,
4 And shewst th'ensample of thy childish +might+,
     With silly weake old woman +thus to+ fight.
6 Great glory and gay spoile sure hast thou got,
     And stoutly prou'd thy puissaunce here in sight;
8 That shall Pyrochles well requite, I wot,
   And with thy bloud abolish so reprochfull blot.

4 might > migbt 1596 5 thus to > that did 1590

1 That when the varlet heard and saw, straightway 2 He waxed wondrous wroth, and said, "Vile knight,

waxed > grew

3 That knights and knighthood do with shame upbraid,

upbraid > reprove

4 And show the example of your childish might,

example > pattern

5 With silly weak old woman thus to fight.

silly > helpless; innocent

6 Great glory and gay spoil sure have you got,

spoil > plunder

7 And stoutly proved your puissance here in sight;

stoutly > bravely puissance > power, strength (allied to prowess in arms)

8 That shall Pyrochles well requite, I wot,

wot > know, know for a fact

9 And with your blood abolish so reproachful blot."

blot > [a blot, disgrace]

204.46

   With that one of his thrillant darts he threw,
2 Headed with ire and vengeable despight;
     The quiuering steele his aymed end well knew,
4 And to his brest it selfe intended right:
     But he was warie, and ere it empight
6 In the meant marke, aduaunst his shield atweene,
     On which it seizing, no way enter might,
8 But backe rebounding, left the forckhead keene;
   Eftsoones he fled away, and might no where be seene.

1 With that one of his thrillant darts he threw,

thrillant > thrilling, piercing

2 Headed with ire and vengeable despite;

vengeable > {Characterized by or arising from revenge; cruel, dreadful} despite > outrage; rage; malice

3 The quivering steel its aimed end well knew, 4 And to his breast itself intended right:

intended > directed

5 But he was wary, and ere it empight

empight > implanted itself

6 In the meant mark, advanced his shield atween,

atween > between

7 On which it seizing, no way enter might,

seizing > fastening, fixing itself (SUS)

8 But, back rebounding, left the forkhead keen;

forkhead > barbed head keen > sharp

9 Eftsoons he fled away, and might nowhere be seen.

Eftsoons > Thereupon

CANTO V

   Pyrochles does with Guyon fight,
2 And Furors chayne +vnbinds+
   Of whom sore hurt, for his reuenge
4 Atin Cymochles finds.

2 vnbinds > vntyes, 1590; vnbinds: 1609 3 Of whom sore hurt, for his reuenge > Who him sore wounds: whiles Atin to 1590 4 Atin Cymochles finds. > Gymochles for ayd flyes. 1590; Attin Gymochles finds. 1596

1 Pyrochles does with Guyon fight, 2 And Furor's chain unbinds; 3 Of whom sore hurt, for his revenge

Of > By for his revenge > [to avenge Pyrochles]

4 Atin Cymochles finds.

205.1

   WHo euer doth to temperaunce apply
2 His stedfast life, and all his actions frame,
     Trust me, shall find no greater enimy,
4 Then stubborne perturbation, to the same;
     To which right well the wise do giue that name,
6 For it the goodly peace of stayed mindes
     Does ouerthrow, and troublous warre proclame:
8 His owne woes authour, who so bound it findes,
   As did Pyrochles, and it wilfully vnbindes.

1 Whoever does to temperance apply 2 His steadfast life, and all his actions frame,

frame > direct

3 Trust me, shall find no greater enemy 4 Than stubborn perturbation, to the same;

stubborn > hard; unyielding

5 To which right well the wise do give that name,

right well > very well; hence: most appropriately that name > (I.e. "perturbation", derived from the Latin perturbationem: disorder, disquiet, confusion, passion, emotion, derangement)

6 For it the goodly peace of staid minds

staid > steady, sober, well regulated (without the pejorative modern sense)

7 Does overthrow, and troublous war proclaim: 8 His own woes' author, whoso bound it finds,

His > [He is his] whoso > whoever it > [perturbation, personified by Furor]

9 As did Pyrochles, and it wilfully unbinds.

205.2

   After that varlets flight, it was not long,
2 Ere on the plaine fast pricking Guyon spide
     One in bright armes embatteiled full strong,
4 That as the Sunny beames do glaunce and glide
     Vpon the trembling waue, so shined bright,
6 And round about him threw forth sparkling fire,
     That seemd him to enflame on euery side:
8 His steed was bloudy red, and fomed ire,
   When with the maistring spur he did him roughly stire.

1 After that varlet's flight, it was not long

varlet > attendant (esp. of a knight); menial [Atin]

2 Ere on the plain, fast pricking, Guyon spied

pricking > spurring his horse, riding

3 One in bright arms embattled full strong,

arms > {Arms and armour} embattled > armed for battle (SUFQ) full > very, exceedingly

4 That, as the sunny beams do glance and glide 5 Upon the trembling wave, so shone bright,

shone > [he shone; they shone]

6 And round about him threw forth sparkling fire, 7 That seemed him to inflame on every side:

inflame > {Light up or redden as if with flame; envelop in flame}

8 His steed was bloody red, and foamed ire, 9 When with the mastering spur he did him roughly stir.

205.3

   Approching nigh, he neuer stayd to greete,
2 Ne +chaffar+ words, prowd courage to prouoke,
     But prickt so fiers, that vnderneath his feete
4 The smouldring dust did round about him smoke,
     Both horse and man nigh able for to choke;
6 And fairly couching his steele-headed speare,
     Him first saluted with a sturdy stroke;
8 It booted nought Sir Guyon comming neare
   To thinke, such hideous puissaunce on foot to beare.

2 chaffar > chaffer 1609

1 Approaching nigh, he never stayed to greet, 2 Nor chaffer words, proud courage to provoke,

chaffer > barter, exchange

3 But pricked so fierce that underneath his feet

pricked > spurred, rode

4 The smouldering dust did round about him smoke,

smouldering > smothering, choking

5 Both horse and man nigh able to choke;

able > liable

6 And fairly couching his steel-headed spear,

fairly > expertly couching > {Lowering and placing in its rest}

7 Him first saluted with a sturdy stroke;

sturdy > recklessly violent

8 It booted naught, Sir Guyon coming near,

booted > availed

9 To think, such hideous puissance on foot to bear.

hideous > terrific; immense; odious puissance > force, power

205.4

   But lightly shunned it, and passing by,
2 With his bright blade did smite at him so fell,
     That the sharpe steele arriuing forcibly
4 On his +broad+ shield, bit not, but glauncing fell
     On his horse necke before the quilted +sell+
6 And from the head the body sundred quight.
     So him dismounted low, he did compell
8 On foot with him to matchen equall fight;
   The truncked beast fast bleeding, did him fowly dight.

4 broad > braod 1596 5 sell > sell, 1609

1 But lightly shunned it and, passing by,

lightly > easily

2 With his bright blade did smite at him so fell

fell > terribly, fiercely

3 That the sharp steel, arriving forcibly 4 On his broad shield, bit not, but glancing fell 5 On his horse's neck, before the quilted sell,

before > in front of sell > saddle

6 And from the head the body sundered quite. 7 So him dismounted low, he did compel

him > (Probably Pyrochles) he > [Guyon]

8 On foot with him to match equal fight; 9 The trunked beast, fast bleeding, did him foully dight.

trunked > mutilated, cut short (Latin truncus; cf. 108.10:8); hence: decapitated fast > rapidly; also, perhaps: close by, in close proximity [to Guyon] dight > deck, prepare; hence: sully, befoul

205.5

   Sore bruzed with the fall, he slow vprose,
2 And all enraged, thus him loudly shent;
     Disleall knight, whose coward courage chose
4 To wreake it selfe on beast all innocent,
     And shund the marke, at which it should be ment,
6 Thereby thine armes seeme strong, but manhood +fraile;+
     So hast thou oft with guile thine honour blent;
8 But litle may such guile thee now +auaile+,
   If wonted force and fortune +do not much me faile+.

6 fraile; > frayl: 1590 8 auaile > auayl 1590 9 do not much me faile > doe me not much fayl 1590

1 Sore bruised with the fall, he slow uprose

Sore > Grievously

2 And, all enraged, thus him loudly shent:

shent > reviled

3 "Disleal knight, whose coward courage chose

Disleal > Disloyal, perfidious (Italian disleale: WU) courage > spirit

4 To wreak itself on beast all innocent,

wreak > give expression to

5 And shunned the mark at which it should be meant,

meant > intended

6 Thereby your arms seem strong, but manhood frail;

frail > weak; morally weak

7 So have you oft with guile your honour blended;

blended > blended, mingled, stirred up; hence: rendered turbid, spoiled

8 But little may such guile you now avail, 9 If wonted force and fortune do not much me fail."

wonted > accustomed, customary

205.6

   With that he drew his flaming sword, and strooke
2 At him so fiercely, that the vpper marge
     Of his seuenfolded shield away it tooke,
4 And glauncing on his helmet, made a large
     And open gash therein: were not his targe,
6 That broke the violence of his intent,
     The weary soule from thence it would discharge;
8 Nathelesse so sore a buff to him it lent,
   That made him reele, and to his brest his beuer bent.

1 With that he drew his flaming sword, and struck 2 At him so fiercely that the upper marge

marge > margin

3 Of his sevenfold shield away it took,

sevenfold > seven-layered (cf. 203.1:9)

4 And, glancing on his helmet, made a large 5 And open gash therein: were not his targe

were > [were it] targe > shield

6 That broke the violence of his intent, 7 The weary soul from thence it would discharge;

it > ["his flaming sword"]

8 Natheless so sore a buff to him it lent,

Natheless > Nevertheless sore > grievous buff > blow, buffet lent > dealt

9 That made him reel, and to his breast his beaver bent.

That > [That it] beaver > {Lower part of face-guard of helmet}

205.7

   Exceeding wroth was Guyon at that blow,
2 And much ashamd, that stroke of liuing arme
     Should him dismay, and make him stoup so low,
4 Though otherwise it did him litle harme:
     Tho hurling high his yron braced arme,
6 He smote so manly on his shoulder plate,
     That all his left side it did quite disarme;
8 Yet there the steele stayd not, but inly bate
   Deepe in his flesh, and opened wide a red floodgate.

1 Exceeding wroth was Guyon at that blow, 2 And much ashamed that stroke of living arm

stroke > [a stroke]

3 Should him dismay, and make him stoop so low,

dismay > overcome

4 Though otherwise it did him little harm: 5 Tho, hurling high his iron-braced arm,

Tho > Then hurling > whirling; brandishing

6 He smote so manly on his shoulder-plate 7 That all his left side it did quite disarm;

disarm > strip of armour

8 Yet there the steel stayed not, but inly bit

inly > inwardly; thoroughly, extremely

9 Deep in his flesh, and opened wide a red floodgate.

205.8

   Deadly dismayd, with horrour of that dint
2 Pyrochles was, and grieued eke entyre;
     Yet nathemore did it his fury stint,
4 But added flame vnto his former fire,
     That welnigh molt his hart in raging yre;
6 Ne thenceforth his approued skill, to ward,
     Or strike, or +hurtle+ round in +warlike+ gyre,
8 Remembred he, ne car'd for his saufgard,
   But rudely rag'd, and like a cruell Tygre far'd.

7 hurtle > hurle, 1596; hurlen 1609 7 warlike > warelike 1596

1 Deadly dismayed with horror of that dint

horror > [the horror] dint > blow

2 Pyrochles was, and grieved eke entire;

eke > also entire > unreservedly; inwardly

3 Yet nathemore did it his fury stint,

nathemore > not at all

4 But added flame to his former fire, 5 That well-nigh melted his heart in raging ire;

That > [That; so that] well-nigh > very nearly

6 Neither thenceforth his approved skill (to ward,

approved > proven, tested

7 Or strike, or hurtle round in warlike gyre)

gyre > {A turning round, a whirling}

8 Remembered he, nor cared for his safeguard,

safeguard > protection, security

9 But rudely raged, and like a cruel tiger fared.

rudely > violently fared > acted

205.9

   He hewd, and lasht, and foynd, and thundred blowes,
2 And euery way did seeke into his life,
     Ne plate, ne male could ward so mighty throwes,
4 But yielded passage to his cruell knife.
     But Guyon, in the heat of all his strife,
6 Was warie wise, and closely did awayt
     Auauntage, whilest his foe did rage most rife;
8 Sometimes a thwart, sometimes he strooke him strayt,
   And falsed oft his blowes, t'illude him with such bayt.

1 He hewed, and lashed, and foined, and thundered blows,

foined > lunged, thrust (with a pointed weapon)

2 And every way did seek into his life;

way > {Means of entry}

3 Neither plate nor mail could ward so mighty throws,

plate > armour plating mail > chain-mail so > such throws > blows

4 But yielded passage to his cruel knife.

But > [But that it would have] knife > sword

5 But Guyon, in the heat of all his strife, 6 Was wary wise, and closely did await

closely > closely; privately, secretly

7 Advantage, whilst his foe did rage most rife;

rife > abundantly, copiously; hence: violently

8 Sometimes athwart, sometimes he struck him straight, 9 And falsed oft his blows, to illude him with such bait.

falsed > feinted, dummied illude > trick, deceive; evade, elude; mock

205.10

   Like as a Lyon, whose imperiall powre
2 A prowd rebellious Vnicorne defies,
     T'auoide the rash assault and wrathfull stowre
4 Of his fiers foe, him to a tree applies,
     And when him running in full course he spies,
6 He slips aside; the whiles that furious beast
     His precious horne, sought of his +enimies+
8 Strikes in the stocke, ne thence can be +releast+,
   But to the mighty victour yields a bounteous feast.

7 enimies > enimye 1590; enimies, 1609 8 releast > relast 1596

1 Like a lion, whose imperial power 2 A proud rebellious unicorn defies: 3 To avoid the rash assault and wrathful stour

stour > conflict, combat

4 Of his fierce foe, him to a tree applies,

him > [himself, the lion] applies > places in contact; hence: backs up against; also: directs his path, makes his way

5 And when him running in full course he spies,

him > [the unicorn]

6 He slips aside; while that furious beast 7 His precious horn, sought of his enemies,

precious > (Because it was believed to have medicinal or magical properties, esp. as an antidote to or preventive of poison)

8 Strikes in the stock, nor thence can be released,

stock > trunk

9 But to the mighty victor yields a bounteous feast.

205.11

   With such faire slight him Guyon often faild,
2 Till at the last all breathlesse, wearie, faint
     Him spying, with fresh onset he assaild,
4 And kindling new his courage seeming queint,
     Strooke him so hugely, that through great constraint
6 He made him stoup perforce vnto his knee,
     And do vnwilling worship to the Saint,
8 That on his shield depainted he did see;
   Such homage till that instant neuer learned hee.

1 With such fair sleight him Guyon often failed,

sleight > sleight; dexterity [in handling a weapon]; prudence failed > deceived (cf. 311.46:9); disappointed

2 Till at the last, all breathless, weary, faint 3 Him spying, with fresh onset he assailed,

assailed > (The quasi-intransitive construction is rare. Cf. 106.43:2)

4 And kindling new his courage seeming queint,

courage > courage; spirit queint > extinguished, quenched

5 Struck him so hugely, that through great constraint 6 He made him stoop perforce to his knee,

perforce > by violence; perforce

7 And do unwilling worship to the saint

saint > [Gloriana; see 209.4:1-2]

8 That on his shield depainted he did see;

depainted > depicted

9 Such homage till that instant never learned he.

205.12

   Whom Guyon seeing stoup, pursewed fast
2 The present offer of faire victory,
     And soone his dreadfull blade about he cast,
4 Wherewith he smote his haughty crest so hye,
     That streight on ground made him full low to lye;
6 Then on his brest his victour foote he thrust,
     With that he cryde, Mercy, do me not dye,
8 Ne deeme thy force +by+ fortunes doome vniust,
   That hath (maugre her spight) thus low me laid in dust.

8 by > but conj. Smith; see Glossary

1 Whom Guyon seeing stoop, pursued fast

Guyon seeing stoop, > [seeing to stoop, Guyon]

2 The present offer of fair victory, 3 And soon his dreadful blade about he cast, 4 Wherewith he smote his haughty crest so high

Wherewith > With which haughty > high; proud high > high [physically]; excessively, hence: forcefully; also: loudly

5 That straight on ground made him full low to lie;

made > [Guyon made; the blow made] full > very, entirely

6 Then on his breast his victor foot he thrust; 7 With that he cried, "Mercy, do me not die,

he > [Pyrochles] die > [to death]

8 Nor deem your force by Fortune's doom unjust,

deem > estimate, judge, form an opinion of by > [by virtue of, according to] doom unjust > unjust judgement

9 That has (maugre her spite!) thus low me laid in dust!"

maugre > a curse upon (SUS) her > [Fortune's]

205.13

   Eftsoones his cruell hand Sir Guyon stayd,
2 Tempring the passion with aduizement slow,
     And maistring might on enimy dismayd:
4 For th'equall dye of warre he well did know;
     Then to him said, Liue and allegaunce owe,
6 To him that giues thee life and libertie,
     And henceforth by this dayes ensample trow,
8 That hasty wroth, and heedlesse hazardrie
   Do breede repentaunce late, and lasting infamie.

1 Eftsoons his cruel hand Sir Guyon stayed,

Eftsoons > Thereupon

2 Tempering the passion with advisement slow,

advisement > consideration; prudence

3 And mastering might on enemy dismayed:

mastering > overcoming [his] on > [over an] dismayed > [who has been defeated]

4 For the equal die of war he well did know;

equal die > impartial hazard

5 Then to him said, "Live, and allegiance owe 6 To him that gives you life and liberty, 7 And henceforth, by this day's example, trow

trow > believe, accept as true

8 That hasty wrath and heedless hazardry

hazardry > {Venturesomeness, the incurring of risk; SU}

9 Do breed repentance late, and lasting infamy."

late > late, tardy; overdue, after the proper time

205.14

   So vp he let him rise, who with grim looke
2 And count'naunce sterne vpstanding, gan to grind
     His grated teeth for great disdeigne, and shooke
4 His sandy lockes, long hanging downe behind,
     Knotted in bloud and dust, for griefe of mind,
6 That he in ods of armes was conquered;
     Yet in himselfe some comfort he did find,
8 That him so noble knight had maistered,
   Whose bounty more then might, yet both he wondered.

1 So up he let him rise, who, with grim look 2 And countenance stern, upstanding, began to grind

stern > {Austere, gloomy, expressing grave displeasure}

3 His grated teeth for great disdain, and shook

grated > ground together; hence: clenched disdain > anger, indignation

4 His sandy locks, long hanging down behind, 5 Knotted in blood and dust, for grief of mind 6 That he in odds of arms was conquered; 7 Yet in himself some comfort he did find, 8 That him so noble knight had mastered,

knight > [a knight] mastered > overcome

9 Whose bounty more than might, yet both he wondered.

more than > [was greater than his] wondered > marvelled at

205.15

   Which Guyon marking said, Be nought agrieu'd,
2 Sir knight, that thus ye now subdewed arre:
     Was neuer man, who most conquestes atchieu'd
4 But sometimes had the worse, and lost by warre,
     Yet shortly gaynd, that losse exceeded farre:
6 Losse is no shame, nor to be lesse then foe,
     But to be lesser, then himselfe, doth marre
8 Both loosers lot, and victours prayse alsoe.
   Vaine others ouerthrowes, +who+ selfe doth ouerthrowe.

9 who > whose 1609

1 Which Guyon marking said, "Be naught aggrieved,

Guyon marking > [marking, Guyon]

2 Sir knight, that thus you now subdued are: 3 Was never man who most conquests achieved,

most > most; the greatest

4 But sometimes had the worse, and lost by war, 5 Yet shortly gained that loss exceeded far:

that loss exceeded > [that which exceeded the loss by]

6 Loss is no shame, nor to be less than foe, 7 But to be lesser than himself does mar

lesser > less

8 Both loser's lot and victor's praise also.

praise > praiseworthiness also > (Tautological)

9 Vain others' overthrows, who self does overthrow.

Vain others' overthrows, who self does overthrow > [In vain are the defeats of others, to whomever defeats himself]

205.16

   Fly, O Pyrochles, fly the dreadfull warre,
2 That in thy selfe thy lesser parts do moue,
     Outrageous anger, and woe-working iarre,
4 Direfull impatience, and hart murdring loue;
     Those, those thy foes, those warriours far remoue,
6 Which thee to endlesse bale captiued lead.
     But sith in might thou didst my mercy proue,
8 Of curtesie to me the cause +aread+,
   That thee against me drew with so impetuous dread.

8 aread > a read 1596

1 "Fly, O Pyrochles, fly the dreadful war, 2 That in yourself your lesser parts do move:

lesser parts > inferior qualities, lesser attributes

3 Outrageous anger, and woe-working jar,

Outrageous > Intemperate; fierce jar > discord (see 204.41:7)

4 Direful impatience, and heart-murdering love;

impatience > impatience; intolerance, inability to endure suffering

5 Those, those your foes, those warriors far remove, 6 Which you to endless bale captived lead.

bale > woe, torment; also, mainly in northern usage: a great consuming fire, pyre (see 204.38:5, note at 204.41:2) captived > held captive

7 But sith in might you did my mercy prove,

sith > since prove > test; demonstrate; confirm by personal experience

8 Of courtesy to me the cause aread

aread > make known, declare

9 That you against me drew with so impetuous dread."

That > [Why] drew > [drew your sword] so > such dread > doubt; risk [of failure, since Guyon was an unknown quantity]; hence: rashness

205.17

   Dreadlesse (said he) that shall I soone declare:
2 It was complaind, that thou hadst done great tort
     Vnto an aged woman, poore and bare,
4 And thralled her in chaines with strong effort,
     Voide of all succour and needfull comfort:
6 That ill beseemes thee, such as I thee see,
     To worke such shame. Therefore I thee exhort,
8 To chaunge thy will, and set +Occasion+ free,
   And to her captiue sonne yield his first libertee.

8 Occasion > occasion 1590; Occasion 1609

1 "Dreadless," said he, "that shall I soon declare:

Dreadless > Without doubt, fear not (a typical word-play on "dread" in the preceding line); also, perhaps: Fearless One (as a term of address) soon > straightway

2 It was complained that you had done great tort

tort > wrong

3 To an aged woman, poor and bare,

bare > defenceless; destitute; simple

4 And thralled her in chains with strong effort,

thralled > {Brought into bondage or captivity, took captive}

5 Void of all succour and needful comfort: 6 That ill beseems you, such as I you see,

beseems > becomes, suits

7 To work such shame. Therefore I you exhort

work > bring about

8 To change your will, and set Occasion free, 9 And to her captive son yield his first liberty."

first > original, former

205.18

   Thereat Sir Guyon smilde, And is that all
2 (Said he) that thee so sore displeased hath?
     Great mercy sure, for to enlarge a thrall,
4 Whose freedome shall thee turne to greatest scath.
     Nath'lesse now quench thy whot emboyling wrath:
6 Loe there they be; to thee I yield them free.
     Thereat he wondrous glad, out of the path
8 Did lightly leape, where he them bound did see,
   And gan to breake the bands of their captiuitee.

1 Thereat Sir Guyon smiled; "And is that all,"

Thereat > At that

2 Said he, "that you so sore displeased has? 3 Great mercy sure, to enlarge a thrall,

mercy > act of mercy enlarge > set free thrall > captive

4 Whose freedom shall you turn to greatest scathe.

scathe > harm, damage

5 Natheless now quench your hot emboiling wrath:

Natheless > Nevertheless emboiling > {Boiling with rage; SUS}

6 Lo, there they be; to you I yield them free!" 7 Thereat he, wondrous glad, out of the path

Thereat > Thereupon he > [Pyrochles]

8 Did lightly leap, where he them bound did see,

lightly > quickly

9 And began to break the bonds of their captivity.

205.19

   Soone as Occasion felt her selfe vntyde,
2 Before her sonne could well assoyled bee,
     She to her vse returnd, and streight defyde
4 Both Guyon and Pyrochles: th'one (said +shee+)
     Bycause he wonne; the other because hee
6 Was wonne: So matter did she make of nought,
     To stirre vp strife, and +do+ them disagree:
8 But soone as Furor was enlargd, she sought
   To kindle his quencht fire, and thousand causes wrought.

4 shee > hee 1590, 1596 7 do > garre _1590; "garre" = to make, cause (northern dialect; cf. SC, gloss to "April", and "September", 106. This somewhat provincial word occurs nowhere else in FQ and is a striking example of Spenser's alterations for the 1596 edition)_

1 Soon as Occasion felt herself untied

Soon > [As soon]

2 (Before her son could well assoiled be)

assoiled > set free

3 She to her use returned, and straight defied

use > habit, custom straight > immediately; directly; unreservedly, outspokenly

4 Both Guyon and Pyrochles: the one (said she) 5 Because he won; the other because he 6 Was won: so matter did she make of naught,

won > defeated

7 To stir up strife, and do them disagree:

do > make

8 But soon as Furor was enlarged, she sought

soon > [as soon] enlarged > set free

9 To kindle his quenched fire, and thousand causes wrought.

causes > {Cases, suits, causes for disagreement}

205.20

   It was not long, ere she inflam'd him so,
2 That he would algates with Pyrochles fight,
     And his redeemer chalengd for his foe,
4 Because he had not well mainteind his right,
     But yielded had to that same straunger knight:
6 Now gan Pyrochles wex as wood, as hee,
     And him affronted with impatient might:
8 So both together fiers engrasped bee,
   Whiles Guyon standing by, their vncouth strife does see.

1 It was not long ere she inflamed him so

so > [so greatly]

2 That he would algates with Pyrochles fight,

algates > anyhow, by any means

3 And his redeemer challenged for his foe,

challenged for > demanded as, laid claim to as

4 Because he had not well maintained his right,

maintained > defended

5 But yielded had to that same stranger knight:

stranger > foreign; new-come

6 Now gan Pyrochles wax as wood as he,

gan > did; began (… to) wax > grow, become wood > furious

7 And him affronted with impatient might:

affronted > confronted; faced in defiance impatient > impatient (from Pyrochles's viewpoint); unendurable, insufferable (from Furor's viewpoint)

8 So both together fierce engrasped be,

engrasped be > [were grasped; grappled]

9 While Guyon, standing by, their uncouth strife does see.

uncouth > bizarre; unseemly

205.21

   Him all that while Occasion did prouoke
2 Against Pyrochles, and new matter framed
     Vpon the old, him stirring to be wroke
4 Of his late wrongs, in which she oft him blamed
     For suffering such abuse, as knighthood shamed,
6 And him dishabled quite. But he was wise
     Ne would with vaine +occasions+ be inflamed;
8 Yet others she more vrgent did deuise:
   Yet nothing could him to impatience entise.

7 occasions > occasion 1609

1 Him all that while Occasion did provoke 2 Against Pyrochles, and new matter framed 3 Upon the old, him stirring to be wreaked

wreaked > avenged

4 Of his late wrongs, in which she oft him blamed

late > recent

5 For suffering such abuse as knighthood shamed, 6 And him disabled quite. But he was wise

disabled > pronounced as of no force; disparaged

7 Nor would with vain occasions be inflamed;

vain > empty, futile

8 Yet others she more urgent did devise: 9 Yet nothing could him to impatience entice.

entice > provoke

205.22

   Their fell contention still increased more,
2 And more thereby increased Furors might,
     That he his foe has hurt, and wounded sore,
4 And him in bloud and durt deformed quight.
     His mother eke, more to augment his +spight+,
6 Now brought to him a flaming +fire+ brond,
     Which she in Stygian lake, ay burning +bright+
8 Had kindled: that she gaue into his hond,
   That armd with fire, more hardly he mote him withstond.

5 spight > spright 1609 6 fire > fyer 1590; fier 1609 7 bright > bright, 1609

1 Their fell contention still increased more,

Their > [Pyrochles's and Furor's] fell > fierce, terrible

2 And more thereby increased Furor's might, 3 That he his foe has hurt, and wounded sore,

That > [So that]

4 And him in blood and dirt deformed quite.

deformed > befouled, defiled, rendered hideous

5 His mother eke, more to augment his spite,

eke > moreover more > [the more]

6 Now brought to him a flaming firebrand, 7 Which she in Stygian lake, ay burning bright,

Stygian lake > (The River Styx, the river of hate, one of the five rivers of hell) ay > ever, always

8 Had kindled: that she gave into his hand, 9 That, armed with fire, more hardly he might him withstand.

That > [So that] hardly > forcibly, violently; hardily

205.23

   Tho gan +that+ villein wex so fiers and strong,
2 That nothing might sustaine his furious forse;
     He cast him downe to ground, and all along
4 Drew him through durt and myre without remorse,
     And fowly battered his comely corse,
6 That Guyon much disdeignd so loathly sight.
     At last he was compeld to cry perforse,
8 Helpe, {o^} Sir Guyon, helpe most noble knight,
   To rid a wretched man from hands of hellish wight.

1 that > the 1609

1 Tho gan that villein wax so fierce and strong

Tho gan > Then did villein > villain; serf (as he is slave to Occasion) wax > grow, become

2 That nothing might sustain his furious force;

might > could sustain > endure; withstand

3 He cast him down to ground, and all along 4 Drew him through dirt and mire without remorse,

remorse > pity, compassion

5 And foully battered his comely corse,

corse > body

6 That Guyon much disdained so loathly sight.

That > [So that] disdained > [was moved to indignation or scorn by] loathly > loathsome [a]

7 At last he was compelled to cry perforce, 8 "Help, O Sir Guyon, help, most noble knight, 9 To rid a wretched man from hands of hellish wight!"

wight > creature

205.24

   The knight was greatly moued at his plaint,
2 And gan him dight to succour his distresse,
     Till that the Palmer, by his graue restraint,
4 Him stayd from yielding pitifull redresse;
     And said, Deare sonne, thy causelesse ruth represse,
6 Ne let thy stout hart melt in pitty vayne:
     He that his sorrow sought through wilfulnesse,
8 And his foe fettred would release +agayne,+
   Deserues to tast his follies fruit, repented payne.

agayne, > agayne. 1596

1 The knight was greatly moved at his plaint,

plaint > complaint, lamentation

2 And gan himself dight to succour his distress,

gan > began to; did dight > prepare

3 Till the palmer, by his grave restraint, 4 Him stayed from yielding pitiful redress;

stayed > restrained pitiful > {Prompted by pity} redress > relief, assistance

5 And said, "Dear son, your causeless ruth repress,

ruth > pity; also: trouble

6 Nor let your stout heart melt in pity vain:

stout > brave; proud; resolute vain > empty, futile

7 He that his sorrow sought through wilfulness, 8 And his foe fettered would release again,

foe fettered > [fettered foe]

9 Deserves to taste his follies' fruit, repented pain."

205.25

   Guyon obayd; So him away he drew
2 From needlesse trouble of renewing fight
     Already fought, his voyage to pursew.
4 But rash Pyrochles varlet, Atin hight,
     When late he saw his Lord in heauy plight,
6 Vnder Sir Guyons puissaunt stroke to fall,
     Him deeming dead, as then he seemd in sight,
8 Fled fast away, to tell his funerall
   Vnto his brother, whom Cymochles men did call.

1 Guyon obeyed; so him away he drew 2 From needless trouble of renewing fight 3 Already fought, his voyage to pursue.

voyage > journey

4 But rash Pyrochles' varlet, Atin hight,

varlet > attendant (esp. of a knight); menial hight > named, by name

5 When late he saw his lord, in heavy plight

late > lately

6 Under Sir Guyon's puissant stroke to fall,

puissant > powerful; warlike

7 Him deeming dead (as then he seemed in sight), 8 Fled fast away, to tell his funeral

tell > report, describe funeral > death

9 To his brother, whom "Cymochles" men did call.

205.26

   He was a man of rare redoubted might,
2 Famous throughout the world for warlike prayse,
     And glorious spoiles, purchast in perilous fight:
4 Full many doughtie knights he in his dayes
     Had doen to death, subdewde in equall frayes,
6 Whose carkases, for terrour of his name,
     Of fowles and beastes he made the piteous prayes,
8 And hong their conquered armes for more defame
   On gallow trees, in honour of his dearest Dame.

1 He was a man of rare redoubted might, 2 Famous throughout the world for warlike praise,

praise > praiseworthiness; virtue; hence: qualities, worth

3 And glorious spoils, purchased in perilous fight:

purchased > got by conquest

4 Full many doughty knights he in his days

Full > Very

5 Had done to death, subdued in equal frays,

subdued > overcome (by violence) equal > fair, impartial

6 Whose carcases, for terror of his name, 7 Of fowls and beasts he made the piteous prey, 8 And hung their conquered arms, for more defame,

more > greater defame > disgrace, defamation

9 On gallow trees, in honour of his dearest dame.

205.27

   His dearest Dame is that Enchaunteresse,
2 The vile Acrasia, that with vaine delightes,
     And idle pleasures in +her+ Bowre of Blisse,
4 Doe charme her louers, and the feeble sprightes
     Can call out of the bodies of fraile wightes:
6 Whom then she does transforme to monstrous hewes,
     And horribly misshapes with vgly sightes,
8 Captiu'd eternally in yron mewes,
   And darksom dens, where Titan his face neuer shewes.

3 her > his 1596

1 His dearest dame is that enchantress, 2 The vile Acrasia, that with vain delights

vain > vain; empty

3 And idle pleasures, in her Bower of Bliss, 4 Does charm her lovers, and the feeble spirits 5 Can call out of the bodies of frail wights:

frail > weak, morally weak wights > men; people, mortals

6 Whom then she does transform to monstrous hues,

monstrous hues > [the] forms of monsters

7 And horribly misshapes with ugly sights,

sights > appearances

8 Captived eternally in iron mews,

Captived > Held captive mews > cages

9 And darksome dens, where Titan his face never shows.

205.28

   There Atin found Cymochles soiourning,
2 To serue his Lemans loue: for +he+ by kind,
     Was giuen all to lust and loose liuing,
4 When euer his fiers hands he free mote find:
     And now he has pourd out his idle mind
6 In daintie delices, and lauish ioyes,
     Hauing his warlike weapons cast behind,
8 And flowes in pleasures, and vaine pleasing toyes,
   Mingled emongst loose Ladies and lasciuious boyes.

2 he > he, 1609

1 There Atin found Cymochles sojourning, 2 To serve his leman's love: for he, by kind,

leman > lover kind > nature

3 Was given all to lust and loose living, 4 Whenever his fierce hands he free might find: 5 And now he has poured out his idle mind

poured out > (Cf. 107.7:2)

6 In dainty delices and lavish joys,

delices > delights, sensual pleasures lavish > licentious

7 Having his warlike weapons cast behind, 8 And flows in pleasures, and vain pleasing toys,

toys > amorous games

9 Mingled amongst loose ladies and lascivious boys.

205.29

   And ouer him, art striuing to compaire
2 With nature, did an Arber greene dispred,
     Framed of wanton Yuie, flouring faire,
4 Through which the fragrant Eglantine did spred
     His +pricking+ armes, entrayld with roses red,
6 Which daintie odours round about them threw,
     And all within with flowres was garnished,
8 That when myld Zephyrus emongst them blew,
   Did breath out bounteous smels, and painted colors shew.

5 pricking > prickling 1590

1 And over him (Art striving to compare

compare > vie

2 With Nature) did an arbour green dispread,

dispread > spread out

3 Framed of wanton ivy, flowering fair,

Framed > Fashioned wanton > luxuriant, rank; wanton (because ivy is sacred to Bacchus; in FQ it is often an emblem of licentiousness: cf. e.g. 104.22:3, 306.44:5)

4 Through which the fragrant eglantine did spread

eglantine > sweetbrier (Rosa rubiginosa)

5 His pricking arms, entrailed with roses red,

entrailed > entwined, interlaced

6 Which dainty odours round about them threw, 7 And all within with flowers was garnished, 8 That when mild Zephyr amongst them blew,

That > [So that] Zephyr > (The west wind; the west wind personified; the god of the west wind)

9 Did breathe out bounteous smells, and painted colours show.

Did > [The eglantine did]

205.30

   And fast beside, there trickled softly downe
2 A gentle streame, whose murmuring waue did play
     +Emongst+ the pumy stones, and made a sowne,
4 To lull him soft a sleepe, that by it lay;
     The wearie Traueiler, wandring that way,
6 Therein did often quench his thristy heat,
     And then by it his wearie limbes display,
8 Whiles creeping slomber made him to forget
   His former paine, and wypt away his toylsom sweat.

3 Emongst > Emon gst 1596

1 And, fast beside, there trickled softly down

fast > very closely

2 A gentle stream, whose murmuring wave did play 3 Amongst the pumice stones, and made a sound,

sound > sound, the original spelling also evoking, perhaps: swowne, swoune, swoon; furthermore "the obsolete spelling avoids the harsh dental of `sound'", observes Hamilton (1980)

4 To lull him soft asleep, that by it lay; 5 The weary traveller, wandering that way, 6 Therein did often quench his thirsty heat, 7 And then by it his weary limbs display,

display > extend

8 While creeping slumber made him forget 9 His former pain, and wiped away his toilsome sweat.

205.31

   And on the other side a pleasaunt groue
2 Was shot vp high, full of the stately tree,
     That dedicated is t'Olympicke Ioue,
4 And to his sonne Alcides, whenas hee
     +Gaynd in Nemea+ goodly victoree;
6 Therein the mery birds of euery sort
     Chaunted alowd their chearefull harmonie:
8 And made emongst them selues a sweet consort,
   That quickned the dull spright with musicall comfort.

5 Gaynd in Nemea > In Netmus gayned 1590; Nemus FE

1 And on the other side a pleasant grove 2 Was shot up high, full of the stately tree 3 That dedicated is to Olympic Jove,

Olympic > (The tree is either the oak, dedicated to Jove (Jupiter), whose abode is Olympus; or it is the poplar, dedicated to Hercules. The latter is more probable in view of "shot vp high" in line 2, which more accurately describes the habit of the poplar)

4 And to his son, Alcides, when he 5 Gained in Nemea goodly victory;

Nemea > (The city of Argolis, near which Hercules killed the Nemean lion and founded the Nemean games)

6 Therein the merry birds of every sort

merry > delightful, charming

7 Chanted aloud their cheerful harmony: 8 And made amongst themselves a sweet consort

consort > concert; also: accord, consent

9 That quickened the dull spirit with musical comfort.

quickened > enlivened

205.32

   There he him found all carelesly displayd,
2 In secret shadow from the sunny ray,
     On a sweet bed of lillies softly layd,
4 Amidst a flocke of Damzels fresh and gay,
     That round about him dissolute did play
6 Their wanton follies, and light meriment;
     Euery of which did loosely disaray
8 Her vpper parts of meet habiliments,
   And shewd them naked, deckt with many ornaments.

1 There he him found all carelessly displayed,

he > [Atin] him > [Cymochles] displayed > spread out

2 In secret shadow from the sunny ray,

secret shadow > shade secret (secret = secluded, retired)

3 On a sweet bed of lilies softly laid, 4 Amidst a flock of damsels fresh and gay, 5 That round about him dissolute did play 6 Their wanton follies and light merriment;

follies > indecencies light > wanton, frivolous

7 Every of whom did loosely disarray

of > [one of]

8 Her upper parts of meet habiliments,

meet > fitting, suitable habiliments > clothing

9 And showed them naked, decked with many ornaments.

205.33

   And euery of them stroue, with most delights,
2 Him to aggrate, and greatest pleasures shew;
     Some framd faire lookes, glancing like euening +lights,+
4 Others sweet words, dropping like honny dew;
     Some bathed kisses, and did soft embrew
6 The sugred licour through his melting lips:
     One boastes her beautie, and does yeeld to vew
8 Her daintie limbes aboue her tender hips;
   Another her out boastes, and all for tryall strips.

3 lights, > lights 1596

1 And every of them strove with most delights

of > [one of]

2 Him to aggrate, and greatest pleasures show;

aggrate > gratify (SUS) show > proffer, put forth

3 Some framed fair looks, glancing like evening lights; 4 Others sweet words, dropping like honey dew; 5 Some bathed kisses, and did soft imbrue

imbrue > pour, infuse (SU)

6 The sugared liquor through his melting lips: 7 One boasts her beauty, and does yield to view 8 Her dainty limbs above her tender hips; 9 Another her out-boasts, and all for trial strips.

trial > examination; hence: scrutiny

205.34

   He, like an Adder, lurking in the weeds,
2 His wandring thought in deepe desire does steepe,
     And his fraile eye with spoyle of beautie feedes;
4 Sometimes he falsely faines himselfe to sleepe,
     Whiles through their lids his wanton eies do peepe,
6 To steale a snatch of amorous +conceipt+,
     Whereby close fire into his heart does creepe:
8 So, +he+ them deceiues, deceiu'd in his deceipt,
   Made drunke with drugs of deare voluptuous receipt.

6 conceipt > conceit 1609 8 he > omitted from 1609, perhaps solely for the sake of the metre

1 He, like an adder lurking in the weeds, 2 His wandering thought in deep desire does steep, 3 And his frail eye with spoil of beauty feeds;

frail > {Morally weak, unable to resist temptation; tender: last is SUS} spoil > plunder, booty; spoliation ("beautie" being abstract); or: divestment ("beautie" referring to the scantily clad "Damzels" of the preceding stanzas)

4 Sometimes he falsely feigns himself to sleep, 5 While through their lids his wanton eyes do peep, 6 To steal a snatch of amorous conceit,

conceit > conception, idea; scheme

7 Whereby close fire into his heart does creep:

close > secret

8 So he them deceives, deceived in his deceit,

So > ?Thus (see Textual Appendix and original pointing)

9 Made drunk with drugs of dear voluptuous receipt.

dear > costly (esp. in fig. senses); grievous receipt > {Formula, recipe; also: that which is received, i.e. his view of the damsels}

205.35

   Atin arriuing there, when him he spide,
2 Thus in still waues of deepe delight to wade,
     Fiercely approching, to him lowdly cride,
4 Cymochles; oh no, but Cymochles shade,
     In which that manly person late did fade,
6 What is become of great Acrates sonne?
     Or where hath he hong vp his mortall blade,
8 That hath so many haughtie conquests wonne?
   Is all his force forlorne, and all his glory donne?

1 Atin, arriving there, when him he spied 2 Thus in still waves of deep delight to wade,

still > constant; continuous; perhaps also with the paradoxical but sensual meaning: still, motionless

3 Fiercely approaching, to him loudly cried, 4 "Cymochles! … O no, but Cymochles' shade,

shade > ghost, spectre

5 In which that manly person late did fade;

manly > manly; human, mortal fade > weaken, decline; become dry (in further allusion to his name: cf. 107.4:7); vanish (cf. 105.15:5)

6 What is become of great Acrates' son? 7 Or where has he hung up his mortal blade,

mortal > lethal

8 That has so many haughty conquests won?

haughty > exalted, of exalted courage; proud

9 Is all his force forlorn, and all his glory done?"

forlorn > lost, perished; forsaken

205.36

   Then pricking him with his sharpe-pointed dart,
2 He said; +vp+, vp, thou womanish weake knight,
     That here in Ladies lap entombed art,
4 Vnmindfull of thy praise and prowest might,
     And weetlesse eke of lately wrought despight,
6 Whiles sad Pyrochles lies on senselesse ground,
     And groneth out his vtmost grudging spright,
8 Through many a stroke, and many a streaming wound,
   Calling thy helpe in vaine, that here in ioyes art dround.

2 vp > Vp 1609

1 Then, pricking him with his sharp-pointed dart, 2 He said: "Up, up, you womanish weak knight, 3 That here in ladies' lap entombed are, 4 Unmindful of your praise and prowest might,

praise > praiseworthiness; virtue; hence: qualities, worth prowest > bravest

5 And weetless eke of lately wrought despite,

weetless > unknowing, unconscious (WUS) eke > also despite > outrage

6 While sad Pyrochles lies on senseless ground, 7 And groans out his utmost grudging spirit,

grudging > complaining, repining

8 Through many a stroke, and many a streaming wound, 9 Calling your help in vain, that here in joys are drowned!"

Calling > [Calling for]

205.37

   Suddeinly out of his delightfull dreame
2 The man awoke, and would haue questiond more;
     But he would not endure that wofull theame
4 For to dilate at large, but vrged sore
     With percing words, and pittifull implore,
6 Him hastie to arise. As one affright
     With hellish feends, or Furies mad vprore,
8 He then vprose, inflam'd with fell despight,
   And called for his armes; for he would algates fight.

1 Suddenly out of his delightful dream 2 The man awoke, and would have questioned more; 3 But he would not endure that woeful theme

he > [Atin] endure > permit

4 For to dilate at large, but urged sore

For to dilate > [To be dilated upon] at large > at greater liberty; hence: further sore > deeply, with great distress, but here, mainly a simple intensive

5 With piercing words, and pitiful implore,

implore > entreaty

6 Him hastily to arise. As one affright

affright > terrified

7 With hellish fiends or Furies' mad uproar, 8 He then uprose, inflamed with fell despite,

inflamed > (Because he has been pricked (205.36:1) by one of Atin's darts: see 204.38:7-9) fell > terrible despite > rage

9 And called for his arms; for he would algates fight.

arms > {Weapons, shield and armour} algates > anyhow, by any means

205.38

   They bene ybrought; he quickly does him dight,
2 And lightly mounted, passeth on his way,
     Ne Ladies loues, ne sweete entreaties might
4 Appease his heat, or hastie passage stay;
     For he has vowd, to beene aueng'd that day,
6 (That day it selfe him seemed all too long:)
     On him, that did Pyrochles deare dismay:
8 So proudly pricketh on his courser strong,
   And Atin aie him pricks with spurs of shame and wrong.

1 They been brought; he quickly does himself dight,

been > [were] dight > prepare, clad

2 And, lightly mounted, passes on his way;

lightly > quickly; easily

3 Neither ladies' loves, nor sweet entreaties might

might > could

4 Appease his heat, or hasty passage stay;

Appease > Assuage heat > fit of passion

5 For he has vowed to be avenged that day 6 (That day itself him seemed all too long)

him seemed > [seemed to him]

7 On him that did Pyrochles dear dismay:

dear > grievously (adv.); dear, beloved (adj.) dismay > defeat, overcome

8 So proudly pricks on his courser strong,

pricks on > spurs on

9 And Atin ay him pricks with spurs of shame and wrong.

ay > ever

CANTO VI

   Guyon is of immodest +Merth,+
2 led into loose desire,
   Fights with Cymochles, whiles his bro-
3 ther burnes in furious fire.

1 Merth, > Merth 1609

1 Guyon is of immodest Mirth

of > by immodest > forward, impudent; unchaste (also, the Latin immodestus means "intemperate", "unbridled") Mirth > Phaedria (introduced at 206.3, named at 206.9; an early meaning of "mirth" is "fun", "ridicule")

2 led into loose desire, 3 Fights with Cymochles, while his bro-

Fights > [And fights] his > [Cymochles's (his brother is Pyrochles)]

4 ther burns in furious fire.

206.1

   A Harder lesson, to learne Continence
2 In ioyous pleasure, then in grieuous paine:
     For sweetnesse doth allure the weaker sence
4 So strongly, that vneathes it can refraine
     From that, which feeble nature couets faine;
6 But griefe and wrath, that be her enemies,
     And foes of life, she better can +restraine+;
8 Yet vertue vauntes in both +their+ victories,
   And Guyon in them all shewes goodly maisteries.

7 restraine > abstaine 1590 8 their > her 1590

1 A harder lesson, to learn continence 2 In joyous pleasure than in grievous pain: 3 For sweetness does allure the weaker sense

weaker > too-weak

4 So strongly, that uneath it can refrain

uneath > with difficulty

5 From that which feeble nature covets fain;

fain > eagerly

6 But grief and wrath (that be her enemies,

be > [are]

7 And foes of life) she better can restrain;

better > [more easily]

8 Yet virtue vaunts in both their victories,

vaunts > displays [itself]; advances [itself, its cause; the last only if "vaunts" is taken to be aphetic for "avaunts"] both their victories > [the victories of continence over both sweetness and wrath]

9 And Guyon in them all shows goodly mastery.

all > [both]

206.2

   Whom bold Cymochles trauelling to find,
2 With cruell purpose bent to wreake on him
     The wrath, which Atin kindled in his mind,
4 Came to a riuer, by whose vtmost brim
     Wayting to passe, he saw whereas did swim
6 A long the shore, as swift as glaunce of eye,
     A litle Gondelay, bedecked trim
8 With boughes and arbours wouen cunningly,
   That like a litle forrest seemed outwardly.

1 Whom bold Cymochles travelling to find
2 (With cruel purpose bent to wreak on him
3 The wrath which Atin kindled in his mind),
4 Came to a river, by whose utmost brim,

Came > [Bold Cymochles came; if the words "bold Cymochles" are moved here from line 1 the sense is made clearer]

5 Waiting to pass, he saw where did swim

pass > take passage (across the water)

6 Along the shore, as swift as glance of eye, 7 A little gondola, bedecked trim

trim > beautifully, in good order; neatly, trimly

8 With boughs and arbours woven cunningly,

arbours > {Shrubs, etc. trained on trellis-work; hence: vines, creepers}

9 That like a little forest seemed outwardly.

206.3

   And therein sate a Ladie fresh and faire,
2 Making sweet solace to her selfe alone;
     Sometimes she sung, as loud as larke in aire,
4 Sometimes she laught, +that nigh her breth was gone+,
     Yet was there not with her else any one,
6 That +might to her+ moue cause of meriment:
     Matter of merth enough, though there were none
8 She could deuise, and thousand waies inuent,
   To feede her foolish humour, and vaine iolliment.

4 that nigh her breth was gone > as merry as Pope Ione 1590 6 might to her > to her might 1590

1 And therein sat a lady fresh and fair, 2 Making sweet solace to herself alone;

solace > pleasure, amusement; entertainment

3 Sometimes she sang, as loud as lark in air, 4 Sometimes she laughed, that nigh her breath was gone, 5 Yet was there not with her else anyone

else anyone > [anyone else]

6 That might to her move cause of merriment: 7 Matter of mirth enough, though there were none 8 She could devise, and thousand ways invent, 9 To feed her foolish humour, and vain jolliment.

humour > state of mind; hence: tastes jolliment > jollity, mirth

206.4

   Which when farre off Cymochles heard, and saw,
2 He loudly cald to such, as were a bord,
     The little barke vnto the shore to draw,
4 And him to ferrie ouer that deepe ford:
     The merry marriner vnto his word
6 Soone hearkned, and her painted bote streightway
     Turnd to the shore, where that same warlike Lord
8 She in receiu'd; but Atin by no way
   She would admit, albe the knight her much did pray.

1 Which when far off Cymochles heard, and saw,

far off > (Qualifying Cymochles or her merriment)

2 He loudly called, to such as were aboard, 3 The little bark to the shore to draw,

bark > vessel

4 And him to ferry over that deep ford:

ford > stream, current

5 The merry mariner to his word

merry > delightful; mirthful

6 Soon hearkened, and her painted boat straightway 7 Turned to the shore, where that same warlike lord 8 She in received; but Atin by no way 9 She would admit, albe the knight her much did pray.

albe > although pray > beseech

206.5

   Eftsoones her shallow ship away did slide,
2 More swift, then swallow sheres the liquid skie,
     Withouten oare or Pilot it to guide,
4 Or winged canuas with the wind to flie,
     Only she turn'd a pin, and by and by
6 It cut +away+ vpon the yielding waue,
     Ne cared she her course for to apply:
8 For it was taught the way, which she would haue,
   And both from rocks and flats it selfe could wisely saue.

6 away > a way 1611, and independently conj. Smith

1 Eftsoons her shallow ship away did slide,

Eftsoons > Soon

2 More swift than swallow shears the liquid sky,

swift > swiftly liquid > clear, transparent; bright

3 Without oar or pilot it to guide,

it > (Spenser here subordinates the gender of the boat to clarity; cf. 206.11:5 etc.)

4 Or winged canvas with the wind to fly, 5 Only she turned a pin, and by and by

by and by > straight away

6 It cut away upon the yielding wave,

away > away; a way (see Textual Appendix) wave > water

7 Nor cared she her course to apply:

apply > steer

8 For it was taught the way which she would have, 9 And both from rocks and flats itself could wisely save.

flats > shoals wisely > expertly, skilfully

206.6

   And all the way, the wanton Damzell found
2 New merth, her passenger to entertaine:
     For she in pleasant purpose did abound,
4 And greatly ioyed merry tales to faine,
     Of which a store-house did with her remaine,
6 Yet seemed, nothing well they her became;
     For all her words she drownd with laughter vaine,
8 And wanted grace in vtt'ring of the same,
   That turned all her pleasance to a scoffing game.

1 And all the way, the wanton damsel found

wanton > capricious; wanton, lewd

2 New mirth, her passenger to entertain:

to > [in order to]

3 For she in pleasant purpose did abound,

purpose > conversation, discourse

4 And greatly joyed merry tales to feign,

merry > delightful, charming feign > relate

5 Of which a storehouse did with her remain, 6 Yet seemed nothing well they her became;

seemed > [it seemed] nothing > not at all

7 For all her words she drowned with laughter vain,

vain > foolish

8 And wanted grace in uttering of the same,

wanted > lacked

9 That turned all her pleasance to a scoffing game.

pleasance > pleasant behaviour; capacity for giving pleasure

206.7

   And other whiles vaine toyes she would deuize,
2 As her fantasticke wit did most delight,
     Sometimes her head she fondly would aguize
4 With gaudie girlonds, or fresh flowrets dight
     About her necke, or rings of rushes plight;
6 Sometimes to doe him laugh, she would assay
     To laugh at shaking +of+ the leaues light,
8 Or to behold the water worke, and play
   About her litle frigot, therein making way.

7 of > off 1590

1 And otherwhiles vain toys she would devise,

otherwhiles > at other times vain > foolish toys > amorous games, tricks

2 As her fantastic wit did most delight, 3 Sometimes her head she fondly would aguise

fondly > foolishly aguise > array

4 With gaudy garlands, or fresh flowerets dight

gaudy > fine, gay, showy flowerets > small flowers dight > deck; hence: hang, arrange

5 About her neck, or rings of rushes plighted;

plighted > plaited

6 Sometimes, to do him laugh, she would essay

do > make essay > try, venture

7 To laugh at shaking of the leaves light, 8 Or to behold the water work and play 9 About her little frigate, therein making way.

frigate > {Light and swift boat}

206.8

   Her light behauiour, and loose dalliaunce
2 Gaue wondrous great contentment to the knight,
     That of his way he had no souenaunce,
4 Nor care of vow'd reuenge, and cruell fight,
     But to weake wench did yeeld his martiall might.
6 So easie was to quench his flamed mind
     With one sweet drop of sensuall +delight,+
8 So easie is, t'appease the stormie wind
   Of malice in the calme of pleasant womankind.

7 delight, > delight. 1590

1 Her light behaviour and loose dalliance

light > wanton, frivolous dalliance > {Idle and amusing talk}

2 Gave wondrous great contentment to the knight, 3 That of his way he had no sovenance,

That > [So that] sovenance > remembrance, memory

4 Nor care of vowed revenge, and cruel fight,

care of > concern for

5 But to weak wench did yield his martial might. 6 So easy was to quench his flamed mind

flamed > angry; inflamed, burning

7 With one sweet drop of sensual delight, 8 So easy is, to appease the stormy wind

is > [it is]

9 Of malice in the calm of pleasant womankind.

206.9

   Diuerse discourses in their way they spent,
2 Mongst which Cymochles of her questioned,
     Both what she was, and what that vsage ment,
4 Which in her cot she daily practised.
     Vaine man (said she) that wouldest be reckoned
6 A straunger in thy home, and ignoraunt
     Of Ph{ae}dria (for so my name is red)
8 Of Ph{ae}dria, thine owne fellow seruaunt;
   For thou to serue Acrasia thy selfe doest vaunt.

1 Diverse discourses in their way they spent,

Diverse > Diverse; also: distracting (SUS)

2 Amongst which Cymochles of her questioned 3 Both what she was, and what that usage meant, 4 Which in her cot she daily practised.

cot > small boat (Irish and Gaelic); cote, small shelter

5 "Vain man," said she, "that would be reckoned

Vain > Foolish

6 A stranger in your home, and ignorant

home > [the Bower of Bliss]

7 Of Phaedria (for so my name is read)

Phaedria > "Beaming", "Radiant", "Jocund", "Cheery" (Greek phaidros) read > declared, uttered aloud, made known

8 Of Phaedria, your own fellow servant; 9 For you to serve Acrasia yourself do vaunt.

vaunt > boast

206.10

   In this wide Inland sea, that hight by name
2 The Idle lake, my wandring ship I row,
     That knowes her port, and thither sailes by ayme,
4 Ne care, ne feare I, how the wind do blow,
     Or whether swift I wend, or whether slow:
6 Both slow and swift a like do serue my tourne,
     Ne swelling Neptune, ne loud thundring Ioue
8 Can chaunge my cheare, or make me euer mourne;
   My litle boat can safely passe this perilous bourne.

1 "In this wide inland sea, that hight by name

sea > (Of which the river (206.2:4) is a tributary) hight > is called

2 The Idle Lake, my wandering ship I row,

wandering > (Cf. 308.31:1)

3 That knows her port, and thither sails by aim, 4 Neither care nor fear I how the wind do blow, 5 Or whether swift I wend, or whether slow: 6 Both slow and swift alike do serve my turn,

turn > purpose

7 Neither swelling Neptune, nor loud thundering Jove

thundering Jove > (In his guise as Jupiter Tonans, lord of the thunderbolt; hence: storms)

8 Can change my cheer, or make me ever mourn;

cheer > expression, mood

9 My little boat can safely pass this perilous bourn.

bourn > boundary (cf. Winter's Tale I ii 134), frontier (esp. of this life: cf. Hamlet III i 79); burn, brook, small river (in which case "pass" should be understood as "pass over"; cf. King Lear III vi 25)

206.11

   Whiles thus she talked, and whiles thus she toyd,
2 They were farre past the passage, which he spake,
     And come vnto an Island, waste and voyd,
4 That floted in the midst of that great lake,
     There her small Gondelay her port did make,
6 And that gay paire issuing on the shore
     Disburdned her. Their way they forward take
8 Into the land, that lay them faire before,
   Whose pleasaunce she him shew'd, and plentifull great store.

1 While thus she talked, and while thus she toyed, 2 They were far past the passage which he spoke,

spoke > [had] described; hence: requested

3 And come to an island, waste and void,

waste > uncultivated void > uninhabited

4 That floated in the midst of that great lake.
5 There her small gondola her port did make,
6 And that gay pair issuing on the shore
7 Disburdened her. Their way they forward take
8 Into the land, that lay them fair before,
9 Whose pleasance she him showed, and plentiful great store.

pleasance > pleasantness; capacity for giving pleasure

206.12

   It was a chosen plot of fertile land,
2 Emongst wide waues set, like a litle nest,
     As if it had by Natures cunning hand,
4 Bene choisely picked out from all the rest,
     And laid forth for ensample of the best:
6 No daintie flowre or herbe, that growes on ground,
     No arboret with painted blossomes drest,
8 And smelling sweet, but there it might be found
   To bud out faire, and +her sweet smels throw+ all around.

9 her sweet smels throw > throwe her sweete smels 1590

1 It was a chosen plot of fertile land,
2 Amongst wide waves set, like a little nest,
3 As if it had by Nature's cunning hand
4 Been choicely picked out from all the rest,
5 And laid forth for example of the best:

for example > as an example; as a model

6 No dainty flower or herb that grows on ground,

on ground > in the world

7 No arboret with painted blossoms dressed

arboret > little tree, shrub

8 And smelling sweet, but there it might be found 9 To bud out fair, and her sweet smells throw all around.

her > [its; or: Nature's]

206.13

   No tree, whose braunches did not brauely spring;
2 No braunch, whereon a fine bird did not sit:
     No bird, but did her shrill notes sweetly sing;
4 No song but did containe a louely dit:
     Trees, braunches, birds, and songs were framed fit,
6 For to allure fraile mind to carelesse ease.
     Carelesse the man soone woxe, and his weake wit
8 Was ouercome of thing, that did him please;
   So pleased, did his wrathfull purpose faire appease.

1 No tree, whose branches did not bravely spring;

bravely > splendidly

2 No branch, whereon a fine bird did not sit: 3 No bird, but did her shrill notes sweetly sing; 4 No song but did contain a lovely dite:

dite > ditty, in the sense of: theme, burden

5 Trees, branches, birds, and songs were framed fit

framed > made; fashioned

6 To allure frail mind to careless ease.

frail > morally weak

7 Careless the man soon waxed, and his weak wit

Careless > Abandoned, free from cares waxed > grew, became wit > mind

8 Was overcome of thing that did him please;

of > [by the]

9 So pleased, did his wrathful purpose fair appease.

So > Thus did > [it did; he did] purpose > intention [of avenging Pyrochles]

206.14

   Thus when she had his eyes and senses fed
2 With false delights, and fild with pleasures vaine,
     Into a shadie dale she soft him led,
4 And laid him downe vpon a grassie plaine;
     And her sweet selfe without dread, or disdaine,
6 She set beside, laying his head disarm'd
     In her loose lap, it softly to sustaine,
8 Where soone he slumbred, fearing not be harm'd,
   The whiles with a +loud+ lay she thus him sweetly charm'd.

9 loud > loue 1590

1 Thus when she had his eyes and senses fed 2 With false delights, and fild with pleasures vain,

fild > filled; also: defiled (cf. 105.32:2 etc.) vain > idle, empty; weak, foolish

3 Into a shady dale she soft him led, 4 And laid him down upon a grassy plain; 5 And her sweet self, without dread or disdain, 6 She set beside, laying his head disarmed

disarmed > (The helmet having been removed; "disarmed" = "stripped of armour")

7 In her loose lap, it softly to sustain, 8 Where soon he slumbered, fearing not be harmed,

be > [that he would be]

9 While with a loud lay she thus him sweetly charmed:

loud > (The reading of 1590 is probably to be preferred, but it should be noted that "loud" also has the meaning "flagrant" (usually applied to a lie), and might just be construed here as "scandalous", "suggestive", etc. See also 206.3:3, 212.15:1-4) lay > song

206.15

   Behold, {o^} man, that toilesome paines doest +take+
2 The flowres, the fields, and all that pleasant growes,
     How they themselues doe thine ensample make,
4 Whiles nothing enuious nature them forth throwes
     Out of her fruitfull lap; how, no man knowes,
6 They spring, they bud, they blossome fresh and faire,
     And deck the world with their rich pompous showes;
8 Yet no man for them taketh paines or care,
   Yet no man to them can his carefull paines compare.

1 take > take, 1609

1 "Behold, O man, that toilsome pains do take,

pains > effort, labour

2 The flowers, the fields, and all that pleasant grows, 3 How they themselves do your example make,

example > pattern, model (see Matt. 6.28 ff.)

4 While, nothing envious, Nature them forth throws

nothing envious > [not at all grudgingly]

5 Out of her fruitful lap; how, no man knows, 6 They spring, they bud, they blossom fresh and fair, 7 And deck the world with their rich pompous shows;

pompous > splendid (derives from Latin pompa, a solemn procession, display)

8 Yet no man for them takes pains or care,

for > for; of

9 Yet no man to them can his careful pains compare.

careful > {Careful; full of cares}

206.16

   The lilly, Ladie of the flowring field,
2 The Flowre-deluce, her louely Paramoure,
     Bid thee to them thy fruitlesse labours yield,
4 And soone leaue off this toylesome wearie stoure;
     Loe loe how braue she decks her bounteous boure,
6 With silken curtens and gold couerlets,
     Therein to shrowd her sumptuous Belamoure,
8 Yet neither spinnes nor cardes, ne cares nor frets,
   But to her mother Nature all her care she lets.

1 "The lily, lady of the flowering field,

lady > (The lily is a symbol of the feminine; cf. Henry VIII III i 151-2)

2 The flower deluce, her lovely paramour,

flower deluce > iris, flowering-lily, fleur-de-lis (heraldic ensign of the Bourbons -1594, and as such ambiguously an iris or the head of a sceptre or battle-axe; hence a phallic symbol; see also Winter's Tale IV iv 126-7) lovely > loving

3 Bid you to them your fruitless labours yield, 4 And soon leave off this toilsome weary stour;

stour > distress, unhappy condition; struggle [of everyday life]

5 Lo, lo, how brave she decks her bounteous bower

brave > splendidly bower > chamber

6 With silken curtains and gold coverlets, 7 Therein to shroud her sumptuous belamour,

shroud > shelter; conceal belamour > loved one (French bel amour; spelled "bellamoure", this word is also used for an unidentified flower in Amoretti 64:7)

8 Yet neither spins nor cards, neither cares nor frets,

cards > {Prepares wool for spinning}

9 But to her mother, Nature, all her care she lets.

lets > leaves

206.17

   Why then dost thou, {o^} man, that of them all
2 Art Lord, and eke of nature Soueraine,
     Wilfully make thy selfe a wretched thrall,
4 And wast thy ioyous houres in needlesse paine,
     Seeking for daunger and aduentures vaine?
6 What bootes it all to haue, and nothing vse?
     Who shall him rew, that swimming in the maine,
8 Will die for thirst, and water doth refuse?
   Refuse such fruitlesse toile, and present pleasures chuse.

1 "Why then do you, O man, that of them all 2 Are lord, and eke of Nature sovereign,

eke > also

3 Wilfully make yourself a wretched thrall,

thrall > slave

4 And waste your joyous hours in needless pain, 5 Seeking for danger and adventures vain?

vain > futile; foolish

6 What boots it all to have, and nothing use?

boots it > does it avail

7 Who shall him rue that, swimming in the main,

rue > {Regard with pity or compassion} main > {Any broad expanse of water, here plainly fresh rather than salt}

8 Will die for thirst, and water does refuse? 9 Refuse such fruitless toil, and present pleasures choose."

206.18

   By this she had him lulled fast a sleepe,
2 That of no worldly thing he care did take;
     Then she with liquors strong his eyes did steepe,
4 That nothing should him hastily awake:
     So she him left, and did her selfe betake
6 Vnto her boat againe, with which she cleft
     The slouthfull +waue+ of that great +griesly+ lake;
8 Soone she that Island farre behind her left,
   And now is come to that same place, where first she weft.

7 waue > waues 1609 7 griesly > griesy 1590

1 By this she had him lulled fast asleep,

By this > By means of this; by this time

2 That of no worldly thing he care did take;

That > [So that]

3 Then she with liquors strong his eyes did steep, 4 That nothing should him hastily awake:

That > [So that]

5 So she him left, and did herself betake 6 To her boat again, with which she cleft 7 The slothful wave of that great grisly lake;

grisly > fearsome, horrible (if the 1590 spelling is adopted, the meaning is "squalid", "hideous". Cf. 109.35:4 (where 1611 has "griesly"), 211.12:3, 301.67:7, 312.19:2)

8 Soon she that island far behind her left, 9 And now is come to that same place where first she weft.

weft > wove [her web, to ensnare Cymochles]; moved in a devious course; tacked [sailed]; wove her way

206.19

   By this time was the worthy Guyon brought
2 Vnto the other side of that wide strond,
     Where she was rowing, and for passage sought:
4 Him needed not long call, she soone to hond
     Her ferry brought, where him she byding fond,
6 With his sad guide; himselfe she tooke a boord,
     But the Blacke Palmer suffred still to stond,
8 Ne would for price, or prayers once affoord,
   To ferry that old man ouer the perlous foord.

1 By this time was the worthy Guyon brought 2 To the other side of that wide strand,

other side > (Because Guyon is travelling towards the Bower of Bliss and Cymochles has travelled from it) strand > {Land bordering a body of water; shore}

3 Where she was rowing, and for passage sought; 4 Him needed not long call: she soon to hand

call > [to call]

5 Her ferry brought, where him she biding found,

biding > waiting

6 With his sad guide; himself she took aboard,

sad > grave, serious; sober

7 But the black palmer suffered still to stand,

black > (Referring to the colour of his clothes; see 201.7:2) suffered > allowed; let alone

8 Neither would for price, nor prayers once afford

afford > {Agree; give of what one has}

9 To ferry that old man over the perilous ford.

ford > stream, current

206.20

   Guyon was loath to leaue his guide behind,
2 Yet being entred, might not backe retyre;
     For the flit barke, obaying to her mind,
4 Forth launched quickly, as she did desire,
     Ne gaue him leaue to bid that aged sire
6 Adieu, but nimbly ran her wonted course
     Through the dull billowes thicke as troubled mire,
8 Whom neither wind out of their seat could forse,
   Nor timely tides did driue out of their sluggish sourse.

1 Guyon was loath to leave his guide behind, 2 Yet, being entered, might not back retire;

might > could

3 For the fleet bark, obeying to her mind,

fleet > swift, fast-flying bark > vessel obeying > obedient (see 206.5:5)

4 Forth launched quickly, as she did desire, 5 Nor gave him leave to bid that aged sire

sire > father; elderly man

6 Adieu, but nimbly ran her wonted course

nimbly > swiftly; lightly; cleverly wonted > accustomed

7 Through the dull billows, thick as troubled mire,

dull > sluggish

8 Which neither wind out of their seat could force, 9 Nor timely tides did drive out of their sluggish source.

timely > regular; keeping time

206.21

   And by the way, as was her wonted guize,
2 Her merry fit she freshly gan to reare,
     And did of ioy and iollitie deuize,
4 Her selfe to cherish, and her guest to cheare:
     The knight was courteous, and did not forbeare
6 Her honest merth and pleasaunce to partake;
     But when he saw her toy, and gibe, and geare,
8 And passe the +bonds+ of modest merimake,
   Her dalliance he despisd, and follies did forsake.

8 bonds > bounds 1609

1 And by the way, as was her wonted guise,

by the way > in the course of the voyage wonted guise > custom, customary manner

2 Her merry fit she freshly began to rear,

merry > amusing, delightful, charming fit > mood, humour rear > {Bring into existence; resume}

3 And did of joy and jollity devise,

jollity > pleasure; lust devise > talk

4 Herself to cherish, and her guest to cheer:

cherish > entertain; cheer

5 The knight was courteous, and did not forbear 6 Her honest mirth and pleasance to partake;

pleasance > pleasing behaviour partake > share, share in

7 But when he saw her toy, and gibe, and jeer, 8 And pass the bounds of modest merrimake,

merrimake > merry-making

9 Her dalliance he despised, and follies did forsake.

dalliance > {Idle and amusing talk} follies > foolishnesses; lewdnesses, wantonnesses forsake > refuse, decline

206.22

   Yet she still followed her former stile,
2 And said, and did all that mote him delight,
     Till they arriued in that pleasant Ile,
4 Where sleeping late she left her other knight.
     But when as Guyon of that land had sight,
6 He wist himselfe amisse, and angry said;
     Ah Dame, perdie ye haue not doen me right,
8 Thus to mislead me, whiles I you obaid:
   Me litle needed from my right way to haue straid.

1 Yet she still followed her former style, 2 And said and did all that might him delight, 3 Till they arrived in that pleasant isle,

in > [at]

4 Where, sleeping late, she left her other knight.

late > lately

5 But when Guyon of that land had sight, 6 He wist himself amiss, and angry said:

wist > knew, believed amiss > [to be] away from the mark, lost

7 "Ah dame, pardie you have not done me right,

pardie > truly; "by God" done > served, treated

8 Thus to mislead me, while I you obeyed: 9 Me little needed from my right way to have strayed."

206.23

   Faire Sir (quoth she) be not displeasd at all;
2 Who fares on sea, may not commaund his way,
     Ne wind and weather at his pleasure call:
4 The sea is wide, and easie for to stray;
     The wind vnstable, and doth neuer stay.
6 But here a while ye may in safety rest,
     Till season serue new passage to assay;
8 Better safe port, then be in seas distrest.
   Therewith she laught, and did her earnest end in iest.

1 "Fair sir," quoth she, "be not displeased at all; 2 Who fares on sea may not command his way,

Who > [Whoever]

3 Nor wind and weather at his pleasure call: 4 The sea is wide, and easy to stray;

easy > [it is easy]

5 The wind unstable, and does never stay.

stay > cease

6 But here awhile you may in safety rest, 7 Till season serve new passage to essay;

essay > attempt

8 Better safe port, than be in seas distressed."

distressed > [in distress, when distressed]

9 Therewith she laughed, and did her earnest end in jest.

Therewith > With that; thereupon earnest > seriousness

206.24

   But he halfe discontent, mote nathelesse
2 Himselfe appease, and issewd forth on shore:
     The ioyes whereof, and happie fruitfulnesse,
4 Such as he +saw,+ she gan him lay before,
     And all though pleasant, yet she made much more:
6 The fields did laugh, the flowres did freshly spring,
     The trees did bud, and earely blossomes bore,
8 And all the quire of birds did sweetly sing,
   And told that gardins pleasures in their caroling.

4 saw, > saw 1596, 1609

1 But he, half discontent, might natheless

might > could, was able to natheless > nevertheless

2 Himself appease, and issued forth on shore:

appease > calm

3 The joys whereof, and happy fruitfulness, 4 Such as he saw, she gan him lay before,

gan > did; began to lay before > show; submit to the consideration of

5 And all though pleasant, yet she made much more:

all though > although; or: all, though more > [more pleasant, more of]

6 The fields did laugh, the flowers did freshly spring,

field > {Open ground as opposed to woodland; plain. This rather than the modern meaning is to be taken, since at 206.11:3 we are told that the island is "waste"}

7 The trees did bud, and early blossoms bore, 8 And all the choir of birds did sweetly sing, 9 And told that garden's pleasures in their carolling.

carolling > {Singing a lively or joyous song}

206.25

   And she more sweet, then any bird on bough,
2 Would oftentimes emongst them beare a part,
     And striue to passe (as she could well enough)
4 Their natiue musicke by her skilfull art:
     So did she all, that might his constant hart
6 Withdraw from thought of warlike enterprize,
     And drowne in dissolute delights apart,
8 Where noyse of armes, or vew of martiall guize
   Might not reuiue desire of knightly exercize.

1 And she, more sweet than any bird on bough, 2 Would oftentimes amongst them bear a part,

oftentimes > often bear > carry, sustain; hence: take

3 And strive to pass (as she could well enough)

pass > surpass

4 Their native music by her skilful art:

native > natural; innate

5 So did she all that might his constant heart
6 Withdraw from thought of warlike enterprise,
7 And drown in dissolute delights apart,
8 Where noise of arms, or view of martial guise

arms > {Deeds of arms} martial guise > martial behaviour; martial attire, hence: armour, weapons

9 Might not revive desire of knightly exercise.

206.26

   But he was wise, and warie of her will,
2 And euer held his hand vpon his hart:
     Yet would not seeme so rude, and thewed ill,
4 As to despise so courteous seeming part,
     That gentle Ladie did to him impart,
6 But fairely tempring fond desire subdewd,
     And euer her desired to depart.
8 She list not heare, but her disports poursewd,
   And euer bad him stay, till time the tide renewd.

1 But he was wise, and wary of her will, 2 And ever held his hand upon his heart: 3 Yet would not seem so rude, and thewed ill,

thewed ill > badly brought-up

4 As to despise so courteous-seeming part

part > [a] concern

5 That gentle lady did to him impart,

gentle > [a] noble

6 But fairly tempering fond desire subdued,

fond > foolish

7 And ever her desired to depart.

desired to depart > asked that they might depart

8 She list not hear, but her disports pursued,

list not > chose not [to] disport > merriment; diversion (including the sense of "diverting from the true path"); wanton entertainment

9 And ever bade him stay, till time the tide renewed.

tide > (There are no tides on the Idle Lake (see 206.20:9), so she wants him never to leave)

206.27

   And now by this, Cymochles howre was spent,
2 That he awoke out of his idle dreme,
     And shaking off his drowzie dreriment,
4 Gan him auize, how ill did him beseeme,
     In slouthfull sleepe his molten hart to steme,
6 And quench the brond of his conceiued ire.
     Tho vp he started, stird with shame extreme,
8 Ne staied for his Damzell to inquire,
   But marched to the strond, +there+ passage to require.

9 there > their 1590, 1596; cf. 110.36:6, 202.30:1, 211.21:8, 304.41:7, 312.28:1

1 And now by this Cymochles' hour was spent,

by this > by this time hour > time; hour

2 That he awoke out of his idle dream,

That > [So that] idle > idle; empty, unavailing; weak-headed

3 And, shaking off his drowsy dreariment,

dreariment > melancholy

4 Gan him advise how ill did him beseem

Gan > Did; began to him advise > reflect did him beseem > [it became him]

5 In slothful sleep his molten heart to steam,

steam > soften [as if by cooking]

6 And quench the brand of his conceived ire. 7 Tho up he started, stirred with shame extreme,

Tho > Then

8 Nor stayed for his damsel to inquire,

stayed > waited

9 But marched to the strand, there passage to require.

strand > shore

206.28

   And in the way he with Sir Guyon met,
2 Accompanyde with Ph{ae}dria the faire,
     Eftsoones he gan to rage, and inly fret,
4 Crying, Let be that Ladie debonaire,
     Thou recreant knight, and soone thy selfe prepaire
6 To battell, if thou meane her loue to gaine:
     Loe, loe alreadie, how the fowles in aire
8 Doe flocke, awaiting shortly to obtaine
   Thy carcasse for their pray, the guerdon of thy paine.

1 And in the way he with Sir Guyon met, 2 Accompanied with Phaedria the fair:

with > by

3 Eftsoons he began to rage, and inly fret,

Eftsoons > Thereupon inly > inwardly fret > fret; gnaw upon himself

4 Crying, "Let be that lady debonair,

debonair > gracious; meek, gentle

5 You recreant knight, and soon yourself prepare

recreant > cowardly, apostate (cf. 104.41:4) soon > without delay

6 To battle, if you mean her love to gain:

mean > intend

7 Lo, lo already, how the fowls in air 8 Do flock, awaiting shortly to obtain 9 Your carcase for their prey, the guerdon of your pain.

guerdon > reward pain > effort, trouble

206.29

   And therewithall he fiercely at him flew,
2 And with +importune+ outrage him assayld;
     Who soone prepard to field, his sword forth drew,
4 And him with equall value counteruayld:
     Their mightie strokes their haberieons dismayld,
6 And naked made each others manly spalles;
     The mortall steele despiteously entayld
8 Deepe in their flesh, quite through the yron walles,
   That a large purple streme +adown+ their giambeux falles.

2 importune > importance 1596; important 1609 9 adown > a down 1596

1 And therewithal he fiercely at him flew,

therewithal > therewith, with that; forthwith

2 And with importune outrage him assailed;

importune > grievous outrage > intemperance; fury

3 Who, soon prepared to field, his sword forth drew,

field > {Defend the field of battle}

4 And him with equal value countervailed:

value > valour; worth countervailed > vied with; resisted

5 Their mighty strokes their habergeons dismailed,

habergeon > {Sleeveless coat of chain-mail} dismailed > stripped of mail

6 And naked made each other's manly spalls;

spalls > shoulders

7 The mortal steel dispiteously entailed

mortal > lethal dispiteously > pitilessly entailed > incised

8 Deep in their flesh, quite through the iron walls, 9 That a large purple stream adown their jambeaux falls.

That > [So that] purple > red, blood-red adown > down jambeaux > leg-armour, greaves; or: leggings (perhaps of mail)

206.30

   Cymochles, that had neuer met +before,+
2 So puissant foe, with enuious despight
     His proud presumed force increased more,
4 Disdeigning to be held so long in fight;
     Sir Guyon grudging not so much his might,
6 As those vnknightly raylings, which he spoke,
     With wrathfull fire his courage kindled bright,
8 Thereof deuising shortly to be wroke,
   And doubling all his powres, redoubled euery stroke.

1 before, > before 1609

1 Cymochles, that had never met before

met > encountered in battle

2 So puissant foe, with envious despite

puissant > powerful [a] envious > malevolent despite > rage

3 His proud presumed force increased more,

presumed force > [the force that Cymochles presumes he has]

4 Disdaining to be held so long in fight; 5 Sir Guyon (grudging not so much his might

grudging > being mentally troubled with; hence: resenting

6 As those unknightly railings which he spoke) 7 With wrathful fire his courage kindled bright, 8 Thereof devising shortly to be wreaked,

devising > skilfully preparing; contriving wreaked > avenged

9 And, doubling all his powers, redoubled every stroke.

206.31

   Both of them high attonce their hands enhaunst,
2 And both attonce their huge blowes downe did sway;
     Cymochles sword on Guyons shield yglaunst,
4 And thereof nigh one quarter sheard away;
     But Guyons angry blade so fierce did play
6 On th'others helmet, which as Titan shone,
     That quite it cloue his plumed crest in tway,
8 And bared all his head vnto the bone;
   Wherewith astonisht, still he stood, as senselesse stone.

1 Both of them high at once their hands enhanced,

at once > simultaneously enhanced > raised

2 And both at once their huge blows down did sway;

sway > swing

3 Cymochles' sword on Guyon's shield glanced, 4 And thereof nigh one quarter sheared away; 5 But Guyon's angry blade so fierce did play 6 On the other's helmet (which as Titan shone),

as Titan shone > [shone like the sun]

7 That quite it clove his plumed crest in tway,

clove > cleft, divided plumed > [bearing a plume] tway > two

8 And bared all his head to the bone; 9 Wherewith astonished, still he stood, as senseless stone.

Wherewith > With which astonished > stunned; bewildered

206.32

   Still as he stood, faire Ph{ae}dria, that beheld
2 That deadly daunger, soone atweene them ran;
     And at their feet her selfe most humbly feld,
4 Crying with pitteous voice, and count'nance wan;
     Ah well away, most noble Lords, how can
6 Your cruell eyes endure so pitteous sight,
     To shed your liues on ground? wo worth the man,
8 That first did teach the cursed steele to bight
   In his owne flesh, and make way to the liuing spright.

1 Still as he stood, fair Phaedria, that beheld 2 That deadly danger, soon atween them ran;

atween > between

3 And at their feet herself most humbly felled, 4 Crying with piteous voice, and countenance wan: 5 "Ah wellaway, most noble lords, how can

wellaway > alas!

6 Your cruel eyes endure so piteous sight,

sight > [a sight]

7 To shed your lives on ground? Woe worth the man

worth > betide

8 That first did teach the cursed steel to bite 9 In his own flesh, and make way to the living spirit.

his own > [human]

206.33

   If euer loue of Ladie did empierce
2 Your yron brestes, or pittie could find place,
     Withhold your bloudie hands from battell fierce,
4 And sith for me ye fight, to me this grace
     Both yeeld, to stay your deadly strife a space.
6 They stayd a while: and forth she gan proceed:
     Most wretched woman, and of wicked race,
8 That am the author of this hainous deed,
   And cause of death betweene two doughtie knights doe breed.

1 "If ever love of lady did empierce

empierce > penetrate

2 Your iron breasts, or pity could find place, 3 Withhold your bloody hands from battle fierce, 4 And sith for me you fight, to me this grace

sith > since grace > favour

5 Both yield, to stay your deadly strife a space."

stay > delay, hold back

6 They stayed a while: and forth she gan proceed:

gan > did; began to

7 "Most wretched woman, and of wicked race, 8 That am the author of this heinous deed, 9 And cause of death between two doughty knights do breed.

206.34

   But if for me ye fight, or me will serue,
2 Not this rude kind of battell, nor these armes
     Are meet, the which doe men in bale to sterue,
4 And dolefull sorrow heape with deadly harmes:
     Such cruell game my scarmoges disarmes:
6 Another warre, and other weapons I
     Doe loue, where loue does giue his sweet alarmes,
8 Without bloudshed, and where the enemy
   Does yeeld vnto his foe a pleasant victory.

1 "But if for me you fight, or me will serve, 2 Not this rude kind of battle, nor these arms

rude > rough; uncivilized

3 Are meet, which do men in bale to starve,

meet > suitable, seemly do > cause bale > woe, torment starve > die

4 And doleful sorrow heap with deadly harms: 5 Such cruel game my scarmoges disarm:

scarmoges > skirmishes

6 Another war, and other weapons I 7 Do love, where Love does give his sweet alarms,

Love > Cupid alarms > sudden attacks, surprises; alarms

8 Without bloodshed, and where the enemy 9 Does yield to his foe a pleasant victory.

206.35

   Debatefull strife, and cruell enmitie
2 The famous name of knighthood fowly +shend+;
     But louely peace, and gentle amitie,
4 And in Amours the passing houres to spend,
     The mightie martiall hands doe most commend;
6 Of loue they euer greater glory bore,
     Then of their armes: Mars is Cupidoes frend,
8 And is for Venus loues renowmed more,
   Then all his wars and spoiles, the which he did of yore.

2 shend > shent 1596

1 "Debateful strife and cruel enmity

Debateful > Contentious

2 The famous name of knighthood foully shend;

shend > disgrace

3 But lovely peace, and gentle amity,

lovely > loving

4 And in amours the passing hours to spend,

amours > love-making

5 The mighty martial hands do most commend; 6 Of love they ever greater glory bore, 7 Than of their arms: Mars is Cupid's friend,

Mars > (The adulterous lover of Venus)

8 And is for Venus' loves renowned more 9 Than all his wars and spoils, which he did of yore."

spoil > {Pillage, rapine; also: the act of spoiling or damaging} of yore > of old, formerly

206.36

   Therewith she sweetly smyld. They though full +bent,+
2 To proue extremities of bloudie fight,
     Yet at her speach their rages gan relent,
4 And calme the sea of their tempestuous spight,
     Such powre haue pleasing words: such is the might
6 Of courteous clemencie in gentle hart.
     Now after all was ceast, the Faery knight
8 Besought that Damzell suffer him depart,
   And yield him readie passage to that other part.

1 bent, > bent 1609

1 Therewith she sweetly smiled. They, though full bent

Therewith > With that; thereupon full bent > exceedingly inclined

2 To prove extremities of bloody fight,

prove extremities > experience [the] extremities (i.e. they are determined to fight to the death)

3 At her speech their rages gan relent,

gan > did; began to

4 And calm the sea of their tempestuous spite: 5 Such power have pleasing words; such is the might 6 Of courteous clemency in gentle heart.

gentle > noble

7 Now after all was ceased, the Faery knight 8 Besought that damsel suffer him depart,

suffer him depart > to allow him to depart; to grant him departure

9 And yield him ready passage to that other part.

ready > prompt; direct that other part > [the mainland]

206.37

   She no lesse glad, then he desirous was
2 Of his departure thence; for of her ioy
     And vaine delight she saw he light did pas,
4 A foe of folly and immodest toy,
     Still solemne sad, or still disdainfull coy,
6 Delighting all in armes and cruell warre,
     That her sweet peace and pleasures did annoy,
8 Troubled with terrour and vnquiet iarre,
   That she well pleased was thence to amoue him farre.

1 She no less glad, than he desirous was

no > [was no]

2 Of his departure thence; for of her joy 3 And vain delight she saw he light did pass,

vain > empty; foolish light > (Adj., applied to her "vaine delight", or adv., qualifying "pas") pass > regard

4 A foe of folly and immodest toy,

folly > lewdness toy > amorous game, trick; hence: flirtatiousness

5 Still solemn sad, or still disdainful coy,

Still > Ever coy > aloof, distant

6 Delighting all in arms and cruel war, 7 That her sweet peace and pleasures did annoy,

annoy > afflict, vex; hence: spoil

8 Troubled with terror and unquiet jar,

jar > discord

9 That she well pleased was thence to amove him far.

That > [So that] amove > remove

206.38

   Tho him she brought abord, and her swift bote
2 Forthwith directed to that further strand;
     The which on the dull waues did lightly flote
4 And soone arriued on the shallow sand,
     Where gladsome Guyon +salied+ forth to land,
6 And to that Damzell thankes gaue for reward.
     Vpon that shore he spied Atin stand,
8 +There by+ his maister left, when late he far'd
   In Ph{ae}drias +flit+ barke ouer that perlous shard.

5 salied > sailed 1609 8 There by > Thereby 1590, 1596 9 flit > fleet 1609

1 Tho him she brought aboard, and her swift boat

Tho > Then

2 Forthwith directed to that further strand;

strand > shore

3 Which on the dull waves did lightly float,

dull > sluggish

4 And soon arrived on the shallow sand, 5 Where gladsome Guyon sallied forth to land,

gladsome > gladsome; gladsomely; with alacrity sallied > leapt (from French saillir)

6 And to that damsel thanks gave for reward. 7 Upon that shore he spied Atin stand, 8 There by his master left, when late he fared

late > lately

9 In Phaedria's fleet bark over that perilous shard.

fleet > swift bark > vessel shard > dividing water; also: dung; hence, perhaps: quagmire, filth

206.39

   Well could he him remember, sith of late
2 He with Pyrochles sharp debatement made;
     Streight gan he him reuile, and bitter rate,
4 As shepheards curre, that in darke euenings shade
     Hath tracted forth some saluage +beastes+ trade;
6 Vile Miscreant (said he) whither doest thou flie
     The shame and death, which will thee soone inuade?
8 What coward hand shall doe thee next to die,
   That art thus foully fled from famous enemie?

5 beastes > beastez 1609, to emphasize the disyllable; cf. 110.39:4, 200.5:4, 204.28:8

1 Well could he him remember, sith of late

sith > since

2 He with Pyrochles sharp debatement made;

debatement > strife, contention

3 Straight gan he him revile, and bitterly rate,

Straight > Straightway, immediately gan > did

4 As shepherd's cur, that in dark evening's shade 5 Has tracted forth some savage beast's trade:

tracted > traced, tracked savage > wild but not necessarily savage trade > track, trail

6 "Vile miscreant," said he, "whither do you fly

miscreant > wretch, villain; heretic fly > flee

7 The shame and death which will you soon invade?

invade > intrude upon, attack

8 What coward hand shall do you next to die,

do > cause

9 That are thus foully fled from famous enemy?"

206.40

   With that he stiffely shooke his steelehead dart:
2 But sober Guyon, hearing him so raile,
     Though somewhat moued in his mightie hart,
4 Yet with strong reason maistred passion fraile,
     And passed fairely forth. He turning taile,
6 Backe to the strond retyrd, and there still stayd,
     Awaiting passage, which him late did faile;
8 The whiles Cymochles with that wanton mayd
   The hastie heat of his auowd reuenge delayd.

1 With that he stiffly shook his steelhead dart:

stiffly > violently

2 But sober Guyon, hearing him so rail,

so > thus

3 Though somewhat moved in his mighty heart, 4 With strong reason mastered passion frail,

frail > weak (esp. morally)

5 And passed fairly forth. He, turning tail,

fairly > gently, moderately

6 Back to the strand retired, and there still stayed,

strand > shore

7 Awaiting passage, which him late did fail;

which him late did fail > which lately disappointed him; hence: of which he was lately disappointed

8 The whiles Cymochles with that wanton maid

The whiles > Meanwhile

9 The hasty heat of his avowed revenge delayed.

delayed > allayed, assuaged; deferred

206.41

   +Whylest+ there the varlet stood, he saw from farre
2 An armed knight, that towards him fast ran,
     He ran on foot, as if in lucklesse warre
4 His forlorne steed from him the victour wan;
     He seemed breathlesse, hartlesse, faint, and wan,
6 And all his armour sprinckled was with bloud,
     And soyld with durtie gore, that no man can
8 Discerne the hew thereof. He neuer stood,
   But bent his hastie course towards the idle flood.

1 Whylest > Whiles 1609

1 Whilst there the varlet stood, he saw from far

varlet > knight's attendant; menial

2 An armed knight, that towards him fast ran: 3 He ran on foot, as if in luckless war 4 His forlorn steed from him the victor won;

forlorn > lost; hence: missing won > [had won]

5 He seemed breathless, heartless, faint, and wan, 6 And all his armour sprinkled was with blood, 7 And soiled with dirty gore, that no man can

that > [so that] can > could

8 Discern the hue thereof. He never stood,

hue > colour; appearance stood > [stopped]

9 But bent his hasty course towards the Idle Flood.

bent > directed Flood > Lake (catachr.)

206.42

   The varlet saw, when to the flood he came,
2 How without stop or stay he fiercely lept,
     And deepe him selfe +beducked+ in the same,
4 That in the lake his loftie crest was +steept+,
     Ne of his safetie seemed care he kept,
6 But with his raging armes he rudely flasht,
     The waues about, and all his armour swept,
8 That all the bloud and filth away was washt,
   Yet still he bet the water, and the billowes dasht.

3 beducked > beduked 1596 4 steept > stept 1590

1 The varlet saw, when to the flood he came,

varlet > knight's attendant; menial; rogue

2 How without stop or stay he fiercely leapt, 3 And deep himself beducked in the same,

beducked > immersed

4 That in the lake his lofty crest was steeped,

That > [So that]

5 Nor of his safety seemed care he kept,

seemed > [it seemed]

6 But with his raging arms he rudely flashed

rudely > violently, clumsily flashed > splashed

7 The waves about, and all his armour swept, 8 That all the blood and filth away was washed,

That > [So that]

9 Yet still he beat the water, and the billows dashed.

still > still, yet; continually

206.43

   Atin drew nigh, to weet what it mote bee;
2 For much he wondred at that vncouth sight;
     Whom should he, but his owne deare Lord, there see,
4 His owne deare Lord Pyrochles, in sad plight,
     Readie to drowne himselfe for fell despight.
6 Harrow now out, and well away, he cryde,
     What dismall day hath lent +this+ cursed light,
8 To see my Lord so deadly +damnifyde?+
   Pyrochles, {o^} Pyrochles, what is thee betyde?

7 this > but this his 1590 8 damnifyde? > damnifyde 1590, 1596

1 Atin drew nigh, to weet what it might be;

weet > learn, perceive it > [the matter]

2 For much he wondered at that uncouth sight;

wondered > marvelled uncouth > bizarre, unseemly

3 Whom should he, but his own dear lord, there see, 4 His own dear lord Pyrochles, in sad plight, 5 Ready to drown himself for fell despite.

fell > terrible despite > rage; defiance

6 "Harrow now out, and wellaway!" he cried.

Harrow > {A cry of distress or alarm, or for help} wellaway > alas! he > [Atin]

7 "What dismal day has lent this cursed light, 8 To see my lord so deadly damnified?

deadly > mortally damnified > brought to destruction; injured

9 Pyrochles, O Pyrochles, what is you betide?"

is you betide > has befallen you

206.44

   I burne, I burne, I burne, then loud he cryde,
2 O how I burne with implacable fire,
     Yet nought can quench mine inly flaming syde,
4 Nor sea of licour cold, nor lake of mire,
     Nothing but death can doe me to respire.
6 Ah be it (said he) from Pyrochles farre
     After pursewing death once to require,
8 Or think, that ought those puissant hands may marre:
   Death is for wretches borne vnder vnhappie starre.

1 "I burn, I burn, I burn," then loud he cried, 2 "O how I burn with implacable fire,

implacable > {That which cannot be assuaged; inexorable}

3 Yet naught can quench my inly flaming side,

inly > inwardly side > {Trunk, torso, body}

4 Nor sea of liquor cold, nor lake of mire,

Nor > Neither liquor > liquid

5 Nothing but death can do me to respire!"

do > cause; hence: permit respire > find relief (cf. 303.36:8)

6 "Ah be it," said he, "from Pyrochles far 7 After pursuing Death once to require,

require > {"Require after" = "seek", "call"}

8 Or think that aught those puissant hands may mar:

aught > anything at all puissant > powerful, warlike mar > damage morally

9 Death is for wretches born under unhappy star."

unhappy > evil, inauspicious

206.45

   Perdie, then +is it+ fit for me (said he)
2 That am, I weene, most wretched man aliue,
     +Burning+ in flames, yet no flames can I see,
4 And dying daily, daily yet reuiue:
     O Atin, helpe to me last death to giue.
6 The varlet at his plaint was grieued so sore,
     That his deepe wounded hart in two did riue,
8 And his owne health remembring now no more,
   Did follow that ensample, which he blam'd afore.

1 is it > it is 1609 3 Burning > But 1596

1 "Pardie, then is it fit for me," said he,

Pardie > Truly; "by God" is it > [it is: see Textual Appendix]

2 "That am, I ween, most wretched man alive,

ween > know [for a fact]

3 Burning in flames, yet no flames can I see, 4 And dying daily, daily yet revive: 5 O Atin, help to me last death to give."

last > utmost

6 The varlet at his plaint was grieved so sore,

varlet > knight's attendant plaint > complaint, lamentation

7 That his deep wounded heart in two did rive,

rive > split; tear

8 And, his own health remembering now no more,

health > health; safety, welfare

9 Did follow that example which he blamed afore.

blamed afore > reproved previously

206.46

   Into the lake he lept, his Lord to ayd,
2 (So Loue the dread of daunger doth despise)
     And of him catching hold him strongly stayd
4 From drowning. But more happie he, then wise
     Of that seas nature did him not auise.
6 The waues thereof so slow and sluggish were,
     Engrost with mud, which did them foule agrise,
8 That euery weightie thing they did vpbeare,
   Ne ought mote euer sinke downe to the bottome there.

1 Into the lake he leapt, his lord to aid, 2 (So love the dread of danger does despise)

So > Thus

3 And of him catching hold, him strongly stayed

stayed > stopped; prevented

4 From drowning. But more happy he, than wise:

happy > lucky

5 Of that sea's nature did him not advise.

Of that sea's nature did him not advise > [Atin did not consider the nature of that sea]

6 The waves thereof so slow and sluggish were, 7 Engrossed with mud, which did them foul agrise,

Engrossed > {Rendered gross, dense, thick} them > [Atin and Pyrochles] agrise > horrify

8 That every weighty thing they did upbear,

That > [So that] they > [the waves]

9 Nor aught might ever sink down to the bottom there.

206.47

   Whiles thus they strugled in that idle waue,
2 And stroue in vaine, the one himselfe to drowne,
     The other both from drowning for to saue,
4 Lo, to that shore one in an auncient gowne,
     Whose hoarie locks great grauitie did crowne,
6 Holding in hand a goodly arming sword,
     By fortune came, led with the troublous sowne:
8 Where drenched deepe he found in that dull ford
   The carefull seruant, striuing with his raging Lord.

1 While thus they struggled in that idle wave,

idle > lazy; hence: sluggish

2 And strove in vain, the one himself to drown, 3 The other both from drowning to save, 4 Lo, to that shore one in an ancient gown 5 (Whose hoary locks great gravity did crown, 6 Holding in hand a goodly arming sword), 7 By fortune came, led with the troublous sound: 8 Where drenched deep he found in that dull ford

drenched > bathed, immersed (cf. 111.34:2) dull > sluggish ford > stream, current

9 The careful servant, striving with his raging lord.

careful > {Anxious, full of care}

206.48

   Him Atin spying, knew right well of yore,
2 And loudly cald, Helpe helpe, {o^} Archimage;
     To saue my Lord, in wretched plight forlore;
4 Helpe with thy hand, or with thy counsell sage:
     Weake hands, but counsell is most strong in age.
6 Him when the old man saw, he wondred sore,
     To see Pyrochles there so rudely rage:
8 Yet sithens helpe, he saw, he needed more
   Then pittie, he in hast approched to the shore.

1 Him Atin spying, knew right well of yore,

knew right > [Atin knew him very] yore > old

2 And loudly called, "Help, help, O Archimago; 3 To save my lord, in wretched plight forlorn;

forlorn > lost

4 Help with your hand, or with your counsel sage: 5 Weak hands, but counsel is most strong in age!"

hands > [are hands]

6 Him when the old man saw, he wondered sore,

wondered sore > marvelled greatly

7 To see Pyrochles there so rudely rage:

rudely > violently, clumsily

8 Yet sithence help, he saw, he needed more

sithence > since

9 Than pity, he in haste approached the shore.

206.49

   And cald, Pyrochles, what is this, I see?
2 What hellish furie hath at earst thee hent?
     Furious euer I thee knew to bee,
4 Yet neuer in this straunge astonishment.
     These flames, these flames (he cryde) do me torment.
6 What flames (quoth he) when I thee present see,
     In daunger rather to be drent, then brent?
8 Harrow, the flames, which me consume (said hee)
   Ne can be quencht, within my secret bowels bee.

1 And called, "Pyrochles, what is this I see? 2 What hellish fury has at erst you hent?

fury > frenzy, madness (cf. I:261); or: Fury (one of the avenging deities sent from hell to punish wrongdoers) at erst > lately hent > seized

3 Furious ever I you knew to be, 4 Yet never in this strange astonishment."

strange > extreme; severe; new-come, new-found astonishment > {Loss of sense or wits}

5 "These flames, these flames," he cried, "do me torment." 6 "What flames," quoth he, "when I you present see, 7 In danger rather to be drenched, than burnt?"

drenched > drowned

8 "Harrow, the flames, which me consume," said he,

Harrow > {A cry of distress or alarm}

9 Ne can be quenched, within my secret bowels be.

Ne can > And cannot secret > unseen, invisible bowels > {Internal organs generally} be > [are]

206.50

   That cursed man, that cruell feend of hell,
2 Furor, oh Furor hath me thus bedight:
     His deadly wounds within my +liuer+ swell,
4 And his whot fire burnes in mine entrails bright,
     Kindled through his infernall brond of spight,
6 Sith late with him I batteil vaine would boste;
     That now I weene Ioues dreaded thunder light
8 Does scorch not halfe so sore, nor damned ghoste
   In flaming Phlegeton does not so felly roste.

3 liuer > liuers 1596

1 "That cursed man, that cruel fiend of hell, 2 Furor, O Furor has me thus bedight:

bedight > arrayed, adorned; hence: treated, maltreated

3 His deadly wounds within my liver swell,

liver > (The supposed seat of love and violent passion)

4 And his hot fire burns in my entrails brightly, 5 Kindled through his infernal brand of spite, 6 Sith late with him I battle vain would boast;

Sith late > Since lately vain > futile; foolish boast > threaten

7 That now I ween Jove's dreaded thunder-light

ween > think, believe thunder-light > lightning

8 Does scorch not half so sore, nor damned ghost 9 In flaming Phlegethon does not so felly roast."

Phlegethon > (The "Stream of Fire": one of the five rivers of hell, through which fire flows instead of water (see 204.41:7)) felly > fiercely, cruelly

206.51

   Which when as Archimago heard, his griefe
2 He knew right well, and him attonce disarmd:
     Then searcht his secret wounds, and made a priefe
4 Of euery place, that was with brusing harmd,
     Or with the hidden +fire too inly+ warmd.
6 Which done, he balmes and herbes thereto applyde,
     And +euermore+ with mighty spels them charmd,
8 That in short space he has them qualifyde,
   And him restor'd to health, that would haue algates dyde.

5 fire too inly > fier inly 1590 7 euermore > euemore 1596

1 Which when Archimago heard, his grief

grief > pain

2 He knew right well, and him at once disarmed:

right > very disarmed > relieved of armour (evidently after getting him out of the water)

3 Then searched his secret wounds, and made a proof

searched > examined, probed secret > hidden; unseen; invisible proof > examination

4 Of every place that was with bruising harmed, 5 Or with the hidden fire too inly warmed.

the hidden fire > [of passion] inly > inwardly

6 Which done, he balms and herbs thereto applied,

thereto > to them; moreover; suitable to them [the wounds]

7 And evermore with mighty spells them charmed,

them > [the balms and herbs; or Pyrochles's wounds]

8 That in short space he has them qualified,

That > [So that] them > [Pyrochles's wounds] qualified > moderated, mitigated

9 And him restored to health, that would have algates died.

algates > altogether, at any rate; hence: surely

CANTO VII

   Guyon findes +Mamon+ in a delue,
2 Sunning his threasure hore:
   Is by him tempted, and led downe,
4 To see his secret store.

1 Mamon > Mammon 1609

1 Guyon finds Mammon in a delve,

Mammon > "Riches" (Aramaic; wealth regarded as an idol or an evil influence; the God of Money; see Matt. 6.24, Luke 16.9-13; PL 1.678 ff., 2.228 ff.) delve > pit, depression

2 Sunning his treasure hoar:

hoar > {Ancient, venerable with age}

3 Is by him tempted, and led down, 4 To see his secret store.

207.1

   AS Pilot well expert in perilous waue,
2 That to a stedfast starre his course hath bent,
     When foggy mistes, or cloudy tempests haue
4 The faithfull light of that faire lampe yblent,
     And couer'd heauen with hideous dreriment,
6 Vpon his card and compas firmes his eye,
     The maisters of his long experiment,
8 And to them does the steddy helme apply,
   Bidding his winged vessell fairely forward +fly.+

9 fly. > fly: 1609

1 As pilot well expert in perilous wave,

As > [Like a] wave > water

2 That to a steadfast star his course has bent, 3 When foggy mists, or cloudy tempests have 4 The faithful light of that fair lamp blended,

blended > rendered turbid, obscured

5 And covered heaven with hideous dreariment,

dreariment > gloom

6 Upon his card and compass firms his eye

card > chart firms > fixes

7 (The masters of his long experiment),

masters > teachers, preceptors experiment > experience, practical knowledge

8 And to them does the steady helm apply,

to > [according to] apply > steer

9 Bidding his winged vessel fairly forward fly:

207.2

   So Guyon hauing lost his trusty guide,
2 Late left beyond that Ydle lake, proceedes
     Yet on his way, of none accompanide;
4 And euermore himselfe with comfort feedes,
     Of his owne vertues, and prayse-worthy deedes.
6 +So long+ he yode, yet no aduenture found,
     Which fame of her shrill trompet worthy reedes:
8 For still he traueild through wide wastfull ground,
   That nought but desert wildernesse shew'd all around.

6 So long > Long so 1590 (corrected in some copies)

1 So Guyon, having lost his trusty guide 2 (Late left beyond that Idle Lake), proceeds

Late > Lately

3 Yet on his way, of none accompanied;

of > by

4 And evermore himself with comfort feeds,

comfort > {Renewal of strength; comfort}

5 Of his own virtues, and praiseworthy deeds. 6 So long he yode, yet no adventure found,

yode > went

7 Which fame of her shrill trumpet worthy reads:

reads > considers

8 For still he travelled through wide wasteful ground,

still > continually wasteful > desolate, uncultivated

9 That naught but desert wilderness showed all around.

That > [In that] desert > lonely showed > was visible

207.3

   At last he came vnto a gloomy glade,
2 Couer'd with boughes and shrubs from heauens light,
     Whereas he sitting found in secret shade
4 An vncouth, saluage, and vnciuile wight,
     Of griesly hew, and fowle ill fauour'd sight;
6 His face with smoke was tand, and eyes were bleard,
     His head and beard with sout were ill bedight,
8 His cole-blacke hands did seeme to haue beene seard
   In smithes fire-+spitting+ forge, and nayles like clawes appeard.

9 spitting > spetting 1609

1 At last he came to a gloomy glade, 2 Covered with boughs and shrubs from heaven's light, 3 Where he sitting found in secret shade

secret > hidden

4 An uncouth, savage, and uncivil wight,

uncouth > strange, clumsy, awkward uncivil > uncivilized, barbaric wight > person, creature

5 Of grisly hue, and foul ill-favoured sight;

grisly > horrible, fearsome hue > colour; appearance (less likely in view of "ill fauour'd sight") ill-favoured sight > ugly appearance

6 His face with smoke was tanned, and eyes were bleared,

bleared > watery, inflamed

7 His head and beard with soot were ill bedight;

ill bedight > ill-adorned; hence: disfigured

8 His coal-black hands did seem to have been seared 9 In smith's fire-spitting forge, and nails like claws appeared.

nails > [his nails]

207.4

   His yron coate all ouergrowne with rust,
2 Was vnderneath enueloped with gold,
     Whose glistring glosse darkned with filthy dust,
4 Well +yet+ appeared, to haue beene of old
     A worke of rich entayle, and curious mould,
6 Wouen with antickes and wild Imagery:
     And in his lap a masse of coyne he told,
8 And turned +vpsidowne+, to feede his eye
   +And+ couetous desire with his huge threasury.

4 yet > it 1596 etc. 8 vpsidowne > vpside downe 1590 9 And > A 1596

1 His iron coat, all overgrown with rust, 2 Was underneath enveloped with gold,

enveloped > lined (catachr.; cf. 301.59:9)

3 Whose glistering gloss, darkened with filthy dust, 4 Well yet appeared to have been of old 5 A work of rich entail, and curious mould,

entail > ornament; carving; intaglio curious > skilled, elaborate; exquisite mould > form, style

6 Woven with antics and wild imagery:

antics > {Fantastic or grotesque representations of birds, animals, plants} imagery > idolatrous images (cf. 108.36:2, 212.60:5)

7 And in his lap a mass of coin he told

told > counted (cf. 104.27:5)

8 And turned upside-down, to feed his eye 9 And covetous desire with his huge treasury.

treasury > treasure

207.5

   And round about him lay on euery side
2 Great heapes of gold, that neuer could be spent:
     Of which some were rude owre, not purifide
4 Of +Mulcibers+ deuouring element;
     Some others were new driuen, and distent
6 Into great +Ingoes+, and to wedges square;
     Some in round plates withouten moniment;
8 But most were stampt, and in their metall bare
   The antique shapes of kings and kesars straunge and rare.

4 Mulcibers > Melcibers 1590 6 Ingoes > Ingowes 1590

1 And round about him lay on every side 2 Great heaps of gold, that never could be spent: 3 Of which some were rude ore, not purified 4 Of Mulciber's devouring element;

Of > By
Mulciber > (A surname of Vulcan, god of fire; see PL 1.740 ff.)

5 Some others were new driven, and distent

driven > beaten out distent > extended

6 Into great ingots, and to wedges square;

to > into wedges > ingots

7 Some in round plates without monument;

monument > mark, inscription

8 But most were stamped, and in their metal bare

bare > bore (vb.); or: bare (the vb. "were" being understood)

9 The antique shapes of kings and kaisers strange and rare.

kaisers > emperors, caesars

207.6

   Soone as he Guyon saw, in great affright
2 And hast he rose, for to remoue aside
     Those pretious hils from straungers enuious sight,
4 And downe them poured through an hole full wide,
     Into the hollow earth, them there to hide.
6 But Guyon lightly to him leaping, stayd
     His hand, that trembled, as one terrifyde;
8 And though him selfe were at the sight dismayd,
   Yet him perforce restraynd, and to him doubtfull sayd.

1 Soon as he Guyon saw, in great affright

Soon > [As soon] affright > terror

2 And haste he rose, to remove aside 3 Those precious hills from stranger's envious sight, 4 And down them poured, through a hole full wide,

full > very, exceedingly

5 Into the hollow earth, them there to hide. 6 But Guyon lightly to him leaping, stayed

lightly > quickly

7 His hand, that trembled, as one terrified; 8 And though himself were at the sight dismayed,

himself were > [he himself was]

9 Yet him perforce restrained, and to him doubtful said:

perforce > by force doubtful > fearful (applies to Mammon, as the tone of Guyon's inquiry makes clear)

207.7

   What art thou man, (if man at all thou art)
2 That here in desert hast thine habitaunce,
     And these rich +heapes+ of wealth doest hide apart
4 From the worldes eye, and from her right vsaunce?
     Thereat with staring eyes fixed askaunce,
6 In great disdaine, he answerd; Hardy Elfe,
     That darest vew my direfull countenaunce,
8 I read thee rash, and heedlesse of thy selfe,
   To trouble my still seate, and heapes of pretious pelfe.

3 heapes > hils 1590

1 "What are you, man (if man at all you are), 2 That here in desert have your habitance,

desert > [the] wilderness habitance > habitation, dwelling (WU)

3 And these rich heaps of wealth do hide apart 4 From the world's eye, and from its right usance?"

right usance > proper usage (i.e. financial usage; usance also = the practice or fact of lending or borrowing money at interest)

5 Thereat, with staring eyes fixed askance,

Thereat > Thereupon; as a result of that staring > glaring (cf. 204.15:6)

6 In great disdain he answered: "Hardy Elf,

Hardy > Rash, presumptuously audacious

7 That dares view my direful countenance,

direful > terrible, dreadful

8 I read you rash, and heedless of yourself,

read > consider

9 To trouble my still seat, and heaps of precious pelf.

pelf > money, cash, "filthy lucre"

207.8

   God of the world and worldlings I me call,
2 Great Mammon, greatest god below the skye,
     That of my plenty poure out vnto all,
4 And vnto none my graces do enuye:
     Riches, renowme, and principality,
6 Honour, estate, and all this worldes good,
     For which men swinck and sweat incessantly,
8 Fro me do flow into an ample flood,
   And in the hollow earth haue their eternall brood.

1 "God of the world and worldlings I me call,

me > myself

2 Great Mammon, greatest god below the sky, 3 That of my plenty pour out to all, 4 And to none my graces do envy:

envy > begrudge

5 Riches, renown, and principality,

principality > {Sovereignty; the authority or dignity of a sovereign or ruler}

6 Honour, estate, and all this world's good,

estate > prosperity; condition, rank, status

7 For which men swink and sweat incessantly,

swink > toil

8 From me do flow into an ample flood, 9 And in the hollow earth have their eternal brood.

brood > breeding, hatching

207.9

   Wherefore if me thou deigne to serue and sew,
2 At thy commaund lo all these mountaines bee;
     Or if to thy great mind, or greedy vew
4 All these may not suffise, there shall to thee
     Ten times so much be numbred francke and free.
6 Mammon (said he) thy godheades vaunt is vaine,
     And idle offers of thy golden fee;
8 To them, that couet such eye-glutting gaine,
   Proffer thy giftes, and fitter seruaunts entertaine.

1 "Wherefore if me you deign to serve and sue,

Wherefore > On which account; in consequence of which serve and sue > do service and homage (sue = follow as an attendant, take as a model, pattern, or ideal)

2 At your command lo all these mountains be; 3 Or if to your great mind, or greedy view,

greedy > eager; rapacious

4 All these may not suffice, there shall to you 5 Ten times so much be numbered frank and free."

so > as numbered > measured, enumerated frank and free > liberally and freely (another quasi-legal term)

6 "Mammon," said he, "your godhead's vaunt is vain,

vaunt > boast; display vain > unavailing; foolish

7 And idle offers of your golden fee;

idle > empty fee > wage, bribe

8 To them that covet such eye-glutting gain 9 Proffer your gifts, and fitter servants entertain.

fitter > more suitable entertain > engage; maintain

207.10

   Me ill +besits+, that in der-doing armes,
2 And honours suit my vowed dayes do spend,
     Vnto thy bounteous baytes, and pleasing charmes,
4 With which weake men thou witchest, to attend:
     Regard of worldly mucke doth fowly blend,
6 And low abase the high heroicke spright,
     That ioyes for crownes and kingdomes to contend;
8 Faire shields, gay steedes, bright armes be my delight:
   Those be the riches fit for an aduent'rous knight.

1 besits > befits 1609

1 "Me ill besits (that in der-doing arms

besits > becomes, befits der-doing arms > {Daring feats of arms; "der-doing" is app. derived from "derring-do", and is believed to be a deliberate archaism}

2 And honour's suit my vowed days do spend)

suit > pursuit; wooing

3 To your bounteous baits, and pleasing charms,

baits > temptations (cf. 207.64:2)

4 With which weak men you witch, to attend:

witch > bewitch

5 Regard of worldly muck does foully blend

of > for blend > stir up, render turbid; hence: defile; also: dazzle, blind

6 And low abase the high heroic spirit, 7 That joys for crowns and kingdoms to contend; 8 Fair shields, gay steeds, bright arms be my delight: 9 Those be the riches fit for an adventurous knight."

207.11

   Vaine glorious Elfe (said he) doest not thou weet,
2 That money can thy wantes at will supply?
     Sheilds, steeds, and armes, and all things for thee meet
4 It can puruay in twinckling of an eye;
     And crownes and kingdomes to thee multiply.
6 Do not I kings create, and throw the crowne
     Sometimes to him, that low in dust doth ly?
8 And him that raignd, into his rowme thrust downe,
   And whom I lust, do heape with glory and renowne?

1 "Vainglorious Elf," said he, "do not you weet

weet > know, understand

2 That money can your wants at will supply? 3 Shields, steeds, and arms, and all things for you meet

meet > appropriate

4 It can purvey in twinkling of an eye;

purvey > provide

5 And crowns and kingdoms to you multiply.
6 Do not I kings create, and throw the crown
7 Sometimes to him that low in dust does lie?
8 And him that reigned, into his room thrust down,

room > place, space

9 And whom I lust, do heap with glory and renown?"

lust > desire, choose (intr.); please, delight (tr.)

207.12

   All otherwise (said he) I riches read,
2 And deeme them roote of all disquietnesse;
     First got with guile, and then preseru'd with dread,
4 And after spent with pride and lauishnesse,
     Leauing behind them griefe and heauinesse.
6 Infinite mischiefes of them do arize,
     +Strife,+ and debate, bloudshed, and bitternesse,
8 Outrageous wrong, and hellish couetize,
   That noble heart +as+ great dishonour doth despize.

7 Strife, > Strife; 1596 9 as > in 1590

1 "All otherwise," said he, "I riches read,

read > consider

2 And deem them root of all disquietness;

disquietness > trouble, unrest (cf. 1 Tim. 6.10)

3 First got with guile, and then preserved with dread, 4 And after spent with pride and lavishness, 5 Leaving behind them grief and heaviness.

heaviness > anger; sadness

6 Infinite mischiefs of them do arise:

of > from

7 Strife, and debate, bloodshed, and bitterness,

debate > quarrelling; fighting

8 Outrageous wrong, and hellish covetise,

covetise > covetousness, avarice

9 That noble heart as great dishonour does despise.

noble > [the noble]

207.13

   Ne thine be kingdomes, ne the scepters thine;
2 But realmes and rulers thou doest both confound,
     And loyall truth to treason doest incline;
4 Witnesse the guiltlesse bloud pourd oft on ground,
     The crowned often slaine, the slayer cround,
6 The sacred Diademe in peeces rent,
     And purple robe gored with many a wound;
8 Castles surprizd, great cities sackt and brent:
   So mak'st thou kings, and gaynest wrongfull gouernement.

1 "Nor yours be kingdoms, nor the sceptres yours; 2 But realms and rulers you do both confound,

confound > overthrow, subvert

3 And loyal truth to treason do incline;

incline > dispose, direct; hence: pervert

4 Witness the guiltless blood poured oft on ground, 5 The crowned often slain, the slayer crowned, 6 The sacred diadem in pieces rent,

diadem > crown rent > torn

7 And purple robe gored with many a wound;

purple robe > (Traditionally worn by emperors and kings: Tyrian purple was a dye obtained in the eastern Mediterranean from the whelks Murex trunculus and M. brandaris and processed at the Phoenician city of Tyre, whence it was sold at high price to the Romans. "Purple" also = "blood-red" (cf. e.g. 206.29:9), thus adding more meaning to the phrase)

8 Castles surprised, great cities sacked and burnt:

surprised > {Captured using surprise tactics}

9 So make you kings, and gain wrongful government.

So > Thus, in this manner

207.14

   Long were to tell the troublous stormes, that tosse
2 The priuate state, and make the life vnsweet:
     Who swelling sayles in Caspian sea doth crosse,
4 And in frayle wood on Adrian gulfe doth fleet,
     Doth not, I weene, so many euils meet.
6 Then Mammon wexing wroth, And why then, said,
     Are mortall men so fond and vndiscreet,
8 So euill thing to seeke vnto their ayd,
   And hauing not complaine, and hauing it vpbraid?

1 "Long were to tell the troublous storms that toss

Long were > [It would take a long time] tell > describe

2 The private state, and make the life unsweet:

private state > private condition, personal life

3 Who swelling sails in Caspian Sea does cross,

Who > [Whoever, he who] cross > hoist, set in position

4 And in frail wood on Adrian Gulf does fleet,

Adrian Gulf > (The Adriatic Sea, which, like the Caspian, was notoriously stormy) fleet > float; sail

5 Does not, I ween, so many evils meet."

ween > think

6 Then Mammon, waxing wroth, "And why then," said,

waxing > growing, becoming

7 "Are mortal men so fond and undiscreet,

fond > foolish undiscreet > lacking in discretion, imprudent

8 So evil thing to seek to their aid,

So > Such [an]

9 And, having not, complain, and having it, upbraid?"

upbraid > reproach [wealth]; or, perhaps: are reproached (for being rich)

207.15

   Indeede (quoth he) through fowle intemperaunce,
2 Frayle men are oft captiu'd to couetise:
     But would they thinke, with how small allowaunce
4 Vntroubled Nature doth her selfe suffise,
     Such superfluities they would despise,
6 Which with sad cares empeach our natiue ioyes:
     At the well head the purest streames arise:
8 But mucky filth his braunching armes annoyes,
   And with vncomely weedes the gentle waue accloyes.

1 "Indeed," quoth he, "through foul intemperance 2 Frail men are oft captived to covetise:

Frail > Morally weak covetise > avarice, covetousness

3 But would they think with how small allowance

would > [if only]

4 Untroubled Nature does herself suffice, 5 Such superfluities they would despise, 6 Which with sad cares impeach our native joys:

impeach > endamage, impair

7 At the well-head the purest streams arise: 8 But mucky filth its branching arms annoys,

its branching arms > [the stream's various watercourses] annoys > afflicts, vexes

9 And with uncomely weeds the gentle wave accloys.

wave > water accloys > clogs, chokes

207.16

   The antique world, in his first flowring youth,
2 Found no defect in his Creatours grace,
     But with glad thankes, and vnreproued truth,
4 The gifts of soueraigne bountie did embrace:
     Like Angels life was then mens happy cace;
6 But later ages pride, like corn-fed steed,
     Abusd her plenty, and fat swolne encreace
8 To all licentious lust, and gan exceed
   The measure of her meane, and naturall first need.

1 "The antique world, in its first flowering youth,

antique > ancient

2 Found no defect in its Creator's grace, 3 But with glad thanks, and unreproved truth,

unreproved > blameless; unreproving, uncomplaining truth > {Conduct in accordance with the divine standard; also a variant spelling of "troth", good faith}

4 The gifts of sovereign bounty did embrace: 5 Like angels' life was then men's happy case;

case > state

6 But later ages' pride, like corn-fed steed,

corn-fed > [pampered]

7 Abused her plenty, and fat swollen increase

her > [Nature's, referring to 207.15:4] fat swollen increase > [swollen with fat, increased]

8 To all licentious lust, and gan exceed

gan > did

9 The measure of her mean, and natural first need.

measure of her mean > [limits of natural temperance]

207.17

   Then gan a cursed hand the quiet wombe
2 Of his great +Grandmother+ with steele to wound,
     And the hid treasures in her sacred tombe,
4 With Sacriledge to dig. Therein he found
     Fountaines of gold and siluer to abound,
6 Of which the matter of his huge desire
     And pompous pride eftsoones he did compound;
8 Then auarice gan through his veines inspire
   His greedy flames, and kindled life-deuouring fire.

2 Grandmother > Gandmother 1596

1 "Then gan a cursed hand the quiet womb

gan > did

2 Of his great grandmother with steel to wound,

his great grandmother > (The earth; cf. 201.10:6) wound > [mine]

3 And the hidden treasures in her sacred tomb 4 With sacrilege to dig. Therein he found 5 Fountains of gold and silver to abound,

Fountains > Founts, sources

6 Of which the matter of his huge desire

matter > substance

7 And pompous pride eftsoons he did compound;

eftsoons > soon compound > {Compose, make up with the combination of elements (i.e. gold and silver)}

8 Then avarice gan through his veins inspire

gan > did inspire > breathe life, quicken

9 His greedy flames, and kindled life-devouring fire."

His > [Those of avarice; or: those of man]

207.18

   Sonne (said he then) let be thy bitter scorne,
2 And leaue the rudenesse of +that+ antique age
     To them, that liu'd therein in state forlorne;
4 Thou that doest liue in later times, must wage
     Thy workes for wealth, and life for gold engage.
6 If then thee list my offred grace to vse,
     Take what thou please of all this surplusage;
8 If thee list not, leaue haue thou to refuse:
   But thing refused, do not afterward accuse.

2 that > omitted from 1596

1 "Son," said he then, "let be your bitter scorn,

let be > give over, desist from

2 And leave the rudeness of that antique age

rudeness > barbarism antique > ancient

3 To them that lived therein in state forlorn; 4 You, that do live in later times, must wage

wage > hire out

5 Your works for wealth, and life for gold engage.

engage > pledge, pawn

6 If then you list my offered grace to use,

list > choose

7 Take what you please of all this surplusage;

surplusage > superabundance, excess

8 If you list not, leave have you to refuse: 9 But thing refused, do not afterward accuse."

accuse > blame, find fault with

207.19

   Me list not (said the Elfin knight) receaue
2 Thing offred, till I know it well be got,
     Ne wote I, but thou didst these goods bereaue
4 From rightfull owner by vnrighteous lot,
     Or that +bloud guiltinesse+ or guile them blot.
6 Perdy (quoth he) yet neuer eye did vew,
     Ne toung did tell, ne hand these handled not,
8 But safe I haue them kept in secret mew,
   From heauens sight, and powre of all which them pursew.

5 bloud guiltinesse > bloodguiltnesse 1590; bloud guiltnesse 1596: cf. 202.4:5, 202.30:3

1 "I list not," said the Elfin knight, "receive

list > choose, please receive > [to receive]

2 Thing offered, till I know it well be got, 3 Nor wot I, but you did these goods bereave

wot > know you > [that you] bereave > take away, rob

4 From rightful owner by unrighteous lot,

unrighteous lot > criminal division

5 Or that blood-guiltiness or guile them blot."

blood-guiltiness > responsibility for bloodshed

6 "Pardie," quoth he, "yet never eye did view,

Pardie > Truly; "by God" yet never > [never yet]

7 Nor tongue did tell, nor hand these handled not,

tell > describe not > (The double negative serves as an intensive)

8 But safe I have them kept in secret mew,

mew > place [of confinement]

9 From heaven's sight, and power of all who them pursue."

power > [the power]

207.20

   What secret place (quoth he) can safely hold
2 So huge a masse, and hide from heauens eye?
     Or where hast thou thy wonne, that so much gold
4 Thou canst preserue from wrong and robbery?
     Come thou (quoth he) and see. So by and by
6 Through that thicke couert he him led, and found
     A darkesome way, which no man could descry,
8 That deepe descended through the hollow ground,
   And was with dread and horrour compassed around.

1 "What secret place," quoth he, "can safely hold 2 So huge a mass, and hide from heaven's eye?

hide > [hide it]

3 Or where have you your won, that so much gold

won > dwelling-place

4 You can preserve from wrong and robbery?" 5 "Come you," quoth he, "and see!" So by and by

by and by > straight away

6 Through that thick covert he him led, and found 7 A darksome way, which no man could descry,

descry > make out, see; explore

8 That deep descended through the hollow ground, 9 And was with dread and horror compassed around.

compassed around > encircled, surrounded

207.21

   At length they came into a larger space,
2 That stretcht it selfe into an ample plaine,
     Through which a beaten broad high way did trace,
4 That streight did lead to Plutoes griesly raine:
     By that wayes side, there sate +infernall+ Payne,
6 And fast beside him sat tumultuous Strife:
     The one in hand an yron whip did straine,
8 The other brandished a bloudy knife,
   And both did gnash their teeth, and both did threaten life.

5 infernall > internall 1590; eternall conj. Collier

1 At length they came into a larger space, 2 That stretched itself into an ample plain, 3 Through which a beaten broad highway did trace,

broad highway > (Cf. 104.2:8, 110.10:5) trace > proceed, pass

4 That straight did lead to Pluto's grisly reign:

grisly > fearsome, horrible reign > kingdom, realm

5 By that way's side there sat infernal Pain,

Pain > Punishment

6 And fast beside him sat tumultuous Strife:

fast > very closely

7 The one in hand an iron whip did strain,

strain > clasp tightly

8 The other brandished a bloody knife, 9 And both did gnash their teeth, and both did threaten life.

207.22

   On thother side in one consort there sate,
2 Cruell Reuenge, and rancorous Despight,
     Disloyall Treason, and hart-burning Hate,
4 But gnawing Gealosie out of their sight
     Sitting alone, his bitter lips did bight,
6 And trembling Feare still to and fro did fly,
     And found no place, where safe he shroud him might,
8 Lamenting Sorrow did in darknesse +lye,+
   And Shame his vgly face did hide from liuing eye.

8 lye, > lye. 1596

1 On the other side, in one consort, there sat

consort > company, assembly (cf. Aen. 6.273-81)

2 Cruel Revenge, and rancorous Despite,

Despite > Anger; Malice; Outrage

3 Disloyal Treason, and heart-burning Hate, 4 But gnawing Jealousy, out of their sight, 5 Sitting alone, his bitter lips did bite, 6 And trembling Fear still to and fro did fly,

still > continually

7 And found no place, where safe he shroud himself might;

shroud > hide

8 Lamenting Sorrow did in darkness lie, 9 And Shame his ugly face did hide from living eye.

207.23

   And ouer them sad +Horrour+ with grim hew,
2 Did alwayes sore, beating his yron wings;
     And after him Owles and Night-rauens flew,
4 The hatefull messengers of heauy things,
     Of death and dolour telling sad tidings;
6 Whiles sad Celeno, sitting on a clift,
     A song of bale and bitter sorrow sings,
8 That hart of flint a sunder could haue rift:
   Which hauing ended, after him she flyeth swift.

1 Horrour > horror 1590; horrour 1596

1 And over them sad Horror, with grim hue,

hue > appearance; colour

2 Did always soar, beating his iron wings;

always > always; perhaps also: all ways [in all directions, round and round] iron wings > (Cf. 111.31:9)

3 And after him owls and night-ravens flew,

owls > (To the Romans, the owl was an omen of death: see Met. 10.453; see also 105.30:6, etc.) night-raven > {An unspecified nocturnal bird, perhaps the nightjar or the night-heron. See SC, gloss to "June"}

4 The hateful messengers of heavy things,

heavy > distressing, grievous; grave

5 Of death and dolour telling sad tidings;

dolour > dolour; physical suffering; grief

6 While sad Celeno, sitting on a cliff,

Celeno > (One of the harpies, vultures with the head and breasts of a woman; associated with greed. The others were Ocypeta and A{e"}llo. See Aen. 3.219 ff.)

7 A song of bale and bitter sorrow sings,

bale > woe, torment

8 That heart of flint asunder could have rived:

rived > torn asunder

9 Which having ended, after him she flies swift.

207.24

   All these before the gates of Pluto lay,
2 By whom they passing, spake vnto them nought.
     But th'Elfin knight with wonder all the way
4 Did feed his eyes, and fild his inner thought.
     At last him to a litle dore he brought,
6 That to the gate of Hell, which gaped wide,
     Was next adioyning, ne them parted +ought+:
8 Betwixt them both was but a litle stride,
   That did the house of Richesse from hell-mouth diuide.

7 ought > nought 1590

1 All these before the gates of Pluto lay, 2 By whom they passing, spoke to them naught.

naught > nothing at all [Guyon and Mammon said nothing to Pain, Strife, etc. as they passed]

3 But the Elfin knight with wonder all the way 4 Did feed his eyes, and fild his inner thought.

fild > filled; or: defiled (cf. 105.32:2 etc.)

5 At last him to a little door he brought,

he > [Mammon]

6 That to the gate of hell, which gaped wide, 7 Was next adjoining, ne them parted aught:

ne them parted aught > [nor did anything separate them; there was no space between the two]

8 Betwixt them both was but a little stride, 9 That did the house of Richesse from hell-mouth divide.

Richesse > Wealth

207.25

   Before the dore sat selfe-consuming Care,
2 Day and night keeping wary watch and ward,
     For feare least Force or Fraud should vnaware
4 Breake in, and spoile the treasure there in gard:
     Ne would he suffer Sleepe once thither-ward
6 Approch, albe his drowsie den were next;
     For next to death is Sleepe to be compard:
8 Therefore his house is vnto his annext;
   Here Sleep, there Richesse, and Hel-gate them both betwext.

1 Before the door sat self-consuming Care, 2 Day and night keeping wary watch and ward,

ward > guard ("watch and ward" was formerly a common compound sb.)

3 For fear lest Force or Fraud should unawares 4 Break in, and spoil the treasure there in guard:

spoil > plunder, rob in > [under]

5 Nor would he suffer Sleep once thitherward

suffer > allow thitherward > towards there, in that direction

6 Approach, albe his drowsy den was next;

albe > although next > next adjoining (207.24:7), adjacent

7 For next to death is Sleep to be compared:

next > [most closely; cf. Aen. 6.278]

8 Therefore his house is to his annexed; 9 Here Sleep, there Richesse, and hell-gate them both betwixt.

Richesse > Wealth

207.26

   So soone as Mammon there arriu'd, the dore
2 To him did open, and affoorded way;
     Him followed eke Sir Guyon euermore,
4 Ne darkenesse him, ne daunger might dismay.
     Soone as he entred was, the dore streight way
6 Did shut, and from behind it forth there lept
     An vgly feend, more fowle then dismall day,
8 The which with monstrous stalke behind him stept,
   And euer as he went, dew watch vpon him kept.

1 So soon as Mammon there arrived, the door 2 To him did open, and afforded way; 3 Him followed eke Sir Guyon evermore,

eke > also evermore > constantly

4 Neither darkness him, nor danger might dismay. 5 Soon as he entered was, the door straightway

Soon > [As soon]

6 Did shut, and from behind it forth there leapt 7 An ugly fiend, more foul than dismal day,

dismal day > {Dies mali, one of the evil or unlucky days of the medieval calendar}

8 Which with monstrous stalk behind him stepped, 9 And ever, as he went, due watch upon him kept.

207.27

   Well hoped he, ere long that hardy guest,
2 If euer couetous hand, or lustfull eye,
     Or lips he layd on thing, that likt him best,
4 Or euer sleepe his eye-strings did vntye,
     Should be his pray. And therefore still on hye
6 He ouer him did hold his cruell clawes,
     Threatning with greedy gripe to do him dye
8 And rend in peeces with his rauenous pawes,
   If euer he transgrest the fatall Stygian lawes.

1 Well hoped he ere long that hardy guest

ere long that > [that before long that] hardy > bold, audacious

2 (If ever covetous hand, or lustful eye, 3 Or lips he laid on thing, that liked him best,

liked > pleased

4 Or ever sleep his eyestrings did untie)

eyestrings > {The tendons, nerves or muscles of the eyes, relaxation of which was supposed to accompany sleep; cf. Cymbeline I iii 17: Shakespeare may have got the word from here. The earliest use quoted by OED is by Ben Jonson in 1601. Cf. also 108.22:7}

5 Should be his prey. And therefore still on high

still > continuously

6 He over him did hold his cruel claws, 7 Threatening with greedy grip to do him die

greedy > eager, rapacious die > [to death]

8 And rend in pieces with his ravenous paws,

rend > [tear him]

9 If ever he transgressed the fatal Stygian laws.

Stygian laws > (Laws of the underworld)

207.28

   That houses forme within was rude and strong,
2 Like an huge caue, hewne out of rocky clift,
     From whose rough vaut the ragged breaches hong,
4 Embost with massy gold of glorious gift,
     And with rich metall loaded euery rift,
6 That heauy ruine they did seeme to threat;
     And ouer them Arachne high did lift
8 Her cunning web, and spred her subtile net,
   Enwrapped in fowle smoke and clouds more blacke then Iet.

1 That house's form within was rude and strong,

rude > rough, crude, clumsy

2 Like a huge cave, hewn out of rocky cliff, 3 From whose rough vault the ragged breaches hung,

breaches > {?Broken sheets of rock}

4 Embossed with massy gold of glorious gift,

Embossed > Encased; richly decorated massy > solid gift > quality

5 And with rich metal loaded every rift, 6 That heavy ruin they did seem to threaten;

That > [So that] heavy > grievous, intense ruin > {The act of collapse, of a building, etc.}

7 And over them Arachne high did lift

Arachne > (Transformed by Minerva into a spider (Met. 6.1-145);
Ovid's story is retold and embellished in Muiopotmos 257 ff.)

8 Her cunning web, and spread her subtile net,

subtile > delicate; rarefied; crafty

9 Enwrapped in foul smoke and clouds more black than jet.

207.29

   Both roofe, and floore, and wals were all of gold,
2 But ouergrowne with dust and old decay,
     And hid in darkenesse, that none could behold
4 The hew thereof: for vew of chearefull day
     Did neuer in that house it selfe display,
6 But a faint shadow of vncertain light;
     Such as a lamp, whose life does fade away:
8 Or as the Moone cloathed with clowdy night,
   Does shew to him, that walkes in feare and sad affright.

1 Both roof and floor, and walls were all of gold, 2 But overgrown with dust and old decay, 3 And hidden in darkness, that none could behold

that > [so that]

4 The hue thereof: for view of cheerful day

hue > form; colour

5 Did never in that house itself display, 6 But a faint shadow of uncertain light;

But > Except as

7 Such as a lamp, whose life does fade away: 8 Or as the moon, clothed with cloudy night, 9 Does show to him that walks in fear and sad affright.

sad affright > grave terror

207.30

   In all that rowme was nothing to be seene,
2 But huge great yron chests and coffers strong,
     All bard with double bends, that none could weene
4 Them to efforce by violence or wrong;
     On euery side they placed were along.
6 But all the ground with sculs was scattered,
     And dead mens bones, which round about were flong,
8 Whose liues, it seemed, whilome there were shed,
   And their vile carcases now left vnburied.

1 In all that room was nothing to be seen 2 But huge great iron chests and coffers strong, 3 All barred with double bands, that none could ween

that > [so that] ween > imagine; intend

4 Them to efforce by violence or wrong;

efforce > force open (SUFQ)

5 On every side they placed were along. 6 But all the ground with skulls was scattered, 7 And dead men's bones, which round about were flung, 8 Whose lives, it seemed, whilom there were shed,

whilom > formerly, of yore; at some past time

9 And their vile carcases now left unburied.

vile > vile; worthless

207.31

   They forward passe, ne Guyon yet spoke word,
2 Till that they came vnto an yron dore,
     Which to them opened of +his+ owne accord,
4 And shewd of richesse such exceeding store,
     As eye of man did neuer see before;
6 Ne euer could within one place be found,
     Though all the wealth, which is, or was of yore,
8 Could gathered be through all the world around,
   And that aboue were added to that vnder ground.

3 his > it 1609

1 They forward pass, ne Guyon yet spoke word,

ne Guyon yet spoke word > [and Guyon did not yet speak a word; and still Guyon said nothing]

2 Till they came to an iron door, 3 Which to them opened of its own accord, 4 And showed of richesse such exceeding store

richesse > wealth, opulence

5 As eye of man did never see before; 6 Nor ever could within one place be found, 7 Though all the wealth, which is, or was of yore,

Though > Even if yore > old

8 Could gathered be through all the world around, 9 And that above were added to that under ground.

207.32

   The charge thereof vnto a couetous Spright
2 Commaunded was, who thereby did attend,
     And warily awaited day and night,
4 From other couetous feends it to defend,
     Who it to rob and ransacke did intend.
6 Then Mammon turning to that warriour, said;
     Loe here the worldes blis, loe here the end,
8 To which all men do ayme, rich to be made:
   Such grace now to be happy, is before thee laid.

1 The charge thereof to a covetous sprite

charge > keeping, responsibility

2 Commended was, who thereby did attend,

thereby > near that [store], nearby

3 And warily awaited day and night,

awaited > kept watch

4 From other covetous fiends it to defend, 5 Who it to rob and ransack did intend. 6 Then Mammon, turning to that warrior, said: 7 "Lo, here the world's bliss, lo here the end, 8 To which all men do aim, rich to be made: 9 Such grace now to be happy is before you laid."

grace > favour; bestowal of favour happy > fortunate; happy

207.33

   Certes (said he) I n'ill thine offred grace,
2 Ne to be made so happy do intend:
     Another blis before mine eyes I place,
4 Another happinesse, another end.
     To them, that list, these base regardes I lend:
6 But I in armes, and in atchieuements braue,
     Do rather choose my flitting houres to spend,
8 And to be Lord of those, that riches haue,
   Then them to haue my selfe, and be their seruile +sclaue+.

9 sclaue > slaue 1609

1 "Certes," said he, "I nill your offered grace,

Certes > Assuredly nill > will not [accept] grace > favour

2 Nor to be made so happy do intend:

so > thus, in this way

3 Another bliss before my eyes I place, 4 Another happiness, another end. 5 To them, that list, these base regards I lend:

list > choose, please regards > concerns

6 But I in arms, and in achievements brave,

achievements > achievements; feats, victories brave > brave; splendid

7 Do rather choose my flitting hours to spend, 8 And to be lord of those that riches have, 9 Than them to have myself, and be their servile slave."

them > [riches]

207.34

   Thereat the feend his gnashing teeth did grate,
2 And grieu'd, so long to lacke his greedy pray;
     For well he weened, that so glorious bayte
4 Would tempt his guest, to take thereof assay:
     Had he so doen, he had him snatcht away,
6 More light then Culuer in the Faulcons fist.
     Eternall God thee saue from such decay.
8 But whenas Mammon saw his purpose mist,
   Him to entrap vnwares another way he wist.

1 Thereat the fiend his gnashing teeth did grate,

Thereat > Thereupon; as a result of that

2 And grieved, so long to lack his greedy prey;

his greedy prey > [the prey for which he is eager]

3 For well he weened that so glorious bait

weened > supposed so > such [a]

4 Would tempt his guest, to take thereof assay:

assay > test, trial; hence: a sample

5 Had he so done, he had him snatched away,

he had him snatched > [the fiend would have snatched him]

6 More light than culver in the falcon's fist.

light > quickly; easily culver > dove; wood-pigeon fist > clutch, clutches

7 (Eternal God you save from such decay!)

decay > [a] downfall

8 But when Mammon saw his purpose missed,

purpose > intention; discourse, point

9 Him to entrap unwares another way he wist.

unwares > unexpectedly wist > knew; hence: planned

207.35

   Thence forward he him led, and shortly brought
2 Vnto another rowme, whose dore forthright,
     To him did open, as it had beene taught:
4 Therein an hundred raunges weren pight,
     And hundred fornaces all burning bright;
6 By euery fornace many feends did bide,
     Deformed creatures, horrible in sight,
8 And euery feend his busie paines applide,
   To melt the golden metall, ready to be tride.

1 Thenceforward he him led, and shortly brought

Thenceforward > From that place, thence

2 To another room, whose door forthright 3 To him did open, as it had been taught:

as > as; as if

4 Therein a hundred ranges were pight,

pight > placed

5 And hundred furnaces all burning bright; 6 By every furnace many fiends did bide,

bide > remain, await; hence: stand

7 Deformed creatures, horrible in sight, 8 And every fiend his busy pains applied,

busy > careful; solicitous pains > efforts, labours

9 To melt the golden metal, ready to be tried.

tried > refined, purified

207.36

   One with great bellowes gathered filling aire,
2 And with forst wind the fewell did inflame;
     Another did the dying bronds repaire
4 With +yron+ toungs, and sprinckled oft the same
     With liquid waues, fiers Vulcans rage to tame,
6 Who maistring them, renewd his former heat;
     Some scumd the drosse, that from the metall came;
8 Some stird the molten owre with ladles great;
   And euery one did swincke, and euery one did sweat.

4 yron > dying 1590

1 One with great bellows gathered filling air, 2 And with forced wind the fuel did inflame; 3 Another did the dying brands repair

brands > {Burning pieces of wood, hence: embers} repair > renew

4 With iron tongs, and sprinkled oft the same 5 With liquid waves, fierce Vulcan's rage to tame,

liquid waves > [water] Vulcan's rage > [the fire: Vulcan is the god of fire]

6 Who, mastering them, renewed his former heat;

them > [the "waues"]

7 Some scummed the dross that from the metal came;

scummed > skimmed

8 Some stirred the molten ore with ladles great; 9 And every one did swink, and every one did sweat.

swink > toil

207.37

   But when +as+ earthly wight they present saw,
2 Glistring in armes and battailous aray,
     From their whot worke they did themselues withdraw
4 To wonder at the sight: for till that day,
     They neuer creature saw, that came that way.
6 Their staring eyes sparckling with feruent fire,
     And vgly shapes did nigh the man dismay,
8 That were it not for shame, he would retire,
   Till that him thus bespake their soueraigne Lord and sire.

1 as > an 1590

1 But when an earthly wight they present saw,

wight > person, man

2 Glistering in arms and battailous array,

arms > {Arms and armour} battailous > {Warlike, ready for battle}

3 From their hot work they did themselves withdraw 4 To wonder at the sight: for till that day

wonder > marvel

5 They never creature saw, that came that way. 6 Their staring eyes, sparkling with fervent fire,

staring > glaring

7 And ugly shapes did nigh the man dismay, 8 That were it not for shame, he would retire,

That were it not > [Had it not been] retire > [have retired]

9 Till him thus bespoke their sovereign lord and sire:

bespoke > addressed sire > father; forefather; ruler, master

207.38

   Behold, thou Faeries sonne, with mortall eye,
2 That liuing eye before did neuer see:
     The thing, that thou didst craue so earnestly,
4 To weet, whence all the wealth late shewd by mee,
     Proceeded, lo now is reueald to thee.
6 Here is the fountaine of the worldes good:
     Now therefore, if thou wilt enriched bee,
8 Auise thee well, and chaunge thy wilfull mood,
   Least thou perhaps hereafter wish, and be withstood.

1 "Behold, you Faery's son, with mortal eye, 2 That living eye before did never see:

That > [That which]

3 The thing that you did crave so earnestly 4 To weet (whence all the wealth late shown by me

weet > learn late > lately

5 Proceeded), lo now is revealed to you. 6 Here is the fountain of the world's good:

fountain > fount, source good > money; property; good

7 Now therefore, if you will enriched be, 8 Advise you well, and change your wilful mood,

Advise > Consider; perceive, notice

9 Lest you perhaps hereafter wish, and be withstood."

withstood > [refused]

207.39

   Suffise it then, thou Money God (quoth hee)
2 That all thine idle offers I refuse.
     All that I need I haue; what needeth mee
4 To couet more, then I haue cause to vse?
     With such vaine shewes thy worldlings vile abuse:
6 But giue me leaue to follow mine emprise.
     Mammon was much displeasd, yet no'te he chuse,
8 But beare the rigour of his bold +mesprise+,
   And thence him forward led, him further to entise.

8 mesprise > mespise 1596, 1609

1 "Suffice it then, you Money God," quoth he, 2 "That all your idle offers I refuse.

idle > futile

3 All that I need I have; what needs me

needs me > do I need; need do I have

4 To covet more than I have cause to use? 5 With such vain shows your worldlings vile abuse:

vain shows > foolish displays vile > lowly; despicable; also adv., qualifying "abuse" abuse > deceive; abuse

6 But give me leave to follow my emprise."

emprise > enterprise, undertaking

7 Mammon was much displeased, yet no'te he choose

no'te he > he could not

8 But bear the rigour of his bold misprize,

But > [But to] rigour > harshness, rigour; rigorism, puritanic strictness (a development in the characterization of Guyon which becomes increasingly evident as Book II proceeds, reaching its apogee with the destruction of the Bower of Bliss at 212.81-3) misprize > contempt, scorn

9 And thence him forward led, him further to entice.

207.40

   He brought him through a darksome narrow strait,
2 To a broad gate, all built of beaten gold:
     The gate was open, but therein did wait
4 A sturdy villein, striding stiffe and bold,
     As +if+ +that+ highest God defie he would;
6 In his right hand an yron club he held,
     +But+ he himselfe was all of +golden+ mould,
8 Yet had both life and sence, and well could weld
   That cursed weapon, when his cruell foes he queld.

5 if > omitted from 1596 5 that > the 1590 etc.: FE 7 But > And 1590 7 golden > yron 1590

1 He brought him through a darksome narrow strait,
2 To a broad gate, all built of beaten gold:
3 The gate was open, but therein did wait
4 A sturdy villein, striding stiff and bold,

sturdy > courageous, ruthless (cf. 103.17:1) villein > villain; serf stiff > strongly, violently

5 As if highest God defy he would; 6 In his right hand an iron club he held, 7 But he himself was all of golden mould,

mould > form, structure

8 Yet had both life and sense, and well could wield 9 That cursed weapon, when his cruel foes he quelled.

cruel > cruel; vigorous, savage quelled > subdued; killed (cf. the description of Orgoglio, 107.8-10)

207.41

   Disdayne he called was, and did disdaine
2 To be so cald, and who so did him call:
     Sterne was +his+ looke, and full of stomacke vaine,
4 His portaunce terrible, and stature tall,
     Far passing th'hight of men terrestriall;
6 Like an huge Gyant of the Titans race,
     That made him scorne all creatures great and small,
8 And with his pride all others powre deface:
   More fit amongst blacke fiendes, then men to haue his place.

3 his > to 1596, 1609

1 "Disdain" he called was, and did disdain 2 To be so called, and whoso did him call:

whoso > whoever

3 Stern was his look, and full of stomach vain,

Stern > Fierce, grim, harsh stomach > haughtiness; ill-will

4 His portance terrible, and stature tall,

portance > demeanour

5 Far passing the height of men terrestrial;

passing > surpassing

6 Like a huge giant of the Titans' race,

Titans > (The firstborn children of Heaven and Earth, as Oceanus,
Rhea, Hyperion, Cronos; see Hesiod, Theogony 132-8)

7 That made him scorn all creatures great and small, 8 And with his pride all others' power deface:

deface > cast in the shade; or: destroy

9 More fit amongst black fiends, than men to have his place.

than > [than among]

207.42

   Soone as those glitterand armes he did espye,
2 That with their brightnesse made that darknesse light,
     His harmefull club he gan to hurtle hye,
4 And threaten batteill to the Faery knight;
     Who likewise gan himselfe to batteill dight,
6 Till Mammon did his hasty hand withhold,
     And counseld him abstaine from perilous fight:
8 For nothing might abash the villein bold,
   Ne mortall steele emperce his miscreated mould.

1 Soon as those glittering arms he did espy,

Soon > [As soon] arms > {Arms and armour}

2 That with their brightness made that darkness light,

brightness > (Cf. 101.14:4-5)

3 His harmful club he began to hurtle high,

hurtle > brandish (catachr.)

4 And threaten battle to the Faery knight; 5 Who likewise gan himself to battle dight,

gan > did dight > prepare

6 Till Mammon did his hasty hand withhold, 7 And counselled him abstain from perilous fight:

abstain > [to abstain]

8 For nothing might abash the villein bold,

villein > villain; serf

9 Nor mortal steel empierce his miscreated mould.

mortal > {Mortal, pertaining to living men; lethal} empierce > transfix; penetrate miscreated > {Created unnaturally or with evil intention: cf. 102.3:1} mould > shape, form; hence: body

207.43

   So hauing him with reason pacifide,
2 And the fiers Carle commaunding to forbeare,
     He brought him in. The rowme was large and wide,
4 As it some Gyeld or solemne Temple weare:
     Many great golden pillours did vpbeare
6 The massy roofe, and riches huge sustayne,
     And euery pillour decked was full deare
8 With crownes and Diademes, and titles vaine,
   Which mortall Princes wore, whiles they on earth did rayne.

1 So having him with reason pacified, 2 And the fierce carl commanding to forbear,

carl > villain, churl

3 He brought him in. The room was large and wide, 4 As it some gyeld or solemn temple were:

As > [As if] gyeld > {Guild, guildhall, the building where a guild met or in which a religious guild or fraternity lived} solemn > grand, imposing

5 Many great golden pillars did upbear 6 The massy roof, and riches huge sustain,

massy > solid, massive

7 And every pillar decked was full dear

full > very, exceedingly dear > richly

8 With crowns and diadems, and titles vain,

diadems > crowns (here somewhat pleonastic)

9 Which mortal princes wore, while they on earth did reign.

207.44

   A route of people there assembled were,
2 Of euery sort and nation vnder skye,
     Which with great vprore preaced to draw nere
4 To th'vpper part, where was aduaunced hye
     A stately siege of soueraigne maiestye;
6 And thereon sat a woman gorgeous gay,
     And richly clad in robes of royaltye,
8 That neuer earthly Prince in such aray
   His glory did enhaunce, and pompous pride display.

1 A rout of people there assembled were,

rout > {Crowd; clamorous or riotous assemblage}

2 Of every sort and nation under sky, 3 Who with great uproar pressed to draw near

pressed > strove

4 To the upper part, where was advanced high

advanced > raised

5 A stately siege of sovereign majesty;

siege > seat (esp. one used by person of rank or distinction); hence: throne

6 And thereon sat a woman gorgeous gay, 7 And richly clad in robes of royalty, 8 That never earthly prince in such array

That > [Such that]

9 His glory did enhance, and pompous pride display.

enhance > exalt pompous > splendid; pompous

207.45

   Her face right wondrous faire did seeme to bee,
2 That her broad beauties beam great brightnes threw
     Through the dim shade, that all men might it see:
4 Yet was not that same her owne natiue hew,
     But wrought by art and counterfetted shew,
6 Thereby more louers vnto her to call;
     Nath'lesse most heauenly faire in deed and vew
8 She by creation was, till she did fall;
   Thenceforth she sought for helps, to cloke her crime withall.

1 Her face right wondrous fair did seem to be,

right > very

2 That her broad beauty's beam great brightness threw

That > [So that; such that]

3 Through the dim shade, that all men might it see:

that > [so that]

4 Yet was not that same her own native hue,

native hue > natural appearance

5 But wrought by art and counterfeited show, 6 Thereby more lovers to her to call; 7 Natheless most heavenly fair in deed and view

Natheless > Nevertheless view > appearance

8 She by creation was, till she did fall; 9 Thenceforth she sought for helps, to cloak her crime withal.

helps > remedies; hence: artificial aids crime > {Wrong-doing, sins taken collectively}

207.46

   There, as in glistring glory she did sit,
2 She held a great gold chaine ylincked well,
     Whose vpper end to highest heauen was knit,
4 And lower part did reach to lowest Hell;
     And all that preace did round about her swell,
6 To catchen hold of that long chaine, thereby
     To clime aloft, and others to excell:
8 That was Ambition, rash desire to sty,
   And euery lincke thereof a step of dignity.

1 There, as in glistering glory she did sit, 2 She held a great gold chain linked well,

gold chain > (Cf.109.1:1)

3 Whose upper end to highest heaven was knit, 4 And lower part did reach to lowest hell; 5 And all that press did round about her swell,

press > crowd, throng

6 To catch hold of that long chain, thereby 7 To climb aloft, and others to excel: 8 That was Ambition, rash desire to sty,

sty > rise, ascend, mount

9 And every link thereof a step of dignity.

dignity > rank

207.47

   Some thought to raise themselues to high degree,
2 By riches and vnrighteous reward,
     Some by close shouldring, some by flatteree;
4 Others through friends, others for base regard;
     And all by wrong wayes for themselues prepard.
6 Those that were vp themselues, kept others low,
     Those that were low themselues, held others hard,
8 Ne suffred them to rise or greater grow,
   But euery one did striue his fellow downe to throw.

1 Some thought to raise themselves to high degree

degree > social station

2 By riches and unrighteous reward, 3 Some by close shouldering, some by flattery;

close shouldering > [secretly shouldering other people aside]

4 Others through friends, others for base regard;

regard > motive; hence: bribery

5 And all by wrong ways for themselves prepared. 6 Those that were up themselves kept others low; 7 Those that were low themselves held others hard; 8 Nor suffered them to rise or greater grow:

suffered > permitted

9 But every one did strive his fellow down to throw.

207.48

   Which whenas Guyon saw, he gan inquire,
2 What meant that preace about that Ladies throne,
     And what she was that did so high aspire.
4 Him Mammon answered; That goodly one,
     Whom all that folke with such contention,
6 Do flocke about, my +deare, my+ daughter is;
     Honour and dignitie from her alone
8 Deriued are, and all this worldes blis
   For which ye men do striue: few get, but many mis.

6 deare, my > deare my, 1596

1 Which when Guyon saw, he gan inquire

gan > did

2 What meant that press about that lady's throne,

meant > was the import of; intended press > crowd, throng

3 And what she was that did so high aspire. 4 Him Mammon answered: "That goodly one,

goodly > beautiful

5 Whom all that folk with such contention

folk > {Aggregation of people in relation to a superior, e.g. a monarch; mass}

6 Do flock about, my dear, my daughter is; 7 Honour and dignity from her alone

dignity > rank

8 Derived are, and all this world's bliss 9 For which you men do strive: few get, but many miss.

miss > lack; fail to achieve; go wrong, go astray

207.49

   And faire Philotime she rightly hight,
2 The fairest wight that wonneth vnder skye,
     But that this darksome neather world her light
4 Doth dim with horrour and deformitie,
     Worthy of heauen and hye felicitie,
6 From whence the gods haue her for enuy thrust:
     But sith thou hast found fauour in mine eye,
8 Thy spouse I will her make, if that thou lust,
   That she may thee aduance for workes and merites iust.

1 "And fair Philotime she rightly hight,

Philotime > "Love of Honour" (Greek) hight > is called

2 The fairest wight that wons under sky

wight > person, woman wons > dwells

3 (But that this darksome nether world her light

But > Except

4 Does dim with horror and deformity),

deformity > perversion, moral repulsiveness

5 Worthy of heaven and high felicity, 6 From whence the gods have her for envy thrust: 7 But, sith you have found favour in my eye,

sith > since

8 Your spouse I will her make, if that you lust,

lust > pleases, delights; also, intr.: please, choose; desire (esp. sexually)

9 That she may you advance for works and merits just."

That > [So that] merits > {That which is deserved, reward, whether secular or specifically from God}

207.50

   Gramercy Mammon (said the gentle knight)
2 For so great grace and offred high estate;
     But I, that am fraile flesh and earthly wight,
4 Vnworthy match for such immortall mate
     My selfe well wote, and mine vnequall fate;
6 And were I not, yet is my trouth yplight,
     And loue auowd to other Lady late,
8 That to remoue the same I haue no might:
   To chaunge loue causelesse is reproch to warlike knight.

1 "Gramercy, Mammon," said the gentle knight,

Gramercy > Thank you gentle > noble

2 "For so great grace and offered high estate;

so > such grace > favour

3 But I, that am frail flesh and earthly wight,

wight > person, man

4 Unworthy match for such immortal mate 5 Myself well wot, and my unequal fate;

wot > [I] know [to be] unequal > {Socially ill-matched}

6 And were I not, yet is my troth plighted, 7 And love avowed to other lady late,

late > lately

8 That to remove the same I have no might:

That > [So that] remove > [annul]

9 To change love causeless is reproach to warlike knight."

causeless > without [good] cause

207.51

   Mammon emmoued was with inward wrath;
2 Yet forcing it to faine, him forth thence led
     Through griesly shadowes by a beaten path,
4 Into a gardin goodly garnished
     With hearbs and fruits, whose kinds mote not be red:
6 Not such, as earth out of her fruitfull woomb
     Throwes forth to men, sweet and well sauoured,
8 But direfull deadly blacke both leafe and bloom,
   Fit to adorne the dead, and decke the drery toombe.

1 Mammon enmoved was with inward wrath;

enmoved > moved

2 Yet forcing it to feign, him forth thence led

forcing > [forcing himself] feign > dissimulate, conceal (SUS)

3 Through grisly shadows by a beaten path,

grisly > horrible, fearsome

4 Into a garden goodly garnished

goodly > well, beautifully garnished > beautifed, decorated

5 With herbs and fruits, whose kinds might not be read:

read > seen, discerned, made known; hence: described

6 Not such as earth out of her fruitful womb 7 Throws forth to men, sweet and well savoured, 8 But direful deadly black both leaf and bloom,

direful > terrible, dreadful

9 Fit to adorn the dead, and deck the dreary tomb.

207.52

   There mournfull Cypresse grew in greatest store,
2 And trees of bitter Gall, and Heben sad,
     Dead sleeping Poppy, and blacke Hellebore,
4 Cold Coloquintida, and Tetra mad,
     Mortall Samnitis, and Cicuta bad,
6 +Which with+ +th'vniust+ Atheniens made to dy
     Wise Socrates, who thereof quaffing glad
8 Pourd out his life, and last Philosophy
   To the faire Critias his dearest Belamy.

6 Which with > Which-with 1609; With which sugg. most editors 6 th'vniust > th vniust 1596

1 There mournful cypress grew in greatest store,

cypress > (Cupressus spp., C. sempervirens in classical mythology, trees associated with death and grief. Cf. 201.60:3, 106.17:2)

2 And trees of bitter gall, and ebon sad,

gall > (Gall is another name for bile, the intensely bitter secretion of the liver: by transference applied to any poison or venom; the gall-nut or oak-apple is an excrescence caused on oak trees by insects of the family Cynipidae. Hence "trees of bitter Gall" might be intended to mean "oaks") ebon > {Ebony, made of ebony, a tree of the family Ebenaceae, esp. Diospyros ebenus, producing hard black wood}

3 Dead sleeping poppy, and black hellebore,

sleeping > (Because it produces opium) black hellebore > (Probably Helleborus foetidus (colloquially called the stinking hellebore) rather than the green hellebore H. viridis. Both are highly poisonous plants found growing in England, and were formerly used officinally as violent cathartics and emetics, though they are so dangerous that their use was abandoned)

4 Cold coloquintida, and tetra mad,

coloquintida > (The colocynth or bitter-apple, Citrullus colocynthis, a plant of the gourd family. The fruit has a very bitter pulp, producing a purgative drug. The colocynth is the gourd referred to in 2 Kings 4.38-41; see also Othello I iii 345) tetra > (The deadly nightshade, Atropa bella-donna)

5 Mortal samnitis, and cicuta bad,

Mortal > Lethal samnitis > (Conjectured by Upton to be the savin, Junipera sabina, the dried tops of which are abortifacient: hence "Mortall". Cf. 302.49:5) cicuta > hemlock (Conium maculatum, a deadly poison)

6 With which the unjust Athenians made to die 7 Wise Socrates who, thereof quaffing glad,

Socrates > (The Greek philosopher, c. 470-399, who was obliged to drink hemlock)

8 Poured out his life and last philosophy 9 To the fair Critias, his dearest belamy.

Critias > (Socrates's former pupil and enemy, one of the Thirty Tyrants. Perhaps an error for "Crito" on Spenser's part) belamy > fair friend, bosom-friend

207.53

   The +Gardin+ of Proserpina this hight;
2 And in the midst thereof a siluer seat,
     With a thicke Arber goodly ouer dight,
4 In which she often vsd from open heat
     Her selfe to shroud, and pleasures to entreat.
6 Next thereunto did grow a goodly tree,
     With braunches broad dispred and body great,
8 Clothed with leaues, that none the wood mote see
   And loaden all with fruit as thicke as it might bee.

1 Gardin > Gordin 1596

1 The Garden of Proserpine this hight;

hight > was called; is called

2 And in the midst thereof a silver seat,

a > [was a]

3 With a thick arbour goodly over dight,

goodly > gracefully over dight > [trained to overhang; "dight" = "prepared"]

4 In which she often used from open heat 5 Herself to shroud, and pleasures to entreat.

shroud > shelter entreat > occupy herself in (this instance cited by OED)

6 Next thereto did grow a goodly tree,

goodly > beautiful

7 With branches broad dispread and body great,

dispread > extended

8 Clothed with leaves, that none the wood might see,

that > [so that] wood > [trunk, boughs]

9 And loaded all with fruit as thick as it might be.

207.54

   Their fruit were golden apples glistring bright,
2 That goodly was their glory to behold,
     On earth like neuer grew, ne liuing wight
4 Like euer saw, but they from hence were sold;
     For those, which Hercules with conquest bold
6 Got from great Atlas daughters, hence began,
     And planted there, did bring forth fruit of gold:
8 And those with which th'Eub{ae}an young man wan
   Swift Atalanta, when through craft he her out ran.

1 Their fruit were golden apples glistering bright,

Their > [The branches'] golden apples > (Symbols of avarice and discord: cf. Myth. 7.7; cf. also Aen. 6.136-43)

2 That goodly was their glory to behold,

That > [So that; or: so] goodly > beautiful

3 On earth like never grew, nor living wight

like > [the like] wight > person, creature

4 Like ever saw, but they from hence were sold;

but > unless sold > given, handed over

5 For those which Hercules, with conquest bold,

Hercules > (His eleventh and most difficult labour required him to
get possession of the apples in the garden of the three
Hesperides, the daughters of Hesperus. In Comus 402-6, the
Hesperides are made the nieces of Atlas)

6 Got from great Atlas' daughters hence began,

Atlas > (A semi-divine giant said to support on his shoulders the pillars of the universe; Hercules took over this burden while Atlas went to fetch the golden apples on his behalf) hence began > [originated from here]

7 And planted there, did bring forth fruit of gold:

there > [in the garden of the Hesperides]

8 And those with which the Euboean young man won

the Euboean young man > (Melanion; in Ovid and subsequent accounts he is called Hippomenes)

9 Swift Atalanta, when through craft he her outran.

Atalanta > (A beautiful maiden whose suitors had to race her for her hand in marriage. Those who lost the race were condemned to death; Hippomenes only succeeded because Venus gave him three golden apples which he threw on the ground, making Atalanta delay to stop and pick them up. See Met. 10.560-704, Amoretti 77)

207.55

   Here also sprong that goodly golden fruit,
2 With which Acontius got his louer trew,
     Whom he had long time sought with fruitlesse suit:
4 Here eke that famous golden Apple grew,
     The which emongst the gods false Ate threw;
6 For which th'Id{ae}an Ladies disagreed,
     Till partiall Paris dempt it Venus dew,
8 And had of her, faire Helen for his meed,
   That many noble Greekes and Troians made to bleed.

1 Here also sprang that goodly golden fruit

goodly > beautiful

2 With which Acontius got his lover true,

Acontius > (Who won Cydippe by means of a golden fruit: see Ovid, Heroides 20-1)

3 Whom he had long time sought with fruitless suit:

fruitless > (Even after four centuries this pun still raises a groan of protest)

4 Here eke that famous golden apple grew,

eke > also

5 Which amongst the gods false Ate threw;

Ate > (Goddess of discord, also called Eris. She threw a golden apple inscribed "To the fairest" among the guests at the wedding of Thetis and Peleus. A contest, held on Mount Ida, ensued between Minerva, Juno and Venus; Paris awarded the apple to Venus, who gave him Helen, and this led to the Trojan War. See Hyginus, Fabulae 42)

6 For which the Idaean ladies disagreed,

disagreed > quarrelled (cf. PL 2.497)

7 Till partial Paris deemed it Venus' due, 8 And had of her fair Helen for his meed,

of > from meed > reward

9 That many noble Greeks and Trojans made to bleed.

207.56

   The warlike +Elfe+ much wondred at this tree,
2 So faire and great, that shadowed all the ground,
     And his broad braunches, laden with rich fee,
4 Did stretch themselues without the vtmost bound
     Of this great gardin, compast with a mound,
6 Which ouer-hanging, they themselues did steepe,
     In a blacke flood which flow'd about it round;
8 That is the riuer of Cocytus deepe,
   In which full many soules do endlesse waile and weepe.

1 Elfe > Elfe, 1596

1 The warlike Elf much wondered at this tree,

wondered > marvelled

2 So fair and great, that shadowed all the ground, 3 And its broad branches, laden with rich fee,

fee > wealth

4 Did stretch themselves without the utmost bound

without > outside, beyond

5 Of this great garden, compassed with a mound,

compassed with > enclosed with; encircled by mound > embankment

6 Which overhanging, they themselves did steep 7 In a black flood which flowed about it round;

flood > river

8 That is the river of Cocytus deep,

Cocytus > (The "stream of wailing": one of the five rivers of hell: the others are Acheron, Phlegethon, Lethe, and Styx)

9 In which full many souls do endless wail and weep.

full > very, exceedingly

207.57

   Which to behold, he clomb vp to the banke,
2 And looking downe, saw many damned wights,
     In those sad waues, which direfull deadly stanke,
4 Plonged continually of cruell Sprights,
     That with their pitteous cryes, and yelling shrights,
6 They made the further shore resounden wide:
     Emongst the rest of those same ruefull sights,
8 One cursed +creature+ he by chaunce espide,
   That drenched lay full deepe, vnder the Garden side.

8 creature > creature, 1596

1 Which to behold, he climbed up to the bank, 2 And, looking down, saw many damned wights

wights > people

3 In those sad waves, which direful deadly stank,

sad > {Sorrowful, causing sorrow; dark; deep} direful > dreadfully

4 Plunged continually of cruel sprites,

Plunged > Immersed, pushed under of > by

5 That with their piteous cries and yelling shrikes

That > [So that, in such a way that] their > [the "damned wights"'] shrikes > shrieks

6 They made the farther shore resound wide:

resound > echo, re-echo; ring

7 Amongst the rest of those same rueful sights, 8 One cursed creature he by chance espied, 9 That drenched lay full deep, under the garden side.

drenched > immersed full > very, exceedingly

207.58

   Deepe was he drenched to the vpmost chin,
2 Yet gaped still, as coueting to drinke
     Of the cold liquor, which he waded in,
4 And stretching forth his hand, did often thinke
     To reach the fruit, which grew vpon the brincke:
6 But both the fruit from hand, and floud from mouth
     Did flie abacke, and made him vainely swinke:
8 The whiles he steru'd with hunger and with drouth
   He daily dyde, yet neuer throughly dyen couth.

1 Deep was he drenched to the upmost chin,

upmost > uppermost

2 Yet gaped still, as coveting to drink

still > continuously

3 Of the cold liquor which he waded in,

Of > From; some of liquor > liquid

4 And, stretching forth his hand, did often think 5 To reach the fruit which grew upon the brink: 6 But both the fruit from hand, and flood from mouth 7 Did fly aback, and made him vainly swink:

swink > toil

8 The whiles he starved with hunger and with drought;

The whiles > Meanwhile starved > perished drought > thirst

9 He daily died, yet never thoroughly die could.

207.59

   The knight him seeing labour so in vaine,
2 Askt who he was, and what he ment thereby:
     Who groning deepe, thus answerd him againe;
4 Most cursed of all creatures vnder skye,
     Lo Tantalus, I here tormented lye:
6 Of whom high Ioue wont whylome feasted bee,
     Lo here I now for want of food doe dye:
8 But if that thou be such, as I thee see,
   Of grace I pray thee, giue to eat and drinke to mee.

1 The knight, him seeing labour so in vain, 2 Asked who he was, and what he meant thereby;

meant thereby > intended by that; hence: was doing

3 Who, groaning deep, thus answered him again:

again > in return

4 "Most cursed of all creatures under sky, 5 Lo Tantalus, I here tormented lie: 6 Of whom high Jove wont whilom feasted be,

Of > By wont whilom > formerly was accustomed be > [to be]

7 Lo here I now for want of food do die: 8 But if you be such, as I you see, 9 Of grace I pray you, give to eat and drink to me!"

207.60

   Nay, nay, thou greedie Tantalus (quoth he)
2 Abide the fortune of thy present fate,
     And vnto all that liue in high degree,
4 Ensample be of mind +intemperate+,
     To teach them how to vse their present state.
6 Then gan the cursed wretch aloud to cry,
     Accusing highest Ioue and gods ingrate,
8 And eke blaspheming heauen bitterly,
   As authour of vniustice, there to let him dye.

4 intemperate > more temperate 1590

1 "Nay, nay, you greedy Tantalus," quoth he, 2 "Abide the fortune of your present fate,

Abide > Endure; await the issue of

3 And, to all that live in high degree,

degree > social station

4 Example be of mind intemperate, 5 To teach them how to use their present state." 6 Then began the cursed wretch aloud to cry, 7 Accusing highest Jove and gods ingrate,

ingrate > unfriendly; unpleasant

8 And eke blaspheming heaven bitterly,

eke > also

9 As author of injustice, there to let him die.

207.61

   He lookt a little further, and espyde
2 Another wretch, whose carkasse deepe was drent
     Within the riuer, which the same did hyde:
4 But both his hands most filthy feculent,
     Aboue the water were on high extent,
6 And faynd to wash themselues incessantly;
     Yet nothing cleaner were for such intent,
8 But rather fowler seemed to the eye;
   So lost his labour vaine and idle industry.

1 He looked a little further, and espied 2 Another wretch, whose carcase deep was drenched

drenched > immersed

3 Within the river, which the same did hide: 4 But both his hands, most filthy feculent,

feculent > {Covered with faecal matter: SU}

5 Above the water were on high extent,

extent > extended

6 And fained to wash themselves incessantly;

fained > were anxious, hence: tried; or: feigned

7 Yet nothing cleaner were for such intent,

nothing > not at all

8 But rather fouller seemed to the eye; 9 So lost his labour vain and idle industry.

vain > futile idle > unavailing, empty

207.62

   The knight him calling, asked who he was,
2 Who lifting vp his head, him answerd thus:
     I Pilate am the falsest Iudge, alas,
4 And most vniust, that by vnrighteous
     And wicked doome, to Iewes despiteous
6 Deliuered vp the Lord of life to die,
     And did acquite a murdrer felonous;
8 The whiles my hands I washt in puritie,
   The whiles my soule was soyld with foule iniquitie.

1 The knight, him calling, asked who he was, 2 Who, lifting up his head, him answered thus: 3 "I Pilate am, the falsest judge, alas,

Pilate > (See Matt. 27.11-24)

4 And most unjust, that by unrighteous 5 And wicked doom, to Jews dispiteous

doom > judgement dispiteous > pitiless

6 Delivered up the Lord of life to die, 7 And did acquit a murderer felonous:

felonous > {Cruel, wicked, having the nature of a felon}

8 The whiles my hands I washed in purity;

The whiles > Meanwhile

9 The whiles my soul was soiled with foul iniquity."

207.63

   Infinite moe, tormented in like paine
2 He there beheld, too long here to be told:
     Ne Mammon would there let him long remaine,
4 For terrour of the tortures manifold,
     In which the damned soules he did behold,
6 But roughly him bespake. Thou fearefull foole,
     Why takest not of that same fruit of gold,
8 Ne sittest downe on that same siluer stoole,
   To rest thy wearie person, in the shadow coole.

1 Infinite more, tormented in like pain

like > similar

2 He there beheld, too long here to be told: 3 Nor Mammon would there let him long remain, 4 For terror of the tortures manifold 5 In which the damned souls he did behold, 6 But roughly him bespoke. "You fearful fool,

bespoke > addressed

7 Why take not of that same fruit of gold,

of > [some of]

8 Ne sit down on that same silver stool,

Ne > [Or why not, And why not] silver stool > (See 207.53:2)

9 To rest your weary person in the shadow cool?"

207.64

   All which he did, to doe him deadly fall
2 In frayle intemperance through sinfull bayt;
     To which if he inclined had at all,
4 That dreadfull feend, which did behind him wayt,
     Would him haue rent in thousand peeces strayt:
6 But he was warie wise in all his way,
     And well perceiued his deceiptfull sleight,
8 Ne suffred lust his safetie to betray;
   So goodly did beguile the Guyler of +the+ pray.

9 the > his 1590

1 All which he did to do him deadly fall

do him deadly fall > [cause him fatal destruction; make him fatally succumb]

2 In frail intemperance through sinful bait;

frail > {Morally weak, unable to resist temptation} bait > harassment; temptation, bait; refreshment, rest

3 To which if he inclined had at all, 4 That dreadful fiend, which did behind him wait, 5 Would him have rent in thousand pieces straight:

rent > torn straight > straightway, immediately

6 But he was wary wise in all his way, 7 And well perceived his deceitful sleight,

his > [Mammon's] sleight > trickery, stratagem

8 Nor suffered lust his safety to betray;

suffered > permitted

9 So goodly did beguile the guiler of the prey.

goodly > easily; gracefully; excellently beguile > deprive guiler > beguiler, deceiver

207.65

   And now he has so long remained there,
2 That vitall powres gan wexe both weake and wan,
     For want of food, and sleepe, which two vpbeare,
4 Like mightie pillours, this fraile life of man,
     That none without the same enduren can.
6 For now three dayes of men were full outwrought,
     Since he this hardie enterprize began:
8 For thy great Mammon fairely he besought,
   Into the world to guide him backe, as he him brought.

1 And now he has so long remained there 2 That vital powers gan wax both weak and wan,

gan > did; began to wax > grow, become

3 For want of food, and sleep (which two upbear,

upbear > support

4 Like mighty pillars, this frail life of man), 5 That none without the same endure can. 6 For now three days of men were full outwrought,

outwrought > worked out, completed

7 Since he this hardy enterprise began:

hardy > audacious

8 For-thy great Mammon fairly he besought

For-thy > Therefore, for this reason fairly > courteously

9 Into the world to guide him back, as he him brought.

brought > [had brought]

207.66

   The God, though loth, yet was constraind t'obay,
2 For lenger time, then that, no liuing wight
     Below the earth, might suffred be to stay:
4 So backe againe, him brought to liuing light.
     But all so soone as his enfeebled spright
6 Gan sucke this vitall aire into his brest,
     As ouercome with too exceeding might,
8 The life did flit away out of her nest,
   And all his senses were with deadly fit opprest.

1 The god, though loath, yet was constrained to obey,

yet > (Pleonastic)

2 For longer time than that no living wight

that > ["three dayes of men"] wight > creature, person, man

3 Below the earth might suffered be to stay:

suffered > allowed (cf. Matt. 12.40)

4 So back again him brought to living light. 5 But all so soon as his enfeebled spirit 6 Gan suck this vital air into his breast,

Gan > Did

7 As overcome with too exceeding might

As > [As though]

8 The life did flit away out of her nest, 9 And all his senses were with deadly fit oppressed.

deadly > death-like oppressed > overwhelmed; taken by surprise

CANTO VIII

   Sir Guyon laid in swowne is by
2 Acrates sonnes despoyld,
   Whom Arthur soone hath reskewed
4 And Paynim brethren foyld.

1 Sir Guyon, laid in swoon, is by 2 Acrates' sons despoiled:

despoiled > stripped (strictly speaking, only the attempt is made)

3 Whom Arthur soon has rescued

soon > without delay

4 And paynim brethren foiled.

paynim > pagan, heathen foiled > repulsed; defeated; trampled underfoot

208.1

   ANd is there care in heauen? and is there loue
2 In heauenly spirits to these creatures bace,
     That may compassion of their euils moue?
4 There is: else much more wretched were the cace
     Of men, then beasts. But {o^} th'exceeding grace
6 Of highest God, that loues his creatures so,
     And all his workes with mercy doth embrace,
8 That blessed Angels, he sends to and fro,
   To serue to wicked man, to serue his wicked foe.

1 And is there care in heaven? And is there love 2 In heavenly spirits to these creatures base,

to > for

3 That may compassion of their evils move?

of > for evils > misfortunes

4 There is: else much more wretched were the case

else > otherwise

5 Of men, than beasts'. But O the exceeding grace

exceeding > surpassing

6 Of highest God, that loves His creatures so, 7 And all His works with mercy does embrace, 8 That blessed angels He sends to and fro,

That > [Such that]

9 To serve to wicked Man, to serve His wicked foe.

serve > minister; act as an instrument of God serve > oppose; punish

208.2

   How oft do they, their siluer bowers leaue,
2 To come to succour vs, that succour want?
     How oft do they with golden pineons, cleaue
4 The flitting skyes, like flying Pursuiuant,
     Against foule feends to aide vs millitant?
6 They for vs fight, they watch and dewly ward,
     And their bright Squadrons round about vs plant,
8 And all for loue, and nothing for reward:
   O why should heauenly God to men haue such regard?

1 How oft do they their silver bowers leave,

bowers > chambers [heaven]

2 To come to succour us, that succour want?

want > need; want

3 How oft do they, with golden pinions, cleave 4 The flitting skies, like flying pursuivant,

flitting > unsubstantial, yielding pursuivant > {Royal messenger with power to execute warrants}

5 Against foul fiends to aid us militant?

militant > {Engaged in warfare; hence: combatively}

6 They for us fight, they watch and duly ward,

ward > keep guard

7 And their bright squadrons round about us plant, 8 And all for love, and nothing for reward: 9 O why should heavenly God to men have such regard?

to > for

208.3

   During the while, that Guyon did abide
2 In +Mamons+ house, the Palmer, whom whyleare
     That wanton Mayd of passage had denide,
4 By further search had passage found elsewhere,
     And being on his way, approched neare,
6 Where Guyon lay in traunce, when suddenly
     He heard a voice, that called loud and cleare,
8 +Come hither, come hither+, {o^} come hastily;
   That all the fields resounded with the ruefull cry.

2 Mamons > Mammons 1609 8 Come hither, come hither > Come hether, Come hether 1590; Come hither, hither 1609, to preserve the metre

1 During the while that Guyon did abide 2 In Mammon's house, the palmer, whom whilere

palmer > (Guyon's mentor: see 201.7 ff.) whilere > erewhile: lately

3 That wanton maid passage had denied,

That wanton maid > (Phaedria: see 206.19:7-9)

4 By further search had passage found elsewhere 5 And, being on his way, approached near

near > [near to the place]

6 Where Guyon lay in trance, when suddenly 7 He heard a voice that called loud and clear, 8 "Come hither, come hither, O come hastily!" 9 That all the fields resounded with the rueful cry.

That > [So that] resounded > rang; re-echoed

208.4

   The Palmer lent his eare vnto the noyce,
2 To weet, who called so importunely:
     Againe he heard a more efforced voyce,
4 That bad him come in haste. He by and by
     His feeble feet directed to the cry;
6 Which to that shadie delue him brought at last,
     Where Mammon earst did sunne his threasury:
8 There the good Guyon he found slumbring fast
   In senselesse dreame; which sight at first him sore aghast.

1 The palmer lent his ear to the noise, 2 To weet who called so importunely:

weet > find out importunely > urgently, pressingly

3 Again he heard a more efforced voice,

efforced > {Uttered with effort}

4 That bade him come in haste. He by and by

by and by > straight away

5 His feeble feet directed to the cry, 6 Which to that shady delve him brought at last,

delve > pit, depression

7 Where Mammon erst did sun his treasury:

erst > recently (see 207.3 ff.) treasury > treasure

8 There the good Guyon he found slumbering fast

fast > firmly, deeply

9 In senseless dream; which sight at first him sore agast.

agast > terrified

208.5

   Beside his head there sate a faire young man,
2 Of wondrous beautie, and of freshest yeares,
     Whose tender bud to blossome new began,
4 And flourish faire aboue his equall peares;
     His snowy front curled with golden heares,
6 Like Ph{oe}bus face adornd with sunny rayes,
     Diuinely shone, and two sharpe winged sheares,
8 Decked with diuerse plumes, like painted Iayes,
   Were fixed at his backe, to cut his ayerie wayes.

1 Beside his head there sat a fair young man,
2 Of wondrous beauty, and of freshest years,
3 Whose tender bud to blossom new began,
4 And flourish fair above his equal peers;

peers > peers, companions (cf. SC, gloss to "December"); also: nobles [the other angels of his rank]

5 His snowy front, curled with golden hair,

front > forehead

6 Like Phoebus' face adorned with sunny rays, 7 Divinely shone, and two sharp winged shears,

shears > {Wings shaped like blades, for cutting the air: this instance cited by OED}

8 Decked with diverse plumes, like painted jays',

diverse > {Of different sorts}

9 Were fixed at his back, to cut his airy ways.

208.6

   Like as Cupido on Id{ae}an hill,
2 When hauing laid his cruell bow away,
     And mortall arrowes, wherewith he doth fill
4 The world with murdrous spoiles and bloudie pray,
     With his faire mother he him dights to play,
6 And with his goodly sisters, Graces three;
     The Goddesse pleased with his wanton play,
8 Suffers her selfe through sleepe beguild to bee,
   The whiles the other Ladies mind their merry glee.

1 Like Cupid on Idaean hill,

Idaean hill > (Mount Ida, in Asia Minor, where Paris lived; see 207.55:6, 309.36)

2 When (having laid his cruel bow away, 3 And mortal arrows, wherewith he does fill

mortal > lethal wherewith > with which

4 The world with murderous spoils and bloody prey) 5 With his fair mother he him dights to play,

dights > prepares

6 And with his goodly sisters, Graces three;

goodly > beautiful Graces > (Aglaia, Thalia, and Euphrosyne, customarily described as the handmaids of Venus rather than her daughters; see DGDG 3.22, Myth. 4.13)

7 The goddess, pleased with his wanton play,

wanton > frisky, playful; lewd

8 Suffers herself through sleep beguiled to be,

Suffers > Allows

9 While the other ladies mind their merry glee.

merry > delightful, charming glee > entertainment; joy

208.7

   Whom when the Palmer saw, abasht he was
2 Through feare and wonder, that he nought could say,
     Till him the childe bespoke, Long lackt, alas,
4 Hath bene thy faithfull aide in hard assay,
     Whiles deadly fit thy pupill doth dismay;
6 Behold this heauie sight, thou reuerend Sire,
     But dread of death and dolour doe away;
8 For life ere long shall to her home retire,
   And he that breathlesse seemes, shal corage bold respire.

1 Whom when the palmer saw, abashed he was 2 Through fear and wonder, that he naught could say,

that > [so that]

3 Till him the child bespoke: "Long lacked, alas,

child > youth of gentle birth (also used as a title, as in "Childe Harold") bespoke > addressed

4 Has been your faithful aid in hard assay,

assay > endeavour; trial, trial by affliction

5 While deadly fit your pupil does dismay;

dismay > overcome

6 Behold this heavy sight, you reverend sire,

heavy > sad sire > {Father; form of address to an elderly or holy man; the original form of "sir"}

7 But dread of death and dolour do away; 8 For life ere long shall to her home retire,

retire > return

9 And he that breathless seems shall courage bold respire.

courage > courage; vigour, spirit, lustiness; wrath respire > breathe again, recover

208.8

   The charge, which God doth vnto me arret,
2 Of his deare safetie, I to thee commend;
     Yet will I not forgoe, ne yet forget
4 The care thereof my selfe vnto the end,
     But euermore him succour, and defend
6 Against his foe and mine: watch thou I pray;
     For euill is at hand him to offend.
8 So hauing said, eftsoones he gan display
   His painted nimble wings, and vanisht quite away.

1 "The charge which God does to me arrest,

arrest > ordain, entrust

2 Of his dear safety, I to you commend; 3 Yet will I not forgo, nor yet forget 4 The care thereof myself until the end, 5 But evermore him succour, and defend 6 Against his foe and mine: watch you I pray;

you > (Intensifies the imperative mood)

7 For evil is at hand, him to offend."

offend > attack, injure

8 So having said, eftsoons he gan display

So > Thus eftsoons > thereupon gan > did display > extend

9 His painted nimble wings, and vanished quite away.

208.9

   The Palmer seeing his left empty place,
2 And his slow eyes beguiled of their sight,
     Woxe sore affraid, and standing still a space,
4 Gaz'd after him, as fowle escapt by flight;
     At last him turning to his charge behight,
6 With trembling hand his troubled pulse gan try;
     Where finding life not yet dislodged quight,
8 He much reioyst, and courd it tenderly,
   As chicken newly hatcht, from dreaded destiny.

1 The palmer, seeing his left empty place, 2 And his slow eyes beguiled of their sight, 3 Waxed sore afraid and, standing still a space,

Waxed > Grew

4 Gazed after him, as fowl escaped by flight; 5 At last, him turning to his charge behight,

behight > ordained (catachr.); hence: appointed

6 With trembling hand his troubled pulse gan try;

gan try > did test

7 Where finding life not yet dislodged quite, 8 He much rejoiced, and covered it tenderly,

covered > protected

9 As chicken newly hatched, from dreaded destiny.

208.10

   At last he spide, where towards him did pace
2 Two Paynim knights, all armd as bright as skie,
     And them beside an aged Sire did trace,
4 And farre before a light-foot Page did flie,
     That breathed strife and troublous enmitie;
6 Those were the two sonnes of Acrates old,
     Who meeting earst with Archimago slie,
8 Foreby that idle strond, of him were told,
   That he, which earst them combatted, was Guyon bold.

1 At last he spied where towards him did pace 2 Two paynim knights, all armed as bright as sky,

paynim > pagan, heathen

3 And them beside an aged sire did trace,

sire > elderly man trace > walk, proceed (with added connotation of tracking or pursuing)

4 And far before a lightfoot page did fly,

before > in front lightfoot > light-footed

5 That breathed strife and troublous enmity; 6 Those were the two sons of Acrates old, 7 Who, meeting erst with Archimago sly,

erst > recently (see 206.47)

8 Forby that Idle strand, of him were told

Forby > hard by, near strand > shore of > by

9 That he, who erst them combatted, was Guyon bold.

208.11

   Which to auenge on him they dearely vowd,
2 Where euer that on ground they mote him fynd;
     False Archimage prouokt their courage prowd,
4 And +stryfull+ Atin in their stubborne mynd
     Coles of contention and whot vengeance tynd.
6 Now bene they come, whereas the Palmer sate,
     Keeping that slombred corse to him assynd;
8 Well knew they both his person, sith of late
   With him in bloudie armes they rashly did debate.

4 stryfull > strife-full 1609

1 Which to avenge on him they dearly vowed,

dearly > earnestly

2 Wherever on ground they might him find;

on ground > in the world (though Guyon is of course literally "on ground")

3 False Archimago provoked their courage proud, 4 And strifeful Atin in their stubborn mind

Atin > (See 204.42:5) stubborn > hard, unyielding

5 Coals of contention and hot vengeance tinded.

tinded > inflamed, ignited

6 Now been they come where the palmer sat,

been > [are]

7 Keeping that slumbered corse to him assigned;

Keeping > Guarding slumbered corse > unconscious body

8 Well knew they both his person, sith of late

his > [Guyon's] sith > since

9 With him in bloody arms they rashly did debate.

arms > {Feats of arms, fighting} debate > fight

208.12

   Whom when Pyrochles saw, inflam'd with rage,
2 That sire he foule bespake, Thou dotard vile,
     That with thy brutenesse shendst thy comely age,
4 Abandone soone, I read, the caitiue spoile
     Of that same outcast carkasse, that erewhile
6 Made it selfe famous through false trechery,
     And crownd his coward crest with knightly stile;
8 Loe where he now inglorious doth lye,
   To proue he liued ill, that did thus foully dye.

1 Whom when Pyrochles saw, inflamed with rage, 2 That sire he foul bespoke: "You dotard vile,

sire > elderly man bespoke > addressed

3 That with your bruteness shends your comely age,

bruteness > stupidity shends > disgraces

4 Abandon soon, I read, the caitiff spoil

soon > immediately read > advise [you] caitiff > despicable; wretched; captive

5 Of that same outcast carcase, that erewhile

erewhile > lately

6 Made itself famous through false treachery, 7 And crowned his coward crest with knightly style; 8 Lo where he now inglorious does lie, 9 To prove he lived ill, that did thus foully die."

ill > evilly

208.13

   To whom the Palmer fearelesse answered;
2 Certes, Sir knight, ye bene too much to blame,
     Thus for to blot the honour of the dead,
4 And with foule cowardize his carkasse shame,
     Whose liuing hands immortalizd his name.
6 Vile is the vengeance on the ashes cold,
     And enuie base, to barke at sleeping fame:
8 Was neuer wight, that treason of him told;
   Your selfe his prowesse prou'd and found him fiers and bold.

1 To whom the palmer fearless answered: 2 "Certes, sir knight, you been too much to blame,

Certes > Assuredly been > [are]

3 Thus to blot the honour of the dead, 4 And with foul cowardice his carcase shame, 5 Whose living hands immortalized his name. 6 Vile is the vengeance on the ashes cold, 7 And envy base, to bark at sleeping fame:

bark > {Speak angrily or aggressively}

8 Was never wight that treason of him told;

wight > person, anyone

9 Yourself his prowess proved and found him fierce and bold.

prowess > valour proved > tested, tried

208.14

   Then said Cymochles; Palmer, thou doest dote,
2 Ne canst of prowesse, ne of knighthood deeme,
     Saue as thou seest or hearst. But well I wote,
4 That of his puissance tryall made extreeme;
     Yet gold all is not, that doth golden seeme,
6 Ne all good knights, that shake well speare and shield:
     The worth of all men by their end esteeme,
8 And then due praise, or due reproch them yield;
   Bad therefore I him deeme, that thus lies dead on field.

1 Then said Cymochles: "Palmer, you do dote, 2 Nor can of prowess, nor of knighthood deem,

deem > judge, form an opinion

3 Save as you see or hear. But well I wot,

wot > know

4 That of his puissance, trial made extreme;

puissance > strength, power made > [made it]

5 Yet gold all is not that does golden seem, 6 Nor all good knights, that shake well spear and shield:

shake > wield

7 The worth of all men by their end esteem, 8 And then due praise, or due reproach them yield; 9 Bad therefore I him deem, that thus lies dead on field."

208.15

   Good or bad (gan his brother fierce reply)
2 What doe I recke, sith that he dyde entire?
     Or what doth his bad death now satisfy
4 The greedy hunger of reuenging ire,
     Sith wrathfull hand wrought not her owne desire?
6 Yet since no way is left to wreake my spight,
     I will him reaue of armes, the victors hire,
8 And of that shield, more worthy of good knight;
   For why should a dead dog be deckt in armour bright?

1 "Good or bad," gan his brother fierce reply,

gan > did

2 "What do I reck, sith he died entire?

reck > care sith > since entire > entirely, altogether

3 Or what does his bad death now satisfy

what > how, to what extent

4 The greedy hunger of revenging ire, 5 Sith wrathful hand wrought not its own desire? 6 Yet since no way is left to wreak my spite, 7 I will him reave of arms, the victor's hire,

reave > despoil, strip hire > reward, wages

8 And of that shield, more worthy of good knight; 9 For why should a dead dog be decked in armour bright?"

208.16

   Faire Sir, said then the Palmer suppliaunt,
2 For knighthoods loue, do not so foule a deed,
     Ne blame your honour with so shamefull vaunt
4 Of vile reuenge. To spoile the dead of weed
     Is sacrilege, and doth all sinnes exceed;
6 But leaue these relicks of his liuing might,
     To decke his herce, and trap his +tomb-blacke+ steed.
8 What herce or steede (said he) should he haue dight,
   But be entombed in the rauen or the kight?

7 tomb-blacke > tomblacke 1590

1 "Fair sir," said then the palmer suppliant, 2 "For knighthood's love, do not so foul a deed,

do > commit

3 Nor blame your honour with so shameful vaunt

blame > bring into disrepute so > [such a] vaunt > boast

4 Of vile revenge. To spoil the dead of weed

vile > despicable spoil > strip, plunder weed > clothing

5 Is sacrilege, and does all sins exceed; 6 But leave these relics of his living might, 7 To deck his hearse, and trap his tomb-black steed."

hearse > bier, coffin; tomb; dead body trap > adorn, caparison

8 "What hearse or steed," said he, "should he have dight,

dight > prepared [for him]

9 But be entombed in the raven or the kite?"

be > [to be] kite > (A carrion-eating bird of prey, Milvus milvus, formerly common in England)

208.17

   With that, rude hand vpon his shield he laid,
2 And th'other brother gan his helme vnlace,
     Both fiercely bent to haue him disaraid;
4 Till that they spide, where towards them did pace
     An armed knight, of bold and bounteous grace,
6 Whose squire bore after him an heben launce,
     And couerd shield. Well kend him so farre space
8 Th'enchaunter by his armes and amenaunce,
   When vnder him he saw his Lybian steed to praunce.

1 With that, rude hand upon his shield he laid,

rude > rough

2 And the other brother gan his helm unlace,

gan > did; began to helm > helmet

3 Both fiercely bent to have him disarrayed;

bent > (Lit. and fig.)

4 Till they spied where towards them did pace 5 An armed knight, of bold and bounteous grace, 6 Whose squire bore after him an ebon lance

squire > attendant (esp. waiting on a knight) ebon > {Ebony, made of ebony, a tree of the family Ebenaceae, esp. Diospyros ebenus, producing hard black wood}